the ocean and the atmosphere
De haakjes in de bergingsveranderingen kunnen weg in beide vergelijkingen.
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respectively
In het Engels zet je ", respectively" meestal na de termen waar je naar verwijst ipv ervoor (zoals in het Nederlands).
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system area
earth system
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is
Kan weg.
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therefore
they make
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to
from ocean to
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system area of land
terrestrial compartment
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in
part of
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phase
compartment (vraag even aan Ruud of hij dit een goede term vindt).
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in
included in
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areas
compartments
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shows also
also shows
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ocean
see or ocean
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replenishable or
Kan weg wat mij betreft.
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Percolation
Percolatie wordt inderdaad vaker gebruikt als term voor dit proces, maar "Recharge (grondwateraanvulling)" is misschien geschikter. Even met Ruud afstemmen.
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With:
Volgorde aanhouden zoals de termen in de vergelijking voorkomen.
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to
into
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Partial balance surface area
Zie eerdere opmerkingen over subscripts. Overleg even met Ruud wat zijn voorkeur heeft.
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,
Komma weghalen, of ook een komma na "but" toevoegen. Zonder komma's is beter denk ik.
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land surface
Zie eerdere opmerkingen over het fonttype en de lettergrootte van subscripts.
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into the soil
between the soil particles
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evaporates also
also occurs
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in the unsaturated zone
from the rootzone
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stomates
stomata (huidmondjes) in the leaves
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one
Voeg "within" toe voor "one". Voeg ", often faster" toe na "days".
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Interception
Opnieuw zouden deze 4 subscripts in roman font moeten. Ook zou ik consequent hoofd- of kleine letters gebruiken. Dus of "I" en "T" in kleine letters, of "s" en "o" in hoofdletters. Dat laatste is beter denk ik.
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soil
land surface
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difference
differ
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Evaporation
Eigenlijk is dit "evaporation rate". Vraag maar aan Ruud of hij dit een goed idee vindt of niet.
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(2.1)
Subscripts zoals "in" en "out" moeten in roman font ipv in italic font geschreven worden, in deze vergelijking maar ook elders in de tekst.
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s
consist
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Evaporation has a purifying effect
See later remark. This needs clarification.
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Fig. 2.3
The numbers in mm/year do not match the numbers in the lecture slides!
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phases
"parts".
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land phase
"terrestrial".
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time
Plural "times".
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the storage elements like
Remove.
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is
"in".
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captured
"stored".
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types of storage
"stores".
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This process has a purifying effect
What do you mean exactly? As (pure) water evaporates, dissolved substances are left behind in the soil or in the water.
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distillate
"distills".
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lawns
"plains".
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tamped
"compacted (verdicht)".
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saturation
Add "excess" after "saturation".
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drainage
"runoff".
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percolation
"recharge"?
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goes
"is transported".
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flow
Add comma after "flow".
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of
"provided by".
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distillates
"distills".
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Percolation
"Recharge".
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Doorstroming
"Wegzijging".
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rainfall runoff
"rainfall-runoff process".
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of
"in".
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Limburg
Zo te zien is dit België i.p.v. de Nederlandse provincie Limburg.
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was
"were".
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Section
"Chapter".
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process of rainfall runoff
"rainfall-runoff processes".
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Section
"Chapter".
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make
Remove "make", or replace by "help".
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be
Remove "be".
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afress
"address", "deal with"?
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Section
"Chapter".
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of
You mean "of" or "or"?
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Section
"Chapter".
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Section
"Chapter".
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30 feet
"10 meters".
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p
Replace "p" by "o".
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Section
"Chapter".
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the
Remove "the".
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glacier shrinks
"glaciers shrink".
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Section
"Chapter".
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Section
"Chapter".
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performed
Remove "performed".
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REUTERS
Reuters.
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REUTERS
"Reuters".
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Section 2
"Chapter 2".
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Section 2
"Chapter 2".
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see
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spoken
Replace "spoken" by "talk".
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.
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drying out
Replace with "desiccation".
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biological
Pollutants are mostly chemicals, aren't they?
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prevails
Replace with "exceeds precipitation".
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Watercycle
Two words "Water cycle".
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In practice
Move this paragraph to the end of the next paragraph, so that it precedes the paragraph about "water usage" directly.
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1.1.1.
Why number these sub-sections? I don't think these paragraphs require numbering.
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Rainfall runoff
See earlier remark. I would prefer "Rainfall-runoff relations" or something similar.
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[]
Why square brackets before each reference?
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s
Capital "S".
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g
Capital "G".
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u.s.
Capitals "U.S.".
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t
Capital "T".
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w
Capital "W".
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e
Capital "E".
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s
Capital "S".
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c
Capital "C".
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a
Capital "A".
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doi:
Remove first "doi:".
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u
Capital "U".
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i
Capital "I".
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S
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s
Capital "S".
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(n.d.)
Add title of publication?
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nwdpra
All capitals "NWDPRA".
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c
Capital "C".
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m
Capital "M".
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f
Capital "F".
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w
Capital "W".
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n
Capital "N".
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b
Capital "B".
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b
Capital "Bowen".
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, doi:10.1680/imotp.1883.21797
Remove second doi (identical to first one).
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, 1
Remove ", 1".
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, 8
Remove ", 8".
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sri lanka
Capitals "Sri Lanka".
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uk
Capitals "UK".
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l
Capital "L".
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litfass
All capitals "LITFASS".
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c
Capital "C".
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n
Capital "N".
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Knmi
All capitals "KNMI".
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K. M.
Try to be consistent in notation: sometimes you add a space between initials, sometimes you don't.
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u
Replace "u" by "e".
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a
Capital "A".
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b
Capital "B".
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l
Capital "L".
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Gaona, R., F., M.
Replace by "Rios Gaona, M.F.".
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Zougmor
Add "é".
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te
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xx@email.com
Update email address.
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a
Remove "a".
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–
Remove dash.
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rainfall runoff
Add a dash between "rainfall" and "runoff" and add "relations"?
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stages
What do we mean with "stages" - "phases" or "compartments"?
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