Yes, describing races would be good, especially since you mention them in the Issues section.

should this be mods.csv?

don't see why it needs to be centered. If justified left it makes a smaller box, right?

...displayed in the right hand column

charts

imagine

I suggest is adding more description about Skyrim to help people visualize it...

What is Skyrim? It is a role playing game created by Bethesda Game Studios that takes place in Skyrim on the continent Tamriel. It has beautiful mountains and forests, but is also torn apart by civil war between the Stormcloak Rebellion and the Imperial Legion. The player develops a character from countless races and works to improve their attributes through fighting, magic, and stealth. Because Skyrim is set in a vast fantasy world it is often heavily modded. Mods are modifications to a game.

regard - should always be singular in this kind of phrase. One sends their regards In regard to your last letter, thanks for the advice.

These phrases aren't necessary, I'd take all of them out.

with regard

I think this Extra page is extraneous. At least for beginners. You cover a lot of information, especially since you included mini tutorials. When I saw the section titled "Extra" it made me shiver. I was doing so well and then there is Extra to learn! Thankfully, this page was mostly blank. :)

Okay, now I see. You added the steps that I asked for above in "More Posts". You might consider moving the "Media in Markdown" section (located in "More Posts") to this Media section. I can see someone getting confused and wondering where the instructions are for inserting an image on a page. (My first guess would be to go to the Media tutorial)

Along with instructions for adding the header image, it would help to include steps for inserting an image into a post or page. I had difficulty realizing that when I add an image, it goes into that pages folder and that to insert in on the page, I just needed to add the image title. (no having to identify a path or url for the image.)

Does it matter what size the image is?

I would add this section to the Media tutorial

Could use more instruction on adding images to pages.

I think you need a new screenshot here to show link

need closed parenthesis inside **

Why do I need to add the Archives plugin? What does it do?

I think it may possible to take this paragraph out or simplify substantially.

Why do I need to remove Typography? Just wondering

Such a good way to ease anxiety for newbies!

audiences (no possessive needed)

Open Refine - capitalized because it's a proper name.

the University of Oklahoma's Interim Dean of Libraries

lowercase: higher education institutions

love this statement!

openly

scholars (no apostrophe)

another possible way to phrase it: ...scholars generate innovative ways to communicate

one's

...can receive consultation from the Digital Learning Office or Digital Scholarship Lab to....

promotes an

academic scholarly practice

highlights

DS Librarians provide conferences to support the exploration of open resources to be embedded within various academic pedagogy. DS also fosters transdisciplinary relationships between libraries and academic institutions.

Same here, I recommend adding headings.

tolerance

forced

This is a long section of text. While it is very interesting and important to include, it needs to be broken up for this online format. Consider adding headings for each of your paragraphs. For example: (p1) Congress Kingdom; (p2) Breaking Up the Commonwealth; (p3&4) Migration

even compared to contemporary ...standards? times?

serves

surprise

speaking

Too many words. How about Before the partition or Immediately before the partition?

I think is important. What is Anne thinking?????

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