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  1. Jan 2025
    1. present political chaos is connected with the decay of language

      I love this!! It's so important to read between the lines to try and figure out what political leaders are truly trying to portray.

    2. merely language as an instrument for expressing and not for concealing or preventing thought.

      People are probably a lot more moved by someone who writes or says something real in the way they know how to express it, rather than speaking in a manner they think is socially acceptable.

    3. Never use a long word where a short one will do. iii. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out. iv. Never use the passive where you can use the active. v. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent. vi. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.

      These are great rules that are not usually on the syllabus when writing an essay. I think by practicing these in writing, that is how I can break out of my bad habits.

    4. But one can often be in doubt about the effect of a word or a phrase, and one needs rules that one can rely on when instinct fails.

      The way we write is, at least for me, habitual. It can be difficult to change especially when speaking to someone I want to impress, I dress up my language.

    5. The defence of the English language implies more than this, and perhaps it is best to start by saying what it does not imply.

      English can be used as a deflection of what we really mean

    6. There is a long list of fly-blown metaphors which could similarly be got rid of if enough people would interest themselves in the job;

      I wonder how people could get interested enough to reframe the way they use words

    7. This invasion of one’s mind by ready-made phrases (lay the foundations, achieve a radical transformation) can only be prevented if one is constantly on guard against them, and every such phrase anaesthetizes a portion of one’s brain.

      It is super difficult to venture out of terms that are common in whatever area we are writing in.

    8. Phrases like a not unjustifiable assumption, leaves much to be desired, would serve no good purpose, a consideration which we should do well to bear in mind, are a continuous temptation, a packet of aspirins always at one’s elbow.

      I like the comparison that using terms that sound intelligent is actually our way of deviating from the real issue.

    9. When the general atmosphere is bad, language must suffer. I should expect to find – this is a guess which I have not sufficient knowledge to verify – that the German, Russian and Italian languages have all deteriorated in the last ten or fifteen years, as a result of dictatorship.

      This is super interesting to me because I have never thought that something like dictatorship could tarnish an entire language.

    10. All issues are political issues, and politics itself is a mass of lies, evasions, folly, hatred and schizophrenia.

      I am one who tends to 'keep out of politics' but I like the point that all issues are political.

    11. The word Fascism has now no meaning except in so far as it signifies ‘something not desirable’. The words democracy, socialism, freedom, patriotic, realistic, justice, have each of them several different meanings which cannot be reconciled with one another.

      This is a super prominent point in today's culture. People tend to overuse words which dilute the meaning. Especially in politics and "cancel culture".

    12. Words like romantic, plastic, values, human, dead, sentimental, natural, vitality, as used in art criticism, are strictly meaningless, in the sense that they not only do not point to any discoverable object, but are hardly even expected to do so by the reader.

      I enjoy art but I have a difficult time understanding how a piece with splattered paint on it is used to portray death.

    13. It is often easier to make up words of this kind (deregionalize, impermissible, extramarital, non-fragmentatory and so forth) than to think up the English words that will cover one’s meaning. The result, in general, is an increase in slovenliness and vagueness.

      This reminds me of how kids will make up silly and random words such as, "rizz" to create meaning to something. Instead of using the English language such as, "flirting", that would cover what they're trying to express.

    14. Anglo-Saxon

      Referring to old English speaking

    15. Words like phenomenon, element, individual (as noun), objective, categorical, effective, virtual, basic, primary, promote, constitute, exhibit, exploit, utilize, eliminate, liquidate, are used to dress up simple statements and give an air of scientific impartiality to biassed judgements.

      I sometimes use this in my writing to sound more professional or smart when I might be better off using more simple statements.

    16. These save the trouble of picking out appropriate verbs and nouns, and at the same time pad each sentence with extra syllables which give it an appearance of symmetry.

      I am guilty of using these languages and will try and further my vocabulary to be a better writer.

    17. . Some metaphors now current have been twisted out of their original meaning without those who use them even being aware of the fact.

      This made me realize that we are not only not reframing the English language but also reusing words incorrectly.

    18. But in between these two classes there is a huge dump of worn-out metaphors which have lost all evocative power and are merely used because they save people the trouble of inventing phrases for themselves

      This sentence contributes to the difficulty of reframing English language due to laziness and a lack of creativity of people.

    19. As soon as certain topics are raised, the concrete melts into the abstract and no one seems able to think of turns of speech that are not hackneyed

      hackneyed: (of a phrase or idea) lacking significance through having been overused; unoriginal and trite.

      This reminds me of political language in which we discuss many of the same subjects and stay true to opposing sides but can never create new ones to meet in the middle.

    20. The first is staleness of imagery; the other is lack of precision. The writer either has a meaning and cannot express it, or he inadvertently says something else, or he is almost indifferent as to whether his words mean anything or not

      This makes me think of how there are connections to the way we are writing and how our society is. The language lacks creativity and meaning. In society, we are becoming lazy and dependent on outside things, which could lead to a lack of creativity and purpose.

    21. which can be avoided if one is willing to take the necessary trouble.

      I wonder how we can break bad habits in our language if everyone needs to change

    22. It becomes ugly and inaccurate because our thoughts are foolish, but the slovenliness of our language makes it easier for us to have foolish thoughts.

      This is a super thought provoking sentence! What my mind went to was, in todays world it's easy to be lazy and informal online, which bleeds into our real life conversations.

    23. Now, it is clear that the decline of a language must ultimately have political and economic causes

      How do political or economic causes effect language?

    24. the abuse of language is a sentimental archaism

      The English language is very old

    25. Our civilization is decadent and our language – so the argument runs – must inevitably share in the general collapse

      Decadent: characterized by or reflecting a state of moral or cultural decline. From this definition I am assuming the author is comparing our civilization to the English language, both of which are declining.

    1. The robot seemed to be looking intoher eyes. It seemed to be following the conversation. The woman was comforted

      I didn't realize how serious technology use could be until I read this!

    2. Most ofall, we need to remembei - in between texts and e-mails and Facebook posts -- to listento one another, even to the boring bits, because it is often in unedited moments' momentsin which we hesitate and stutter and go silent, that we reveal ourselves to one another

      I like this because it reminds me how fast paced social media is that we tend to forget we don't always need distraction and constant entertainment.

    3. And we use conversation with others to learn to converse with ourselves'

      I haven't thought about how conversing also helps us to learn more and be more comfortable with ourselves!

    4. FACE-TO-FACE conversation unfolds slowly.

      I like the authors choice to capitalize "face-to-face" because it really highlights and reiterates the importance of real human interaction.

    5. we can make ourcars .,device-fiee zones.

      This is a great idea when having other people in the car and something I would like to start doing.

    6. when people are alone, even for a few moments, they fidget and reach for a device'

      I have definitely experienced this and have even had times where I thought my phone is buzzing when it wasn't.

    7. And why wouldl,,e want to talk about love andloss with a machine that has no experlence of ti-,e arc of human life? Have we so lostconfidence that we will be there for one another?

      These are great questions to think about when deciding how much time we should be spending on phones and social media.

    8. I have often heard the sentiment "No "J i: li.,]ing to me'" I believe this feeling helpsexplainwhyitissoappealingtohaveaFacebookpageoraTwitterfeed-eachprovides so many automatic listeners.

      I think this leads to a lot of people posting to seek others approval because they know that so many people are listening.

    9. We can attend to tone and nuance.

      I like this quote because it is a good reminder of what we miss out on when communicating through our phones.

    10. Human relationships are rich; they're messy and dem-anding' We have learned the habitof cleaning them up with technology.

      It's easy to make life seem perfect on social media which eliminates being vulnerable.

    11. A senior partner at aBoston law firm describes a soene in his office. Young associates lay out their suite oftechnologier, fuptopr, iPods and multiple phones

      This shows the difference technology has in older vs. younger generations.

    12. Our colleagues want to go to that board meeting but pay attention only to what intereststhem.

      This is a good example of how our phones affect us in the real world.

    13. WE live in a technological universe in which we are always communicating' And yet wehave sacrificed conversation for mere connection

      These sentences help me understand what the rest of the essay is going to be about. It also shows the audience is us as a universe.