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Shah Y, et al. Safety and efficacy of Impella RP support for acute right ventricular failure complicated by cardiogenic shock: post market approval sub-analysis of the CVAD registry. J Card Fail. 2024;30(1):269.
Whatdoes whitearrow in Fig12D indicat
12D indicates the partially inflated balloon which was mentioned in 12A and 12B.
Shouldred arrowin Fig 12Calso be blue?If not, whatdoes redarrow in Fig12C indicate
The red arrow indicates the catheter and is intended to remain consistent across Figures 12A, 12B, and 12C.
deflate
This should be inflate
Whatdoes whitearrow in Fig12B indicat
It points to the catheter balloon
(red arrow)
Insert "along with the partially inflated balloon (white arrow)"
Refer-ences 8 and 9are not citedin the maintext. Pleaseeither add in-text citationsfor them ordelete themfrom thereference listand renumberthe rest of thereferences inboth the maintext and thereference list
This should be cited in the last sentence of the 4th paragraph in the introduction.
"However, their utility in providing detailed anatomic information can be limited"
limited
insert citations (8,9) here
f appli-cable, pleasebe sure thatmembershipon RSNA ed-itorial boardsor traineeeditorialboards or theboards of oth-er journals orassociationshas beendisclosed
This is not applicable at this point.
leasedefine “Bi-VAD”. Is thisa ventricularassist devicefor both ven-tricles at thesame time
“Bi-VAD” denotes a biventricular assist device providing support to both ventricles at the same time.
Pleaseverify thatthis fundinginformationis accurateand pleaseclarify wherenecessar
yes that is accurate
Maywe publishyour emailaddress
yes
.
Insert "the catheter (orange) is also seen proximal to the balloon"
Whatdoes orangearrow in Fig11C indicate
The orange arrow indicates the catheter.
Would“substantial”be okay hereinstead?
Yes that is okay. Thank you
Shouldthere be adepartmentor divisionlisted for thisaffiliation
For medical students, we listed their affiliation as the School of Medicine without specifying a department.
Was“clinicallysignificant”meant her
Yes that is correct
Sub-stantially”okay hereinstead
yes, thank you
Bi-VAD
"or as a Bi-VAD to provide support to both ventricles concurrently"
To aid ac-cessibility forreaders withred/green col-orblindness,green arrowsin somefigure imageswere changedto white, andcaptions werechanged tomatch.
Thank you
RSNAstyle prefers“attenuation”to “density”when refer-ring to theappearance ofCT scans. OKas edited
Yes that is OK
Correctthat “PA”stood for“pulmonaryartery
Correct
Correctthat “IJ”stood for“intern
Correct
Correctthat “ECG”here stood for“electrocardi-ography
Correct
Pleaseverify theorder andspellingof authornames andthe accuracyof academicdegrees.
These are correct
Correctthat “CTA”here stood for“CT angiog-raphy”
Correct
RSNAstyle uses“significant”only in thestatistical orhemodynam-ic sense. Is“substantial-ly” okay hereinstead?
Yes, that is okay
What ismissing herebetween “To”and “CT”?
Please remove "To". the sentence should start with CT.
To avoidrepetition, wereplaced “in-dentifying”here with“confirming”.OK
ok
5. RSNAstyle doesnot allowfor tradenames in theAbstract. OKas edited?
ok as edited.