I summon you
tone: authoritative
I summon you
tone: authoritative
Each has suffered blows, but each has proceededwith courage. Each has persevered
? Transition from first half of speech (telling stories and relaying information, both from past and present) and a telling of accomplishments to directly addressing the audience (as indicated by using "you" more than in the first half) to persevere in their own accomplishments/experiences leading them to accomplishments
In recent years, I have met in Sarajevo with women50 weighted down by personal grief reaching out acrossethnic lines to rebuild their shattered society.In Burundi, I have seen women taking the lead inefforts to avoid the fate of neighboring Rwanda,where violence left three-quarters of the population55 female, and one-half of the women widows.In Guatemala, I have talked to women striving toensure that their new peace endures and isaccompanied by justice and an end to discriminationand abuse.60 And in Burma, I have met with a remarkablewoman named Aung San Suu Kyi, who risks her lifeevery day to keep alive the hope for democracy in hercountry.
EX: example of claim that "Instead, women everywhere...are standing up, spreading the word that we are ready to claim our rightful place as full citizens and full participants in every society on Earth."
EVAL: I believe that the use of these anecdotes is strategic in getting the audience of female graduates to relate to other women in the world who have made change, indicating that if women in developing countries have found ways to make change, it is also certainly possible for these graduates (in the US with a higher education) to make effective change
nd persevere
PR: repetition of phrase
and persevere
PR: repetition of phrase
and persevere
repetition of phrase
and persevere
repetition of phrase
or
C+C: one choice or the other (one clearly better than the other)
logos/structural appeal
Massachusetts
state with top universities
NoelIgnatiev,editor of thejournalRaceTraitor,
CIT:
this is SE to describe her claim of not supporting the status quo
whitefamilyneeds coaching fromtheblack familyinordertolearntopassas black
mannerisms
Black.White.
CIT; show series
tobefluidand ambiguous,
Speaker: beliefs
AGirlLikeMe.
CIT: uses a film to support the idea that the social construct has become a social fact in our world and caused intrinsic prejudice in younger generations
answer
paragraph MI: C&C the physical differences but inner similarities between Biss and her mixed cousin
Ihaveacousin
more personal anecdotes
till, my facewas in that face, I could see it there, especially in the mouth.The Topsy-Turvy doll
PR: the change in topic is sudden and confusing
lthoughthetwo can be confused, our urgetoloveour own,or thosewehavecometounderstandasour own, is,itseems,muchmorepowerful than our urgetosegregate ourselves.
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buttendedtotalkabouthavingaboxfullofanonymous Barbies.
PR: Barbies made dolls lose their personal connection with kids; not so much meaning
Perhapsthisistheessentialtruthbehindwhywemakeeffigies.Andmaybethisiswhywetendtobelievethatchildrenshould havedollsthatlooklikethem,oratleastthatlooklikewhotheymighteventuallybecome.
tone: suggestive
Eleven of thechildren associated the black doll with the word “bad” and tenassociated the white doll with the word “nice.”
SE: social constructs have led to systemic prejudices
C/E: led to Brown v Board of Edu (very influential)
hownaive,Ireallyam—Iwantedtobelieve in thewhitewoman'sdesiretomaintaina familialconnectiontotheblackchild.
tone: disappointed
Ifboththebabieshad beenwhite,Imighthavefeltthatthewhitewomanwasentitledtokeepthemboth,nomatterwhomtheywererelatedto.
PR: displays honesty, which appeals to ethos
thelikelyoutcomeofsuchadoptionswas“culturalgenocide.”
C/E of white families adopting black children
Marriagesbetweenwhitesandblacksamounttolessthan1percentofallourmarriages.
SE: "disturbingly polarized" races
asegregated restaurant in theSouth whereasignononesideof theroomadvertised“HomeCooking”andasignonthe other advertised “SoulFood”
C&C: racial segregation --> differences in wording due to racism but not much differences in the people themselves
disturbingly polarized
Tone: criticial
Weareallsoclosely relatedtoeachother,sharing over99percentofourgeneticcodeacross theworld,thatmanyscientistsbelieve thereisnobiological basisforwhatwecallrace.
SE
statistic to support that race is a social construct --> ethos appeal
Whenwewere young,mysister andIhad twobabydollsthatwereexactlyalike
EX/C&C: case study
personal anecdote to resemble the similar situation to the twins
Theanswertothisquestionwoulddetermine whetherornotthe courtswould mandatevisitsbetweentheblackboyandthewhitefamily.
C/E: cause: courts decide what the relationship of the black baby would be to the white baby
effect: the black boy will/will not have to have mandatory visits with the white family
babieswere nottechnically twins,buttheirsit-uationwassounusualitwasimpossibletodetermine,
C/E: cause: courts decide what the relationship of the black baby would be to the white baby
effect: the black boy will/will not have to have mandatory visits with the white family
NewJersey Record consulted an expertwhoex-plainedthat the babieswere nottechnically twins,buttheirsit-uationwassounusualitwasimpossibletodetermine,
CIT
the storywouldresistthathappyendinginpartbecausetheblackbabywasinitiallyreturnedtohisbiologicalparentsonthestrictconditionthathewouldcontinuetovisithistwinbrother,spendingaweekinsummerandalternateholidayswiththewhitefamily.
PR: a) why would the baby have to visit the twin brother if they're not even biological to the twin's parents b) why is it only one way, why not the white twin brother be required to visit the black family
fteraDNAtest,acustodybattle,a statesupremecourtruling,andanunsuccessfulappeal,itwasdecidedthattheblackbaby wasthechild of theblackcouple,legallyandentirely.
CHRON
By Katherine Schaeffer
credible: She has a master’s degree in international development, focusing on urban affairs and planning, from the University of Pittsburgh Graduate School of Public and International Affairs and holds a bachelor’s degree in journalism from Kent State University
By Matthew Johnston
credible: writer for Investopedia for 5+ years and is a professor of macroeconomics
including historical racial segregation, governmental policies, a stagnating minimum wage, outsourcing, globalization, changes in technology, and the waning power of labor unions.
MI: income inequality has resulted from various political, social, and economic reasons, as it is summarized in this sentence's points
abor productivity has almost doubled while median wages only increased by 4%.
wages underserve the production
did result in a return to growth, but the main beneficiaries were those at the top of the income ladder
with economic growth post-1970s also came increases in income inequalities as it was only the top income brackets that benefitted
during the Great Depression, marginal tax rates increased. By 1944, the top marginal tax rate was 94% on all income over $200,000. Such a high rate acts as a cap on incomes
C/E: high marginal tax rates discourage goals for higher incomes
rise in union membership and better workers' rights.
C/E: union membership/strength --> decreased income inequality and higher wages
decimated total income, leading to mass unemployment and hardship. This left workers without much left to lose, leading to organized pressure for policy reforms.13Federal Reserve History. "The Great Depression."
C/E
Slavery in the United States has a direct relation to current income inequality.
C/E: slavery contributes to current income inequality
Not surprisingly, this rise in income inequality also closely mirrored a reduction in top marginal tax rates starting in 1921,
correlation does not equal causation but most likely reduced marginal tax meant greater chances for the rich to keep wealth and thus increase the gap
used to compensate for the lost revenues by reducing excessively high tariffs, of which the rich were the main beneficiaries
C/E: because high tariffs were reduced (which benefited the rich), the income tax was issued to compensate for loss revenues)
tax reform bill gave the wealthiest households an effective lower average tax rate than the rest of the U.S. population.
SE: benefits of tax breaks for wealthiest Americans
steady flow of tax breaks for income, gifts, and estate taxes. These can disproportionately advantage rich Americans
C/E: tax breaks --> benefit rich --> increase gap
one important factor is outsized stock ownership among the richest Americans.
C/E: outsized stock ownership contributed to increases in wealth disparity
rose at an average rate of 1.2% per year from 1970 to the year 2000. From 2000 to 2018, the rate slowed to 0.3% per year
SE: middle-class made virtually no gains
172% Percentage increase in wages received by the top 1% from 1980 to 2020, compared to 31% for those in the bottom 90%
C&C: top 1% earned a 172% increase in wages, while bottom 90% only received 31%
For instance: The wealthiest 1% in the U.S. had net worths equal to about 125 times that of the average American household in 1962.By 2009, their net worths were about 225 times the net worth of the average household.8The gap between the richest and the poorest in the U.S. more than doubled between 1982 and 2016.
SE: supports the claim that only top 1% received steady gains, gradually increasing the gap between the rich and poor
According to Internal Revenue Service (IRS) data, the top 1% in the U.S. earned over 20% of the total adjusted gross income (AGI)
CIT: IRS (credible)
List of economic expansions in the United States
using for general knowledge of when the US experienced economic growth so that I can compare those timelines with timelines of increased income inequality (seeing if there is some correlation)
Employment growth remained historically low, and unemployment would not return to pre-recession levels until 2016.[11] Long-term unemployment rose to a record high[12] w
continuity
represents somewhat of a start to the income inequality levels we see today (especially since the upper class recovered more swiftly than lower classes, thus widening the gap even further)
However, mortgage defaults spiked starting in 2007 and the banking industry began to destabilize, leading to the subprime mortgage crisis
C/E
low and stable oil prices in combination with a steep rise in private investment and rising incomes,
C/E
Inflation was under control by the mid-1980s.
this coincides with another piece of data from my research (where in 1988, Wall Street Bonuses largely increased, meanwhile minimum wage remained relatively the same, thus widening the wealth disparity/income inequality)
National Bureau of Economic Research dates
CIT
large adjustment as the economy adjusted from wartime to peacetime in 1945, the collection of many economic indicators, such as unemployment and gross domestic product (GDP) became standardized.
C/E: as economy adjusted to peacetime, GDP and unemployment became more standardized as indicators for economic growth
Inflation is far too high and is particularly stressful for lower-income households—including many Black and Hispanic families, families with children and renters.
SUM: these demographics tend to be hurt the most by inflation (on consumer end at least)
more of their income on necessities
SE
inflation hits low-income households hardest
MI
impact of high inflation on different groups by tabulating the incidence of high inflation stress by level of household income, race and ethnicity, housing tenure and other dimensions.
EVAL: structural/logos appeal
The Census Bureau’s Household Pulse Survey
CIT
Federal Reserve Chair Jerome Powell recently stated,
CIT: cited the chair of the Federal Reserve (ethos appeal; credibility)
The richest families are also the only ones whose wealth increased in the years after the start of the Great Recession
C/E: with economic growth post-great recession came increased income inequalities
wealth gap between America’s richest and poorer families more than doubled
MI: in recent years, the rich have gotten richer, while the lower classes have experienced less exponential growth
These views also vary by income within the two party coalitions.
C&C Views of income inequality by party AND income bracket
SUM: majority of people agree that there is income inequality, some more than others believing today's income inequality is serious
difference in median household incomes between white and black Americans has grown
as economy progressed, household incomes increased, but so did the gap between Black and White households
but down slightly from 63% in 2007, before the Great Recession,
recessions tend to hurt income for all classes/races. pre-recession conditions have best circumstances for income
In 2017, the U.S. had a Gini coefficient of 0.434. In the other G7 nations, the Gini ranged from 0.326 in France to 0.392 in the UK.
C&C: The GINI coefficient in the US is over 0.1 higher than France and .04 higher than the second0highest G7 nation coefficient. Thus, for a G7 nation, the US has a surprisingly high rate of income inequality
the Gini coefficient, a commonly used measure ranging from 0, or perfect equality, to 1, or complete inequality.
DEF: what is the GINI coefficient
Over the past 50 years, the highest-earning 20% of U.S. households have steadily brought in a larger share of the country’s total income.
MI:the top earning households in the US have made more than 50% of US income (this means the concentration in wealth is dense and skewed to the top earners, leading to an unequal distribution/varying densities in income earners)
For this analysis, we gathered data from the U.S. Census Bureau, Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development and the World Bank. We also used previously published data points from Pew Research Center surveys and analyses of outside data.
EVAL: establishes credibility (logos)
how economic inequality has changed over time and how the U.S. compares globally
EVAL: logos (structural appeal; outlines objective for the article, which is to show different ways econ inequality has changed over time)
Rising economic inequality
indicates economic inequality has increased in recent years, even with recent economic growth. economic growth does not equal economic equality
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providing net inflows to the country through their overseas operations.
MI: GNP considers overseas operations and how they contribute to profits for US residents
For example, there are a number of foreign companies that produce goods and services in the United States and transfer any income earned to their foreign residents. Likewise, many U.S. corporations produce goods and services outside of the U.S. borders and earn profits for U.S. residents.
EX
there may be companies owned by foreign residents that produce goods in the country, and companies owned by domestic residents that produce goods for the rest of the world and revert earned income to domestic residents.
C&C: GNP vs GDP's main difference
an estimate of the total value of all the final products and services turned out in a given period by the means of production owned by a country's residents
DEF: GNP (all output of a country's residents, no matter where the output is located)
Because value is subjective, measuring for all individuals is very tricky.
explains why nominal GDP may be harder to measure
For example
EX: gives examples for the 3 methods of looking at real GDP
Phases of Economic Growth
explains the phases of economics growth in a given time period; helps evaluate the start and end of economic growth periods (ex: contractions tend to be recessions, such as the 2008 recession, marking the end of the first half of this period of economic growth)
Simply put, increasing the quantity or quality of the working age population, the tools that they have to work with, and the recipes that they have available to combine labor, capital, and raw materials, will lead to increased economic output.
MI
Economic growth is an increase in the production of goods and services in an economy.
DEF