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  1. Nov 2022
    1. position: relative; top: 50px;

      The common properties will be written once when you call all class elements in one section like.

      .footer-content1, .footer-content2, .footer-content3{ }

    1. <main> <h1>Analyzing the Design of Glass Expressions Website</h1> <section> <h3>Home Page Analysis:</h3> <p>The content on the home page of this website is organized into blocks. It has a header, body, and footer. In the header, navigations to other pages and a logo is included. The navigations are working and users can easily move around the website. The logo is in the top-left and the navigation menus are in the center of the page which seems okay. But they have included an image slideshow in the header, which is not recommended. They can provide this slideshow anywhere in the body part. The logo is inside the navigation elements div. It is not visually appealing and doesn’t make the design attractive to the viewers. </p> <p>The purpose of this page is clearly mentioned. The business mentioned in the website sells glass working tools and supplies. There is unnecessary white space between images and content, which could be avoided. They could have included CTA's to service and contact pages on the home page, which would have achieved business easily.</p> <p> On this page, they have included the opening and closing times and days, which could be removed and added to the contact page. The heading "Latest Project" is given after the images of projects they have done. The heading should be first, so the website visitors get a clear understanding of what the images are about. Change the position of the link to the Facebook page to the footer. </p> <h4>Screenshot of Areas of Concern</h4> <figure class="fig-1"><img src="image/logo-slideshow-nav.png" width="500" height="200" alt="change-position-logo"> </figure> <figure class="fig-1"><img src="image/heading-project.png" width="500" height="200" alt="change-heading"> </figure> <figure class="fig-1"><img src="image/unwanted-space-body.png" width="500" height="200" alt="change-space"> </figure> <figure class="fig-1"><img src="image/open-close-contactus.png" width="500" height="200" alt="change-timing"> </figure>

      Very good explanation and analysis. image are good.

    2. <p>On this page they provide a contact form through which people can contact the business directly to enquire. They also included their location details and a contact number. They can include a Google Map on this page. It helps customers find your business on Google Maps. They can include an email address too. Add the opening and closing days and time details on this page. Make the contact number clickable, and if they add the email address, make it clickable too. The link to Facebook page can be added to the footer, remove it from the body part.</p>

      lines are too long to read / scroll the code you can use window size lines.

  2. Oct 2022
    1. <footer> <ul> <li>Monday ~ Closed</li> <li>Tuesday 9:00am ~ 5:00pm</li> <li>Wednesday 9:00am ~ 8:00pm</li> <li>Thursday 9:00am ~ 8:00pm</li> <li>Friday 9:00am ~ 5:00pm</li> <li>Saturday 9:00am ~ 4:00pm</li> <li>Sunday ~ Closed</li> </ul>

      You could remove same information as contained in the main body part.

    1. <img src="images/the-hairpins-salon.jpeg" alt="The hairpins hairdressing salon in Courtenay,BC,Canada"> <figcaption>The hairpins hairdressing salon in Courtenay,BC,Canada</figcaption>

      Expected "figure" block when you use "figcaption".

    1. <link href="https://fonts.googleapis.com/css2?family=Poppins:ital,wght@0,200;0,400;0,600;1,200;1,400;1,600&display=swap" rel="stylesheet"> <link href="https://fonts.googleapis.com/css2?family=Mulish:ital,wght@1,300&display=swap" rel="stylesheet">

      Used similar font style as actual.

    1. <main> <h3> Located in the heart of the Comox Valley, Hairpins Boutique Salon offers a high-end experience with competitive prices, top of the line products and a warm, welcoming atmosphere. </h3> </main>

      whole part should contain main because we are using footer at bottom it clearly states that content divided from main to footer.

    1. <p> <a href="contact.html"> Contact us today to book an appointment! </a> </p>

      It's better to add in footer because it is common to every page and displayed bottom of the page.

    2. href="https://fonts.googleapis.com/css2?family=Roboto&display=swap" rel="stylesheet"> <!-- google font--> <link href="https://fonts.googleapis.com/css2?family=Noto+Sans&display=swap" rel="stylesheet">

      Added 3 different google fonts in the head section by the tag LINK

    1. l class="background"> <li> Monday ~ Closed </li> <li> Tuesday 9:00am ~ 5:00pm </li> <li> Wednesday 9:00am ~ 8:00pm </li> <li> Thursday 9:00am ~ 8:00pm </li> <li> Friday 9:00am ~ 5:00pm </li> <li> Saturday 9:00am ~ 4:00pm </li> <li> Sunday ~ Closed </li>

      used inline style in the unordered list.

    1. <article class="card-three"> <h3> SILKTRICKY </H3> <p> What is SlickTricky? </p> <h2> A NEW KIND OF BEAST </h2> <p id ="watch-video"> Watch Video </p> </article>

      I think you have to add dots after watch video.

  3. Sep 2022