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  1. Jun 2024
    1. & tried to fix, affixed, we facted, felt.

      This line is an example of how an author's syntax impacts the tone and meaning their poem. The words sort of topple onto each other; tried to fix--affixed--we facted--felt. This gives the poem a tone of desperation and urgency.

    2. we wracked our lips we rang for words to ward off sleep

      Throughout this poem Franny Choi writes in prose poetry, the sentences lack metrical structure and a majority of the words have been strategically chosen.