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  1. Feb 2020
    1. Even if the picture is something that you remember being a bad day, a bad game, or even a good day/game; you can learn something from it making it more memorable

      Great way to end your essay!!

    2. I noticed myself make connections and relationships with the people most similar to me and accepted the people who were the complete opposite of me

      i like the way that you include things that you've noticed

    3. It helped me find patience and tolerance for mistakes, by showing me and that you can’t always be a winner but you can always learn something new from losing.

      i like the way that you said this because since im an athlete as well i can relate

    4. I believe that in order to love who you are, you need to take into consideration the experiences that shaped you into that person throughout your life; that’s why the question “Who am I?”

      I like the way that you started off you essay

    1. Dr. Mazur, the looking glass self is, “Cooley's theory of self is one in which we learn who we are through our interactions with others. ... Cooley believed that it is through these interactions that one begins to develop an idea of who they are; therefore, the self is a product of our social interactions.

      I like the way that you brought this connection into your essay