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  1. Oct 2024
    1. Winslow-Yost uses a lot of contrast and paradox to illustrate the complex emotional experiences offered by video games.

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    1. Nearly 50 years ago, long before smartphones and social media, thesocial critic Lewis Mumford put a name to the way that complextechnological systems offer a share in their benefits in exchange forcompliance. He called it a “bribe.” With this label, Mumford sought toacknowledge the genuine plentitude that technological systems makeavailable to many people, while emphasizing that this is not an offerof a gift but of a deal. Surrender to the power of complextechnological systems — allow them to oversee, track, quantify, guide,manipulate, grade, nudge, and surveil you — and the system will offeryou back an appealing share in its spoils.

      Technological systems lure people with apparent benefits while demanding something in return. The repeated listing of verbs ("oversee, track, quantify, guide...") highlights technological control, making the reader aware of how intrusive these systems are.

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    1. This is a story we need to know. Industrial transformation turned out tobe a bubble of promise followed by lost livelihoods and damaged landscapes.And yet: such documents are not enough. If we end the story with decay, weabandon all hope—or turn our attention to other sites of promise and ruin,promise and ruin.

      Important concept: details the cycle of extracting natural (and finite) resources.

      Style elements: speaks directly to the reader, repeats important phrases.

    2. This is a story we know. It is the story of pioneers, progress, and the trans-formation of “empty” spaces into industrial resource felds.

      "Empty" land becomes a place to extract resources for profit.

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  2. Sep 2024
    1. Furthering this thought, Foer invokes philosopher Simone Weil, who claims that “Attention is the rarest and purest form of generosity” (qtd. in Foer).

      Meshwork

    2. Whereas Marche’s focus is primarily inward, on what participation in social media does to one’s self-actualization, Foer turns his view outward, claiming that increased engagement with our devices leads us to apathy and distraction, turning us into people who are “more likely to forget others.”

      Meshwork: compares the two author's views on internal vs external effects of social media

    3. While Marche argues that social media impedes our ability to achieve meaningful self-knowledge, essayist Jonathan Safran Foer, in his 2013 New York Times article “How Not to Be Alone,” suggests a broader criticism of digital technology’s impact on our interpersonal relationships.

      Meshwork: contrasts the views of Jonathan Safran Foer and Marche

    1. Proof of this is elusive. We’ve all seen war photographs that are mere grist for thejournalistic mill. Some photographers are addicted to war; some viewers arevoyeurs. And yet photography is not limited by these ways of seeing. Photographyworks and doesn’t work, it is tolerable and intolerable, it confounds and oftenexceeds our expectations.

      Argument?

    2. Conflict photography arises out of a huge set of moving variables that inunpredictable, unreliable but unignorable ways help make the demands of justicevisible. Taking photographs is sometimes a terrible thing to do, but often, nottaking the necessary photo, not bearing witness or not being allowed to do so, canbe worse.

      I feel like the final paragraphs function as a kind of open-ended argument, the author never actually takes an absolute stance on the ethics of violent photography. This makes sense given the topic, "Taking photographs is sometimes a terrible thing to do, but often, not taking the necessary photo, not bearing witness or not being allowed to do so, can be worse."

    3. But what does the photograph, by itself, tell us? Not much. Unless it is supportedwith extraphotographic evidence, it will be mired in platitudes about humanbrutality or the universality of grief, truths for which no photographic argument isrequired.

      This sentence really highlights how photography alone isn't really an adequate medium to relay information on tragedies to the masses. And without context, images like these only really contribute to the aesthetic of "the universality of grief," without offering further knowledge to the viewer.

    4. His images, initially made for one purpose (asthe regime’s records of its enemies), came to take on a different significance (asevidence of astonishing crimes against humanity).

      In contrast with how the images taken at Abu Ghraib were misinterpreted by the public in a negative way, Caesar's work-related photography was taken out of its original context, and used to spread awareness of the brutality people were facing.

    5. But the images, once they were released into the world, had a muchmore shocking and enraging meaning.

      Photographs alone do not always encapsulate the full story of tragedy, and once these images are released there is no guaranteeing they'll affect viewers in the ways intended.

    6. If, asAzoulay argues, photography deterritorializes citizenship, then these imagesaccuse, they interrogate and they put us in the same boat with those we are lookingat. “What have we done,” they ask us, “to create the conditions in which others, ourfellow citizens, undergo these unspeakable experiences?”

      Azoulay suggests that photography can bridge the gap between those experiencing atrocities first-hand, and those who are experiencing them through media. In this way, spectators are forced to accept those in the photograph as "fellow citizens," rather than victims of some distant tragedy unrelated to them.

    7. This is one of the pointsAzoulay makes at length in her lucid and indispensable 2008 study, “The CivilContract of Photography.” She pins her argument on the civic relations betweenpeople: “When and where the subject of the photograph is a person who hassuffered some form of injury, a viewing of the photograph that reconstructs thephotographic situation and allows a reading of the injury inflicted on othersbecomes a civic skill, not an exercise in aesthetic appreciation.”

      Azoulay's view on violent photography presents a shift from Sontag's earlier ideas of passive spectatorship and voyeurism. She argues that this type of photography creates a more interdependent relationship between the subject, photographer, and viewer. Where "spectators," are able serve a more participatory role, rather than a voyeuristic one.

    8. The challenges of viewership have onlyintensified in the 21st century. Images of violence have both proliferated andmutated, demanding new forms of image literacy.

      As images of violence and catastrophe become more accessible online, people have to adapt how they interpret and respond to such content.

    9. Sontag wondered, near the end of “Regarding the Pain of Others,” whether “one hasno right to experience the suffering of others at a distance, denuded of its rawpower,” and she came to the conclusion that sometimes a bit of distance can begood. “There’s nothing wrong with standing back and thinking,” she wrote.

      Problem: is it acceptable to experience the suffering of others through the incomplete lens of photography?

      Sontag changed her earlier position on the topic, suggesting that a level of distance between "spectators," and those being observed can be useful.

    10. Sontag believed that acertain passivity was inescapable in spectatorship, and that any image of violencewould be tainted by this passive distance.

      According to Sontag, viewing images of violence can't possibly have the impact certain journalists claim it does, because the spectator will always have some level of passivity, and distance between them and those being photographed.

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    1. Mr. Salgado's work is ultimately separated from its art-historical references by itsspecificity: these are not ancient martyrs, apostles and saints but modern-dayfellow world citizens -- real, specific people, whom Mr. Salgado endeavors to makeinto generalized saints and apostles, except that we know they are not.

      Arguement.

    2. emotional blackmail

      This refers to how Salgado's images (like many other photographer's) are designed to evoke an emotional, moral response from the viewer. This often leaves viewers feeling guilty or complicit if they don't react strongly to the suffering depicted.

    3. Should pictures of suffering ever be so beautiful?

      Problem.

    4. The greater the suffering, the grander his artistic ambition, naturally. His is theparadoxical situation of being a celebrated artist of forgotten people, which is astarting point for much of the carping.

      This paragraph really summarizes the problem Kimmelman addresses throughout the essay. He questions if suffering can be presented in a way that is "too beautiful," and whether or not aestheticizing human pain diminishes its emotional impact on an audience. This is especially apparent with Salgado's career, as an artist he is praised for his visually stunning photography. Meanwhile, the people undergoing tragedy he's chosen to depict are "forgotten."

    5. That said, the good photographs are so stupendously gorgeous that they make youforget everything else while you are looking at them.

      The aesthetic appeal of these photographs can make the viewer forget about the actual tragedies and people shown in them.

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    1. But is it enough that a poem “remembers” when we are now entrenched in an era of total recall?

      Can art, particularly poetry, serve as an adequate "witness," to trauma and injustice, especially when we live in a digital age in which these issues are captured first-hand and broadcasted for the public to view themselves.

    2. The actual presence of I, the viewer, is required to truly apprehend the absence of you, the Other.

      In order to truly comprehend art depicting someone's trauma, the viewer, or "witness," has to recognize the fact that the "Other," is not present. And that it is impossible to really experience this person's memories firsthand, "I cannot sit in your chair, eat at your table." The viewer has to acknowledge the proximity between them and the victim as they attempt to experience their trauma.

    3. To give form to memory, one must also forget.

      Argument

    4. When a poem becomes commemorative, it dies.

      I interpreted this to mean that when a poem, (especially one detailing the emotions and events of a traumatic instance or time period), becomes a "symbol," or something known to represent that instance, it loses its original meaning and value. For example, "Death Fugue," became a tool for Germans to acknowledge the events of the Holocaust in a ceremonial setting, without actually having to engage with the emotions or reality of those who experienced it.

    5. Celan grew to loathe “Death Fugue.” It dogged him, overshadowing his other works, and fearing he was becoming a mouthpiece for Jewish Holocaust poetry, Celan later refused to let “Death Fugue” be further anthologized. Meanwhile, “Death Fugue” became a German obsession, a fixture at commemorative events.

      This shows how witness poetry risks becoming rote and ceremonial instead of provocative. Celan's poem "Death Fugue" lost most of its original meaning and purpose, and instead became a "fixture" at German ceremonial events, something to be mechanically recited with little engagement.

    6. Yet witness accounts matter little when prosecutors can mishandle evidence and mislead the jury, when evidence is up against the Law that makes impossible the criminal conviction of police officers who act with impunity. When the verdict was announced, one felt robbed of one’s eyes.

      This sort of refutes the idea that digital documentation is an incontestable "witness" to traumatic events. In Brown's case, even video evidence was not enough to guarantee accountability.

    1. To have grown up through San Francisco’srecent history is to be haunted by the visions of progressivism that did not end upwhere they were supposed to, that did not think far enough ahead and skiddedpast the better world they planned

      The final section elaborates on how San Francisco reverted from its cosmopolitan past to a manufactured blend of "tribes."

    2. We say,We’re doing something for our children and our children’s children. We say, Wewant to give our kids the things we didn’t have. But every palace is someone’sprison; every era’s victory the future’s baseline for amendment. Our children andour children’s children: they will leave our dreams behind.

      Because the makeup and values of an area are perpetually changing, it's impossible to guarantee future generations will have it better than current ones.

    3. By 1998, the concept had begun, quietly, to change. Four developers submittedplans focussed on making the bottom oor what one reporter called a “globalmarketplace.”

      The Ferry Building's development is symbolic of San Francisco's changing philosophy and culture.

    4. My parents hadplanned a dinner party, but the phones were giving busy signals, and it was unclearwhether anyone would come. They did, though. Everybody came. We lit thedining room with candles, and the guests gripped the edge of the table throughthe aftershocks. Dinner was warm, intimate, vulnerable. It seemed to show that aprivate order among people you knew persisted, like a painting, in the absence ofcivic structure in the world

      Familiar people come together in organized structure, even when chaos is happening elsewhere.

    5. In California, the norm was to spend hourswandering in and out of doors, in and out of social spaces, in and out ofconversations, in and out of paradigms of thought.

      The city's indoor-outdoor lifestyle led to a stronger sense of community, and greater interactions between people who otherwise might not have connected.

    6. “The physical remaking of San Francisco, its culture and countercultures, wasinseparable from the ux of people and neighborhoods,” Isenberg writes.

      This section talks about how San Francisco became a successful pluralist community, with different people from different backgrounds gaining the ability to influence the city's construction.

    7. eople like my grandparents, freedfrom the old hierarchies, joined a growing crowd of Bay Area residents trying tobuild a more open society. Rules changed. Social structures recombined. A newlocal culture was formed out of the shards of small, personal dreams.

      This section reiterates ideas about cosmopolitanism, and how the collapse of strict hierarchies allows for new local cultures to form.

      San Francisco's emergence as a financial power eroded this effect, with the public sphere shifting in favor of privatized spaces, experiences, and lifestyles.

    8. The marriage was an act of quiet liberation.

      Main idea: the author's grandparents differing pasts and relationship introduces the idea of cosmopolitanism

    9. While the Ghirardelli Square model of public-private developmenthad emerged from integrative pluralism, the Ferry Building, like the Sea Ranch,evolved to gratify a new and widespread tribal life-style ideal.

      Develops the argument: although both areas are advertised as communal spaces, the Ferry Building differs greatly from Ghirardelli Square by selling a predetermined "life-style" to consumers, rather than allowing genuine diversity.

    10. The private-ownership model now held as good faith started to seepout.

      Develops the argument

    11. If Ghirardelli Square epitomizedcollaborative and participatory urban planning, the Sea Ranch, a hundred miles upthe coast, helped presage its demise

      Develops the argument: the contrast between Ghirardelli Square and the Sea Ranch represents how wealth and private interests change the culture of an area. The "Ghirardelli model" balances commercial and social interests, which is something Sea Ranch fails at.

    12. saeculum

      Key conceptual term

    13. Commercial imperatives

      Key conceptual term: this explains how financial incentives influenced what kinds of activities and retail would be available in the Ferry Building. As more high-end services became available, the building's concept shifted away from being a shared public space, to being a place to generate profit. This shift was present throughout the city.

    14. local cosmopolitanism

      Key conceptual term: this highlights how the economic makeup of San Francisco changed, and other demographics as a result, ultimately changing the city's culture entirely.

    15. pluralism

      Key conceptual term: the collaborative efforts and unique contrasting styles seen throughout the city's architecture are reflective of pluralist makeup of San Francisco.

    16. It’s to have seen how swiftly righteous dreams turn into cloister gates; to noticehow destructive it can be to shape a future on the premise of having found yourpeople, rather than nding people who aren’t yours. The city, today, is the seat ofan atomized new private order. The lessons of the saeculum have not stuck.

      Argument

    17. Though the Bay Area has recently become aseat of cultural power—the place where digital life is dened, where pathways forcommunity, news, and people-meeting are set—its recent ascent to uky wealthmarks only a return to olden forms.

      Problem

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