References
Insane amount of references. There wasn't much new research done it was really just compiling everything on CSS to present it in a slightly readable manner.
References
Insane amount of references. There wasn't much new research done it was really just compiling everything on CSS to present it in a slightly readable manner.
Funding
I like how they use partially to say that this article is worth more than the funding they got.
Acknowledgmen
Even more people were involved to discuss it and give feedback rather than just the authors.
That is a very dangerous place to be
This line felt more assertive than a lot of the previous sections. Using "is" rather than "can be" like a lot of the article did.
likely
Qualifiers were used throughout although I didn't notice much hedging. Could have been because all the text hid it.
Conclusions and recommendations
The conclusion did a good job at summing up concerns. This section felt more active than passive with the claims.
analyze Apple’s recent CSAM proposal withrespect to safety and security
This whole article is built on Apple. I really don't think this would have been written had Apple never brought up CSS.
There’s an old adage: “in theory, there is no difference between theoryand practice, but in practice, there is.” This very much applies to CSS
including an old quote makes the article seem more human and less machine-like.
ns [51,52], there has been a rapidly growing body of researchon the topic [53].In a nutshell, given access to models, or even just to the imagesor text used to train them, virtually any content can be tweakedto escape detection. In many circumstances, it is possible to createperturbations that evade any model [54]. Most of the proposed de-fenses have either been broken [55], or shown to impose a significantpenalty on the model’s performance [56]. Even more damning is in-creasing evidence that there are fundamental trade-offs that preventthe detection of all kinds of adversarial effects [57], and that beingable to detect adversarial inputs to filter them may be an unavoidablyhard problem [58]
So many citations are used in order to prevent any plagiarism. I wonder if plagiarism would even be detected if they cited less.
False-positive attacks
Another way of breaking CSS
The use of images really helps with envisioning the concepts being explained.
et al
The use of "et al." (and others) starts to appear for citations.
Even more, a malware or spyware app could intentionally puttargeted material onto a device secretly, knowing it will eventuallybe found. CSS assumes that the device is totally under its owner’scontrol, yet the situation is far more complex.
There are so many things I haven't considered. The authors must have taken forever just to list every single breach of security that could happen.
It can be argued
Seems passive to me. Most of the article has felt passive to me because the authors want to remain unbiased so they try to refrain from directly stating their opinions.
Apple deserves praise for do-ing this, and for delaying the launch of its system
This feels really sarcastic to me. The whole article has been going against CSS and now they're praising Apple for doing the bare minimum of being transparent.
Core policy principles
This section really goes into detail on the policy and ethics behind CSS.
see the section on new secu-rity and privacy risks
Cites a later section in this article.
Security and policy principles for contentscanning
Past-tense is used when describing past discussions about CSS. Present-tense and future-tense are used the most because CSS is an evolving debate.
a woman planning to escape a violent or controllingpartner who abuses both her and their children. The abuser will ofteninstall stalkerware on family phones, and he may use “smart home”infrastructure such as video doorbells as a way to control them [24]
I did not know this. The authors bring up a lot of great points that I would have never thought of otherwise.
The colors confused me. I think red means targeted content and blue is non-targeted.
antivirus software vendor Kaspersky might have a covert relation-ship with a national intelligence service [23]
Most of the citations are used when describing how bad CSS is. Feels like they didn't search for the benefits of it.
the legal constraints against government action become weakerand the range of targeted content becomes larger, typically includ-ing LGBTQ+ content, political activists, and domestic rivals of au-thoritarian regimes[22]. In such places, CSS will provide a means ofrepression and political manipulation
Shows a potential for CSS to become way worse. The whole article really reminds me of 1948.
local adversaries such as abusive partners or controllingfamily members
I kind of find it hard to believe that these people would be able to abuse CSS, it partially feels like the authors just want to make the problem sound worse. However, I'm not really sure.
Inexamining the technical and societal risks of CSS, there are severaldistinct concerns: how to ensure that information within the systemis properly protected (a security concern); how to ensure that thesystem of central servers, human reviewers, user devices, users, andpotentially targeted content works appropriately (a socio-technicalconcern); and how to ensure that technologies with potential to be-come bulk-surveillance infrastructure can be deployed safely (a pol-icy concern).
Setting up topics in this section at the beginning to create clear objectives.
To understand whether CSS can be justified as such, we need to lookat the nature of its actual and reasonably foreseeable intrusions indetail
The authors are clearly against CSS yet they are mostly impartial when explaining it. I appreciate the unbiased explanations.
spam detectorslearn to identify spam messages by relying on reports from millionsof email users clicking the “report spam” button to retrain the spamfilter models every day
Good example of what ML is.
The hash list is periodically updated by the curator
Passive?
As we explained in the previous section
Authors use first person in between sections to further explain what they've already said and the next section.
Theprovider first trains a machine-learning model with image sets con-taining both innocuous and target content. This model is then usedto scan pictures uploaded by users. Unlike perceptual hashing, whichdetects only photos that are similar to known target photos, machine-learning models can detect completely new images of the type onwhich they were trained. One well-known example is the face detec-tor used in iPhones to detect faces on which to focus the camera
Machine Learning can identify new targeted content rather than just known or similar content.
Show how CSS and server-side scanning works.
Perceptual hashing
Storing images as lines of data rather than the picture itself. Can use these lines of data to compare it to known targeted content and report it if it is the same or very similar. Doesn't work on unknown/new images.
While the EuropeanUnion (EU) and Apple have been talking about child sex-abuse ma-terial (CSAM)—specifically images—in their push for CSS [12], theEU has included terrorism and organized crime along with sex abuse[13]. In the EU’s view, targeted content extends from still imagesthrough videos to text, as text can be used for both sexual solici-tation and terrorist recruitment. We cannot talk merely of “illegal”content, because proposed UK laws would require the blocking on-line of speech that is legal but that some actors find upsetting [14].
Targeted content may be expanded down the line to include upsetting content rather than illegal.
Content scanning technologies
Bold headings are used to separate distinct sections while sub-headings are not bold.
Apple’s August 2021 proposal
Very well known topic. I remember hearing about this before I was even interested in cybersecurity. There was a lot of outrage due to privacy concerns.
ed content [3], andon the 2019 Carnegie Endowment for International Peace study onencryption policy, which presents a set of principles to guide solu-tions [4]. We also build on Paul Rosenzweig’s early analysis of thepolicy issues raised by CSS, along with some of the technical issues[5]. Since Apple announced its scanning proposal in August 2021,several researchers and organizations have provided rapid analysesof the proposal, and the technology and policy issues it raises. In par-ticular, we acknowledge Eric Rescorla of Mozilla [6], Kurt Opsahlof the Electronic Frontier Foundation [7], Steven Murdoch [8], PaulRosenzweig [9], and Daniel Kahn Gillmor of the American Civil Lib-erties Union (ACLU) [10]. Here, our aim is a more thorough technicalanalysis and to cover CSS more generally. In addition, our analysissheds some light on the design decisions that Apple took. Apple didits best, using some of the top talent in security and cryptography,and yet did not achieve a design for a secure, trustworthy, and effi-cacious system. Indeed, it appears that Apple has withdrawn fromimplementing the most ambitious aspects of its system [11]
Uses a lot of citations to credit researchers
We have built our study on the work of many others
Example of first person
Keywords: Client-side scanning; Risks; Perceptual hash
Shows words that will be used multiple times throughout the paper
Abstract
The summary is mostly understandable for popular audiences although they may not fully understand what client-side scanning is.
Harold Abelson1 , Ross Anderson2,3 , Steven M. Bellovin4 ,∗,†,Josh Benaloh5 , Matt Blaze6 , Jon Callas7 , Whitfield Diffie8 ,‡ ,Susan Landau9 , Peter G. Neumann10 , Ronald L. Rivest1 , JeffreyI. Schiller1 , Bruce Schneier11,12 , Vanessa Teague13 , Carmela Troncoso14
A lot of authors from different schools and countries, showing impressive collaboration and coordination.
Content scanning technologies
Bold headings are used to separate distinct sections while sub-headings are not bold.
Apple’s August 2021 proposal
Very well known topic. I remember hearing about this before I was even interested in cybersecurity. There was a lot of outrage due to privacy concerns.
or technical approaches to access the unencrypted content [3], andon the 2019 Carnegie Endowment for International Peace study onencryption policy, which presents a set of principles to guide solu-tions [4]. We also build on Paul Rosenzweig’s early analysis of thepolicy issues raised by CSS, along with some of the technical issues[5]. Since Apple announced its scanning proposal in August 2021,several researchers and organizations have provided rapid analysesof the proposal, and the technology and policy issues it raises. In par-ticular, we acknowledge Eric Rescorla of Mozilla [6], Kurt Opsahlof the Electronic Frontier Foundation [7], Steven Murdoch [8], PaulRosenzweig [9], and Daniel Kahn Gillmor of the American Civil Lib-erties Union (ACLU) [10]. Here, our aim is a more thorough technicalanalysis and to cover CSS more generally. In addition, our analysissheds some light on the design decisions that Apple took. Apple didits best, using some of the top talent in security and cryptography,and yet did not achieve a design for a secure, trustworthy, and effi-cacious system. Indeed, it appears that Apple has withdrawn fromimplementing the most ambitious aspects of its system [11]
Uses a lot of citations to credit researchers
We have built our study on the work of many others
Example of first person
Keywords: Client-side scanning; Risks; Perceptual hash
Shows words that will be used multiple times throughout the paper.
Abstract
The summary is mostly understandable for popular audiences although they may not fully understand what client-side scanning is.
Harold Abelson1 , Ross Anderson2,3 , Steven M. Bellovin4 ,∗,†,Josh Benaloh5 , Matt Blaze6 , Jon Callas7 , Whitfield Diffie8 ,‡ ,Susan Landau9 , Peter G. Neumann10 , Ronald L. Rivest1 , JeffreyI. Schiller1 , Bruce Schneier11,12 , Vanessa Teague13 , Carmela Troncoso
A lot of authors from different schools and countries, showing impressive collaboration and coordination.
Yaman Roumani a,*, Mais Alraee ba Department of Decision and Information Sciences, Oakland University, Elliott Hall, Room 427, 275 Varner Drive, Rochester, MI, 48309-4485b Department of Mathematics Statistics and Data Science, Montgomery College, 20200 Observation Drive, Germantown, MD, 20876
Two authors from different schools. More on authors on last page.