"В печку? Но в печке прежде всего начнут рыться. Сжечь? Да и чем сжечь? Спичек даже нет. Нет, лучше выйти куда-нибудь и все выбросить. Да! лучше выбросить! - повторял он, опять садясь на диван, - и сейчас, сию минуту, не медля!.."
stopped here dec 11
кажется
seems
diligence
usage of word doesn't quite make sense to laymen. may be OK if site users are generally specialized, though.
into clear
into a clear
Review investment recommendations and content while keeping your identity safe
consider making all six of these small-font items into two-line blurbs in which the length of the first line is closer to that of the second.
(note: this isn't an issue with all window / screen sizes)
layers
expand this -- "layers of intake forms", for example.
explainable signals
this wording doesn't quite reflect what's in the details below. something more data-focused would be a better fit, especially if that is the source of your value.
"signals" makes sense, but "explainable signals" doesn't work here. "contextualized", for example, may work.
See rankings of allocators and managers that are likely the most relevant at each event.
"which allocators and managers are likely to be most relevant to your goals at each event"
Understand which managers, allocators, and events matter most to engage
"events" is the least sophisticated of the three words. I would put it in the middle -- "which managers, events, and allocators matter most to engage".
co-branded initiatives that extend the network
"that extend the network" doesn't seem to have discernible meaning. "extend your network" or "extend your team's network" would be more clear.
With 20+ years solving fintech data problems
"years of experience solving fintech data problems"
We focus on details, develop superior products, and scale success.
"focus on details" makes more sense as the enabling factor of the other two. "We focus on details, developing superior products and scaling success" may work, or the addition of another value add (with the choice to keep or move the detail bit elsewhere)
at major asset management firms
"several major asset management firms", if applicable.
primarily serving wealth managers, private banks, and family offices.
this implies large-cap clients, but I find that Jeff's bio makes it more explicit with the "to high-net-worth investors" inclusion. Add just a bit more oomph.
Built for Alternatives
This reads as more of a parent company than a slogan where it's currently situated. but "built for alternatives" doesn't return anything related on Google. If a slogan, consider italicizing and putting the brand name on top.
1213 W. Morehead Street
perhaps nit-picky, but I find the use of a shortened "west" and long-form "street" to be asynchronous. I would do "West" and "Street", personally,
Marcel Dawson
CEO mentions which companies he has worked at. may be a good add, if desired.