She
Suggest removing gender. Is it pertinent?
She
Suggest removing gender. Is it pertinent?
Risk Factors for Developing Overweight and Obesity
This wording doesn't sound right.
2.5 Tertiary Prevention
This is not much information about tertiary prevention. Would suggest adding more to this page.
When cancer begins in the lungs, it is called lung cancer, although it may spread to lymph nodes or other organs in the body. Cancer from other organs also may spread to the lungs, which is referred to as metastasis.
Are these sentences necessary?
Colonoscopy
How often are these recommended?
50
Is this accurate? Shouldn't this be 40?
clinical breast exams are no longer recommended for breast cancer screening among average-risk women at any age
What about self breast exams?
Vaccinations
I feel this topic should be expanded upon as this is one of the criteria is Identify health screening guidelines and adult immunizations. How often do adults need to get the immunizations listed? What are the considerations for each of these?
Also none of the links in this section work.
before bedtime
How long before?
Misuse can be of low severity and temporary, but it can increase the risk for serious and costly consequences such as motor vehicle crashes; overdose death; suicide; various types of cancer; heart, liver, and pancreatic diseases; sexually transmitted infections; HIV/AIDS; and unintended pregnancies. S
This is a long sentence. Suggest shortening it or using bullet points.
150 minutes
per week?
Children of this age should be sedentary for no more than 60 minutes at one time
Suggest rewording to "Preschoolers should not remain sedentary for more than 60 minutes at a time, except when sleeping."
Children Ages
Preschoolers (to be consistent)
In addition to nicotine, e-cigarettes may contain ingredients that may cause serious lung disease such as ultrafine particles, flavorants, volatile organic compounds, and heavy metals like nickel, tin, and lead.[4]
This sentence does not make sense to me.
For nurses, primary prevention interventions commonly include activities such as vaccination, dental hygiene, and nutrition education, while secondary prevention activities include disease-specific screenings
Is this needed here or is better to just include it on the pages where the levels of prevention are outlined?
Emotional health is one aspect of mental health.
Is this necessary here? This is outlined above.
infirmity
Might want to explain this word.
chapter will
Is that all the chapter will explore?
Health Promotion
Would this page be better suited for the Healthy Lifestyles chapter?
Health Promotion Topics
Levels of prevention are covered in Healthy Lifestyles. Does it need to be covered here as well?
Barrier
Suggest adding unmet needs. Might be helpful to incorporate Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs somewhere in this chapter.
motivational interviewing
This should probably be explained. How does it work?
persons.
Perhaps add "as approved by the client" since permission would be needed.
leads to
Suggest "this can lead to" to align with how the others are worded.
Option 5 is blank in the last set of questions on the page
She is
Suggest taking out gender throughout this paragraph "They are"
woman
change to client
Planning:
Shouldn't the client be included in the process?
s to learning.
Perhaps add knowledge about the topic?
Teaching Methods Based on Domains of Learning
Would this flow better to have this on the same page as where the domains are discussed?
Perhaps the cone of learning should be briefly mentioned so they understand how information is retained.
Knowledge and Intellectual Skills
I think this wording should match how it is described in both spots in this chapter. I like this wording better as it describes it better. It initial break down of the domains is not as specific. Again I think this should all be on one page.
English-language learners.
This is used many times in this chapter. If keeping it as is I would suggest defining what this means.
English-language learners
What does this mean? Perhaps just as necessary or as needed?
aging
Suggest adding "and expected versus unexpected changes related to aging"
parents and caregivers
What about teaching the child as well? They should be included.
six levels
Aren't these specific to the cognitive domain?
Bloom’s Taxonomy
Perhaps add teaching strategies for each domain?
emotions and attitudes
add values?
subsequently
suggest removing here as well
heal
Is this always true? Perhaps "manage" instead of heal
more willing
More willing implies I am not willing if I can not immediately apply it which I don't think is true. Perhaps "better able"
Learning Objectives
Should these align with the state criteria? * Identify client learning needs and potential barriers. *Contribute to a teaching plan. * Choose the appropriate teaching method. * Apply principles of teaching and learning. * Determine if learning was achieved.