As the bus pulled away from the stop, I looked out the window, relaxed but attentive to any possible new details.
Everything after this sentence I completely deleted and rewrote. I already knew the main points I was trying to get across in the original piece but realized the project was unclear, as I introduced many different ideas without elaborating on them. As I rewrote it, I decided to focus on three main ideas: the bus' physical characteristics, how the bus changes with the time of day, and how the time of day influences riders' interactions with each other. Ultimately, these were the three main things I observed when completing the assignment, and they also ended up being the reason I was interested in writing about the Newton bus for my "Meditation on Place" assignment.