Notes
These should be under references, not notes
Notes
These should be under references, not notes
the Japanese
Reword to ‘to Japan’ or another phrase like “Japanese creators” or “Japanese musician”
This was partially owed to new technologies that became available
Reword?
musician
Perhaps reword to “performer” if that is the intent.
electronic and digital
Should this match the article title? Also this seems redundant to me (perhaps I’m just ignorant on this topic)