Which of the following reasons best recommend taking Expository Writing to other students who need to satisfy their General Education Writing Requirement?
Which of the following benefits would lead you to recommend Expo to students
Which of the following reasons best recommend taking Expository Writing to other students who need to satisfy their General Education Writing Requirement?
Which of the following benefits would lead you to recommend Expo to students
Qx. How do you think your writing and/or your identity as a writer has changed upon completing Expository Writing? Drag the slider beneath the word that best describes how you have changed as a writer.
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Qx. How do you think your writing and/or your identity as a writer has changed upon completing Expository Writing? Drag the slider beneath the word that best describes how you have changed as a writer.
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What of the following research or writing skills and strategies taught and practiced in Expository Writing have you used in other undergraduate classes?
Same as above.
Have the following research or writing strategies and skills commonly taught and practiced in Expository Writing improved or strengthened your writing?
For below:
Freewriting to brainstorm essay ideas or arguments
The “Elements of the Essay” have been central to Expository Writing pedagogy since its inception. Please use the sliding scale below to rank how useful the “Elements” have been in the writing you've done in other undergraduate classes at OU.
"Expository Essay"
The “Elements of the Essay” have been central to Expository Writing pedagogy since its inception. Please use the sliding scale below to rank how useful the “Elements” have been in the writing you've done in other undergraduate classes at OU.
Fancy!
Which TWO of the characteristic features of Expository Writing pedagogy that you selected in Q3a have MOST improved or strengthened your writing?
Circles below instead of squares? I'd suggest sticking with one.
Which of the following characteristic features of Expository Writing pedagogy improved or strengthened your writing? You may choose more than one characteristic feature.
"instruction" instead of "pedagogy"?
Which of the following characteristic features of Expository Writing pedagogy improved or strengthened your writing? You may choose more than one characteristic feature.
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Viewing Writing as Process and . . .
Also, standard capitalization makes most sense to me.
they completed.
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survey
drawing? [any chance we could make it more or have more than one?]
study
study.
Schneider, Sara K. “Body Design, Variable Realisms: The Case of Female Fashion Mannequins.” Design Issues, vol. 13, no. 3, 1997.
Schneider, Sara K. “Body Design, Variable Realisms: The Case of Female Fashion Mannequins.” Design Issues, vol. 13, no. 3, The MIT Press, 1997, pp. 5–18, https://doi.org/10.2307/1511936.
Rodgers, Rachel F. Ziff, Sara. Lowy, Alice. Yu, Kimberly. Austin, Bryn. “Results of a strategic science study to inform policies targeting extreme thinness standards in the fashion industry.” International Journal of Eating Disorders. Vol 50. no 3. March 2017. pp .284-292.
Rodgers, Rachel F., et al. “Results of a Strategic Science Study to Inform Policies Targeting Extreme Thinness Standards in the Fashion Industry.” International Journal of Eating Disorders, vol. 50, no. 3, Mar. 2017, pp. 284–292. EBSCOhost, doi:10.1002/eat.22682.
Ogden, Jane, and Sheriden Russell. “How Black Women Make Sense of ‘White’ and ‘Black’ Fashion Magazines: A Qualitative Think-Aloud Study.” Journal of Health Psychology, vol. 18, no. 12, Dec. 2013. pp. 1588–1600.
Ogden, Jane, and Sheriden Russell. “How Black Women Make Sense of ‘White’ and ‘Black’ Fashion Magazines: A Qualitative Think Aloud Study.” Journal of Health Psychology, vol. 18, no. 12, Dec. 2013, pp. 1588–1600, doi:10.1177/1359105312465917.
Madden, Devin. Breny, Jean M. “‘How Should I Be?’ A Photovoice Exploration Into Body Image Messaging for Young Women Across Ethnicities and Cultures.” Health Promotion Practice, vol. 17, no. 3, May 2016, pp. 440–447.
Madden, Devin, and Jean M. Breny. “‘How Should I Be?’ A Photovoice Exploration Into Body Image Messaging for Young Women Across Ethnicities and Cultures.” Health Promotion Practice, vol. 17, no. 3, May 2016, pp. 440–447, doi:10.1177/1524839915618363.
Lovejoy, Meg. “Disturbances in the Social Body: Differences in Body Image and Eating Problems among African American and White Women.” Gender and Society, vol. 15, no. 2, 2001, pp. 239–261.
Lovejoy, Meg. “Disturbances in the Social Body: Differences in Body Image and Eating Problems among African American and White Women.” Gender and Society, vol. 15, no. 2, Sage Publications, Inc., 2001, pp. 239–61, http://www.jstor.org/stable/3081846.
Heider, N., Spruyt, A. and De Houwer, J., 2018. “Body Dissatisfaction Revisited: On the Importance of Implicit Beliefs about Actual and Ideal Body Image.” Psychologica Belgica, 57(4), pp.158–173.
Heider, Niclas et al. “Body Dissatisfaction Revisited: On the Importance of Implicit Beliefs about Actual and Ideal Body Image.” Psychologica Belgica vol. 57,4 158-173. 4 Jan. 2018, doi:10.5334/pb.362
Dolce, Jeffrey J., Thompson, J. Kevin, Register, Angela, and Richard E. Spana. “Generalization of body size distortion.” International Journal of Eating Disorders. Vol 6. no 3. May 1987. p. 401-408
Docle, Jeffrey J., et al. “Generalization of Body Size Distortion.” International Journal of Eating Disorders, vol. 6, no. 3, May 1987, pp. 401–408. EBSCOhost, doi:10.1002/1098-108X(198705)6:3401::AID-EAT22600603103.0.CO;2-Z.
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Smitha,
Body Dysmorphia
"Body Dysmorphia Disorder."
DeBraganza, Ninoska. Hausenblas, Heather A. “Media Exposure of the Ideal Physique on Women’s Body Dissatisfaction and Mood: The Moderating Effects of Ethnicity.” Journal of Black Studies, vol. 40, no. 4, 2010, pp. 700–716.
DeBraganza, Ninoska, and Heather A. Hausenblas. “Media Exposure Ot the Ideal Physique on Women’s Body Dissatisfaction and Mood: The Moderating Effects of Ethnicity.” Journal of Black Studies, vol. 40, no. 4, Sage Publications, Inc., 2010, pp. 700–16, http://www.jstor.org/stable/40648536.
Coy-Dibley, I. “’Digitized Dysmorphia’ of the female body: the re/disfigurement of the image.” Palgrave Commun 2, 16040 (2016).
Coy-Dibley, Isabelle. “'Digitised dysmorphia'” of the female body: the re/disfigurement of the image." Palgrave Communications, 2:16040, doi: 10.1057/palcomms.2016.40.
. Reviewed on June 30, 2020.
, https://www.webmd.com/mental-health/mental-health-body-dysmorphic-disorder.
Argo, Jennifer J. Dahl, Darren W. “Standards of Beauty: The impact of Mannequins in the Retail Context.” Journal of Consumer Research. Vol 44. no 5. February 2018, pp. 974-990.
Argo, Jennifer J., and Darren W. Dahl. “Standards of Beauty: The Impact of Mannequins in the Retail Context.” Journal of Consumer Research, vol. 44, no. 5, Feb. 2018, pp. 974–990. EBSCOhost, doi:10.1093/jcr/ucx072.
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that thigh
skinny thighs
revealing that within their own communities, they are encouraged to not conform to the mainstream beauty standards,
being encouraged within their own communities not to conform to the mainstream beauty standards,
body but
body, but
My personal experience with body dysmorphia and body dissatisfaction made me wonder how many women like me are also struggling with the same issues but may not realize it. In addition to these findings, the
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asserts
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2001
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strong, abled
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school, right?
It seems as if they only included white women as victims who suffer while excluding women of color.
Cut or rephrase. This sentence confuses me in that she seems to suggesting that women of color being left out of body image issues is a bad thing. I see where she's going with this in the next section, but I still think it better to cut this sentence.
While it is clear that society has fostered a culture that implements an ideal body image promoting whiteness and thinness as the standard of beauty, it is damaging to contend that all white women respond negatively to the promotion of thin physiques.
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impacts many
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in providing insight into the specific responses that women have developed as a result of the ideal body image promoted in society. Recent studies like these shed
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further normalizes
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styles
tools
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“Overall, models reported high levels of pressure to lose weight from their agencies and reported having been “often” or “always” told by their agencies in the past year to tone up (44%), lose weight (36%), or adopt a new diet or exercise regimen (32%)… Furthermore, models reported having been “often” or “always” told by their agencies in the past year that they would be more successful if they lost weight”
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the following:
like the one conducted by Argo and Dahl
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1997
Should be page number based on citation below but I have no idea which one.
1997
Should be page number based on citation below but I have no idea which one.
Schneider, 11
Schneider 11
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time,
have to change
have changed
In the discussion of body image, body dissatisfaction has become a prevalent problem among women, especially young girls within the western world. On one hand, some might argue that it is a problem concerning individual women undergoing an internal struggle regarding their body image. On the other hand, psychologists contend that body dissatisfaction develops when appearance-oriented individuals receive negative feedback about their appearance, as Heilder previously defined it.
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through an ethnocultural lens
Move to right after "I want to understand" in above sentence and cut the rest of this sentence.
thinness, has
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Psychologists and health providers have been able to conduct studies focused on exploring the correlation between the feelings of anxiety and body dissatisfaction to the promotion of unhealthy body images using interactive photovoice exploration and questionnaires.
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Much
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WebMD
Bhandari
dysmorphia is
dysmorphia, is
et al, 158
et al. 158
living in our current
in contemporary [less wordy and awkward]
(Anonymous)
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Tulsa, OK
Tulsa, Oklahoma, [I much prefer Oklahoma to OK for numerous reasons, but I defer to you, Editor.]
October
Oct.
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, 21 Oct. 2024, https://www.duncanbanner.com/news/court-filings-say-alan-hruby-choked-mom-two-years-ago/article_eb0b8074-58d5-11e4-8582-cb01ff5e5ae9.html.
. 22 October 2014. Web.
, 22 Oct. 2014, https://www.oklahoman.com/article/5359141/alan-hrubys-social-media-activity-since-2012.
Staff Reports.
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Vol. 2. Ed. J. Harold Ellis. London: Praeger,
Edited by J. Harold Ellis, vol. 2, Praeger,
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Powell, Kelsey.
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back.'" (qtd. in Dodd et al.).
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(qtd. in Dodd et al.).
Dodd, Johnny. “Deadly Betrayal.” People. Vol. 82 No. 19. 3 November 2014. Web.
Dodd, Johnny, et al. “Deadly Betrayal.” People, vol. 82, no. 19, Nov. 2014, pp. 52–55. EBSCOhost, search-ebscohost-com.ezproxy.lib.ou.edu/login.aspx?direct=true&db=aph&AN=99042628&site=ehost-live.
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welcomes death penalty 100 percent.” The Oklahoman. 12 July 2015. Web.
Are we using second line on indents or no?
2015. Web.
Oklahoman. 12
Oklahoman, 12
myth, and
myth and [no comma needed here]
Alan—and
Alan, and [em dash seems strange here]
are…overwhelming
are . . . overwhelming
Hruby…
Hruby . . .
2012 “Duncan
2012, "Duncan
The Daily Oklahoman
"Alan Hruby's social media"
took
posted
upper middle class
upper-middle-class
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like?' . . . In
ordered
had ordered.
blacked out Jeep
blacked-out Jeep [this term usually applies to doing more than just tinting the windows but I don't want to change it]
rivalry”
rivalry,"
you…the
you . . . the
card…By
card . . . By
asking “What
asking, "What
form these
the form in which these
The Daily Oklahoman
("Alan Hruby's social media").
reveals
revealed
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one," he sighed.
“why?” What could drive a seemingly normal college freshman, whom everyone thought they knew so well, to kill his entire family?
"Why? What . . . family?" [Putting the whole thing in quotation marks seems best to me.]
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space . space . space . space [MLA formatting]
stone- faced
stone-faced
murder
homicide [sounds better to me here]
volleyball regional
regional volleyball
2014 seemed
2014, seemed
note-worthy
noteworthy
Duncan OK
Duncan, Oklahoma,