Genetic and molecular biology of bladder cancer among Iranian patients
Title and topic being discussed, The title is clear and technical to what the article discusses
Genetic and molecular biology of bladder cancer among Iranian patients
Title and topic being discussed, The title is clear and technical to what the article discusses
REFERENCES
Cites all references used in the article at the very end, takes up almost 5 pages
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS None. CONFLICT OF INTEREST The authors declare no conflicts of interest. AUTHOR CONTRIBUTIONS
Mentions acknowledgements, conflict of interests, and both authors contributions.
we
The conclusion switches to first person
probably
convictions were used
Therefore, they introduced ALDH1A1 as a high-grade urothelial tumor marker and can be used for the targeted therapy against the CSCs.
Paraphrasing of the results to make it easier to understand, this is done throughout the article
The germ line and somatic mtDNA mutations are linked with mitochondrial disorders and cancer, respectively.
Switches between active/passive voices and past/present tense periodically throughout the article
(Esrig et al., 1994; Lane, 1992)
In text citations used throughout the article, formated by authors name and year
Another study has been reported that the recurrent bladder tumors had higher survivin and/or survivin-∆Ex3 expression compared with primarily tumors among a subpopulation of Iranian patients
More passive voice and past tense used in this paragraph, still in third person
It has been shown that the full-length survivin and survivin-2B isoforms were the highest and lowest expressed isoforms in bladder tissues.
More medical terminology, gets harder to understand
FIGURE 1
First and only figure used in the article, displayed as a chart. The chart was put together by the authors but is made up of secondary research from the chart above
TABLE 1
One table was used to back up information talked about in the article, includes different studies and their results. This table was summarized by the authors but the results within the chart were from secondary research.
Apoptosis is a programmed cell death involved in regulation of cell proliferation following DNA damage
Provides definitions to make the article easier to understand
Cystoscopy and urine cytology are the common diagnostic methods of BC (Goodison et al., 2013; Griffiths & Action on Bladder Cancer, 2013)
Medical terminology, a little hard to understand these terms without knowing what they mean or looking it up, this is a common theme throughout the article
There is also different incidence of cancer in males and females in which more than 55% of patients were observed among Iranian males (Rafiemanesh et al., 2015). Bladder cancer (BC) is the 14th common cause of cancer-related deaths globally (Ferlay et al., 2015)
Gives a background relevant and recent to the topic being discussed, also includes in text citations building up it's credibility.
2020
Shows recent stats
1 INTRODUCTION
Headers included throughout the article
For the first time
Shows that the research is recent and present new research
Abstract
IMRaD format used, has an intro methods, results and data
Majid Mojarrad, Department of Medical Genetics and Molecular Medicine, School of Medicine, Mashhad University of Medical Sciences, Mashhad, IranSearch for more papers by this authorMeysam Moghbel
2 authors worked on this, Both authors went to the same school and were in the same fields, they also worked in Iran which is where the patients being discussed are from
First published: 06 April 2020
Published over a year ago, still considered somewhat recent
REVIEW ARTICLE
This article is apart of the Molecular Genetics and Genomic Medicine academic journal. The intended audience is researchers searching for more information on human, molecular, and medical genetics
R E F E R E N C E S
Cites all references used in the article at the very end, takes up almost 5 pages
AC K N OW L E D G M E N T S None.C O N F L I C T O F I N T E R E S T The authors declare no conflicts of interest.AU T H O R C O N T R I B U T I O N S
Mentions acknowledgements, conflict of interests, and both authors contributions.
we
The conclusion switches to first person
probably
convictions were used
Therefore, they introduced ALDH1A1 as a high-grade urothelial tumor marker
Paraphrasing of the results to make it easier to understand, this is done throughout the article
F I G U R E 1
First and only figure used in the article, displayed as a chart. The chart was put together by the authors but is made up of secondary research from the chart above
The germ line and somatic mtDNA mutations are linked with mitochondrial disorders and cancer, respectively.
Switches between active/passive voices and past/present tense periodically throughout the article
T A B L E 1
One table was used to back up information talked about in the article, includes different studies and their results. This table was summarized by the authors but the results within the chart were from secondary research.
(Esrig et al., 1994; Lane, 1992)
In text citations used throughout the article, formated by authors name and year
Another study has been reported that the recurrent bladder tumors had higher survivin and/or survivin-∆Ex3 expression compared with primarily tu-mors among a subpopulation of Iranian patients
More passive voice and past tense used in this paragraph, still in third person
It has been shown that the full-length survivin and survivin-2B isoforms were the highest and low-est expressed isoforms in bladder tissues.
More medical terminology, gets harder to understand
Apoptosis is a programmed cell death involved in regula-tion of cell proliferation following DNA damage.
Provides definitions to make the article easier to understand
Moreover, for the first time we categorized all of the reported genes based on their cell and molecular functions (Figure 1) to clarify the genetic and molecular biology of BC among Iranian population
Thesis, first paragraph was also mostly in present tense, active view,. Cites figures included in the article. Switches between first and third person
Cystoscopy and urine cytology are the common di-agnostic methods of BC
Medical terminology, a little hard to understand these terms without knowing what they mean or looking it up, this is a common theme throughout the article
BC is more common (about 4 times) among men compared with women that can be associated with higher smoking behaviors among men (Murta-Nascimento et al., 2007).
More relevant statistics included throughout the introduction with in text citations
For the first time
Shows that the research is recent and present new research
Abstract
IMRaD format used, has an intro methods, results and data
Department of Medical Genetics and Molecular Medicine, School of Medicine, Mashhad University of Medical Sciences, Mashhad, IranCorrespondenceMeysam Moghbeli, Department of Medical Genetics and Molecular Medicine, School of Medicine, Mashhad University of Medical Sciences, Mashhad, Iran
Both authors went to the same school and were in the same fields, they also worked in Iran which is where the patients being discussed are from
Majid Mojarrad | Meysam Moghbeli
2 authors worked on this
Genetic and molecular biology of bladder cancer among Iranian patients
Title and topic being discussed, The title is clear and technical to what the article discusses
R E V I E W A R T I C L E
This article is apart of the Molecular Genetics and Genomic Medicine academic journal. The intended audience is researchers searching for more information on human, molecular, and medical genetics
16 February 2020
Important date, showed that the article was revised recently and then published to the public
There is also different incidence of cancer in males and females in which more than 55% of patients were observed among Iranian males (Rafiemanesh et al., 2015). Bladder cancer (BC) is the 14th common cause of cancer-related deaths globally (Ferlay et al., 2015)
Gives a background relevant and recent to the topic being discussed, also includes in text citations building up it's credibility.
2020
Shows recent stats
I N T R O D U C T I O N
Headers included through the article