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  1. May 2021
    1. The kilt, devised for workers To wear among the dusty clattering looms. Weavers, carders, spinners. The loader, The docker, the navvy. The planter, the picker, the sorter Sweating at her machine in a litter of cotton As slaves in calico headrags sweated in fields:

      its kinda uncomfortable

    2. Like Hart Crane’s Bedlamite, “shrill shirt ballooning.” Wonderful how the pattern matches perfectly Across the placket and over the twin bar-tacked

      the shirts are on fire

    3. A third before he dropped her put her arms    Around his neck and kissed him. Then he held Her into space, and dropped her. Almost at once He stepped to the sill himself, his jacket flared And fluttered up from his shirt as he came down, Air filling up the legs of his gray trousers—

      she obviously liked him

    4. The witness in a building across the street Who watched how a young man helped a girl to step Up to the windowsill, then held her out Away from the masonry wall and let her drop. And then another. As if he were helping them up To enter a streetcar, and not eternity.

      some one was watching

    5. At the Triangle Factory in nineteen-eleven. One hundred and forty-six died in the flames On the ninth floor, no hydrants, no fire escapes—

      the building goes up in flames

    6. Of cuff I button at my wrist. The presser, the cutter, The wringer, the mangle. The needle, the union, The treadle, the bobbin. The code. The infamous blaze

      it seems like it is a hot and stressful job

    7. Gossiping over tea and noodles on their break Or talking money or politics while one fitted This armpiece with its overseam to the band

      it seems like a hot place but comfortable

    8. The back, the yoke, the yardage. Lapped seams, The nearly invisible stitches along the collar Turned in a sweatshop by Koreans or Malaysians

      it sounds like a workplace

    1. A skirt of flamesdances around herat dusk.

      maybe the use of her could be used for the representation of many people that feel like there disappearing or changing

    2. We stand with our handshanging at our sides,while she burns          like a sack of dry ice.

      he could be saying were standing there doing nothing while our old self constantly comes back up

    3. She burns like oil on water.She burns like a cattail torchdipped in gasoline.She glows like the fat tipof a banker's cigar,      silent as quicksilver.A tiger under a rainbow   at nightfall.She burns like a shot glass of vodka.She burns like a field of poppiesat the edge of a rain forest.She rises like dragonsmoke    to my nostrils.She burns like a burning bushdriven by a godawful wind.

      its like hes using things that different variety of people will understand to show us how much "she burns"

    1. hitting the floor with a wild, headlong motion for the game he loved like a country and swiveling back to see an orange blur    floating perfectly through the net.

      so he thought

    2. while the power-forward explodes past them    in a fury, taking the ball into the air by himself now and laying it gently    against the glass for a lay-up, but losing his balance in the process,    inexplicably falling, hitting the floor

      tries and fails

    3. A hook shot kisses the rim and hangs there, helplessly, but doesn’t drop, and for once our gangly starting center    boxes out his man and times his jump perfectly, gathering the orange leather    from the air like a cherished possession

      basketball

    1. I call for youcultivation of victory Overlong blows that you want to give and blows you are going to get

      i need your help because you can take it you are strong and i am not.