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  1. Aug 2025
    1. What features can I control?

      Even when the other person is negative, choosing the right communication style allows us to adapt effectively. So I think the offering of diverse options doesn't restrict customers' choices.

    2. multimodal project would include a combination of text, images, motion, or audio.

      Combining multiple modes gives more information to the audience. I think especially choosing a mode is crucial for people who tend not to listen and accept.

    1. Narrowing your search is a crucial part of the research process. With a subject or question that is too broad, you run the risk of trying to cover too much in a single research projec

      This shows how much you know about the topic is. Especially, I do when I read academic research because this process makes me better understand the concept.

    2. oogle is certainly useful, but granting it too much power can cause problems, particularly when it comes to finding information relevant to your research topic. This chapter gives you the tools to use Google and other search engines so that you can decide which results are most relevant to your project.

      I agree with this idea because it provides unclear information. And we need to make sure the source is correct or not. In this century, we need to gain skills to check the accuracy.

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    1. Talking Back Bell Hooks In the world of southern black community I grew up in "back talk" and "talking back" meant speaking as an equal to an authority figu

      The title is so impressive because the author experienced as a minor in society, was forced to be quiet in it. So this title isn't just talk about and against ideas. It mean having own idea and voice against authority and clam own position.

    1. We especially like this template because it suggests that “they say / I say” argument need not be mechanical, impersonal, or dry, and that telling a story and mak-ing an argument are more compatible activities than many think.

      I think template isn't just a grammatic stuff, it's a map and it takes us to understand deeper. I personally like this part because it's a communication tool. So I think I need to care more who I'm writting to and what I want to tell them.

    2. The central rhetorical move that we focus on in this book is the “they say / I say” template that gives our book its title. In our view, this template represents the deep, underlying structure, the internal DNA as it were, of all effective argument. Effective persuasive writers do more than make well-supported claims (“I say”); they also map those claims relative to the claims of others (“they say”)

      This part is so impressive because this is the main part of this whole essay. Without saying other's' ideas, the readers' idea sounds subjective. I felt this main argument is important like the one I've read before in this class.

    1. It seems to me that the City of New York, for example – this is my last point – It’s had Negroes in it for a very long time. If the city of New York were able, as it has indeed been able, in the last fifteen years to reconstruct itself,

      This is a good point about what American dream is. There's a story both black and white, so we need to accept both size to become American dream. So this points are so strong as a international student.

    2. Now, I suggest that of all the terrible things that can happen to a human being, that is one of the worst. I suggest that what has happened to white Southerners is in some ways, after all, much worse than what has happened to Negroes there because Sheriff Clark in Selma, Alabama, cannot be considered – you know, no one can be dismissed as a total monster.

      The section is so impressive becasue specific minoriry contribute nation's development. I realize the present wealth level based on their sacrifices.

    3. It comes as a great shock around the age of 5, or 6, or 7, to discover that the flag to which you have pledged allegiance, along with everybody else, has not pledged allegiance to you.

      This part had a huge impact and strong message in it. It makes childrens realize the diffrence and feeling of inferiority. I usually think this view, so it was good notice about another people's situation.

    4. find myself, not for the first time, in the position of a kind of Jeremiah. For example, I don’t disagree with Mr. Burford that the inequality suffered by the American Negro population of the United States has hindered the American dream. Indeed, it has. I quarrell with some other things he has to say. The other, deeper, element of a certain awkwardness I feel has to do with one’s point of view. I have to put it that way – one’s sense, one’s system of reality. It would seem to me the proposition before the House, and I would put it that way, is the American Dream at the expense of the American Negro, or the American Dream *is* at the expense of the American Negro. Is the question hideously loaded, and then one’s response to that question – one’s reaction to that question – has to depend on effect and, in effect, where you find yourself in the world, what your sense of reality is, what your system of reality is. That is, it depends on assumptions which we hold so deeply so as to be scarcely aware of them.

      This first part mentions differences in real life. I think this is more huge problem more than da iscrimination problems.

    1. The nice thing about this benefit is that it can be had no matter what the content of the core curriculum is. It could be the classics of western literature and philosophy. It could be science fiction. It could be globalization. It could be anything so long as every student took it. But whatever it is, please let it include a writing course that teaches writing and not everything under the sun.That should be the real core of any curriculum.

      I like the way it explains because it describes same carriculum as a common conversation. They care about more shared experiences than objects.

    2. Nevertheless, I found myself often nodding in agreement when I was reading ACTA’s new report. In it, the 100 colleges and universities are ranked on a scale from A to F based on whether students are required to take courses in seven key areas — composition, literature, foreign language, U.S. government or history, economics, mathematics and natural or physical science.

      It's kind of interesting because the author disagrees with ACTA. But both are same position about correct way of teaching in educational fields.

    1. And that’s my exact argument, that we all should know everybody’s dialect,at least as many as we can, and be open to the mix of them in oral and writtencommunication (Young)

      Young mentioned we should respect of others backgrounds, and doubts code-switching. Educational institution support single academic system because of its simplicity.

    2. He say dont nostudent have a rite to they own language if that language make them “vulnerableto prejudice”; that “it may be true that the standard language is [...] a device forprotecting the status quo, but that very truth is a reason for teaching it to students”(Fish “Part 3”

      This is the main theme of this essay. Student should write their own words in any academic work, but sometimes it is hard to do it. Including me, no one doubts the academic norm.

    1. I went to Austin because I wanted to be a different kind of listener than these patients had generally known: doctors winking at their residents, friends biting their lips, skeptics smiling in smug bewilderment. But wanting to be different doesn’t make you so. Paul told me his crazy-ass symptoms and I didn’t believe him. Or at least, I didn’t believe him the way he wanted to be believed. I didn’t believe there were parasites laying thousands of eggs under his skin, but I did believe he suffered as if there were. Which was typical. I was typical. In writing this essay, how am I doing something he wouldn’t understand as betrayal? I want to say, I heard you. To say: I pass no judgments. But I can’t say these things to him. So instead I say this: I think he can heal. I hope he does.

      This part describes author's gap between real and ideal imagination. It's hard to be free from self-recognition while seeking others's empathy and understanding. It tells me the limitation of human empathy.

    2. I ask her about this phrase, “female stuff.” It’s like heart disease, she explains. For a long time, women’s heart attacks were misdiagnosed or even ignored because doctors assumed that these patients were simply anxious or overly emotional. I realize Dawn’s disease has been consistently, quietly embedded in a tradition that goes all the way back to nineteenth-century hysteria. She says her co-workers — the nurses, not the doctors — have been remarkably empathetic. Now they come to her whenever they find something strange or unexpected in a wound. She’s become an expert in the inexplicable.

      In this part, the disease is considered as a female stuff, and didn't care about it. This point is so meaningful and makes me understand her situation at the time. And also it connected to the this essay topic of emphasis and doubt.

  3. Jul 2025
    1. Teachers, as a result, could be more preciseand helpful when they ask students to "think," "argue," "de-scribe," or "define."

      They are already in deep understanding fields, so it's good to talk about the concept that we have a quetsion about. In academic, we are reqquireed to describe on our words, not a copy. At that time we need a someone who correct and guide us. So in that terms I agree they could more precious and helpful.

    2. He is trying onthe discourse even though he doesn't have the knowledge

      This part is so remarkable becasue in academic fields we need to step in deep under standing. Also We have to talk to the porple who alredy have deep understanding about a concept like a professor. This shows big step into academic world without enough preparation, but it's a important step.

    1. When other races have given up their tongue, we've keptourS.

      It's a so strong opinion. They passed their language , which more than just a communication tool to next generation. We have to be aware of this context when we see an unknown stuff.

    2. Chicano Spanish is not incorrect, itis a living language

      I agree with your opinion. She knows it's not a majority but it expresses it a s a essential stuff for her life. It shows how she've been kiving so far and tells us what kinds of back ground she has. I like this part she mentioned it 's not more than language, which means the object creates her identities.

    3. Their purpose: to get rid of our accent

      In this part ,hey try to fix acccent from her. But it is her personality and represent herself. I would assume they scared of unknow object and tried not to face this situation.

    1. The single story creates stereotypes, and the problem with stereotypes is not that they are untrue, but that they are incomplete. They make one story become the only story.

      This is what I think about this type of topic. Pople always assume about unknown object and it causes misunderstanding. So we need understand context and background in any case.

    2. It is impossible to talk about the single story without talking about power.

      One side story cause side effect like a discriminationa and stereotype. The story needs more diversity, which means contexst does matter in any case. Without this notice, it emphasize the diffrence not the common part.

    3. e asked where I had learned to speak English so well, and was confused when I said that Nigeria happened to have English as its official language. She asked if she could listen to what she called my "tribal music," and was consequently very disappointed when I produced my tape of Mariah Carey.

      It happens so I totally understnad what sh think and feel. It's just types of stereotype, but somtimes it hurts someone's feeling. I feel she is glad her room mate's asking, but asking these quetion creates another stereotype: American don't know outside of U.S. This is vice versa. So this part has so heavy meaning I think.

    4. wrote exactly the kinds of stories I was reading: All my characters were white and blue-eyed, they played in the snow, they ate apples,

      In this part, she well understand situation fro, objective position because of her early childhood experiences. I'm wondering too why so many of these types of stories are so famous.

    1. But Fermat’s principle sounds weird because itdescribes light’s behavior in goal-oriented terms. It sounds like acommandment to a light beam: ‘Thou shalt minimize or maximizethe time taken to reach thy destination.

      In this part, It contrasts the differnce of launguage understanding process. In human languagae, theyy assume results from the problem, but the future was already decided in new language. This contrast is interesting and this description is so unique.

    2. twasstrangetryingtolearnalanguagethathadnospokenform. Insteadofpracticingmypronunciation,Ihadtakentosqueez-ingmyeyesshutandtryingtopaintsemagramsontheinsidesofmyeyelids

      This launguage requires to understnad entire grammatic system first. So throughout this experiense his sense of understanding changed. It makes him lerned new skills to think near future.

    1. While my English skills were never judged as poor, compared tomath, English could not be considered my strong suit. In grade school I did moderately well, gettingperhaps B's, sometimes B-pluses, in English and scoring perhaps in the sixtieth or seventieth percentile o

      I think the inability of single-answer tests to capture her individuality. And this Multifaceted thinking caused her considerable distress.

    2. And when the doctor finallycalled her daughter, me, who spoke in perfect English -- lo and behold -- we had assurances the CAT scanwould be found, promises that a conference call on Monday would be held, and apologies for any sufferingmy mother had gone through for a most regrettable mistake

      I knew this story, but this part is an important part for me and reminds me a lot. Instead of needing to speak perfectly, it was the very effort to achieve that perfection that caused distress for Amy Tan and her mother. Her mother's broken English led to her not being taken seriously by society. But accepting all the Englishes led to her success as a writer.

    1. Andwherethewordsofwomenarecryingtobeheard,wemusteachofusrecognizeourresponsibilitytoseekthosewordsout,toreadthemandsharethemandexaminethemintheirpertinencetoourlives

      This part shows the offense directed at Black women by others, and she emphasizes the importance of recognizing this situation."

    2. Lessthantwomonthsago,Iwastoldbytwodoctors,onefemaleandonemale,thatIwouldhavetohavebreastsurgery,andthattherewasa60to80percentchancethatthetumorwasmalignant.Betweenthetellingandtheactualsurgery,therewasathreeweekperiodoftheagonyofandinvoluntaryreorganizationofmyentirelife.Thesurgerywascompleted,andthegrowthwasbenign

      In this section, she compares silence due to illness with silence as a minority experience. This point reminded me of the importance of speaking up against mental and social death.