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  1. Dec 2019
    1. a lost batallion of platonic conversationalists jumping down the stoops off fire escapes off windowsills off Empire State out of the moon

      This poem is filled with some of my favorite lines in all of poetry, and this stanza is one of them. Ginsberg wrecks a lot of poetic conventions, and creates a whole new style of poem. This run-on hyper manic style of writing inspired many, but is arguably at its best here.

    2. alcohol and cock and endless balls,

      Ah, Ginsberg’s obscenity trial. This is just the start before it really gets graphic. I’m still grateful for this poem and what it did in overturning obscenity laws.

    3. who were expelled from the academies for crazy & publishing obscene odes on the windows of the skull,

      These bright minds are not meant for academia, are expelled from it. This and the previous stanza are the beginning of this poem’s torturous relationship with academia.

    1. Don’t knock at my door, little child,      I cannot let you in,

      She can’t let herself have a child, because she’s scared of what will happen to them. While the result is different, this reminds me of the premise of Toni Morrison’s Beloved.

    2. We then shall be impulsed to kneel And send a prayer upon its way For those who wear the thorns today.

      Comparison to Jesus, and the crucifixion.

    1. You! Inez!

      She’s in love with another woman. The imagery here is imagery normally associated with women, and also, Inez is a woman’s name.

    2. That pageant terrible, that fiercely pouring fire On wasted fields, and writhing grotesque things Once men.

      It sounds like she’s describing Biblical hell, but you can tell from context she’s not. Fierce imagery on her part creates this vision of horror.

    1. Some bozo’s been all the way to Africa to get some sand.

      This parallels her later comparison between the dancing man and the way the crowd mocks him and laughs at him.

    2. That’s what they done to this shine, ain’t it? Bottled him.

      They took him from where he’s originally from and put him in a place where he’s mocked for being who he is, much like she mocks the little bottle of sand in the beginning.

  2. Nov 2019
    1. They bought off some of your leaders You stumbled, as blind men will. . . . They coaxed you, unwontedly soft-voiced. . . . You followed a way. Then laughed as usual.

      The changes in voice are really interesting. I wonder why he didn’t write the entire piece in the style of the singing men, because it’s their point of view he seems to be trying to convey.

    2. Ma Rainey

      I remember learning about Ma Rainey in one of my classes, The History of Rock. She was known as the Mother of Blues, and a contemporary of hers, Bessie Smith, was known as the Empress of Blues.

    1. To the tune o’ those Weary Blues. With his ebony hands on each ivory key He made that poor piano moan with melody.

      Obviously, this is a much prettier picture than what’s actually happening. Nevertheless, I wonder if the old man imagines himself here, or if he has played in a place like this before.

  3. Oct 2019
    1. When Lil’s husband got demobbed, I said— I didn’t mince my words, I said to her myself, HURRY UP PLEASE ITS TIME

      These lines remind me of Adams' "The Dynamo and the Virgin"; of the confusion at the core at the piece, the sense of rushing time, a feeling of impending doom.

    2. “I shall rush out as I am, and walk the street “With my hair down, so. What shall we do tomorrow?

      duchamp's nude descending a staircase

      I remember reading that part of this poem was inspired by Eliot's wife, who was mentally unwell (and had to be committed to a mental institution multiple times, if I remember correctly?). The chaos these lines imply, and the image offered by these lines in particular, remind me of Duchamp's "Nude Descending a Staircase".

    3. And I will show you something different from either Your shadow at morning striding behind you Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you; I will show you fear in a handful of dust.

      These lines always stood out to me. They're so direct, because they directly address the reader (or, the reader through the narrator) and make the goth, macabre part of my soul very happy. There's a song called Memory Eternal (or Vichnaya Pamyat) that is performed in traditionally Eastern Orthodox churches, often during funeral ceremonies. A recording of it is also part of HBO's Chernobyl soundtrack. It reminds me of these lines, through its directness about death, its slow, sad melody. This recording is also dramatic, much like this poem. If you haven't seen the show, I highly recommend it.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dLZPfMHWPWk

    1. A rat crept softly through the vegetation Dragging its slimy belly on the bank

      “I think we are in rats’ alley / where dead men lost their bones.”

    2. When Lil’s husband got demobbed, I said— I didn’t mince my words, I said to her myself, HURRY UP PLEASE ITS TIME

      I know that this a reference to what pubs in England say when they are closing, but this unequivocally one of my favorite lines in a poem ever. It works so well with what he’s trying to say (or, at least, what I think he’s trying to say).

    3. I will show you fear in a handful of dust.

      A) This line is really metal.

      B) I’m sure everyone and their mom knows this, but this is a reference to Plato’s (was it Plato?) dust thing.

    4. My cousin’s, he took me out on a sled, And I was frightened. He said, Marie, Marie, hold on tight. And down we went.

      I always wondered who Marie is. Nevertheless, this has always been one of my favorite parts of the poem.

    1. A blow is delighted.

      Not to get fake deep or overshare or anything, but this poem reminds me of some of my thought processes back when I had a psychotic break in high school. Stein, you're a fucking delight.

    2. Happy happy happy. All the, chose. Is a necessity. Necessity. Happy happy happy all the.

      Parts of this poem remind me of some of ee cumming's more experimental work.

    3. Begging to state begging to state begging to state alright. Begging to state begging to state begging to state alright.

      The repetition here emphasizes this point, as it does throughout the poem. What is she begging to state alright? Why is it so important?

    4. How do you do I forgive you everything and there is nothing to forgive. Never the less. Leave it to me

      I love the sudden command in these lines. Inside all of this, there's a moment of clarity, something to inspire its audience to keep reading, to keep searching for that meaning.

    1. sent out at fifteen to work in some hard-pressed house in the suburbs—

      I realize this is probably a reference to her working as a maid, but it initially made me think of child brides, and her being sold off at sixteen to become a wife, and therefore mother and housekeeper.

    2. no one to drive the car

      This ending kills me. All of this to say that she is on her own, and the narrator can do nothing for her, and this really drives the point home.

    1. In a Station of the Metro

      The title of this poem gives it its meaning, its setting. Without it, there is an image evoked, but it is untethered, floating in space, an abstraction.

  4. Sep 2019
    1. Strive not to speak, poor scattered mouth; I know

      And thus, she lays him to rest, by reassuring him she knows—knows why he has been forgotten, as well as reassuring him that she won’t forget him, for as long as she exists, and when she ceases to exist, she’ll understand then, too.

    2. All will be easier when the mind To meet the brutal age has grown An iron cortex of its own.

      Continuing on the metaphor of earlier, the narrator makes the argument that despite of the risks and downsides associated with it, the mind will be stronger—or, rather, will have an easier way through life—once it has made its own defense mechanisms

    3. I might be driven to sell your love for peace, Or trade the memory of this night for food. It well may be. I do not think I would

      The narrator stands by their morals, and their critique of love as an all-encompassing Everything. Even at the risk of their own comfort and safety, they won’t sell someone something they don’t believe in.

    4. Yet many a man is making friends with death Even as I speak, for lack of love alone

      The narrator is talking about the many men who risk their lives, if not kill themselves, over the lack of love in their lives.

    1. A snow-drop spider, a flower like a froth, And dead wings carried like a paper kite.

      His listing here to redescribe the earlier elements like ingredients in a witch’s brew is really interesting! I like how he describes the moth as “dead wings”.

    2. The only other sound’s the sweep Of easy wind and downy flake. The woods are lovely, dark and deep.

      Whenever I read this poem, I’m reminded of the seemingly-eternal debate over meaning in this poem, and whether any specific meanings can be found in a poem in general without reducing it to something that doesn’t take into account its temporal nature, and doesn’t risk pulling it into separate parts at the expense of its existence as a work of art (thanks, Cleanth Brooks). Anyways, the language here sounds so warm and inviting, and I’m always interested to hear what people have to say when they argue whether or not the narrator in this poem has a death wish, based on these two lines. (It’s also intriguing to hear what people think “sleep” means—if it means to actually sleep, or is Frost’s metaphor for death, in keeping with his soft descriptions of the snow.)

    3. No one has seen them made or heard them made, But at spring mending-time we find them there, I let my neighbor know beyond the hill; And on a day we meet to walk the line And set the wall between us once again. We keep the wall between us as we go.

      This is the inciting incident—there is already strife hinted at between the neighbors, through the images of blood and hunters, but this is what forces the narrator to confront his problem with his neighbors

    1. That no one knows what is good Who knows not what is evil; And no one knows what is true Who knows not what is false.

      The narrator has spent his life trying to impress the importance of duality, and learning beyond yourself, to the people in his village. Here, he summarizes why: he believes that without outside help, anyone who knows one thing inherently cannot know or recognize the other.

    1. I did not think that I should find them there When I came back again; but there they stood,

      He’s surprised to find them there, as he wasn’t expecting it. This leads to him thinking about the nature of clerks, and time—of course they’re still there, much the same time will (arguably) always be there and never change.

    1. But I don’t mind it a bit—only the paper.

      Her husband consistently gaslights her, making her believe she has no issue with things she’s only just said she has issues with. It’s creating a sort of duality within her—the truth of what she is actually thinking and experiencing, and what her husband believes (and wants her to believe) she is thinking and experiencing.

    1. So dawned the time of Sturm und Drang: storm and stress to-day rocks our little boat on the mad waters of the world-sea; there is within and without the sound of conflict, the burning of body and rending of soul; inspiration strives with doubt, and faith with vain questionings.

      The wording here calls back to the poem at the beginning of the chapter. The imagery of both evokes the sea, and draws a connection between a stormy sea and the hardships faced by the authors.

    2. To be a poor man is hard, but to be a poor race in a land of dollars is the very bottom of hardships.

      Racism and classism are inherently intertwined in America, as Du Bois points out here. People of color, and especially Black people, have been deliberately excluded from institutions traditionally associated with raising one's economic status; homeownership, higher education, etc. There is not a single factor of modern american life that does not have something to due with racism, that doesn't have a past (and often present) stake in deliberately holding people of color from the same benefits that white people enjoy.

  5. Aug 2019
    1. Yet Langley said nothing new, and taught nothing that one might not have learned from Lord Bacon, three hundred years before; but though one should have known the “Advancement of Science” as well as one knew the “Comedy of Errors,” the literary knowledge counted for nothing until some teacher should show how to apply it.

      knowledge isn't helpful unless someone knows how to apply it

    2. He had entered a supersensual world, in which he could measure nothing except by chance collisions of movements imperceptible to his senses, perhaps even imperceptible to his instruments, but perceptible to each other, and so to some known ray at the end of the scale.

      again, highlighting his feelings of being lost and helpless in the face of this new technology; he has lost any old way of measuring the universe, and now things that should (in his mind) be impossible are possible

    3. but to Adams the dynamo became a symbol of infinity. As he grew accustomed to the great gallery of machines, he began to feel the forty-foot dynamos as a moral force, much as the early Christians felt the Cross.

      and thus begins the comparison between modern technological advances and religion; adams, having no background in this, wants desperately to understand it, but the education system has failed him so that he instead ponders on something else that feels massive, and infinte, and undefinable: namely, religion

    1. acids of rage, the candor of tar, Out of creosote, gasoline, drive shafts, wooden dollies

      The poem starts off with descriptions of traditionally inexpensive food before moving to these decidedly non-food objects–telling the reader within the first stanza that the lion is a metaphor for something much, much darker

    2. And all that was hidden burning on the oil-stained earth They feed they Lion and he comes.

      The language in this reminds me of Yeats' "The Second Coming"; I think there's definitely thematic similarities between the two