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  1. Last 7 days
    1. ap the Story: Similar to B, except that everyone draws a “map” of the story. After individual explanations and questions, the workshop as a whole might work together with the author to create a map of what pos- sible finished versions of the story might look like.

      Of the Author-Choice Workshops, this type most caught my attention as finishing stories is something I often feel anxious about. Writing fiction in general is something I have little experience in, and I think I could benefit from extra help coming up with proper endings.

    2. I have found that this results in very little criticism and a lot of learning

      I specifically like this form of workshop becuase it feels "low-stakes," but also like a really good learning opportunity for someone just getting into writing. To me, it feels most like an in-person discussion, which I am familiar with and know offers a good learning and communication experience for students.

    3. I often use a modified version of CRP as a starting point,

      As someone with little experience going into this reading, I would have appreciated an inclusion of what CRP stands for, as it would help me visualize how to reverse the steps better in my head.

    4. uestions from the artist to the workshop.

      I have never participated in any workshop before, but I really like the inclusion of artists being able to ask for specific feedback on their work. When I first thought of workshops, I admit I only thought of the workshop giving feedback without any form of control from the artist.

    5. Just as a river meanders around hills, through fields, lacing its way down a slope, a narrative can meander, too:

      I like that this author takes time to slow down her writing to add vivid imagery for the reader. Becuase it adds more detail and takes her a longer time to get to the point, it feels like she is showing us firsthand that the techniques she is writing about are not limited to narratives alone.

    6. Odyssey, Metamorphoses, “Amor and Psyche,” 1001 Nights, The Tempest, Peter Pan, “Sleeping Beauty”—plus dry strains of pastoral,

      I think that a reason I find odes to other writers' works in some of the stuff I read entertaining is becuase I know that had I not taken the time to slow down and read closer, I'd have never found them in the first place. This technique can add a lot of texture to writing, and I can't wait to try it on my own.

    7. not going straight to the point.”

      I think that as a newer reader, these types of beginnings always used to annoy me. It would be useful for setting up information and the setting, but I think this is the first time I have thought about it in a way that actually fuels a character or narrator

    8. Quick sketch:

      I enjoyed reading this example, and I feel like it gave me a clearer understanding of the chapter "Meanders." I like that Alison didn't just dive into the plot choices of the author, but singled out specific names and word choices that added a deeper meaning to the entire story.

    9. is most pliable of all forms.”

      As someone who likes to learn as much as I can about literature, this is the first time I have heard novels described this way. I think that the complexity that can be found in them is the reason I tend to gravitate towards them over poetry.

    10. Memoirists know that they must “look” back over life to find patterns that give order.

      I loved hearing these examples, as two memoirs are close to being considered my favorite books of all time. I feel like this sentence opened me to new thinking, as I greatly enjoy memoirs, but realize that I can't quite pinpoint a solid structure. I think part of what makes them unique is that they each follow a life and can't be replicated as non-fiction again. It will be interesting to try to find a unique structure to use in my own fiction.

    11. Teachers bid young writers to fol- low the arc (or triangle or pyramid).

      I appreciate a large part of this class so far being devoted to breaking the stigma that fiction should be written in a singular form. I have honestly been noticing this form much more often after our first reading on the subject. I like that it takes pressure off the students while also pushing them to think critically about others ways fiction can be written.

    12. Reading on, we travel not just through places conjured in the story, but through the narrative itself.

      As a very visual person, I love thinking about reading this way. I also feel like it introduces a depth behind simply reading a work of fiction. Not only do you travel through the characters, but you also travel through the specific choices and thoughts of the author.

    13. I think that Gray’s way of working from life to art could describe writing, too.

      I really like the connection that this author made. It hooked the audience, and I found myself questioning how the story pertained to the overall message about writing.

  2. Jan 2026
    1. Now you can relate the parts of the essay more accurately to the whole

      I like the idea of mentally separating the first and the second reading. It gives the reader a chance to process the content and then go back to examine the author's intent later, once they have a better understanding of the work itself.

    2. record of your own knowledge or thinking about a topic before you see what the writer has to offer in the essay

      This is also an important step in seeing how authors can change your viewpoints or surprise you throughout their works. I also find that this is helpful to the reader when trying to retrace their thought process and determine how or why the author encouraged us to think a certain way.

    3. the subject matter is not immediately appealing

      I think that a big part of being able to read a wide variety of works is not necessarily liking or even agreeing with them, but instead being able to find curiousity in why authors thought or wrote the way they did. I believe this is also something big when studying classical literature, as I find the thought behind them is often more entertaining than the plots.

    4. Active reading is a skill that takes time to acquire. By becoming more familiar with different types of writing, you will sharpen your criti-cal thinking skills and learn how good writers make decisions in their writing.

      I like that this class is centered around discovering fiction writing techniques through others' work instead of just lecturing it to us. This allows us to get a wide variety of exposure and build active reading skills.

    1. Through this class we will be thinking about thecomponents of the craft of writingand its purpose. What isfiction? Why proseand not poetry? What does prose do that poetry doesn’t?

      Throughout my experience reading various works of fiction, I have not been able to examine the craft of writing it. I am incredibly excited to see what this class has in store for me!

    2. As long as work has been submi[edthat fulfills all ofthe requirements of the assignment, work will receive at least a B grade. Work which demonstrates higher quality and/or demonstrates risk-taking inconsidering or implemen4ng new ideas will be awarded an A.

      I like this becuase it pushes students to not only fulfill the expected requirements but also encourages them to think further about how they can push themselves creatively.

    3. Students must grant the instructor Editorpermissions on theGoogle Doc they submit. This allows the instructor to provide detailed feedback, make suggestions, and track revisions effectively.

      A couple of my classes require this for papers, and I like the policy becuase it protects students from being accused of suspected AI use.

    4. . Using AI isn’t worth it. I am not expecting perfect work. I get it, you want a good grade, but in my course the best way to achieve that is to submit something that you have written yourself even if you don’t feel it’s your best. That work will always get a better grade than a zero.

      I appreciate these statements used in regard to AI use. Even though the course is online and distance learning, the wording gives it a closer feel, where students are supported and expected to complete their best work.