Hi Sylvia, I really like your summary and narrative that you did for this assignment. I love the way you explained that story about Gary Soto’s childhood. I enjoyed Gary’s Story because it was short and nice. Your childhood memory reminds me of my childhood memory, I also used to play restaurant games and used to cook sand and rocks as food. Your assignment was pretty good. I think you should give little more detail about Gary. Your summery was short and narrative was long if both the paragraph is similar length it would be better.

When we do mistake we always think we are in trouble and try to hide our mistake instead of sharing so that we will get help.

We learn from mistake.

That's mean. I wonder if that person doesn't have any education about manners.

Hi Kiandokht, I love the way you summarize the Gary chapter looking for work. I Like the way you are describing Gary’s hard work to earn money. I agree that parents are always there for us in our every step so we should respect them. We all have so many stupid memories which makes us laugh now when we think of it. I think that is how we learned. Overall, your summary and narrative assignment are good, but you could make only one paragraph about summary. I think you should give more detail about only one most memorable memory instead of many more.

When you are born in poor family you need to find job in young age to fulfill your dream.

That's true parents are always their in our every step. Always respect them.

He should know that white people are not special that they have to like them. If you are a good person everyone will like you.