10 Matching Annotations
  1. Jun 2024
    1. Such yearly ideally reallocation does not represent the efficiency of the actual housing market.

      ?????

    2. Technological improvements do not reduce emissions sufficiently

      Maybe: Technology improvements are not sufficient to reach climate targets in the housing sector In any case: sufficiently at the end of the heading deludes the reader to ignore the qualifier sufficiently.

    3. not possible to see in national

      is invisible in aggregated national models

    4. 3.65 billion m² in Germany.

      3.65 billion m2 floor space. In MFA stock is often measured as weight (tons). Pls make sure the reader always know the stock is here measured as floor space.

    5. region

      The regions.... remain

      Don't make the East one region, and btw Potsdam and Berlin are growing.

    6. The buildings in each age group were evenly distributed for all years in each group from 1900 to 2012.

      I do not understand this sentence

    7. Material efficiency

      Improving material efficiency

    8. made possible by the use of

      based on a

    9. analysis is based on

      the analysis uses a novel.....

  2. May 2024