61 Matching Annotations
  1. Apr 2016
    1. I immersed myself in Islam.

      Seeing his own personal "Dorothy Day" and the potential Islam had for doing great things, Patel is able to see his own connection to this religion.

    2. y grandmother has been sheltering abused women for 40 years by hiding them in her home. Those who are interested in education, she sends to school. For those who want to live with family in other parts of India, she pays for their travels. Others just stayed and helped my grandmother around the house until they got married and started their own families. My grandmother has pictures of some of them, faded black-and-white shots, with pencil scribbles on the back telling the story.

      His grandmother is a beautiful example of charity, and giving whole heartedly to others. I imagine this was shocking to Patel.

    3. Finally, it occurred to me that this was the program — I was a Muslim. My spiritual home had lived in my soul since my birth and before.

      There is a strong shift in tone here, and a sense of discovery. Discovering ones past, and how it effects the entirety of the present. Patel is realizing that his families religion is a true inseparable part of him.

    4. Neglecting Islam was not so much a comment on the content of the religion as it was an adolescent habit of discriminating against the familiar.

      I imagine this is common, and a easy justification for Patel and many others who instantly seek other religions before examining their own families first.

    5. The ritual dimensions of Islam never fit comfortably into our American-style lives.

      It is a common practice to leave ones religious and cultural habits behind, once they have moved to a new place, often called acculturation.

    6. India

      Around 13% of citizens in India are Muslim.

      http://censusindia.gov.in/Census_And_You/religion.aspx

    7. Similar to my experience with Christianity, I felt that my soul did not fit in any of them.

      Again, Patel is having difficulty attaching himself fully to one specific religion, because he is finding many different and contrasting religious beliefs attractive.

    8. Bahai

      This religion was founded in the 19th century in Iran, when "Sayyid Ali Muhammad Shirazi confided to a select group of Shaykhi Shí'a Muslims that he was the Báb, the gate to the Hidden Imam of the Shí a. The Báb took eighteen Shaykhis as his disciples, whom he called the "Letters of the Living."

      Berry, A. (2004). THE BAHÁ'Í FAITH AND ITS RELATIONSHIP TO ISLAM, CHRISTIANITY, AND JUDAISM: A BRIEF HISTORY. International Social Science Review, 79(3/4), 137-151.

    9. t was time to find a faith home. I began reading across religious traditions.

      Patel was searching for a deeper connection to one religion, in hopes he would find his "faith home", or last stopping point.

    10. And I never felt any desire to convert.

      Patel has a shift in his voice, moving from strength in believing he has found his path, then not quite buying into the entirety of christianity.

    11. The faith I wanted would help me love and grieve and celebrate with all humanity. It would shape my eyes to see dignity and divinity in the dirty and ragged. I felt in my bones that humanity was meant for something more than we were achieving.

      This shift in tone moved from an outward expression of the world to an inward analyzation of his own thoughts, and what he deeply desired from his own religious experience.

    12. And mine. Dorothy Day once said, “I’m working toward a world in which it would be easier for people to behave decently.” I wanted to behave decently. The Catholic Worker was a chance to do justice for the marginalized and to achieve redemption for myself. Redemption meant being saved from the sickness of selfishness. Being cured meant joining humanity. And there was something transcendent in that.

      There is a shift in tone in this paragraph, and I feel that Patel is crying out for change, and deeply wishing that this would be his chance to make a big difference, and change, like Dorothy did. I sense the longing and wishing here.

    13. She called America’s shadows to her dinner table, served them with love and sat with them as a friend. It was the best antidote that I had seen for America’s sickness.

      By treating people with love and respect, Dorothy Day was making changes in the world, and Patel was deeply inspired by this.

    14. . I wanted life and I wanted the abundant life. I wanted it for others too.

      This is a fundamental theme of Dorothy's teachings, and is a beautiful thought- that she wanted a rich life, and the same for all people.

    15. I did. And it made more sense to me than anything my Marxist professors lectured on, or my prelaw friends dreamed about, or my rock ‘n’ roll records drove at.

      There is a shift in tone here- a more upbeat feeing. I sense that this is the first time in Patel's life that he is feeling a sense of connection to a religion, or religious teachings, and is clearly uplifted and inspired by the teachings of Dorothy Day.

    16. Dorothy Day

      "Day, Dorothy ((1897-1980), was an American journalist and cofounder of the Catholic Worker, a radical Roman Catholic social movement that began in 1933. Radicalism is a philosophy concerned with eliminating injustices in society. The Catholic Worker movement has influenced many Catholics and others in the United States and elsewhere."

      Day, Dorothy. (2016). Funk & Wagnalls New World Encyclopedia, 1p. 1.

    17. We’re a community. The question we ask is ‘What’s your story?’

      This is a beautiful sentiment, and speaks volumes about the Working House. The sense of family and community trump any divisions,no matter racial or social. I believe this is reflective of Dorothy Days philosophy.

    18. There was nobody doing intake. There was no executive director’s office. White, black and brown kids played together in the living room.

      This is an interesting organization and characterization of this institution. I do not believe this is a common finding in american charities, this informality.

    19. Catholic Worker house

      The Catholic worker movement was created by Dorothy Day and Peter Maurin in 1932 which challenged economic excess, and insisted it should be put into ones religion.

      Zwick, M., & Zwick, L. (2005). The Catholic Worker Movement: Intellectual and spiritual origins. New York: Paulist Press.

    20. wanted to change the climate. My loneliness was freezing. Somebody said to me, “Go visit St. Jude’s Catholic Worker house on the other end of town.”

      There is a strong presence of pain and passion in these words, that is different that the paragraph above. Patel clearly wants change, and is feeling sadness from not being able to enact the change he wanted. Patel is feeling isolated from the world, and it is reflected in his tone.

    21. So I started volunteering at shelters and schools, but I knew a broken world needed more than flimsy tape.

      There is a shift in tone here. I can feel the defeat in Patel's voice and the disappointment he feels by his efforts not causing change.

    22. I saw the other America — homeless Vietnam vets drinking mouthwash for the alcohol, minority students shunted to the back of overfull classrooms, battered women unable to find space at too-small shelters. I knew that America saw these shadows but chose not to call them. I did not want that disease.

      This is a significant turning point in Patel's youth, and is an issue he wishes to resolve. Its inspiring that even at a young age one is able to think of others and want to change the status quo.

  2. Mar 2016
    1. her thin hip Page 6 and the other rattling the newspaper at his bald head

      This is interesting imagery, and makes me think that both of these characters are old.

    1. On this little fund we began. The books were imported; the library was opened one day in the week for lending to the subscribers, on their promissory notes to pay double the value if not duly returned.

      As stated in the Heath Anthology "Franklin learn[ed] through experience the necessity of virtue, work, and shrewdness in dealing with the world" which he was well known for in this piece of literature.

      Larson, David M.W. "Heath Anthology of American LiteratureBenjamin Franklin - Author Page." Heath Anthology of American LiteratureBenjamin Franklin - Author Page. Cleveland State University, n.d. Web. 06 Mar. 2016.

    2. had been religiously educated as a Presbyterian;

      There is a stark shift in plot and tone here, that feels abrupt. Franklin might have used this strategy to keep the readers engaged, and cover a variety of important topic points.

    3. But mark how luxury will enter families, and make a progress, in spite of principle: being call'd one morning to breakfast, I found it in a China bowl, with a spoon of silver!

      There is a slight shift in the tone, and Franklin employes some irony or sarcasm as a rhetorical strategy.

    4. She assisted me chearfully in my business, folding and stitching pamphlets, tending shop, purchasing old linen rags for the paper-makers, etc., etc. We kept no idle servants, our table was plain and simple, our furniture of the cheapest.

      Franklin uses characterization as a rhetorical strategy to describe both he and his wife, and how frugal they live their life.

    5. account

      Franklin uses story telling as a powerful rhetorical strategy to engage the reader, which he continues below when explaining how he and the Junto founded the first Public Library.

    6. Articles of Belief and Acts of Religion.

      "The “Articles and Acts” is exactly what it sounds like: a creed and litany that summarize Franklin’s new religious insight. The litany is eclectic, combining deistic hymns to reason and virtue with fervent and a few vaguely Christian-sounding petitions for divine guidance."

      http://www.benfranklin300.org/_etc_pdf/Walters_%20Franklin_andHisGods.pdf

    7. My conduct might be blameable, but I leave it, without attempting further to excuse it; my present purpose being to relate facts, and not to make apologies for them

      There is a profound shift in approach and tone here, and Franklin agrees not going to church may be a bad thing, but he won't apologize for it, and has instead created his own religious material to study.

    8. These might be all good things; but, as they were not the kind of good things that I expected from that text, I despaired of ever meeting with them from any other, was disgusted, and attended his preaching no more.

      It seems that there is a shift in Franklins approach and tone here, and comes across as angry. He uses both pathos and logos here to convey to the reader his distaste for the way the sermon was presented, and further states why he does not attend these sermons.

    9. chiefly either polemic arguments, or explications of the peculiar doctrines of our sect, and were all to me very dry, uninteresting, and unedifying, since not a single moral principle was inculcated or enforc'd, their aim seeming to be rather to make us Presbyterians than good citizens

      Franklin is explicitly stating the reasoning why he does not enjoy to attend the sermon, because he finds it uninteresting and uninspiring, and feels that it only seeks to promote the church and its values rather than making someone a better person.

    10. polemic

      polemic Noun : a strong written or spoken attack against someone else's opinions, beliefs, practices, etc. polemics : the art or practice of using language to defend or harshly criticize something or someone

      http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/polemic

    11. admonished

      admonish Verb : to speak to (someone) in a way that expresses disapproval or criticism : to tell or urge (someone) to do something

      http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/admonish

    12. Tho' I seldom attended any public worship, I had still an opinion of its propriety, and of its utility when rightly conducted, and I regularly paid my annual subscription for the support of the only Presbyterian minister or meeting we had in Philadelphia

      This is an interesting paradox. Not wanting to attend worship, however financially supporting the Presbyterian church and minister. Perhaps Franklin has mixed feelings about this.

    13. These I esteem'd the essentials of every religion; and, being to be found in all the religions we had in our country, I respected them all, tho' with different degrees of respect, as I found them more or less mix'd with other articles, which, without any tendency to inspire, promote, or confirm morality, serv'd principally to divide us, and make us unfriendly to one another.

      There is a significant shift in tone in this paragraph, specifically sentence, where Franklin is moving away from talking about himself in a light tone, to sharing his personal beliefs of his religion divides, and is uninspiring. One can feel his emotions on this topic in this sentiment.

    14. I had been religiously educated as a Presbyterian

      Religion was a furiously talked about subject during the 18th century, and Franklins childhood was fueled with religious discussions with his parents, who were consistently concerned with his salvation. They had Franklin start reading the bible at age 5. Although Franklin dismisses the doctrines of New England Puritanism he became a well known theologian, on par with the famous Jonathan Edwards.

      Lemay, J. A. Leo. The Life of Benjamin Franklin, Volume 1: Journalist, 1706-1730. University of Pennsylvania Press, 2006. Web. Page 8.

    15. I never was without some religious principles. I never doubted, for instance, the existence of the Deity; that he made the world, and govern'd it by his Providence; that the most acceptable service of God was the doing good to man; that our souls are immortal; and that all crime will be punished, and virtue rewarded, either here or hereafter.

      This sounds like Franklin believes more in spiritualism and karma, rather than an organized religious sect.

    16. reprobation

      This term refers to the idea that since Salvation is not given to everyone, Presbyterians believe in Reprobation, "or the eternally lost condition of those not elect"

      http://www.pcahistory.org/documents/believe.html

    17. she thought her husband deserv'd a silver spoon and China bowl as well as any of his neighbors. This was the first appearance of plate and China in our house, which afterward, in a course of years, as our wealth increas'd, augmented gradually to several hundred pounds in value.

      Franklins wife clearly adores her husband, and wants to give him the luxuries he would not buy for himself. Franklin, a witty character, found a positive aspect to this gift, an increase in its value over time, although he disagreed with the purchase.

    18. We kept no idle servants, our table was plain and simple, our furniture of the cheapest

      Keeping in line with his frugal life style, Franklin did not allow himself the luxuries of a housekeeper, or a fancy well decorated home. He truly believes that living a fugal life will make one a wealthy man.

    19. He that would thrive, must ask his wife."

      This 15th century proverb means that the success of a man depends on how a woman runs the household. Luckily for Franklin, his wife also believes in his virtues and way of life.

      http://oxfordindex.oup.com/view/10.1093/oi/authority.20110803104452250

    20. My original habits of frugality continuing, and my father having, among his instructions to me when a boy, frequently repeated a proverb of Solomon, "Seest thou a man diligent in his calling, he shall stand before kings, he shall not stand before mean men," I from thence considered industry as a means of obtaining wealth and distinction, which encourag'd me, tho' I did not think that I should ever literally stand before kings, which, however, has since happened; for I have stood before five, and even had the honor of sitting down with one, the King of Denmark, to dinner.

      Franklin uses Industry and frugality to pave his way to success, and learned this way of life from his father, who often reminded him of the proverb of Solomon.

    21. This library afforded me the means of improvement by constant study, for which I set apart an hour or two each day, and thus repair'd in some degree the loss of the learned education my father once intended for me

      Learning through reading is important to Franklin, and promotes one of his virtues stated his autobiography: industry in which there is no free time wasted, and one is always doing something useful.

      http://www.thirteenvirtues.com

    22. In this way my affair went on more smoothly, and I ever after practis'd it on such occasions; and, from my frequent successes, can heartily recommend it. The present little sacrifice of your vanity will afterwards be amply repaid.

      I believe Franklin is saying that when you present an idea as someone else's, or of a popular belief, then people are more willing to take to the idea. By sacrificing ones "vanity" over the idea, then the outcome will be more successful.

    23. scrivener

      scrivener noun 1:a professional or public copyist or writer 2: Notary public

      http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/scrivener

    24. reading became fashionable; and our people, having no publick amusements to divert their attention from study, became better acquainted with books, and in a few years were observ'd by strangers to be better instructed and more intelligent than people of the same rank generally are in other countries.

      This must have been a profound moment in history, where there was a shift in popular culture, and a desire for increased literacy and expanding viewpoints.

    25. Finding the advantage of this little collection, I propos'd to render the benefit from books more common, by commencing a public subscription library.

      This was Franklins first few thoughts on starting the first Public Library, which he found necessary after the enjoyment he received from his own small scale library collection among the Junto.

    26. Junto

      This small group of 12 young men, ranging in professions from artists to tradesmen, initially started meeting in a local tavern to discuss politics, ideologies, and current events. However with time, the meetings moved to a rented house. Franklin devised a list of 24 questions to initiate the conversations, and used the Junto as a sound board to launch his latest ideas and inquiry’s by.

      Isaacson, Walter. Benjamin Franklin: An American Life. New York: Simon & Schuster, 2003. Page 55-60.

    27. not a good bookseller's shop

      This may be due to the fact that literacy rates were not abnormally high during this time period, and only the wealthy and elite had access to literature which they enjoyed in their private collections. Interestingly, citizens in the costal towns of Colonial America had higher literacy rates, especially among crafts men and the gentry over laborers, and there was a literacy disparity among men and women, where men were predicted to be twice as likely to be literate than women.

      Volo, James M, and Dorothy D. Volo. Family Life in 17th and 18th-Century America. Westport, CT: Greenwood Press, 2006. Print. Page 10.

    28. Philadelphia public library,

      This subscription based library, founded in 1731, is still in existence today. After Franklin and the other members of the Junto drew up the Articles of Agreement, 50 subscribers pledged 40 shillings each to start the first public lending library.

      http://www.librarycompany.org/about/

  3. Jan 2016
    1. However, I resolved to be the better for the echo of it; and though I had at first determined to buy stuff for a new coat, I went away resolved to wear my old one a little longer. Reader, if thou wilt do the same, thy profit will be as great as mine. I am, as ever, thine to serve thee,

      Franklin states that he, just like the reader, wanted to buy a new coat however chose to wear his old one for a whole longer, and that he is better for it, and says that if his readers do the same, they will be better off like he is, which i find really interesting. I wonder what the reader thinks of this, and the author. I wonder if they appreciate his advice or find it unreliable or hard to believe. I wonder if this publication gives any accreditation or information to who the author is, and if he himself is a wealthy person, thus solidifying the authors credibility.

    2. you give to another power over your liberty.

      I think this is a really powerful message about money management and what truly happens when one enters debt, and the amount of freedom and personal liberty is being handed over from the misuse, or mismanagement of money and the potentially severe unforeseen consequences that one will face.

    3. And after all, of what use is this pride of appearance, for which so much is risked, so much is suffered? It cannot promote health; or ease pain; it makes no increase of merit in the person, it creates envy, it hastens misfortune.

      I really liked this quote about the honesty within ones own life, and trying to get to the root issues behind ones actions of living in luxury, or "keeping up with appearances". I think Franklin does a poetic job reminding the reader that these things we buy to look nice or feel nice do not bring us things in life that are necessary for a quality time or experience.

    4. many have been ruined by buying good pennyworths

      This reminds me of a book I recent read The Life-Changing Magic of Tidying Up: The Japanese Art of Decluttering and Organizing by Marie Kondo in which she states the importance of catching yourself from buying just to buy and to only buy things of necessity or that "spark joy". I think Franklin was ahead of his time by stating this, and the issues of materialism and capitalism are plaguing our society today. I have a hard time imagining what sorts of knickknacks or items he is referring to, but i find it humorous that even in the 18th century people were potentially hoarding, buying beyond their means, or simply buying just to buy.

    5. If you would be wealthy, says he, in another almanac, think of saving as well as of getting: the Indies have not made Spain rich, because her outgoes are greater than her incomes. Away then with your expensive follies, and you will not have so much cause to complain of hard times, heavy taxes, and chargeable families; for, as Poor Dick says,

      I think Franklin is kindly stating that if you are wise and save, like his saying " a penny saved is a penny earned" then you would not have the audacity to complain about hard times. Franklins own beliefs and habits shine through in this statement, and you can sense his annoyance with ones who are not working, or saving in the event of "hard times".

    6. "So what signifies wishing and hoping for better times. We may make these times better if we bestir ourselves. Industry need not wish, as Poor Richard says, and he that lives upon hope will die fasting. There are no gains, without pains, then help hands, for I have no lands, or if I have, they are smartly taxed. And, as Poor Richard likewise observes, he that hath a trade hath an estate, and he that hath a calling hath an office of profit and honor; but then the trade must be worked at, and the calling well followed, or neither the estate, nor the office, will enable us to pay our taxes. If we are industrious we shall never starve; for, as Poor Richard says, at the working man's house hunger looks in, but dares not enter. Nor will the bailiff nor the constable enter, for industry pays debts, while despair encreaseth them, says Poor Richard. What though you have found no treasure, nor has any rich relation left you a legacy, diligence is the mother of good luck, as Poor Richard says, and God gives all things to industry. Then plough deep, while sluggards sleep, and you shall have corn to sell and to keep, says Poor Dick. Work while it is called today, for you know not how much you may be hindered tomorrow, which makes Poor Richard say, one today is worth two tomorrows; and farther, have you somewhat to do tomorrow, do it today. If you were a servant, would you not be ashamed that a good master should catch you idle? Are you then your own master, be ashamed to catch yourself idle, as Poor Dick says. When there is so much to be done for yourself, your family, your country, and your gracious king, be up by peep of day; let not the sun look down and say, inglorious here he lies. Handle your tools without mittens; remember that the cat in gloves catches no mice, as Poor Richard says. 'Tis true there is much to be done, and perhaps you are weak handed, but stick to it steadily, and you will see great effects, for constant dropping wears away stones, and by diligence and patience the mouse ate in two the cable; and little strokes fell great oaks, as Poor Richard says in his almanac, the year I cannot just now remember.

      I think that Franklin's use of sayings and expressions makes his writing unique in the sense that it provides embedded advice alongside an informational piece. I feel that it adds a more personal tone to the piece, and makes it feel like a conversation overhead when someone is giving a friend advice.

    7. So what signifies wishing and hoping for better times. We may make these times better if we bestir ourselves. Industry need not wish, as Poor Richard says, and he that lives upon hope will die fasting. There are no gains, without pains,

      This statement is neither applicable to most of america at the time nor to most of its citizens except a white male. This statement makes me think that this article was targeted to specifically white middle to upper class men, who historically would most likely be the only literate ones, as shared in the 18th Century headnote. Additionally, I think this is a very one sides statement that carries no sympathy for the marginalized and oppressed around them, which is hard to imagine today, but was the norm in the 18 century.

    8. early to bed, and early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.

      I feel like Franklin is trying to shift the blame away from disliking the governments taxation, rather putting the focus on oneself and the betterment of their own life through their actions, such as waking up early, and working hard. As he states " the used key is always bright", I think this is a reflective statement of the time, and relates to the Eighteenth Century headnote article in the sense that this time period was a time of exploration and demanding jobs. All over the country there were taxing duties to be fulfilled, and labor for the working man was plenty.

    9. abatement

      a·bate·ment əˈbātmənt noun (often in legal use) the ending, reduction, or lessening of something.

    10. so that did not my writings produce me some solid pudding, the great deficiency of praise would have quite discouraged me.

      I find this sentence to be very bold, especially having been stated in the initial first lines. Franklin clearly is using a crass sense of humor to draw in the reader, and employ sarcasm against other writers of the time.