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  1. Sep 2023
    1. Academic silos are narrow and numerous, and they induce a technical convergence which, when considered with the development of common vocabularies and frameworks, and the naturalization of methods and tools, generates a strong academic subculture

      Long sentence; could you break it in two?

    1. Worf, Benjamin L. 1956. “Language, Thought, and Reality: Selected Writings of Benjamin Lee Whorf.” Edited by John B. Carrol. Boston: Technology Press of MIT.

      check citation. Why is it in quotation marks? Edited ... shouldn't be in italics. remove place of publication.

    2. Thus, he considers himself medium-high in competency and high in knowledge, as well as a critical hyper-user.

      I suggest that you add a closing sentence after this one and not end the article with this example.

    3. (The spectrum suggested all refer to a scholar’s relation to digital tools: it is possible (and even common) to be extremely knowledgeable and competent in one’s field while having trouble using or understanding the software and hardware used within that field.)

      I would say remove the parentheses

    4. Hence, the use of an e-reader is a very different experience as the use of a desktop computer to read a text.

      It's not clear how this is an example of the previous sentence. I would explain this in more detail.