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  1. Oct 2023
    1. Art is a time and travel machine.

      I love art for this very reason. I think it is fascinating to see how different art pieces reflect the time period and culture they are from.

    2. Can art make you a better person?

      I don't believe it is guaranteed to make you a better person, but it can. It can widen your horizon, it can give you a creative outlet, etc.

    3. I don't mean shock as in bad news or brutal murder or horrific catastrophe or embarrassing scandal

      But it also can do this too. Art has such a broad definition, what one person might not see as art, another will. There is good art, bad art, expected art, and shocking art.

    4. The Greeks,

      We learn a lot of a things from the Greeks, and it is no surprise that order, harmony, or structure are some of them. I always think of them as a sophisticated society.

    5. That is all it has to do.

      I like how this sentence is short and by itself. A previous English teacher of mine taught me to do this because it emphasizes the point we are trying to make.

    6. eighteen beauties

      I like how clearly the author of this lays out all this information to us readies, it makes it easy to understand and connect to our own reading experiences.

    7. Now how can you not want to read those novels? They pique the interest.

      This is the part of writing I have always struggled with since I was young, it feels so hard to get the right hook

    8. We're being asked to commit a lot of time and energy to an enterprise with very little in the way of guarantee of what’s in it for us.

      Honestly this is a really effective way of wording it. I hate when I get halfway through a book and decide I don't like it, because then I feel like I have to force myself to finish it.

    9. Every watch people in bookstores? They pull a book from a shelf, read the cover, then the back cover,

      I am those people. The cover, title, and summary has to be engaging for me, then i might read the first sentence.

    1. I feel very American when I share this with him, a relative stranger,

      I have a friend who was born in Ukraine and I remember her telling me how specifically American therapy was. Where she is from, they don't believe in it and will completely judge you for it.

    2. this feels like a kind of reinvention, now that I'm on my own, introducing myself as Joe rather than Jose,

      This makes me sad, you should be able to be accepted and still own your cultural history. It's unfortunate that those are often mutually exclusive

    3. finding myself living in that great metropolis of youthful energy that is Austin, Texas

      Austin!! My hometown city. I would definitely describe it as "youthful energy" as well, especially when comparing it to the other major cities of Texas.

    4. but thankfully they didn’t kill him, just kind of got this look of annoyance on their dog faces and decided to avoid this new poofter

      This seems reflective of the mimis experiences as teenagers

    5. Fear of going home

      I myself have not experienced, but I have a number of friends who have feared their family in regards to their sexuality and that is so frustrating to me.

    6. Culture and religion seek to protect us from these two forces.

      I actually really like the way this was phrased, it makes you think about all the different cultures and religions and how you can connect them to the supernatural.

    7. The culture expects women to show greater acceptance of, and commitment to, the value system than men.

      I will say that this is definitely a lot of cultures, including the specific one she is referencing. Although to go back to what I said previously, in my culture of a reform jew we are actually very progressive, so I can't relate to this part.

    8. Culture forms our beliefs. We perceive the version of reality that it communicates.

      This could not be more true in our society. I truly believe that every single person is impacted by the culture they grew up in. I myself am Jewish and share many of the opinions that I grew up around.

    9. I would pass many hours studying, reading, painting, writing

      This just shows the difference in cultures, because how I grew up this is not lazy at all, this is productive.

    10. I was the first in six generations to leave the Valley,

      That must have been so scary- to be the first to leave, to be the first to try and figure out other experiences. It's incredibly intimidating, but they felt that they had to and I can respect that.

    1. But when I’d come home, I was alone. I hated that.

      This poor kid :( just because she doesn't hit doesn't mean its a good relationship. She seems to be pretty absent.

    2. The earth is soft beneath me. The earth is solid.

      Reconnecting with nature is a really good for your mental health. It's also a way to deal with anxiety, especially how he said the earth is solid. That's called grounding.

    3. And it feels as if my insides have been scraped at, leaving parts of me raw that should never be touched.

      Intense simile, used to show just how painful it is having to deal with this.

    4. Before he ever said the word love, he said, “If they knew, my brother would fight over who’d put a bullet between my eyes.”

      This is so upsetting, people deserve to be able to love whom they choose in peace. I can't say its surprising though after the patriarchal tones of their society in the beginning.

    5. no one’s life depends on how awake I am.

      She probably works in healthcare. My parents do and I've heard them say on many occasions how important it is for them to get enough sleep for work.

    6. Most nights, when you’re at work, I go for long drives.

      I see some people saying their relationship is unhealthy, but honestly so far it just seems sweet to me. It seems natural and full of life.

    7. endless horizons and the wind and the heat and the sunsets and the rose-colored fog in the morning and the sugar cane burning and the river and driving to South Padre Island and the roasted corn and the shaved ice with syrup and El Pato’s and the botanas and the chorizo from San Manuel and the taquitos de trompo served with frijoles a la charra and baked potatoes and the cabrito al carbon on the other side of the border.

      This imagery is beautiful, It makes me want to experience that.

    8. Memory brought you here. Brought us here. Your history is here. Your family. Your parents and grandparents and great-grandparents. Your siblings and nieces and nephews. When we were in Ithaca, all you could talk about was how much you missed them.

      Now I am getting the impression that this story is about a couple, the speaker himself seems to have more traditional parents, but now that he is in his own relationship, he is creating his own values and opinions. Like how here he clearly is paying attention to his girlfriend(?) and followed her there.

    9. That it was the woman who was supposed to follow her husband.

      This seems to take place in a more 'traditional' place, either by location or time. Definitely a more patriarchal view, but then again the speaker said they don't care about it, so they possibly have a more progressive view.

    1. we all come from the same rock

      Because of this line, I believe that the author is not merely talking about welding, but about culture in the world. The melting pot that is Earth so to say.

    2. and mesmerize meyet repel me,

      I love the contrast of this beautiful and warm woman with this name, then compared to the actual cold and lonely meaning of the word

    3. I’d give my lifefor ten places there, certain folks,

      I like how true this line is. As a whole, this country is not perfect, yet there are still certain things in it that are special to everybody. To me its my family and friends, my hometown of Austin, the mountains of New Mexico, the beaches of California.

    4. the best of all because then the ocean that lives within

      I like the analogy of an ocean because like women, it's not simple. It's strong, mysterious, it can have a temper, but it can be calm. Don't mess with it.

    5. I kind of like the sound of bitch–

      This title immediately captured my attention. This term is generally used in a derogatory way, but I like the perspective this author is using. Its almost always used against a headstrong woman- what's wrong with a headstrong woman? Nothing. It's good to reclaim the term.

  2. Sep 2023
    1. my faith unbreakable,                        my blood is pure.I am Aztec prince and Christian Christ.                I SHALL ENDURE!                I WILL ENDURE!

      This is a very powerful ending

    2. The corridos tell the tales of life and death,of tradition,legends old and new,of joyof passion and sorrowof the people–who I am.

      The good, the bad: it's all important, because it makes you who you are.

    3. Who raped and killed.                        my love                        my wife.

      I am horrified that this happened

    4. I am Joaquín.

      I like the respective use of the title line. It reassures in the readers mine that he can still be himself whilst also being a part of his culture and history. It's not just a one time passing thought, it's who he's always been and always will be.

    5. Not one palm’s breadth

      I have never heard this phrasing before so I am honestly a little confused. From context clues, I presume it means that they didn't give away any of Mexico's land to any other groups?

    6. Mexico was free ? ?The crown was gone                        but all its parasites remained

      Was Mexico really free if the parasites (colonizers) remained? Especially considering how in modern day, we know there is more to come.

    7. I died with them. . . .I lived with them. . . .I lived to see our country free.

      I think this line is so important to the essence of this poem. His identity is made up of all his ancestors experiences, his countries experiences, his peoples experiences.

    8. confused by the rules,scorned by attitudes,suppressed by manipulation,and destroyed by modern society.

      My initial reaction to this sentence, before reading the rest of the poem, is that the theme of this poem regards ones identity in a foreign, aggressive land. In particular I assume Joaquin is either from Mexico and moved to America, or was born a Mexican-American. Either way it seems he has to deal with this both internal and external cultural conflict.