sun_final, sun_final_revised, sun_final_final.
The word final makes me think of death in this context but revising the final moments and looking back on them until it is offically final
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cataloging material it claims as its own.
Diction choice with the word cataloging. Makes me think of a magizine, like life is one big magazine full of documents that are put together. Usually people can keep or collect magizines too
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the mind’s eye but the eye’s mind—
Personification again. The idea that the eye has a mind of its own and keeps track of things happening. Obsorbing information.
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old experience with new thinking.
Perhaps taking on a new perspective to an old situation, making sense of something that used to confuse you now that you have grown and learned and changed. Or even just thinking of an old memory with a new perspective.
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Each a document
Metaphorical document, not literal. Using the document as a metaphor for memory storage
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the sun keeping me company until her arms appeared.
The sun has a new role now and a new feeling. It takes on the role of a temporary mother, I think of the the sun hugging the baby as a sort of blanket.
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I imagine, to one morning standing in my crib,
Being a baby, although one can't typically rememver this
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my mind files it into a folder
Personification: the mind cannot literally file but it means the mind is saving the memory in the brain.
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The day is winter bright. I blink against it. Each time the sun glints in my eyes,
Contradiction between the cold of the winter and the warmth of the sun
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