Reviewer #2:
Evidentiary Rating: Potentially Informative
Written Review:
The reviewed manuscript is devoted to clarification of taxonomy and antimicrobial resistance (AMR) spectrum of Enterobacter strains which were isolated from clinical specimens of patients with bloodstream infections in several hospitals in Nigeria during 2014-2020. The authors used all necessary molecular tools, WGS, bioinformatic and phylogenetic analysis, MLST typing etc. which resulted to obtain very important original data. According to the data presented, the authors were able to clarify to which Enterobacter spp. and subspecies the strains, previously isolated and incorrectly identified, belong. Also, comparative analysis of the genomes investigated with other representative genomes of Enterobacter spp. widely identified elsewhere in Nigeria. A special attention was paid to detailed characteristics of AMR of the strains investigated and, further, retrospective analysis of their possible role in some Enterobacter-related outbreaks. In fact, this is a great study which will be very interesting to the research community worldwide. Role of Enterobacter hormaechei as an etiological factor of blood infections is not well studied yet. However, this is very critical for both fundamental research and Public Health to unravel pathogenic potency of this organism and to avoid wrong diagnostics as well.
Specific comments:
P2, the section Abstract:
1. The authors could rephrase this sentence: ‘Among 98 Enterobacter received, Enterobacter hormaechei subspecies xiangfangensis predominated (43), followed by other E. hormachei subspecies (18), E. cloacae (26), E. roggenkampii (4), E. bugandensis (3), E. kobei (2), E. asburiae (1) and E. cancerogenous (1).’ As: ‘…… followed by other E. hormachei subspecies (18), and Enterobacter spp., such as: E. cloacae (26), E. roggenkampii (4), E. bugandensis (3), E. kobei (2), E. asburiae (1) and E. cancerogenous (1).’
2. ‘E. hormaechei, often misidentified and rarely…’ instead ‘Enterobacter hormaechei, often misidentified and rarely’.
3. ‘…retrospective detection of likely outbreaks…’ – the retrospective analysis of likely Enterobacter-related outbreaks?
4. Some repetitions should be excluded from the text of the Abstract and through the text of the manuscript as well.
P3, IMPACT STATEMENT
5. ‘Accurate identification of Enterobacter…’? Spp., strains, pathogens etc., please, clarify.
P5, the section INTRODUCTION
6. ‘…limitations of conventional biochemical methods.’ – diagnostic methods?
P5, the section METHODS
7. The title for subsection ’Collection of Presumptive bloodstream Enterobacter sp.’ may be difficult for potential readers, please, rephrase.
8. ‘…Heterogenous cultures were purified…’ – how? purified from which microorganisms? Does it mean that the research was performed with contaminated cultures? Coinfections? In this case why the Enterobacter spp. are recognized as the etiological agents of blood infections? Are these heterologous cultures Klebsiella pneumoniae, Staphylococcus aureus, Pseudomonas aeruginosa and other pathogens which were previously identified as the causative agents of blood infections and isolated from the relevant clinical specimens (page 8)? Thus, Enterobacter spp. investigated in the current research, could be only accompanying microorganisms but not responsible for development of blood infections directly.
P6, the subsection Whole Genome Sequence analysis
9. ‘Mapping to reference…’ what?
10. ‘Antimicrobial resistance genes, virulence genes, and…’ – which virulence genes? MLST and AMR only?
P7, the subsection Whole Genome Sequence analysis
11. …’ STs were assigned as follows: G20500026: assigned - ST-1995, G20500682: assigned - ST-1996, G18503215: assigned - ST-1997, G18503415: assigned - ST-1998 and G18503407: assigned - ST-1998.’ – for which Enterobacter spp.? The relevant IDs assigned by the PubMLST database must be included/
PP7-10, the section Results
12. The authors should present only specific comments for the data presented in Figures 1-3 while not duplicating the relevant content as identical numbers and percentages. The text in the current version of the manuscript is difficult for understanding for potential readers of the Journal.
PP11-12, the subsection Potential Enterobacter health-care associated infection outbreaks detected
13. According to the text of this subsection, the authors described mainly the AMR profiles of the E. hormaechei strains while not features of outbreaks; the titles for this subsection may be corrected.
PP12-13, the subsection Genomic context of Enterobacter genomes from this study and Enterobacter genomes from Sands et al., 2021 study
14. This title could be corrected to make it more valuable for potential readers of the manuscript.
15. All citations of the research of Sands et al. must be corrected according to the Journal rules.
16. The text from this subsection is certainly difficult for meaning. Based on the WGS data obtained, the authors focused their attention on re-identification of the Enterobacter strains which were isolated and identified earlier by the group of Sands et al., 2021. These findings should be presented in a more readable format available for readers worldwide.
P20 –please, add necessary information on the ref. 17 (year, Vol, pp, link etc.).
Doubtless, WGS is a very attractive method for laboratory diagnostics of pathogenic microorganisms, especially rare or novel ones. However, the authors could discuss what is preferable for low-resource settings – WGS or some other molecular diagnostic methods, for instance, 16S RNA & MLST typing & multiplex PCR for simultaneous identification of AMR and pathogen genes etc. It may be important to use resource-limited settings for preliminary analysis especially when there is no reason to WGS for detailed characteristics of extended numbers of clinical specimens under a large-scale examination in hospitals, monitoring and retrospective investigations and others.