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  1. Nov 2024
    1. ta set, with categorizations beyond the binary removed, any face not categorized as a woman was categorized as a man

      not sure I get this. can you be concrete?

    2. of unsure and I don’t know counted as I don’t know

      unclear whether "other" and "I don't know" variables overlap. I do not think so, right? So, if one variable is 1, the other must be 0. Plz clarify

    3. other category

      I am confused. Do you mean they had to choose the "other" category? So why do you say "any other category"? This means that don't know is also included.

    4. After being allocated to one of the three conditions,

      feels out of place. either mention earlier or delete (you already said it is between Ss)

    5. only woman and man; 2) woman, man and other and 3) an open text box for participants to type in their resp

      why not introduce the labels here (instead of burying them in design?). Maybe have labels in parentheses, and in the design, you describe more

    6. Participants included 33 women, 35 men, and 2 participants who did not indicate gender (self-identified gender was measured using an open-ended text box, fol

      reads awkward

  2. Oct 2024
    1. however, only illustrates the total number of categorizations across all participants

      I wonder whether this should be combined with the next paragraph because they belong together.

    2. We fit the data to Bayesian mixed-effects models. In all models, facial gender (0 to 100 in seven steps) and response options (one-dimensional, two-dimensional) were included as fixed effects. Additionally, all models included varying intercepts for both participants and trials and varying slopes for facial gender. Exploratory plotting of the data suggested that the relationship between facial gender and rated gender was non was non-linear, suggesting that modelling which treated facial gender as a linear predictor would be misspecified

      see my comments above.

      maybe just say "same as in Study 1?)

    3. so other = 1 and all other responses = 0.

      I do not think APA likes this style of mixing running text with symbols.

      other = 1

      vs

      other was coded as 1

    4. and some participants were more categorical than others in their ratings.

      I would get rid of this because it implies some test of an individual's categorical style.

    5. separate continua

      unclear what this refers to: The woman/man continua or the two conditions. If only continua, then does order of trials apply only to the two-dimensional condition?

    6. he woman continuum and once using the man continuum. In the woman continuum, the anchors were marked not woman and woman. In the man continuum the anchors were marked not man and man.

      more efficient in one sentence: once on a woman continuum (anchors were not woman and woman) and once on a man ...

      (you have to add italics, of course :)

    7. igure 8 illustrates the median and interquartile range proportion of faces categorized as women (in this data set, with categorizations beyond the binary removed, any face not categorized as a woman was categorized as a man)

      this sentence first before you tell about actual content

    8. he difference is so stark, we do not feel that inferential statistics add any more information, but the curious reader may find these in the supplemental materi

      sounds odd. Can you at least have one analysis? And say rest is in supplementary?

    9. e Figure 6 ). Participants who only categorized faces as women or men are not represented in figure Figure 6.

      get rid of Figure 6 reps. If you start "As shown in Figure 6, ..." I would read this to mean that everything is from the figure until you tell me differently.

    10. illustrates how many categorizations (y-axis) beyond the binary participants made. Each bar represents how many participants (y-axis) made a certain number of categorizations (x-axis). The different colors denote the different categorizations

      swap previous and these sentences

    11. illustrates how many participants (x-axis) categorized how many faces (y-axis) according to the categories “other” and “don’t know” (different colors) across the two experimental conditio

      swap order of 1st and 2nd sentence. First, say what is shown. Second, what is the take home msg

    12. all participants were informed that participation was voluntary and gave written consent to participate in the study

      same as 2 sentences before

    13. suggests that categorical perception was not reduced by two-dimensional response options

      bake together with previous sentence? "Results suggested that cat perception [your text] was not reduced ... (numbers here)"

    14. The pattern of scores was non-linear

      unclear what "pattern of scores" refers to. I guess you mean something with morphing steps. plz clarify

      Unclear if this has to be true or whether it was something observed in the data

    15. We fit the data to Bayesian mixed-effects models to test the categorical effects. In a

      It would be nice if you first describe the different variables. Morph level (seven steps from 0 to 100%), response options (one-dimensional, two-dimensional). It makes it easier to follow.

    16. different trials, and the order of trials was completely rand

      not sure I get this. You mean that each face was rated twice? Once on woman continuum and once one man continuum, and order of all trials was random? If so, please clarify

    17. one-dimensional

      italicize these labels

      do you need to say "one-dimensional control". How about "one-dimensional" and explain in a sentence that this is control.

    18. The morphs were made in 7 steps, from completely feminine to completely masculine

      can you share these images? Would be concrete. Also, would save time for others instead of reinventing the wheel.

  3. May 2024
    1. In comparison to self-identification questions where open-ended responses are seen as the most inclusive alternative (Lindqvist et al., 2020), the categorization of others benefits from response options that explicitly remind participants that not all people identify as women or men.

      well put!

    2. Experiment 2 indicated that participants categorize beyond the binary when response options include more options than women and men only. However, the free text option did not differ from the binary option. Thus, the multiple categories condition, with its explicitly stated non-binary options seems to act as reminders to participants. Furthermore, categorization within the binary was not skewed by the addition of multiple categories or the free text option, meaning that the ratio of women and men categorizations was still about 50/50. This did not systematically affect their overall pattern of responses in terms of woman and man categorizations.

      content is nice but writing could be clearer

    3. n facial gender and binary categorization (i.e. the slope of facial gender) across the conditions

      can you add the slopes for each condition and explain what they mean? Then, the comparison is easier to follow

    4. (Difference = 0, CI =[-0.02, 0.03], BF01= 394.93). The effect of facial femininity on woman categorizations almost was the same in the free text and binary categories (Difference > 0.001, CI =[-0.02, 0.02], BF01= 394.93).

      almost identical results? Same BF?

    5. Overall rates of b

      Figure 8 shows .... The figure suggests that ...

      is it odd that the figure shows only woman categorizations?

      Intuitive question: what about man categorizations? Actually, doesn't figure 5 suggest that man categorizations decreased?

    6. outside the binary

      confusing because Fig 5 includes ALL responses

      maybe have Figure 5 as a general figure? Then the headings? But, I think the headings do not help much

    7. There was also a clear differenc

      sounds vague. Isn't this a close up of the effect in the first paragraph?

      "To examine effects in terms of other and don't know responses, Figure 6 ...."

    8. Figure

      I learned that one should first introduce a figure in terms of a general description of what the figure depicts (ie what is on x and y axis). I think this would be useful to do for your figures, particularly the later ones.

      I just saw that you did this for Figure 6, nice! Plz add for the others

    9. summing variations of “other” and “non-binary” and dichotomizing this new index

      unclear how you mean summing and then dichotomizing

    10. binary categories, free text, and multiple categorie

      personally, I would say "three options" and then italicize the terms when you explain each condition.

    11. The experiment used a between-participants design

      could move this to under participants. Mention that there were three groups and sample size for each.

    12. The experiment used a between-participants design. The two conditions were the one-dimensional (control condition), and two-dimension

      you could have this design info under participants. There, it would fit to say that you ended up with two groups

    13. In short, the stimuli comprised a multiracial set of faces morphed to vary in terms of facial gender. We defined facial gender as the degree of the female face present in the morph. In other words, a 33 face was slightly tilted toward the man, a 50 face was an even mixture and a 100 consisted only of the woman’s face. Because there were 18 pairs morphed in 7 steps, the total number of faces was 126.

      I would delete this.

    14. facial gender as the degree of the female face present in the morph

      facial gender sounds too generic for me. It threw me off when reading Figure 3

    15. Study 2 compared a control condition consisting of standard binary response options to two alternatives: a third gender option (such as ‘non-binary’ or ‘other’) and an open text box for participants to type in their respons

      content great but difficult to parse. plz edit

    16. However,

      Fig 3: facial gender on X axis actually refers to % female morph level, right?

      does the right panel have twice the number of ratings (ie female and male for each subject)?

    17. ost participants display a non-linear S-shape and this was also the pattern of the group means.

      unclear how you dealt with "man" rating in 2-dimensional scale

    18. arked “not woman” and “woman”; in the “man” continuum the anchors were marked “not man” and “man”. The separate continua were presented on different trials and the order of trials

      to be honest, I would not include the [man] in the right of figure 2. I find it better to read about it in the text.

    19. binary gender

      why binary here?

      I liked that before, you refer to two processes: - categorization of others - categorical effect Can you use the same terms here?

    20. All participants were informed that participation was voluntary and gave written consent to participate in the study.

      do you need more on ethics? According to Helsinki declaration or sth?

    21. one-dimensional response options and two-dimensional response options. If one-dimensional scales influence participants to think of gender as binary and opposites and two-dimensional scales don’t do this, there should be a reduced categorical e

      if you want to be super clear, you could spell out what is meant by one-dimensional and two-dimensional.

      Eg one-dimensional response options (ranging from female to male) ...

    22. investigate the influencing effect of one and two-dimensional response options by investigating whether participa

      "investigate .... by investigating" makes it confusing. Plz edit

    23. faces

      maybe first say that this is about categorization of others. Then, you can hint at that we asked participants to categorize faces. I think it would also be nice to get 1-2 sentences on what the two studies are about. One gets curious because you say "we report two studies". Maybe you do not need to talk about the present research here? I would skip this here

    24. to 80% of participants

      does this 80% throw off readers? I wondered whether it has something to do with the 60%. How about saying "by most participants", maybe like this "although a 60% female morph contains only slightly more female than male features, most participants categorized this female morph as female."

    25. esearch on how people perceive and categorize the gender of others has used both dimensional scales as well as discrete categories, but in both cases almost exclusively treats gender as a binary catego

      run on: can you make 2 sentences of this.

    26. “androgynous”,

      odd that you have "" but not for agender. I would delete ""

      I believe according to APA, you should italicize the first time you use this label. After that, write it without formatting.

    27. see Carleton et al., 2022; Cronin et al., 2022; D’Agostino et al., 2022 for some recent example

      I would spell out at least one example

      As it is, it is unclear what context these practices refer to.

    28. Impact

      I learned that impact is a very strong word that should be reserved for contexts of catastrophes (like the impact of a storm). I prefer "Effects of response options". If possible, even bake in the take-home msg

  4. Mar 2024
    1. We found that only multiple categories elicited beyond-binary responses. Compared to binary control, neither changed the pattern of categorizations of women and men

      is this in results?

    2. For example, does categorization of faces as non-binary systematically decrease “woman” categorization. We therefore investigated inclusive response options changed participants overall tendency to categorize women and men.

      figure suggests that effects are in the categorization of men, not women