25 Matching Annotations
  1. May 2017
    1. All of the information in that paragraph will be clearly and logically related to that topic sentence, which in turn should obviously relate to the thesis

      It seems like it would be easier to organize your thoughts this way.

    2. why readers might be curious about your general topic, catch their attention, or put your essay in context

      The introduction is my favorite part, and I like this description of it.

    1. I almost never complete an outline for anything, so it will be interesting to see how much it really helps. (I imagine it's a lot, but I'm a big fan of winging it at 12 am and submitting the first draft...) I'd kind of like one that is a little flexible so I can kind of follow whatever ideas come into my head... That sounds awful but it works for me.

    2. This is only one possible outline or organization.

      In public school ( or at least in the one I went to), you're normally given a very specific outline that you have to fill out and turn in with your essay. Thus, I wonder what methods there are that I was never taught. This seems pretty similar to how I was usually required to do it. I actually like including the thesis statement at the end of the introductory paragraph.

    1. to be creative, you should have this weird dissociation in your frontal lobe. One area turns on, and a big area shuts off, so that you're not inhibited, you're willing to make mistakes, so that you're not constantly shutting down all of these new generative impulses.

      This would explain why writing activities that center around just creating something quickly and not paying attention to what you're writing is really useful to help generate new ideas and get over writer's block.

    2. we know very little about how we are able to be creative

      This is honestly shocking to me. Creativity is such a core part of humanity and I can't understand why we haven't study it more.

  2. Apr 2017
    1. "Aren't you afraid you're never going to have any success? Aren't you afraid the humiliation of rejection will kill you? Aren't you afraid that you're going to work your whole life at this craft and nothing's ever going to come of it and you're going to die on a scrap heap of broken dreams with your mouth filled with bitter ash of failure?"

      This is another thing that kind of gets on my nerves... Writing is, like any other endeavor, a risk. However, there's no need to tell people that it's too dangerous to even try at.

    2. I am a writer. Writing books is my profession but it's more than that, of course. It is also my great lifelong love and fascination.

      I love this because media often portrays writers as being money-grubbing leaches who hate their jobs when that's just not true.

    1. Novel experiences are so effective at unleashing the imagination because they force the perceptual system out of categorization, the tendency of the brain to take shortcuts.

      This explains why writers travel and try to new things to get "inspired".

    2. In order to think creatively, you must develop new neural pathways and break out of the cycle of experience-dependent categorization.

      This actually makes a lot of sense. Often people improve as a writer, artist, etc because they try different styles and see what works for them.

    3. Neuroscientists have come to realize that how you perceive something isn’t simply a product of what your eyes and ears transmit to your brain. It’s a product of your brain itself.

      This is really interesting because creativity is usually thought of in terms of output rather than input.

  3. Mar 2017
    1. using such tools as freewriting and associative thinking. This is the opposite of convergent thinking, in which you’re taking logical steps to arrive at a conclusion.

      This reminds me of the right-brain vs left-brain thing. Are people who are more inclined to convergent thinking inherently analytical rather than creative?

    2. Divergent thinking, however, is a process in which you’re generating ideas by exploring many solutions

      This seems like it would encourage a more creative personality.

    3. In this way, creativity isn’t only about outputs, but also inputs–and arranging our inputs by thoughtfully curating our experiences allow us to become more creative.

      Even those who aren't born very creative can become more so if they fuel their creativity with lots of outside inspirations.

    4. the researchers found that people with a high activity score often use their diverse experiences as an underlying level for divergent thinking and creative activity.

      I think this makes sense. Those who express themselves via fine art tend to draw on their personal experiences.

    1. It’s true that for all but a small handful of lucky and talented professional writers, the work of making fiction, poetry and narrative nonfiction is not a terribly lucrative affair.

      I have been told for nearly my whole life and continue to be told that writing isn't a career and that I should pursue it as a hobby after I get a "real job". However, I always wonder what might've happened if Picasso had quit when everyone told him his art was terrible and his painting weren't selling. Something tells me that art is more important than the way I sustain my living.

    2. A deeper and broader understanding of others

      In the same sense that we learn more about ourselves when writing, we also tend to learn from our characters the true nature of people. A good writer knows how to make a flawed character that seems so tragically real that one can't help but fall in love. While putting effort into turning words on paper into humans, we tend to come to some realizations about the people around us.

    3. Every story or poem, in the most generous sense, invites us to ask, what shall we do with our days?

      In the same way that we all tend to live vicariously through characters from our favorite tv shows, we find a little bit of adventurous spirit in the things we both consume and create.

    4. A better understanding of self.

      This is true, and I would like to volunteer that there are more reasons for this. Not all writers model their characters after themselves, but the story has to come from somewhere, and it's usually a place of familiarity. Writing pulls little details and secrets from our hiding places and holds them in front of our face.

    1. Wait, what do you mean? IO: Oh, well they just make fun of it. AM: But would you want us to change it?

      She waits for him to finish and then asks for him to clarify his statement.

    2. Yeah, I probably get my stubbornness from her. AM: Definitely, you got that from Mommy. She wanted you to have a Nigerian first name, and we were like, “Let’s just make it easy and give him an English name.” So everybody decided on Jacob, but she was like, “My son’s name is Ibukunoluwa.” And your name means Blessing from God. Do you think Mommy made the right choice in naming you?

      She uses his answer for the previous question to transition into the next one.

    1. Do you have any questions for me?

      She treats the interview like a discussion and wants her father to participate. She asks this without turning the interview's focus to her.

    2. (Laughs) We knew our parents couldn’t see, and we used to slip out at night, so Daddy started sleeping in front of the door.

      Melva explains the story without interrupting, excluding her father, or being disrespectful.

  4. Feb 2017
    1. paid protesters being bused to demonstrations.

      My own father constantly states that this is true. He's a very smart man and has had a great education, and, yet, he is still affected by false news. This just shows how willing people are to believe anything that supports their own opinion.