14 Matching Annotations
  1. Jun 2017
    1. We

      Rest of the article uses "I"

    2. 10

      should say 10(a)(2)(B) because 10(a)(1)(A) scientific collection/recovery permits don't necessarily require offsets

    3. potential

      Do you feel confident enough to say "apparent"?

  2. Feb 2017
    1. R A N G E O F A D M I N I S TR AT I V E C O N S U LTAT I O N SC O S T S ( 2 0 1 2

      Example of cost estimates for consultations. These costs are lower than the ~$5000/consultation we've seen for other animal species.

  3. Aug 2016
    1. .

      add "in 2017"

    2. so

      too informal to use "so" in this manner--let's replace with "very" or say "significant relative...."

    3. add "a" to large fire

    4. to


    5. cally


    6. among several others

      this is redundant b/c we already say "included" earlier

    7. d fishes and species

      should say "eliminated all fishes as well as other species" As written it reads like we only eliminated fishes...where habitat disturbance...

    8. and provide a

      should say "...by providing a glimpse..."

    9. .

      add "...nationwide." I'm sure someone knows about the condition of some CH designations.

  4. Apr 2016