researcher
researchers
researcher
researchers
well established
well-established
archetype
archetypes
(in my institution at least)
adding this example would limit your discussion; I suggest removing it
video game studies
game studies
other
others
Academic silos are narrow and numerous, and they induce a technical convergence which, when considered with the development of common vocabularies and frameworks, and the naturalization of methods and tools, generates a strong academic subculture
Long sentence; could you break it in two?
believing
falsely believing
worst
worst,
each others
each other
(when they trust them)
trust the results? the meaning isn't clear to me
when they aren’t developing
and may even develop
we
I
we
I
we
I
in the population
delete this
it also becomes easier
the resistant posture becomes easier?
use with tools
using tools
equivalent
digital equivalent
to
into
90 degrees angles
90-degree angle
technique
techniques
lead
leads
von Uexkul
delete "von" here so that it's the same as the reference
to encompass the whole experience of using digital tools in the humanities and avoid ideological biases
this sounds like an incomplete sentence
scholar-digital tools
throughout the text, it's sometimes "scholars-digital tools" and sometimes "scholar-digital tools".
which affects
that affect
adopted
has adopted
Space
I suggest to change or expand this title
Worf, Benjamin L. 1956. “Language, Thought, and Reality: Selected Writings of Benjamin Lee Whorf.” Edited by John B. Carrol. Boston: Technology Press of MIT.
check citation. Why is it in quotation marks? Edited ... shouldn't be in italics. remove place of publication.
New York:
remove place of publication
World Appl. Sci. J
WASJ
axis
axes
Thus, he considers himself medium-high in competency and high in knowledge, as well as a critical hyper-user.
I suggest that you add a closing sentence after this one and not end the article with this example.
software
softwares
(The spectrum suggested all refer to a scholar’s relation to digital tools: it is possible (and even common) to be extremely knowledgeable and competent in one’s field while having trouble using or understanding the software and hardware used within that field.)
I would say remove the parentheses
spectrum suggested
suggested spectra
four dimensional
four-dimensional
axis
axes
on
of
scholars
scholar
scholars
scholar
scholars
scholar
Encoding Decoding
“Encoding/Decoding”
We
I
understand
comprehend
that
this
that
this
homemade
non-commercial? it's not clear to me what a homemade digital tool is (haven't heard the expression before)
oriented
dictated
hegemonies
hegemony
numerical
digital
gives
give
intended
intended by who? The makers of the tool?
This question is, as was the previous one, many-folds.
Similar to the previous one, this question entails multiple aspects.
The “Usage” Axis
Change the type of heading (font is bigger than the other axes)
Hence, the use of an e-reader is a very different experience as the use of a desktop computer to read a text.
It's not clear how this is an example of the previous sentence. I would explain this in more detail.
numerical
digital
non-numerical
non-digital/analog
numeric
digital
collaborates
collaborate
3
full stop missing
in person
in-person
“scholar’s relational space to digital tools.”
Why the quotation marks?
axis
axes
types of use
usages
Theorizing research practices we forgot to theorize twenty years ago
Theorizing Research Practices We Forgot to Theorize Twenty Years Ago (all capital)