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  1. Feb 2021
    1. And they said goodbye to Level U2, Section P, Row 6, Seats 9-12.

      He opened this article with those seats, out of context, and closed with a farewell to those seats with context.

      One major point that I noticed is that he allowed the family to talk a lot about the history of the seats and what those seats have meant to his family for the past 30 years. The emotions were raw and the frustrations were felt there. Like with the line about "the Green Tide and Roll Green Roll." That was unhappiness towards the situation.

    2. A surgical $106 million renovation to the 90-year old structure is doing away with those approximately 2,200 modestly priced nine rows of seats on the U1 and U2 levels tucked between the west side’s upper and lower bowls. These were quality seats, covered from the elements and chair-backed unlike the majority bench seating in the 101,821-capacity stadium.

      Breaking down the numbers and making it simply for the reader to understand

    3. Level U2, Section P, Row 6, Seats 9-12.As long as those crimson seats were bolted into Bryant-Denny Stadium, that’s where the Burnette family spent their fall Saturdays.

      Another start that makes the reader go "huh?" Grabs the attention of the reader and then explains the context of what he is trying to convey.

    1. A few minutes earlier, a crying Hale Hentges got a hug from receivers coach Josh Gattis as he walked off the field one final time. Orange and purple confetti drifted all around them.

      More imagery to make the reader feel like they are there in the middle of Levi Stadium witnessing Clemson's celebration and Alabama's pain.

    2. The towel covering Tua Tagovailoa’s head kept him from seeing the confetti cannon positioning behind Alabama’s bench.There were a few angry faces staring into the distance as Clemson’s band fired off one more fight song before the clock hit zero. Nobody had the four fingers in the air in the closing moments of the Crimson Tide’s most lopsided loss of the Nick Saban era. The drama had long-since died at that point.The stunning scene at the end of Clemson 44, Alabama 16 was different from the one witnessed in Tampa two years ago.

      What is cool about this opening is that Casagrande is setting the scene as he is opening the article. He is drawing in the reader, making them wonder why the is Tua hiding from the confetti, and "who are the angry people staring into the distance" or "why is the band celebrating?" He then reveals the context of the setting he is illustrating; it is the College Football Championship game in Santa Clara. He flashbacks to 2 years prior when the game was closer to show how much can change in just a short amount of time between two teams on the same mission

    1. Johnson’s contract was extended in August 2017 to run through the 2022-23 season. It included an $8 million buyout if Johnson was dismissed before April 15, 2019. It drops to $6 million after that.

      What is good about this section is how simple Casagrande broke down the buyout clause in Johnson's contact and later explaining how much Johnson made in the previous year as the head basketball coach at Alabama. By putting off of those resources in one place, the reader does not have to look it up themselves.