We should not be so proud as to believe that our data
Minor: I think it's good to discuss the issues you're interested in from your area of expertise with neuroscience. You even state outright that you'll be framing things from that perspective. However, the both the intro and that outright statement suggest the paper is written for a more general audience. That conflicts somewhat with the framing here, which seems to be geared towards neuroscientists familiar with the features of neurodata. Not a major concern though, this is just a question of whether you want to maintain a consistent audience throughout the paper. Arguably reconciled by substituting "We" with "neuroscientists". Same comment applies to other areas where this may pop up