All of my teachers when I was growing up stated this. It really is true though. This also applies to any type of decision making in life.

I wasn't aware that editing was part of revising. I always was under the impression that proofreading and editing were nearly if not the same thing.

I thought that this was called "Editing". Revision to me is the reorganizing or adding content.

"I wanted to put my arm around him, and tell him what he always told me, "Don't worry Dad, tomorrow will be a better day." This, I believe. I love how he closed this with a direct quote from his father that he was once told to comfort him when he was overwhelmed or had a lousy day.

"My stepmother proved that to me." I love how he closed his essay. He closes it not with his belief but with the statement that his stepmother proved what he believed.

"Rather, the whole thing just really confused me on what to believe." I love the fact that he is honest about the fact that he just can't make sense of his father's passing.

"I believe in semi-permanent hair dye". I find it interesting that she begins her essay with what you believe is her belief until she finishes her introduction with her actual belief.

"I believe in hypocrisy, just a little." Her belief was in her introduction paragraph. I thought she did a good job moving to her belief from the concept of semi-permanent hair dye. It wasn't really surprising. Her ending paragraph is a bit of a cliche. Her closing sentence is really good as it ties back to the introduction.

"I believe that progress comes in unexpected leaps." is definitely his claim statement. It is about halfway through the essay. I don't think the belief was very surprising of a belief, I felt that it flowed rather nicely to when he stated what he believed in. He gave a great introduction into his past and the struggles he went through trying to learn due to dyslexia.

I was actually surprised by this statistic. I'd be curious as what it is at now.

It appears to me that this article is written by those that it's about? Seems a bit biased, especially with the headline that this article has.

This has to be one of the most painful things that someone can go through. Either watching someone they're close to or being the person who just can't remember anything about themselves or anyone else.

She seems to be struggling from sort of mental disorder or is hallucinating, possibly from medication.

Even without going further than this first sentence I know that this is going to be a story about a child that has to go through his mother's struggle at the Hospital.

"I know it's wrong to think of Hugh as an absence, a thwarted shadow." The loaded words of "Thwarted shadow" and comparing that to the absence, shows how intense that absence was.

"Instead of remembering Hugh as I knew him, I too often think of him in terms of what he never had a chance to be." I've never heard anyone say this that concisely. I think it's a really interesting way to remember someone, and definitely can be a very hard way to remember someone you were so close to.

"It is a great thing to die in your own bed, though it is better still to die in your boots." I feel that this is meaning that it's great to die in your own bed and at home rather than a hospital bed. But it's even better to die on the go working towards something.

I infer that the author is stating that he wants to emulate his father and sees himself becoming like his father. Because the hands are moving on their own I infer that he feels like his father is now apart of him.

The author is missing his father deeply. He's missing the ability to be physically close to him. From this statement it's very apparent that his father had passed away. I presume that the father passed in his childhood as the author's warm memories of his father are during his childhood and hasn't talked about him when he was older.

I loved this statement. I infer that he is stating that he is becoming more and more like his father every day.

In this instance I think that the author is missing more than just the treat. I feel that the author is missing some connection to her family's traditions.

I initially found it odd that it hurt his feelings as he was the one who decided to sell it. But I think there's more to the 100 dollars. I presume that the family was in dire need of the money at the time. This would have been an amazing legacy of the great-grandfather.

This seems like an incredibly little amount of money for a recipe that famous in his local area. I presume that he sold it in the 50's or 60's.

I think it's quite apparent that the author isn't only deeply attached to the Buckeye's because of their father's passing but they also seem to be holding onto them as a reminder of a place that has ceased to exist.

It's touching how committed the father was to always having these buckeyes because he was so fearful of losing the ability to use his hands.

The author keeps the two buckeyes to always have something to physically hold that ties him to his father.

This is a fantastic point. Conflict, and more importantly a revolution is much less likely to happen if freedom of conscience or choice is made available.

This is interesting, I had never known about this.

I think the logic behind this makes sense. Because it's funded through federal money the facility shouldn't be favoring one religion. The salvation army is part of the Christian Church. Their mission is to "preach the gospel of Jesus Christ and to meet human needs in His name without discrimination." I think it's fair to believe that the federal government shouldn't be funding a religious organization. I think that Williams' proposal was an alright compromise. He didn't state that the inhabitants couldn't pray, he stated that the facility couldn't be used to "hold prayer services."

I really like this view. It's the 16 year old reassuring his dad using his dad's favorite motivational phrase "Tomorrow will be a better day"

We've already witnessed this!

I can understand this fear, now more than ever. With the rise of global warming as well as global tensions that are on the rise. It can be frightening to look towards the future and envision the world.

I wasn't aware of what this word meant, and had to look it up. Apparently it "is sometimes expressed as the view that "I am the only mind which exists,"

I feel that this shows how important it was to "Job" to confess and realize when you've done something wrong.

I thought that this was an interesting finding that goes against what we view automation doing.

I thought that this was a great point on one of the benefits to AI that will definitely be used in my essay.

McKinsey is a management firm that analyzes in order to determine management decisions. I feel that because of this the article has great credibility and the author's are definitely qualified.

This is the articles thesis and the questions that it answers. The purpose of this article is to determine the changes that automation will change in jobs.

The article is definitely not the most thorough as it doesn't go beyond basic information even after clicking into each link.

One thing that takes away slightly from the website is that it is only talking about Robotic Arms however however there aren't many robots that are beyond a lab that are anything other than an arm. As well as the information still being very useful information.

This parts list comes from a robotic company that sells Robot Parts showing that the information is accurate

Really disliked this search engine, looked and performed very outdated as well as not having very good results. I searched "Parts of a robot" and was given some really horrendous results. I later attempted searching "What are the components that make up a robot" and was presented with slightly better results however they weren't up to par with the other search engines.

This website wouldn't load for me. Nothing I searched came up with anything other than a white screen. Thinking it's a problem with the site. Hopefully they fix it as it sounds like a really great source.

I think this is a very good point because your sources need to be of the same quality as you want your paper to be.

Google Scholar for me in the past has been the best search engine that I have tried. Incredibly fast and returns really good sources.

I think that this is incredibly useful if you have a good source but their search function is really bad, or if they don't have one which is often the case.

Thinking that this wouldn't be too useful for research.

I think that this could be extremely useful if you remembered the headline to an article but don't remember the source.

I had no idea that you can do this, this should be helpful going forward in future research projects and out of school.

I'm intrigued about how many jobs this "rapid technological progress" replaced. I feel that that as technology progresses more job avenues and higher opportunities are created because although they eliminated mindless work someone still needs to maintain the machines and develop the code.

Wouldn't this also create more jobs to build, sell, and maintain those trillion-dollar trucks.

I find this very surprising. What would this be due to? Increased life expectancy?