Trinchero family’s run as an upstart mom-and-pop winery
amazing
Trinchero family’s run as an upstart mom-and-pop winery
amazing
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ine on the other hand was permissible if it was to be used for medicinal purposes or for sacramental purposes, thus few vineyards continued their work during the prohibition era by making wines for consecration
very interesting, i never knew that
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try not end with a quote
In fact, the strong attraction she had to
i like this transistion
Annie Oakle
i love reading about annie Oakley
Women Who Saw the Elephant: The California Gold Rush
I am not sure what this paper is about
cruelty
what did he do
it a an
try revising this
A lot of the western pioneers buried loved ones in the prairie and the desser
maybe add more relations to the west throughout the rest of your paper
Limerick say’s that the western women were a lot like Mama Joad
i agree with this statement
They know there are jobs because Ole Tom, Tom’s dadhasa flyer that says there are. This is like the people who left the crowded east for land in the west, they loaded covered wagons.
the relationship between the east and west is good
Just like the settlers of the West before them, the Joad family decide to leave their home in Oklahoma and travel West in the hopes of building a new life and find their fortune in California.
i like this relationship to past settlers of the West
However, just as many of the settlers, the Joads move to California would turn out to be nothing but a bitter hope unlike any of thepromoting
maybe rephrase this
s stated, the Joads also headed packed up
this sentence is a little confusing
When all was said and done hundreds of 8thousands of migrants converged on California looking for work and opportunity.
As many did when they traveled to the West
Stolen land and conquest would become cornerstones of Western culture.
The relationship to conquest is a good one i may steal it
If one were to take the four principles of Western history laid out in Patricia Limerick’s book The Legacy of Conquest,it would be hard to refute the claim thatJohn Steinbeck’s book The Grapes of Wrath is in every way a Western. Limerick claimed that continuity, convergence, conquest and complexity were all essential in Western history. This paper shall argue that these are all essential concepts in Steinbeck’s Grapes of Wrath as well.
this is a great argument
Brutality. The Indians had a lifestyle that most woulddefine as this. This type of forcewill cause strangers to help one another. Through thesedifferencesof life,the western pioneers,with theIndians against them, were able to cause the states to come togetheras a whole.Working together to bring peaceto those who needed it
this was a little confusing
People seen other people based on their race before they took into consideration their class and gender.
this is a little confusing
according to the people in the West
explain which people
here were advantagesgiven to other races that weren’tgiven to lower totem pole races.
nice
White settlers viewed Native Americans as nothing more than violent savages standing in the way of American progress.
this is great, you can see this from the readings of Gwynne how the white settlers felt about the Native Americans
The idea led to the treatment whichled to a racial hierarchywhich determined who acertain person would be in this life.
I thought this paragraph was a great introduction, but i feel as though this line has already been stated above.
American individuality
there is a great part on pg 221 in richardson's book that could tie in with what you have written, give it a look and see what you think.
he eastern United states filled up rapidly, immigrants were arriving daily. The cities where over crowded and the air smelled like rotten garbage. The people started to wonder where they could find a better life. Horace Greely kept writing” Go West Youngman “and it kept getting louder, and people decided to take the plunge and escape the life they found themselves trapped in. The p
I felt the same way about the east and how over crowded it was, i think you just need to add in how it answers the question we were asked by Rees.
I like to think of the west after the civil war
I think this is great, it made for a great catch to the paper, which made me want to read more. I think your paper has a great start and can relate to what you have written from what were supposed to read.
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struck nerve
struck a nerve
how is going to be funded
was a little confused here
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Elizabeth, I think you have a great start to your paper. The introduction is well thought out and sounds very good. The citations flow well together. The only thing I might suggest on changing is adding more of your own thoughts and words to the paper.