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  1. Jun 2025
    1. Danforth: Now hear me, and beguile yourselves no more. I will not receive a single plea for pardon or postponement. Them that will not confess will hang. Twelve are already executed; the names of these seven are given out, and the village expects to see them die this morning. Postponement now speaks a floundering on my part; reprieve or pardon must cast doubt upon the guilt of them that died till now. While I speak God’s law, I will not crack its voice with whimpering. If retaliation is your fear, know this – I should hang ten thousand that dared to rise against the law, and an ocean of salt tears could not melt the resolution of the statutes. Now draw yourselves up like men and help me, as you are bound by Heaven to do. Have you spoken with them all, Mr. Hale?

      Hyperbole: “I should hang ten thousand that dared to rise against the law”

      This exaggeration magnifies Danforth's extreme loyalty to law and order. It also shows how he equates disobedience with heresy, deserving mass punishment.

      Imagery: “An ocean of salt tears could not melt the resolution of the statutes”

      Vivid, emotive imagery contrasts emotional appeal (“salt tears”) with legal resolve (“statutes”), reinforcing his inflexibility. The metaphor of tears as an ocean adds emotional weight, only to have it dismissed as powerless.

    2. Danforth: Now hear me, and beguile yourselves no more. I will not receive a single plea for pardon or postponement. Them that will not confess will hang. Twelve are already executed; the names of these seven are given out, and the village expects to see them die this morning. Postponement now speaks a floundering on my part; reprieve or pardon must cast doubt upon the guilt of them that died till now. While I speak God’s law, I will not crack its voice with whimpering. If retaliation is your fear, know this – I should hang ten thousand that dared to rise against the law, and an ocean of salt tears could not melt the resolution of the statutes. Now draw yourselves up like men and help me, as you are bound by Heaven to do. Have you spoken with them all, Mr. Hale?

      Diction (Word Choice): Danforth uses stern, legalistic, and authoritative language to assert the irrevocability of the court’s decisions:

      “I will not receive a single plea”: The use of “not receive” rather than a softer term like “consider” signals his absolute rejection of mercy or reconsideration.

      “Them that will not confess will hang”: A cold, declarative sentence with stark consequences. The bluntness reflects his lack of compassion and rigid adherence to procedure.

      “The village expects to see them die this morning”: The phrase appeals to social expectation and order, placing community stability above individual justice.

      “While I speak God’s law, I will not crack its voice with whimpering”: Highly metaphorical, this line reveals how Danforth sees himself as the mouthpiece of divine justice, not merely a judge.

  2. Mar 2024
    1. Lastly, the bridge, pre-chorus 3 and chorus 3 emphasises how the pride and sense of identity that Bocchi gained from learning the guitar has increased her self esteem by just a little bit. Bocchi still suffered from social anxiety and isolation, she still finds herself struggling to let herself trust others, but she is willing to let some of her worries go, and let something beyond her control guide her through this complicated journey.

      Yes, because she has finally found a way to express herself authentically.

    2. Next, verse 2 also explores Bocchi’s passion for her guitar since it is her only form of expression. It emphasises how to Bocchi, her guitar is her everything and her entire world. More importantly, it suggest how Bocchi learning the guitar has given her something to feel proud for, giving her a new sense of identity, something that is very important later on.

      Yes

    3. . Secondly, verse 2, pre chorus and chorus mirrors the idea of the first part of the song, but goes further to show how Bocchi feels useless and underserving of other’s attention since she feels that she is not good enough. This shows how Bocchi’s social anxiety overcomes her hopes and needs for social interactions, also conveying Bocchi’s sense of inferiori

      You mean verse 1, pre-chorus and chorus?

    1. In the song, themes of love, commitment, and resilience can be found. The song explores the idea of standing by someone through thick and thin, also echoing the theme of loyalty and enduring connection, conveying a sense of unwavering support and the determination to push through challenges together.

      Relevant themes

    1. Breakeven is a song about a man who recently broke up with his partner, he is upset over the breakup unlike his girlfriend, who moved on rather quickly from him, displaying how insignificant the man truly is in her life despite her being the world to him.

      It would be good here to note the consistent use of juxtaposition to show the contrast between the responses the ex and speaker have towards their separation. This shows an insightful understanding of not only individual lyrics but the song as a whole.

    1. The songs seem to be directing their theme to identity, purpose, and striving for happiness. The theme of identity and purpose can be seen in how the repeated question of "What was I made for" is written showing how the writer a dilemma within the speaker grappling with her own emotions and struggling to find a purpose in her life while she bounces around from different scenarios in her life losing purpose again and again.The theme of striving for happiness can be seen in how the writer consistently quotes how she may have lost the sense of happiness and sense of feeling she still holds onto all hopes of rediscovering happiness though she may have a lot of uncertainty within the future.The theme of dehumanisation can also be seen here in how the writer goes through many scenarios and starts to lose human emotions and feelings and slowly start to become an object rather than a person showing the importance of the memories and experiences you have in life.

      Please make sure to address the persona correctly. Use 'speaker' not 'writer'.

      Your themes are valid (except for the last one). However, the explanations need to be rephrased into messages we can learn, rather than further describing the speaker.

      Last theme can be about the theme of emotions, and you can reflect on how emotions are an important part of being human!

    1. There are references to failure and hard work.

      Your responses here about themes are more about explaining your IMPRESSIONS of the speaker rather than messages you learn about the themes.

    2. the theme of hard work is can be seen in "Lately I've been, I've been losing sleep" This suggests that the persona tirelessly works and how he prioritizes his work more than his wellbeing which causes him to lose sleep and talks about his struggle on having wealth.

      So what message can you learn about the value of hard work?

    3. The theme of failure is shown in "No more counting dollars, we'll be counting stars" the story is about a couple which are financially poor and are desperate to make ends meet and "counting stars" is used as the persona's desire to help achieve his dreams and goals and provide enough wealth to be counting stars.

      So how is failure shown?

  3. Feb 2024
    1. TALKING TO THE MOONTalking to the moon conveys the feeling of an immense longing for someone who is not physically present. The speaker maintains hope that the person he misses is listening and responding, a belief that the speaker clings onto throught his conversations with the moon.

      Any themes and messages?

    1. Mr. Blue Sky is a song by the Electric Light Orchestra, featured on the band's seventh studio album OUT OF THE BLUE(1977). Written and produced by frontman Jeff Lynne, Mr. Blue Sky was the second single to be taken from Out of the Blue, peaking at number 6 in the UK Singles Chart and number 35 in the US Billboard Charts. The song was created when Lynne locked himself away in a Swiss Chatlet (Casual dining restaurant chain) trying to write ELO's follow-up to A New World Record. The room was dark and misty for two weeks until Lynne saw the sun shining. This moment inspired him to write "Mr Blue Sky".

      While this is good context, I would have liked to read more about your understanding of the poem's messages and its overarching themes.

    1. ---- This is Swift recounting all the memories she and this guy share and how she makes him feel good when he’s down                                                                                          (instead of freaking out when he made a joke); how they know each other so well, which just points to the fact that they’d                                                                                  be a way better couple than the guy and the “cheer captain”.

      This is more a summary of the song lyrics rather than close analysis. You need to look out for lit devices and explain their effect.

    2. <----- He means so much to her, that she will literally stand and wait for him outside of his house for as long as it takes                                                                                    him to come out and run to her.

      Ok, but through this "waiting", what does this suggest about the relationship between the speaker and the one whom she's addressing?

    1. Self acceptance  and strength to face the adversities of life are quiet evident in the song that makes us learn new arena of life through struggles, trying and testing times.

      There is some relevance here but needs more elaboration. The rest of this paragraph has little relevance to the song lyrics!

    1. Once we fall into the temptation of doing things the easy way, it will gradually become a habit that we cannot seem to escape from, causing us to feel trapped by our own mistakes.

      Yes!

    2. through its use of vivid imagery and metaphors.

      And sound devices! You can see the sloth using sibilance, consonance and alliteration to build his alluring use of language to tempt the mole into laziness/cheating in the game.

    1. Though you can see when you're wrongYou know you can't always see when you're right (you're right)

      Annotate for connotation and impressions of the person being addressed? Themes of self-awareness and pride can also be reflected here.

    1. but if you overcome them, you can overcome and embrace yourself in the many challenges that you will face soon in life, as life has never-ending challenges.

      Connection should be made to how embracing and overcoming those challenges would lead to the enjoyment of life in the present.

  4. Jan 2024
    1. But soon comes Mr. Night creepin' overNow his hand is on your shoulder

      "his hand is on your shoulder" seems to suggest the speaker feeling overwhelmed by night time. The darkness is overwhelming.

      I feel afraid for the speaker, as he seems uncomfortable and overwhelmed.

    2. Oh Mr. Blue Sky please tell us whyYou had to hide away for so long (so long)Where did we go wrong?Hey there Mr. BlueWe're so pleased to be with youLook around see what you doEverybody smiles at youHey there Mr. BlueWe're so pleased to be with youLook around see what you doEverybody smiles at you

      The repetition of the chorus shows its importance in the song.

    3. Mr. Blue Sky please tell us whyYou had to hide away for so long (so long)

      From "please tell us why" and "hide away", the personification of the blue sky portrays the weather as a living thing.

  5. Jul 2023
    1. Rebecca: Let you fear nothing! Another judgment waits us all!

      Rebecca offers John encouragement and indicates her own strength of faith.

      She is unafraid of dying because she believes that ultimately it is God's judgment of her (and the other prisoners) that matters, not that of a misguided court made up of mortal men.

    2. Hale: Woman, plead with him! He starts to rush out the door, and then goes back to her. Woman! It is pride, it is vanity. She avoids his eyes, and moves to the window. He drops to his knees. Be his helper! What profit him to bleed? Shall the dust praise him? Shall the worms declare his truth? Go to him, take his shame away!

      "take his shame away" – Hale pleads with Elizabeth because he does not understand that Proctor is going to his death not for pride and vanity but because he (Proctor) has faith in God's justice (JP addresses himself in 3 rd person – "I do think I see some shred of goodness in John Proctor.").

    3. Danforth: Do you sport with me? You will sign your name or it is no confession, Mister!

      Danforth again threatens Proctor by using his authority. Unless PRoctor signs the confession, it will not be accepted as valid and genuine.

      Reflect on the theme of hypocrisy.

    4. Danforth: Why “must” you say it! Why, you should rejoice to say it if your soul is truly purged of any love for Hell!

      Danforth is cunning here: he claims that Proctor should not be reluctant to accuse others but that he should be eager to do so to prove that his confession is genuine and sincere.

    5. Danforth: Proctor, you mistake me. I am not empowered to trade your life for a lie. You have most certainly seen some person with the Devil. Proctor is silent. Mr. Proctor, a score of people have already testified they saw this woman with the Devil.

      Ironically, Danforth theatens Proctor, saying that he cannot spare Proctor's life if Proctor continues to lie to him. The irony is that Proctor is telling the truth and what Danforth is actually expecting him to do is to lie by accusing other innocent people of being witches.

      Furthermore, Proctor's own confession of witchcraft is also a lie, which Danforth has accepted as truth.

      Who is upholding justice now?

    6. Danforth: Why, for the good instruction of the village, Mister; this we shall post upon the church door!

      This is an indication of why Proctor's confession is so important to Danforth. Once he has obtained it he wants to ensure that everyone in Salem reads it for themselves, as the confession will serve as a vindication of Danforth and his court, hence the reason why he wants it written down.

    7. Proctor: Beguile me not! I blacken all of them when this is nailed to the church the very day they hang for silence!

      Proctor here understands fully the moral and practical consequences of him betraying his friends. Even if they were innocent of witchcraft, they would be guilty by association with Proctor. Therefore, their deaths would have been pointless and prove nothing ("hang for silence").

    8. Proctor: I have three children – how may I teach them to walk like men in the world, and I sold my friends?

      Who does Proctor show himself to be here?

      Why does he think he might be setting a bad example for his children to follow?

    9. Proctor: No, no. I have signed it, You have seen me. It is done! You have no need for this. Parris: Proctor, the village must have proof that – Proctor: Damn the village! I confess to God, and God has seen my name on this! It is enough!

      Proctor's protests here shows how he fully understands why Danforth wants his confession publish and so is determined not to allow it, declaring that God is his ultiomate judge and that it is only necessary for God to hear and see his confession, not the citizens of Salem.

      So why is Proctor adamant to not publish the confession?

      On the other hand, why is Danfroth adamant about publishing the confession?

    10. Danforth: Look you, sir. I think you mistake your duty here. It matters nothing what she thought – she is convicted of the unnatural murder of children, and you for sending your spirit out upon Mary Warren. Your soul alone is the issue here, Mister, and you will prove its whiteness or you cannot live in a Christian country. Will you tell me now what persons conspired with you in the Devil’s company? Proctor is silent. To your knowledge was Rebecca Nurse ever – Proctor: I speak my own sins; I cannot judge another. Crying out, with hatred: I have no tongue for it.

      Danforth keeps pushing Proctor, expecting him to betray his friends in order ot save himself.

      Proctor refuses to do so, claiming that as a sinner himself, he is no position to judge anyone else.

    11. The final drumroll crashes, then heightens violently. Hale weeps in frantic prayer, and the new sun is pouring in upon her face, and the drums rattle like bones in the morning air. THE CURTAIN FALLS

      Discuss: Why do you think Miller has written a tragic ending to the play?

    1. for some beneficiaries were actually not victims at all, but informers.

      The mention of beneficiaries who were actually informers reveals that some individuals capitalized on the chaos by falsely accusing others, potentially to gain power, revenge, or other personal advantages.

      This factionalism adds another layer of complexity to the events and demonstrates how fear and self-interest can manipulate and corrupt a society.

    2. some people still were unwilling to admit their total guilt,

      What is your PR when reading this line, to realise that there are people who still do not want to admit their total guilt of such devastating witch trials?

      What theme(s) does this line reflect in the play?

    3. factionalism

      factionalism: a condition in which a group, organization, government, etc., is split into two or more smaller groups with differing and often opposing opinions or interests

    4. Certain farms which had belonged to the victims were left to ruin, and for more than a century no one would buy them or live on them.

      Why do you think these houses of the victims were unwanted and left vacant for such a long time?

      Note how this is different from the beginning of Act 4 in how there was "much disagreement who they [the cows] will belong to now" (i.e. people were fighting over possession of the cows whose owners were jailed or hanged in the witch trials).

    5. To all intents and purposes, the power of theocracy in Massachusetts was broken.

      Remember the meaning of theocracy: a system of government in which priests rule in the name of God or a god.

      Now, religion cannot be law. Why?

    1. Beware, Goody Proctor - cleave to no faith when faith brings blood. It is mistaken law that leads you to sacrifice. Life, woman, life is God’s most precious gift; no principle, however glorious, may justify the taking of it. I beg you, woman, prevail upon your husband to confess. Let him give his lie. Quail not before God’s judgment in this, for it may well be God damns a liar less than he that throws his life away for pride. Will you plead with him? I cannot think he will listen to another.

      Now Hale urges Elizabeth to abandon her faith just as he hd done ("cleave to not faith when faith brings blood"). Life itself is God's gift and is "most precious" that no human has the right to take it away.

      Hale also believes that Proctor would not be punished as severely for lying than if he were to "[throw] his life away" on a matter of principle.

    2. Hale, continuing to Elizabeth: Let you not mistake your duty as I mistook my own. I came into this village like a bridegroom to his beloved, bearing gifts of high religion; the very crowns of holy law I brought, and what I touched with my bright confi-dence, it died; and where I turned the eye of my great faith, blood flowed up.

      Hale refers to the first time he came to Salem, hoping to do good with his "gifts of high religion" and "bright confidence". Hopwever, he claims that all his faith has actually resulted in death and the taking of innocent lives ("blood flowed up").

      Note the use of visual imagery and juxtaposition to show Hale's great change within himself and the shift in his convictions.

    3. Hale: Goody Proctor, I have gone this three month like our Lord into the wilderness. I have sought a Christian way, for damnation’s doubled on a minister who counsels men to lie.

      Hale is a Christian minister and yet persuades people to lie to save their own lives. This shows his desperation to prevent the loss of any more innocent lives.

    4. Hale: You know, do you not, that I have no connection with the court? She seems to doubt it. I come of my own, Goody Proctor. I would save your husband’s life, for if he is taken I count myself his murderer. Do you understand me?

      Hale makes it clear that he is no longer associated with the court to persuade Elizabeth to try and talk her husband into saving his own life. His guilt is revealed again, as if Proctor were to die, Hale would condemn himself as "his murderer".

    5. Proctor: Would you give them such a lie? Say it. Would you ever give them this? She cannot answer. You would not; if tongs of fire were singeing you you would not! It is evil. Good, then – it is evil, and I do it!

      Proctor believes that what is he about to commit is a sin (i.e. make a false confession) – "it is evil, and I do it!". He is ashamed because he believes that Elizabeth's own integrity would not permit her to do the same thing if she were in his situation ("You would not"). His own honesty with himself thus causes him to denounce himself and his "evil" act for what it is.

    6. Proctor: Then who will judge me? Suddenly clasping his hands: God in Heaven, what is John Proctor, what is John Proctor?

      Ever since his adultery with Abigail, Proctor has always regarded Elizabeth as his moral judge ("Oh, Elizabeth, your justice would freeze beer!") , and he has sought desperately for her forgiveness.

      After Elizabeth's refusal to judge him, Proctor demands to know who, if anyone, will be honest to condemn him.

    7. Proctor: I’d have you see some honesty in it. Let them, that never lied die now to keep their souls. It is pretense for me, a vanity that will not blind God nor keep my children out of the wind. Pause. What say you?

      Proctor says that him making a false confession would not deceive ("blind") God.At least by staying alive it would prevent his children from becoming ophans without a home ("keep my children out of the wind").

    8. Proctor: Spite only keeps me silent. It is hard to give a lie to dogs.

      Proctor is saying that his pride keeps him from 'confessing' to witchcraft and saving his life.

      Who do the "dogs" refer to? Why does Proctor use such a word to describe these people?

    9. Proctor: I cannot mount the gibbet like a saint. It is a fraud. I am not that man. She is silent. My honesty is broke, Elizabeth; I am no good man. Nothing’s spoiled by giving them this lie that were not rotten long before.

      Proctor denies that he is "like a saint' but rather a "fraud" if he chooses to sacrifice his own life and seems like one. He feels that he is "no good man" and was "rotten long before" given his former sin of adultery.

    10. Elizabeth: I am not your judge, I cannot be. As though giving him release: Do as you will, do as you will!

      Elizabeth declines for the final time to pass judgement on Proctor. She gives her blessing to decide on whatever course of action he considers to be best.

    11. Elizabeth: Do what you will. But let none be your judge. There be no higher judge under Heaven than Proctor is! Forgive me, forgive me, John – I never knew such goodness in the world! She covers her face, weeping.

      Again, Elizabeth considers herself and all others as unworthy of being the "judge" of Proctor than Proctor himself. It is ultimately his judgement of himself that matters.

      Her great "weeping" and declaration of Proctor's "goodness" show her deep regret in doubting Proctor and also her love and faith in him.

    12. Elizabeth: John, I counted myself so plain, so poorly made, no honest love could come to me! Suspicion kissed you when I did; I never knew how I should say my love. It were a cold house I kept! In fright, she swerves, as Hathorne enters.

      Elizabeth confesses before her husband of why she was unable to express her love for Proctor in the first place – her own lack of confidence and self-esteem ("I counted myself so plain, so poorly made"). Once again, Elizabeth blames herself for driving Proctor away, and thus why he succumbed to the temptation fo Abigail.

      What impression do you form of Elizabeth here?

    13. Elizabeth: It is not for me to give, John, I am –

      Elizabeth understands her husband deeply – she does not agree to her husband's request because she knows that what Proctor really needs is to forgive himself. That is what matters, not whether she forgives him or not.

    14. Elizabeth, upon a heaving sob that always threatens: John, it come to naught that I should forgive you, if you’ll not forgive yourself.

      Elizabeth's words here again show her clear understanding of her husband's situation. She knows it is essential that Proctor learns to forgive himself in order to fully overcome his shame and guilt.

    15. Elizabeth: As you will, I would have it. Slight pause: I want you living, John. That’s sure.

      Elizabeth's unselfishness and compassion are demonstrated here. She concedes that she would prefer her husband alive ("I want you living, John") but also would be prepared to accept his decision to die if this is what he finally chooses to do ("As you will, I would have it.").

    16. Elizabeth: I cannot judge you, John.

      Elizabeth also respects her husband – she feels that she is not entitled to pass judgement on him and condemn him if he decides to make a false confession to save his life.

    17. Proctor: You are a – marvel, Elizabeth.

      Proctor's words here reveal that the resentment he holds against her in Act 2 is now long forgotten.

      "marvel" conveys the deep love he has for her, and how he both respects and admires Elizabeth for the fortitude she has demonstrated in the face of such adversity.

    18. Elizabeth, quietly: I think that be the Devil’s argument.

      Elizabeth rejects Hale's reasoning that Proctor save his life by lying. She believes that this is unacceptable because they would still require her husband to damn (i.e. condemn) himself by lying in order to save himself. This therefore could be used by the Devil himself if he were attempting to persuade Elizabeth ("be the Devil's argument").

      What impressions do you form of Elizabeth here?

    19. Danforth, going to her: Goody Proctor, you are not sum-moned here for disputation. Be there no wifely tenderness within you? He will die with the sunrise. Your husband. Do you under-stand it? She only looks at him. What say you? Will you contend with him? She is silent. Are you stone? I tell you true, woman, had I no other proof of your unnatural life, your dry eyes now would be sufficient evidence that you delivered up your soul to Hell! A very ape would weep at such calamity! Have the devil dried up any tear of pity in you? She is silent. Take her out. It profit nothing she should speak to him!

      Danforth tries to put pressure on Elizabeth to persuade Proctor to confess by firstly declaring that as his wife, any love she feels for him should be sufficient motivation to do so ("Be there no wifely tenderness within you?").

      However, he begins to get angry when he fails to get any response from her. What does he blame Elizabeth of?

      Finally, Danforth loses patience and orders Elizabeth be taken away.

      Overall, what do Danforth's anger and impatience demonstrate?

    20. Danforth: Pray be at your ease, we come not for your life. We – uncertain how to plead, for he is not accustomed to it. Mr. Hale, will you speak with the woman?

      "uncertain how to plead, for he is not accustomed to it" – It is not in Danforth's nature to ask for anything. Why?

    1. Hale: Why, it is all simple. I come to do the Devil’s work. I come to counsel Christians they should belie themselves. His sarcasm collapses. There is blood on my head! Can you not see the blood on my head!!

      Why has Hale now "come to do the Devil's work" vs how he first came to Salem to "find him [the Devil] out" (Act 1) and "crush him utterly" (Act 1)?

    2. Hale: Excellency, there are orphans wandering from house to house; abandoned cattle bellow on the highroads, the stink of rotting crops hangs everywhere, and no man knows when the harlots’ cry will end his life – and you wonder yet if rebellion’s spoke? Better you should marvel how they do not burn your province!

      Hale describes the practical effects Danforth's decisions have on Salem, pointing out how it is miraculous ("marvel") that rebellion has not broken out.

    3. Hale, harder now: If you think God wills you to raise rebellion, Mr. Danforth, you are mistaken!

      Hale speaks more freely here, with greater force and perhaps anger ("harder now"). He is no longer a member of Danforth's court (remember how he denounced the court in Act 3).

      Hale expresses frustration at Danforth's misguided belief that it is God's will Proctor, Rebecca and the others should die. He is certain that their deaths would result in some form of rebellion against the court and makes the point that this cannot be God's will that such a rebellion take place.

    4. Hale: Excellency, if you postpone a week and publish to the town that you are striving for their confessions, that speak mercy on your part, not faltering.

      Hale attempts to persuade Danforth to postpone the hangings in the hope that in the meantime he can convince Rebecca and her friends to confess.

      Hale's comment "speak mercy...not faltering" shows that he understands Danforth's desire to maintain his credibility and avoiding a scandal, and so tries to convince Danforth that by doing this, Danforth does not risk his reputation at all.

    5. Hale, coming to Danforth now: You must pardon them. They will not budge.

      Hale's first words to Danforth in this Act indicate his concern for the fates of Rebecca and her friends. He has come to accept that none of them will confess to the charges and is now urging Danforth to release them rather than have them hanged. Clearly, Hale believes they are innocent.

    6. There be so many cows wanderin’ the highroads, now their masters are in the jails, and much disagreement who they will belong to now. I know Mr. Parris be arguin’ with farmers all yesterday – there is great contention, sir, about the cows. Contention make him weep, sir; it were always a man that weep for contention.

      Cheever's words show the impact of the trials on the Salem society. The society is now in disarray as many have died or imprisoned due to the witch trials.

    7. Danforth, conciliatory: You misunderstand, sir; I cannot pardon these when twelve are already hanged for the same crime. It is not just.

      Danforth justifies that to pardon Rebecca and the others (i.e. not hang them) would be both inconsistent and unjust as twelve have "already hanged for the same crime".

    8. Danforth: Now hear me, and beguile yourselves no more. I will not receive a single plea for pardon or postponement. Them that will not confess will hang. Twelve are already executed; the names of these seven are given out, and the village expects to see them die this morning. Postponement now speaks a floun- dering on my part; reprieve or pardon must cast doubt upon the guilt of them that died till now. While I speak God’s law, I will not crack its voice with whimpering. If retaliation is your fear, know this - I should hang ten thousand that dared to rise against the law, and an ocean of salt tears could not melt the resolution of the statutes. Now draw yourselves up like men and help me, as you are bound by Heaven to do. Have you spoken with them all, Mr. Hale?

      floundering: to show or feel great confusion.

      Danforth shows his resolution and uncompromising stance. Analyse the use of diction and analogy to show this.

    9. Danforth: There is no rebellion in Andover!

      Danforth again refutes Parris' implications and is shown ot be sensitive about Andover's recent rebellion. Why is he so sensitive about this topic?

    10. He is pleading. Mark it, sir, Abigail had close knowledge of the town, and since the news of Andover has broken here –

      Parris' words here are significant because they not only express his own fears but Danforth's -– that there is a possibility of rebellion against the court in Salem.

    11. Parris: Tonight, when I open my door to leave my house – a dagger clattered to the ground. Silence. Danforth absorbs this. Now Parris cries out: You cannot hang this sort. There is danger for me. I dare not step outside at night!

      Parris is so afraid for his own safety and again persuades Danforth to consider the "discontent" of Salem and delay the hangings.

      What does the dagger symbolise in Parris' eyes?

    12. Parris: It cannot be forgot, sir, that when I summoned the con-gregation for John Proctor’s excommnnication there were hardly thirty people come to hear it. That speak a discontent, I think, and –

      Parris has understood the mood of the people and realises that pressing ahead with the hanging of Proctor might provoke a backlash against the court ("discontent").

      He is trying to persuade Danforth to postpone the hangings in order to avoid such a backlash, citing here the fact that so few people attended Proctor's excommunication as evidence of the respecrt with which he is held in Salem and the unpopularity of his sentence amongst the people.

    13. This way, unconfessed and claiming innocence, doubts are multiplied, many honest people will weep for them, and our good purpose is lost in their tears.

      This explains why Parris and Danforth are so keen for Proctor and Rebecca to confess. If both die and claim innocence, this will cause people to have doubts about the court and feel sympathy for the victims instead.

    14. it were another sort that hanged till now. Rebecca Nurse is no Bridget that lived three year with Bishop before she married him. John Proctor is not Isaac Ward that drank his family to ruin. To Danforth: I would to God it were not so, Excellency, but these people have great weight jet in the town. Let Rebecca stand upon the gibbet and send up some righteous prayer, and I fear she’ll wake a vengeance on you.

      Parris shows understanding of the effect that Proctor's and Rebecca Nurse's deaths are likely to have on the people of Salem.

      Why do Proctor and Rebecca not belong to this "another sort"? Who belongs to this "another sort' then?

    15. Danforth: Andover is remedied. The court returns there on Friday, and will resume examinations.

      However, Danforth is unwilling to admit such a possibility of rebellion. Why do you think he is so hasty to refute Parris' claims, even cutting Parris off?

    16. Parris: There is news, sir, that the court – the court must reckon with. My niece, sir, my niece – I believe she has vanished. Danforth: Vanished!Parris: I had thought to advise you of it earlier in the week, but –Danforth: Why? How long is she gone? Parris: This be the third night. You see, sir, she told me she would stay a night with Mercy Lewis. And next day, when she does not return, I send to Mr. Lewis to inquire. Mercy told him she would sleep in my house for a night. Danforth: They are both gone?!Parris, in fear of him: They are, sir.Danforth, alarmed: I will send a party for them. Where may they be? Parris: Excellency, I think they be aboard a ship. Danforth stands agape. My daughter tells me how she heard them speaking of ships last week, and tonight I discover my – my strongbox is broke into. He presses his fingers against his eyes to keep back tears. Hathorne, astonished: She have robbed you?Parris: Thirty-one pound is gone. I am penniless. He covers his face and sobs.

      Parris reveals that Abigail has disappeared. Both Danforth and Parris realise that her disappearance will raise questions as to whether she has been deceiving the court all along and therefore bring the credibility of the couret itself into quesiton. This is why Danforth exclaims, is "alarmed" and "send[s] a [search] party for them".

      For Parris himself, the development is made worse by the fact that he has lost all his savings. How do you feel for Parris here?

    1. They all watch, as Abigail, out of her infinite charity, reaches out and draws the sobbing Mary to her, and then looks up to Danforth.

      Why does Abigail take Mary back? How does this show "infinite charity"? Why is this a calculated move by Abigail?

    2. Abigail: Why – ? She gulps. Why do you come, yellow bird?Proctor: Where’s a bird? I see no bird! Abigail, to the ceiling: My face? My face?Proctor: Mr. Hale –Danforth: Be quiet!Proctor, to Hale: Do you see a bird? Danforth: Be quiet!!Abigail, to the ceiling, in a genuine conversation with the “bird” as though trying to talk it out of attacking her: But God made my face; you cannot want to tear my face. Envy is a deadly sin, Mary.

      How do Abigail's speech and actions here show her "endless capacity of dissembling" (Act 1)?

    1. Hale: Excellency, it is a natural lie to tell; I beg you, stop now before another is condemned! l may shut my conscience to it no more – private vengeance is working through this testimony! From the beginning this man has struck me true. By my oath to Heaven, I believe him now, and I pray you call back his wife before we –

      Hale's speech here is crucial because it is at this point that Hale finally comes to believe that Proctor and Elizabeth have been telling the truth and so, by implication, the court has been deceived by Abigail and her friends.

      For the first time, he is prepared to declare that "private vengeance" is behind the girls' accusations and so-called evidence. He even swears his trust and support for Proctor -- "By my oath to Heaven, I believe him now".

    2. Your Honor, I – in that time I were sick. And I – My husband is a good and righteous man. He is never drunk as some are, nor wastin’ his time at the shovelboard, but always at his work. But in my sickness – you see, sir, I were a long time sick after my last baby, and I thought I saw my husband somewhat turning from me. And this girl –S he turns to Abigail.

      According to Elizabeth, who is to blame for the affair? Why? And what does this show about Elizabeth?

    3. n her life, sir, she have never lied. There are them that cannot sing, and them that cannot weep – my wife cannot lie. I have paid much to learn it, sir.

      It is precisely Proctor's belief in Elizabeth's inability to lie that later contributes to his own tragic downfall.

    4. A man may think God sleeps, but God sees everything, I know it now.

      Proctor perhaps believes that God will see what he has done in refusing to lie in order ot save himself and so forgive him for his former sin.

    1. Mary Warren: I cannot lie no more. I am with God, I am with God.

      Mary is trying to convince Danforth that she is telling the truth now. Her claim that she cannot lie any more is ironic because...

    2. Danforth, pointing at Abigail, incredulously: This child would murder your wife?

      Danforth's disblief at Proctor's suggestion that Abigail is plotting to murder Elizabeth illustrates the fundamental error he has made in assessing Abigail as an innocent child.

    3. Hale: I have this morning signed away the soul of Rebecca Nurse, Your Honor. I’ll not conceal it, my hand shakes yet as with a wound! I pray you, sir, this argument let lawyers present to you.

      Hale is clearly uneasy about condemning Rebecca Nurse to death and is trying to ensure he will not have to sign a similar death warrant for Proctor bcecause Proctor's case was not properly presented in court.

      His words here indicate that Hale has lost faith in the court and its ability to ensure that those who appear before it receive a fair trial. Hale fears that if Proctor presents his own case he may fail and so be condemned. His fear is perfectly justified because this is, of course, precisely what happens later in this Act.

    4. Hale: I cannot say he is an honest man; I know him little. But in all justice, sir, a claim so weighty cannot be argued by a farmer. In God’s name, sir, stop here; send him home and let him come again with a lawyer –

      Hale's concern for Proctor is understandable as Proctor is unable to present his case convincingly to the court in the face of Abigail's response of crying witchcraft.

      Hale desperately tries to ensure that justice is carried where Proctor is concerned but in order for this to happen, Proctor needs to be represented in court professionally.

    5. to God every soul is precious and His vengeance is terrible on them that take life without cause.

      Danforth finds himself forced to consider the possibility that Abigail may at least have been deceived into believing she saw spirits, hence this question. In this line, Danforth is also having to consider the possibility that he himself may be guilty of "tak[ing] life wihtout cause" through the executions he already ordered. He is therefore presumably afraid of God's vengeance on himself as much as he is for Abigail when he speaks to her here ("turning worriedly").

    1. And I bid you all do likewise. In an ordinary crime, how does one defend the accused? One calls up witnesses to prove his innocence. But witchcraft is ipso facto, on its face and by its nature, an invisible crime, is it not? Therefore, who may possibly be witness to it? The witch and the victim. None other. Now we cannot hope the witch will accuse herself; granted? Therefore, we must rely upon her victims – and they do testify, the children certainly do testify. As for the witches, none will deny that we are most eager for all their confessions. Therefore, what is left for a lawyer to bring out? I think I have made my point. Have I not?

      The logic Danforth uses to justify and explain to Hale why a lawyer is not necessary in this instance is a flawed logic.

      He states that witchcraft is "an invisible crime" in which only the witch and victim are present, also that as the witch herself will hardly accuse herself, the court must rely upon the victim to testify buy identifying the witch in question.

      BUT what he fails to take into account here is that he is assuming that the "victims" are actually victims in the first place and that their accusations are true. He has no real evidence of this other than the girls' confessions. Danforth thus makes a big mistake in assuming that their accusations are valid and to be believed.

    2. Mr. Hale, believe me; for a man of such terrible learning you are most bewildered

      Another speech from Danforth. From his opening statement, it is ironic because his confidence is misplaced -- he has been "bewildered" as much as Hale has been, although he doesn't realise it.

    3. Hale, defeated: I surely do not, sir. Let you consider it, then.

      Hale knows better than to challenge Danforth's honesty/integrity ("probity"), and so retreats, "defeated". In the same way, Hale has been "defeated" in his attempts to ensure that justice prevails in Danforth's court.

    4. Hale: I have this morning signed away the soul of Rebecca Nurse, Your Honor. I’ll not conceal it, my hand shakes yet as with a wound! I pray you, sir, this argument let lawyers present to you.

      Hale is clearly uneasy about condemning Rebecca Nurse to death and is trying to ensure he will not have to sign a similar death warrant for Proctor bcecause Proctor's case was not properly presented in court.

      His words here indicate that Hale has lost faith in the court and its ability to ensure that those who appear before it receive a fair trial. Hale fears that if Proctor presents his own case he may fail and so be condemned. His fear is perfectly justified because this is, of course, precisely what happens later in this Act.

    5. I am a minister of the Lord, and I dare not take a life without there be a proof so immaculate no slightest qualm of conscience may doubt it.

      Explain fully the irony in Hale's words here.

    6. Hale: I cannot say he is an honest man; I know him little. But in all justice, sir, a claim so weighty cannot be argued by a farmer. In God’s name, sir, stop here; send him home and let him come again with a lawyer –

      Hale's concern for Proctor is understandable as Proctor is unable to present his case convincingly to the court in the face of Abigail's response of crying witchcraft.

      Hale desperately tries to ensure that justice is carried where Proctor is concerned but in order for this to happen, Proctor needs to be represented in court professionally.

  6. Jun 2023
    1. Mary Warren, staring at Abigail: I – have no power.

      "Mary Warren [staring at Abigail]: I – I have no power.” — While Mary was responding to Danforth’s question, the stage directions imply also how she is perhaps conceding defeat to Abigail and acknowledging that Abigail’s influence over her is stronger than Proctor’s.

      Mary feels helpless against Abigail's attack; implying how Abigail possess the "power" that she herself lacks.

    2. And it is my face, and yours, Danforth!

      Proctor believes both he and Danforth are equally guilty -- both are afraid to reveal the truth about Abigail, and has deliberately and knowingly suppressed the truth in order to protect oneself from a public scandal (John: being known as an adulterer; Danforth in compromising his status as a reputable judge. Thus Proctor believes both he and Danforth will be punished for not doing so.

    3. : A fire, a fire is burning! I hear the boot of Lucifer, I see his filthy face!

      Visual imagery of punishment -- "A fire, a fire". Proctor condemns Danforth here for betraying his duty in coming to Salem to find out the truth and punish those who are guilty.

    1. n an open threat: Let you beware, Mr. Danforth. Think you to be so mighty that the power of Hell may not turn your wits? Beware of it!

      Abigail boldly threatens Danforth in front of the others. She once again cunningly turns the tables on Danforth and puts him on the defensive by declaring that even he is not immune to evil and so could have been deceived.

      What is the irony here in her words?

    2. Proctor, furious: There might also be a dragon with five legs in my house, but no one has ever seen it.

      Proctor is being sarcastic here to highlight the ridiculous claims about the poppet.

    3. it is growing into a nightmare

      "nightmare" connotes Danforth's realisation that Proctor's claims hold some truth, and the disastrous consequences for himself and his court if Proctor can prove his case.

    1. Proctor, trembling, his life collapsing about him

      Miller uses the metaphor of "life collapsing" here to vividly express the great weight of Proctor's confession of adultery, and the irreparable damage to his reputation.

      PR: What feelings are evoked in you towards Proctor here?

    2. and his shame great: In the proper place – where my beasts are bedded.

      Proctor's shame is revealed here – he not considers his behaviour as being no better than that of the beasts he keeps on his farm, highlighting the despicable behaviour he partook in during his affair with Abigail.

    3. To Danforth: A man will not cast away his good name. You surely know that.

      Proctor reveals here he is aware of the damage to his reputation after his confession of adultery. He knows that he will be condemned from now onwards as an adulterer. He says these words in order to convince everyone present that he is telling the truth.

      Do you agree this is a great sacrifice on John Proctor's part? Does this make him a man to be pitied or a man to be admired?

    4. Proctor: How do you call Heaven! Whore! Whore!

      These words show the extent to which Proctor's feelings towards Abigail have changed since Act One. From lightly joking with her and firmly rejecting her advances, Proctor now despises Abigail for what she has done and what she is attempting to do.

      Note the angry tone and word intensity of "whore",which he is forced to explain afterwards.

    1. Danforth: The pure in heart need no lawyers. Proceed as you will.

      Danforth here tries to assure Proctor that if he his innocent and honest, he need not fear that he will be at any disadvantage by not being represented by a lawyer in Danforth's court.

      However, why are his words also ironic? Is justice really served to the "pure in heart"?

    2. Do you know, Mr. Proctor, that the entire contention of the state in these trials is that the voice of Heaven is speaking through the children?

      There is a misplaced assumption that the girls have a God-given authority ("voice of Heaven"), therefore the court has accepted without question everyting the girls have testified in court, including the accusations made so far.

    1. Danforth: And do you know that near to four hundred are in the jails from Marblehead to Lynn, and upon my signature?

      Danforth has great authority and weight as the lives of the accused are in his hands.

      Why do you think he refuses to give serious consideration ot Nurse's claim that he has been deceived? Think about the theme of REPUTATION.

    2. through helpless sobs:

      Giles shows immense distress and guilt as he believes he is responsible for what has happened to his wife, Martha. He feels as though he betrayed her ("broke charity") by what he said earlier about her reading habits.

    3. Danforth: Do you take it upon yourself to determine what this court shall believe and what it shall set aside?

      Danforth takes offence at what he sees as Corey's presumption at deciding on behalf of the court what is true and admissible evidence and what is not.

      He seems to take Giles' protests personally, as an implied criticism of his willingness to accept such testimony. Ironically, of course, Corey is absolutely correct in what he says, and Danforth is mistaken in believing the accusations against Martha.

    4. Through the partitioning wall at the right we hear a prosecutor’s voice, Judge Hathorne’s, asking a question; then a woman’s voice, Martha Corey’s, replying. Hathorne's Voice: Now, Martha Corey, there is abundant evidence in our hands to show that you have given yourself to the reading of fortunes, Do you deny it? Martha Corey’s Voice: I am innocent to a witch. I know not what a witch is.Hathorne’s Voice: How do you know, then, that you are not a witch?Martha Corey’s Voice: If I were, I would know it.Hathorne’s Voice: Why do you hurt these children?Martha Corey’s Voice: I do not hurt them. I scorn it!Giles’ Voice, roaring: I have evidence for the court!Voices of townspeople rise in excitement.Danforth’s Voice: You will keep your seat!Giles' Voice: Thomas Putnam is reaching out for land!Danforth’s Voice: Remove that man, Marshal!Giles’ Voice: You’re hearing lies, lies!A roaring goes up from the people.Hathorne’s Voice: Arrest him, excellency! Giles’ Voice: I have evidence. Why will you not hear my evidence? The door opens and Giles is half carried into the vestry room by Herrick.

      Instead of witnessing the immediate entry of characters (as we might normally expect), we hear Hathorne's voice offstage interrogating Martha Corey. It is only after Giles' emotional outburst that the door from the court opens, affording the dramatic and violent entry of an infuriated Giles still grappling with Herrick.

  7. May 2023
    1. the room is empty, but for sunlight pouring through two high windows in the back wall. The room is solemn, even forbidding.

      The room is pierced by sunlight coming from two back windows, highlighting a dramatic contrast between the natural joy and promise of spring outside and the stark, gloomy oppressive and intimidating interior ("solemn, even forbidding").

    2. he vestry room of the Salem meeting house, now serving as the anteroom of the General Court.

      The setting of Act Three is not the court itself, where all the drama and excitement is taking place, but its anteroom. The anteroom is typically used as a waiting room as it leads to the main court.

    1. And she is over and over again sobbing, “I cannot, I cannot, l cannot,” asTHE CURTAIN FALLS

      Act Two ends on an equally suspenseful and tense note. The ending here is not quite as hysterical as Act One's conclusion. But Mary's continued sobbing and terrified reiteration of "I cannot" are also similar to the girls' ecstatic cries in Act One.

    2. He walks as though toward a great horror,

      "great horror" foreshadows an ominous confrontation with the court, and also foreshadows Proctor destroying his reputation in court later in Act 3.

    3. You are a coward! Though you be ordained in God’s own tears, you are a coward now!

      Proctor accuses Hale of cowardice because he pushes his responsibility to judge what's good and wrong to the court.

      Why do you think Hale hesitates to act on his own suspicion -- "It is his own suspicion, but he resists it." (pg 66)

    4. Only this consider: the world goes mad, and it profit nothing you should lay the cause to the vengeance of a little girl.

      Hale attempts to reason with Proctor, justifying the court's actions by citing the absurdity of Proctor's claim that such calamity could possibly be caused by "the vengeance of a little girl".

      Dramatic irony is grimly apparent here since both Proctor and the audience know that what Hale considers to be preposterous is in fact the tragic truth.

    1. Pontius Pilate! God will not let you wash your hands of this!

      [Context] Pontius Pilate was the Roman governor of Judea. When the Jewish supreme council found Christ guilty of blasphemy, they referred the case to Pontius Pilate who alone had the power to pronounce the death sentence. Although Pilate was impressed with the dignity and frankness of Christ's answers, he agreed to the council's demands for fear of a Jewish uprising. In the BIble, PIlate ceremoniously washed his hands in public to disassociate himself from a deed that he knew to be unjust.

  8. Apr 2023
    1. I’ll tell you what’s walking Salem – vengeance is walking Salem.

      Recall early in the Overture of Act 1 how MIller commented that the witch trials allowed "Long-held hatreds of neighbours could now be openly expressed, and vengeance taken, despite the Bible’s charitable injunctions. ... Old scores could be settled on a plane of heavenly combat between Lucifer and the Lord".

    2. Elizabeth, with great fear: I will fear nothing. She looks about the room, as though to fix it in her mind. Tell the children I have gone to visit someone sick.

      How does Elizabeth's response to her being charged contrast to Proctor's furious outbursts?

    3. Is the accuser always holy now?

      Proctor's despairing question here highlights a related theme -- the way in which, in times of crisis, those in power come to regard themselves (and also by others) as infallible and blessed instruments of God's justice.

      cf Miller's earlier comment in Act 1 that "the main role of government changes from that of the arbiter to that of the scourge of God".

      Think about your PR: Do you think Proctor is courageous or foolish in questioning Hale here?

    4. I will fall like an ocean on that court! Fear nothing, Elizabeth.

      John Proctor uses this simile to convey his anger at the unjust accusations against his wife, and vows to fiercely contend against the court about her wrongful arrest.

    5. Proctor, ripping the warrant: Out with you!

      Proctor vividly shows his contempt for the court by tearing up the warrant for Elizabeth's arrest. He is overwhelmed with his feelings and cannot control them – upset that his wife is charged & guilt that he did not obey Elizabeth in telling the truth sooner.

    6. Or better still: Ask Abby, Abby sat beside me when I made it.

      Personal Response: What is the audience's response towards finding out that Abigail sat next to Mary as she was sewing the doll?

    7. Elizabeth, her breath knocked out: Why– ! The girl is murder! She must be ripped out of the world!Cheever, pointing at Elizabeth: You’ve heard that, sir! Ripped out of the world! Herrick, you heard it!

      Elizabeth's outrage and exclamation at Abigail's murderous cunning is ironically noted by Cheever as yet more evidence against her.

    8. The girl, the Williams girl, Abigail Williams, sir. She sat to dinner in Reverend Parris’s house tonight, and without word nor warnin’ she falls to the floor. Like a struck beast, he says, and screamed a scream that a bull would weep to hear. And he goes to save her, and, stuck two inches in the flesh of her belly, he draw a needle out. And demandin’ of her how she come to be so stabbed, she – to Proctor now – testify it – were your wife’s familiar spirit pushed it in.

      This recount from Cheever highlights Abigail's obsession with Proctor, that she's willing to harm herself to eliminate Elizabeth.

    1. Proctor: I falter nothing, but I may wonder if my story will be credited in such a court. I do wonder on it, when such a steady–minded minister as you will suspicion such a woman that never lied, and cannot, and the world knows she cannot! I may falter somewhat, Mister; I am no fool.Hale, quietly – it has impressed him

      Proctor impresses Hale with his common sense and forthrightness when he argues that, given the hysteria in Salem, it is hardly likely that his story about Abigail Williams will be believed.

    2. In the book of record that Mr. Parris keeps, I note that you are rarely in the church on Sabbath Day.

      Proctor's failure ot attend church regularly is an outward manifestation of his 'dangerous' non-conformity that is suspicious to the Puritan society.

      Think about the theme of NON-CONFORMITY: how is it reflected in the play thus far?

    3. Proctor, as though a secret arrow had pained his heart: Aye. Trying to grin it away – to Hale: You see, sir, between the two of us we do know them all. Hale only looks at Proctor, deep in his attempt to define this man, Proctor grows more uneasy. I think it be a small fault.

      Proctor's defensive reaction, "I think it be a small fault" has a dramatic irony of its own since, as an audience, we cannot help thinking that although forgetting the commandment may be an excusable error, committing the sin itself is a far more grievous matter; one which has brought disaster not merely to the Proctors but to Salem as a whole.

    4. roctor, a tripe unsteadily: I – am sure I do, sir.Hale, glances at her open face, then at John, then: Let you re–peat them, if you will.Proctor: The Commandments.Hale: Aye.Proctor, looking off, beginning to sweat:

      Compared to Elizabeth's eager reply to affirm her knowledge of her commandments, Proctor's answer to the same question from Hale is more hesitatn. His nervous anxiety is shown in the way he begins to sweat, and self-consciously avoiding Hale's gaze ("counting on his fingers").

    5. I see no light of God in that man. I’ll not conceal it.

      Once again, Proctor's forthrightness in exdpressing his individual and unothodox opinion brings him into conflict with established authority (i.e. pastors ordained by God).

      Proctor's first outburst of his dislike towards Parris was when he said that he would find a faction against Parris to join it -- "Proctor: Why, then I must find it and join it." (Act 1, pg 35).

    1. Mary Warren, in a fearful squeak of a voice:

      Mary Warren's "fearful squeak" signifies that she has reverted to her original mouse-like state -- what emotion does she feel here and why?

  9. Mar 2023
    1. I see now your spirit twists around the single error of my life, and I will never tear it free!

      Proctor is angry and aggrieved that Elizabeth should doubt his honesty. Therefore he charges her with being unforgiving and unreasonable. His self-righteousness appears in this line again.

    2. The promise that a stallion gives a mare I gave that girl!

      Proctor uses the same animal image as Abigail in Act 1 to describe the nature of his relationship with her.

      Q. How is this line from Proctor ironic?

      Q. Explain the differences in how Abigail and Proctor use the image of a "stallion" to describe their affair.

    3. Proctor, striving against his anger: What promise!Elizabeth: Spoke or silent, a promise is surely made. And she may dote on it now – I am sure she does – and thinks to kill me, then to take my place.Proctor’s anger is rising; he cannot speak.

      Proctor reacts indignantly to Elizabeth's explanation and pleas. He is indignant towards Elizabeth implying that he has not clearly and forcefully rejected Abigail.

      Would you, as the audience, be inclined to agree with Elizabeth or John?

    4. Elizabeth, delicately: John – grant me this. You have a faulty understanding of young girls. There is a promise made in any bed –Proctor, striving against his anger: What promise!Elizabeth: Spoke or silent, a promise is surely made. And she may dote on it now – I am sure she does – and thinks to kill me, then to take my place.

      Elizabeth explains to Proctor to visit Abigail to break "a promise [that] is surely made" between Proctor and Abigail. She explains that Proctor does not clearly see through Abigail's motives, and since he has not frankly or forcefully rejected her, Abigail harbours a secret hope that he wants her.

    5. Mary Warren, with a stamp of her foot: I’ll not be ordered to bed no more, Mr. Proctor! I am eighteen and a woman, how–ever single! Proctor: Do you wish to sit up? Then sit up. Mary Warren: I wish to go to bed!

      It is ironic that Mary's insistence that she is "a woman" and should be treated as such is childish in nature.

    6. I – I would have you speak civilly to me, from this out.Proctor, in horror, muttering in disgust at her: Go to bed.Mary Warren, with a stamp of her foot: I’ll not be ordered to bed no more, Mr. Proctor! I am eighteen and a woman, how–ever single! Proctor: Do you wish to sit up? Then sit up. Mary Warren: I wish to go to bed!Proctor, in anger: Good night, then!Mary Warren: Good night. Dissatisfied, uncertain of herself, she goes out.

      What follows the silence is Mary's attempt to assert her adulthood and preserve her dignity in the face of Proctor's disgust for her role in court.

    7. Mary Warren, pointing at Elizabeth: I saved her life today!Silence. His whip comes down.Elizabeth, softly: I am accused?

      Mary's outburst is a chilling announcement meant to shock both Proctor and his wife, as well as the audience. The silence that happens after is ominous because of the sobering reality that Elizabeth Proctor's name was mentioned in court.

    8. I must not accuse this woman, for she sleep in ditches, and so very old and poor.

      Goody Osburn is old and poor. She is an outsider in the Salem society (literally too, for "she sleep in ditches").

    9. Mary Warren: Aye, but then Judge Hathorne say, “Recite for us your commandments!” – leaning avidly toward them – and of all the ten she could not say a single one. She never knew no commandments, and they had her in a flat lie!

      The second "hard proof" against Goody Osburn is that the old woman cannot recite her commandments. This is used to confirm her guilt of being a witch.

    10. Last month – a Monday, I think – she walked away, and I thought my guts would burst for two days after. Do you remember it?

      Mary Warren gives the first "hard proof" that Goody Osburn is a witch who did her harm by attributing her coincidental stomach pains to Goody Osburn's alleged malicious intentions.

    11. So many time, Mr. Proctor, she come to this very door, beggin’ bread and a cup of cider – and mark this: whenever I turned her away empty, she mumbled.

      Explain carefully what might be the main reason that Mary condemns Goody Osburn as a witch.

    12. Mary Warren, with greater impatience with him: I told you the proof. It’s hard proof, hard as rock, the judges said.

      What is Mary Warren trying to do here? What is she trying to defend? How does her language show her defensiveness?

    13. Proctor: Mary. She halts. Is it true? There be fourteen women arrested?Mary Warren: No, sir. There be thirty–nine now – she suddenly breaks up and sobs and sits down, exhausted

      Mary's announcement here that 39 women (not fourteen as Elizabeth first informed earlier in Act 2 –– extract 8) have now been arrested and that Goody Osburn is concerning. It alerts the audience to the growing seriousness of the witch trials.

    14. Mary Warren: I am sick, I am sick, Mr. Proctor. Pray, pray, hurt me not. Her strangeness throws him off, and her evident pallor and weakness. He frees her. My insides are all shuddery; I am in the proceedings all day, sir.

      Why do you think Mary Warren appears so pale and exhausted?

    15. lizabeth, perplexed, looking at the doll: Why, thank you, it’s a fair poppet.Mary Warren, with a trembling, decayed voice: We must all love each other now, Goody Proctor.

      This remark by Mary is heavily ironic given how Cheever's appearance later, who regards the doll as hard proof of Elizabeth's witchery.

    16. As soon as he sees her, he goes directly to her and grabs her by her cloak, furious. How do you go to Salem when I forbid it? Do you mock me? Shaking her. I’ll whip you if you dare leave this house again!

      The entrance of Mary Warren cuts the conversation short and Proctor commences to vent his anger and frustration on his disobedient servant.

    1. and where she walks the crowd will part like the sea for Israel.

      Simile makes reference to the Biblical character Moses who parted the Red Sea for Israel. This suggests the immense power and influence Abigail wields in society.

    2. Proctor, quietly, struggling with his thought:

      Proctor, in turn, "quietly" restrains himself to not betray his internal conflict about interfering with court proceedings as he later says "it is not easy ot prove she's fraud".

      There is great tension in how the husband and wife repress their true desires and intentions when interacting with other, proving the great strain in their marriage.

    3. But you’re not, you’re not, and let you remember it!

      Proctor lashes out at Elizabeth self-righteously. Note the use of repetition to suggest how Elizabeth has been holding his affair against him may actually betray his own sense of shame over his adultery rather than how Elizabeth has been unforgiving.

      self-righteous: having or characterized by a certainty, especially an unfounded one, that one is totally correct or morally superior.

    4. I cannot speak but I am doubted, every moment judged for lies, as though I come into a court when I come into this house!

      Such a legalistic simile where John Proctor compares his house to a court is grimly ironic given the fact that both husband and wife are soon to be hauled before a real court whose 'justice' is far more menacing and final judgement potentially fatal.

    5. The magistrate sits in your heart that judges you. I never thought you but a good man, John – with a smile – only somewhat bewildered.

      In this metaphor, Elizabeth compares Proctor’s guilty conscience to a judge who condemns him for his affair with Abigail.