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  1. Dec 2025
    1. "В печку? Но в печке прежде всего начнут рыться. Сжечь? Да и чем сжечь? Спичек даже нет. Нет, лучше выйти куда-нибудь и все выбросить. Да! лучше выбросить! - повторял он, опять садясь на диван, - и сейчас, сию минуту, не медля!.."

      stopped here dec 11

    1. Review investment recommendations and content while keeping your identity safe

      consider making all six of these small-font items into two-line blurbs in which the length of the first line is closer to that of the second.

      (note: this isn't an issue with all window / screen sizes)

    2. explainable signals

      this wording doesn't quite reflect what's in the details below. something more data-focused would be a better fit, especially if that is the source of your value.

      "signals" makes sense, but "explainable signals" doesn't work here. "contextualized", for example, may work.

    3. See rankings of allocators and managers that are likely the most relevant at each event.

      "which allocators and managers are likely to be most relevant to your goals at each event"

    4. Understand which managers, allocators, and events matter most to engage

      "events" is the least sophisticated of the three words. I would put it in the middle -- "which managers, events, and allocators matter most to engage".

    5. co-branded initiatives that extend the network

      "that extend the network" doesn't seem to have discernible meaning. "extend your network" or "extend your team's network" would be more clear.

    6. We focus on details, develop superior products, and scale success.

      "focus on details" makes more sense as the enabling factor of the other two. "We focus on details, developing superior products and scaling success" may work, or the addition of another value add (with the choice to keep or move the detail bit elsewhere)

    7. primarily serving wealth managers, private banks, and family offices.

      this implies large-cap clients, but I find that Jeff's bio makes it more explicit with the "to high-net-worth investors" inclusion. Add just a bit more oomph.

    8. Built for Alternatives

      This reads as more of a parent company than a slogan where it's currently situated. but "built for alternatives" doesn't return anything related on Google. If a slogan, consider italicizing and putting the brand name on top.