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  1. Oct 2016
    1. .

      So is there now a duality to whom the fictional audience serves; it works for the tweeter as a vehicle for authenticity and as a method of constructing a marketable image?

    2. quantifiable metric for social status

      Alongside wealth and consumer-metrics of status, a new method of ranking people.

    3. seen as a marker of authenticity, but is strategically managed and limited.

      "Seen as" but carefully "managed" to keep it professional.

    4. This ain’t FB

      What would the ranking of social media sites be from "Most Private" to "Least Private?" And how would one determine that rank?

    5. face-to-face

      Meaning that all of these tools are lost when online, but the behaviour they construct is still present.

    6. feigned unawareness

      To maintain authenticity? Is authenticity then often conflated with humility?

    7. Email is also usually pri-vate, while Twitter is primarily public.

      And thus even people who talk to themselves keep the more private subjects in their heads.

    8. onsciously speaking to an audience is perceived as inauthentic

      Breaking the fourth wall, as it were?

    9. talking to myself

      Hmm. They consider talking out into the internet akin to talking to oneself. Does this imply that most tweets are one-sided, with little opportunity for a discussion as it happens between two people face to face?

    10. Twitter

      Background.

    11. ruptures the ability to vary self-presentation based on audience

      I wonder if some new form of conscious language arises from this rupture. Do people have to manually create their dialects, and how does one form an in-group language if anyone reading it is simultaneously in and out of the group?

    12. collectively produced by partici-pants

      Social constructs and social contracts here again.

    13. sense of audience

      "All the world's a stage..." Creating or perceiving an audience is the only social cue that people get on social media; the argot used, the extent of self-censorship, even the willingness to accept or reject ideas relies on a person being aware of who is listening.

    1. Berman (

      Berman is summarized to add one point on the argument for authenticity's "salience" where counterexamples are listed below.

    2. If tourism promoters can reimagine the historical past of a country, they have alsotried to reimagine the locus of popular mythical worlds.

      Here the author turns the example his source provides into a starter for one of their arguments.

  2. Sep 2016
    1. What are they going through on the dail

      I wish more news articles looked at something from this perspective. I understand the need to have news regularly hampers long-term studies like searching for the source of conflict, but the news is too liable to let their own biases slip in and color it, even when just reporting the facts. Just reporting the actions and results with not much time on the causes does very little in aiding long-term solutions.

    2. Rap music is essential to the struggle against sexism because it takes us straight to the battlefiel

      Judging by how it is referred to later, it seems rap is the battlefield, whereas the greater evils of sexism, and the racism that spawns it are the war in general.

    1. ignoring

      This is the crux of the argument. Rap is not art, no matter what devices it uses, because of its content to those charging others based on lyrics alone. It is later stated that no other genre is used this way, because rap is not art. It's representative of a cultural divide between what is considered art and what is not by those in the courthouse. (Sidenote: would libraries be considered art galleries for literature?)

    1. [...

      So covers, specifically rock covers, fit into a gap between allographic and autographic. Where every performance is at once an original and a copy, imbued with authenticity from the artists themselves and not from the work they are performing.

    1. one that equates authenticity with spontaneity and unpolishedworkmanship, and is suspicious of anything that resembles self-conscious artistry

      Here the idea that authenticity cannot be noticed by the self returns. Interesting to note the author does not share that perspective.

    2. To make a record, even of a traditional song, is akinto writing that song

      This is the main argument of the author's section on recording. It could be anyone's song before, but once recorded it belongs to the recorder unless another recording becomes more popular.

    1. some of my contemporaries

      Here Wordsworth writes about what his contemporaries say about language and its impact on metrical compositions, and Wordsworth's own opinion on the subject. The rest of the paragraph follows as a dissection of sorts for poem.

  3. Aug 2016
    1. one hasn’t really experienced it as an artwork

      Well, yeah, given your definition of "art," it has to move someone.

    2. would say in complete secrecy

      Why does Vendler propose that lyric poetry is this deep, intimate view of the soul?

    3. willing to bear

      Curious way to describe reading poetry; does this author find understanding it a chore? Or are they acknowledging the tendency for poets to go overboard on the flowery language?