You have executed a clear and creative design that shows a real in depth knowledge of sensory and inclusive design. It would have been good to see more hand drawings but overall a really solid design and presentation. Well done!

Wow! What an amazing idea come to life. You have clearly shown your design process and overall idea. Such a creative concept. Well done!

Great summary of lectures and layout of content. Have you thought of adding in some hand drawings of images to better communicate your ideas and thought? Looking forwards to seeing the final project.

Well thought out presentation that is clear and very easy to navigate. Have you thought of maybe adding more hand drawings to better communicate your ideas? Really great research that gives a strong foundation for your project.

Well thought out floor plan that creates direction. Creative idea and catchy project name. Really like the mix of hand drawn ideations and revit files. Can't wait to see the final project.

Really great research and layout of your blog, everything it well thought out and easy to navigate. Have you thought about maybe using some more images or even sketches to further communicate some of your ideas? Overall a really engaging and creative blog!

Excellent use of imagery within your pecha kucha. Your sensory activity was well documented and did raise some questions about design - especially with paywave etc.

Really great start to your return brief - very clear, concise and informing. Your mind map has a lot of great ideas, maybe some quick sketches would help with communicating your ideas? Overall a really engaging and creative approach thus far. Can't wait to see the final project!

Really great research on inclusive design. The imagery was very engaging and made links to your text. The use of hand written notes, typed notes and imagery makes your blog very pleasing to read and shows your thinking/design process. Looking forward to seeing how your project turns out!

Great use of imagery when talking about your habitus. Maybe use of bigger size headings will make the blog easier to navigate? Really in depth research on sensory design.

Your blog is visually appealing - love the consistency in layout and font etc. I thought the two interviews were interesting and definitely eye opening. This information will be of great use in your assessment. Have you thought of doing personal reflections or talking about your habitus? Overall a very well thought out and researched blog.

Great use of imagery and colour within your pecha kechu - really engaging. You could have definitely added some more images in your presentation of the personal experience of sensory loss to engage the audience further. Overall the layout of your blog is clear and well though out.

Great research and use of imagery that explores sensory design. This information is a fantastic foundation to build on for your assessment.

Great choice of activity, especially going to three different environments to experience the space. A video may have helped the discussion, it could have shown what the person who had the ear plugs was not able to experience. Overall the activity relates well to the readings and pecha kucha. Well done.