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  1. Oct 2020
    1. the people who wear them.

      This uses personal pronouns throughout and then goes into second person-perspective here.

      It would be more consistent to say "It's not just in the designs, it's in you."

    2. The Gymshark community is devoted to unlocking potential through conditioning and the things we do today to prepare for tomorrow.

      Run-on sentence. Would edit as:

      "The Gymshark community is devoted to unlocking potential through conditioning. We believe the things we do today prepare us for tomorrow.