are there any FAQs you can come up with where the answer is a flat-out "NO"?

this whole section is feeling a little vague for me (it's the only time I felt myself slow down while reading this page) — I would focus more on Venus and Mars as the potential pathfinders to the answers your student seeks, and why you are leaning on them in this immersion a little bit more here. I think grounding this section down with more specifics will help it feel more tangible.

I would make this bigger!

I think we need an introduction to the program name (again) length of time, details, etc here. then you can go into the next graph

small typo here

On first read, I'm not seeing the direct connection that this is what I need to do to lean back in to my life (yet) -- might just mean switching this copy out and including it in this bigger text section

this is VERY good

screaming! yes

I would make this bolder - on first read I'm thinking that I would maybe even make this the header because it's very striking and head-nod-y

this is sooooo good!

I think this is great, and we just need a little bridge to connect these ideas. Something like: That's because you've been getting answers designed for someone else's life, someone else's nervous system, someone else's problems. Ancient Greek philosophy worked differently. It wasn't about following someone else's rules—it was about developing your own capacity for wisdom. The Eleusinian Mysteries weren't a TED talk you attended once; they were an initiatory experience that changed how you understood reality. Protection practices weren't one-size-fits-all Instagram graphics; they were adapted to your specific life, your specific threats.

Add the dates and times

I think we asked a ton of hypothetical questions up top, so for sake of changing the structure up a bit I'd phrase this like:

This course assumes you're the kind of person who wants BOTH: the philosophical framework and the practical magic. Who finds TikTok manifestation culture too shallow but also knows there's something real happening when you work with ritual. Who wants to understand the 'why' behind the protection practices, not just follow instructions. If that's you, you're in the right place

I think we could do something stronger here! "You don't have to choose between intellectual rigor and magical practice. Ancient Greek philosophers didn't. The same people who invented formal logic also practiced protective rituals. The same culture that gave us Aristotle also gave us the Eleusinian Mysteries. Philosophy and folklore weren't separate—they were two ways of understanding the same reality"

This is a little unclear, just change to something like, "And if you stop trying to "fix" yourself, some of your most painful woes would simply resolve themselves?"

just make this a little clearer -- "But maybe the problem isn't your self-help book addiction — it's the fact that you're trying to "fix" your social media hygiene at all. Consider this: 1... "

Cut this!

maybe something instead that leads with the benefit upfront like: Four weekly workshops that adapt ancient Greek and Balkan protection and intention practices for modern life. You'll learn what's actually yours to carry, how to work with seasonal energy instead of your Google calendar, and why Persephone's story is the best manual for protecting your attention we have

can this be more specific? "let go of what's not ours" — maybe something like, "push the mute button on your inner hater" ... not that, something better!

I would make this hierarchy stand out more -- this should be bigger!

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