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  1. Feb 2025
    1. For example, if you have never worked in a fast-paced sales environment, focus on your desire to learn. Highlight the fact that you have observed fast-paced sales environments, and those situations appeal to you. At the very least, you could use the fact that you have always been very proactive in completing tasks as efficiently as possible. Or maybe you have taken a course or two in economics or marketing that might have provided tangentially relevant knowledge. In contrast, if you are a strong match for most of the requirements, generate specific, results-oriented examples to demonstrate these skills.

      Highlight the fact you are willing to learn if you have no experience in something and your eagerness to learn. Also highlight if you've observed this type of work before. And use your strengths to highlight you as a professional. Also, add any related courses in relation to the you've taken in relation to the job.

    2. As you compare your abilities and credentials to your list(s), ask yourself how closely your qualifications match the items are listed. Do your skills match all of these requirements, or the vast majority of them? Highlight the skills that do match and consider where you might reference them directly in your job letter. Your next step might involve identifying and writing down any requirements that are NOT stated directly.

      Make a list of all the requirements the job entails and highlight the skills that do match with you.

    3. Once you have identified a position that interests you, copy the job description into a Word document. (If you only have a hard copy of the ad, it might be worthwhile to type it into a new Word document, so that you can copy pertinent phrases from the job description into your letter.

      Copy and paste the job description of a desired job into a word document that way it is easier to copy important phrases into the letter.

    4. . Some recruiters go straight to the résumé and make an initial decision, while other recruiters carefully weigh the information in the letter.

      Some recruiters specifically look at both the resume and cover letter, so ultimately both are equally as important to have.

    5. However, the application letter still serves several crucial functions. If the résumé is characterized by breadth (giving a broad overview of your qualifications), the application letter is characterized by depth (

      The resume is broad, meanwhile the application letter can go into detail.

    6. This is not necessary because employers can simply ask for references when they want them.

      References are not necessary because employers can ask for them when needed.

    7. In writing your objective statement, you would want to use the specific job title as it is given in the job ad or on the company website (with proper capitalization), and you would likely want to state the company name as well

      Refer to the job you are applying for in the objective statement.

    8. An entry-level position in the healthcare industry, enabling me to use my business and communications skills to enhance a company’s bottom line.

      I really like how this objective is phrased. clear, concise and effective. I will be using this as a template for my objective if I choose to add one to my resume.

    9. If you are unsure about including an objective statement, or if it would be too vague and general, it is best to omit it altogether.

      If you are unsure about adding an objective, it is best to omit it. I am not sure if I should add one. I will keep this in mind when creating my resume.

    10. Naysayers argue that the résumé is meant to be scanned in a matter of minutes and the objective statement only slows this process down with details that will likely be explored in the cover letter. If included, objective statements should be very targeted and mention a specific position. Whatever objective you choose, it should be highly specific in stating what you are looking for and what you have to contribute. It should also be you-centered, showing what you can do for the company in no more than two sentences.

      This is what I was wondering because it had mentioned earlier in the reading of adding an objective. It can be added but should be specific and "you-centered" and what you can do for the company and no more than 2 sentences.

    11. As noted in the section on design, you should use bullet points as a means of clearly and succinctly listing your responsibilities and achievements.

      Use of bulletin points is important in organizing your responsibilities and achievements.

    12. The name of the company. The city and state and, when outside the United States, the country. The years of employment. (If you have had several jobs at one company, include the overall years of experience; for separate jobs, note specific years of experience.) Three to seven bullet points describing your responsibilities and the results of your work, depending on years of experience.

      What the employment section requires to add in a resume.

    13. If you attend graduate school, law school, and so forth, your postgraduate institution would be listed first. You also have the option of including relevant courses that prepared you for the job you are seeking and any special accomplishments related to school—like projects, offices held, service, and awards or scholarships. If you have many of the latter, you might alternatively consider placing them in their own section marked Honors.

      This is important to note when it comes to the education section of a resume. Listing postgraduate first. And including relevant courses that prepared you for the job. Furthermore, creating an honors section can be necessary, as well.

    14. If you MUST use these phrases, find concrete examples to back them up. For example, instead of using team player, include a time you “collaborated with peers to save the company over $500/month on delivery methods” or “co-managed a team of six to interview/hire vendors for annual company picnic.”

      Avoid filler words like "team player" and "results oriented" and instead construct the sentence using the verb, details and results method.

    15. Within the education section, it is standard to include your GPA, typically if it is 3.0 or better, along with your expected graduation date, major(s), and minor(s).

      Including your gpa is standard, if it is a 3.0 or higher, and with expected graduation time frame and major/minor.

    16. If in a loud area, do not answer your cell phone, especially when you do not recognize the number. Allow the call to go to voicemail, listen to it in a quiet place, and return the call as soon as possible. A professional voicemail might sound like the following: “You’ve reached John Smith at 555.555.5555. Please leave a message and I will call you back as soon as possible.” Be sure to check your voicemail on a regular basis.

      Not answering a phone call when in a loud setting is great advice because chances are it is best for it to go to voicemail as it could be the hiring manager. And setting up a professional voicemail is necessary.

    17. If your first name is difficult to pronounce, you could include your nickname in quotation marks or parentheses (e.g., Xioang “Angie” Kim or Massimo “Mass” Rapini).

      Include your nickname in parenthesis.

    18. First of all, your Résumé Header should include four items: full name, address, email address, phone number, and possibly your professional website or Linkedin page.

      Resume header includes four items and should have all.

    19. it is non-standard and strongly discouraged in the United States to include a photo with the job packet. It may also be a good idea to be appraised of your legal rights when working through the job process, from application to interview. To become more aware of protections guaranteed by federal law, you may want to review a resource like the following, published by the U.S. Equal Employment Opportunity Permission

      Do not include a photo of yourself as most of the time it is non-standard. It is important to know your legal rights during the application and hiring process.

    20. Use key terms gathered in your pre-writing, preparation phase (from the job description and research into your field). If your potential employer is using a résumé-scanning program, these key terms may make the difference between getting an interview or a rejection.

      Make sure to have a copy of the job description with you when constructing and modifying your resume.

    21. Quantify your skills and achievements, as explained previously. This means including references to technologies and equipment you have used; types of documents you have produced; procedures you have followed; languages you speak; technical languages you know;

      Including technologies and equipment used is important to add, as well.

    22. types of clients you have worked with (demographic information that might be relevant in your new workplace); and so on.

      This is important to include because this makes you stand out and gives potential future employers a better idea of your experience. Personally, being bilingual in any job that I've had I've had the opportunity to help clients interpret what they're saying.

    23. Write in sentence fragments that begin with active verbs and leave out sentences’ subjects. Example: “I eliminated the duplication of paperwork in my department by streamlining procedures” would become “Eliminated paperwork duplication in a struggling department by streamlining procedures.”

      Begin with active verbs and be general about sentences' subjects.

    24. For example: Developed (VERB) new paper flow procedure (DETAILS), resulting in reduced staff errors and customer wait times (RESULT); Provided (VERB) friendly customer-focused service (DETAILS) leading to a 15% improvement in customer satisfaction and loyalty (RESULT).

      Example of verb, details, results.

    25. Follow it with the details of that skill or achievement, and then describe the positive impact of your achievement.

      Follow it with details of the achievement and then the impact of it.

    26. When describing work experience (and possibly education), include bullet points

      Bullet points are necessary when describing work experiences and education.

    27. You might consider using a template as a helpful starting point. However, if you do use a common template to help with layout and section format, be sure to modify it in some way so it does not look identical to another candidate’s résumé.

      Use of a template when beginning the draft of your resume is a good place to start and modifying it as you go is important.

    28. However, both the college student and the more experienced candidate may choose a functional résumé for these reasons:

      A college student like myself may lean more towards the functional resume because it provides more beneficial to them, alongside experienced candidates.

    29. The functional résumé typically opens with a brief summary/profile detailing strengths (one to three sentences) and demonstrates how you match the requirements of your potential job by including relevant achievements and accomplishments.

      Wouldn't this be the same as in found in a cover letter? Is this necessary to include in a functional resume?

    30. The functional résumé still includes an Employment Experience section and likely an Education section, but these sections are streamlined to include only the basic information about each position held or each school attended.

      The employment and education section in this resume format are to be as basic as possible.

    31. centers around well-developed Skills & Achievements section, in which skills are organized into categories

      The focus of the functional resume are skills being organized into categories.

    32. The chronological résumé presents experience under headings by job title, company, location, and dates of employment. Education is another common category that, like all sections on a résumé, is also in reverse chronological order. While the chronological résumé dedicates the majority of its space to providing relevant details from previous work experience, the education section is often placed above the work section.

      The chronological resume is the traditional format. It works in chronological order with the most recent job experience and schooling being placed first. It also includes space for details about your experience. And you need to provide information about the title and address of the place worked.

    33. you must decide which fits your current situation. There are many reasons to choose one format over another.

      It is important to remember this fact because a resume should be unique to you and your skills and qualifications as a professional. It is the marketing tool of you employers will use.

    34. Stronger examples of résumé statements might include: “completed an average of 65 customer transactions per hour, setting a company record for the 2019 fiscal year” or “managed national and international supplier accounts with purchase ranges from $1,000 to $10,000,000 USD.”

      This does sound like a stronger resume with examples like this versus just saying you've worked in sales before.

    35. What exactly do you do, or what have you done in the past? Your résumé should answer this question very quickly

      These two questions are important to keep in mind to answer when constructing your resume.

    36. To represent you when you are not there.

      I found this point very interesting. A resume will represent you when you are not there. And you can be miles away from future employers, but if your resume looks good, you can get an interview instantaneously.

    37. Based on the content of the job ad, you will want to address how your education and/or work experiences (including internships and volunteer work) have taught you both technical and “soft” skills that will help you perform the listed job duties.

      Your resume should convey that you are well qualified and well suited for the job.

    38. because they have many documents to review, they look for reasons to reduce the number of résumés that demand a second look. This means that a single error can be all that is needed to discard your résumé and your candidacy. However, recruiters also have an eye for key details, so they will quickly recognize a well-constructed résumé and discard one that is poorly designed.

      It is key to minimize errors on a resume and to have a well-constructed resume because seasoned recruiters will notice. Seasoned recruiters only take a few seconds to scan a resume to decide if they will discard it or not.

    39. As a marketing document that sells your candidacy, your résumé should have a format that is pleasing to read, efficient in its use of the English language, and very concise.

      As noted earlier, a resume serves as marketing you to any employer. Resumes should be customized to make you stand out as a professional and the format should make sense for you, as well, as a a professional.

    40. Several different résumé formats are available to you. However, you may choose the functional (skills) résumé format to place more emphasis on a specific set of current qualifications and slightly less emphasis on your education or work experience;

      This is a great example of how you can choose from several different resume formats that make you more marketable. In this instance, a nurse that wants to apply for a medical translator position has many resume formats to choose from, however the functional skills format reflects a better emphasis on their qualifications. It is imperative to choose the most marketable resume format for you and the type of employment you are looking for.

    41. you do not have to create a new résumé and cover letter for every job opening. Instead, you can create modular materials with moving parts that can be adapted and reorganized for each job.

      This is important to keep in mind. It is unnecessary to write a new resume and cover letter for each new job you wish to apply for. The saved resume and cover letter you have crafted already can be edited and reorganized to tailor to each new job that interests you to apply to.

    42. Here are some resources to get you started:

      Visiting job boards, specialty job lists, company, organization and government websites, visiting your college employment center, and networking are all good places to find job openings. Using these resources can help someone find a job opening of their choice that best suits what they're looking for.

    43. Companies often delete the job posting once they have received sufficient applicants, so it is important that you save your own copy of the document, along with the date and location you found it (this information is often referenced in the job letter); you might also copy and paste the text into a new document, or bookmark the webpage.

      It is important to save the job description of the job you intend to apply for so when you apply the use of this document will help with the application materials. Being able to have a reference of the what the job entails is necessary when tailoring the job application to the job posting. Also, many jobs delete this job description, and you have to have it to reference.

    44. Investing the preparation time to write your employment materials, including researching available positions, can save you many headaches in the job process.

      It is important to invest time and energy to create quality and impressive job materials and researching desired job positions. Investing time in doing this will prepare you for the job position you are looking for by making you more marketable and more completive in the job market.

    45. Remember that everyone has strengths and everyone has weaknesses, including every CEO, every president, every manager, and every one of your coworkers. You will be in good company when considering and discussing your weaknesses.

      I found this sentiment very true. It is important to remember that nobody is perfect and that we all have different strengths and weaknesses. And that is true for everyone. Remembering this sentiment will help me relieve the anxiety when interviewing in the future. Also, it is important to highlight your strengths on the resume so it can catch the attention of the employer. And it is also important to be self-aware during the interview process and share your weaknesses with the prospective employer as that offers credibility and steps to strengthen them.

  2. Jan 2025
    1. Use what you have just learned to explain why Student 2’s email to Professor Jones is more effective than the email written by Student 1. How does the tone of the messages differ? What makes Student 2’s email look and sound more appropriate? What are the elements that contribute its clarity? If you were Professor Jones and you received both emails, how would you respond to each one?

      Student 2's email has a greeting, body message, and a closing. Specifically, in the greeting it appears that the student addresses the professor in his preferred way to be addressed, which is worth taking note of the student's professionalism. Also, the email from student 2 lets the professor know immediately what class he is in and his question to the professor. Additionally, student 2 also signs his full name to the email so the professor knows specifically what student sent him that email. The tone of both emails differ completely because student 1's email is very informal and borderline disrespectful, while student 2's email is appropriate and to the point, professional and respectful.

    2. Here are two versions of an email from a supervisor, Jane Doe, to a group of her employees. Which version do you think is most effective? Why?

      The second version of Jan Doe's email is most effective because the body of the email is simple and to the point. Also, there is a clear and appropriate subject, the greeting adresses everyone, there's a body message, and there is also a closing. Also, unlike the first version of Jan Doe's email, this version 2 of the email is not overwhelming at all and only mentions what the subject is and doesn't bring up additional unnecessary information that could instead be sent in an additional email.

    3. A memo includes a header or heading block, an introduction, a body, and a conclusion.

      This is the appropriate format for a memo in a professional writing context.

    4. The successful operation of a company may depend on memos—possibly even memos that are sent via email—for communication between the employees of the company. Types of memos include: inquiries, recommendations, problem-solution, etc. The memo’s message is direct and follows a preset format for easy access to information. While it may contain a request for feedback, the memo is linear, from the organization to the employees, or from one employee to another.

      Memos are instrumental in the success of a company as it contains sensitive and vital information about company procedures, events, etc. If the memo is not direct and doesn't follow a preset format for easy access to information that would be considered unprofessional writing.

    5. Be aware that contacting someone too frequently can border on harassment. Texting is a tool. Use it when appropriate.

      In a business or work context, contacting someone too frequently is unprofessional writing because it can border on harassment.

    6. Always proofread for tone, spelling, grammar, and content before hitting send.

      Making sure that the email we send sound professional, look professional and are professional is important.

    7. Netiquette matters—remember the golden rule in all communications.

      Anything that goes against netiquette on the net is considered unprofessional writing.

    8. but how we conduct ourselves will leave a lasting image.

      This is so true. What we post and say online and how we react and interact online leaves a lasting impression of how we present ourselves to the world and leaves our cyber footprint for time to come.

    9. An email’s closing is extremely important because it identifies the sender and provides contact information. Always include your full name at the end of your email.

      It is important to add your full name to an email as it identifies you to the reader of the email. It also provides the reader with information to contact you. If you don't know the person well, you can include your title and the organization you belong to.

    10. Use paragraphs to separate thoughts (or consider writing separate emails if you have many unrelated points or questions), and state the desired outcome at the end of your message.

      Use of paragraphs are important for organizing your email in separate thoughts. Also, It is important to state the desired outcome you want at the end of the email. For example, something like "please advise" or "I will follow this email up with a phone call this week.".

    11. Reference any included attachments up front as well, so that readers are aware of the additional content and its purpose; in your email state the name of the file, along with the type of document and program needed to open it, for example: “Please see the attached Word document of my essay, The Many Facets of Richard III.”

      When including an attachment to an email it is best to let the reader know that you've also sent an attachment in the email and to reference it politely. Not telling the reader of the email about the attachment and the name of the file is unprofessional writing because they have no idea what the attachment is about or what the attachment is. Being clear in email's is important when addressing someone.

    12. Emojis, though helpful in informal communications like texting with friends, may also be perceived as unprofessional in business contexts

      The use of emojis are also unprofessional in a business context.

    13. . In general, avoid using all caps since it may have the appearance of yelling.

      Using all caps in an email is unprofessional as it can be viewed as yelling.

    14. When in doubt, address recipients more formally to avoid offending them. Some common ways to address readers are: Dear Professor Smith, Hello Ms. McMahon, or Hi Mary Jane. If a person’s name is not available, or if the email addresses a diverse group, try something both generic and polite: To whom it may concern, Dear members of the selection committee, or Hello everyone.

      When greeting the recipient of your email, upholding respect is important. Referring to them formally by their first name or full name is best. If the email is to be sent to a group, try to be generic and polite. For example, using the title "Mrs." when referring to any woman is assuming they're married and unprofessional writing. Furthermore, not being entirely sure about someone's gender, yet, assuming is also unprofessional writing. Being respectful and courteous when sending emails is important.

    15. . Especially when an individual is on the receiving end of an angry email, anger may seem like the appropriate response. However, such a step is unprofessional and may have serious ramifications. Avoid flame wars. When tempted to send an emotional response, always wait; instead, consider holding off until the message can be phrased in a more objective, professional manner.

      Sending angry emails or responding back to angry emails with anger also is unprofessional. It is best if you are on the receiving end of an angry email to wait to reply in an objective and professional manner.

    16. Your supervisor may want to know that the individual has been informed of the policy, and you may simultaneously wish to avoid fallout with a co-worker who could misunderstand the supervisors’ request for information. Including your supervisors in the Bcc: would be one way to make them aware of the steps you have taken to address a situation or fulfill the duties of your job position.

      Being aware of appropriate times when to add someone either in the bcc box or cc box is important.

    17. Perhaps you did not obtain permission to share their email information with others, but you had offered to send them the information as well. In such an instance, the Bcc: will enable you to be respectful of their privacy, while avoiding sending a separate email.

      It is always a good idea to be aware of someone's willingness to share their email information with others. If someone is not comfortable sharing their private email address with others but they still need to be informed, having them on the bcc of the email is the best option for them. Unprofessional writing would be sharing someone's private email that they didn't want to be shared.

    18. They should convey the main point of your email or the idea that you want readers to take away from it. They may also keep the email from being diverted to a junk mail folder, so be as specific as possible

      Email subject lines should be as specific as possible to convey the main point of the email to save the recipient time. Unprofessional writing would be one-word subjects or overly long subjects.

    19. Also keep in mind: just as an email’s subject line can communicate either professionalism or a lack of it, so also does your own email address. Consider two brief examples: jackjohnson@yahoo.com and bigdaddy2000@gmail.com

      A person's email address also reflects professionalism. Making sure to have a professional email address with simply your name attached to it shows professionalism. Having an email address that is too casual and informal like the latter email address in this highlighted section is considered unprofessional writing.

    20. In addition to its language and content, the structure of a email should also reflect a writer’s understanding of audience and purpose; a well-crafted email helps to establish credibility with an audience by showing awareness of the genre’s conventions, or its standard moves and expectations.

      Professional writing in emails is necessary because it reflects the writer's credibility with the audience. By making sure the writer has a well-crafted email with the four elements including a subject, greeting, message body, and closing it ensures this. Unprofessional writing would be missing one of the four elements in an email.

    21. The tone of the message could be misconstrued. If you would hesitate to say something to someone’s face, do not write it in an email.

      It is important to be mindful of the words we use and the tone we use when writing emails because even when we mean something in one way it can be misconstrued in a totally different way. It is important to only email someone what you would say to their face and not something you wouldn't say to their face.

    22. being careful to avoid a demanding tone or the underlying assumption that your request will be granted.

      It is good to be aware of making sure to having a professional tone in emails. It is best to refrain from using a demanding tone in emails as it is seen as unprofessional writing.

    23. Unless readers have promised otherwise, assume that it may take a few days for them to respond.

      Writing an email and awaiting an instantaneous response is unprofessional writing. It is always best to assume it will take a few business days for a response.

    24. Never write or send anything that you would not want to share publicly, or in front of your company president.

      Sharing information you wouldn't do so publicly or in front of the company president would be considered unprofessional writing. For example, sending an email to many collogues asking who wants to go outside and smoke. The president of the company and the higher ups of the company do not need to know about that because it is unprofessional to send an email concerning your personal life to many colleagues and to them. A text message to specific colleagues may be a better approach.

    25. Email may be informal in personal contexts, but business communication requires attention to detail, awareness that an email reflects both you and your company, and a professional tone

      Business emails reflect both you and the company. There should be a professional tone to business emails and respect.

    26. A clear structure with a greeting, message body, and closing is also expected of this genre.

      Emails need to have clear and structured writing including a subject, greeting, message body and closing. An email missing the subject, greeting, message body and closing is unprofessional writing.

    27. Strong subject lines, clear formatting, and concise writing are all characteristics of a well-written email.

      The writting of emails should be as professional as possible, clear and concise. Emojis should be kept at a minimum professional wise.

    28. When composing an email, a sender must account for the time constraints readers may face due to high email volume. Recipients, on the other hand, should plan to answer a business email within 24 hours, or the general time frame that they would respond to a text

      Making emails clear and to the point is helpful because it takes in account the time constraints readers may have. Writing long emails is not necessary. Also, it is encouraged to reply back to business emails within 24 hours as you would a text. I at work sometimes don't reply back and just press the like button to acknowledge I've seen the email but now I feel encouraged to reply back more often. Not replying back to a business email or even work email, depending of the job, is important and professional to do.

    1. Depending on your audience, you can modify the format by making the lines shorter or longer (adjusting margins), using larger or smaller type sizes, and other such tactics.

      You can adjust the word format to your audience.

    2. Search your paragraphs for listings of items—these can be made into vertical lists, or look for paired listings such as terms and their definitions—these can be made into two-column lists. Of course, be careful not to force this type of formatting, and do not overdo it.

      Using headlines and lists and making sure to not overdo them, as well, helps organize the document better.

    3. A six to eight-line paragraph is the usual maximum. This is because a paragraph should contain content about a single ideas; breaking up paragraphs into smaller ideas can help the reader more easily understand the individual topics, while also making the text less (visually) overwhelming

      Having one paragraph be specifically a six to eight line paragraph will help the reader to understand more clearly the topic or idea being discussed and stay focused on that topic. It also makes the text less overwhelming for the reader.

    4. . For non-specialist audiences, you may want to use more, simpler graphics. Graphics for specialists are often more detailed and technical.

      Graphics for non specialists are typically more simple, while graphics for specialists are more technical.

    5. When you revise your rough drafts, put them on a diet—go through a draft line by line trying to reduce the overall word, page, or line count by 20 percent.

      Keeping writing simple, clear, and effective is necessary in audience centered writing. Reducing the word, page and line count by 20% is beneficial to the reader and the overall document.

    6. Also, personalizing your writing style and making it more relaxed and informal can make it more accessible.

      Creating a more personalized writing style allows audience centered writing to be more accessible.

    7. n instructions, for example, using imperative voice and “you” phrasing is vastly more understandable than the passive voice or third-personal phrasing.

      Sentence style matters when referring to your audience of readers. Making sure you are using the correct sentence style structure is important.

    8. Create topic sentences for paragraphs and paragraph groups. It can help readers immensely to give them an idea of the topic and purpose of a section (a group of paragraphs) and in particular to give them an overview of the subtopics about to be covered.

      Creating topic sentences for paragraphs helps organize your document and makes the document easy and clear for the audience to read.

    9. In most types of technical documents, each major section includes mini-introductions that indicate the topic of the section and give an overview of the subtopics to be covered in that section to let the reader know what information each section will contain.

      Having strong introductions is key to allowing the reader know what will be covered and in having an organized document.

    10. Words like “therefore,” “for example,” “however” are transition words—they indicate the logic connecting the previous thought to the upcoming thought.

      Transition words allows the reader to connect the logic of what was previously stated to a new thought.

    11. or example, in instructions it is sometimes better to feed in chunks of background at the points where they are immediately needed

      In instructions, chunks of background of information are placed where necessary.

    12. For example, there can be too much background information up front (or too little) such that certain readers get lost.

      You want to have the right amount of organized information.

    13. If you already have examples, it may help to alter the technical content or level of your examples

      Altering technical levels of examples in a document is highly encouraged.

    14. Think about your audience’s education level and familiarity with the topic and terms used, and revise to make sure your content is clear for that audience.

      Noting the audience's education level and familiarity with the topic being discussed is essential to the audience's needs in a document so they can get the most out of the document.

    15. Are you using terms the reader will be familiar with? Is the sentence structure clear for the audience’s reading comprehension? It may be pitched at the wrong kind of audience—for example, an expert audience rather than a technician audience.

      Making sure the technical level of information is directed towards the correct audience is key.

    16. Note that some of this information can be added in the main document body, but you can also add appendices or glossaries—it depends on your audience and document type.

      Adding key information in the main document body, in the appendices or glossary is super helpful when wanting to add information readers need to understand the document.

    17. With each subsequent draft, think more carefully about your readers, and revise and edit your document so that you make technical information more understandable for specific audiences.

      It is vital to keep your audience's needs in mind and to remember you can always revise and edit your document to come up with a final document that fully encompasses the reader's needs and is clear for specific audiences.

    18. In this situation, most writers compose for the majority of readers and sacrifice the minority readers. Others put the supplemental information in appendixes or insert cross-references to beginners’ books.

      For many writers the majority rules and they sacrifice the minority. This makes sense as some writers do not want to lose their target audience. However, it is mentioned how adding supplemental information is helpful and a good balance.

    19. that might influence how you should design and write your document—for example, age groups, type of residence, area of residence, gender, political preferences, and so on.

      Keeping in mind other demographic characteristics like age groups, gender, types of residence, political preferences when writing documents is essential because it has a great influence on the reader.

    20. Make decisions on what readers want to read about as well as what they do not want to read about.

      Specific oriented focus on what readers want to read about and what they don't is valuable to identify early on.

    21. Background—knowledge, experience, and training

      It's a good idea to know beforehand the amount of knowledge, experience and training the reader has or lacks to accommodate to the reader when creating documents tailored to their specific needs.

    22. Regardless of which type of reader you identify (experts, technicians, executives, gatekeepers, or non-specialists), you should analyze these groups in terms of their characteristics:

      Regardless of the reader identified, keeping in mind the background, needs and interests, and the culture and values of the reader is essential.

    23. . In this case, you would want to write your report to be accessible to all these types of audience.

      In this example, the text explains that if you were writing a document, you believed would be used by multiple audiences you would make sure it is accessible to all audiences. Love the example used above this highlighted section, it explains a city's public park document may be read by non-specialists or community members and the city council or executives and those who maintain the parks or the custodians or maintenance personal.

    24. If you believe a document is unlikely to be used by the secondary audience(s), you can write for the primary audience only. This would be applicable if you create a set of instructions over “How to Change a Tire” for a website. You can assume most readers will be non-specialists who need assistance with the task, not mechanics, designers, or engineers in the automotive industry.

      Writing for the primary audience is necessary when you know for sure that most readers will be primary readers. For example, in a "How to change a tire" website most readers will be non-specialists.

    25. Identifying what type of reader may be interested in your document will help you create an improved, more effective document.

      It is key to identify the type of reader interested in the document to plan for the best document.

    1. Watch out for metaphors, slang, and figurative language that simply have no meaning to non-native speakers of English. Many American expressions have to do with sports—everything from poker to football—and have no significance to those who have not grown up around those sports. Some of our expressions are actually racist or have a racist past, without our knowing or recognizing it because we do not know the origin of the phrase. Even a phrase that seems innocuous such as “bury the hatchet” could be viewed as culturally insensitive to Native Americans. If you use it, you are referring (inadvertently) to ethnic stereotypes as well as using references that non-U.S. cultures would not understand.

      Just because we think we know the meaning of a common used phrase or expression, it does not mean everyone will know it or will interpret it the same way. For example, non- native English speakers may not fully understand the meaning of some expressions or slang in English. Also, we may not know the origin of where some of the expressions or slang actually origin from. It is always important to be sensitive to the reader.

    2. . Every business or organization has a culture, and within what may be considered a global culture, there are many subcultures or co-cultures. For example, consider the difference between the sales and accounting departments in a corporation

      Keeping in mind the culture of an organization or business is important when addressing specific readers. For example, there are key differences when referring to people who work in two different departments at an organization. Subcultures and co-cultures are important to keep in mind in audience centered writing.

    3. In fact, this audience element is so important that it is one of the cornerstones of technical writing: you are often challenged to write about technical subjects in a way that a beginner could understand. Sometimes you have to write for an audience of other specialists, but generally speaking, you are communicating information to someone who does not already know or have it.

      knowing the audience who the writing is directed towards is key to making sure the audience centered writing is both beneficial and comprehensive to the reader.

    4. Technical communication is the delivery of technical information to readers (or listeners or viewers) in a manner that is adapted to their needs, their level of understanding, and their background.

      Audience centered writing keeps the reader's needs, their level of understanding and their background in mind at all times.

    5. Sometimes technical writing is formulaic, which can be a good thing if you need to communicate something with great clarity and efficiency. However, do not let formulaic writing sap the energy out of everything you write.

      There's a formula for audience centered writing when it comes to needing to communicate something with clarity. However, just because it can be formulaic it doesn't need to be lifeless.

    6. That might sound complicated right now, but it can basically be broken down into an awareness and sensitivity to the needs of your audience. What does your audience already know? What do they want out of your document? Where, when, and how are they going to use the document you create? These are some of the questions you want to ask yourself before you begin any writing task.

      Keeping the audience's purpose in mind is key for audience centered writing. It's essential to be aware and sensitive of the audience's needs.

    7. The writer recognizes, respects, and addresses the importance of the audience’s time by being clear, concise, and accessible. The writer strives for effective and efficient communication by providing documents written in specific formats, using unambiguous language to convey clearly accessible information. The reader in turn thoroughly processes the information in order to give a thoughtful response or take appropriate action.

      Using clear and concise language shows the audience that their time is valued. Also, by the writer striving to have documents in clear and unambiguous specific formats, it allows the reader to process the information and respond appropriately or take appropriate action.