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  1. Feb 2025
    1. When cancer begins in the lungs, it is called lung cancer, although it may spread to lymph nodes or other organs in the body. Cancer from other organs also may spread to the lungs, which is referred to as metastasis.

      Are these sentences necessary?

    2. clinical breast exams are no longer recommended for breast cancer screening among average-risk women at any age

      What about self breast exams?

    1. Vaccinations

      I feel this topic should be expanded upon as this is one of the criteria is Identify health screening guidelines and adult immunizations. How often do adults need to get the immunizations listed? What are the considerations for each of these?

      Also none of the links in this section work.

    2. Misuse can be of low severity and temporary, but it can increase the risk for serious and costly consequences such as motor vehicle crashes; overdose death; suicide; various types of cancer; heart, liver, and pancreatic diseases; sexually transmitted infections; HIV/AIDS; and unintended pregnancies. S

      This is a long sentence. Suggest shortening it or using bullet points.

    3. Children of this age should be sedentary for no more than 60 minutes at one time

      Suggest rewording to "Preschoolers should not remain sedentary for more than 60 minutes at a time, except when sleeping."

    4. In addition to nicotine, e-cigarettes may contain ingredients that may cause serious lung disease such as ultrafine particles, flavorants, volatile organic compounds, and heavy metals like nickel, tin, and lead.[4]

      This sentence does not make sense to me.

    1. For nurses, primary prevention interventions commonly include activities such as vaccination, dental hygiene, and nutrition education, while secondary prevention activities include disease-specific screenings

      Is this needed here or is better to just include it on the pages where the levels of prevention are outlined?

    1. Teaching Methods Based on Domains of Learning

      Would this flow better to have this on the same page as where the domains are discussed?

      Perhaps the cone of learning should be briefly mentioned so they understand how information is retained.

    2. Knowledge and Intellectual Skills

      I think this wording should match how it is described in both spots in this chapter. I like this wording better as it describes it better. It initial break down of the domains is not as specific. Again I think this should all be on one page.

    1. more willing

      More willing implies I am not willing if I can not immediately apply it which I don't think is true. Perhaps "better able"

    1. Learning Objectives

      Should these align with the state criteria? * Identify client learning needs and potential barriers. *Contribute to a teaching plan. * Choose the appropriate teaching method. * Apply principles of teaching and learning. * Determine if learning was achieved.