Overall, this project has a solid outline. I think that you explore your chosen material (the film and the novel) quite successfully. I would suggest using SCALAR's functionalities/ tools a little more, connecting back to Braidotti's text and class discussions of Ishiguro's novel, and presenting detailed personal reflections/ your evolving understanding of Becoming-machine.

I recognize that you used 'it' pronouns to talk about Klara on this page while in the conversation page, Klara's talked about as 'her'. In the novel, Klara is a girl AF, but I wonder how you'd like Klara to be called - and whether your choice will have anything to do with Klara's existence with/in different lives/multiplicities?

Did you mean to say "that they have no-one/ nobody but each other as company"?

I think it is interesting that the conversation takes place in space and that the names of earth and sun are not capitalized. I wonder whether you'd like to elaborate more on setting and time? Or, is it a stylistic choice to blur these concepts - to make the viewer fully focus on the conversing of the two AI?

Could you maybe think of a title that also mentions Klara and the 'conversation' aspect of the project?

Again, I think a discussion of this image could provide better insights on the AI's character - and more importantly, how you understand/ connect with it.

Some comments on emotion and posthumanism would be interesting here. We can ask questions like: - Why do we strictly associate emotion with humans? - What does 'feeling' entail for a machine?

Maybe I am just too concerned about the details, but an explanation/note on the use of pronouns would be helpful. I wonder for which effect you interchangeably use it, her, and his.

Could you try to use one of SCALAR's functionalities to make this page a bit interactive or unconventional?

Did you mean to say "more than mere bodies?

Why is it inevitable?

This image really conveys the notion of displacement/ chaos. I would name the artist in the description and include a brief analysis.

It would be interesting to talk about 'cyborgs' here. Do we really need the human-machine binary to exist - even when it's peaceful and playful?

Maybe connect this phrase with Braidotti's idea of Becoming-imperceptible?

In the conversation page, you might consider including couple more lines about HAL 9000 and Klara's view of humans as species, and whether they realize/ feel/ calculate the aspect of 'the Otherness'.

Again, interesting image! I wonder what the scales symbolize; some kind of justice, or an unequal equity?

Would you consider talking more about commercialization?

I like the reciprocality here! Powerful final sentence!

Would you consider talking about how Asimov's Three Laws are widely used in science-fiction, and the specificity of genre?

A citation could be useful here? Either Braidotti or Asimov as references.

Would you consider also presenting a complementary machine-ethics theory that is not humanist?

I like this phrase - maybe could mention Braidotti's ideas of 'circularity' or 'life as flow' here.

I remember our discussions about Klara's hope. Is that not emotion?

I like these gaps/ silences! I think they tell a lot as well.

I like that the main visual of the page is dynamic! Definitely helps set the mood, and could use more of such media.

Use of sounds can be impactful to grasp the interest of the viewer.

Unique adjective here! I think it is reflective of what we think, and Ishiguro imagines of Klara.

An interesting final sentence! After reading the page, I have questions: Can humans also calculate? Or, when you refer to calculating, is it exclusive to the machine - in the same way that thinking is exclusive to the human?

Would you consider referring to the nature-culture continuum here?

I think the Google definitions are good for providing an overview of complex concepts, but it would be nice to incorporate Braidotti's definitions of 'consciousness' and 'rationality' here - or possibly some other critical theory.

Maybe include a tag/link here to your Machine-Ethics page as the concepts of 'mannerism' and 'ethnics' can be interrelated.

It may be good to include the year of publication/ genre of the novel.

It could be nice to talk about your choice of this image. I really like that there are webs (of information?) on the AI; maybe you could provide a brief analysis about them? Also, what does the infrastructure symbolize, considering that the space is the setting?