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  1. Jul 2024
    1. With Blue - uncertain - stumbling Buzz - Between the light - and me - And then the Windows failed - and then I could not see to see -

      These lines describe the loss of sight. First, something gets between the narrator and the light. Then their eyes stop working. In the end, they can't see at all. The writer uses "Windows" to describe the eyes. The repetition of the word "see" emphasizes the importance of sight. The dashes make the writing feel jerky. This matches how suddenly losing sight might feel-- abrupt and incohesive.