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  1. Nov 2018
    1. ine on the other hand was permissible if it was to be used for medicinal purposes or for sacramental purposes, thus few vineyards continued their work during the prohibition era by making wines for consecration

      very interesting, i never knew that

    1. They know there are jobs because Ole Tom, Tom’s dadhasa flyer that says there are. This is like the people who left the crowded east for land in the west, they loaded covered wagons.

      the relationship between the east and west is good

    1. Just like the settlers of the West before them, the Joad family decide to leave their home in Oklahoma and travel West in the hopes of building a new life and find their fortune in California.

      i like this relationship to past settlers of the West

    1. If one were to take the four principles of Western history laid out in Patricia Limerick’s book The Legacy of Conquest,it would be hard to refute the claim thatJohn Steinbeck’s book The Grapes of Wrath is in every way a Western. Limerick claimed that continuity, convergence, conquest and complexity were all essential in Western history. This paper shall argue that these are all essential concepts in Steinbeck’s Grapes of Wrath as well.

      this is a great argument

  2. Oct 2018
    1. Brutality. The Indians had a lifestyle that most woulddefine as this. This type of forcewill cause strangers to help one another. Through thesedifferencesof life,the western pioneers,with theIndians against them, were able to cause the states to come togetheras a whole.Working together to bring peaceto those who needed it

      this was a little confusing

    1. White settlers viewed Native Americans as nothing more than violent savages standing in the way of American progress.

      this is great, you can see this from the readings of Gwynne how the white settlers felt about the Native Americans

    1. The idea led to the treatment whichled to a racial hierarchywhich determined who acertain person would be in this life.

      I thought this paragraph was a great introduction, but i feel as though this line has already been stated above.

  3. Sep 2018
    1. he eastern United states filled up rapidly, immigrants were arriving daily. The cities where over crowded and the air smelled like rotten garbage. The people started to wonder where they could find a better life. Horace Greely kept writing” Go West Youngman “and it kept getting louder, and people decided to take the plunge and escape the life they found themselves trapped in. The p

      I felt the same way about the east and how over crowded it was, i think you just need to add in how it answers the question we were asked by Rees.

    1. I like to think of the west after the civil war

      I think this is great, it made for a great catch to the paper, which made me want to read more. I think your paper has a great start and can relate to what you have written from what were supposed to read.

    1. C o b l e| 1When

      Elizabeth, I think you have a great start to your paper. The introduction is well thought out and sounds very good. The citations flow well together. The only thing I might suggest on changing is adding more of your own thoughts and words to the paper.