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    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates how the human brain categorizes visual words from distinct writing systems (alphabetic vs. non-alphabetic). Using a repetition suppression paradigm combined with electroencephalography and magnetoencephalography, the authors conducted nine experiments with independent participants to identify the neural network underlying language-based categorization, characterize its temporal dynamics, and test whether this process operates independently of linguistic properties such as semantic meaning and pronunciation.

      Strengths:

      The study employs a well-validated design with clear control conditions and systematically manipulates key variables including writing system, language familiarity, and native language background. The use of nine experiments with independent participant samples strengthens the reliability and replicability of the results. The work combines EEG and MEG, cross-validating findings across imaging modalities to support the reported neural effects. A combination of univariate, multivariate, and connectivity analyses is used to characterize neural responses and network interactions. Results are consistent across multiple language groups and for both familiar and unfamiliar languages, supporting the generalizability of the identified neural mechanism beyond specific languages or prior experience.

      Comments on revised version.

      Earlier versions of the manuscript framed these findings as more directly reflecting the social-categorization function of language. In the revised manuscript, the authors now more carefully distinguish language-based word categorization from broader claims regarding social categorization and explicitly acknowledge that the current experiments do not directly test social evaluation or intergroup processes. These revisions improve the conceptual precision of the work and address my major concern from the previous review.

      The additional methodological clarifications and supplementary analyses also strengthen the manuscript. Overall, I believe the revised version provides solid evidence for rapid language-based categorization of visual words across different writing systems.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This article reports measurements of iEEG signals on the rat auditory cortex during cochlear implant or sound stimulation in separate groups of rats. The observations indicate some spatial organization of cochlear implant stimuli, but that is very different from cochlear implants.

      Strengths:

      The study includes interesting analyses of the sound and cochlear implant representation structure based on decoders.

      Weaknesses:

      The observation that responses to cochlear implant stimulation (stimulation) is spatially organized is not new (e.g. Adenis et al. 2024)

      The claim that spatial and temporal dimensions contribute information about the sound is also not new there is a large literature on this topic.

      The analyses supporting the claim that there is a mismatch between cochlear implant and sound representation are still unclear, particularly in Fig. 8.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study proposes a novel role for ensheathing glia (EG) in a Pink1-model of Parkinson's disease and shows that this cell population exhibits the highest number of DEG in a pre-symptomatic stage. In the olfactory system, there seems to be morphological changes in this cell-type that resembles an 'activated' state and the authors further show that the neuronal loss of Pink1 is responsible for this defect. The authors go on to show that manipulation of Pink1 in EG also leads to some defects in the visual system and in the dopaminergic neurons (DAN) that innervate the mushroom body (MB), and performed a screen based on the 'on-transient' defect of the ERG to identify potential genes that may modulate the function of EG in synaptic regulation. They focus on several genes related to vesicle trafficking including Vps13, and Vps35 and performed some additional experiments in the visual system and MB to propose the role of vesicle/lipid trafficking in EG as an important factor for PD pathogenesis.

      Strengths:

      The study proposes functional and mechanistic connections between several genes that have been linked to PD (PINK1, VPS35 and VPS13A/C). I feel that the data presented in Figure 1-Figure 3C are performed with rigor and are convincing/novel. The selection of Drosophila to study the questions is also a strength and the lab has extensive experiences in this field and model organism.

      Weaknesses:

      In this revised manuscript, a number of concerns raised by this and the other reviewer was addressed. The authors now admitted that some of the genetic reagents used in their screen and follow up assays were inappropriately utilized, and changed the latter half of the paper (Fig 3D-F4) quite significantly (e.g. now only 1 gene is considered as a hit in Fig3D, analysis of several genes in Fig4 have been removed and replaced by some experiments performed on Vps35). The transition between Figure 3D and Figure 4 is quite abrupt, and they don't seem to follow up on the CG17660 (the single hit from their screen, which is not further validated so it is not clear whether this genetic reagent is clean or not) and the effect of Vps35 RNAi in synaptic phenotype. Therefore, there is still a weakness in Figure 3D-Figure 4, which weakens the paper, especially since the new model diagram the authors provided in Figure 5 is not really investigated at the molecular level.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Mochizuki and colleagues investigated how the germline (MIC) telomere was removed during programmed genome rearrangement in the developing somatic nucleus (MAC). Using an optimized oligo-FISH procedure, the authors demonstrated that MIC telomeres were co-eliminated with a large region of MIC-limited sequences (MLS) demarcated on the opposite side by a sub-telomeric chromosome breakage site (CBS). This conclusion was corroborated by the latest assembly of the Tetrahymena MIC genome. They further employed CRISPR-Cas9 mutagenesis to disrupt a specific sub-telomeric CBS (4R-CBS). In the uniparental progeny (mutant X WT), DNA elimination of the sub-telomeric MLS was not affected, but the adjacent MAC-destined sequence (MDS) may be co-eliminated. However, in the biparental progeny (mutant X mutant), global DNA elimination was arrested, revealing previously unrecognized connections between chromosome breakage and DNA elimination. It also paves the way for future studies into the underlying molecular mechanisms. The work is rigorous, well-controlled, and offers important insights into how eukaryotic genomes demarcate genic regions (retained DNA) and regions derived from transposable element (TE; eliminated DNA) during differentiation. The identification of chromosome breakage sequences as a critical architectural element of the genome separating TE-derived regions from functional genes is a key conceptual contribution.

      Strengths:

      New method development: Oligo-FISH in Tetrahymena. This allows high-resolution visualization of critical genome rearrangement events during MIC-to-MAC differentiation. This method will be a very powerful tool in this area of study.

      The conclusion is strongly supported by integrated analyses of PCR-based assays, as well as cytological, genomic, and transcriptomic data.

      Rigorous genetic analysis of the role played by 4R-CBS in separating the fate of sub-telomeric MLS (elimination) and MDS (retention).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, authors studied the synchrony between ripple events in Hippocampus, cortical spindles and Locus Coeruleus spiking. The results in this study together with the established literature on the relationship of hippocampal ripples with widespread thalamic and cortical waves, guided authors to propose a role for Locus Coeruleus spiking patterns in memory consolidation. The findings provided here, i.e. correlations between LC spiking activity and Hippocampal ripples, could provide basis for future studies probing the directional flow or the necessity of these correlations in the memory consolidation process. Hence, the paper provides enough scientific advance to highlight the elusive yet important role of Norepinephrine circuitry in the memory processes.

      Strengths:

      Authors were able to demonstrate correlations of Locus Coeruleus spikes with hippocampal ripples as well as with cortical spindles. Specific strength of the paper is in the demonstration that the spindles that activate with the ripples are comparatively different in their correlations with Locus Coeruleus than those which do not.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors discovered that HDAC1/2 are degraded in HSV-1 and PRV infections. They attempted to establish a new mechanism by which HDAC1/2 are translocated to the cytoplasm to be degraded in HSV-1 infection, and the degradation causes changes in histone acetylation to affect the DDR pathway.

      Strengths:

      (1) Interesting findings of HDAC1/2 degradation during HSV-1 and PRV infection, and it may impact more than the virology field.

      (2) Significant work to identify the ubiquitin site in HDAC1/2 and K63 linkage.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Do and colleagues aims to develop a workflow for isolating and identifying bacteriophages with potential applications in phage therapy against antibiotic-resistant pathogens. The workflow integrates geΦmapping as a strategy to identify potential phage sources, ΦHD as a device for phage concentration, and RΦ as a phage library constructed from the initial sampling, resulting in the discovery of 36 new phages. The paper is overall interesting, and the proposed method appears robust and effective.

      Strengths:

      The methods proposed combined state-of-the-art strategies to solve an ever-increasing problem of antibiotic resistance. The methods are robust, and the controls are appropriate. The integration of environmental sampling, concentration strategies, and downstream genomic characterization is a clear strength and provides a potentially scalable framework for identifying candidate therapeutic phages. The manuscript is clearly written overall, and the results support the main conclusions.

      Comments on revised version:

      The manuscript has been adequately improved and adjusted according to the comments. There are minor points such as Table S10 is labelled in the top of the page as Table S11. Also, is a little unconventional to cite result figures and tables in the introduction.

      For the question 10, regarding why some of the most abundant vOTUs in the 5L sample were not detected in the concentrate. The answer does not satisfy, as it focuses on why very low abundant vOTUs will not be detected, but the question is why some of the most abundant vOTUs were not detected. This does not affect the results or interpretation made.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The constraints on learning in the brain remain elusive. Using BCIs, Sadtler et al. demonstrated that the brain can rapidly learn new decoders that lie within the intrinsic neural manifold (short-term adaptation), while showing substantial difficulty learning decoders that lie outside the manifold. This finding suggests that neural manifolds impose constraints on learning. However, even among within-manifold decoders, there was considerable variability in learning rates that could not be explained solely by geometric factors.

      Here, Gurnani et al propose that, in addition to manifold structure, neural dynamics (i.e., the flow field across states) impose critical constraints on learning. To test this idea, the authors trained RNNs that received real-time feedback (e.g., position error signals) during a BCI task in which the network controlled a cursor. The authors showed that short-term adaptation to a new decoder is facilitated by plasticity in sensory inputs, and that pre-existing dynamics influence the speed of adaptation across different decoders. These findings may explain previously unresolved constraints observed in BCI learning and suggest an important role for neural dynamics in constraining sensorimotor learning in the brain.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the work is highly impactful and is likely to motivate a new generation of BCI and learning experiments combining large-scale neural recordings with latent dynamical systems analyses. The paper is clearly written, and I only have minor comments, primarily for clarification.

      Weaknesses:

      There are no major weaknesses. Please see below for minor comments.

      (1) If I understand correctly, most analyses do not distinguish between the preparatory phase and the movement phase. Given that the preparatory phase is largely controlled by feedforward input, I suspect that most of the dynamical constraints underlying learning variability arise during the movement phase. Is this correct? If so, could the authors clarify or directly test this distinction?

      (2) P4: Position vs. velocity decoders: It would be helpful to describe whether and how the choice of velocity versus position decoders influences whether perturbations are learnable, and whether input-driven constraints arising in this task are similar.

      (3) The variance criteria used to screen decoder perturbations may themselves covary with learning rate, behavioral asymmetry, and overlap with controllable subspaces. A quantification of this relationship would help contextualize the findings and inform the design of future BCI experiments.

      (4) To support the comparison between Figures 3 and 7, and the conclusion that Figure 3 better matches the experimental data, which is an important point of the manuscript, could the authors provide quantitative values from the experimental data (e.g., how large is the change in variance within oPCs, etc)?

      (5) Figure 8h: Is the variability in learning rates in models with different controller networks explained by the same dynamical constraints described in Figure 6? Demonstrating consistent dynamical constraints across model architectures would strengthen the paper's central conclusion.

      (6) Figure 8f: Why does feedforward controllability differ between conditions? This is mentioned in the text, but no explanation is provided.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Sajid et al. describes a comprehensive behavioral, imaging and optogenetic dataset investigating the role of the mPFC in avoidance and escape behaviors. Although many movement- and task-related variables are encoded by mPFC GABAergic neurons, the main conclusion is that they are unlikely to control behavioral output.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is generally well executed and plausible in its conclusions. It provides an alternative viewpoint to many articles describing the involvement of mPFC to behavior, based on a complex multi-stage behavioral paradigm acquired and analyzed in an unbiased way.

      Weaknesses:

      This reviewer sees two weaknesses.

      (1) In some cases, the explained variance, marginal and conditional, is low, suggesting the models only modestly capture the complexity in the data.

      (2) The manuscript is challenging to read due to the comprehensive and unbiased presentation style.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors did a good job at addressing the reviewers' comments. One minor additional suggestion is to add references for the statement in the last paragraph of the discussion for the mPFC lesion studies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigated the effects of a low-protein diet (LPD) and a high sugar- and fat-rich diet (Western diet, WD) on paternal metabolic and reproductive parameters and feto-placental development and gene expression. They did not observe significant effects on fertility; however, they reported gut microbiota dysbiosis, alterations in testicular morphology, and severe detrimental effects on spermatogenesis. In addition, they examined whether the adverse effects of these diets could be prevented by supplementation with methyl donors. Although LPD and WD showed limited negative effects on paternal reproductive health (with no impairment of reproductive success), the consequences on fetal and placental development were evident and, as reported in many previous studies, were sex-dependent.

      Strengths:

      This study is of high quality and addresses a research question of great global relevance, particularly in light of the growing concern regarding the exponential increase in metabolic disorders, such as obesity and diabetes, worldwide. The work highlights the importance of a balanced paternal diet in regulating the expression of metabolic genes in the offspring at both fetal and placental levels. The identification of genes involved in metabolic pathways that may influence offspring health after birth is highly valuable, strengthening the manuscript and emphasizing the need to further investigate long-term outcomes in adult offspring.

      The histological analyses performed on paternal testes clearly demonstrate diet-induced damage. Moreover, although placental morphometric analyses and detailed histological assessments of the different placental zones did not reveal significant differences between groups, their inclusion is important. These results indicate that even in the absence of overt placental phenotypic changes, placental function may still be altered, with potential consequences for fetal programming.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have adequately addressed all my previous comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study addresses the population genetic underpinnings of the extraordinary diversity of genes in the MHC, which is widespread among jawed vertebrates. This topic has been widely discussed and studied, and several hypotheses have been suggested to explain this diversity. One of them is based on the idea that heterozygote genotypes have an advantage over homozygotes. While this hypothesis lost early on support, a reason study claimed that there is good support for this idea. The current study highlights an important aspect that allows us to see results presented in the earlier published paper in a different light, changing strongly the conclusions of the earlier study, i.e., there is no support for a heterozygote advantage. This is a very important contribution to the field. Furthermore, this new study presents an alternative hypothesis to explain the maintenance of MHC diversity, which is based on the idea that gene duplications can create diversity without heterozygosity being important. This is an interesting idea, but not entirely new.

      Strength:

      (1) A careful re-evaluation of a published model, questioning a major assumption made by a previous study.

      (2) A convincing reanalysis of a model that, in the light of the re-analysis-loses all support.

      (3) A convincing suggestion for an alternative hypothesis.

      Weakness:

      (1) The title of the study is catchy, but it is explained only in the very end of the paper.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Mutations in Leucine-Rich Repeat Kinase 2 (LRRK2) are a major cause of Parkinson's disease. LRRK2 PD-related mutations all result in increased kinase activity. Therefore, LRRK2 has been the focus of the development of kinase inhibitors. So far, two classes of kinase inhibitors have been identified: type 1 LRRK2-specific inhibitors that stabilize LRRK2 in a closed active-like conformation and broad-range type 2 inhibitors that stabilize LRRK2 in an open inactive-like conformation. Basiashvili et al. used here in cell structural biology to study the effect of both type 1 and type 2 inhibitors on the localization and structural conformation of LRRK2-I2020T.

      Strengths:

      They showed that Type 1 and not Type 2 inhibitors induce LRRK2 filament/ on microtubules. Furthermore, they were able to build a structural map of full-length LRRK2 I2020T bound to a Type 1 inhibitor in a closed kinase confirmation. Together, this work thus confirms the data of previous studies that showed that LRRK2 Type 1 and 2 inhibitors differently affect filament formation.

      Weaknesses:

      All conclusions are fully supported by the provided data. However, as the authors indicated themselves, the physiological relevance of LRRK2 microtubule binding is questionable. Furthermore, although the authors used a full-length LRRK2 protein, like in previously published structures, the resolution of the N-terminal domains is rather poor. Therefore, it also remains unclear what we learn from this structure compared to the previously published structures.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study develops a new artificial intelligence method for high-throughput analysis of skull bone marrow from MRI data, which may be useful for large-scale biological analyses. Using this method, the authors then attempt to estimate skull bone marrow adiposity (BMA) using T1-weighted signal intensity from MRI scans of ~33,000 people, followed by genome-wide association analysis; however, the approach is inadequate because T1-weighted signal intensity is not validated for measurement of bone marrow adiposity. If it could be validated, the study would be an important advance in understanding of bone marrow adiposity and skeletal biology.

      Strengths:

      This paper is well-written, and the figures are nicely presented. The neural network method used for analysing skull bone marrow is innovative, and the authors validate this through several approaches. Therefore, the authors have achieved the aim of developing a method for large-scale analysis of skull bone marrow from MRI data.

      The GWAS is reasonably well-powered and addresses potential ethnicity differences, with one GWAS done across white males and females, and a separate GWAS in non-white participants. The methodology also conforms to common GWAS standards, including for mapping genetic variants to candidate genes. Moreover, the study further investigates the biological roles of these genes by analysing their expression in single-cell RNA sequencing data.

      Weaknesses:

      The fundamental weakness is that T1-weighted MRI signal intensity (T1W) is used as an estimate of BMA, but it has never been validated for this. The authors show that this T1W parameter measures something that is heritable and can be compared between subjects, but they don't show that it actually measures (or even estimates) calvarial BMA. There is an attempt to do so by comparing the T1W parameter with data from quantitative T1 images: the authors show a reasonable correlation with some of the quantitative T1 image data. However, this still does not show that the parameter is measuring BMA; it could be measuring some other biological characteristic, but this remains unclear. So, there is a need to validate the T1W parameter against an established measure of BMA, such as the bone marrow fat-fraction or proton density fat fraction measured from multi-echo MRI analysis.

      Without validating this BMA measurement method, it is not possible to interpret the GWAS or other findings reported in the study.

      A less critical weakness is that the GWAS has been done only on a single cohort, without replicating the findings in a follow-up cohort. For example, the authors could repeat their analysis on the remaining ~50,000 UK Biobank imaging participants for whom MRI data is now available. However, this would be pointless without knowing what biological characteristic(s) the T1W parameter is actually reflecting.

      [UPDATE, June 2026: since writing this review in September 2024, the reviewer has changed their opinion and now has confidence in the reliability of the T1W method used to estimate BMA. The reviewer would like to explain that their original critiques were based largely on previous discussions with a colleague with expertise in magnetic resonance and medical physics, who was extremely negative about use of T1W signal intensity to estimate BMA; this colleague’s criticisms may not have been objective, and clouded the reviewer’s overall impression of the present study. The reviewer and others have since completed BMA analysis using dual-echo MRI data in the UK Biobank; the findings of these studies, both for genetic and pathophysiological associations, are largely consistent with the findings of the present study, underscoring the reliability of the T1W-based BMA estimates.]

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors show that deprivation of Arginine and Lysine induces a ~50% increase in the ratio of ubi-RPS27A to RPS27A, and this induction requires E3 ubiquitin ligase RNF25. The authors show ZAKalpha and EDF1 are not required for steady state or ribosome stalling-induced ubi-RPS27A, while GCN1 is required. The ratio of polysomes to monosomes is increased in RNF25 knockdown cells or when translation is activated by ISRIB in a RPS27A K113R mutant cell line. GCN2 KO cells indicate elevated levels of ubi-RPS27A, and overexpression of the GCN2 RWD domain reduces levels of ubi-RPS27A.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors identified a novel pathway to sense amino acid deprivation, indicated by ubi-RPS27A, previously implicated in ribosome stalling.

      (2) The authors find antagonism between two proteins known to act downstream of GCN1, giving insight into how signaling occurs from an upstream sensor of ribosome stalling to multiple downstream pathways.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors suggest that, based on increased Polysome/Monosome ratios, there is more disome stalling in RNF25 KD cells and RPS27A K113R cells treated with ISRIB, but this readout is very indirect and could be driven by other changes in the cell other than ribosome stalling.

      (2) While the authors propose that GCN2 and RNF25 compete for binding to GCN1, no evidence was shown that RNF25 binds to GCN1 in cells, nor that the interaction increases when GCN2 is absent.

      (3) The use of USP16 to enhance the detection of ubi-RPS27A in many experiments brings the question of whether USP16 KO may alter the protein levels of any known regulators of ribosome collisions? (i.e. ZNF598, GCN1, EDF1, ZAKalpha, etc.) If USP16 KO causes changes in other important regulators of collisions, the authors could be identifying genetic interactions with USP16 in their experiments throughout the paper.

      (4) In Figure 5E, the expression level of the GCN2 3K RWD domain looks to be lower than the WT RWD domain; perhaps this could be what is driving the smaller decrease of ubi-RPS27A seen with GCN2 3K vs WT.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Benbow et al. identifies, through a genetic screen, key tubulin mutants that, with high confidence, rescue tau-mediated ND phenotypes. This manuscript is well written, and the experimental results strongly support the authors' claims that these tubulin mutants can rescue ND-linked phenotypes in C. elegans while having little to no direct effect on Tau aggregation.

      Strengths:

      Benbow et al. use a relatively unbiased forward genetic screen to identify mutations associated with phenotypes that suppress tauopathy-related defects. The authors then logically focus on the various α-tubulin missense mutations identified in H12, which are known to localize to the external face of microtubules. The authors also carefully compare their established tauopathy-associated phenotypes in the WT TauH model, with and without specific α-tubulin mutations, using appropriate controls throughout. Lastly, the authors provide partial mechanistic insight into the α-tubulin mutant-mediated rescue, showing that these effects are independent of tau aggregation and tau phosphorylation, and instead suggest that the α-tubulin mutations may confer altered microtubule assembly properties based on the sedimentation assays.

      Weaknesses:

      While the claims are largely supported by the experimental outcomes, the authors at times do not provide enough detail in the text for readers to interpret the data sets independently. In addition, some claims appear to be slightly overstated relative to the data or the degree of error associated with those data.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Previous structural analyses of DELE1 by the authors revealed that the first α-helix within the TPR repeat domain provides the oligomeric interface of DELE1, and that DELE1 octamer formation is required for maximal ISR activation. Based on these findings, the authors designed peptides intended to bind this oligomeric interface and showed that these peptides interfere with DELE1 oligomerization in vitro and attenuate ISR activation in cultured cells.

      Strengths:

      The series of in-vitro data sets showing direct binding of the designed peptides to DELE1 and inhibitory effects on its oligomerization are convincing.

      Weaknesses:

      The physiological (or experimental) significance of inhibiting the DELE1-HRI-ISR pathway using these peptides has not been clearly demonstrated, particularly given that the very limited cell biological outcomes are tested in the current manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Duan, Hua et al. used CUT&Tag and Micro-C to investigate that in primary trastuzumab-resistant HER2+ breast cancer cells, promoter H3K4me3 rather than H3K27me3 is strongly correlated with transcriptional activity. Resistant cells also exhibited more abundant promoter-enhancer loops and enriched cohesin at loop anchors, accompanied by shifts in A/B compartment status. Through multi-omics integration, the authors identified SGK1 as a key gene showing elevated promoter H3K4me3 levels, enhancer activation, strengthened chromatin loops, and upregulated transcription in resistant cells, and validated SGK1 as a potential therapeutic target. These findings reveal the coordinated interplay between three-dimensional chromatin architecture and epigenetic modifications, offering important insights into trastuzumab resistance in HER2+ breast cancer.

      Strengths:

      Previous investigations into trastuzumab resistance have largely focused on genetic mutations or individual epigenetic modifications. In contrast, this study moves beyond genetic or single epigenetic views by integrating histone modifications and 3D chromatin architecture into a unified framework, proposing a synergistic model of promoter H3K4me3, enhancer activation, and chromatin looping that underlies non-genetic resistance. It provides a new conceptual basis for understanding non-genetic resistance mechanisms. Secondly, using high-resolution epigenomic and conformational mapping together with bidirectional in vitro and in vivo functional validation, it establishes a solid link between epigenetic changes and phenotypes, and demonstrates that SGK1 inhibition suppresses tumor growth in a xenograft model, revealing clear translational potential.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) All findings are based on a single pair of cell lines, JIMT1 and SKBR3, which does not allow exclusion of cell line‑specific effects. The authors did not examine SGK1 expression levels, promoter H3K4me3 status, or relevant chromatin loops in tumor tissues from patients with clinical trastuzumab resistance. Consequently, whether the conclusions can be extrapolated to actual patient populations remains unclear, which limits the clinical relevance of the findings. It is recommended that the authors directly validate the key findings using tumor samples from patients with clinical trastuzumab resistance or analyze the correlation between SGK1 expression levels and disease-free survival or pathological complete response using data from public databases for HER2+ breast cancer patients, which would help address the current limitation of lacking clinical sample validation and the uncertainty regarding the association of SGK1 with patient prognosis and treatment response.

      (2) In the Discussion, the authors propose that SGK1 may assume the role of AKT to sustain mTOR activation, thereby bypassing the dependence on HER2 signaling following trastuzumab inhibition. Although this hypothesis is supported by published literature, the present study provides no direct signaling evidence, such as examining phosphorylation changes of SGK1, AKT, mTOR, or their downstream effectors.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Overview:

      This study integrates several datasets into a unified modeling framework that incorporates several mechanisms thought to impact the spread of ESBL-resistant bacterial strains. The model accounts for tradeoffs between persistor and colonizer strains, travel rates, antibiotic treatment and strain clearance, direct competitive interactions, and, most importantly, a series of distinct costs associated with the carriage of ESBL resistance. The resulting 75-compartment model is internally consistent and structurally neutral. However, the parameter estimation is flawed in many ways, compromising the interpretations of the model.

      On the usage of the Swedish infant data set to estimate colonization and persistence:

      First, while other papers have taken similar approaches, the Swedish infant data set is fundamentally inadequate to estimate colonization and persistence rates. This is because very few colonies were typed per sampling event (2 to 6 colonies per event). The original authors themselves argued that strains of indistinguishable morphology would not be able to be differentiated by this method. They also provided data showing that strain identity was not directly related to colony morphology (same strain often displaying distinct morphologies).

      The consequence of this is that strains present in low abundance would be missed with a high likelihood. However, if they were to be stochastically sampled, this would count as a "colonization" event, and if they were missed in subsequent samplings, this would count as a "loss" event. In other words, the statistical methods described conflate within-host dynamics (which might lead to distinct within-host abundances) with between-host dynamics (colonization and loss).

      Beyond this conceptual issue, some technical aspects aren't particularly sound. The mean of the inferred posterior for the lambda and mu parameters are then used to calculate the beta, gamma, d, and epsilon parameters through a linear regression. The more technically correct way of doing this would be to directly infer these parameters from the data and obtain a full posterior for these parameters.

      This highlights another issue: these parameters are passed down to the next statistical model as point estimates, with no associated uncertainty. This artificially inflates the (already low) confidence of the estimates for the cost parameters.

      Finally, when this procedure generated parameters that were inconsistent with their expectations (clearance is too high to explain prevalence in France), they adjusted the parameters by discarding and recalculating their beta parameters to artificially enforce neutrality between their strains and enforce the expected prevalence. This is problematic because beta and gamma were jointly estimated, and there is no particular reason why some of them should be discarded. The more natural interpretation would be that parameters inferred from Swedish infants do not translate well to French adults, which should preclude their usage in this context.

      On the estimation of costs of ESBL resistance:

      The core of the second statistical model is to use prevalence data, travel data, and treatment data in conjunction with the previously inferred colonization and loss parameters to infer the costs of carrying antibiotic resistance. Therefore, the accuracy of this section is contingent on an accurate estimation of the previous parameters. However, these colonization and loss parameters are inherited with no uncertainty (just point estimates are passed down), which, as previously mentioned, generates an artificially precise posterior distribution for the resistance parameters.

      However, the most severe issue with the statistics lies in the choice of priors for the cost parameters. All of them are uniform in a positive range that implies a positive cost. Importantly, the average over a positive range will always be positive; therefore, this method will ALWAYS estimate a positive mean for the costs. Note that the posterior distribution of some cost parameters seems to peak around zero and abruptly decays with no mass to the left of zero. This is caused by the choice of prior. Had delta been allowed to be negative (i.e., antibiotic resistance carried a benefit, having the prior be uniform between -1 and 1), the posterior distribution would likely be much more symmetrical, and the confidence interval would have included 0.

      Restating, because the prior is a continuous function between 0 and 1, it contains infinitely more mass in the region that represents there being a cost (delta>0) than in the region representing no cost (delta=0). This means that it is a mathematical impossibility for this model to infer the absence of a cost.

      Therefore, the main finding of the paper ("We found that resistance is costly") is a mathematical artifact of the prior choice and of the model structure.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The rebuttal aims to provide a statistical re-evaluation of Epp et al. to investigate the effects of CMRO2 uncertainty on concordance/discordance analysis between BOLD signal responses and CMRO2 change estimates based on an R2 framework. The authors observe markedly higher variance in CMRO2 compared to BOLD, which raises concerns about sign classification purely based on group means/medians.

      Strengths:

      The study is well motivated, and the analytical pipeline is rigorous and has been provided. Overall, the manuscript provides several thoughtful and rigorous analyses that contribute meaningfully to the ongoing discussion surrounding neurovascular coupling and CMRO₂ estimation.

      Weaknesses:

      Some aspects of the analytical framework could be improved, as well as the discussion of the caveats of the methods of this and the original paper.

      (1) The binomial framework discussed on line 110 and described on line 321 reduces continuous ΔBOLD and ΔCMRO2 measurements to binary concordant/discordant labels, which may overemphasize unstable sign flips near zero effect sizes while discarding potentially meaningful magnitude information. The authors acknowledge that this overly strict approach yields very few meaningful voxels. A better justification or explanation of what we are meant to take away from this, other than the variability in the measurement, which is also explored elsewhere, would be helpful to the reader.

      (2) In the methods, in the section entitled: Voxel Selection: BOLD Activation Mask, the authors describe their more traditional univariate statistical method as compared to the PLS approach used in the Epp paper. While I appreciate why the authors chose this approach, which simplifies interpretation, is it possible that this led to a lower number of discordant voxels? If yes, then I would suggest this be also added in the discussion of how the original Epp paper's methodological choices led to the very large percentage of discordant voxels.

      (3) In the original paper, it looks to me like the discordant voxels have low CBF change and low rOEF. The gadolinium-based CBV measurement used to calculate OEF is a measure of total blood volume, while the blood volume that contributes to BOLD resides predominantly in veins and capillaries. Given the long PLD of the ASL acquisition and the total blood volume measurement, it seems to me that it is possible that discordant voxels may have high arterial blood volume, leading to overly large CBV measurement and an underestimation of CBF at this PLD (especially given their young age, for which I would expect ATT to be closer to 1-1.5s based on recent literature). While this is not currently discussed in this paper, it might be relevant to discuss how acquisition choices could bias some voxels towards erroneous CMRO2 estimates, which in turn would lead to these voxels being identified as discordant.

      (4) In the methods, on line 267, the authors describe how they calculated ΔCMRO2 and how it differs from the original paper. A short discussion of how this choice is likely to affect the variance estimates would be warranted, given that the original paper seems to have chosen their method for the explicit purpose of decreasing error propagation. Especially, I wonder if this difference could account for the observation that "77.2% of voxels showed no statistically significant group-level ΔCMRO₂ effect".

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study uses cortex-wide mesoscopic calcium imaging to investigate how adult vision loss induced by bilateral enucleation alters spontaneous cortical activity across behavioral states, including quiescence, locomotion, and anesthesia. The authors perform longitudinal imaging over two time scales, spanning days to weeks and weeks to months after enucleation, enabling them to track the changes of cortical reorganization.

      The main findings are that oscillatory activity in V1 undergoes a strong reversal in its relationship to behavioral state. Before enucleation, V1 activity is positively correlated with locomotion and negatively correlated with quiescence, whereas after vision loss, this pattern reverses. State-transition dynamics are similarly altered: locomotion onset shows reduced V1 activation, while cessation of locomotion is associated with increased activity after enucleation, while it caused suppression during baseline. In addition, the authors report an increase in slow-wave (0.1-4 Hz) activity in V1 after enucleation, starting in the first week and lasting over many weeks. Although these effects show partial recovery over time, many abnormalities persist for weeks to months.

      At the network level, the study reveals altered large-scale cortical organization, including reduced functional connectivity involving V1 that appears to remain impaired.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the work provides a thorough characterization of how adult vision loss reshapes cortical dynamics, particularly with respect to behavioral-state modulation.

      Weaknesses:

      However, there is also a lack of clarity due to the way the data are presented. Moreover, the study remains largely descriptive, as it does not address the mechanisms underlying these changes or their functional significance, making it difficult to interpret the broader implications of the observed cortical reorganization.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper aims to test whether training models to play video games from visual inputs through reinforcement learning leads to better matches to human visual encoding during gameplay, compared to models with the same architecture and training images but with different training objectives. The authors find a slight advantage for the RL model, but encoding performance and generalization overall are weak and variable.

      Strengths:

      This was a reasonable hypothesis to test, and the model comparisons adequately represent other possibilities for training a model of the given architecture. The ResNet proxy is a particularly interesting way to benefit from a larger model's pre-training while still using the same constrained architecture and training set.

      Weaknesses:

      I always prefer to see learning curves for models on the tasks they were trained on, just to contextualize their performance on the brain encoding results, but they are not shown here.

      The paper misses some of the relevant literature that has performed similar comparisons across learning objectives for visual encoding models, such as https://arxiv.org/abs/2112.02027 and https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC10569538/

      The authors end up advocating for the idea that large-scale pre-training is needed in order to build good visual encoders for matching human data. In many ways, this was already known (given that brain encoding scores scale with imagenet performance, which requires at least a moderate amount of general-purpose image training to achieve). However, they also note that "the brain encoding performance of the ResNet model was not significantly different from that of the Untrained model." I would assume that an ImageNet-trained ResNet would be in the direction of the type of large-scale pre-trained model the authors advocate for (even when not trained for action generation), yet their results don't support this direction being the solution. Are their results about Resnet not surpassing an untrained model consistent with prior work, and if not, why not? How do they view this in light of their argument for the use of larger models?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The goal of the work is to identify genes that are uniquely expressed in subsets of eye muscle-innervating motor neurons, as a way to identify candidate genes for strabismus, a congenital vision disorder in humans. The author's previous work identified birth-order differences that correlate with the positions of neurons in the oculomotor (cranial nerve III) motor nucleus. Here, they use Kaede photoconversion to distinguish early- from late-born neurons and identified transcriptional differences between them by bulk RNA sequencing of FACS-sorted cells. Separately, they used single-cell RNA-Seq to sequence the transcriptomes of 89 extraocular motor neurons. They find signatures of early-born mIII, late-born mIII, and mIV neurons. While there is some overlap in gene expression, some of the differentially expressed genes are confirmed by HCR as being unique to one of these three populations of extraocular motor neurons.

      The authors test the functions of three differentially expressed genes in the vestibulo-ocular reflex by measuring the speed of rotation of the eye in response to the larval fish being tilted 15° from horizontal. One mutant, in the sim1a transcription factor, has markedly slowed responses. Although this is a global knock-out, the authors argue that this defect in the vestibulo-ocular reflex is due to a loss of sim1a function specifically in dorsal mIII neurons because sim1a is not expressed in the two upstream neurons in the vestibulo-ocular reflex circuit.

      Strengths:

      (1) This is the first time that transcriptional differences between and within extraocular muscle-innervating neurons have been described during development. In identifying differentially expressed genes that correspond with anatomical, functional, and temporal subdivisions of these neurons, they support the idea that gene expression programs established early in development underlie the functional differences amongst these neurons.

      (2) The combination of bulk RNA-Seq and single-cell RNA-Seq strengthens the identification of sim1a-expressing early-born mIII neuron subtype.

      (3) The work identifies candidate genes for strabismus.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors show that sim1a is only expressed in mIII neurons and no other cells in the vestibulo-ocular reflex, as evidence that the phenotype in sim1a mutants is due to loss of its expression specifically in mIII neurons. However, as the authors note in the discussion, sim1a has other functions in zebrafish, including global calcium homeostasis via specification of the corpuscles of Stannius. The loss of this, or of some other sim1a function, could be indirectly responsible for the slow vestibulo-ocular response in sim1a mutants.

      (2) The authors perform the vestibulo-ocular response test in sim1a mutants at 7 dpf, which is within a day of when the mutants die, raising the concern that the slowed response is due to a dire systemic condition. The argument that nav2 mutants also die at 7 dpf but have a normal response is weak, since death does not always take a single course.

      (3) The evaluation of the sim1a mutant phenotype is limited to the vestibulo-ocular reflex. The authors do not explore whether the oculomotor neuron innervation of target extraocular muscles is affected in sim1a mutants.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript concerns the mechanisms by which cells in a spheroid embedded in the extracellular matrix can escape, either as single or multiple cells.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the manuscript is well written and easy to follow. The claims are mostly justified by the data. Some data can be better analyzed and presented to strengthen the conclusion.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The description around Figure 2c is not exactly well supported by their results. While values close to 0 for sigma3 dot g3 for solid-like spheroids indicate little correlation between the direction of maximum stress and maximum elongation, this analysis alone does not imply that highly stressed cells are necessarily less globular. The dot product combines the magnitudes of the two vectors and the angle between them. For the distribution graph, it would be useful to have the cumulative frequency equal 1.

      (2) One of the central claims of the paper is that morphology alone is not a reliable indicator of mechanical state. Since the authors compute cellular stresses and cellular shape in their simulation (i.e., Figure 3a and b), can the authors directly plot these two quantities for individual cells in solid-like and fluid-like spheroids?

      (3) There is experimental evidence showing the solid stress inside a spheroid is higher than at the periphery (e.g., https://www.nature.com/articles/ncomms14056). How does this cellular stress relate to these experimental measurements, since they are opposite to what is simulated here (i.e., the authors find max shear stress is lowest in the center and increases towards the boundary, which is opposite to what is measured?

      (4) It's worth pointing out that stress fibers aren't really prominent in cells in 3D spheroids. Nonetheless, cells moving on collagen fibers would have stress fibers and utilize contractile actomyosin bundles to generate traction forces.

      (5) In section 2D, it talks about the result that as the kcc associated with the boundary cell is decreased 10-fold for every 5 percent strain decrease in the fiber target spring length, can this result be shown? I have a hard time seeing where this came from.

      (6) The results of single-cell vs. two-cell breakouts shown in Figure 5 b and c are very qualitative and should be accompanied by some quantitative comparison.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In their article, Peterson et al. wanted to show to what extent the classical "single hit" model of virion infection, where always the same quantity of virion is required to infect a cell, does not match with empirical observations based on human cytomegalovirus in vitro infection model, and how this would have practical impacts in experimental protocols.

      Strengths:

      - The use of a very simple and robust experimental assay, where they infected cells with serially diluted virions and measured the proportion of infected cells with flow cytometry. This convincingly showed how the proportion of infected cells differed from a "single hit" model which they simulated using a simple mathematical model ("power-law model"), and better fitted a model where virions need to cooperate to infect cells.

      - The use of different cell types and virus strains, which allows to draw some generalizations.

      - The exploration of the mechanisms that could explain this apparent cooperation, using biologically plausible simulations.

      - The practical consequences that this phenomenon has for lab virologists as well as modelers.

      Weaknesses:

      - The impossibility to discriminate between biological mechanisms is an important limitation of this study and calls for developing experimental designs able to further understand this question.

      - The outcome of the virion clumping remains highly sensitive to the choice of the clumps size distribution, which is itself very complicated to estimate, especially at high dilution.

      - The impossibility to directly fit the mathematical models to the data limit them to a qualitative discussion.

      Overall, this work is very valuable as it raises the general question of how the estimate of infectivity can be biased if extrapolated from a single virus titer assay. The observation that HCMV virions often cooperate and that this cooperation varies between context seems robust. The putative biological explanations would require further exploration.

      This topic is very well known in the case of segmented viruses and the semi-infectious particles, leading to the idea of studying "sociovirology", but to my knowledge this is the first time that it was explored for a non-segmented virus, and in the context of MOI estimation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Strengths:

      (1) Because the study compares genuinely infected cells with uninfected cells within the same infected cell population, it enables a clearer and more rigorous comparison.

      (2) By using multiple Chlamydia species and cells from multiple host species (human and mouse), and obtaining consistent findings across these systems, the study demonstrates the generality of bacterium-induced epigenomic alterations.

      (3) The study shows that the epigenomic changes are caused by reduced activity of JMJC domain-containing lysine demethylases, demonstrating through multiple complementary approaches-including the use of a demethylase inhibitor, overexpression of target-specific demethylases, and analysis from the perspective of cofactors required for JMJC domain-containing demethylases-that decreased lysine demethylase activity constitutes the molecular mechanism underlying the increased H3 methylation levels induced by Chlamydia infection.

      (4) By performing ChIP-seq analyses of H3K4me3 and H3K9me3, the study clearly delineates, on a genome-wide scale, how infection leads to increased levels of these epigenomic marks.

      Weakness:

      (1) Reduction of cofactors such as Fe2+ or a-KG decreases the activity of JMJC-domain-containing lysine demethylases (thereby directly affecting histone H3 lysine methylation). However, these cofactors are also involved in the activities of other epigenetic regulators, such as TET enzymes that contribute to DNA demethylation and SIRT family proteins that mediate histone deacetylation. Therefore, it cannot be excluded that modulation of these factors indirectly leads to the changes in H3 lysine methylation dynamics targeted in this study.

      (2) Related to point 1, although overexpression of JMJC-type demethylases has been shown to reduce the Chlamydia infection-induced increase in H3 lysine methylation, it is well known that over production of these enzymes, while target-specific, also leads to a genome-wide reduction of lysine methylation. Thus, a decrease in lysine methylation upon expression of these demethylases does not necessarily demonstrate that the infection-induced increase in H3 lysine methylation is caused by impaired JMJC-type demethylase activity.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors propose a common value-estimation framework based on Bayesian inference and show that it can account for both participants' confidence in their value estimates ("value confidence") and for their confidence in their final choices ("decision confidence").

      Strengths:

      The study extends several established findings in the confidence and reinforcement-learning literature. In particular, the authors not only examine decision confidence but also directly model value confidence, and they replicate the idea that decision confidence reflects a combination of multiple computations, previously described for categorical decisions (Navajas et al., 2017), in the context of continuous value-based decisions. I therefore consider the work a useful contribution to the field.

      Weaknesses:

      However, I believe that the scope of the conclusions is overstated relative to the results that are actually presented.

      (1) Interaction between value confidence and decision confidence

      The abstract and introduction frame the study as addressing a major gap in the literature, namely, the lack of direct investigation of the interaction between value confidence and decision confidence. Yet the manuscript never directly tests the interaction between these two quantities. Instead, the authors show that the reported decision confidence depends not only on the probability of being correct, but also on the precision of the decision variable DV, which is related to the precision of the value estimates underlying value confidence. While this is related to the proposed research question, it is not a direct analysis of the interaction between value confidence and decision confidence themselves.

      (2) Unified computational framework

      Similarly, the claim that the study provides a "unified computational framework" appears somewhat overstated. The proposed models build on standard and well-established Bayesian frameworks and extend them specifically to account for decision confidence. While this demonstrates that both forms of confidence can be expressed within a common Bayesian formalism, the manuscript does not establish a direct computational interaction or shared mechanism between them beyond their dependence on the same underlying uncertainty estimates.

      (3) "Phenotypes" interpretation

      The interpretation of the observed individual differences as distinct "behavioural phenotypes" also appears overstated. The reported analyses primarily show continuous variability across participants in the relative weighting of different components contributing to confidence reports, rather than evidence for qualitatively distinct categories or computational subtypes of decision-makers.

      (4) Decision confidence terminology

      I also found some conceptual ambiguity in the terminology used throughout the manuscript. Early in the paper, decision confidence is defined normatively as the subjective probability of having made the correct choice, corresponding to P(DV>0). Later, however, the authors show that participants' confidence reports are better explained by a combination of this probability and the precision of the decision-variable distribution. Despite this distinction, the manuscript continues referring to the reported quantity simply as "decision confidence." Clarifying the distinction between the theoretical construct and the empirical reports (for example, by referring to "reported decision confidence") would improve conceptual clarity.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study focuses on revealing the essential divergent function of the Acyl Carrier protein (ACP) in the deadliest human malaria parasite, Plasmodium falciparum. More precisely, using inducible KO, cellular and biochemical approaches, the authors determined that instead of a canonical role for ACP allowing the de novo synthesis of fatty acids in the apicoplast (essential relict plastid) of the parasite, the enzyme couples with pyruvate kinase II to generate nucleoside triphosphate to maintain parasite survival during blood stages. The study is novel, well-designed, providing interesting new data on Plasmodium and apicomplexa biology. The results convincingly support the major claim of the study. However, it is currently incomplete to support some claims on the essentiality of some apicoplast pathways.

      In this study, Geher et al. focused on deciphering the role of the Acyl Carrier Protein (ACP) present in the relict non-photosynthetic plastid, i.e. the apicoplast of the most lethal human malaria parasite, Plasmodium falciparum. More particularly, they determined an essential function of ACP independent of its usual/typical function as the central protein for the normal function of the apicoplast Type II fatty acid synthesis (FASII) pathway. Rather, the protein seems to associate with the apicoplast Pyruvate Kinase II, together generating an essential nucleoside triphosphate (NTPs) source to fuel the apicoplast and parasite survival instead.

      By generating a TetR-DOZY-based inducible KD line for ACP, they confirmed that the protein is indeed essential to maintain apicoplast integrity and parasite survival during asexual blood stages, as previously predicted and experimentally shown. They showed that ACP requires a biochemical modification, typically activating the protein for its function in the FASII pathway, i.e. binding of the 4-PP group by holoACP synthase. Then, they showed that the other enzymes of the FASII pathway are likely dispensable during the blood stage, as they were able to generate a KO line of the first enzyme of the pathway, FabD (which was predicted to be essential in P. falciparum). Based on a cell culture approach in a controlled culture medium, they further claimed that, unlike current evidence-based hypotheses, the FASII pathway (and thus a potentially FASII-linked ACP) has no role/activity during blood stages. Using a proximity biotinylation approach, they determined that ACP associates with the apicoplast pyruvate Kinase II (PKII), previously shown to generate NTPs in the apicoplast for energy and DNA/RNA maintenance (Xia et al. 2019), and not to fuel the FASII pathway as its main function in blood stages. Finally, they showed that the disruption of ACP induces the reduction of the presence/content in PKII in the parasite, as well as the drastic reduction of the apicoplast DNA and RNA content. Together, they concluded that the main function of ACP is indeed the NTP formation via its association with PKII, rather than its canonical role for the generation of fatty acids in the apicoplast.

      This study is novel and focuses on a topic of particular interest in malaria biology, but also for most of the apicomplexa-related diseases, and beyond for plastid bearing orgnaisms and this unusual role for ACP. The study is well thought out with proper biochemical approaches that convincingly point to this association of ACP with PKII for NTP synthesis as a major function during P. falciparum blood stages. However, there are currently some important experimental issues/flaws, missing experiments that induced wrong interpretations and thus do not support some important claims of the study, notably for the role of FASII and the interaction between ACP and PKII.

      Therefore, at this point, the study is only partial and would require major additions and/or important text edits/revisions before being considered for acceptance.

      Major points:

      From the graph of P. falciparum growth, we can see that in the lipid-rich condition, where both FabH KO and ACP KO can survive, the addition of mevalonate was essential for the growth of ACP KO. Along with the other evidence (PKII association, DNA levels...), we therefore agree that PfACP is involved in the mevalonate pathway. The authors claim that the FASII pathway is inactive/not essential in the P. falciparum blood stage. However, the authors have not shown any evidence on whether ACP is or not involved in the FASII pathway during the asexual blood stage. As currently designed, the experiments presented cannot conclude on that point for several reasons. Indeed, it was previously shown that (i) the expression of the protein from the FASII pathway are all present in blood stages and are significantly upregulated in patients that are under under "nutrient starvation" (Daily et al. Nature 2007), (ii) that, growing parasites under similar low lipid conditions in vitro induces an activation/upregulation of FASII, which can be measured by stable isotope precursor labelling and lipidomics (Botté et al. 2013), (iii) that growing the PfFabI KO line under deprived lipid conditions leads to parasite death (Amiar et al. 2020), indicating that the FASII pathway can become critical, if not essential, depending on the host nutritionnal content together correlating patients' data and metabolic adaptation for the same reasons in the related parastie Toxoplasma gondii (Amiar et al. 2020, Krishnan et al. 2020, Liang et al. 2020, Primo et al. 2021, Charital et al. 2024, Dass et al. 2024, Bitew et al. 2025).

      Here, the authors are expecting to show that FabH (and thus the FASII pathway) is not essential in an experiment that is not designed to be in low lipid conditions but rather in lipid rich conditions: Such high lipid conditions of culture in this study is granted by daily feedings with high fatty acid supplement (30-90 uM palmitic acid and 30-60 uM oleic acid). These fatty acid concentrations were used previously by Mitamura et al. (2005) and Mi-ichi et al.(2007) to replace non-determined supplements such as Serum or Albumax supplement to grant similar growth by a completely controlled culture medium.

      This means the concentrations above do not represent limited fatty acid concentrations, especially not with daily feeding (representing an excess supplied amount of lipids, unlike regular 48h feedings) that allowed the authors to easily reach very high non-physiological parasitaemia of more than 20%!! Amiar et al. previously showed essentiality of FabI in P. falciparum in the limited fatty acid culture at a lower concentration (<30uM 16:0, <45um 18:1), than the Mi-Ichi et al. controlled medium with regular 48 h culture feeding. Therefore, with the current experimental settings, the FAH KO is placed in high lipid conditions, thus preventing any conclusion on its essentiality under low lipid conditions.

      Furthermore, it is too uncertain to conclude that ACP is only essential for the mevalonate pathway. This would be a similar discussion to the Yeh et al. 2011 and the Swift et al., where induced Apicoplast knockout caused parasites to require IPP to survive, but there were always remnant apicoplast vesicles and thus the putative presence of an active FASII in the parasite, where de novo fatty acid synthesis could be maintained. Amiar et al. (2020) and Krishnan et al. (2020) showed that disruption of FASII and absence of de novo FA synthesis in T. gondii could be compensated by the exogenous supplementation of myristic acid, C14:0. Here, high fatty acid supplementation using commercially available fatty acids may include unexpected fatty acid species such as myristic acid in palmitic acid or oleic acid, since all commercially available fatty acids guarantee only >99% but not 100%. If P. falciparum requires a very, very low amount of myristic acid to survive, the amount of possible contamination, like 1 nM, may be sufficient to maintain their survival. Thus, ACP and FabH might be very important to generate de novo fatty acids within parasites, but this was not shown by the authors.

      Therefore, the manuscript currently contains incorrect conclusions on the potential essentiality/use of FASII, against current experimental evidence.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript aims to determine the extent to which LC-mediated NA release in the CA1 region of the hippocampus (at both population and cellular levels) contributes to physiological arousal responses associated with innate behaviors (stress, locomotion). The manuscript is divided into two parts in which the authors compare time-locked responses in astrocytes, interneurons (pan-targeting), and pyramidal (CaMKIIa-driven targeting) cells.

      In the first part of the manuscript, the authors perform bulk recordings of either NA release or calcium activity locked onto either 'natural arousal' events (tail lift, foot shock, force swim) or direct optogenetic activation of LC somas. A first aim is to identify an optogenetic stimulation frequency that would mimic NE release in the target area by low- and high-intensity stressors. In the second aim, they compared evoked responses across cell types and concluded that stressors and direct LC activation trigger similar responses in astrocytes but not in interneurons or pyramidal cells.

      In the second - and most extended - part of the manuscript, the authors performed 2-photon cellular recordings of these different cell populations and compared responses evoked by the onset of locomotion vs. direct activation of the LC. Doing so, they observed a great degree of heterogeneity across these two conditions and across cell types. They conclude that NA effects on the hippocampus are primarily mediated by astrocytes and that LC-NA neuromodulation alone does not recapitulate the full breadth of 'natural arousal' modulations. They conclude that other neuromodulators likely contribute to how the hippocampus responds to high arousal levels.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the manuscript is well written and the figures are particularly clear.

      Optogenetics is a very successful technique in contemporary neuroscience, yet one important identified limitation is that it operates largely in a non-physiological regime, driving spike rates in regions rarely visited under normal physiological operations. This has raised valid concerns about the physiological relevance of findings obtained from studies using this technique. Here, the authors aimed at calibrating optogenetic manipulations of the LC so as to match the physiological release of NA observed in specific behavioral contexts. This is a valuable endeavor that could bring the field towards more reproducible and broadly valid findings.

      Another important open question is how different cell types coordinate to support global network activity and adaptive behavior. By recording distinct cell populations from the same region (CA1) and in response to the same category of endogenous versus exogenous events (locomotion or LC activation), it becomes possible to unravel important and specific operation modes, here also linked to a specific category of neuromodulation signaling.

      Weaknesses:

      This manuscript was difficult to review. There is clearly a lot of work and effort that went into it, and the multiple techniques seem well implemented, often with appropriate controls. Yet, the general framing, the links between experiments and interpretations, unfortunately, look questionable in my opinion. Below, I unpack what I think are the 4 main weakness points.

      (1) Incomplete calibration of optogenetic manipulations to physiological regimes

      While mapping optogenetic stimulation protocols to physiological variations is valuable, the proposed approach suffers from major limitations. First, the only parameter that is calibrated is the peak of NE release (as estimated from GRAB-NE fluorescence). Thus, it excludes other important aspects of the response, including trial-to-trial variability and the temporal dynamics of the response. Furthermore, stressor and LC activation conditions are simply non-comparable in terms of the duration of the stimulation (e.g., 3 min swim test versus 10s optogenetic stimulation), likely involving neuromodulation at different timescales (phasic vs. tonic). Albeit not explicitly mentioned, the number of trials and inter-trial interval between successive stimulations are also likely unmatched. On another note, the identification of the best stimulation frequency seems based on a grid of predefined values, while a more precise, continuous assessment could have easily been used. Finally, even though phasic NE release is known to depend on baseline tonic NE levels (especially with a sensor that reports a sublinear function of NE concentration), this dimension is ignored.

      (2) Weak links between imposed stressors and spontaneous locomotion

      The general approach is surprising: authors calibrated the optogenetic stimulation protocol on a range of stress-related behaviors and applied this to locomotion behavior. Indeed, while the first part of the manuscript uses different stressors in freely moving contexts to 'naturally' elevate arousal, the second part uses spontaneous locomotion bouts in a head-fixed situation as proxies for heightened 'natural' arousal. These two parts are very difficult to relate, and it is entirely unclear how NE regimes observed in the first context generalize to the second. Yet, on several occasions, the authors directly relate the first (fiber photometry, Fig.1) and second (2-photon, Fig. 2-6) parts of the manuscript. For instance, they conclude in favor of a "weak alignment between astrocytic responses to arousal and to LC stimulation on a cellular basis, despite the similarity of the bulk response." It remains unclear why closer preparations weren't used in the two parts, such as time-locked change in GRAB-NE2m fluorescence according to either locomotion onset or in a fear conditioning assay, both using fiber photometry in a head-fixed setting.

      (3) LC optogenetics and spontaneous locomotion differ by more than the origin of the arousal drive

      By directly comparing spontaneous locomotion and LC activation, the authors imply that the only difference between these two conditions is the origin of arousal: endogenous vs. exogenous, respectively. Furthermore, they interpret LC activation as triggering a pure NA effect while locomotion would reflect the conglomerate modulation from multiple neuromodulatory systems. On the one hand, LC activation likely results in the recruitment of other arousal centers (the raphe serotonin system, for instance, see 10.1101/2025.03.26.644382). On the other hand, differences between these conditions span well beyond specific arousal centers (see the massive motor-related activity in cortical dynamics: 10.1038/s41593-019-0502-4). Another, more methodological concern is the larger instability of the field of view during locomotion by comparison to optogenetic activation. While I am sure the authors corrected for movement-related translation in x and y directions, there might still be residual motion artefacts in the z direction that could account for some of the differences between the two conditions.

      (4) Loose equivalence between locomotion and natural arousal

      On many occasions, the authors draw a direct equivalence between spontaneous locomotion and 'natural arousal'. Arousal is a multifaceted concept that relates to far more behavioral readouts and network states than just locomotion. For instance, imagine a freezing mouse in response to a threat: locomotion would be absent, but the animal would still be quite aroused. It is ok to leave aside a particular readout and focus on other one(s) (especially thus in the case of arousal, which has many aspects). However, in that case, a single readout cannot be equated with 'natural arousal' as a whole. Instead, terms like 'locomotion' or 'locomotion-linked arousal' should be preferred. Indeed, in the particular case of locomotion, what is being readout is the upper part of the arousal continuum, whereas pupil size or whisker pad movements can also provide a more complete readout, including the lower and intermediate parts of that same continuum. While it is not necessary to include other arousal readouts (once claims are appropriately modified), the motivation for leaving out available readouts (lines 187-201) feels like a post-hoc rationalization.

      In sum, these 4 points call in my opinion for a profound change in how results are presented and interpreted. If agreed, a solution could be to leave aside the first part of the manuscript, to provide a more accurate picture of the differences between optogenetic activation and spontaneous locomotion, and to better flag the limitations of the approach (a part that I believe is entirely missing in the current version).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, de Vries and colleagues apply successful probabilistic inference and predictive coding frameworks to the question of biological motion perception. In contrast to most studies of predictive processing in humans, which rely on the presentation of discrete events, they instead aimed to track continuous predictions in the context of more naturalistic inputs such as biological motion. In these settings, the authors have previously demonstrated an inverted temporal hierarchy of prediction whereby high-level movement features (e.g., view-invariant body motion) are predicted earlier than lower-level ones (e.g., pixelwise motion). The specific question they set out to address in this manuscript is whether these predictions derive from prior beliefs about the biological and physical organization of biological movements versus the local extrapolation of motion from past observations.

      The authors used anatomical MRI-driven source reconstruction of MEG activity recorded from human participants watching either normal, vertically-mirrored, or temporally scrambled movies. They then aimed to correlate activity in preselected ROIs with summary representations of these movies based on different visual features at 3 different hierarchical levels using RSA. Doing so, they could confirm that predictive processes could be identified prior to the change in the stimulus and organized anatomically along the visual cortical hierarchy. Critically, they report that mirrored movies selectively disrupted the highest processing level while the lowest level remained largely unaffected. Interestingly, the predictions at the intermediate level were boosted in mirrored movies, suggesting a possible channeling of predictions at this level when highest-level predictions are unavailable. Finally, disrupting all predictive aspects with the scrambled movies entirely abolished predictions at all levels, with signals mainly reflecting reactive bottom-up processing of inputs.

      In sum, biological motion perception relies on a tight coordination of multi-level predictions based on both motion-related holistic and kinematics priors.

      Strengths:

      Overall, this is a very strong manuscript, with the text being clearly written. I liked the fact that the authors not only compared responses to normal videos against the same videos flipped upside-down, but also to temporal piecewise scrambling of that same video, allowing to identify the respective roles of holistic motion priors vs. temporal predictions. Of course, more work is needed to tease apart what key quantities are represented in these holistic priors. For now, the authors argue that they likely combine prior beliefs about the biological organization of bodies, such as the likely angle of joint movements, and about the physics of reality, such as gravity. Further work teasing apart these aspects would be interesting to read!

      All analyses seem well executed and, while some aspects of the presentation of results could be slightly improved (see below), the manuscript is very clear and the conclusions are supported by the data. Finally, I liked the words of caution the authors added to the discussion. For instance, while they largely used negative vs. positive latency as a proxy for top-down vs. bottom-up processing respectively throughout the manuscript, they also accurately acknowledge that predictive computations could also modulate processes at positive lags, through, for instance, latency modulation.

      Weaknesses:

      The main aspect of the work I was left to struggle with is this idea that priors can be read out directly from large patterns of activity rates as measured with MEG. While some past experimental work does support this view, theoretical proposals also suggest that one benefit of predictive coding lies in its computational and energy-efficient properties, whereby only novel, unpredicted aspects are encoded in the rate of neural activity. Some other research lines, for instance, focusing on silent working memory, also report the brain's ability to store important computations in ways that are not reflected in costly increases in overall activity. The authors do not really unpack why they expect to see predictions to be encoded in such a way in the first place. They also do not discuss what that implies in terms of neural organization and whether other aspects of neural activity (e.g., oscillations, synaptic weights) could subtend predictive processing in this context. At the end of the day, this activity change is clearly there in the data, so that's totally fine to interpret that; it just would be helpful to unpack what such an implementation of prior beliefs would imply in terms of neural organization.

      The other weakness point I see is the little consideration for behavior throughout the paper. Behavior is indeed mostly treated as a negative control, ensuring that differences between conditions at the neural level do not follow from different behavioral strategies or other peripheral factors. Critically, task design nicely incorporates two types of tasks: one that is related to motion (occlusion of movement) and one that's independent of it (color change of fixation cross). Yet, these conditions are not directly compared at the neural level. It would be useful to see whether the neural signatures of prediction are largely independent from the ongoing task or whether behavior gates the types of priors and prediction processes that are applied to incoming sensory inputs. Moreover, the text says that "neither in accuracy nor in reaction time was there a significant difference between conditions", yet significance stars in Figure 1d seem to suggest there is a difference in the fixation cross task. What am I missing? If there is indeed a difference in overall performance, can the results (esp. the reduced dRSA correlation strength in normal < inverted < scrambled movie) be interpreted in terms of a multi-tasking cognitive cost?

      I also have some other minor questions and comments:

      (1) In this task situation, prediction does not only come in the continuous domain but also relies on a mental simulation model, in particular in the occlusion task. However, corresponding literature, notably the work by Shepard & Metzler (1971) on mental rotation (as well as follow-ups), is not mentioned here, I believe. Could the authors perhaps mention this if they think that's relevant (if not, feel free to ignore).

      (2) I'm concerned that the novelty of dynamic RSA as explained at lines 56-64 might appear slightly exaggerated. After all, isn't it just a generalization of matrix correlation in model and brain time domains? (Again, feel free to ignore if I misunderstood.)

      (3) How do authors explain that high-level motion prediction is still significantly larger than zeros (correct?) in the inverted movie condition? Shouldn't it be entirely abolished?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Dhillon and Lewis use the enhanced brightness of the new calcium indicator dye JF646-BAPTA attached to Orai1-bound HaloTag to identify single CRAC channel events detected as [Ca2+]i fluctuations rather than currents. This enables them to detect Orai1single channel kinetics of permeation, overcoming the currently unmeasurable single channel CRAC conductances (~ 20-40 fS). TIRF microscopy narrows the z-section and improves calcium event localization.

      JF646-BAPTA reversibly blinks between fluorescent and non-fluorescent states, complicating single-channel detection. Blinking occurs both in permeabilized cells with saturating Ca2+ and in intact cells at physiological [Ca2+]i. Using voltage clamp and TIRF imaging, CRAC gating events were distinguished from blinking by analyzing fluorescence responses to voltage changes.

      Hyperpolarization (-100 mV) increases fluorescence, indicating channel opening. Responses blocked by La3+ confirm specificity for Orai1, while minimum fluorescence at +30 mV corresponds to closed channels. Dynamic range and response kinetics help differentiate genuine gating from blinking artifacts. Long channel openings (seconds to tens of seconds) are observed, with most open times around 1.2 seconds. Longer openings (tens of seconds) are present but difficult to sample. Silent channels constitute 11% of puncta.

      The paper carefully examines a new method to sample CRAC kinetics, which should enable further mechanistic studies of STIM control of ORAI and modulation by other signaling components such as calcineurin. Development of bright nonblinking dyes or dyes whose blink rates are directly correlated with a calcium-binding site will enhance this route of investigation.

      Comments:

      This is an excellent methodological study, rigorous and thorough. I wondered whether La3+ alone could alter JF646-BAPTA blinking, but the authors show that JF646-BAPTA exhibits reversible transitions to a non-fluorescent state (blinking) under both Ca2+-saturated and physiological conditions, independent of channel activity or the presence of La3+.

      Strengths:

      A novel method providing additional tools to study store-depletion induced Ca currents mediated by Stim-Orai family members.

      Weaknesses:

      Limited by blinking dyes, the only ones currently sensitive enough to measure the calcium fluxes through single channels.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This paper aimed to demonstrate that total spectral energy alone is sufficient to drive hardness perception and material identification. Through five user studies, they tested materials ranging in stiffness and with covered fingers to support their claim. Using a spectral energy compensation framework, they concluded that total spectral energy alone, regardless of frequency content, was sufficient to support material hardness percepts. However, it should be noted that all experiments used a tapping procedure, which is not the standard exploratory procedure when judging material hardness. A tapping method also selectively enhances vibratory feedback while limiting others. This fundamentally limits the scope of their work, and assessing their claim on generalizability would require further experimentation.

      Some additional clarification and extension on the experiments are also suggested:

      (1) According to Lederman and Klatzky (1987), pressure, and not tapping, is the exploratory procedure humans use to judge hardness. And during tapping instead (as used in all experiments), it is expected that the dominant cue available to the user comes from vibrations, as other mechanical cues, such as skin stretch, are limited. These vibrations could serve as a proxy for hardness, as claimed by the authors, but it is unclear if the participants are basing their evaluations on perceived hardness or vibration intensity. A more fundamental question that needs to be answered to support the paper's claim is whether a single tap is sufficient for conveying a material's hardness. To better support their claim, I recommend that the authors include an experiment using participants' bare fingers with materials of the same modulus but different damping coefficients. These materials would produce different vibration signals when tapped, but are equivalent in hardness.

      (2) The setup text for experiment 4 does not match the results. Results suggest that a finger covered with a bubble and touching a soft material was used (i.e. dual compliance), but the setup describes otherwise. The authors should clarify this and confirm that this is different from experiment 2.

      (3) As silicone, foam, and rubber can have very similar or different hardness depending on the specific material used, please report the hardness of each material tested (Shore or Young's modulus) to better understand the range of stiffness tested.

      (4) In the "materials grouping and selection" section, it states that a pilot study suggested hard materials tended to be perceptually similar while softer materials were easily distinguishable. However, this contradicts the results in experiment 1. The authors should expand on the details of the pilot study and address the inconsistency between its findings and experiment 1.

      (5) The methods section suggests that individual recordings for each material were performed before the experiment. Please clarify if this is correct, or if a single signal for each texture was used across all participants. Additionally, were the participants' tap pressure controlled during either the recordings or in the experiments? If not, how do the authors account for the difference in intensity that would be generated due to different tapping pressures across participants and trials?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper offers a novel theoretical account of dopamine ramps. The key idea is that the reward prediction error (putatively signaled by dopamine) uses a partially model-based estimate for future value (the prediction target). Because the model-based value estimate emerges more rapidly than the model-free estimate, it inflates the RPE, and this inflation increases with reward proximity - hence ramps. The authors show that this account can explain many aspects of existing data on dopamine ramps across several different studies.

      Strengths:

      Overall, I liked this paper. The idea is interesting and plausible. The paper is well-written and clearly argued. The modeling has been done rigorously.

      Weaknesses:

      My major comments are: (1) it's not always clear which phenomena are uniquely well-explained by this new account vs. earlier accounts; and (2) the limitations of the account are not entirely transparent.

      (1) The paper models some of the studies reported by Kim et al (2020). As was already shown in that paper, a standard TD error could explain the results (although a major limitation of that treatment was that it did not model the recursive effect of RPEs on learning, as discussed in the Mikhael paper). It's not clear if there's additional explanatory value provided by this new account, though, of course, it's good to know that those results are captured by the new account. Likewise, Mikhael et al (2022) already offered an account of their data (somewhat more complex than the standard TD model). Again, it's not clear if there's additional explanatory value provided by the new account (and again, it's nice to see that the model can capture these results). Finally, I found myself wondering whether the Guru et al (2020) result couldn't be explained by a more standard TD model (assuming the value function is sufficiently convex). I don't think it's essential that the new account provides additional explanatory value in every case, but I think it's important to convey to readers what's new and what's not, as well as what aspects of the data require particular kinds of mechanisms to explain. It would be really helpful to see the predictions of alternative TD models in order to make this clearer.

      (2) The Mikhael model was motivated by the puzzle that ramping is observed in navigation tasks (with sensory cues) but typically not in classical conditioning tasks lacking sensory cues. The correction term, derived from normative considerations, explained this discrepancy. It's not clear to me if/how the new account can explain the discrepancy.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript by Lorenzo and colleagues presents wide-field cortical imaging data obtained from experiments conducted with three triple-transgenic mouse lines that specifically express the calcium sensor GCaMP6f in neurons of layers 2/3, 5, and 6 of the neocortex, respectively.

      It first includes a methodological contribution aimed at optimizing the analysis of the acquired signals, taking into account both the geometry of the neocortex and photon scattering in the cortical tissue, which affect fluorescence signals differentially depending upon their cortical depth of origin.

      In particular, they built upon the work previously published in eLife by Waters in 2024, which, based on a simulation of photon scattering using a Monte Carlo random-walk model, provided an estimate of the tissue volumes contributing to the fluorescence signals measured from the surface in several mouse lines expressing Gcamp in a layer-specific manner.

      The authors here additionally performed empirical measurements of the point spread function at different cortical depths to determine spatial kernels to be used to deconvolve wide-field imaging data acquired from their three-layer-specific GCaMP6f-expressing mouse lines. They assess the added value of this deconvolution approach based on recordings of the cortical responses evoked by whisker stimulation in the barrel cortex, using lightly anesthetized, layer 2/3 and layer 5 GCaMP6f-expressing mice.

      Altogether, these proposed methods aim at optimizing the registration of recorded signals on a common reference frame, allowing to compare cortical spatiotemporal dynamics recorded from distinct layer-specific GCaMP-expressing mice.

      The manuscript further contains a more neurophysiological contribution, directly utilizing the proposed methods to perform a comparative layer-specific functional connectivity analysis from data collected with the 3 different mouse lines, while the mice were head-fixed below the macroscope.

      Strengths:

      Wide-field 1-photon functional optical imaging, which allows recording cortical spatiotemporal dynamics over a large portion of the dorsal neocortex in mice, has become a tool of choice to study how activity over a wide range of cortical areas is orchestrated in various behavioral contexts. The ever-increasing availability of transgenic mice exhibiting pan-cortical calcium- or voltage-dependent sensors within specific neuronal populations is generating a growing interest in these approaches among the neuroscientific community.

      Nowadays, it is possible to image specifically the activity of excitatory neurons whose cell bodies are located in given cortical layers. However, interpreting fluorescence signals recorded from the surface while originating from deep layers proves difficult due to photon scattering, which reduces image definition, as previously established by Waters et al. (2024).

      The ability to correct for this blurring effect and to place the recorded signals within a common frame of reference is therefore essential not only for comparing activity across layers but also for integrating findings across studies, thereby advancing our collective understanding of neocortical physiology.

      In this sense, this work by Lorenzo and colleagues is definitely both timely and valuable.

      Overall, the manuscript is clearly structured and well-written, and the figures are of excellent graphic quality.

      The proposed approach to correct the blurring of the fluorescent signals, which increases with depth, by means of empirical measurements of point spread functions and deconvolution, seems pertinent and efficient.

      Finally, the authors have collected evoked and spontaneous dynamics of calcium signals from 3 different layer-specific GCaMP mice, which in itself represents a substantial experimental effort, not least because of the need to generate the animals. Out of these data, they provide a unique comparative analysis of layer-specific functional connectivity.

      Weaknesses:

      To fully benefit a large community, some aspects of the proposed methodological advances need to be more detailed in the manuscript and potentially refined. For instance, it is very difficult to evaluate, given the tiny confocal images provided in Figure 1, the potential contribution of GCaMP signal from apical dendrites of layer V neurons in Rbp4-GCaMP6f mice. It is also difficult for the reader to assess the added value of the layer-specific reference maps, given that functional image registration relies on nonlinear transformations and limited detail is provided regarding the procedure used to realign the functional data with these maps (lines 465-467). It is not really clear how the illustrated "composite maps" and the "five functional spots" used for the registration are computed. In addition, one could question the choice of the large time windows used to generate these composite maps/functional landmarks. Since the early component of the evoked responses is more likely to reflect the location of the initial thalamocortical inputs, restricting the analysis to the early phase of the responses might improve the accuracy of primary cortical area identification. This concern regarding the time window used to define specific cortical representation areas may also be relevant to Figure 4, which illustrates the results of the proposed deconvolution approach used to correct for photon scattering (although the time windows used for these analyses are not specified).

      With regard to Figure 4, the reader might wonder why the results are not illustrated similarly for the layer 6 mice. It would therefore be useful to clearly indicate whether these data are not shown because they were not collected, or because it proved impossible to identify single whisker representations, despite the proposed deconvolution procedure.

      Regarding the analysis of layer specificity in terms of functional connectivity, the authors extensively use the term "resting-state" to describe the behavioral context of data collection, given that the animals were not engaged in a goal-directed task. However, because the mice were experiencing head fixation beneath a functional epifluorescence macroscope for only the second time, it is questionable whether this state can truly be classified as "resting." As indicated by the global quantification of body movements, the animals most likely alternated between quiet wakefulness and more active phases.

      To allow the reader to accurately interpret the reported functional connectivity differences, the authors should at least provide a quantification of the time animals spent in the quiet versus active states, and assess whether these proportions were comparable between the different mouse lines. Another way to address this issue would be to perform functional connectivity analyses after splitting the data according to these two states based on body movement quantification, although it is difficult to assess the feasibility of this approach without knowing the temporal distribution of these states within the dataset.

      This seems particularly important since differences in neural cross-regional correlation patterns have been linked to arousal levels, with a comparable optical imaging approach, by Shahsavarani and colleagues (Cell Reports, 2023), who compared initial and prolonged resting periods. In addition, the authors report here that layer differences in functional connectivity are more pronounced in regions associated with the default mode network, whose activity is likely to differ between quiet and active wakefulness.

      Finally, given the richness of the dataset, it would be very interesting to assess how the proposed deconvolution approach affects PCA-ICA-based functional parcellation of spontaneous cortical activity (Reidl et al., NeuroImage, 2007; Makino et al., Neuron, 2017) and whether it enables cross-layer comparisons of independent cortical modules. Such supplementary analyses would substantially increase the impact of this work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript from Zuniga-Pflucker laboratory describes that thymic macrophages are heterogeneous in flow cytometric and transcriptomic profiles, containing two major populations characterized by TIMD4 and CX3CR1 expression. These macrophage populations are both parenchymal in the thymus but are unequal in developmental ontogeny, Flt3 expression history, and CCR2 dependency. The manuscript further reports the interesting findings that the depletion of thymic macrophages impairs thymocyte development at the DN3 beta-selection checkpoint. These results provide an important advance for further understanding of thymus biology, especially in view of the contribution of heterogenous thymic macrophage subpopulations.

      However, Zhou et al. previously reported essentially similar heterogeneity in thymic macrophages. It was demonstrated that TIMD4+ macrophages and CX3CR1+ macrophages have distinct origins and are different in developmental characteristics (27). The authors should better clarify what was previously demonstrated and what is newly described in this study. Zhou, et al. also demonstrated that TIMD4+ macrophages are localized in the cortex whereas CX3CR1+ macrophages distribute in the medullary region. Whether or not these previous findings are reproduced and supported in the present study is important in view of the new finding that thymic macrophages are important for beta-selection, which is presumed to occur in the thymic cortex. The authors may be able to suggest more strongly that TIMD4+ macrophages regulate beta-selection in the thymic cortex through phagocytic efferocytosis. (Indeed, the Figure 1 legend states that frozen thymic sections were used for immunofluorescent staining to identify the localization of thymic macrophages, without showing the results.)

  2. Jun 2026
    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors probe the mechanisms by which Dyngo-4a, a dynamin inhibitor used to block endocytosis, impact caveolae dynamics. They provide compelling evidence that Dyngo-4a inhibits caveolae dynamics and endocytosis (as well as several other aspects of plasma membrane dynamics) by a dynamin-independent mechanism. They also provide strong computational and experimental data showing that Dyngo-4a inserts into membranes and decreases lipid packing in the outer leaflet of the plasma membrane. Finally, they demonstrate that the addition of excess cholesterol to cells reverses the effects of Dyngo-4a on caveolae dynamics, presumably by reversing lipid packing defects. Based on these findings they conclude that lipid packing regulates caveolae dynamics and endocytosis in a cholesterol-dependent manner.

      This work should be of value to cell biologists interested in plasma membrane remodeling and membrane trafficking, biophysicists that study small molecule/membrane interactions and membrane remodeling processes, and chemists interested in designing drugs to target membrane trafficking machinery and pathways.

      Strengths and weaknesses:

      This work addresses the important topic of how a widely used endocytic inhibitor actually works. In the process of addressing this question, the authors uncover unexpected connections between how lipids are packed in cell membranes and membrane dynamics. The methods are appropriate and many of the claims made in this work are well supported by data.

      The authors have also been responsive to comments raised during review by including additional experimental evidence that Dyngo-4a inhibits caveolae endocytosis as well as documenting the effects of Dyngo-4a on caveolae morphology.

      The work also raises some interesting questions for the future. As one example, the authors note that in addition to inhibiting caveolar dynamics, Dyngo-4a inhibits generalized plasma membrane mobility, transferrin uptake, and fusion of fusogenic liposomes to the plasma membrane. More work will be required to determine whether these events are mediated by a common, lipid packing-dependent mechanism.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study uses monkey single-unit recordings to examine the role of the STN in combining noisy sensory information with reward bias during decision-making between saccade directions. Using multiple linear regressions and clustering approaches, the authors overall show that a highly heterogeneous activity in the STN reflects almost all aspects of the task, including choice direction, stimulus coherence, reward context and expectation, choice evaluation, and their interactions. The authors report in particular how three classes of neurons map to different decision processes evaluated via the fitting of a drift-diffusion model. Overall, the study provides evidence for functionally diverse and anatomically intermingled populations of STN neurons, supporting multiple roles in perceptual and reward-based decision-making.

      This study follows up on work conducted in previous years by the same team and complements it. Extracellular recordings in monkeys trained to perform a complex decision-making task remain a remarkable achievement, particularly in brain structures that are difficult to target, such as the sub-thalamic nucleus. The authors conducted numerous analyses of STN activities, using sophisticated statistical approaches and functional computational modeling.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Despite the abundance of RNA velocity tools, there are still major limitations, and there is strong skepticism about the results these methods lead to. In this paper, the authors try to address some limitations of current RNA velocity approaches by proposing a unified framework to jointly infer transcriptional and splicing dynamics. The method is then benchmarked on 6 real datasets against the most popular RNA velocity tools.

      Comments on revised version.

      The Authors addressed all my comments suitably. I'd like to thank them for the time they spent addressing them: the revised paper is much more convincing.

      I have 2 very minor follow-up concerns:

      (1) I appreciated the simulation study, however, no null simulation is present.<br /> We know RNA velocity tools are inclined to provide false positives: trajectories even when the data doesn't have any.<br /> I'd be helpful to add null simulations where the data has no trajectories and see if methods erroneously identify any.

      (2) Several of the novel analyses are only reported in the Supplementary material and only references in the main text (e.g., "A validation of TSvelo on simulated data is provided in Fig. S1 and Fig. S2 in the Supplementary Information."). This is pity!

      If allowed, I'd add some comments about the new analyses (simulations, computational benchmarks, etc...) also in the main text.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors describe an interesting study of arm movements carried out in weightlessness after a prolonged exposure to the so-called microgravity conditions of orbital spaceflight. Subjects performed radial point-to-point motions of the fingertip on a touch pad. The authors note a reduction in movement speed in weightlessness, which they hypothesize could be due to either an overall strategy of lowering movement speed to better accommodate the instability of the body in weightlessness or an underestimation of body mass. They conclude for the latter, mainly based on two effects. One, slowing in weightlessness is greater for movement directions with higher effective mass at the end effector of the arm. Two, they present evidence for increased number of corrective sub movements in weightlessness. They contend that this provides conclusive evidence to accept the hypothesis of an underestimation of body mass.

      Strengths:

      In my opinion, the study provides a valuable contribution, the theoretical aspects are well presented through simulations, the statistical analyses are meticulous, the applicable literature is comprehensively considered and cited and the manuscript is well written.

      Weaknesses:

      I nevertheless am of the opinion that the interpretation of the observations leaves room for other possible explanations of the observed phenomenon, thus weakening the strength of the arguments.

      I raised the following points in my original review, but I find that the authors have judiciously addressed these points through their various revisions.

      I believe that the article constitutes a valuable contribution and that the results and conclusions are certainly worthy of consideration by the human motor control community.

      (1) The authors model the movement control through equations that derive the input control variable in terms of the force acting on the hand and treating the arm as a second-order low pass filter (Eq. 13). Underestimation of the mass in the computation of a feedforward command would lead to a lower-than-expected displacement to that command. But it is not clear if and how the authors account for a potential modification of the time constants of the 2nd order system. The CNS does not effectuate movements with pure torque generators. Muscles have elastic properties that depend on their tonic excitation level, reflex feedback and other parameters. Indeed, Fisk et al.* showed variations of movement characteristics consistent with lower muscle tone, lower bandwidth and lower damping ratio in 0g compared to 1g. Could the variations in the response to the initial feedforward command be explained by a misrepresentation of the limbs damping and natural frequency, leading to greater uncertainty to the consequences of the initial command. This would still be an argument for un-adapted feedforward control of the movement, leading to the need for more corrective movements. But it would not necessarily reflect an underestimation of body mass.

      *Fisk, J. O. H. N., Lackner, J. R., & DiZio, P. A. U. L. (1993). Gravitoinertial force level influences arm movement control. Journal of neurophysiology, 69(2), 504-511.

      While the authors attempt to differentiate their study from previous studies where limb neuromechanical impedance was shown to be modified in weightlessness by emphasizing that in the current study the movements were rapid and the initial movement is "feedforward". But this incorrectly implies that the limb's mechanical response to the motor command is determined only by active feedback mechanisms. In fact:

      (a) All commands to the muscle pass through the motor neurons. These neurons receive descending activations related not only to the volitional movement, but also to the dynamic state of the body and the influence of other sensory inputs, including the vestibular system. A decrease in descending influences from the vestibular organs will lower the background sensitivity to all other neural influences on the motor neuron. Thus, the motor neuron may be less sensitive to the other volitional and reflexive synaptic inputs that it may receive.

      (b) Muscle tone plays a significant role in determining the force and the time course of the muscle contraction. In a weightless environment, where tonic muscle activity is likely to be reduced, there is the distinct possibility that muscles will react more slowly and with lower amplitude to an otherwise equivalent descending motor command, particularly in the initial moments before spinal reflexes come into play. These, and other neuronal mechanisms could lead to the "under-actuation" effect observed in the current study, without necessarily being reflective of an underestimation of mass per se.

      (2) The subject's body in weightless is much more sensitive to reaction forces in interactions with the environment in the absence of the anchoring effect of gravity pushing the body into the floor and in the absence of anticipatory postural adjustments that typically accompany upper-limb motions in Earth gravity in order to maintain an upright posture. The authors dismiss this possibility because the taikonauts were asked to stabilize their bodies with the contralateral hand. But the authors present no evidence that this was sufficient to maintain the shoulder and trunk at a strictly constant position, as is supposed by the simplified biomechanical model used in their optimal control framework. Indeed, a small backward motion of the shoulder would result in a smaller acceleration of the fingertip and a smaller extent of the initial ballistic motion of the hand with respect to the measurement device (the tablet), consistent with the observations reported in the study. Note that stability of the base might explain why 45º movements were apparently less affected in weightlessness, according to many of the reported analyses, including those related to corrective movements (Fig. 5 B, C, F; Fig. 6D), than the other two directions. If the trunk is being stabilized by the left arm, the same reaction forces on the trunk due to the acceleration of the hand will result in less effective torque on the trunk, given that the reaction forces act with a much smaller moment arm with respect to the left shoulder (the hand movement axis passes approximately through the left shoulder for the 45º target) compared to either the forward or rightward motions of the hand.

      (3) The above is exacerbated by potential changes in the frictional forces between the fingertip and the tablet. The movements were measured by having the subjects slide their finger on the surface of a touch screen. In weightlessness, the implications of this contact can be expected to be quite different than on the ground. While these forces may be low on Earth, the fact is that we do not know what forces the taikonauts used on orbit. In weightlessness, the taikonauts would need to actively press downward to maintain contact with the screen, while on Earth gravity will do the work. The tangential forces that resist movement due to friction might therefore be different in 0g. . Indeed, given the increased instability of the body and the increased uncertainty of movement direction of the hand, taikonauts may have been induced to apply greater forces against the tablet in order to maintain contact in weightlessness, which would in turn slow the motion of the finger on the table and increase the reaction forces acting on the trunk. This could be particularly relevant given that the effect of friction would interact with the limb in a direction-dependent fashion, given the anisotropy of the equivalent mass at the fingertip evoked by the authors.

      I feel that the authors have done an admirable job of exploring the how to explain the modifications to movement kinematics that they observed on orbit within the constraints of the optimal control theory applied to a simplified model of the human motor system. While I fully appreciate the value of such models to provide insights into question of human sensorimotor behaviour, to draw firm conclusions on what humans are actually experiencing based only on manipulations of the computational model, without testing the model's implicit assumptions and without considering the actual neurophysiological and biomechanical mechanisms, can be misleading. One way to do this could be to examine these questions through extensions to the model used in the simulations (changing activation dynamics of the torque generators, allowing for potential motion backward motion of the shoulder and trunk, etc.). A better solution would be to emulate the physiological and biomechanical conditions on Earth (supporting the arm against gravity to reduce muscle tone, placing the subject on a moveable base that requires that the body be stabilized with the other hand) in order to distinguish the hypothesis of an underestimation of mass vs. other potential sources of under-actuation and other potential effects of weightlessness on the body.

      In sum, my opinion is that the authors are relying too much on a theoretical model as a ground truth and thus overstate their conclusions. But to provide a convincing argument that humans truly underestimate mass in weightlessness, they should consider more judiciously the neurophysiology and biomechanics that fall outside the purview of the simplified model that they have chosen. If a more thorough assessment of this nature is not possible, then I would argue that a more measured conclusion of the paper should be 1) that the authors observed modifications to movement kinematics in weightlessness consistent with an under-actuation for the intended motion, 2) that a simplified model of human physiology and biomechanics that incorporates principles of optimal control suggest that the source of this under-actuation might be an underestimation of mass in the computation of an appropriate feedforward motor command, and 3) that other potential neurophysiological or biomechanical effects cannot be excluded due to limitations of the computational model.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Okabe and colleagues build on a super-resolution-based technique they have previously developed in cultured hippocampal neurons, improving the pipeline and using it to analyze spine nanostructure differences across 8 different mouse lines with mutations in autism or schizophrenia (Sz) risk genes/pathways. It is a worthy goal to try to use multiple models to examine potential convergent (or not) phenotypes, and the authors have made a good selection of models. They identify some key differences between the autism versus the Sz risk gene models, primarily that dendritic spines are smaller in Sz models and (mostly) larger in autism risk gene models. They then focus on three models (2 Sz - 22q11.2 deletion, Setd1a; 1 ASD - Nlgn3) for timelapse imaging of spine dynamics, and together with computational modelling provide a mechanistic rationale for the smaller spines in Sz risk models. Bulk RNA sequencing of all 8 model cultures identifies several differentially expressed genes which they go on to test in cultures, finding that ecgr4 is upregulated in several Sz models and its misexpression recapitulates spine dynamics changes seen in the Sz mutants, while knockdown rescues spine dynamics changes in the Sz mutants. Overall, these have the potential to be very interesting findings and useful for the field. My major concerns from the initial manuscript, especially regarding cherry picking and circularity have been addressed with revised analytical approaches. I have some remaining minor comments.

      (1) The comparison between two wild-type samples versus wild-type-mutant samples is helpful - I think this could be added to the manuscript.

      (2) For results of timelapse imaging - please spell out in the results section the direction of change (lines 270 - 277).

      (3) Using linear mixed effect models for statistical analysis is a significant improvement. While a sample size (n) of mice = 3 is not ideal, I think given the multiple different mouse lines used and intensity of analysis, this is probably the best that can be done, although further validation in larger samples eventually is to be hoped for.

      (4) The revised text is much improved, but I still think the authors should be upfront somewhere in the text that the schizophrenia-associated genes can only confer biased risk for schizophrenia (and that the clinical phenotype can also include autism). As I said before, I think this is the best we can do and I agree with their choices, but it is important not to overstate the link. The differences they see make it clear that these are still relevant distinctions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      This work explores the relationship between body structure and behavior by studying self-righting in Drosophila larvae, a conserved behavior that restores proper orientation when turned upside-down. The authors first introduce a novel "water unlocking" approach to induce self-righting behavior in a controlled manner. Then, they develop a method for region-specific inhibition of sensory neurons revealing that anterior, but not posterior, sensory neurons are essential for proper self-righting. Deep-learning-based behavioral analysis shows that anterior inhibition prolongs self-righting by shifting head movement patterns, indicating a behavioral switch rather than a mere delay. Additional genetic and molecular experiments demonstrate that specific Hox genes are necessary in sensory neurons, underscoring how developmental patterning genes shape region-specific sensory mechanisms that enable adaptive motor behaviors.

      Strengths

      The work by Roseby et al. is notable for its elegant experimental design, the development of innovative methods that are likely to benefit the fly behavior community, and the strong experimental support for its conclusions. The manuscript is clearly written, well structured, and presents thoughtfully designed experiments that have been further improved in the revised version. This updated manuscript includes a comprehensive set of behavioral experiments using an additional Gal4 line (ppk-Gal4), which yields confirmatory results and strengthens support for the original hypothesis. It also incorporates quantification of Gal4 line strength, improvements to existing figures, the addition of new figures, and overall refinement of the text.

      Weakness:

      A remaining limitation of this manuscript is the lack of a cellular and mechanistic analysis explaining how Hox genes give rise to the observed behavioral phenotypes. The authors note that this question is being addressed in an ongoing follow-up study, which will expand the project to examine the roles of all Hox genes across the sensory system and to characterize their expression patterns within each of its subcomponents, with the aim of providing mechanistic insight. I look forward to seeing this work in a future manuscript.

      Comments on revised version.

      I have no further recommendations for the authors; most of my comments and questions have been satisfactorily addressed.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This revised study analyzes the somatic mutational profiles and transcriptomic expression of three zinc-finger genes (ZNF217, ZNF703, ZNF750) in 23 Kenyan women with breast cancer, using whole-exome sequencing and RNA-sequencing of paired tumor-normal tissues. A total of 358 somatic mutations were detected, and all three genes were significantly upregulated in tumors compared to normal tissues (ZNF217 showing the most prominent difference). The findings provide preliminary evidence for the idenfication of diagnostic/prognostic biomarkers or therapeutic targets in sub-Saharan African populations.

      Strengths:

      The study's key strengths lie in its focus on an underrepresented Kenyan cohort, addressing a critical gap in sub-Saharan African breast cancer genomic research. It integrates DNA-level mutation analysis with RNA-level expression data, leveraging standardized bioinformatics pipelines and rigorous quality control to deliver detailed insights into mutation types, functional impacts, and amino acid changes.

      Comments on revised version:

      After careful revision by the authors, the manuscript has become more rigorous. The limitations including small sample size and lack of functional validation are properly acknowledged, and conclusions are prudently presented as hypothesis‑generating rather than causal claims. Meanwhile, strengthened multi‑omics analyses, TCGA validation, logical reorganization of results and improved figure presentation further enhance the reliability of this work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In "Ecological diversification in rapidly evolving populations", the authors use a consumer-resource model with competition for 2 different resources to study diversification for cases in which ecology and evolution are separated (weak-mutation limit) and when they overlap. They find the potential for the timing of a mutation (and not just its associated fitness) to confer an advantage against fitter strains (which they call "priority effect"), and the aggregation of dominant trait values that lead to the definition of "ecotypes" that discretize and structure the community.

      Strengths:

      The authors introduce detailed analytical calculations in the limit of overlapping ecology and evolution, which is a case that typically eludes analysis. The work also pays particular attention to the timing of "invasion" by a mutation, whereas most approaches focus on the long-term outcome of evolution (e.g. fixation of a trait value).

      Weaknesses:

      The model makes important assumptions that limit its generality considerably. In particular, the two "evolving traits" defined in the model are very specific and by no means the simplest possible resource competition evolutionary model that the authors claim it to be. The manuscript is not clear enough to be reproducible, and the authors do not discuss in sufficient depth the huge amount of work that is presented in the manuscript. The bibliography omits important work focused on diversification emerging from eco-evolutionary interactions similar to the ones studied in the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, the authors report a novel regulation of the outer mitochondrial membrane remodeling domains called mitochondria-derived compartments, MDCs. The team has previously established the main principles behind this recently identified quality control pathway, but the mechanisms that control MDCs formation remain incompletely understood. Using the baker's yeast model, the authors identify the conserved mitochondrial protease Yme1 as a crucial factor that regulates MDC formation. Mechanistically, Yme1's proteolytic function controls the levels of Ups1 and Ups2 lipid transfer proteins and the components of the membrane organizing complex called MICOS, thus providing a plausible model as to how Yme1-dependent proteolysis permits MDC formation through the removal of lipid and MICOS-dependent constraints. Finally, the authors show that this Yme1-mediated activity is also defined by metabolic conditions. In principle, this study is interesting and novel, and holds potential to provide new insights into the regulation of the MDC pathway that emerged as a new fundamental mitochondrial quality control mechanism. However, the following points should be carefully addressed.

      Major points:

      (1) Yme1 has been previously shown to regulate mitochondria-specific autophagy through Atg32 processing. Given the high similarity of the MDC pathway to piecemeal autophagy and the fact that both pathways share some of the core components, the authors should address the involvement of Atg32 in their model. It would also be important to include a brief discussion addressing the differences between piecemeal autophagy and the MDC pathway.

      (2) The Rpt3 (P215L) expression experiment is interesting, but appears to be somewhat superficial due to the unclear mechanism by which the mitochondrial network morphology is restored in these cells. Could this result be replicated in the dnm1∆ mgm1∆ double deletion mutant, which is a well-established model for mitochondrial network restoration?

      (3) Figure 3E. The changes in PE levels appear to be minor. While statistically significant, the observed differences may not be physiologically relevant. More in-depth lipidomic analysis data should be presented to substantiate the authors' argument and better address the questions at hand. Related to that, could PE or PA supplementation stimulate MDC formation?

      (4) The connection between rapamycin treatment and Yme1-regulated MDC formation is unclear and puzzling and needs to be explained better.

      (5) The MICOS complex is clearly involved in the regulation of MDC, but the manuscript misses the mark on providing compelling evidence and a clear explanation as to how MICOS contributes to said regulation.

      Minor points:

      (1) The authors should discuss potential reasons for the dramatically different rates of MDC formation in the S288C and W303 background cells. Does this have anything to do with generally more robust mitochondrial functions in the latter cells?

      (2) Proper statistical analyses should be provided for all the graphs presented.

      (3) The authors should include Yme1 immunoblots to confirm the identity of strains being studied and validate the presence or overexpression of Yme1 and its catalytic mutant in their experiments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study presents an in-depth analysis of the peptide repertoire bound by a promiscuous chicken MHC molecule using mass spectrometry, x-ray crystallography and modelling. While the MHC can bind a very diverse set of peptides, the authors have found some new rules that govern peptide binding to this MHC that could help to build a predictive model to study the repertoire of pathogen-derived peptides.

      Strengths:

      The study uses a range of well performed experiment across multiple techniques and provides an in-depth analysis of the peptide repertoire, including peptide sequences, length, preferred residues, stability and MHC presentation.

      Weaknesses:

      The data overall support the analysis and conclusion well. The only caveat is linked to Figure 4, which does not describe the stability of the peptide-MHC complex, but instead shows refold yield, and the two are not always linked.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Mione et al. aim to resolve a long-standing question in comparative neuroscience: whether the macaque brain contains a functional analogue to the distributed human multiple-demand (MD) network. To address this, the authors employ a direct cross-species fMRI comparison using a multi-step saccadic maze task in humans and a simplified two-step version in macaques. By contrasting goal-directed navigation against a control condition that requires similar motor responses but no strategic planning, the study isolates the neural signatures of cognitive control across species.

      Strengths:

      The most compelling aspect of this work is its methodological alignment. Previous attempts to compare these systems often relied on comparisons of human BOLD signals and macaque single-unit recordings. By running parallel fMRI protocols, the authors establish a shared measurement basis that allows for a more direct comparison. The resulting activation maps clearly demonstrate conserved network topology across dorsomedial frontal, lateral, and medial parietal, and insula cortices. Combining these results with recent research on functional and structural connectivity further supports the idea that these networks evolved across species and provides a helpful starting point for future comparative studies. The findings will be highly useful for researchers investigating the evolutionary origins of domain-general cognitive control, as well as for neuroimaging methodologists developing cross-species alignment pipelines.

      Weaknesses:

      However, there are several differences in how the two groups were studied that make it harder to compare the results precisely. The human task mixed 2-, 4-, and 6-step trials within the same experimental blocks, whereas macaques performed only 2-step trials. This design difference likely places human participants in a state of sustained proactive cognitive control (Braver, 2012), as they must remain prepared for highly demanding trials at any moment. This elevated baseline arousal may artificially inflate MD network activation during the simpler 2-step trials in humans, making direct magnitude comparisons with the macaque data difficult. Additionally, the general linear model combined correct and error trials into a single regressor. Given that macaques exhibited substantially higher error rates, this approach risks diluting task-specific planning signals with activity related to error monitoring and reward prediction errors. The preprocessing pipeline also applied a 4 mm full-width half-maximum smoothing kernel to macaque data acquired at 1.5 mm resolution. Relative to the smaller size of the macaque brain, this kernel is quite large and likely blurs fine-grained topographical distinctions. This may partly explain why the macaque lateral frontal cortex shows a single dorsal activation patch rather than multiple discrete patches seen in humans. Furthermore, there is concerning inter-individual variability in the macaque data. Normally, a functional network like the MD system is identified by consistent activation across all individuals. In this study, however, the two monkeys show substantially different activation maps and behavioral patterns. This lack of consistency renders the group-level results questionable, as it is unclear whether the group-level map represents a unified biological system or merely an average of disparate individual maps. Finally, the subcortical activations shown in Figure 7 require more precise anatomical localization to confidently distinguish cerebellar nodes from adjacent brainstem structures.

      The authors demonstrate a broad functional correspondence between human and macaque cognitive control networks, moving the field beyond speculative homology. The data suggest that an extended, interconnected network is recruited by cognitive challenge in both species; however, the strength of this claim is limited by the inter-individual variability and methodological constraints noted above. Assertions of precise topological equivalence should therefore be tempered. The absence of ventrolateral prefrontal and strong dorsal parietal activations in the macaque group analysis may reflect genuine biological differences, but could also stem from limited statistical power, excessive smoothing, or task-design asymmetries. While the overall conclusions are plausible, they would be significantly strengthened by a more explicit discussion of these limitations and additional analytical clarifications regarding individual-level consistency.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is an extensive study using phylogenetic comparison across multiple plasmodium species to gain new insights in relation to their evolutionary pathways and the potential function of pir. In addition to establishing a framework to identify related orthologues across species as well as expanding paralogues families within a species, the work also focuses on understanding loss and gain of different PIRs and how this indicates a relative lack of functional constraints and essentiality for most members of the gene family.

      The authors provide evidence that at least pirC has a conserved function and plays an important role in parasite growth in multiple species.

      While this study represents a significant effort and does provide interesting new insights that would help our understanding of this complex gene family in the future, it has a number of limitations.

      Strengths:

      Extensive and thorough phylogenetic analysis that is supported by some biological validation. Provides an indication that the PIR gene family has limited biological constraints and evolved independently across different species, leading to rapid expansion and deletion of orthologous groups. Identified pirC as a functional and important member of the family that is conserved across the species.

      Weaknesses:

      The phylogenetic tree is based on a truncated sequence that focuses on the more conserved parts of the pir sequence. This could potentially lead to missing the key functional drivers of evolution. The biological validation of the role of pirC has some inconsistencies that need to be addressed.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors set out to develop and validate the Crunchometer, a low-cost, open-source acoustic system designed to overcome the limitations of existing methods for studying feeding behavior in rodents. Their goal was to provide a tool that could precisely capture the microstructure of solid food intake, something often overlooked in favor of liquid-based assays, while being affordable, scalable, and compatible with neural recording techniques. By doing so, they aimed to enable detailed analysis of how physiological states, drugs, and specific neural circuits shape naturalistic feeding behaviors.

      Strengths:

      (1) Introduces a low-cost, open-source acoustic tool for measuring solid food intake, filling a critical gap left by expensive and proprietary systems.

      (2) Makes the method easily adoptable across labs with detailed setup instructions and shared benchmark datasets.

      (3) Provides high temporal precision for detecting bite events compared to human observers.

      (4) Successfully distinguishes feeding microstructure (bites, bouts, IBIs, gnawing vs. consumption) with greater objectivity than manual annotation.

      (5) Demonstrates compatibility with electrophysiology and calcium imaging, enabling fine-scale alignment of neural activity with feeding behavior.

      (6) Effectively discriminates between fed vs. fasted states, validating physiological sensitivity.

      (7) Captures pharmacological effects of semaglutide, although this is really just reduced feeding and associated readouts (bouts, latency, etc.)

      (8) Has potential to distinguish consummatory vs. non-consummatory behaviors (e.g., food spillage, gnawing), however the current SVM model struggles to separate biting from gnawing due to similar acoustic profiles and manual validation is still required.

      (9) Provides potential for closed-loop experiments

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Some neuroscience findings (calcium imaging of GABAergic vs. glutamatergic neurons) are based on small pilot samples (n=2 mice per condition), limiting generalizability.

      (2) Chemogenetic and pharmacological experiments used small cohorts, raising statistical power concerns.

      (3) Correlation with actual food intake is modest and sometimes less accurate than human observers

      (4) Sensitive to hoarding behavior, which can reduce detection accuracy and requires manual correction for misclassifications (e.g., tail movements, non-food noises). However, these limitations are discussed and not ignored.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors have addressed all my comments and have put forth a creative, accurate approach to assessing food intake in rodents.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Gazal et al., describe the presence of unique gaps and patches of BetaII-spectrin in medial sections of long human motor neuron axons. BII-spectrin, along with Alpha-spectrin forms horizontal linkers between 180nm spaced F-actin rings in axons. These F-actin rings along with the spectrin linkers form membrane periodic structures (MPS) which are critical for maintenance of the integrity, size and function of axons. The primary goal of the authors was to address if long motor axons, particularly those carrying familial mutations associated with the neurodegenerative disorder ALS, show defects in gaps and patches of BetaII-spectrin ultimately leading to degradation of these neurons.

      Strengths:

      The experiments are well designed and the authors have used the right methods and cutting-edge techniques to address the questions in this manuscript. The use of human motor neurons and the use of motor neurons with different familial ALS mutations is a strength. The use of isogenic controls is a positive. The induction of gaps and patches by the kinase inhibitor staurosporine and their rescue by Latrunculin A is novel and well executed. The use of biochemical assays to explore the role of calpains is appropriate and well designed. The use of STED imaging to define the periodicity of MPS in the gaps and patches of spectrin is a strength.

      Weaknesses:

      Primary weakness is the lack of rigorous evaluation to validate the proposed model of spectrin capture from the gaps into adjacent patches by the use of photobleaching and live-imaging. Another point is the lack of investigation into how gaps and patches change in axons carrying the familial ALS mutations as they age, since 2 weeks is not a timepoint when neurodegeneration is expected to start.

      Comment on revised version.

      The authors have given a point-by-point response to all the reviewer's concerns. They have also addressed concerns which I raised adequately. I have no further concerns.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Aims:

      The authors sought to optimize SHARE-seq, a multimodal single-cell method, to improve the simultaneous profiling of gene expression and chromatin accessibility. Their goal was to enhance barcode design for better sequencing efficiency and cost savings, while improving overall data quality. They then applied their optimized method, easySHARE-seq, to study liver sinusoidal endothelial cells (LSECs) to demonstrate its utility in examining gene regulation and spatial zonation.

      Strengths:

      The improved barcode design is an advance, increasing the proportion of sequencing reads dedicated to biological information rather than barcode identification. This modification offers practical benefits in terms of sequencing costs and read length, potentially reducing alignment errors. The method also demonstrates improved RNA detection compared to the original SHARE-seq protocol. The biological applications showcase how simultaneous measurement of both modalities enables analyses that would be practically impossible with single-modality approaches, particularly in examining how chromatin states change along developmental or spatial trajectories.

      Weaknesses:

      There is a notable reduction in chromatin accessibility detection compared to the original SHARE-seq method, likely limiting the use of the method in certain situations.

      Overall:

      The authors achieve their aim of creating an optimized protocol with improved barcode design and enhanced RNA detection. The method represents a useful advance for specific experimental contexts where the trade-offs are appropriate.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, authors studied the synchrony between ripple events in Hippocampus, cortical spindles and Locus Coeruleus spiking. The results in this study together with the established literature on the relationship of hippocampal ripples with widespread thalamic and cortical waves, guided authors to propose a role for Locus Coeruleus spiking patterns in memory consolidation. The findings provided here, i.e. correlations between LC spiking activity and Hippocampal ripples, could provide basis for future studies probing the directional flow or the necessity of these correlations in the memory consolidation process. Hence, the paper provides enough scientific advance to highlight the elusive yet important role of Norepinephrine circuitry in the memory processes.

      Strengths:

      Authors were able to demonstrate correlations of Locus Coeruleus spikes with hippocampal ripples as well as with cortical spindles. Specific strength of the paper is in the demonstration that the spindles that activate with the ripples are comparatively different in their correlations with Locus Coeruleus than those which do not.

      Weaknesses:

      The claims regarding the roles of these specific interactions were mostly derived from the literature that these processes individually contribute to the memory process, without any evidence of these specific interactions being necessary for memory processes. There are also issues with the description of methods, validation of shuffling procedures and unclear presentation and the interpretation of the findings, which are described in points that follow. I believe addressing these weaknesses might improve and add to the strength of the findings.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors addressed all of my major concerns during the revision. As a result, the study now provides convincing evidence as well as improved presentation of results, that makes this manuscript important to the broader field of neuroscience, beyond the specific sub-field.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors design a custom Bayesian model to estimate the probabilities of access, use and use given access of insecticide-treated nets in six African countries, providing sub-national estimates and inferring the average duration of ITN use and access. An individual-based model was employed to simulate malaria epidemics and estimate the effectiveness of different ITN distribution strategies. The study finds that the mean probability of use or access did not reach 80% (a universal coverage formerly targeted by WHO) for any of the regions even for biennial campaigns, demonstrates that switching from triennial to biennial distribution campaigns increases population use by 7.9%, and evaluates the impact of employing more efficient ITNs on P. falciparum prevalence.

      Strengths:

      The authors developed a data-driven model that accounts for data collection imperfections and sources of uncertainty while differentiating between ITN use and access. They developed a methodology to infer the timing of mass campaign from publicly available data instead of assuming fixed dates. The probability of use given access allows determining the regions where ITN distribution is least effective. This work can help better inform future interventions by identifying regions where increasing mass campaign frequency or employing better ITNs are most effective. Finally, in addition to insights on ITN access and use for the six countries analyzed, the paper contributes with a methodological framework that can likely be extended to other countries.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The determination of macromolecular structures directly within their native cellular environment is becoming increasingly routine, making standardized data collection strategies essential. In this manuscript, Tuijtel et al. provide a timely and valuable contribution by benchmarking key acquisition parameters and establishing practical guidelines for in situ cryo-electron tomography (cryo-ET). Critically, the authors present a systematic framework for optimizing data collection to achieve the highest attainable resolution.

      Using Dictyostelium cells as a model system, the authors generate multiple datasets at a constant total dose while varying the tilt increment. They demonstrate that tilt-series acquired with finer increments (1-3 degrees) yield superior alignment accuracy and improved template-matching performance, resulting in higher-quality reconstructions than those collected with coarser increments (5 degrees or above). Furthermore, the authors show that for subtomogram averaging, a 3-degree tilt increment outperforms all other conditions tested, particularly after per-particle refinement as implemented in M.

      Overall, the manuscript is clearly written, and the conclusions are well supported by the data presented. I have no major concerns. There are some minor points that the authors should address, including:

      (1) The phrase "electron optical density distribution" (line 31, Introduction) should be revised to "electrostatic potential" or "Coulomb potential distribution," which more accurately reflects what is measured in cryo-EM/ET.

      (2) The authors state that the maximum tolerable electron dose is approximately 100-150 e⁻/Ų (line 34, Introduction). This is an oversimplification, as bacterial specimens, for example, have been shown to tolerate doses of 200 e⁻/Ų or higher (see Breigel et al., PNAS, 2009; https://www.pnas.org/doi/10.1073/pnas.0905181106#T1). The statement should be revised to reflect this variability.

      (3) Lines 56-57: The authors do not cite their own prior work benchmarking tilt-series acquisition strategies on in vitro samples. This earlier study provides important context and should be referenced and briefly discussed.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study presents an important analysis of how interactions between muscles can serve as biomarkers to quantify therapeutic responses in post-stroke patients. To do so, the authors employ an information-theoretical metric (co-information) to define muscle networks and perform cluster analysis.

      Comments on revised version.

      Thank the authors for the carefully revised article. I have no further comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this article, Laaker et al described diverse populations of macrophages and dendritic cells found in and around the cribriform plate in a context of a neuroinflammation caused by an autoimmune disease (EAE). The authors utilize elegant histochemical staining and a nifty approach to sort doublets to interrogate cells that are in contact with one another, presumably in vivo. Notably, they uncover a population of CD11c+CD11b+ cells interacting with M2 macrophages and PDPN+ fibroblasts and lymphatics. These cells are heterogenous but some of these DCs express PD-1 and transcriptional profiling suggests they may have immunosuppressive behavior. Altogether, this article explains well the complexity of cell populations found around the cribriform plate during inflammation and are suggestive of different interactions that trigger these different phenotypes from immune cells.

      Strengths:

      Beautiful images of a unique CNS: peripheral interface that support a novel scRNA approach to understanding how different cell populations engage in functional interactions in vivo.

      Weaknesses:

      It is unclear how the sorted populations reflect in vivo interactions, or a propensity to form aggregates during ex vivo processing. Future work will be needed to address which poplanin expressing cells are most relevant.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This highly original and well-designed study provides insight into how honeybee picorna-like viruses, Deformed wing virus ( DWV) and Sacbrood virus (SBV), affect flight performance, and reveals the role of the octopamine (OA) pathway in virus-honeybee interactions. The authors used a flight mill to quantify the flight performance of bees with different levels of DWV and SBV. Bees were treated with OA and/or epinastine (EP) - an OA receptor antagonist; the study also quantified virus loads and expression of two key genes involved in OA biosynthesis.

      The results showed that reduced flight performance associated with high DWV levels could be alleviated by OA administration. In contrast, increased levels of SBV had the opposite effect, leading to enhanced flight performance. This suggests distinct physiological responses to DWV and SBV infections. Administration of EP had led to a reduction of flight performance in SBV-infected bees, indicating the involvement of the OA pathway.

      The authors also quantified levels of mRNAs of enzymes involved in OA synthesis, tyrosine decarboxylase (TDC) and tyramine beta-hydroxylase (TbH), and concluded that DWV induced expression of TbH, while SBV upregulated expression of TDC. Furthermore, the study identified upregulated and downregulated genes in response to SBV, DWV and DWV in combination with OA.

      Strengths:

      The study reported opposing effects of infections of related viruses, SBV and DWV, on honeybee flight performance, and identified the central role of the octopamine (OA) signaling pathway in the effect of viruses on honeybee flights.

      These findings were achieved by using a combination of approaches, including experimental measurement of flight distance, virus infections, and introduction of OA and EP. Experimental work with honeybees is technically challenging and requires specialized expertise, which makes the results produced in this study more valuable.

      DWV and SBV are among the most important honeybee pathogens affecting honeybee health and threatening the pollination service. Therefore, an understanding of the mechanisms underlying DWV and SBV pathogenesis has the potential to develop novel approaches to mitigate the negative impact of these viruses.

      Weaknesses:

      No weaknesses were identified by this reviewer.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors report the hitherto unobserved types of HTT assemblies observed in human fibroblasts and iPCS-derived neurons in 2D and 3D culture, applying a state-of-the-art confocal microscopy imaging with near 64 nm resolution to decode their structures. They further demonstrate that these assemblies closely contact with various types of Golgi ribbons, stacks, vesicles, and Golgi-derived clathrin-coated vesicles but not mitochondria. They also used single-cell RNAseq to show some interesting findings that supported the suggested defects in Golgi-related function, specifically by downregulation of various cellular processes related to Golgi and vesicle transport functions. They also replicate mHTT nuclear accumulations in striatal neurons, which is considered to be a hallmark of HD pathology, by using long-term neuronal culture. Furthermore, the assemblies showed differential responses to glucose starvation and to autophagy enhancer treatment by onjisaponin F for mutant HTT assemblies, but not for the healthy siblings, in fibroblasts and neurons. Onjisaponin F treatment did not reverse nuclear deposition. They also showed that ASO shortens these polyQ assemblies but does not change neuronal firings that are detected by HD-MEA. Notably, they also used human brain samples to show the existence of polyQ assemblies in fetal and child brain samples. This part is impressive.

      Overall, this work reports a novel polyQ assembly, which was previously reported as a pathogenic factor, has not been reported before for HTT, is related to Golgi activities and vesicular transport, and is dismantled in HD patient cells. The intensive immunostaining and super-resolution scanning are impressive and definitely strengthened by the impact of the findings. The scRNAseq data adds another layer to the observed Golgi impairments and their suggested relationship to Golgi function. The drug testing for polyQ assemblies, especially polyQ assemblies in HD cells, is preliminary. However, the data in this study are enough to support the existence of polyQ assemblies in human cells and their specific relationships with the Golgi apparatus.

      Strengths:

      In this study, the authors used the cells from a large HD family and fetal/child brain samples to decode the structure of endogenous polyQ assemblies. This part is impressive. The intensive staining and super-resolution scanning are amazing. The spatial relationships of polyQ assemblies with the Golgi apparatus and mitochondria are well illustrated.

      Weaknesses:

      Although they used healthy sibling cells as a control, an isogenic control (genetic correction of the mutant gene) is lacking. Based on the Golgipathy of mHTT, they did a drug screening. The drug testing for polyQ assemblies is preliminary. More rigorous validation, such as scRNA seq and proteomic analysis, etc., is necessary to reach a systemic conclusion.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Due to the low SNR of cryo-EM micrographs necessitated by radiation damage, determining the structure of proteins smaller than 50 kDa is exceedingly challenging, such that only a handful have been solved to date. This work aims to improve the reconstruction of small proteins in single-particle cryo-EM by using high-resolution 2D template matching, an algorithm previously used to locate and align macromolecules in situ, to align and reconstruct small proteins. This approach uses an existing macromolecular structure, either experimentally determined or predicted by AlphaFold, to simulate a noise-free 3D reference and generates whitened projections, crucially including high-spatial-frequency information, to align particles by the orientation with maximal cross-correlation. They demonstrate the success of this approach by generating a 3D reconstruction from an existing dataset of a 41.3 kDa protein kinase that had previously evaded attempts at high-resolution structure determination. To alleviate concerns that this is purely from template bias, they demonstrate clear density at two regions that were not present in the template: 6 residues in an alpha helix and an ATP in the ligand binding pocket. The latter is particularly important for its implications in determining structures of ligand-bound proteins for drug discovery. They also produce a composite omit map from 36 partial-deletion reconstructions spanning the entire protein, demonstrating a reconstruction can be obtained without template bias. Additionally, the authors provide an update to the classic calculation in Henderson 1995 to predict the minimum molecular mass of a protein that can be solved by single-particle cryo-EM.

      Strengths:

      I am in no doubt that this technique can be used to gain valuable insights into the structures of small proteins, and this is an important advancement for the field. It is complementary to single-particle cryo-EM and provides an extra tool for the experimentalist that may work better in certain cases. For cases where only a small region of the structure is of interest, such as in drug screening, this method provides a simple workflow to screen many structures.

      The claim that using high-spatial frequency information is essential for aligning small proteins is a valuable insight. A recent pre-print published at a similar time to this manuscript used high-resolution information in standard ab-initio reconstruction to generate a high-resolution reconstruction from the same dataset, supporting the claims made in the manuscript.

      The theoretical section outlined in the appendix is also theoretically sound. It uses the same logic as Henderson, but applies more up-to-date knowledge, such as incorporating dose-weighting and altering the cross-correlation based noise estimation. This update is valuable for understanding factors preventing us from reaching the theoretical limit.

      Weaknesses:

      The applicability of this technique to more than a single target was not demonstrated. Nor was it compared to more recent strategies for processing SPA data from small molecules, such as Blush regularization or HR-HAIR. Additionally, although the authors have demonstrated convincingly that their method selects a stack of high-quality particles, it is less clear whether it performs better than RELION when using the same stack of particles, particularly in the ATP binding pocket. This places this method as a complementary technique, and whether it outperforms those methods for a wide variety of molecules is yet to be determined. The method presented here also introduces template bias, so only parts of the reconstruction not in the initial template are free of template bias. Producing a full reconstruction through a composite omit map is computationally expensive, meaning that unless this method outperforms modern SPA methods, its major use case will be ligand binding studies instead of 3D reconstructions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Singh et al. apply MOA-seq to map transcription factor occupancy genome-wide in HUVECs across a hypoxia time course. The study provides a well-validated, high-resolution view of cistrome dynamics and identifies both HIF1A-associated and independent regulatory programs.

      Major Comments:

      Methodological validation is strong. MOA-seq's ability to map protein-bound DNA at near-nucleotide resolution without factor-specific antibodies is a genuine advance, and the cross-validation against independent ChIP-seq and ENCODE datasets is convincing. As noted, future work with additional biological replicates could further strengthen confidence in the smaller kinetic clusters.

      Imaging-based validation would strengthen the key biological claims. The kinetic clustering and pathway enrichments are computationally inferred. Orthogonal approaches, for example, live-cell fluorescence imaging of HIF1A nuclear translocation to confirm the proposed temporal binding waves, would provide independent experimental support.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is an important study of the molecular mechanisms of GABA vs. glutamate release by coreleasing neurons that project from the EPN to LHB. The conclusion is that separate pools of vesicles release each transmitter and use different molecular machinery to do so. This is in contrast to and in disagreement with functional studies of the same synapse that conclude that the transmitters are copackaged.

      As detailed below, the study has a major flaw. It uses an incorrect Cre line, which is also expressed in a purely glutamatergic population in the EPN that also projects to the LHB. In addition, there is little quantification and validation of important tools and no histological confirmation of the sites of expression of viral-encoded proteins.

      Strengths:

      The strength of the study is in the importance of the question addressed and in the ambition of the tools used.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The study uses Vglut2-IRES-Cre mouse to gain control over EPN to LHB projections. However, as has been shown by several groups, this line is not exclusive to the EPN co-releasing population. It is also expressed in glutamatergic EPN PV neurons that project solely to the EPN. Therefore, all of the studies here are contaminated with analysis of a purely glutamatergic Vglut2+ projection. This calls into question all the conclusions about the differential localization and function of synaptic proteins.

      (2) It is unclear from the paper, but it seems that some experiments may have been done with no Cre control, which likely led to contamination in neighboring brain regions, some of which project to LHB as well.

      (3) Histology: There is no histology shown for the mice used in the study. This is a crucial point. We need to see that the injection was clean and specific for each mouse used in the study (although, given the use of Vglut2-Cre, it cannot be specific to the coreleasing population). Whole-brain histology is necessary.

      (4) ASO KO: Unfortunately, there is little validation of the ASO KO. The effects shown in Figure S2 show a very small effect, if any. There appear to be no statistics. The functional effects in the main figure are also relatively subtle.

      (5) Other concerns: There are many typos and errors, including in important claims.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Authors examined neural substrates for cognitive empathy (conceptually understanding others' emotions) versus affective empathy (automatically sharing others' emotions) development in 3-5-year-old toddlers, and argued that cognitive empathy emerges earlier than affective empathy, challenging the predominant view that affective empathy develops earlier. The authors developed an empathy test for toddlers while measuring their brain activity with fNIRS (particularly in MPFC, STG, DLPFC, and TPJ) and heart rate. They found different brain region activation in cognitive versus affective empathy tasks, as well as age-related changes in the activation of right MPFC and right TPJ.

      Strengths:

      This work investigated the development of different components of empathy, which is a quite understudied topic. The authors developed an age-appropriate task for toddlers to measure their cognitive empathy and affective empathy, which is likely useful for future research in this field. Their methods are sound, and give a relatively large sample; the results look interesting and relatively solid, except for certain details in the reporting of methods and results.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) My major concern is the roles of brain regions hypothesized and found in this paper (MPFC, STG, DLPFC, and TPJ) - the authors seemed to have omitted a large portion of the literature on this topic. Prior works have found that these brain regions may be involved in more than one process, or involved in processes that are common to both cognitive and affective empathy (see Schurz et al., 2021). In particular, MPFC seems to be indicated more often in cognitive empathy, and STG may be involved in both cognitive empathy and intermediate processes, which is contradictory to what the author claimed and hypothesized. Relatedly, when the authors made statements like "these results highlight that regions underpinning affective and cognitive empathy in preschoolers largely resemble those documented in adults" (without proper citations), I found it unconvincing due to the disagreements in the past adult research about brain regions related to empathy, which were not quite discussed in the current paper. It may be helpful if the authors do a more thorough literature review and provide a more comprehensive view of how their results fit in the existing literature.

      (2) Given the disagreement in the past research about the roles of these brain regions, I feel like the authors' hypotheses may be insufficiently justified, and their claim that cognitive empathy develops earlier than affective empathy is a bit overly strong - would it be possible that these brain regions' different rates/patterns of development are irrelevant to specific components of empathy? Given that behavioral data did not show any age difference, and that each brain region can engage in many functions besides empathy (e.g., generic social and emotional processing), I would be more cautious when interpreting these results.

      (3) It would be helpful if the authors report certain parts of their methods and results in more detail.<br /> a) During the cognitive/affective empathy tasks, it is not explicitly clear which part of the fNIRS data were included in the analysis.<br /> b) When the authors did FDR corrections, they should include the q values and adjusted p values. I was also confused about how the FDR correction was conducted - were analyses performed on all 10 ROIs or only the hypothesized regions? I think if the authors have hypotheses about specific regions, they should test their hypotheses first, and then everything else would be exploratory analyses.<br /> c) Additionally, it is unclear what brain template was used and what procedure was followed to map channels of fNIRS data to the template.

      References:

      Schurz, M., Radua, J., Tholen, M. G., Maliske, L., Margulies, D. S., Mars, R. B., ... & Kanske, P. (2021). Toward a hierarchical model of social cognition: A neuroimaging meta-analysis and integrative review of empathy and theory of mind. Psychological bulletin, 147(3), 293.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study demonstrated that Par, but not other polarity genes, Crumbs or Scrib, regulates cell polarity during PSC transition to primed state as well as neural tube formation.

      Strengths:

      The use of KO convinces the role of Par in NPT. Scrib and Crumbs KO data are informative to the field. The conditioned medium experiment is informative. They suggested the potential secreted factors over 50kDa are responsible for maintaining the polarity of NPT in Par KO.

      Weaknesses:

      Most importantly, how Par is important for PSC maintenance and differentiation is not clear. The data provided are dome shape formation, endoderm lineage tendency, and neural tube formation reduction. The manuscript lacks a core message of the physiological importance of Par. Is Par critical of PSC maintenance? Is Par critical for neural system development?

      Secondly, AKT-FURIN-...... axis still lacks supportive data. Various inhibitors were used to rescue the Par KO. But the link between each component in the axis is missing and rather superficial.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors examine the effects of activating the dorsal raphe nucleus serotonergic system using a combination of calcium imaging and optogenetics in freely moving larval zebrafish. Their findings show that optogenetic stimulation induces a state of behavioral quiescence.

      They further investigate whether this state corresponds to sleep or reduced motor activity. Analyses of posture and sleep-related paradigms indicate that serotonergic activation primarily suppresses motor output rather than promoting sleep. Notably, this suppression appears to be bout type-dependent, with stronger effects on neurons associated with larger tail amplitudes and turning angles.

      In addition, auditory stimulation experiments reveal no significant impact of serotonin on sound encoding.

      Strengths:

      The study combines advanced experimental techniques with state-of-the-art analytical methods, enabling precise and compelling insights into the role of serotonergic modulation. The experiments and analyses are well aligned with the questions being addressed, and the results appear robust and reliable.

      Moreover, the implementation of experiments that combine calcium imaging and optogenetics in freely moving animals is technically challenging and appears well justified in the context of the research questions.

      Weaknesses:

      While the authors discuss different quiescent states mediated by serotonin reported in previous studies, more thorough attempt to determine whether the observed state corresponds to any of the previously described forms of quiescence, or represents a subset or variant of them, would strengthen the manuscript. This would help better integrate the findings with the existing literature.

      While addressing these questions may require substantial further work, potentially beyond the scope of the present study, the availability of whole-brain data provides an opportunity to at least explore or discuss these possibilities. In particular, it would be interesting to examine the recruitment of regions not directly stimulated but known to be associated with other neuromodulatory systems or promoting glial activation (e.g., the locus coeruleus).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors investigated magnesium isoglycyrrhizinate (MgIG)'s hepatoprotective actions in chronic-binge alcohol-associated liver disease (ALD) mouse models and ethanol/palmitic acid-challenged AML-12 hepatocytes. They found that MgIG markedly attenuated alcohol-induced liver injury, evidenced by ameliorated histological damage, reduced hepatic steatosis, and normalized liver-to-body weight ratios. RNA sequencing identified isopentenyl diphosphate delta isomerase 1 (IDI1) as a key downstream effector. Hepatocyte-specific genetic manipulations confirmed that MgIG modulates the SREBP2-IDI1 axis. The mechanistic studies suggested that MgIG could directly target HSD11B1 and modulate the HSD11B1-SREBP2-IDI1 axis to attenuate ALD. This manuscript is of interest to the research field of ALD.

      Strengths:

      The authors have performed both in vivo and in vitro studies to demonstrate the action of magnesium isoglycyrrhizinate on hepatocytes and an animal model of alcohol-associated liver disease.

      My first question: All the treatment arms (A-control, MgIG-25 mg/kg, MgIG-50 mg/kg) showed significant body weight loss compared to the untreated controls (Supplemental Figure 1A), but the body weight significantly increased in the treatment arms (A-control and MgIG-50 mg/kg) compared to the untreated controls (Figure 1E). Why?

      My second question: Mice with MgIG (25 mg/kg) showed the lowest body weight, compared to either A-control or MgIG (50 mg/kg) treatment. According to the authors' explanation, the MgIG (25 mg/kg) caused bodyweight loss are attributed to inter-individual variability, differences in metabolic adaptation, or sample size-related variation. Did these differences happen in MgIG (25 mg/kg) only? or in all other groups? The mouse group assignment should be randomized; however, a large variation in bodyweight was seen in MgIG (25 mg/kg) group. It is not convincing for the author to select MgIG (50 mg/kg) group for subsequent animal experiments, because of a large variation in MgIG (25 mg/kg) group, and because that MgIG (50 mg/kg) group demonstrated more consistent and stable improvements across multiple parameters. The author should reanalyze and compare all the raw data between MgIG (50 mg/kg) group and MgIG (25 mg/kg) group, and address the issues being pointed out and justify rationale for the animal group assignment.

      The author's response did not answer my question. If the authors believe it could be experimental constraints associated with the MgIG formulation, then it is questionable for this MgIG formulation used in all other associated experiments. The experiments, at least those the MgIG formulation associated experiments, need to be repeated.

      The author explained the relative expression was normalized to GAPDH (fold change), but they did not answer my question. My question is for Figure 5B. in Figure 5B (left, Hsd11b1-KD), scramble control showed over 100 (unit), however, in Figure 5B (right, Hsd11b1-OE), scramble control showed only 0.5-1 (unit). The data seemed that authors used same scramble control for both KD and OE? If yes, they should provide more details of the KD and OE experiments and explain why this happened. If they used plasmid for OE control, they also need to clarify it. In addition, qPCR is not a good assay to show the success of KD or OE, Western blotting should be done as convincing data to show the success of KD or OE.

      Comments on revised version.

      In this revision, all the issues are addressed.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary and strengths:

      In this manuscript, Karjee and colleagues used coalescent based effective population size reconstruction (PSMC) from single genomes to understand past population trends in island birds and related this to life history traits and glacial patterns. In this analysis they chose to use a generation time of 2 years for passerines and 1 year for non-passerines. Non-passerine birds include Amazona vittata which only reaches sexual maturity at 3-5 years; Amazona guildingii which reaches sexual maturity at ~5 years; Amblyornis subalaris at 7 years etc. This means that the choice of generation time is very poorly matched to the species biology of many of the focal systems. What this will do is to "squash" the PSMC plot, meaning that population trends will not match with when they actually occurred. As a result, glaciation windows are not correctly placed. It is my opinion that the results are not interpretable in the current form.

      The authors must adjust the generation time to roughly the median period between average age of sexual maturity and age of death. It should represent the time when an individual has had 50% of their offspring. After which all analyses must be repeated.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript Bohra et al. measure the effects of estrogen responsive gene expression upon induction on nearby target genes using a TAD containing the genes TFF1 and TFF3 as a model. The authors propose that there is a sort competition for transcriptional machinery between TFF1 (estrogen responsive) and TFF3 (not responsive) such that when TFF1 is activated and machinery is recruited, TFF3 is activated after a time delay. The authors attribute this time delay to transcriptional machinery that was being sequestered at TFF1 becomes available to the proximal TFF3 locus. The authors demonstrate that this activation is not dependent on contact with the TFF1 enhancer through deletion, instead they conclude that it is dependent on a phase-separated condensate which can sequester transcriptional machinery. Although the manuscript reports an interesting observation that there is a dose dependence and time delay on the expression of TFF1 relative to TFF3, there is much room for improvement in the analysis and reporting of the data. Most importantly there is no direct test of condensate formation at the locus in the context of this study: i.e. dissolution upon the enhancer deletion, decay in a temporal manner, and dependence of TFF1 expression on condensate formation. Using 1,6' hexanediol to draw conclusion on this matter is not adequate to draw conclusions on the effect of condensates on a specific genes activity given current knowledge on its non-specificity and multitude of indirect effects. Thus, in my opinion the major claim that this effect of a time delayed expression of TFF3 being dependent on condensates in not supported by the current data.

      Strengths:

      The depends of TFF1 expression on a single enhancer and the temporal delay in TFF3 is a very interesting finding.

      The non-linear dependence of TFF1 and TTF3 expression on ER concentration is very interesting with potentially broader implications.

      The combined use of smFISH, enhancer deletion, and 4C to build a coherent model is a good approach.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors discovered that HDAC1/2 are degraded in HSV-1 and PRV infections. They attempted to establish a new mechanism by which HDAC1/2 are translocated to the cytoplasm to be degraded in HSV-1 infection, and the degradation causes changes in histone acetylation to affect the DDR pathway.

      Strengths:

      (1) Interesting findings of HDAC1/2 degradation during HSV-1 and PRV infection, and it may impact more than the virology field.

      (2) Significant work to identify the ubiquitin site in HDAC1/2 and K63 linkage.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors added experiments to address the previous comments. The added knockdown and overexpression experiments provided sufficient support for the proposed mechanism. The conclusions are now strengthened. However, a few essential controls are still missing.

      (1) Figure 3K: How does the expression level of Flag-HDAC1 variants compare to the endogenous HDAC1 level? The stripe probed by Flag antibody should be reprobed by HDAC1 antibody. Also, how does the K74R mutant affect histone acetylation? Moreover, the numbers between the panels are hard to read and have not been explained.

      (2) Figure 3M and 3L: DNA transfection per se frequently stimulates cell reactions that inhibit HSV-1 replication. Is the HSV-1 only sample transfected by empty vector or untransfected?

      (3) Figure 4G-4J: What is the MDM2 knockdown efficiency?

      (4) Figure 5F and line 400-401: "thereby preventing HDAC1 degradation-markedly impaired HSV-1 replication (Fig. 5F)." However, viral replication is not demonstrated in Figure 5F.

      (5) Figure 5K: also need a control of empty vector. Furthermore, how does the HDAC1 NES expression affect histone acetylation and DDR responses?

      (6) Statements listed below are better moved to discussion after all data being presented. They are quite a stretch when looking at each figure by itself.

      (i) Line 268-270: "Together, these findings indicate that HSV-1 selectively degrades class I HDACs, resulting in widespread histone hyperacetylation that fosters a chromatin state conducive to viral replication". ----may be okay for a statement.

      (ii) Line 291-292: "providing initial evidence that HSV-1 infection promotes DDR activation through downregulation of HDAC1 expression"

      (iii) Line 331-333: "Together, these results indicate that HSV-1 infection promotes K63-linked polyubiquitination of HDAC1/2 at conserved lysine residues, ultimately leading to their proteasomal degradation."

      (iv) Line 334-336 is a repeated sentence.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study from Jia et al carried out a variety of analyses of terminating ribosomes, including the development of eRF1-seq to map termination sites, identification of a GA-rich motif that promotes ribosome pausing, characterization of tissue-specific termination dynamics, and elucidation of the regulatory roles of 18S rRNA and RPS26. Overall, the study is thoughtfully designed, and its biological conclusions are well supported by complementary experiments. The tools and datasets generated provide valuable resources for researchers investigating the mechanisms of RNA translation.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study introduces eRF1-seq, a novel approach for mapping translation termination sites, providing a methodological advance for studying ribosome termination.

      (2) Through integrative bioinformatic analyses and complementary MPRA experiments, the authors demonstrate that GA-rich motifs promote ribosome pausing at termination sites and reveal possible regulatory roles of 18S rRNA in this process.

      (3) The study characterizes tissue-specific ribosome termination dynamics, showing that the testis exhibits stronger ribosome pausing at stop codons compared to other tissues. Follow-up experiments suggest that RPS26 may contribute to this tissue specificity.

      Weaknesses:

      The biological significance of ribosome pausing regulation at translation termination sites or of translational readthrough, for example across different tissue types, remains unclear. Nevertheless, this question lies beyond the primary scope of the current study.

      Comments on the latest version:

      The authors addressed my comments by revising the claims in the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aim to address whether nuclear pore complex components localize and function at PD in plant cells to mediate cell-to-cell communication.

      Strengths:

      (1) Novelty and Significance:

      The core hypothesis, drawing parallels between PD and NPC transport, is highly original and addresses a critical gap in understanding plant intercellular communication. The idea that phase-separated domains formed by FG-NUPs could act as diffusion barriers at PD offers an alternative and plausible explanation for their complex transport properties, including size exclusion and facilitated translocation. This could fundamentally change how we view PD transport and function.

      (2) Comprehensive Evidence:

      The study employs a rigorous and diverse set of experimental approaches, including a comprehensive bioinformatic analysis of both moss and Arabidopsis NUPs in available PD proteomic datasets, extensive imaging analysis of Nup localization in vivo, and functional transport assays using a loss-of-function nup mutant (cpr5). The transport assay is particularly important to provide functional evidence linking CPR5 to PD-mediated transport. The finding that callose levels were not significantly different in cpr5 mutants under these conditions is helpful and supports a distinct, callose-independent mechanism of transport regulation.

      (3) Objectivity:

      The authors are forthright in discussing the limitations and potential artifacts of their own data, clearly distinguishing between observations and definitive conclusions.

      Weaknesses:

      While the claims are generally justified as hypotheses or consistent observations, the authors themselves extensively detail the caveats, which are worth reiterating for clarity:

      (1) Potential Overexpression Artifacts in Localization:

      Although efforts were made to control expression levels, the authors acknowledge that transient overexpression could still lead to NUP accumulation at PD, either as a physiologically irrelevant accumulation under excess conditions or due to mis-targeting. Note that they provided data showing Nup62 PD localization at a near native level.

      (2) CPR5 Mutant Interpretation:

      While cpr5 mutants exhibited reduced macromolecular transport, the authors state that they cannot exclude that the reduced transport is due to secondary effects in the cpr5 mutants, which show rather severe phenotypic defects. This is an important distinction, as CPR5 has known roles in defense responses and hormone signaling that could indirectly influence PD integrity, independent of callose deposition. The lack of effect on small molecule transport is a good control, but the broader pleiotropic effects of cpr5 mutants remain a consideration.

      (3) Conceptual Distinction between NPC and PD:

      The authors correctly point out that while similarities exist, the physical assembly of NUPs at PD must differ from that at the NPC due to the presence of the desmotubule and smaller cytoplasmic sleeve width at PD. Moreover, nucleocytoplasmic transport depends on kayropherin proteins (importins) that interact with the NPC central channel to complete the transport. Yet the role of karyopherins in this case is not clear. Therefore, the proposed "PD pore complex" may bear some NPC features, but not identical.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study presents novel results on the presence of the Entner-Doudoroff pathway in Synechocystis sp. PCC 6803. In contrast to an earlier study, compelling evidence is given that this strain lacks both an ED pathway and a glucose dehydrogenase/glucokinase bypass but contains a promiscuous aldolase, which also decarboxylates oxaloacetate and cleaves 2-keto-4-hydroxyglutarate (as it occurs in proline degradation). The study concludes with successfully reconciling data from different studies and with lessons learned from the previous misconception.

      Strengths:

      Solid biochemical data are presented to reconcile contradicting data of earlier studies and to serve as a basis for disclosing possible functions of a promiscuous aldolase. Earlier misconceptions and lessons to be learned are well discussed.

      Weaknesses:

      The materials and methods section is rather lengthy, suffering from a lack of conciseness and repetition, and nevertheless misses some specifications.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors set out to determine whether people can adjust how narrowly or broadly they focus attention in advance based on expectations about how difficult an upcoming visual task will be. Specifically, they aimed to test whether expecting a more demanding search leads to a narrower focus of attention or instead strengthens attention at the relevant location without changing its spatial extent.

      Strengths:

      The study addresses a timely and interesting question about how expectations influence the preparation of attention before a task begins. The experimental design is well suited to isolating anticipatory effects by manipulating expectations about task difficulty independently of moment-to-moment stimulus information. The manuscript is clearly written, and the methods are described in sufficient detail to support transparency and reproducibility.

      Comments on revised version.

      During the review process the authors addressed my previous concerns. The revisions have improved the clarity of the analyses and the interpretation of the results, and I have no further substantive comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript examines the association between atovaquone/proguanil use, zoster vaccination, toxoplasmosis serostatus and Alzheimer's Disease, using 2 databases of claims data. The manuscript is well written and concise. The major concerns about the manuscript center around the indications of atovaquone/proguanil use, which would not typically be active against toxoplasmosis at doses given, and the lack of control for potential confounders in the analysis.

      Strengths:

      (1) Use of 2 databases of claims data.

      (2) Unbiased review of medications associated with AD, which identified zoster vaccination associated with decreased risk of AD, replicating findings from other studies.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Given that atovaquone/proguanil is likely to be given to a healthy population who is able to travel, concern that there are unmeasured confounders driving the association.

      (2) The dose of atovaquone in atovaquone/proguanil is unlikely to be adequate suppression of toxo (much less for treatment/elimination of toxo), raising questions about the mechanism.

      (3) Unmeasured bias in the small number of people who had toxoplasma serology in the TriNetX cohort.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors propose that bidirectional redistribution of actomyosin drives tissue invagination in Ciona siphon tube formation. They suggest a two-stage model where actomyosin first accumulates apically to drive a slow initial invagination, followed by redistribution to lateral domains to accelerate the invagination process through cell shortening. They have shown that actomyosin activity is important for invagination - modulation of myosin activity through expression of myosin mutants altered the timing and speed of invagination; furthermore, optogenetic inhibition of myosin during the transition of the slow and fast stages disrupted invagination. The authors further developed a vertex model to validate the relationship between contractile force distribution and epithelial invagination.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors employed various techniques to address the research question, including optogenetics, use of MRLC mutants, and vertex modelling.

      (2) The authors provide quantitative analyses for a substantial portion of their imaging data, including cell and tissue geometry parameters as well as actin and myosin distributions. The sample sizes used in these analyses appear appropriate.

      (3) The authors combined experimental measurements with computer modeling to test the proposed mechanical models, which represents a strength of the study. It provides a framework to explore the mechanical principles underlying the observed morphogenesis.

      Comments on the revision.

      The revised manuscript has been substantially improved. The authors have addressed many of my previous concerns through the addition of new data, analyses, and discussion. The characterization of epithelial folding in the ascidian Ciona provides valuable insight into a comparatively less explored morphogenetic system, and the imaging and quantitative analyses are overall compelling. That said, a few important points remain to be addressed.

      One remaining issue concerns the mechanistic novelty of the actomyosin redistribution described in this study. The authors emphasize that the key novelty lies in the stepwise translocation of actomyosin from the lateral membrane to the apical domain during the initial stage (apical constriction), followed by redistribution from the apical domain back to the lateral domain during the accelerated stage (invagination). I agree that the dynamic redistribution itself is potentially interesting and may represent an underexplored aspect of epithelial morphogenesis. However, as I discussed in my previous review comments, from a mechanics perspective, the role of apical actomyosin in driving apical constriction and of lateral actomyosin in contributing to tissue folding/invagination have already been demonstrated in multiple systems, although to varying extents depending on the model. Therefore, while the current study convincingly documents a distinct spatiotemporal sequence of actomyosin localization in Ciona atrial siphon tube formation, it could be clarified further to what extent this work advances new mechanical principles underlying epithelial folding, as opposed to revealing a variation in the deployment of previously described force-generating modules.

      Importantly, I think the manuscript has the potential to provide deeper conceptual insight if the authors more explicitly consider the significance of the "redistribution" process itself. Redistribution does not only involve the appearance of actomyosin at a new membrane domain; it also necessarily involves its disappearance from the previous domain. The latter aspect has, in my view, been much less explored in the literature. For example: Is the removal of lateral actomyosin during the early phase important for efficient apical constriction? Conversely, is the reduction of apical actomyosin during the later accelerated phase important for proper invagination mechanics? These questions are particularly interesting because they address whether redistribution between domains serves an active mechanical regulatory role, rather than focusing on the role of force-generating actomyosin at a given location.

      I acknowledge that addressing these questions experimentally could be technically challenging. One potentially powerful way to address this would be through the revised computational model. For example, the authors could test whether tissue folding is altered when actomyosin is allowed to accumulate at a new domain without being concomitantly depleted from the original domain. Such analyses could help distinguish whether redistribution itself has functional mechanical importance, rather than merely reflecting sequential recruitment to different cellular regions. In my opinion, incorporating this aspect would substantially strengthen the conceptual and mechanistic novelty of the study.

      My other concern relates to the new optogenetic data presented in Figure 4-figure supplement 2. In the "Dark" samples, active myosin does not appear to be clearly enriched along the membrane, but instead seems relatively diffuse within the cytoplasm. This appears distinct from the images shown in Figure 2, where active myosin exhibits clear membrane enrichment. Could the authors provide top-view images for the samples shown in Figure 4-figure supplement 2? This would help clarify whether active myosin is indeed enriched along the apical membrane at 16 hpf and along the lateral membrane at 17 hpf in the "Dark" condition.

      In addition, the tissue morphology in the "17 hpf Light 1 hr" panel of Figure 4-figure supplement 2 appears noticeably different from that shown in Figure 4. Specifically, the apical side of the tissue in Figure 4 appears substantially more relaxed than in Figure 4-figure supplement 2. Based on the authors' interpretation of the optogenetic experiments, apical active myosin is not strongly affected by the treatment described in Figure 4. If so, one would expect apical constriction to remain largely intact. However, the more relaxed apical domain shown in Figure 4 seems to suggest that apical constriction may in fact be perturbed by the optogenetic manipulation. This apparent discrepancy complicates the interpretation of the experiment and seems somewhat inconsistent with the authors' main conclusion from this figure.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In the present manuscript, Li et al. use biochemical fractionation of "RNA granules" from P5 wildtype and FMR1 knock-out mouse brains to analyze their protein/RNA content, determine a single particle cryo-EM structure of contained ribosomes, and perform ribo-seq analysis of ribosome-protected RNA fragments (RPFs). The authors conclude from these that neither the composition of the ribosome granules, nor the state of their contained ribosomes, nor the mRNA positions with high ribosome occupancy change significantly. Besides minor changes in mRNA occupancy, the one change the authors identified is a decrease in puromycylated punctae in distal neurites of cultured primary neurons of the same mice, and their enhanced resistance to different pharmacological treatments. These results directly build on their earlier work (Anadolu et al., 2023) using analogous preparations of rat brains; the authors now perform a very similar study using WT and FMR1-KO mouse brains. This is an important topic, aiming to identify the molecular underpinnings of the FMRP protein, which is the basis of a major neurological disease. Unfortunately, several limitations of this study prevent it from being more convincing in its present form.

      In order to improve this study, our main suggestions are as follows:

      (1) The authors equate their biochemically purified "RG" fraction with their imaging-based detection of puromycin-positive punctae. They claim essentially no differences in RGs but detect differences in the latter (mostly their abundance and sensitivity to DHPG/HHT/Aniso). In the discussion the authors acknowledge the inconsistency between these two modalities: "An inconsistency in our findings is the loss of distal RPM puncta coupled with an increase in the immunoreactivity for S6 in the RG." and "Thus, it may be that the RG is not simply made up of ribosomes from the large liquid-liquid phase RNA granules."<br /> How can the authors be sure that they are in fact analysing the same entities in both modalities? A more parsimonious explanation of their results would be that, while there might be some overlap, two different entities are analyzed. Much of the main message rests on this equivalence and I believe the authors should show its validity.

      (2) The authors show that increased nuclease digestion (and magnesium concentration) led to a reduction of their RPF sizes down to levels also seen by other researchers. Analyzing these now properly digested RPFs, the authors state that the CDS coverage and periodicity drastically improved, and that spurious enrichments of secretory mRNAs, which made up one of the major fractions in their previous work, are now reduced. In my opinion this would be more appropriately communicated as a correction to their previous work, not as a main Figure in another manuscript.

      (3) The fold changes reported in Figure 7 (ranging between log2(-0.2) and log2(+0.25)) are all extremely small and in my opinion should not be used to derive claims such as "The loss of FMRP significantly affected the abundance and occupancy of FMRP-Clipped mRNAs in WT and FMR1-KO RG (Fig 7A, 7B), but not their enrichment between RG and RCs".

      (4) Fig 8 / S8-1 - The authors show that ~2/3 of their reads stem from PCR duplicates, but that even after removing those, the majority of peaks remains unaltered. At the same time, Fig S8-1 shows the total number of peaks to be 615 compared with 1392 before duplicate removal. Can the authors comment on this discrepancy? In addition, the dataset with properly removed artefacts should be used for their main display item instead of the current Fig 8.

      (5) Fig 9 / S9-1, the density of punctae in both WT and FMR1-KO actually increases after treatment of HHT or Anisomycin (Fig S9-1 B-C). Even if a large fraction would now be "resistant to run-off", there should not be an increase. While this effect is deemed not significant, a much smaller effect in Fig 9C is deemed significant. Can the authors explain this? Given how vastly different the sample sizes are (ranging from 23 neurites in Fig S9-1 to 5,171 neurites in Fig 9), the authors should (randomly) sample to the same size and repeat their statistical analysis again to improve their credibility.

      Comments on revised version.

      We can see that the authors invested substantial effort to improve the manuscript and we believe it is improved.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the manuscript by Walter-McNeill, Kruglyak and team, the authors provide solid evidence of another toxin-antidote (TA) system in C. elegans. Generally, TA systems involve selfish and linked genetic elements, one encoding a toxin that kills progeny inheriting it, unless an antidote (the second element) is also present. Currently, only two TA systems have been characterized in this species, pointing to the importance of identifying new instances of such systems to understand their transmission dynamics, prevalence, and functions in shaping worm populations.

      The manuscript has been improved in some aspects upon revision. We remain enthusiastic for the overall findings and the identification of a new toxin/anti-toxin system and note that the strengths and weaknesses we detailed previously remain. We reiterate our critique regarding the strength of conclusions that can be made about small RNA pathway regulation based on meta-analysis of other datasets. While we agree that the observations presented are suggestive of small RNA regulation, likely due to piRNA targeting and subsequent 22G-RNA regulation, until these hypotheses are tested experimentally in the future by mutation of the piRNA target sites, testing ago/piRNA pathway and other 22G-RNA pathway mutants for tmrl-1 expression, etc., we think it is important to use precise language in presenting the conclusions. In particular, the abstract states:

      "Multiple lines of evidence suggest that the N2 tmrl-1 allele is recognized by piRNAs, leading to MUT-16-dependent 22G siRNA production and post-transcriptional silencing of the transcript. The N2 haplotype represents the first naturally occurring unlinked toxin-antidote system where the toxin is post-transcriptionally suppressed by endogenous small RNA pathways."

      We therefore recommend moderating this statement to "...is likely to be post-transcriptionally suppressed by endogenous small RNA pathways."

      Previously noted strengths and weaknesses remain relevant to this revision.

      Strengths:

      This novel TA system (mll-1/smll-1) was identified on LGV in wild C. elegans isolates from the Hawaiian Islands, by crossing divergent strains and observing allele frequency distortions by high throughput genome sequencing after 10 generations. These allele frequency distortions were subsequently confirmed in another set of crosses with a separate divergent strain, and crosses of heterozygous males or hermaphrodites resulted in a pattern of L1 lethality in progeny (with a rod arrest phenotype) that suggested the maternal transmission of this TA system from the XZ1516 genetic background. By elegantly combining the use of near-isogenic lines, CRISPR editing to generate knock-outs, and a transgene rescue of the antidote gene, the authors identified the genes encoding the toxin and the antidote, which they refer to as mll-1 and smll-1. Moreover, the specific mll-1 isoform responsible for the production of the toxin was identified and mll-1 transcripts were observed by FISH in early and late embryos, as well as in larvae. Inducible expression of the toxin in various strains resulted in larval arrest and rod phenotypes. The authors then characterized the genetic variation of 550 wild isolates at the toxin/antidote region on LGV and distinguished three clades: 1) one with the conserved TA system, 2) one having lost the toxin and retaining a mostly functional antidote, and 3) one having lost the antidote and retaining a divergent yet coding toxin (this includes the reference strain Bristol N2, in which the homologous toxin gene has acquired mutations and is known as B0250.8). Further, the authors show that this region is under positive selection. These data are compelling and provide very strong evidence of a new TA system in this species.

      Weaknesses:

      The question remained as to how one clade, including N2, could retain the toxin gene but not possess a functional antidote. In the second part of the manuscript, the authors hypothesized that small RNA targeting (RNAi) of the toxin transcript could provide the necessary repression to allow worms to survive without the antidote. Through a meta-analysis of multiple small RNA datasets from the literature, the authors found evidence to support this idea, in which the toxin transcript is targeted by 22G siRNAs whose biogenesis is dependent on the Mutator foci protein, MUT-16. They note that from previous studies, mut-16 null mutants displayed a varied penetrance of larval arrest. In their own hands, mut-16 mutants displayed 15% varied larval arrest and 2% rod phenotypes. In an attempt to link B0250.8 to mut-16/siRNAs, they made a double mutant and examined body length as a proxy for developmental stage. Here, they observed a partial rescue of the mut-16 size defect by B0250.8 mutation. Finally, the authors also highlight data from further meta-analysis which predicts the recognition of B0250.8 by several piRNAs. Also based on existing data from the literature, the authors link loss of Piwi (PRG-1), which binds piRNAs, to a depletion of 22G-RNAs targeting B0250.8 and an upregulation of B0250.8 expression in gonads, suggesting that piRNAs are the primary small RNAs that target B0250.8 for down-regulation. The data in this portion of the manuscript are intriguing, but somewhat incomplete, as they are based on little primary experimentation and a collection of different datasets (which have been acquired by slightly different methods in most cases). This portion of the study would require subsequent experimentation to firmly establish this mechanistic link. For example, to be able to claim that "the N2 toxin allele has acquired mutations that enable piRNA binding to initiate MUT-16-dependent 22G small RNA amplification that targets the transcript for degradation" the identified piRNA sites should be mutated and protein and transcript levels analysed in wild-type and in the strain with mutated piRNA sites. At a minimum, the protein levels in wild-type and mut-16, prg-1, and/or wago-1 mutants should be measured by western blot and/or by live imaging (introducing a GFP or some other tag to the endogenous protein via CRISPR editing) to show that the toxin is not accumulated as a protein in wt, but increases in levels in these mutants. mRNA levels in Fig S5A suggest there is still some expression of the B0250.8 transcript in a wild type situation.

      Comments on revised version.

      We have no further recommendations for the authors, other than those provided above.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Previous work in the field highlighted the role of the kinesin-10 motor protein Kid (KIF22) in the polar ejection force during prometaphase. However, the biochemical and biophysical properties of Kid that enabled it to serve in this role were unclear. The authors demonstrate that human and xenopus Kid proteins are processive kinesins that function as homodimeric molecules. The data are solid and support the findings although the text could use some editing to improve clarity.

      Strengths:

      A highlight of the work is the reconstitution of DNA transport in vitro.

      A second highlight is the demonstration that the monomer vs dimer state is dependent on protein concentration.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work presents three tools: SqueakPose Studio, which is used for pose estimation; SqueakView, which is used for real-time video and sensor data capture and analysis; and MouseHouse, which is a behavioral and sensor suite for mouse experiments. Together, these tools provide a comprehensive behavioral platform for acquiring and analyzing video, sensor, and behavioral data. The work is open source and provided as a resource for the field.

      Strengths:

      (1) Squeakpose Studio was relatively easy to install and use. We were impressed that we were able to install it and test our own videos with minimal struggles. The authors provide installation tutorial videos that were very helpful.

      (2) The GUI environment for SqueakPose Studio was very usable, and the authors should be commended on the time and effort that went into improving the useability of their system. The keypoint and skeleton configuration was flexible, allowing us to define custom body part sets without modifying code directly. The pose estimation accuracy on our own videos was good right out of the box, without requiring fine-tuning or retraining. For a tool being evaluated for the first time, this was all very impressive!

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While we were able to install and test Squeakpose Studio, it was not entirely seamless. The primary installation resource is a tutorial video, and we would recommend supplementing this with a written installation checklist that explicitly lists all required software dependencies (e.g. Python, UV, Visual Studio). The tutorial video was also at times unclear in distinguishing required from optional components. For example, Visual Studio is described as not necessary, yet the tutorial demonstrates the workflow entirely within that environment, so it may be challenging for a user to follow along without that. We recommend that the authors adopt a stricter, step-by-step installation guide that is prescriptive about required software and leaves little room for confusion.

      (2) The paper also describes SqueakView and MouseHouse. Unfortunately, we were unable to evaluate these components as both require the MouseHouse hardware platform. Even without directly using MouseHouse, we noticed some incompleteness here, as we could not locate a bill of materials, component pricing, or assembly guide in the paper or associated GitHub repositories. Given that affordability and accessibility are central claims, a consolidated parts list, approximate costs, and a build guide or video would be necessary for most labs to realistically decide whether they plan to replicate the hardware and evaluate this functionality that the paper describes. In this regard, we felt that MouseHouse and potentially SqueakView were not sufficiently documented for publication.

      (3) The benchmarking comparison to DeepLabCut (DLC) introduced multiple challenges that left us unclear if the head-to-head comparison was appropriate as described. First, the dataset used for benchmarking was small and homogeneous, from the methods they used "10 min open-field tasks of single mice with bilateral photometry cables." As such, the claims about comparisons between SqueakPose Studio and DLC may be too broad, given this single test case. Specifically, this dataset does not test robustness across lighting conditions, coat colors, species, occlusions, different-shaped arenas, etc. Second, the comparison to DLC in Figure 1 does not include any quantitative statistical comparisons, which are needed to evaluate the claims that were made. For instance, the error in Figure 1e looks worse for their system than DLC, although statistical comparisons were not made. Third, there are many settings and optimizations that can be made for both systems. Without more detail, this makes it hard to know if the head-to-head comparison is really fair. Fourth - the metrics are given as very specific numbers from single runs, i.e., an inference time of 71.59 minutes in Figure 1d. This metric would be more meaningful if it reported the mean of multiple runs, with error estimation. Finally, while the code is available, the trained datasets are made available only on "reasonable request". Given the importance of these datasets to evaluating the method and allowing others to benchmark it against other systems, these should be made available on GitHub. Overall, I would recommend toning down the comparison to DLC and focusing on the strengths of Squeakpose Studio on its own merits.

      (4) The paper at times makes general statements that are beyond what is shown. For instance, discussions of use in human applications are aspirational and should be treated much more conservatively in the discussion, or possibly even removed. As it stands, the discussion implies that this system can already do "zero-shot tracking of human posture and movement", enabling "a bridge between preclinical and clinical behavioral analysis". In principle, this may be true, but even for a Discussion section, this goes far beyond the capabilities that the paper actually shows.

      (5) While the comprehensive nature of the system and its 3 parts is impressive, I felt that it also detracted from the main focus of the paper, which was Squeakpose Studio. I might recommend dropping the other two parts, as they also require a much higher bar for a user to evaluate, and only present the Squeakpose Studio in this paper, presenting this as a general resource for pose estimation. This would also allow them more space to more comprehensively benchmark SqueakPose Studio.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Coward and colleagues report on the role of insulin/IGF axis in podocyte gene transcription. They knocked out both the insulin and IGFR1 mice. Dual KO mice manifested a severe phenotype, with albuminuria, glomerulosclerosis, renal failure and death at 4-24 weeks.

      Long read RNA sequencing was used to assess splicing events. Podocyte transcripts manifesting intron retention were identified. Dual knock-out podocytes manifested more transcripts with intron retention (18%) compared wild-type controls (18%), with an overlap between experiments of ~30%.

      Transcript productivity was also assessed using FLAIR-mark-intron-retention software. Intron retention w seen in 18% of ciDKO podocyte transcripts compared to 14% of wild-type podocyte transcripts (P=0.004), with an overlap between experiments of ~30% (indicating the variability of results with this method). Interestingly, ciDKO podocytes showed downregulation of proteins involved in spliceosome function and RNA processing, as suggested by LC/MS and confirmed by Western blot.

      Pladienolide (a spliceosome inhibitor) was cytotoxic to HeLa cells and to mouse podocytes, but no toxicity was seen in murine glomerular endothelial cells.

      The manuscript is generally clear and well-written. Mouse work was approved in advance. The four figures are generally well-designed, bars/superimposed dot-plots.

      Methods are generally well described.

      Comments on previous version:

      Coward and colleagues have done an excellent job of responding to all the reviewer comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study investigates the visual information that is used for the recognition of faces. This is an important question in vision research and is critical for social interactions more generally. The authors ask whether our ability to recognise faces, across different viewpoints, varies as a function of the orientation information available in the image. Consistent with previous findings from this group and others, they find that horizontally filtered faces were recognised better than vertically filtered faces. Next, they probe the mechanism underlying this pattern of data by designing two model observers. The first was optimised for faces at a specific viewpoint (view-selective). The second was generalised across viewpoints (view-tolerant). In contrast to the human data, the view-specific model shows that the information that is useful for identity judgements varies according to viewpoint. For example, frontal face identities are again optimally discriminated with horizontal orientation information, but profiles are optimally discriminated with more vertical orientation information. These findings show human face recognition is biased toward horizontal orientation information, even though this may be suboptimal for the recognition of profile views of the face.

      One issue in the design of this study was the lowering of the signal-to-noise ratio in the view-selective observer. This decision was taken to avoid ceiling effects. However, it is not clear how this affects the similarity with the human observers.

      Another issue is the decision to normalise image energy across orientations and viewpoints. I can see the logic in wanting to control for these effects, but this does reflect natural variation in image properties. So, again, I wonder what the results would look like without this step.

      Despite the bias toward horizontal orientations in human observers, there were some differences in the orientation preference at each viewpoint. For example, frontal faces were biased to horizontal (90 deg) but other viewpoints had biases that were slightly off horizontal (e.g. right profile: 80 deg, left profile: 100 deg). This does seem to show that differences in statistical information at different viewpoints (more horizontal information for frontal and more vertical information for profile) do influence human perception. It would be good to reflect on this nuance in the data.

      Comments on revisions:

      I am happy with the response and changes to the comments in my review. The key findings from this study are: (1) that there is bias toward the use of horizontal information across all viewpoints for face recognition in humans using an old-new recognition task. (2) In contrast, the optimal information for matching faces varies as a function of viewpoint. The view-selective model shows horizontal information is dominant for frontal views and vertical information is dominant for profile views.

      The data from the view-tolerant model is less easy to interpret as it doesn't fit with any theoretically plausible model of face recognition. It might be a useful model for a face matching task in which participants had to match unfamiliar faces across viewpoints. This might be a possible extension of the current work.

      Nonetheless, I still think this is an interesting contribution to the literature.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript examines whether the theta-beta ratio as derived from EEG data relates to ADHD diagnoses. To do so, it performs a multiverse analysis across a large number of analytical choices, applied to a large EEG dataset, and corroborated in an additional validation set. The results overall show that the TBR is not a reliable indicator of ADHD diagnosis. In discussing the patterns of results across analytical choices, the authors also demonstrate some key points about what appears to be driving the ratio measures, noting that significant results appear to be driven by choices regarding aperiodic-correction and the use of individualized alpha frequencies, suggesting TBR measures can be affected by these features rather than reflecting theta and/or beta activity.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript addresses a clearly posed and important question in the literature, addressing a longstanding discussion on the relationship between TBR and ADHD, and uses a large dataset and an expansive analysis approach to provide a definitive answer. The strengths of the approach allow for a clear answer, providing a notable contribution to the field.

      Weaknesses:

      I find no notable weaknesses in the current manuscript nor any major issues that I think challenge the key findings of this manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study describes the development of GPR52-1.0, a novel genetically encoded fluorescent sensor for the orphan GPCR, GPR52. The authors also utilized this sensor in vivo in brain slices and discovered that striatal neuron excititation may activate GPR52.

      Strengths:

      (1) The design and validation of the sensor are elegant, thorough, and rigorous. The authors conducted a systematic and impressive optimization screen of numerous variants to arrive at the top-performing GPR52-1.0 sensor. The subsequent characterization is thorough, showing excellent membrane trafficking, appropriate pharmacological profiles (EC50, IC50) by the GPR52 chemical agonist/antagonist, rapid kinetics, and high specificity against a panel of common neurotransmitters. The functional characterization was also performed in multiple experimental systems.

      (2) The most exciting result is the observation that electrical stimulation may activate GPR52 in the striatum, an area where GPR52 is natively expressed. The blockade by a specific GPR52 antagonist confirms its specificity and provides the first direct evidence for activity-dependent, native GPR52 ligand in striata. This finding alone is a significant step forward and strongly justifies the sensor's development.

      (3) The manuscript is well-written and logically structured. The figures are clear and effectively illustrate the key data, from the initial screening process to the final ex vivo validation. The authors did not overstate their discoveries.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The sensor specificity is largely based on a single agonist/antagonist, and it might be desired for future studies to confirm this by additional agonists/antagonists or by point mutagenesis that is known to influence GPR52 activation (for example, the ones reported in (PMID: 40087539).

      (2) The discovery of the existence of activity-dependent, native GPR52 ligand(s) in striata is extremely exciting. This might be further strengthened by inhibiting synaptic transmitter release with TTX, calcium channel blockers, or SNARE complex disruptors, etc.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Overview of questions being answered and study design: The authors have used a knock-in mouse model to explore late in life amyloid effects on sleep. This is an excellent model as the mutated genes are regulated by the endogenous promoter system. The sleep study techniques and statistical analyses are also first rate.

      The group finds an age-dependent increase in motor activity in advanced age in the NLGF homozygous knock-in mice (NLGF), with a parallel age dependent increase in body temperature, both effects predominate in the dark period. Interestingly the sleep patterns do not quite follow the sleep changes. Wake time is increased in NLGF mice and there is no progression in increased wake over time. NREMS and REM sleep are both reduced and there is no progression. Sleep wake effects, however, show a robust light:dark effect with larger effects in the dark period. These findings support distinct effects of this mutation on activity and temperature and on sleep. This is the first description of the temporal pattern of these effects. NLGF mice show wake stability (longer bout durations in the dark period (their active period) and fewer brief arousals from sleep. Sleep homeostasis across the lights on period is normal. Wake power spectral density is unaffected in NLGF mice at either age. Only REM power spectra are affected with NLGF mice showing less theta and more delta. There are interesting sex differences with females showing no gene difference on wake bout number, while males show a gene effect. Similarly, gene effects on NREM bout number seems larger in males than in females. Although there was no difference in homeostatic response there was normalization of sleep wake activity after sleep deprivation.

      Strengths:

      Approach (model extent of sleep phenotyping), analysis

      Weaknesses:

      Summarized below. Viewed as "addressable."

      (1) The term insomnia. Insomnia is defined as a subjective dissatisfaction with sleep, and that cannot be ascertained in a mouse model. The findings across baseline sleep in NLGF mice support increased wake consolidation in the active period. The predominant sleep period (lights on) is largely unaffected, and the active period (lights off) shows increased activity and increased wake with longer bouts. There is a fantastic clue where NLGF effects are consistent with increased hypocretinergic (orexinergic) neuron activity in the dark period, and/or increased drive to hypocretin neurons from PVH.

      (2) Sleep-wake transitions are impaired: This should not be termed an impairment. Could actually be beneficial to have greater state stability especially wake stability in the dark or active period. There is reduced sleep in the model that can be normalized by short-term sleep loss. It is fascinating that recovery sleep normalized sleep in the NLGF in the immediate lights on and light off period. This is a key finding.

      Comments on revised version:

      An important point has been missed but otherwise authors have been responsive:

      The sleep predominant period for APPnlgf mice has few abnormalities in the predominant sleep (lights on) period to warrant "insomnia" as the descriptor, and this is an important point. Traditionally in dementias, there has been an emphasis to study insomnia as sleep is important for brain health and the night disturbances disturb caregivers as well, but a point that is not clearly emphasized is that this work is consistent with a new consideration in Alzheimer's and dementia sleep research that there may be early on in disease a hyperactivity of wake promoting neurons (orexin or locus coeruleus neurons), that contributes to the phenotype (maybe as "sundowning', agitation in the wake periods, but is also important to understand. Thus, it should be at least acknowledged that this may represent abnormal wake rather than a primary sleep abnormality. There is a new preprint by the Weinshenker group that demonstrates increased locus coeruleus activity in a tau model.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The paper by Freas and Wystrach is an interesting computational study, exploring the detailed mechanisms of how simple neural circuits could explain complex behavioral patterns observed in navigating ants. The authors compare detailed, high speed video recordings of Australian desert ants (Melophorus bagoti) with predictions made by their new computational model and find convincing similarities between the model and the behavioral data, at a level of detail not previously studied. Particularly interesting are emerging properties of the model, yielding behavioral motifs it was not designed to reproduce, but which occur in natural ant behavior.

      A strength of the study is that the model is based on previous models, without making major novel assumptions. It combines existing models of the insect central complex with a model of the lateral accessory lobe and adds a stochastic inhibition of forward velocity to the interaction of central complex and lateral accessory lobes. In essence, the central complex provides corrective steering signals when the goal direction and the current heading of the insect are not aligned, while the lateral accessory lobes provide an intrinsic oscillator underlying the behavioral oscillations shown by walking ants at all times. These background oscillations are modulated by the steering signals from the central complex. Depending on which phase of the intrinsic oscillations coincides with the corrective signals, and how fast the ant is moving forward during this time, a complex set of behaviors emerges.

      Most prominently, scanning behaviors, which are regularly carried out by the ants, are recapitulated in great detail by the model. Additionally, other behaviors, such as full loops, emerge naturally from the model. While computational models are not to be seen as definite evidence for any biological reality, they can provide strong support for particular neural implementations. The current study is an excellent example in that it provides evidence for a serial arrangement of central complex circuits upstream of the lateral accessory lobe circuits, modulated by speed regulating input. While the latter is hypothetical, it yields a clear hypothesis that can be validated by connectomics studies and functional work in the future.

      The computational model is explained in detail and information about all model parameters is provided in an accessible way. The approach is thus transparent and reproducible, leaving it to the readers to assess the assumptions made in the model and how the studied complex behaviors emerge. This also provides the possibility to combine this new model with existing models to expand the scope and to more comprehensively capture the behavioral repertoire of ants, and insects in general.

      Importantly, the study shows that even complex behavioral motifs do not require dedicated neural modules, but can rather emerge from the interplay of already known circuits - highlighting the efficiency of insect brains and possibly providing the path towards embodied hardware solutions of such circuits in autonomous agents.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Medial superior olivary neurons are sensitive to interaural time differences in the microsecond range, and many cellular mechanisms have been advanced to explain this temporal sensitivity. This study provides experimental and computational evidence for a new mechanism in which a range of asymmetric dendritic delays permits individual MSO neurons to represent the full range of biologically relevant ITDs. Using elegant 2-photon guided simultaneous recordings from distal dendrite and soma, along with compartmental modeling on anatomically reconstructed neurons, the authors provide compelling evidence that this mechanism contributes to microsecond-level tuning. The experimental design, analyses, and narrative are all well-crafted. It's a beautiful study. As outlined below, I have two general questions about interpretations drawn from the experimental data and modeling.

      (1) Both excitatory and inhibitory synapses on MSO neurons display significant short-term depression (Couchman et al., 2010). Given the amount of attenuation at the soma, the role that the distal inputs would play after stimulus onset has not been tested. Were simulated EPSC pulse trains with endogenous short-term plasticity kinetics injected into distal dendrites? If not, were EPSP and IPSP trains with endogenous short-term plasticity kinetics studied in the model? The fundamental question is how much distal synapses contribute to somatic spike initiation as a function of synaptic pulse number.

      (2) The model provides a credible line of evidence that synaptic inputs from distal and tertiary compartments can generate reliable increases in the time of arrival at the soma. It would be relatively simple to sequentially prune dendritic compartments to address how the time difference at which the maximal firing rate scales with tertiary or distal compartments. Similarly, one could eliminate the primary dendrites to determine whether or not they play a functional role. I would expect these chores to be largely confirmatory, but since EPSP delay and amplitude are convolved, it would increase confidence in the interpretation.

      (3) Two technical questions. The age range is fairly broad, and it is not clear at which ages the experimental recordings were obtained, especially for the key experimental graphs that show correlations between delay (Figure 1d) or tau (Figure 2e) and distance. In addition, age could be added to Supplementary Figure 1, and the data could be ordered from youngest to oldest. Second, the Methods section indicates that brain slices were gradually cooled to 25 {degree sign}C, but should specify whether or not the recordings were obtained at this temperature.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigates the protein composition and functional role of the C2a projection of the central apparatus (CA) in vertebrate motile cilia. Using three knockout mouse models (Ccdc108, Mycbpap, and Cfap70), the authors demonstrate that these genes - homologs of Chlamydomonas FAP65, FAP147, and FAP70 - are required for normal motile cilia function in ependymal and tracheal multiciliated cells. Specifically, the authors show that:

      (1) Knockout mice for each gene exhibit primary ciliary dyskinesia phenotypes (hydrocephalus and sinusitis), accompanied by abnormal ciliary motion and reduced ciliary beat frequency.

      (2) CCDC108, MYCBPAP, and CFAP70 physically interact and localize to the axonemal central lumen, consistent with the C2a projection.

      (3) Loss of any one of these proteins destabilizes the others and disrupts CA integrity in a tissue-specific manner.

      (4) ARMC3 and MYCBP are C2a-associated proteins.

      Strengths:

      (1) Clarity: the results are presented in a coherent sequence that facilitates understanding of both the rationale and conclusions.

      (2) Genetic rigor: three independent knockout mouse lines that exhibit consistent motile cilia phenotypes provide in vivo support for the proposed role of these proteins.

      (3) Integration of structural and functional analyses: combination of ultrastructural (TEM) and immunofluorescence data with CBF measurements provides convincing correlation between structural defects and impaired ciliary function.

      (4) Mutual dependency model: reciprocal destabilization of CCDC108, MYCBPAP, and CFAP70 supports their interdependence in the C2a assembly.

      (5) Expansion of the vertebrate C2a proteome: the identification of ARMC3 and MYCBP as C2a-associated proteins provides a foundation for future mechanistic studies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Gaurav et al. investigate residue-level interactions within the MUT-16 FFR condensate using all-atom molecular dynamics simulations. The authors first argue, based on sequence analysis, that MUT-16 FFR is more representative than the widely studied FUS LCD. They then characterize the UCST phase behavior of MUT-16 FFR experimentally, followed by a detailed analysis of residue-level contact frequencies and lifetimes. In addition, the manuscript examines ion-residue interactions and water-mediated interactions. Overall, this work provides a comprehensive view of the dynamic interactions within the MUT-16 FFR condensate.

      Strengths:

      Large-scale all-atom molecular dynamics simulations have been performed to investigate dynamical interactions within condensates. The analysis is comprehensive and rigorous, and the claims are strongly justified by the data.

      Weaknesses:

      The large amount of detail in the results section sometimes makes it difficult to identify the central take-home messages. I encourage the authors to more clearly highlight the principal findings and the physical insights that may generalize to other condensate-forming systems. The authors may also consider streamlining parts of the Results section to improve focus and readability.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This population-based cohort study found no evidence that physical activity, whether self-reported or objectively measured, positively influenced brain structure (hippocampal volume or BrainAGE) or cognitive function (Trail Making Test scores). Notably, longitudinal analyses suggested the opposite temporal relationship: a higher BrainAGE at baseline predicted higher physical capacity at follow-up, more in line with reverse causation rather than a neuroprotective effect of physical activity.

      Strengths:

      The study's statistical approach is thorough and well documented, and the inclusion of two measurements of physical activity (self-report questionnaire and objective accelerometer data) is a strength. The longitudinal aspect also represents a strength.

      Weaknesses:

      Several aspects of the measurement timing warrant consideration. Physical activity was assessed over 7-day periods, creating a potential mismatch with (commonly less dynamic) brain outcomes examined (hippocampal volume, BrainAGE), which may reflect cumulative exposures over longer timescales. Additionally, the asynchronous measurement protocol (cognitive testing preceding accelerometry, and the MRI occurring weeks after baseline visits) may introduce time lags that attenuate associations. The observed null associations may be influenced by timing misalignment rather than reflecting the absence of consistent effects of physical activity on brain health and cognition.

      Other measurement characteristics also warrant consideration when interpreting the null findings. Physical activity was assessed using short-form self-report questionnaires and averaged accelerometer MET/day values, both of which have limited reliability. Additionally, the modest accelerometer subsample size and low/insufficient variation in activity levels observed in this cohort increase the likelihood of missing effects. These factors collectively raise the possibility that true physical activity-brain health associations may have been obscured.

      The study's conclusions regarding brain health, structure, and cognitive functioning are broad despite the scope of the selection of outcomes examined. The analyses focus on hippocampal volume, BrainAGE (a global aging metric), and Trail Making Test performance (processing speed and executive function), while omitting other important neuroimaging markers such as cortical thickness, functional connectivity, or white matter microstructure. The null findings presented here cannot exclude positive effects of physical activity on broader constructs of brain health or cognitive functioning.

      While the authors appropriately note the use of different physical activity instruments across time points (IPAQ at baseline, VSAQ at follow-up) in the limitations section, the discussion should more explicitly address the interpretive challenges this creates. The observed association between higher baseline brain age gap and lower follow-up physical activity may reflect: (1) a true temporal relationship, (2) an artifact of switching from behavior-focused (IPAQ) to capacity-focused (VSAQ) measurement, or (3) some combination of both. This ambiguity substantially limits causal inference.

      Comments on the revised version:

      I have briefly reviewed the responses to the reviewer comments, as well as the tracked changes in the expanded limitations section of the revised manuscript, and these adequately address my previous concerns.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates how cheating affects microbial diversity, using a chemostat model of a microbial community in which species compete for a shared iron pool through siderophore-mediated uptake. After analyzing minimal communities, the study simulates large randomly generated communities in which species either produce no siderophore or produce a single siderophore type. Producers can differ in siderophore type and production level, while all species can differ in the siderophore-specific receptor types they express. Siderophore production trades off with resource allocation to growth. Total receptor expression is normalized, so increasing expression of one receptor type reduces expression of other receptor types. A key parameter in these simulations is the average number of "cheating receptor types," i.e., receptor types that allow a species to use siderophores it does not produce itself. The authors use this parameter as one axis for characterizing cheating behavior and term it "cheating breadth." The results reveal a statistical pattern the authors report as a "paradox": increasing cheating breadth increases the frequency of whole-community extinction, but also increases the mean number of surviving species per non-extinct community. To explain this pattern, the study reduces a community's producer-receiver network into components by retaining only the link from each producer to its maximal beneficiary, i.e., the species receiving the largest growth benefit from that producer. The study finds that the core topology of such a component predicts the community's ecological fate, namely, extinction, single-species survival, or multi-species coexistence, when biomass is concentrated in that component. The study argues that increasing cheating breadth reduces the probability that a community contains components predicting single-species survival, while increasing the probabilities that it contains components predicting extinction or multi-species coexistence. This argument is used to explain why greater cheating breadth increases both community extinction risk and diversity. Based on these results, the study concludes that microbial diversity not only tolerates but requires moderate cheating.

      Strengths:

      The major strengths of this study are that it presents an interesting mathematical model of microbial interactions mediated by diverse siderophores and that it reduces simulation results to simple predictive patterns by focusing on one primary beneficiary per producer, as summarized above.

      Weaknesses:

      The study also has two major weaknesses. First, the observed diversity is not shown to be evolutionarily stable, which limits the biological relevance of the findings. The cycle structure that supports this diversity may be vulnerable to invasion by mutants that disrupt this structure and can thereby drive many species, or even the whole community, extinct. This concern is suggested by previous studies on the hypercycle, which is analogous to the cycle structure found in this study (Eigen and Schuster, The Hypercycle, Springer-Verlag, pages 32-57, 1979 https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-642-67247-7). For example, a community with a cyclic network may be invaded by mutants that increase growth allocation at the cost of siderophore production (Maynard Smith, Nature 280:445-446, 1979 https://doi.org/10.1038/280445a0). It may also be destabilized by mutants that increase the expression of the "self-receptor," the receptor for the siderophore they produce themselves. Another possibility is a "short-circuit mutant" that expresses receptors in a way that bypasses intermediate species in a cycle (Bresch et al., Journal of Theoretical Biology 85:399-405, 1980 https://doi.org/10.1016/0022-5193(80)90314-8). Cyclic networks may remain evolutionarily unstable even when spatial self-organization is considered (Hogeweg and Takeuchi, Origins of Life and Evolution of the Biosphere 33:375-403, 2003 https://doi.org/10.1023/A:1025754907141). Without demonstrating robustness to these plausible evolutionary hazards, the study's coexistence results may have limited biological relevance.

      The second weakness is that the study treats cheating breadth as if it were a pure measure of increased cheating, framing the observed pattern as a paradox that increasing cheating breadth increases diversity within surviving communities while also increasing community extinction risk. However, increasing cheating breadth decreases the mean expression level of all expressed receptors, a confounding effect that arises from the normalization of total receptor expression. Consequently, increasing cheating breadth also reduces the mean benefit a producer gains from its own siderophore production. In other words, increasing cheating breadth spreads each producer's dependence across diverse siderophores at the cost of a reduced return on the self-produced siderophore. Once these coupled effects are recognized, the reported pattern is less paradoxical: increasing cheating breadth might be expected to increase diversity within surviving communities by distributing dependence, while also increasing extinction risk by reducing self-reliance. Therefore, the apparent paradox may arise from the way cheating behavior is parameterized rather than from a direct effect of increased cheating alone.

      Additional context:

      The present study can be considered alongside previous studies proposing that cheating can, in some contexts, promote microbial diversity by generating ecological dependencies. The Black Queen hypothesis proposes that such dependencies can be created by adaptive gene loss and reliance on functions performed by other community members (Morris et al., mBio 3:e00036-12, 2012, https://doi.org/10.1128/mbio.00036-12). A related study by Fullmer et al. discusses how mutual cheating can contribute to microbial diversity (Frontiers in Microbiology 6:728, 2015, https://doi.org/10.3389/fmicb.2015.00728).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors have shown some interesting data on DNA repair synthesis by PolB, acting on a BER substrate in the presence of a core nucleosome, and the effects of some accessory chromatin proteins. FEN1 and PARP proteins were also assessed for their effects on repair synthesis by PolB. However, the story for the PARP proteins seems a bit underdeveloped, or perhaps it just needs additional clarity in the writing. The concept that strand displacement synthesis by PolB in linker DNA and into the NCP is limited by these interactions is useful, although we need to bear in mind that the study does not address the role of the final repair enzyme, DNA ligase, which might itself limit the products. Likewise, the possible effects of competing DNA polymerases remain unexplored, notably the replication enzymes delta and epsilon. There are circumstances where these appear to be the main DNA repair polymerases for BER substrates. Addressing these and other issues, as listed below, would greatly improve a paper that is already fairly strong.

      Specific Points:

      (1) Substrates:

      The gap substrate was prepared by treating a U-containing substrate with UDG + APE1. Consequently, it is not exactly a gap, but a repair intermediate with a 5-abasic site on one side of the break. It should be described more clearly in the text.

      The nicked substrate was prepared by incubating the "gap" substrate with PolB and dTTP, the nucleotide to replace the excised U. It is expected that this substrate has the 5'-abasic site removed by the PolB lyase, and only one dTMP residue inserted. Has either of these expectations been verified? For example, PolB can insert more than one nucleotide in a prolonged incubation, and the enzyme has no intrinsic 3'-exonuclease to trim the extension.

      Finally, it appears that these procedures were performed with the NCP already in place; therefore, the presence of the nucleosome is expected to influence the processing done to prepare the gap and nick substrates. What do we know about that?

      (2) Figure 1c:

      The rate difference for gap vs. NCP is modest, perhaps 2-fold in the data shown. Some statistical analysis is needed to solidify this observation.

      (3) As noted on page 4, the histone tails might be important for some of the observed effects. While individual histones had no effect, the critical test would be in the context of the NCP. There are many modified or mutant histones now available that would enable this. While such experiments would be more for future work, the possibility should be mentioned in this paper.

      (4) What are the molar ratios of the various enzymes to the substrates? Can we say whether that reflects the levels that might be found in vivo? For the in vitro studies, the stoichiometry would also influence competing binding reactions. Indeed, Figure 2 indicates that the NCP substrate has multiple, competing binding sites for PolB. Why are the multiple NCP-PolB species not better resolved in EMSA (Supplementary Figure 2a)? Perhaps the higher-order ones are more unstable in the gel? That would be consistent with Table 1.

      (5) Wouldn't the incremental 3-nucleotide steps seen with PolB + FEN1 be a relatively inefficient process? Of course, one expects that the presence of a DNA ligase would effectively limit this process to just one synthesis/excision cycle. Hasn't that been tested with these substrates?

      (6) In many of the gel images, it can be hard to tell S from the +1 products, especially further from the side of the gel. Is there an independent way to verify that just a single nucleotide was replaced?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors Huang et al. studied how a small disordered VP4 protein present in the viral capsid of naked viruses, such as Coxsackievirus B3, enables the transfer of the viral genome into the host cell by breaching the host cell membrane. The authors show that post-translational myristoylation of VP4 plays a critical role in this process. Using computer simulations of VP4 and its interactions with the membrane, the authors show that myristoylated VP4 anchors to the membrane faster, aggregates faster to form dense phases via LLPS, and remodels the membrane, thereby lowering the energy barrier for the protein to insert into the membrane. The authors further showed, through simulations, that the myristoylated VP4 forms helices within the membrane with higher stability, which then form structured pores, disrupting the membrane and enabling the transfer of the viral genome into the host cell.

      Strengths:

      The strength of the manuscript is that different sets of unbiased and enhanced-sampling simulations using all-atom and coarse-grained models of the protein and membrane are performed to bridge multiple time and length scales involved in the transfer of the viral genome into the host cell. There is experimental support for most of the conclusions arrived at from the simulations.

      Weaknesses:

      The drawback is that experimental evidence was lacking to support the pore-formation proposal from the simulations.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Chen and colleagues describe a novel means of labeling two RNA binding proteins, G3BP1 and TDP-43, using genetic code expansion. Overexpressed constructs that incorporate the intrinsically-fluorescent non-canonical amino acid Anap redistribute to cytoplasmic granules upon application of external stressors such as sodium arsenite. Similar labeling and redistribution of overexpressed G3BP1 and TDP-43 was observed in cultures of mouse primary neurons.

      Genetic code expansion and non-canonical amino acid labeling have many advantages over traditional fusion proteins for tracking protein redistribution in living cells. The authors show that they are able to label exogenous G3BP1 and TDP-43 with the non-canonical amino acid Anap, and follow labeled proteins in living cells with and without stress.

      I suspect that this method could be incredibly valuable to many investigators studying the dynamics and interactions of proteins that are difficult to label or detect by conventional methods.

      Comment on revised version:

      The revised manuscript is significantly improved, with added controls and experiments to confirm expression and Anap labeling of G3BP1 and TDP-43.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript extends previous work from Calvin et al. and examines hippocampal representations during approach-avoidance conflict in a robotic predator foraging task. The paradigm itself is very interesting and addresses an important but relatively understudied question in the navigation and foraging literature: how the brain balances risk versus reward during goal-directed behavior. While hippocampal representations of positively valenced goals and future intentions have been extensively studied, much less is known about how these representations evolve during risk-reward tradeoffs involving threat.

      The authors use a relatively simple and interpretable decoding approach together with thoughtful behavioral comparisons to ask whether future behavioral outcomes can be read out from hippocampal activity before behavior diverges. The most compelling comparison is between mid-track aborts (MTAs) and mid-track continues (MTCs), where the animals initially exhibit very similar pause behavior but ultimately either abort or continue the trajectory. The authors show that decoded location during these pauses differs prior to the overt manifestation of the behavioral decision, suggesting that hippocampal representations may reflect evolving internal evaluation processes during approach-avoidance conflict.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of the work is the behavioral paradigm itself. This type of risk-reward conflict task is relatively uncommon in the hippocampal navigation literature and provides a rich framework for examining defensive decision-making during naturalistic foraging behavior.

      The decoding analyses are also relatively simple and easy to interpret. Rather than relying on highly complex modeling approaches, the authors use straightforward comparisons of decoded spatial representations across behavioral conditions, making the results accessible and conceptually clear.

      Another strength is the use of behavioral controls to isolate comparisons between related behaviors. In particular, the comparison between MTAs and MTCs is compelling because the animals exhibit similar pause states before the behavioral outcomes diverge. This provides a useful framework for asking whether hippocampal activity reflects future behavioral outcome before the decision is overtly expressed.

      Overall, the study asks an interesting question using a novel paradigm and provides evidence that hippocampal representations during approach-avoidance conflict may reflect future behavioral trajectory.

      Weaknesses:

      The main weakness is that many of the reported effects are relatively subtle and are not sufficiently controlled for differences in speed, trajectory structure, and other behavioral variables across conditions. While the subtraction plots (green versus purple decoding differences) appear visually striking, the actual effect sizes are fairly small, making it difficult to assess how robust or behaviorally meaningful these differences are.

      Relatedly, many of the most interesting questions in this task concern how behavior unfolds dynamically within a trial, yet much of the analysis averages across events and trajectories. As a result, potentially important aspects of the behavior may be obscured.

      In particular, the manuscript would benefit from richer characterization of the animals' actual movement trajectories and spatial strategies. Because the analyses rely heavily on linearized position, it is difficult to determine whether animals behave differently in two-dimensional space across conditions. For example, during continued approaches, do animals preferentially hug the wall opposite the robot? Do different behavioral conditions show distinct lateral occupancy or trajectory structure? These types of analyses would make the behavioral interpretation substantially more compelling.

      More generally, while the results are suggestive and interesting, the relatively small decoding differences and substantial behavioral confounds make it difficult to conclude that the observed effects reflect distinct internal evaluative or threat-related states.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents a broad survey of glutamate receptor composition at the neuromuscular junction in Drosophila across developmental stages and muscle types. The topic is clearly important, and the central observation-that adult muscles differ substantially from the canonical larval NMJ-is interesting and potentially impactful. The dataset is extensive and will likely be of value to the community. However, in my view, there are significant limitations in how the data are generated and interpreted, which at present reduce the strength of the conclusions.

      Strengths:

      The study addresses a relevant and timely question and provides a large and systematic dataset. The finding that adult muscles diverge from larval NMJ organization is compelling and challenges a widely held assumption in the field. The breadth of approaches, including genetic reporters, immunohistochemistry, endogenous tagging, and transcriptomic data, is, in principle, a strong aspect of the work and allows for a broad overview of receptor expression across tissues and developmental stages. Even in its current form, the manuscript provides useful descriptive information that will be of interest to the community.

      Weaknesses:

      A major concern is the reliance on a heterogeneous combination of detection methods (GAL4 reporters, antibody staining, endogenous tagging, and RNA), which are treated largely as equivalent lines of evidence. These approaches differ substantially in what they measure and in their sensitivity and specificity. While convergence across methods can in principle be convincing, here this convergence is often inferred from the shared absence of signal. This is problematic because all methods used are susceptible to false negatives for different reasons. As a result, the repeated conclusion that specific GluR subunits are "absent" from adult muscles, including those previously considered essential, is not fully justified by the data presented.

      This issue is not only theoretical. The manuscript itself seemingly contains examples where methods disagree, demonstrating that detection is incomplete and method-dependent. These discrepancies could be better integrated into the interpretation. Instead, negative results across methods are often taken as strong evidence for absence, which overstates the certainty of the findings.

      In addition, antibody validation appears to rely largely on prior work in larval tissue. Given the structural and biochemical differences in adult muscles, it is not clear that staining performance is equivalent, particularly in cases where the signal is weak or undetected. This further complicates the interpretation of negative results.

      More generally, the manuscript moves in several places from descriptive observations to functional or mechanistic implications that are not directly supported. The suggestion that adult muscles operate with fundamentally different receptor assemblies is intriguing, but remains speculative without functional validation. At a minimum, the distinction between observation and interpretation should be made more explicit.

      I thus think that the current conclusions need to be more carefully constrained. Ideally, the study would be strengthened by at least one functional experiment, such as electrophysiological recordings from adult NMJs or perturbation of candidate receptors like GluClα or Clumsy. This would help to anchor the expression data in synaptic function.

      In summary, this is an interesting and potentially important study, but the current manuscript somewhat overinterprets heterogeneous and partly indirect evidence. It will already be useful in its present form, but could be more convincing if the authors more rigorously account for methodological limitations and moderate their claims accordingly.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors ask whether spatial cognition is under sexual selection in mountain chickadees. To do so, the authors examined a large dataset that includes a) spatial cognition data for both males and females (obtained via use of a clever RFID-based feeder system) and b) social and extra-pair paternity nesting data. As predicted, males with higher spatial cognition sired more extra-pair offspring, and extra-pair sires had, on average, higher spatial cognition scores than the males they cuckolded. Interestingly, females with lower spatial cognition scores were more likely to seek extra-pair copulations, potentially to compensate for their own low spatial cognition. Surprisingly, there was no difference in spatial cognition scores between males that sired their own offspring and those that lost paternity at the nest. Also surprising was the fact that there were no differences in patterns of extra-pair paternity and spatial cognition between high- and low-elevation sites. The latter is particularly surprising in that spatial cognition should be under stronger selection at the high elevation site. Overall, this is a fascinating study that demonstrates that spatial cognition - a trait under natural selection as it directly impacts winter foraging and survival behaviour -is also under sexual selection.

      Strengths:

      The authors have a robust dataset (n = 732 offspring sampled over 3 years), high-quality spatial cognition data collected with a procedure that has been well-honed over the years, and couple the data with solid statistical procedures that address many potential covariates and potentially confounding factors. In addition, the authors are careful in the discussion to elaborate on the many potential alternative explanations from the results and questions that are likely to arise in the minds of readers (e.g., how are females assessing male spatial ability?)

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, no major weaknesses were identified in this study. As always, there are editorial issues that I would encourage the authors to consider, including presentation of data/results and clarification on some statistical issues. Overall, however, this is an excellent study that will make an important contribution to our understanding of the evolution of cognition and targets of sexual selection.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study uses a combination of field sampling and manipulative experiments to test for facilitative impacts of pikas on yaks via suppression of a poisonous forb. The authors found that, when Stellera forbs were present, yak weight increases over the growing season were greater in the presence of pikas compared to in their absence. This occurred because, although pikas do not consume Stellera, they clip it and use it in nest/burrow construction, thereby decreasing its relative abundance in the plant community. Thus, overall, the study contributes to our understanding of how herbivores of different size classes indirectly affect each other via the use of shared resources.

      Strengths:

      It is well known that large herbivores on grasslands impact smaller animals, but the reciprocal interaction is rarely tested. Thus, this study asks a valuable question, and the experiment is well-designed to test it. The authors also do a good job of demonstrating the potential conservation impacts of their research.

      Weaknesses:

      What the authors tested is really cool, but their claims go far beyond what they can say based on their experimental design. For example, the authors claim to show that pika impacts on yaks display density-dependent transitions from competition to facilitation. However, their experiment only looked at the presence (at moderate densities) and absence of pikas, and they only tested for facilitation, not competition.

      The paper would also benefit from changes to the framing in the introduction and discussion. For example, the authors pitch the work as a test of the stress-gradient hypothesis. However, there is no abiotic stress gradient in the study, which is an essential component of the SGH. They also pitch the work in terms of density dependence, but there is no significant variation in population densities beyond the presence-absence binary. The paper would be stronger if they focused their framing around the literature on facilitative interactions across mammals of different size classes, especially indirect facilitation via use of shared resources, which is what this paper is really about.

      Finally, the paper has significant weaknesses in the experimental and statistical methodology. Most importantly, there are inconsistencies in what is visualized in the figures compared to the model results. For example, the results section in several places notes a lack of significant interaction terms in the model but shows interactions in the p-values on the figures. The authors also plot smoothed lines rather than their model results and then draw interpretations from those lines that cannot be tested in the models that they used. There are also missing details that are important for model interpretation, including the distributions used and the sample sizes. Another major concern with experimental design is in the forage nutrient analyses. The authors picked plants along a grazing trail, then measured nutrient content without standardizing based on plant species, so any differences across treatments could be because of what they happened to grab rather than overall forage quality.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors address an important challenge in developmental biology: the quantitative description of tissue deformation during organogenesis. They have developed a new pipeline to quantify early heart tube morphogenesis in the mouse, with cellular resolution. They adopt an elegant approach by integrating multiple 3D time-lapse datasets into a dynamic atlas of cardiac morphogenesis in order to compute spatio-temporal deformation patterns. The main findings highlight a strong compartmentalization of cell behaviors, with tissue growth and anisotropy exhibiting complementary and spatially segregated patterns. Using these data, the authors developed an in-silico fate mapping tool to interrogate cell displacement within the myocardium. This virtual model provides new mechanistic insights into how the bilateral cardiac primordia converge and transform into a three-dimensional heart tube. The authors identify "belt-like" constraints at the arterial and venous poles that prevent tissue expansion and thus shape the ventricular barrel morphology.

      The computational framework is highly innovative and impressive, providing an unprecedented 3D model of tissue deformation during heart morphogenesis. It also opens avenues for testing hypotheses regarding tissue growth and the forces that cause cell motion.

      Overall, this carefully performed study provides a new model for exploring tissue deformation during organogenesis and will be of broad interest to computational and developmental biologists.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this paper, Rayan et al. report that RNA influences cytotoxic activity of the staphylococcal secreted peptide cytolysin PSMalpha3 versus human cells and E. coli by impacting its aggregation. The authors used sophisticated methods of structural analysis and describe the associated liquid-liquid phase separation. They also compare to the influence of RNA on aggregation and activity of LL-37, which shows differences to that on PSMalpha3.

      Major comments on the previous version:

      (1) The premise, as stated in the introduction and elsewhere, that PSMalpha3 amyloids are biologically functional, is highly debatable and has never been conclusively substantiated. The property that matters most for the present study, cytotoxicity, is generally attributed to PSM monomers, not amyloids. The likely erroneous notion that PSM amyloids are the predominant cytotoxic form is derived from an earlier study by the authors that has described a specific amyloid structure of aggregated PSMalpha3. Other authors have later produced evidence that, quite unsurprisingly, indicated that aggregation into amyloids decreases, rather than increases, PSM cytotoxicity. Unfortunately, yet other groups have in the meantime published in-vitro studies on "functional amyloids" by PSMs without critically challenging the concept of PSM amyloid "functionality". Of note, the authors' own data in the present study that show strongly decreased cytotoxicity of PSMalpha3 after prolonged incubation are in agreement with monomer-associated cytotoxicity as they can be easily explained by the removal of biologically active monomers from the solution.

      In their revision and in the rebuttal, the authors have further described their concept regarding what they call "functionality" of PSMalpha3 amyloids. They now admit that monomers are the active cytolytic form, like other researchers have stressed, whereas amyloids are not. This represents a considerable difference to earlier papers in which they ascribed functionality, i.e. cytolytic capacity, to PSMalpha3 amyloids, a claim that has raised considerable controversy. Now, they use the term "functional " to describe that PSMalpha3 amyloids, while not cytolytic, can be reversed to a cytolytic monomeric state, calling them a "dynamic reservoir". There is no evidence that such a reservoir is necessary for the cytolytic activity of the monomers to be established; also, there is no evidence that in a biological system, such an amyloid reservoir exists. To continue calling PSMalpha3 amyloids "functional" based on this - considerably changed - concept of the authors appears inappropriate, given the finally admitted absence of cytolytic activity of the PSM amyloids in addition to the continuing complete lack of evidence of any biological relevance of PSM amyloid formation.

      (2) That RNA may interfere with PSM aggregation and influence activity is not very surprising, given that PSM attachment to nucleic acids - while not studied in as much detail as here - has been described. Importantly, it does not become clear whether this effect has biologically significant consequences beyond influencing, again not surprisingly, cytotoxicity in vitro. The authors do show in nice microscopic analyses that labeled PSMalpha3 attaches to nuclei when incubated with HeLa cells. However, given that the cells are killed rapidly by membrane perturbation by the applied PSM concentrations, it remains unclear and untested whether the attachment to nucleic acids in dying cells makes any contribution to PSM-induced cell death or has any other biological significance.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The functional parcellation of cortical areas is a critical question in neuroscience. This is particularly true in frontal areas in mice. While sensory areas are relatively well characterized by their tuning to sensory stimuli, the situation is much less clear for motor areas. This has become even more ambiguous since recent studies using large-scale neuronal recordings consistently report mixed sensory and motor-related activity throughout the brain and motor mapping studies have shown that movements evoked by cortical stimulation are by no means limited to motor areas alone. Here, the authors use a correlation approach combining large-scale functional imaging at cellular-resolution with movement-tracking in mice executing a reaching task. Across multiple recording sessions in the same animals, the authors have imaged a large portion of the sensorimotor cortex at cellular resolution in mice performing a reaching task, recording the activity of nearly 40,000 neurons. By aligning the calcium signal of each neuron to three task events-the Go cue triggering the reach, the onset of paw lift, and the contact between the paw and the target-for different target positions, the authors identified different response patterns distributed differently across cortical areas. They defined a set of features that describe the neurons' response pattern, representing the temporal dynamics and tuning properties for the different target positions. These features were used to construct cortical maps, and the authors show that, interestingly, gradient maps obtained from the first derivative of the feature maps reveal sharp discontinuities at the boundaries between anatomically defined cortical areas. Using dimensionality reduction of the neuronal response features, the authors found that, despite clear differences in their average response properties, individual neurons from the same cortical areas do not form distinct clusters in the reduced-dimensional space. In fact, most areas contain heterogeneous neuronal populations, and most neuronal populations are present in multiple areas, albeit in different proportions. Interestingly, the authors identified four neuronal subpopulations based on the distance between the components of the Gaussian mixture model used to model the distribution of neurons within each area. One of these subpopulations is almost exclusively represented in the anterior M2 cortex, while another is broadly distributed across the different areas.

      Strengths:

      This article is based on an impressive dataset of nearly 40,000 neurons covering a large portion of the sensorimotor cortex and on innovative analytical approaches. This study is likely the first to clearly demonstrate boundaries between cortical areas defined based on the responses of individual neurons. This innovative approach to functional mapping of cortical areas potentially opens up new perspectives for higher-resolution mapping of frontal cortical areas, using a broader repertoire of sensory and motor evoked responses.

      Weaknesses:

      One limitation of this study - inherent in most cell imaging studies - is that it only takes into account the activity of neurons in superficial cortical layers. One might think that taking into account neuronal activity across the different layers would allow for an even finer functional cortical segmentation.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have answered all my questions and this new version has largely improved in clarity.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Across two experiments, this work presents a novel spatial predictive inference paradigm that facilitates the investigation of meta-learning across multiple environments with distinct statistics, as well as more local learning from sequences of observations within an environment. The authors present behavioral data indicating that people can indeed learn to distinguish between noise levels and calibrate their learning rates accordingly across environments, even on initial trials when revisiting an environment. They complement their behavioral results with computational modeling, further bolstering claims of both local and global adaptation. Additional fMRI results support the role of OFC in this meta-learning process, with central OFC activity reflecting similarity between environments. This similarity emerges over time with task experience. Holistically, this paradigm and these data add to our understanding of how humans dynamically adapt their behavior on different timescales.

      Strengths:

      The novel paradigm represents a clever and creative expansion of spatial predictive inference tasks. The cover story was well chosen to facilitate an intuitive understanding of both the differences between environments, and the estimation of the mean within environments.

      Additionally, the authors present complementary results from two experiments, which strengthens the behavioral findings. This is especially effective as the initial experiment's results were a bit noisy, and the modifications within the second experiment increased both power and the specificity/accuracy of participant predictions. Taken together, the behavioral results provide convincing evidence that participants did distinguish environments based on their underlying statistics and adapted their initial behavior accordingly.

      Beyond this, the combination of behavioral results, computational modeling, and neuroimaging enhances the impact of the work. It paints a fuller picture of whether and how humans meta-learn the global statistics of environments, and this is an important direction for the field of adaptive learning.

      Weaknesses:

      Throughout much of the paper, the authors refer to the distinctions between environments primarily as differences in "initial learning rates" or "environment-specific learning rates." The optimal initial learning rate did indeed differ across environments -- the result of differences in underlying task statistics. These differences in task statistics result in distinct optimal initial learning rates and also vary with aspects of spatial position (e.g. vertical position in the example figure). The authors convincingly show that OFC activity increasingly reflects these variables throughout task experience. Given that these variables vary together, future work will be needed to distinguish whether particular variables drive these dynamics, or whether together they combine to evoke the representational differences.

      The current work is also quite suggestive of meaningful individual differences in both local and global adaptive learning, in line with other prior work on predictive inference. This is perhaps underexplored in this data set, but certainly leaves the topic ripe for follow up going forward.

      Finally, more information on all clusters that survived multiple comparisons correction would be useful, even in the absence of a priori hypotheses. For instance, there is commentary in the discussion section on the ACC, but this is not mentioned in the results, and it is unclear whether there were other undescribed clusters that survived correction.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Liu et al. record intracranial EEG from the hippocampus and lateral temporal lobe in thirteen neurosurgical patients while they perform a delayed match-to-sample visual short-term memory task. The central question is whether hippocampal sharp-wave ripples (brief high-frequency oscillations well established in the long-term memory consolidation literature) also contribute to the active maintenance of visual representations over a short delay. The authors report three main findings: hippocampal ripple rates progressively ramp up across the 7-second maintenance period, hippocampal ripples temporally co-occur with ripples in the lateral temporal lobe, and these coupled events coincide with above-chance category-level decoding of the memorized stimulus in the lateral temporal lobe. The findings are interpreted within the dynamic coding framework of working memory, which predicts discrete reactivation bursts rather than sustained firing during maintenance. The question is timely, and the use of intracranial recordings affords a level of temporal and spatial resolution unavailable to non-invasive methods.

      Strengths:

      The study addresses a genuinely important and underexplored question: whether a neural mechanism best characterized in the context of offline memory consolidation is also engaged during active online maintenance. The use of intracranial recordings in humans is well suited to this question, providing the millisecond temporal resolution and regional specificity needed to detect transient high-frequency events. The dissociation from long-term memory, tested by splitting remembered trials according to whether the item was later recalled in a cued-recall test, directly addresses what would otherwise be a significant confound, and the finding that ripple dynamics during maintenance are unrelated to subsequent long-term memory performance adds specificity to the interpretation. The coupled ripple analysis is methodologically grounded, and the finding that coupled but not isolated ripples coincide with elevated memory decoding is mechanistically informative. The multivariate decoding approach applied to lateral temporal lobe spectral power provides a meaningful index of memory reactivation that goes beyond simple univariate rate measures. The control analysis and the alternative ripple detection method provide useful robustness checks. The public availability of preprocessed data and analysis code on OSF is commendable.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Theoretical motivation for examining ripples in visual short-term memory.

      A fundamental question that the paper does not adequately address is why hippocampal ripples, a mechanism strongly associated with offline memory consolidation during sleep, where they coordinate the transfer of hippocampal representations to cortex through temporally compressed replay, should be recruited for the online maintenance of visual information over a seconds-long delay. The Introduction acknowledges this gap but does not close it. The dynamic coding framework is used to motivate the ramping-up prediction, but this framework is agnostic about the specific neural mechanism responsible for reactivation bursts. In particular, the literature cited by the authors predicts high-frequency population activity or gamma bursts, but not specifically hippocampal ripples. The reasoning that "ripples share key properties with postulated reactivation bursts" risks being circular: it amounts to saying that ripples could be the relevant mechanism because the relevant mechanism has properties that ripples also have. A stronger theoretical motivation would require either evidence that the replay or reactivation computations that ripples support during offline states are also engaged during active short-term maintenance, or a mechanistic account of how the circuit processes underlying ripple generation are recruited differently across these two contexts.

      This concern is compounded by what the authors present as one of their main controls. The finding that ripple dynamics during maintenance are not associated with subsequent long-term memory performance is treated as a reassurance that the observed effects are specific to short-term memory. But if ripples are canonically a long-term memory consolidation mechanism, the observation that they are engaged by a short-term memory task while appearing disengaged from concurrent long-term memory encoding is itself a finding that demands explanation. Resolving this tension is important for the paper's contribution to be correctly interpreted by the field.

      (2) Ripple detection and specificity.

      Even granting that ripples could in principle contribute to short-term memory maintenance, the study does not establish that the detected events are physiological sharp-wave ripples rather than broadband high-frequency activity. The detection band (70-180 Hz) substantially overlaps with the high-gamma range, which is a well-established proxy for local neural population activity and coding, and is broader than the 80-120 Hz band used by several of the cited papers, including Vaz et al. (2019), Ngo et al. (2020), Chen et al. (2021), Staresina et al. (2023), and Kunz et al. (2024). Without demonstrating that detected events have the hallmark features of physiological sharp-wave ripples, a clear narrowband spectral peak, and characteristic waveform morphology, it is difficult to conclude that the observed effects reflect a ripple-specific mechanism rather than a more general high-frequency population activity phenomenon. The reported mean rate of 0.29 Hz is somewhat higher than rates reported in some recent work, such as Chen et al. (2021, ref 74) and Kunz et al. (2024, ref 15). It is worth noting that van Schalkwijk and Helfrich (2026, Nature Communications) demonstrated that a large proportion of awake ripple detections in the human medial temporal lobe reflect false positives arising from aperiodic 1/f noise, with task-related modulations of this noise floor producing spurious detections. The authors present an 80-120 Hz control analysis as a robustness check, but this inverts the appropriate logic: if 80-120 Hz is the more validated band, as the cited literature suggests, it should serve as the primary analysis rather than a supplementary one.

      (3) Internal inconsistency with the dynamic coding framework.

      The authors invoke the dynamic coding framework, which predicts that reactivation bursts should ramp up toward the end of the retention interval in the region where memory representations are actively maintained. The hippocampal ramping-up result is presented as confirming this prediction. However, the lateral temporal lobe, the region where above-chance category decoding is found and memory reactivation is attributed, shows no corresponding ramp-up. The authors acknowledge this asymmetry but do not offer a mechanistically satisfying explanation, and the suggestion that the effect might exist in unsampled subregions cannot be evaluated with the current data. This leaves the framework's core prediction unconfirmed in the region that is claimed to maintain the representations.

      (4) Coupled ripples, directionality of hippocampal-lateral temporal coupling, and the ramping-up paradox.

      The conclusion that coupled hippocampal-lateral temporal ripples coordinate memory reactivation creates a logical tension that the paper does not resolve. If hippocampal ripples drive lateral temporal reactivation only when co-occurring with lateral temporal ripples, and hippocampal ripples ramp up in a memory-predictive fashion, then the absence of lateral temporal ripple ramping up implies that the hippocampal ramp-up is not primarily expressed through the coupled ripple mechanism, undermining the coherence of the two main findings. The coupled ripple analysis further quantifies only temporal co-occurrence and provides no evidence about the direction of influence. Without demonstrating that hippocampal ripples systematically precede lateral temporal ripples (i.e., the expected signature of hippocampus-to-cortex information flow), the central claim that hippocampal ripples drive lateral temporal reactivation remains an interpretive assumption. Directly testing whether lateral temporal ripples specifically coupled to hippocampal ripples show a ramping temporal profile during maintenance (even if overall lateral temporal ripple rates do not) is necessary to establish whether the lateral temporal lobe engages in hippocampally-gated reactivation bursts in the manner the framework predicts. Additionally, reporting the distribution of peak lags between hippocampal and lateral temporal ripple peaks, and testing whether hippocampal ripples systematically precede lateral temporal ripples, is similarly necessary to support the directional interpretation.

      (5) Trial-level analysis clarity.

      The paper reports that ripples occurred in 54%, 79%, and 27% of trials during encoding, maintenance, and retrieval, respectively, but does not state whether subsequent analyses were conducted on trials thresholded by ripple occurrence. Given that occurrence rates vary substantially across stages and conditions, this inclusion criterion has implications for interpreting rate differences and should be stated explicitly.

      (6) Statistical model specification.

      The methods describe the ramping-up analysis using both a "logistic" link function and a "Poisson link function" in different places, with the dependent variable described inconsistently as ripple occurrence and ripple count. These are not equivalent, and the distinction matters for interpreting the reported coefficients. Additionally, the regional dissociation in Figure 3 appears to be assessed by fitting separate models to each region and comparing results informally. This does not constitute a direct test of whether slopes differ between regions and risks the well-known error of inferring a difference based on one p-value being significant while another is not. A direct region × time interaction test would more cleanly support the claimed dissociation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Carricarte and colleagues set out to identify and functionally characterize feedforward (FF) and feedback (FB) information flow during object perception in humans, a question that has been difficult to address non-invasively because FF and FB signals overlap rapidly in time and across regions. The authors capitalize on the canonical cortical microcircuit-FF terminations primarily in middle layers, FB terminations primarily in superficial and deep layers, to spatially separate these signals using sub-millimeter (0.9 mm isotropic) GE-BOLD fMRI at 7T in early visual cortex (EVC) and lateral occipital complex (LOC). They combine these layer-resolved fMRI patterns with millisecond-resolution EEG (from a previously published dataset using the same 24 images) via representational similarity analysis-based EEG-fMRI fusion, and use a Vision Transformer (DeiT) trained on ImageNet to characterize the feature complexity of the resulting spatiotemporal signatures.

      The authors first review their approach at the macroscale, replicating the expected EVC-then-LOC temporal hierarchy and the EVC-low/LOC-high feature complexity gradient. They then apply the same framework at the mesoscale of cortical layers, reporting: (a) early middle-layer signals in both EVC (~100 ms) and LOC (~160 ms) consistent with FF processing, (b) a later superficial-layer signal in LOC (~400 ms) interpreted as FB; (c) a layer-uniform feature-complexity profile in EVC (peaking at low-mid DNN layers across all depths); and (d) a feature-complexity dissociation in LOC, where middle-layer signals correspond to mid-to-high DNN layers and superficial-layer signals to high DNN layers. They argue that this complexity shift, combined with the timing difference, indicates interareal FB into LOC.

      Strengths:

      (1) The combination of layer-fMRI at 7T, EEG, and DNN-based representational analysis is well motivated through RSA. Each modality compensates for a known limitation of the others (fMRI: poor temporal resolution; EEG: poor spatial resolution; DNN: surrogate for representational format), and the RSA framework provides a principled common currency. Relatedly, the two-step macroscale-then-mesoscale design, in which the macroscale fusion replicates established findings before the same approach is applied at the layer level, is a sound and welcome scientific strategy that strengthens confidence in the combined-modality inferences.

      (2) The authors include multiple complementary controls: partialing out lower layers to mitigate vascular draining, voxel-count matching across layers, an alternative DNN (AlexNet), an alternative time-window definition based on between-layer differences, and time-resolved commonality analyses. The convergence across these analyses is reassuring.

      (3) Methodological transparency: The authors are forthright about partial-volume effects, foveal-confluence aggregation, and the indirect nature of the temporal estimates derived from EEG-fMRI fusion.

      Weaknesses:

      The central interpretive claim-that the late (~400 ms), superficial-layer LOC signal indexes interareal feedback that increases representational complexity-is intriguing, but in my view it is not yet fully supported by the evidence presented based on the following context.

      (1) Eye movements as a possible confound for late signals. Stimuli were presented for 1 second, and fixation was enforced only behaviorally via a color-change task on a central cross. No eye-tracking is reported for either the fMRI or EEG datasets. While this approach is not uncommon, the absence of gaze monitoring introduces ambiguity when the goal is to decouple feedforward and feedback contributions at fine temporal resolution in EEG recordings. Under these conditions, multiple image-driven saccades within a trial are plausible, and saccade patterns are likely to be systematically image-specific, given the small (n = 24) and heterogeneous naturalistic stimulus set. Critically, the temporal window over which RDM correlations are interpreted as feedback coincides with the period during which observers typically make 2-4 fixations (average fixation durations of ~250-330 ms; Rayner, 1998; Henderson, 2003), meaning the late EEG-fMRI fusion peaks fall in a window where image-locked saccadic activity and successive foveation-driven feedforward responses would be expected to accumulate. Late peaks could therefore reflect cumulative feedforward responses across successive foveations rather than top-down feedback. The manuscript would be strengthened by providing eye-tracking data (if available), control analyses leveraging post-hoc indicators, or a discussion citing prior evidence that EEG/fMRI response profiles in this paradigm are robust to such eye movements.

      (2) Decoding accuracy along the visual hierarchy raises questions about whether LOC is adequately engaged. Pairwise decoding accuracy is substantially higher in EVC than in LOC (Figure 1D), and the noise ceiling for LOC RDMs is markedly lower than for EVC across all layers (Supplementary Figure 4D-F). This pattern inverts the canonical hierarchical gradient of progressively stronger object decoding along the ventral visual stream, as well as the analogous gradient observed in DNN late layers that underlies the commonality analyses. As written, it is unclear how the manuscript reconciles this with its emphasis on LOC's role in higher-order, feedback-modulated representations with greater tolerance or increased complexity--unless decoding accuracies should be understood as image-level discrimination rather than at the level of object-category discrimination. A parsimonious alternative is that the 24-image set is too small or too coarse to reveal category-level representations in LOC robustly, such that LOC RDMs may be driven by lower-level or background/contextual variance and noise. This concern has direct bearing on the mesoscale commonality analyses supporting the "feedback transmits high-complexity features" conclusion. I would encourage the authors to (a) report split-half reliability of LOC RDMs alongside the commonality analyses, and either (b) acknowledge that the feature-complexity inferences are conditional on LOC RDMs faithfully capturing object structure rather than residual contextual/low-level variance, or (c) discuss how replication with a richer stimulus set might bear on the feedback-content interpretation.

      (3) The interareal feedback interpretation could be more robustly defended against intra-areal alternatives. In EVC, the authors carefully consider non-feedback explanations for layer-specific dynamics, including lateral connections modulating gain and superficial GE-BOLD bias, and conclude these are sufficient. The same skepticism is not extended to LOC, where the corresponding superficial-layer signal is interpreted as interareal feedback, with speculative sourcing to DLPFC. Slow (unmyelinated) horizontal/lateral propagation in superficial cortical layers (e.g., Davis et al., 2024) can, in principle, produce delayed superficial-layer signals on the timescale observed here without any interareal contribution. This asymmetry is compounded by the treatment of the absence of sustained EVC activity following the middle-layer peak, which is dismissed as a "limitation of the spatial and temporal sensitivity of our measurements" (lines 388-390). If feedback to EVC truly cannot be resolved with this method, the corresponding feedback claim in LOC-imaged with the same protocol warrants comparable caution. The manuscript would benefit from either presenting positive evidence that distinguishes interareal feedback from intra-areal recurrence (e.g., frequency-band signatures, source-resolved EEG, or coupling with frontal regions), or qualifying the conclusion to "delayed superficial-layer activity consistent with either interareal feedback or intra-areal recurrence."

      (4) The predictive coding framing is invoked but not well-grounded. The Discussion (lines 349-357) includes a theoretical implication of predictive coding. Predictive coding makes content-specific claims-feedback carries predictions, feedforward carries error signals relative to those predictions, and dissociating these requires manipulations of expectation, congruence, or predictability, none of which are present in the current design. The observed layer-wise timing differences do not bear evidence for rejecting non-predictive accounts. I would suggest either removing this framing or explicitly noting that the present data neither support nor refute predictive coding.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study advances our understanding of the neuronal basis of the circadian clock in pancrustaceans. It extends our knowledge on the pigment-dispersing hormone system and provides links to information on the expression of core clock components, cryptochrome 2, and period. The data are sound and well-documented.

      Comments:

      The neuronal components of the arthropod circadian clock system have been analysed extensively in insects. Much less information on this system is available on malacostraca crustacea crustaceans. However, considering that malacostracan crustaceans and insects go back to a common pancrustacean ancestor and considering that we know that the brain architecture in these two groups shares many commonalities (see, e. g., extensive reviews by N. J. Strausfeld), we have to expect that crustaceans and insects share many of the characteristics of the circadian system. This is the case, e. g., for the network of pigment-dispersing hormone-positive neurons. The authors cite these studies, although late in the paper (discussion, line 339ff), and I suggest to move this info into the introduction: "339 ff: The arborization pattern of the PDH-network has been described in various malacostracan crustaceans, including Carcinus maenas (Alexander et al., 2020; Mangerich & Keller, 1988; Mangerich et al., 1987), Cancer productus (Hsu et al., 2008), Orconectes limosus (de Kleijn et al., 1993; Mangerich & Keller, 1988; Mangerich et al., 1987), Homarus americanus (Harzsch etal., 2009), Cherax destructor, Procambarus clarkii (Sullivan et al., 2009), and Procambarus virginalis (Luna et al., 2010)."

      The strength of this paper is that it extends our knowledge on the PDH system and brings together neuroanatomical information on PDH-positive neurons with information on the expression of core clock components, cryptochrome 2, and period. That way, it advances our understanding of the neuronal basis of the circadian clock in pancrustaceans. The data are sound and well documented, and the authors are to be applauded for the superb dissection presented in Figure 1.

      Below, please find some essential suggestions on how to further improve the paper.

      (1) Framing of the study:

      I know that krill is a key element of the Southern Ocean's food webs, but my sense is that discussing the current findings in a context of resilience of this species to global ocean change means largely overselling this study:

      - Lines 47, 48: "and the resilience of this key species in a rapidly changing Southern Ocean."

      - Lines 70 ff: "Hence, understanding the mechanisms of adaptation, including biological clocks, is crucial for predicting how species, populations, and whole ecosystems will respond to climate change."

      - 154 ff: "The Southern Ocean environment experiences rapid change (Abram et al., 2025; Meredith et al., 2019; Thomalla et al., 2023). To assess krill's resilience to environmental changes, understanding the mechanisms that govern daily and seasonal timing in krill is essential."

      - 325 ff: "The rhythmic adaptation of krill to its high-latitude environment is key to its success in the Southern Ocean, which in turn represents a cornerstone for the well-being of the whole krill centred ecosystem. To predict krill's resilience to rapid environmental changes, it is essential to understand the mechanisms that govern daily and seasonal timing in krill."

      - 597 ff: "A detailed mechanistic understanding of the flexibility of clock-based processes is therefore essential to predict krill resilience in a changing Southern Ocean."

      My understanding is that duration of day length is one of the most predictable environmental drivers, and - despite the seasonal changes of day length - nevertheless a very stable one compared to fluctuations of environmental drivers such as temperature or salinity (see, e.g. this recent review on environmental driver fluctuations on nervous system functioning in crustaceans: Stein W, Harzsch S (2021) The Neurobiology of Ocean Change - insights from decapod crustaceans. Zoology: 125887. https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S094420062030146X).

      I do not see how global ocean change may significantly change day length, and what this study has to do with understanding this species' resilience against ocean change. I suggest that you explain in more detail why the light day length will change in the future or strongly tone this aspect. Statements such as Line 76 ff: "Due to their disproportionate importance for ecosystem function, understanding the resilience of ecological key species is essential in assessing the fate of ecosystems in the future." are completely out of focus here and, again, trying to oversell the current study.

      (2) Uncited essential studies of crustacean neuroanatomy, missing connection to contemporary crustacean neurobiology:

      - Line 157: "despite the ecological importance of E. superba, only very little is known about its neurobiology".

      - Line 329: "However, so far, little was known about the neurobiology of krill in general."

      I agree that this species' brain is understudied, but this makes it even more important to cite the little information that IS available. Please consider this essential reading for any crustacean neurobiologist: "Sandeman, D.C., Scholtz, G., Sandeman, R.E., 1993. Brain evolution in decapod crustacea. J. Exp. Zool. 265, 112-133." to find information on the basic brain anatomy in E. superba.

      The manuscript in many places seems to reinvent the wheel and raises the impression that our knowledge of crustacean brain morphology is close to zero. The authors in places seem to operate in a vacuum, and I find it disturbing that in a study on the crustacean brain, very few references are provided to studies on crustacean brain anatomy, such as the following essential book chapter: "Schmidt, M., 2016. Malacostraca. In: Schmidt-Rhaesa, A., Harzsch, S., Purschke, G. (Eds.), Structure & Evolution of Invertebrate Nervous Systems. Oxford University Press, Oxford, pp. 529-582. https://www.researchgate.net/publication/315366157"

      In terms of brain anatomy, I would like to know if the authors have a hypothesis on whether and how their target species' brain structure may be similar or different to the brains of other "shrimps" as described, e. g., in the following studies. If so, please elaborate in the introduction:

      Krieger J, Hörnig MK, Sandeman RE, Sandeman DC, Harzsch S (2020), Masters of communication: The brain of the banded cleaner shrimp Stenopus hispidus (Olivier, 1811) with an emphasis on sensory processing areas. Journal of Comparative Neurology 528(9): 1561-1587.

      Meth R, Wittfoth C, Harzsch S (2017) Brain architecture of the Pacific White Shrimp Penaeus vannamei Boone, 1931 (Malacostraca, Dendrobranchiata): correspondence of brain structure and sensory input? Cell and Tissue Research 369(2): 255-271.

      (3) Lacking rigor and command of crustacean brain nomenclature

      I suggest that for their brain nomenclature, the authors should rigorously stick to that laid out by Sandeman et al. 1992 (not yet cited in the ms): Sandeman, D.C., Sandeman, R.E., Derby, C.D., Schmidt, M., 1992. Morphology of the brain of crayfish, crabs, and spiny lobsters: a common nomenclature for homologous structures. Biol. Bull. 183, 304-326.

      More specifically, in lines 41, 163, 199, 204, 207, and throughout the paper, the authors use the terms "Optic lobes" or "optic lobe neuropils". To the best of my knowledge, "optic lobe" is not a term used in crustacean neuroanatomy at all (as opposed to insects). Lamina, medulla, and lobula are collectively referred to as "visual neuropils" (see Krieger, J., Hörnig, M. K., Sandeman, R. E., Sandeman, D. C., & Harzsch, S. (2020). Masters of communication: The brain of the banded cleaner shrimp Stenopus hispidus (Olivier, 1811) with an emphasis on sensory processing areas. Journal of Comparative Neurology, 528(9), 1561-1587. https://doi.org/10.1002/CNE.24831). The medulla terminalis and mushroom bodies are referred to as "lateral protocerebrum". All afore-mentioned neuropils are summarized as "eyestalk neuropils" (compare nomenclature in Schmidt 2016 as referenced above).

      Line 170, 172, 175 ff, and Figure 1. "abdomen", "abdominal ganglia": Contra the book chapter by Siegel 2016 "Introducing Antarctic Krill Euphausia superba Dana, 1850", his Fig. 1.2, the "tail" of crustaceans in most books on crustacean anatomy is not called "abdomen" but instead "pleon"; hence the name "pleopods" for the appendages of the pleon (instead of "abdomipods"). What is more, I suggest using the terms "pleon ganglia" instead of "abdominal ganglia", following the terminology suggested in "Harzsch S, Sandeman D, Chaigneau J (2012) Morphology and development of the central nervous system. In: Forest J and von Vaupel Klein JC (Eds.). Treatise on Zoology - Anatomy, Taxonomy, Biology. The Crustacea Vol. 3. Brill, Leiden pp. 9-236."

      Line 174: "thoracic ganglia". In Figure 1, there is a labelling mistake as these ganglia are named "thoracaic ganglia".

      Line 176, and throughout the paper: "supraesophageal ganglion". Following the standard nomenclature for crustaceans (see, e. g., Schmidt, M., 2016. Malacostraca. In: Schmidt-Rhaesa, A., Harzsch, S., Purschke, G. (Eds.), Structure & Evolution of Invertebrate Nervous Systems. Oxford University Press, Oxford, pp. 529-582. https://www.researchgate.net/publication/315366157", this structure (as in insects) is typically called a "brain". For terminology, also consult the following nomenclature paper: "Richter, S., Loesel, R., Purschke, G., Schmidt-Rhaesa, A., Scholtz, G., Stach, T., Vogt, L., Wanninger, A., Brenneis, G., Döring, C., Faller, S., Fritsch, M., Grobe, P., Heuer, C. M., Kaul, S., Møller, O. S., Müller, C. H. G., Rieger, V., Rothe, B. H., Stegner, M., Harzsch, S. (2010). Invertebrate neurophylogeny: Suggested terms and definitions for a neuroanatomical glossary. Frontiers in Zoology, 7. https://doi.org/10.1186/1742-9994-7-29".

      Line 212, and throughout the paper - hemielliposoid body: please refer to Harzsch Krieger 2011 and the numerous references to studies by Strausfeld cited therein in crustaceans. Strausfeld has provided compelling evidence that the crustacean hemiellipsoid body is equivalent to the insect mushroom body, so this term should be replaced. Harzsch, S., & Krieger, J. (2021). Genealogical relationships of mushroom bodies, hemiellipsoid bodies, and their afferent pathways in the brains of Pancrustacea: Recent progress and open questions. Arthropod Structure & Development, 65, 101100. HYPERLINK "https://doi.org/10.1016/J.ASD.2021.101100" https://doi.org/10.1016/J.ASD.2021.101100.

      Legend, figure 2, and others, and throughout the paper: "The olfactory neuropiles comprise the lateral antennal neuropile (LAN, ochre), the olfactory lobes (OL, yellow), and the antennal neuropile (AnN, green)." This is a strange terminological mix that you should urgently revise according to the standard terminology by Sandeman et al. 1992 (as referenced above). The LAN is the lateral antenna 1 neuropil. The AnN is the antenna 2 neuropil. The AnN is NOT deutocerebral but tritocerebral.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors set out to compare functional encoding in the tuft dendrites and somata of a specific cortical cell type during motor planning and learning.

      Strengths:

      The investigation of a specific projection type (L5 ET) is a strength that aids reproducibility and interpretation. The elegant approach to increasing the depth of field of dendritic imaging is another strength. The data analyses are largely clear in their methods, scope, and interpretation. The writing is extremely clear and appropriately referenced, with an excellent Introduction, in particular.

      Weaknesses:

      It is not obvious whether the selected labeling strategy avoids labeling Layer 6 CT neurons, which would contaminate dendritic recordings. The images provided suggest enrichment in L5, but a discussion of this important potential caveat is warranted, especially since within-cell comparisons of apical dendrites to somata were not performed.

      The application of DeepInterpolation to dendritic data appears to be novel, and little detail or vetting is provided. The reader is left guessing: Was the model retrained or fine-tuned on dendritic data? How does the denoising affect the resulting segmentation and activity traces? Is denoising necessary for this workflow?

      The activity patterns of the recorded cells appear to lack the characteristic ramping during the delay epoch previously reported in both calcium imaging and electrophysiology studies. Given that a major contribution to the significance of the work is to constrain models of ALM function, a discussion of how the data aligns with previous measurements in the same circuit would improve the work.

      It would be very informative to compare differences in signals between dendrites and somata of the same cells. Consistently tracing dendrites to their respective somata would assuage worries of potential contamination from dendrites of deeper cells and enable more direct comparisons of signal transformations between dendrites and somata. It would be good to understand the relationship between dendritic calcium signals and backpropagating action potentials in this task. The authors detect less frequent calcium events in tufts versus somata; is this due to selective backpropagation of action potentials? The dynamics of this process were recently investigated by Adam Cohen's group in vivo and in vitro, and measurements in the present settings could be compared to such work.

      The Coding Direction analyses presented in this work, while consistent with previous literature on population codes in ALM, are at odds with the nature of the measurements here. The changes in representation that occur between the dendrites and soma of an individual cell are probably best thought of in terms of the dynamics of signals themselves within individual neurons, rather than in the information encoded across a population.

      This work is largely observational, describing signals that might reflect computational transformations and/or instruct plasticity, but those possibilities have not yet been deeply investigated. The manuscript does a good job of laying out these as future directions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper investigates risk and cooperation decisions by integrating computational modeling with event-related potential (ERP) measures. Participants completed two tasks involving financial risk and cooperation under possible betrayal. The comparison between social and non-social decision-making is interesting and potentially valuable. However, the conceptual framing, theoretical grounding, and modeling rationale require substantial clarification.

      Strengths:

      (1) The paper introduces comparable tasks to probe social vs. non-social decision making.

      (2) The authors use a model to identify a psychological distinction and test its validity using neural data.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Conceptual framing and theoretical clarity

      The primary theoretical contribution of the paper is currently unclear. Specifically, it is not clear what key difference the authors hypothesize between risk and cooperation conditions. This distinction should be grounded in prior literature.

      The manuscript states: "Indeed, mutual cooperation maximizes social welfare, whereas betrayal benefits the trustee but comes at the trustor's expense in the Trust Game (Joyce et al., 1995)." However, the authors do not discuss the substantial literature on the Trust Game, which is used here but not explicitly acknowledged.

      • The original Trust Game framework and behavior in one-shot settings (e.g., Berg et al., 1995).

      • The persistence of cooperation even when defection is economically optimal (e.g., Berg et al., 1995; Fehr & Fischbacher, 2003).

      • The influence of trustworthiness of the partner on cooperation decisions has been previously studied (Ma et al., 2022).

      • Differences between social and non-social decision-making contexts have also been reported with matched tasks (Liu et al., 2024).

      (2) Distinction between constructs (risk, loss aversion, betrayal aversion)

      The introduction introduces multiple related constructs-risk aversion, loss aversion, and betrayal aversion-but does not clearly differentiate them. A theoretically grounded distinction is needed.

      In particular:

      • The manuscript introduces multiple related constructs, or maybe the terms are used interchangeably? The distinction between risk aversion, loss aversion, defection aversion, and betrayal aversion should be clearly defined.

      • Betrayal aversion versus loss aversion is introduced but not clearly differentiated. Importantly, it should be clarified that this distinction is not experimentally manipulated but instead inferred through computational modeling. This point is currently not made explicit, which leads to confusion in the introduction

      • The computational model should be introduced clearly in the introduction. Without explaining how these constructs are operationalized in the model, the framework is difficult to follow.<br /> The statement "In the risk task, losses were solely impersonal" is also unclear. It seems the authors may mean "personal or non-social" rather than "impersonal" as rewards are always personally relevant.

      (3) Hypotheses and preregistration

      The manuscript would benefit from more theoretical rationale for hypotheses. For example:

      • What is the basis for hypothesizing that financial loss aversion and betrayal aversion independently affect cooperation choices?

      • Why should these constructs be separable and modeled independently?

      • Additionally, the absence of preregistration is a limitation that should be acknowledged even more.

      • Given the flexibility of the modeling approach and number of parameters, this is particularly important.

      • For instance, the rationale for focusing on decision times is also not clearly explained and should be better motivated.

      (4) Computational modeling

      There are several concerns regarding the modeling approach:

      • The choice of model comparison metric should be justified. Why is AIC used rather than BIC, which penalizes model complexity more strongly? This is particularly relevant given the inclusion of additional parameters to capture processes not directly measured by the task.

      • Full model recovery analyses are missing. A full model recovery is necessary to demonstrate that competing models produce distinguishable behavioral patterns. This needs to be shown in order to justify the specificity of the winning model

      • How correlated are the parameters across participants, particularly loss and betrayal parameters?

      • More broadly, it is unclear how well loss aversion and betrayal aversion can be differentiated based on behavior alone. If these constructs are separable, they should predict distinct aspects of behavior.

      (5) ERP analyses

      The ERP results (e.g., P300 and LPP) seem to suggest that betrayal aversion is relevant in both time periods and similarly.

      • Do neural signals differentially reflect betrayal aversion versus loss aversion earlier and later on?

      • Are there significant interaction effects between betrayal and loss aversion for each ERP component?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors report the presence of extrachromosomal circular DNAs (eccDNAs) within the core of stress granules purified from both yeast and mammalian cells.

      Strengths:

      This study is important for understanding the molecular mechanisms underlying stress granules containing eccDNAs and is likely to have a major impact on future research. A major strength of the study is the extensive experimental validation performed in yeast cells. In particular, cytoplasmic CRISPR-mediated targeting of eccDNAs suppresses stress granule formation and impairs recovery from hypoxic stress in yeast cells.

      Weaknesses:

      The conclusions would be further strengthened by validating the functional findings in an additional model system, such as mammalian cells.

      Comments:

      (1) Section: "Stress granule cores contain eccDNA"

      a) The presence of eccDNAs would be more convincingly demonstrated using an orthogonal validation approach, such as DNA FISH targeting MYC and Centromere 8 (CEN8) on metaphase spreads from HEK293T cells (as performed in PMID: 34819668).

      b) The study would also benefit from assessing the presence of eccDNAs in the extracellular medium. For example, DNA could be extracted from conditioned media and analyzed by PCR using primers spanning eccDNA breakpoint junctions (as performed in PMID: 40074906; PMID: 36123406).

      (2) Section: "eccDNA-CRISPR abrogates stress granules"

      These findings should be further validated under additional stress conditions, such as drug-induced stress (like methotrexate) or nutrient deprivation in the cell medium.<br /> In addition, the same set of experiments should be performed in HEK293T cells to support the broader relevance of the observations.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Bai and colleagues investigates how Escherichia coli navigates and explores agar gels through chemotaxis and what parameters of bacterial swimming are tuned under selection pressure for rapid migration (i.e., reaching the edge of the agar plate quickly). Prior studies have examined related questions to a substantial degree. Examples include "Migration of Chemotactic Bacteria in Soft Agar: Role of Gel Concentration" (https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC3145277) and numerous other studies in this area (e.g., "Migration of bacteria in semi-solid agar" https://www.pnas.org/doi/10.1073/pnas.86.18.6973). From such studies has emerged the paradigm/model that reorientation (i.e., tumbling) is essential when bacteria navigate agar, which is considered a model for "complex" environments, because run-only bacteria become trapped in the agar matrix and are unable to migrate far. This new manuscript provides some evidence that this paradigm may be overly simplified or incomplete. As I understand it, the authors propose that migration is influenced to a greater extent by bias in the chemotactic run, where runs up attractant gradients are longer. The authors incorporate these data into a new model for chemotactic navigation and claim that this work establishes a general principle for how bacteria optimize active transport through complex environments.

      I will first note to the editor and authors that I am not qualified to assess the detailed mathematics of the model, and my review therefore focuses on the biology and phenotypes described. Nevertheless, in my view, this manuscript, in its current form, has several important limitations. For each point, I provide suggestions for additional experiments that could strengthen the rigor of the work and clarify the claims.

      Strengths:

      A strength of this work is the use of microscopy and automated methods to characterize an extremely large number of bacterial cells, which strengthens the authors' claims. However, substantially greater detail on these approaches is needed for the analysis to be reproducible and to allow verification that the analyses were performed correctly.

      Weaknesses:

      Major concerns

      (1) Claims are overly broad, and the experimental system is too artificial to support general conclusions about bacteria, chemotaxis, or evolution.

      E. coli MG1655 is a longstanding model organism in the chemotaxis field, and agar chemotaxis assays are also widely used. However, the authors make very broad claims about how phenotypic changes observed during selection in 0.2% or 0.3% agar relate to bacterial chemotaxis and evolution more generally. In essence, the experimental foundation on which the authors build a complex theoretical framework is limited to a domesticated laboratory strain of E. coli and a highly artificial environment consisting of agar in a Petri dish. Although E. coli is well studied, its motility and taxis behaviors are not necessarily representative of bacteria across nature. In addition, natural environments are dynamic, and bacteria rarely experience stable gradients for extended periods, such as the 24-hour time-frame used here. The authors have also only focused on responses to attractant gradients with undefined complex growth media, and not assessed if this is also true for repellent gradients. This is important to consider because E. coli also generates repellent gradients (indole) that are not considered here. E. coli also generates AI-2, sensed as an attractant, that would be an opposing force for migration. For these reasons, it is not clear that the data and theory presented here generalize to diverse bacterial species, to natural environments, or to chemotaxis broadly.

      The authors should acknowledge that further work is needed to generalise their findings by testing additional organisms, such as non-laboratory E. coli isolates, other enteric bacteria, and species with fundamentally different motility systems (e.g., Campylobacter jejuni). Further work could also expand beyond agar by examining chemotaxis in a biological matrix such as mucin, as well as testing responses to defined attractants and repellents.

      (2) No genetic component is identified, so claims about evolution are not supported.

      Evolution requires heritable genetic changes that produce phenotypes advantageous under a given selection pressure. The authors state that bacteria were selected for rapid migration and that this selection produced progressively more efficient migrators. However, no sequencing analyses of the evolved isolates were performed, no genetic changes were identified, and no mechanism underlying this phenotypic shift was described. Without identifying genetic alterations, they cannot substantiate the claim that evolution occurred. Whole-genome sequencing of the evolved isolates is necessary to determine whether specific mutations underlie the observed phenotypes.

      (3) The predictive power of the model is not tested.

      The authors develop a model with post-dictive capability, meaning the model reproduces behaviors similar to those observed in the data used to construct it. However, the manuscript does not demonstrate that the model has predictive power. Demonstrating predictive performance would substantially increase the value of the model. For example, the authors could perform an additional round of selection and predict the resulting bacterial behavior under a condition not used during model construction (such as a different agar concentration or predicting the behavior of different bacteria). Otherwise, the authors should tone down the claims.

      (4) Limited novelty and impact of the environmental difference studied.

      A central point of the manuscript is the difference between evolution in 0.2% versus 0.3% agar and how this difference relates to the proposed model. However, this represents a relatively minor change in the environment experienced by the bacteria. Developing an extensive theoretical framework and proposing that bacterial evolution is highly sensitive to these parameters based on this narrow experimental system may be premature. This would be addressed by the suggested broadening of experiments described above.

      (5) The manuscript is too brief, and some data and methods are insufficiently described, particularly related to the machine learning analysis.

      The manuscript addresses a complex topic, yet the main text, methods, and figures are very brief, which need not be the case. As a result, it is often difficult to understand exactly what was done and how the data support the authors' claims. More detailed descriptions of the experimental approaches and analyses are necessary.

      One example is the machine learning approach used for cell tracking. This method is only briefly described, and no validation data are presented that would allow readers to evaluate whether the approach performs accurately. If the method is robust, it would be a powerful analytical tool, but the current description does not provide sufficient information to evaluate the reliability of the results. This issue is particularly important because the authors conclude that tumbles account for less than 3% of escape events, which contrasts with previous paradigms. Automated tracking methods can be susceptible to artifacts, and therefore, rigorous validation of the tracking pipeline, supported by appropriate figures and benchmark data, is essential.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Overall, we found the responses to be quite recalcitrant.

      We have one remaining composite concern about the comparison between observed expression patterns with the new strains versus published data.

      First, the authors only report patterns for one stage while it should be not too much effort to image the different life stages. However, since this is a revision, we are not formally requesting they do this.

      Second, in the now provided Table (thank you) 'observed expression' (last column) is lacking for 9 of the 30 proteins, and for 6 of these the procedure was not successful. Why not report patterns for the other three? It is confusing also because on page 5, the authors say that "overall, 24 of 30 tags ...all of which were visible with fluorescence stereomicroscopy" - are we missing something? Also, they then said that they "obtained 6/9 of the originally failed tags"; why are the corresponding patterns not included in table 1, and are 9 proteins still labeled as "no" in the "success?" Column?

      Third, we strongly feel that the response to our comments about expression patterns is not adequate. On page 5 the authors say that "all proteins were expected to be ubiquitously expressed" and that "scRNA-seq indicated that transcript abundance was ubiquitous and without strong tissue-specific enrichment with few exceptions". However, in their rebuttal, the authors now argue for tissue-specific expression for proteins with paralogs, turning around their own argument! Moreover, their Table indicates that many genes show tissue-enriched expression by RNA-seq while many of their tagged proteins exhibit ubiquitous expression.

      Overall, this indicates that both the overall accomplishment of generating tagged protein strains and analyzing their expression is oversold.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper starts with a large-scale yeast two-hybrid (Y2H) screen using Set1 (full-length and smaller parts) and other Set1C/COMPASS subunits as bait. There are hundreds possible interactions identified, but only a small number are given any follow-up. While it's useful to document all the possible interactions, the unfocused and preliminary nature of the results makes the paper feel scattered and incomplete.

      Strengths:

      The Y2H screen was very comprehensive, producing lots of interesting possible leads for further experiments.

      Weaknesses:

      Most interactions were not further tested, and even in the case of those that were, the experiments are often inconclusive or incomplete.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This is a very interesting study from Vandendoren and colleagues examining the role of PVN oxytocin neurons during thermoregulatory behaviors, in particular during thermoregulatory huddling. The findings are important and have implications for the thermoregulation field as well as the social/naturalistic behavior field. The findings are compelling and use a combination of state-of-the-art tools (photometry, optogenetics, automated behavior tracking, thermal imaging, and core body temperature measurement), often in combination with each other, to produce a rigorous and high-dimensional dataset.

      Comments on revised version.

      I appreciate the effort the authors have put into addressing all of my questions, and I have no remaining concerns.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript "Canonical and phosphoribosyl ubiquitination coordinate to stabilize a proteinaceous structure surrounding the Legionella-containing vacuole" by Steinbach et al. is well written and presents strong evidence that satisfactorily supports the main hypothesis and research objectives. The authors have clearly demonstrated the presence of cloud-like, detergent-resistant GTPase Rab5 surrounding the LCV, and formation of the structure is dependent on the SidE family of effectors. The study provides insights into the relevant (associated with described phenotype) ubiquitination pathways. The findings advance our understanding of Legionella pneumophila vacuole remodeling during intracellular infection and open directions for future research to establish broader implications of this structure on Legionella pathogenesis.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript convincingly demonstrates the presence of a cloud-like, detergent-resistant GTPase Rab5 surrounding the LCV through elegant microscopy. The experimental evidence about the dependence of the observed phenotype on the SidE family of effectors is compelling and presented with strong scientific rigor. The introduction is well-written, and the discussion is thorough and satisfactory. The article is thought-provoking and shows preliminary evidence for ubiquitin-mediated protection and spatial organization of the LCV.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Huang et al recorded anterior cingulate cortex activity in mice while they performed a shuttle escape task. The task utilized two auditory cues, each of which informed the mice to stay or escape depending on which side they were on, and incorrect responses were punished by shock administration. Analyses focused on ACC neurons that fired when mice crossed the shuttle box in either direction (A-->B or B-->A), coined "action state", or when mice crossed in one direction but not the other, coined "action content". The authors characterized these populations, and ACC firing changes mostly occurred around the time of shuttle crossing. This work will likely be of broad interest to those who are interested in neocortical neurophysiology broadly, anterior cingulate cortex specifically, and their contributions to learning about actions. The task is well-designed and provides a nice background for neurophysiological recordings. The authors leveraged these strengths in characterizing the neural populations that fire to shuttle crossings in both directions vs one direction.

      Strengths:

      The factorial design nicely controls for sensory coding and value coding, since the same stimulus can signal different actions and values.

      The figures are well presented, labeled, and easy to read.

      Additional analyses, such as the 2.5/7.5s windows and place-field analysis, are nice to see and indicate that the authors were careful in their neural analyses.

      The n-trial + 1 analysis where ACC activity was higher on trials that preceded correct responses is a nice addition, since it shows that ACC activity predicts future behavior, well before it happens.

      The authors identified ACC neurons that fire to shuttle crossings in one direction or to crossings in both directions. This is very clear in the spike rasters and population scaled color images. While other factors such as place fields, sensory input, and their integration can account for this activity, the authors discuss this and provide additional supplemental analyses.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Learning in dynamic, stochastic environments is difficult, and neuromodulatory systems may shape where learning signals appear in the brain. Using fMRI from four probabilistic learning studies and a Bayesian ideal observer model, the authors examined latent variables driving learning, such as confidence and surprise. They found that brain activity related to confidence, and to a lesser degree surprise, is highly spatially invariant across tasks and modalities, suggesting a stable cortical organization. This invariant pattern aligns with PET-derived maps of receptors and transporters, implicating catecholamine and opioid systems, and supporting a neuromodulatory account of adaptive learning with receptor-level hypotheses.

      Strengths:

      (1) Elegant combination of computational modelling, functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI) and positron emission tomography (PET).

      (2) The authors describe results of four separate experiments, with very similar results, in effect providing internal replications.

      (3) Cross-validated results compared against a meaningful null model.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Unclear rationale for using one-sided statistics (e.g., in Figure 3). One-sided tests appear to be invalid, given that the Introduction lacks a preregistered directional hypothesis at an operationalised level. This may have consequences for the following statement in the Discussion: "The associations between receptor architecture and functional topography were substantially weaker for the language network, which is not thought to rely strongly on neuromodulatory systems."

      (2) Limited computational modelling. Since learning rates probably differ across subjects, I wonder if they have considered fitting the "volatility" instead of using the generative one. Would that give more meaningful fMRI maps, and better explained variance when correlating these to the PET-based predictors? I was also wondering how their surprise measure relates to "change-point probability" (e.g., Murphy et al., Nat Neurosci, 2021). Finally, I think it would be helpful to show average time courses of surprise and confidence time-locked to state changes.

      (3) Lack of GLM validation. It would help to show that the model fits the data well. This is important given the many underlying assumptions (shape of the HRF, linear effects of variables, etc). For example, one could show average insula activity time-locked to state changes, as well as the model-predicted activity, and separately for three strata defined by how surprising the state change was (according to the ideal observer model). Related, the authors use a substantial number of predictors in their GLM, and the language in the Methods is a little casual. It would help to show part of a design matrix, and clearly describe the following: were (occasional) questions and responses modelled by separate stick functions? Which predictors (stimulus, questions, response) varied parametrically with which variables?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study by Mentch et al. uses naturalistic-movie fMRI and grayordinate-level stacked encoding models to test preregistered hypotheses about low/high-level and audio/visual feature encoding in autism and adolescence from openly available Healthy Brain Network data. Null results reported that autism was not linked to increased low-level encoding in primary sensory cortices. Exploratory analyses showed participants with autism showed reduced high-level visual encoding in social regions (pSTS, face areas), with the high-low feature shift tracking social responsiveness scale (SRS) scores. Age and laterality effects were also found.

      Strengths:

      (1) This study and hypotheses were preregistered.

      (2) The study utilised proper variance partitioning, split-half noise ceilings, FD-threshold sensitivity analyses, and an explicit modelling framework that recovers known sensory hierarchies in the aggregated sample. The developmental sampling adds to the interest.

      (3) The manuscript is written clearly, laying out the background and theories to be tested with encoding models. The analyses and reporting of results are clear.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) If I understand correctly, by only averaging the grayordinates that already passed a significance threshold, the resulting parcel value is guaranteed to look stronger than if all grayordinates had been included. This has been raised in neuroimaging (Kriegeskorte et al., 2009; Vul et al., 2009). Can the authors justify these choices?

      (2) I assume that the phrase "temporally permuting the order of observations" on Page 22 means random shuffling of time points. The details of this exact permutation are not specified. Both the fMRI BOLD signal and movie features have strong temporal autocorrelation, and random shuffling will destroy this structure. This is important as grayordinate-level survivors will propagate to parcel pools. Circular shifting or phase randomization preserving the autocorrelation spectrum is appropriate.

      (3) In the movie feature selection, the low-level visual model contains only two scalars: mean perceptual brightness and a single averaged value across 2,139 motion-energy filters. With only two low-level visual features, the low-level visual model potentially would underestimate low-level visual encoding. The H1.1 toward the null perhaps suggests to this. Principal components of the motion-energy outputs, as was done for the cochleagram, could be used.

      (4) The pilot sample composition is not described. Features were selected based on their performance on an independent set of 54 pilot subjects. Please provide age, sex, and diagnostic composition of the pilot sample. The main point being whether the selected features were optimised for a population that differs from the subject studied.

      (5) The authors acknowledge the lack of eye-tracking in theory study. I think this should be elaborated, especially why this modality is important for answering sensory and perceptual encoding. Face encoding may not be degraded, but just that faces are not being attended to.

      (6) I think a more nuanced distinction about the representational nature of encoding-model R² should be mentioned, especially when the interpretation of findings is related to perceptual functioning (EPF theory). R² measures how well a feature set predicts brain activity, not perceptual function or cognitive integration.

      (7) The literature also includes evidence for no Colavita effect, not just reverse Colavita in autism, and the framing should reflect this more even-handedly.

      (8) The 0.2 mm per-volume threshold is quite strict. The 40%/60%/80% sensitivity analyses partially address this, but a brief justification for the choice of 0.2 mm would strengthen the Methods.

      (9) Figure 1 seems confusing and would benefit from more information or text in the figure.

      (10) Figure 2 supplement has caption A labelled twice; please correct.

      (11) Acronyms. Please spell out MSI on first mention (page 2) and ISC/ISFC on first mention (page 4).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors present a creative approach using visual anagrams matched on low-level image statistics to isolate animacy from low-level visual features and report consistent effects of animacy on visual working memory and attention. While this is a thoughtful design and is well executed across seven pre-registered experiments, it remains unclear whether the reported effect is truly driven by animacy, as opposed to broader differences in ensemble statistics or semantic structure across the "mixed animacy" versus "uniform animacy" conditions. As such, the interpretation of a "pure" animacy effect may be overstated.

      Strengths:

      (1) An important methodological advance in controlling low-level confounds that have historically complicated the study of animacy.

      (2) The converging effects across multiple experiments, together with the pre-registered design, strengthen the reliability of the reported findings.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Specificity of the animacy effect vs. category-level ensemble structure

      The central claim is that animacy itself drives the observed effects. However, the key manipulation ("mixed animacy" versus "uniform animacy") also introduces differences in category-level ensemble structure. For example, in Experiments 1-2, cross-category change detection (e.g., dog to chair) may be easier not because of animacy per se, but because of a change in overall ensemble statistics (Brady & Alvarez, 2011, 2015). In addition, since each display contains five objects (two in one category and three in the other category), cross-category changes may also alter category balance in a way that further facilitates detection. In contrast, within-category changes preserve both ensemble structure and category composition, making them more difficult to detect.

      Brady, T. F., & Alvarez, G. A. (2011). Hierarchical encoding in visual working memory: Ensemble statistics bias memory for individual items. Psychological Science.

      Brady, T. F., & Alvarez, G. A. (2015). Contextual effects in visual working memory reveal hierarchically structured memory representations. Journal of Vision.

      (2) Limited stimulus set and potential learning effects

      The relatively small stimulus set (six anagram pairs) and repeated exposure raise the possibility of learning or familiarity effects. Does performance change over time? e.g., are there meaningful differences between early and late trials (e.g., first 10% vs. last 10%)? If such differences are present, they could suggest the development of task-specific strategies or increased efficiency with repeated exposure, rather than stable effects driven by the experimental manipulation itself.

      (3) Role of semantics

      Although the anagram paradigm effectively controls low-level visual features, it still relies on high-level semantics (e.g., "dog" vs. "boot"). These stimuli differ not only in animacy but also along other semantic dimensions such as natural versus manmade categories. From a semantic standpoint, it remains unclear whether the observed effects can be uniquely attributed to animacy or whether they reflect broader conceptual distinctions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Understanding the factors and mechanisms underlying the deleterious effects of distraction, and protection from distraction, in working memory is an important question that has a long and rich history in psychology and neuroscience, and continues to be highly relevant. In this study, the authors recorded the EEG while subjects viewed the initial presentation of two oriented-grating stimuli, aligned on either side of fixation along the horizontal meridian (memory array), followed by a 70%-valid cue, then one of three distractor conditions (overlapping cued item (40%), opposite cued item (40%), no distraction (20%)), followed by recall ("delayed estimation"). The behavioral and EEG results from this procedure are complemented with computational modeling with a two-tier bump-attractor model.

      Weaknesses:

      Interpretation of the results is complicated by several factors. One is the non-consideration of a considerable amount of extant research that is highly relevant to the question of interest (these include seminal studies from Gi-Yeul Bae and from Tatiana Pasternak). Relatedly, the manuscript emphasizes biasing effects of distractors to the exclusion of a conceptually distinct effect: degradation of representational precision. (For example, the actual focus of the study of Wimmer et al. (2014) that the manuscript cites with reference to bias is the degradation of precision; one only has to read the title of this paper to know this.) Also relatedly, the authors are aware of the possibility of misbinding (a.k.a. "swap") errors, in which subjects mistakenly recall a high-fidelity representation of a foil (in this case, the distractor) rather than the target, but they (1) fail to cite any of the extensive literature on this topic and (2) seem to erroneously attribute what their analyses would seem to identify as misbinding errors as "antagonistic bias" exerted by the distractor on the target item.

      A second concern relates to the interpretation of patterns in the empirical results. In particular, Figure 1G is interpreted as displaying a pattern of repulsive bias exerted by the distractor on trials when the distractor appeared at the location opposite to the cued item. However, it is not clear that this is a repulsive bias. Rather, what the plot shows is that report error is attracted to "near" distractors with a positively signed offset but repelled by "near" distractors with a negatively signed offset. Stated another way, when one applies a model-free assessment of the influence of the distractor on the memorandum, there is no systematic bias: the AOC of positively signed offset values from 0 to +45 deg is roughly the same as the AOC negatively signed offset values from 0 to -45 deg. The same also seems to be true, albeit with a smaller magnitude, for trials featuring "stronger mnemonic neural representation" that are illustrated in Figure 2. And so it's unclear that the effect of the "Dist. Opp" distractor is indeed a repulsive bias, rather than a loss of precision.

      The third primary concern is that the results from simulations from the two-tier bump-attractor modeling are difficult to interpret due to several poorly motivated and seemingly "hand-coded" assumptions. These include the (seemingly arbitrary) strengthening of HCVC feedback connections by 20% for cued vs. uncued items; and the choice to "transiently block[ed] feedforward connections from the VC to the HC during the maintenance epoch" as a consequence of cuing. There is frankly no evidence that the latter phenomenon actually happens in primate brains performing comparable tasks, including in papers (such as from Xu and from Rademaker) that are cited in this manuscript. The current consensus is that priority-related rotations of representational geometry are the scheme employed by mammalian nervous systems to control the otherwise deleterious effects of distraction.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Ono et al compares two prime editing strategies in zebrafish, one based on a nickase and the other on a nuclease, and evaluates their performance for introducing substitutions, short insertions, and transmission to the next generation. The study aims to clarify the relative strengths of these approaches and to extend their use for inserting short DNA sequences in vivo.

      The study provides a useful and well-executed comparison of two editing strategies in a vertebrate model. In particular, the finding that the nuclease-based approach shows higher efficiency for short insertions is of practical interest for functional studies. The authors also present convincing evidence supporting their conclusions, including sequencing and phenotypic validation at selected loci. These results support the reliability of the approach in this system.

      The overall conceptual advance remains somewhat limited, as the general strategy of delivering prime editing components in zebrafish has been described previously. The present study extends this work by comparing two editing modes and exploring insertion efficiency, which represents a useful but incremental advance.

      Regarding the comparison between the two systems, the authors have made efforts to address concerns about generalizability by adding data from additional loci and by refining the scope of their conclusions. These additions strengthen the manuscript. However, the comparison is still based on a relatively small number of loci, and the conclusions may therefore remain somewhat context-dependent.

      Overall, the authors largely achieve their stated aims of comparing two editing strategies and demonstrating their applicability in zebrafish. The data generally support the conclusions, particularly within the tested loci. The work provides practical value to the community, especially for researchers seeking efficient strategies for short sequence insertion in this model system, although its broader impact is somewhat limited by its incremental nature.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This article reports a cost-effectiveness comparison of intramural and extramural that NIH funded between 2009 and 2019. Using data obtained from NIH RePORTER, they linked total project costs to publication output, using robust validated metrics including Relative Citation Ratio (RCR), Approximate Potential to Translate (APT), and clinical citations. They find that after adjusting for confounders in regression and propensity-score analyses, extramural projects were generally more cost-effective, though intramural projects were more cost effective for generating clinical citations. They also describe differences in the topics of intramural- and extramural-funded publications, with intramural projects more likely to generate papers on viral infections and immunity or cancer metastases and survival, but less likely to generate papers on pregnancy and maternal health, brain connectivity and tasks, and adolescent experiences and depression. The authors aptly describe the different natures of the intramural and extramural funding models, including that extramural researchers spend much time writing grant applications and that the work described in extramural publications often receives funding from sources other than NIH grants.

      Strengths:

      The authors leveraged publicly available data (including RePORTER and the iCite repository) and used robust validated metrics (RCR, APT, clinical citations). They carefully considered a large number of confounders, including those related to the PI, and performed several well-described regression analyses.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The goal of this proposal was to understand how two separate projection neurons from the medial prefrontal cortex, those innervating the basolateral amygdala (BLA) and nucleus accumbens (NAc), contribute to the encoding of emotional behaviors. The authors record the activity of these different neuron classes across three different behavioral environments. They propose that, although both populations are involved in emotional behavior, the two populations have diverging activity patterns in certain contexts. A subset of projections to the NAc appear particularly important for social behavior. They then attempt to link these changes to the emotional state of the animal and changes in synaptic connectivity.

      Strengths:

      The behavioral data builds on previous studies of these projection neurons supporting distinct roles in behavior and extend upon previous work by looking at the heterogeneity within different projection neurons across contexts, this is important to understand the "neural code" within the PFC that contributes to such behaviours and how it is relayed to other brain structures.

      Weaknesses:

      The diversity of neurons mediating these projections and their targeting within the BLA and NAc is not explored. These are not homogeneous structures and so one possibility is that some of the diversity within their findings may relate to targeting of different sub-structures within BLA or NAc or the diversity of projection neuron subtypes that mediate these pathways. This is an important future direction for this work but does not detract from the main finding as reported.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors have made several corrections to the original manuscript. For example, they revised the bootstrapping analysis to avoid arbitrarily inflating the degrees of freedom. However, most substantive concerns remain inadequately addressed.

      (1) The primary issue is still the lack of baseline models against which to benchmark the predictive performance of the proposed DenseNet model. This concern was raised independently by two reviewers. Without such benchmarks, it is difficult to interpret the reported results in the context of prior work on MRI-based cognition prediction.

      Notably, the authors state: "While we compared our model with the connectome predictive modeling (CPM) approach and observed better performance with our deep learning framework, we did not conduct a comprehensive benchmark across all available machine learning methods, nor was this the aim of the present study."

      However, I could NOT find any discussion or results related to the CPM model in the manuscript. It is therefore unclear whether the DenseNet model was actually statistically compared with CPM, and, if so, how the comparison was conducted.

      Note that the statement, "While Vieira et al. show that the majority (76%) of prior studies used linear modeling approaches, including CPM and penalized regressions, these models are often vulnerable to overfitting, especially when applied to high-dimensional fMRI data," is not entirely accurate. Linear models typically have far fewer parameters than deep-learning models and are therefore often less prone to overfitting. In fact, it is well established that deep-learning models are particularly susceptible to overfitting and usually require substantially larger sample sizes to achieve stable and reliable performance. Although deep-learning models may outperform shallower models once sufficient data are available and training is well controlled, this does not justify the authors' claim as stated. I therefore disagree with the argument put forward by the authors.

      The authors further justify the absence of benchmarking by stating: "In this context, deep learning was employed as a flexible framework capable of modelling high-dimensional functional connectivity patterns across cognitive states, rather than as a claim of inherent methodological superiority. Thus, our goal was not to propose a universally superior prediction model, but rather to test how brain state influences predictive utility for WM and EM using a deep learning approach." However, most shallow models can likewise be applied across different brain states and cognitive targets. This rationale does not establish deep learning as a uniquely appropriate or necessary choice. If deep learning is indeed a better approach in this context, the authors should demonstrate this empirically through appropriate benchmarking against established baseline models.

      (2) Additional analysis shows that "BCG is not significantly associated with cognition itself". This is the most perplexing result. This is like saying Brain Age Gap is not related to chronological Age. It is counterintuitive since the Brain Age Gap is calculated by chronological age minus actual age, and most research has shown a strong relationship between the Brain Age Gap and age.

      If the brain cognition gap is not related to cognition, is it possible that the results found are mainly due to the predictive model not fitting well with another dataset? Regardless, the lack of association between BCG and cognition deserves a discussion.

      (3) I still do not fully understand the rationale of the mediation analysis. The analysis and findings are still not related to aims 1 and 2, since DA and entropy are not part of the prediction models. But I appreciate the explanation that this part is related to the authors' previous work, and that the authors attempted to link to them somehow.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Shapiro et al. set out to verify the American Beefalo Association's claim that Beefalo cattle possess 37.5% bison ancestry. They employ a comprehensive range of well-established population genomics methods to estimate ancestry in these hybrid populations, including PCA, ADMIXTURE, D and F statistics, and local ancestry inference. Their findings conclusively demonstrate that most Beefalo lack the claimed bison ancestry, with only 8 out of 47 samples showing any detectable bison ancestry, ranging from 2-18%.

      Strengths:

      The primary strength of this analysis lies in the comprehensive dataset available to the authors, which includes important foundational Beefalo individuals and various reference populations. The rigorous and multi-faceted methodological approach employs several well-established techniques in population genomics for detecting and measuring admixture. Each method used has a firm basis in the field, providing consistent and robust results. The authors' approach of using PCA to initially assess the data within a global context, followed by more specific analyses using ADMIXTURE and D-statistics, provides a clear and logical progression of evidence. The presentation of these results in figures is particularly effective, clearly illustrating the key findings of the study. Additionally, the examination of both autosomal and sex chromosome ancestry offers a more complete understanding of Beefalo genetic composition and the mechanics of bison-cattle hybridisation.

      Weaknesses:

      One limitation of this analysis is the relatively low coverage (~2x) of many Beefalo samples. However, the authors have taken steps to mitigate biases that may arise from this, and their downsampling experiment demonstrates that this level of coverage is appropriate for summarising species-level ancestry across Bos. Another potential weakness is the limited sampling of contemporary Beefalo populations, as the study focuses primarily on historical samples. The authors have justified this choice on the grounds that contemporary Beefalo breeding involves no further bison input, so founder-era individuals are the most informative samples for addressing the study's central question.

      Appraisal:

      The authors have clearly achieved their primary aim using a rigorous and comprehensive methodology. Their extensive dataset and multi-faceted analytical approach provide strong support for their conclusions. The study not only addresses its main research question but also reveals unexpected insights into Beefalo genetics, particularly the presence of zebu ancestry, predominantly from Brahman cattle.

      Discussion:

      This study is valuable for several reasons beyond its primary findings. First, it definitively addresses and refutes the claim of 37.5% bison ancestry in Beefalo, providing crucial information for those studying these interspecies hybrids and the viability of their offspring. Second, it reveals the unexpected presence of zebu ancestry, predominantly from Brahman cattle, in many Beefalo, raising intriguing questions about the breed's development and the potential role of zebu cattle in achieving desired traits. This finding suggests that the distinctive appearance of Beefalo may be due in part to zebu admixture rather than bison ancestry. Third, the study highlights the significant barriers to admixture between bison and cattle, both in controlled breeding programs and potentially in wild populations. This has important implications for conservation genetics and our understanding of gene flow between these species. Lastly, the study demonstrates the power of genomic analysis in verifying breed claims and understanding the complex history of domestic animal breeds. These findings open new avenues for research in bovine genomics, breed development, and the dynamics of interspecies hybridisation.

      Comments on revised version:

      Thanks for the responses, which address my comments in full. I have no further concerns.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      The authors investigate how parallel olfactory pathways contribute to CO₂ valence processing in Drosophila. By combining multiple approaches, the study identifies LN23 as a previously unrecognized component of the CO₂ circuit and proposes a model in which distinct downstream pathways contribute to aversive and attractive behavioral responses. More broadly, the work aims to connect circuit organization with context-dependent sensory processing and behavioral valence.

      Strengths

      A major strength of the study is the integration of multiple complementary approaches spanning anatomy, circuit analysis, and behavior. This combination provides a rich and valuable framework for understanding how CO₂ information may be processed across different levels of the olfactory system. The identification of LN23 as an important component of the CO₂ pathway is particularly interesting and will likely be useful for future studies investigating olfactory processing, behavioral state modulation, and valence coding. The connectomic and anatomical analyses also provide a valuable resource for the community.

      Another strength of the manuscript is its conceptual ambition. The work moves beyond a simple labeled-line view of olfactory processing and proposes that flexible behavioral responses may emerge from interactions between parallel downstream pathways and multimodal integration centers. The behavioral manipulations further support an important role for LN23 in CO₂-related behaviors.

      Weaknesses

      Several aspects of the conceptual interpretation would benefit from additional clarification or more cautious framing relative to the current experimental evidence. In particular, the distinction between atmospheric versus experimentally elevated CO₂ conditions, as well as the interpretation of chronic exposure in terms of habituation, remains somewhat unclear throughout the manuscript.

      Some conclusions regarding valence coding and multimodal integration also appear more inferential than directly demonstrated experimentally, especially when moving from anatomical connectivity to functional interpretation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study uses monkey single-unit recordings to examine the role of the STN in combining noisy sensory information with reward bias during decision-making between saccade directions. Using multiple linear regressions and clustering approaches, the authors overall show that a highly heterogeneous activity in the STN reflects almost all aspects of the task, including choice direction, stimulus coherence, reward context and expectation, choice evaluation, and their interactions. The authors report in particular how three classes of neurons map to different decision processes evaluated via the fitting of a drift-diffusion model. Overall, the study provides evidence for functionally diverse and anatomically intermingled populations of STN neurons, supporting multiple roles in perceptual and reward-based decision-making.

      This study follows up on work conducted in previous years by the same team and complements it. Extracellular recordings in monkeys trained to perform a complex decision-making task remain a remarkable achievement, particularly in brain structures that are difficult to target, such as the sub-thalamic nucleus. The authors conducted numerous analyses of STN activities, using sophisticated statistical approaches and functional computational modeling.

      One criticism that I would still make in the revised version of the paper concerns the description of the behavior of the two monkeys which is still minimal, while acknowledging differences in their choice and RT performance that reflect "individual differences in sensitivity to motion stimulus and a common heuristic-based satisficing strategy". This sentence is not clear to me. Moreover, the potential consequences of these differences on neuronal activity are only considered in the cluster analysis done for each of the two animals separately and for which it turns out there is no notable difference.

      Compared to the first version of the paper, the cluster analysis in this revised version yields three distinct populations instead of the previous four. While the authors suggest that these subpopulations play important roles in encoding different aspects of decision-making, the identification of three rather than four subpopulations seems to me an important update that warrants discussion.

      Finally, I think it would have been interesting to identify the level of collinearity in the model proposed by the authors (equation 7). Indeed, one can expect significant collinearity between some of the proposed explanatory factors of neuronal activity, such as choice and coherence level, for example. Similarly, for the analysis relating neuron activity to decision evaluation signals (p 16), firing rates calculated using sliding averages with 1-ms steps are compared, but the method does not specify controls for multiple comparisons or for non-independent data.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Many insects possess extremely sensitive olfactory systems that can detect chemical signals from distances of several kilometers. For decades, the arms race between bats and insects has served as a prime example of acoustic co-evolution. The auditory adaptations of insects to echolocation have been well documented. Cricket has a multi-sensory predator recognition system with keen olfactory, tactile, and auditory senses. However, whether crickets can use the scent of bats to avoid them remains unknown at present. The authors hypothesized that cricket prey (Loxoblemmus equestris) might eavesdrop on predator bat (Scotophilus kuhlii) VOCs as an early warning. L. equestris is one of the prey species of S. kuhlii, and the authors demonstrated that the body odor of the insectivorous bat S. kuhlii triggers robust avoidance and electrophysiological responses in the cricket L. equestris, and that a single compound, (-)-limonene, is sufficient to elicit this avoidance in the laboratory and suppress calling in the field. Overall, this paper has a complete chain of evidence and should be a highly praised study.

      Comments:

      (1) Olfactory eavesdropping can transcend the evolutionary divide between vertebrate predators and invertebrate prey, enabling invertebrates to trigger defensive avoidance behaviors in response to predator-derived volatile odors. This phenomenon is empirically well-documented and requires no excessive emphasis.

      (2) Without quantitative analysis and without knowing the relative content of this key substance limonene, I don't quite understand how to determine the concentration of limonene standard for EAD, as well as the concentration in field experiments. How is the concentration of limonene determined in field spraying, and is this actually the case in the wild environment?

      (3) Figures 1C and D should compare the GC-EAD response of L. equestris to the odor of bat body and the odor of bat nasal secretions. It should not be compared with the air control group. Figure 1D has the same problem.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      To investigate the detachment and reattachment kinetics of kinesin-1, 2 and 3 motors against loads oriented parallel to the microtubule, the authors used a DNA tensiometer approach comprising a DNA entropic spring attached to the microtubule on one end and a motor on the other. They found that for kinesin-1 and kinesin-2 the dissociation rates at stall were smaller than the detachment rates during unloaded runs. With regard to the complex reattachment kinetics found in the experiments, the authors argue that these findings were consistent with a weakly-bound 'slip' state preceding motor dissociation from the microtubule. The behavior of kinesin-3 was different and (by the definition of the authors) only showed prolonged "detachment" rates when disregarding some of the slip events. The authors performed stochastic simulations which recapitulate the load-dependent detachment and reattachment kinetics for all three motors. They argue that the presented results provide insight into how kinesin-1, -2 and -3 families transport cargo in complex cellular geometries and compete against dynein during bidirectional transport.

      Strengths:

      The present study is timely, as significant concerns have been raised previously about studying motor kinetics in optical (single-bead) traps where significant vertical forces are present. Moreover, the obtained data are of high quality and the experimental procedures are clearly described.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Using E. coli K-12 as a model system, the authors investigated how phosphate (Pi) depletion induces polymyxin resistance in Enterobacteriaceae, which notably lack the canonical phospholipid remodeling pathways commonly associated with phosphate starvation responses. They demonstrated that low-phosphate conditions promote L-Ara4N modification of lipid A, thereby enhancing polymyxin resistance. Proteomic analyses revealed significant upregulation of the arn operon and ugd under phosphate-limited conditions, and promoter activity assays further confirmed that both promoters are strongly induced during Pi depletion. Through gene deletion experiments, the authors showed that arn expression is regulated by the PmrAB two-component system, whereas ugd is controlled by PhoBR under low-phosphate conditions. Using ICP-MS analysis, they further found that phosphate limitation increases cell-associated Fe levels, and that reducing Fe availability abolishes PmrAB-dependent activation of the arn operon. Finally, the study demonstrated that Mg supplementation and Fe chelation can suppress polymyxin resistance, highlighting the critical role of metal homeostasis in phosphate depletion-induced antimicrobial resistance.

      Strengths:

      Overall, I found this study to be well conducted, with convincing results that strongly support the proposed model. Through comprehensive genetic analyses and detailed characterization of metal ion homeostasis and membrane lipid modifications, the authors uncovered a novel regulatory connection among Mg²⁺, Fe³⁺, and the PmrAB pathway, a key driver of polymyxin resistance. These findings are highly interesting and have important implications for understanding the evolution of the Fe-sensing PmrAB system, as well as the broader role of nutrient availability in shaping antibiotic resistance.

      Weaknesses:

      I did not identify any particular weaknesses.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Synesthesia is a neurological condition where stimulation of one sensory channel leads to involuntary, automatic, and consistent experience of another, unrelated percept. For example, Sir Francis Galton (1880, Nature) famously described the robust tendency of some individual (synesthetes) to associate numerals with a distinct color. Ever since, synesthesia keeps attracting a broad interest in the cognitive neurosciences in light of its implications for the study of domains such as perception, consciousness, and brain connectivity, among others.

      Strauch, Leenaars, and Rouw measured pupil size in a group of 16 grapheme-color synesthetes and two matched control groups. The participants were presented with gray digits - that is, visual stimuli having identical physical properties in terms of brightness. Each participant subsequently rated the corresponding evoked color and brightness: unlike controls, synesthetes did so in a very consistent and reliable fashion. Accordingly, this was also shown in their pupils: despite the same objective luminance, digits associated with brighter percepts caused their pupils to constrict and digits associated with darker percepts caused their pupils to dilate more than controls. These results highlight how crossmodal correspondences are deeply rooted in synesthetes, and puts forward pupillometry as a particularly appealing biomarker for some phenomenological experience (at least those grounded in "brightness").

      Further strengths of the technique are its temporal resolution and its responsiveness to several constructs. Across several tasks, the authors show for example that responses to synesthetic light are somewhat slower than responses to real light (i.e., they are likely mediated), but at the same time faster than responses to mental imagery. The role of mental imagery can also be reasonably dismissed when considering the second feature of pupil size: its responsiveness to mental effort and cognitive load. The pupils tend to dilate with demanding, challenging tasks, and this was the case when control participants were asked to report the color of a digit for which they did not consistently experience a synesthetic association. The same task was, instead, seemingly effortless for synesthetes, again speaking in favor of the automaticity of number-color correspondences in their case.

      Overall, the findings by Strauch, Leenaars, and Rouw are highly significant for the field and likely to be impactful. The strength of their evidence, when accounting for the relatively small sample size and the inherent variability of both phenomenology (color perception and subjective reporting) and physiology (pupil size), is adequate and sufficiently convincing.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study offers a thorough analysis of the prevalence of pain in women with polycystic ovary syndrome (PCOS) and its associations with health outcomes across various racial groups. Furthermore, the research investigates the prevalence of PCOS and pain among different racial demographics, as well as the increased risk of developing various conditions in comparison to individuals who have PCOS alone.

      Strengths:

      The study emphasizes pain as a significant comorbidity of PCOS, an area that is critically underexplored in existing literature. The findings regarding the increased prevalence of some of the diseases in the PCOS + pain group provide valuable direction for future research and clinical care. I believe physicians should incorporate pain score assessments into their clinical practice to improve patients' quality of life and raise awareness about pain management. If future research focuses on the mechanisms of pain, it would provide a better understanding of pain and allow for a focus on the underlying causes rather than just symptomatic management. The study also highlights the association between PCOS+pain and various comorbidities, such as obesity, hypertension, and type 2 diabetes, as well as conditions like infertility and ovarian cysts, offering a holistic view of the burden of PCOS.

      Weaknesses:

      Due to the nature of retrospective design, some data may not be readily available in the EHR system. Diagnosis of PCOS, pain is based on ICD codes, which may lead to misclassification and may not capture symptom severity or patient-reported experiences.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Since its original discovery, the mechanistic basis for TCT-mediated pathogenesis of Bordetella pertussis has been a moving target and difficult to uncouple from confounding variables. The current study provides some exciting data that suggest PGLYRP-1 modulates host responses upon 'activation' by TCT. While there are some strengths associated with the unbiased approaches and collective data to support the claims associated with TCT and PGLYRP-1's function in this system, caution should be used when interpreting and extrapolating some the information provided. While many of the initial concerns were addressed, one concern remains: using whole, intact PG sacculi from other species for comparative studies with a fragment of released PG (i.e., TCT).

      Comments on revised version.

      I have no further comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The JAK-STAT pathway (JSP) exhibits cell-type-specific functional heterogeneity in breast cancer. This study investigates the JSP in breast cancer and its response to anti-PD‑1 immunotherapy. JSP displays distinct cell‑type heterogeneity: it promotes malignant phenotypes and immunosuppression in tumor cells, while enhancing cytotoxicity and reducing exhaustion in T cells. Elevated JSP expression correlates with improved immunotherapy responses, especially in triple‑negative breast cancer. These findings highlight the paradoxical roles of JSP, indicating that broad inhibition may compromise anti‑tumor immunity.

      Strengths:

      The major strengths of this study include the comprehensive characterization JSP heterogeneity across epithelial, tumor, and T cells in breast cancer. The identification of JSP and STAT4 as predictive biomarkers for immunotherapy response, particularly in triple‑negative breast cancer, provides clinically relevant insights for patient stratification.

      Weaknesses:

      The corresponding content has been revised.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Savage et al. investigate the synchronization of retinal Ca2+ waves with developmental cell death, microglia activation, and vascular outgrowth. These developmental processes occur through a mechanism where apoptotic cells release ATP through Panx-1 channels to stimulate both Ca2+ retinal waves and microglia activation. Using scRNAseq, the authors classify autofluorescence cell clusters (ACCs) at the leading edge of vasculature outgrowth as Hmox-1+ microglia. From here, they show microglia engulfment of apoptotic RGCs, and the potential release of ATP may contribute to Ca2+ wave generation. The authors demonstrate these mechanisms through the use of two pharmacological agents to either block the ATP release from Panx-1 or block receptor binding to ATP. Furthermore, while previous studies have described the site of initiation of retinal Ca2+ waves as random, this study shows that the initiation of Ca2+ waves is biased to the leading edge of vascular growth in the developing retina. To do this, the authors use a combination of wide-field Ca2+ imaging and multi-electrode arrays to pinpoint the sites of Ca2+ wave initiation in the developing retina.

      Strengths:

      The authors use several techniques to interrogate these mechanisms, including single-cell RNAseq, wide-field Ca2+ imaging, and multi-electrode arrays. With these experiments, this manuscript proposes several novel ideas, such as ATP as the Ca2+ wave-initiating cue, and the localization of the Ca2+ wave initiation to the leading edge of vascular growth.

      Weaknesses:

      The main weakness of the manuscript is the overreliance on only two pharmacological agents to test the central hypotheses. These conclusions would be strengthened if, in addition to their pharmacological manipulations, they used genetic knockout models to perturb programmed cell death or ATP release (i.e., BAX-KO, Panx-1 KO).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors set out to better understand the genetic mechanisms underlying thermal adaptation in insects. They experimentally evolved diamondback moth (Plutella xylostella) populations - a pest species with a wide distribution - under both hot (12h:12h 32{degree sign}C/27{degree sign}C) and cold (15{degree sign}C/10{degree sign}C) thermal conditions, and conducted phenotypic assays and metabolic and transcriptomic profiling to analyze how populations changed to deal with this thermal stress compared to the nonevolved ancestral population (constant 26{degree sign}C). Phenotypic assays showed that evolved hot populations had increased survival at high temperatures (42-43{degree sign}C) while evolved cold populations had lower freezing points compared to the ancestral population. When measured at the constant 26{degree sign}C conditions, metabolic and transcriptomic profiles of 3rd instar larvae from the evolved population were distinctive from the ancestral population, with a set of overlapping metabolic and transcriptomic pathways that were significantly differentially expressed in both hot and cold evolved populations compared to the ancestral. The authors narrowed down this set of candidate genes further by focusing on genes with high expression levels overall, whose expression profile was correlated with differentially expressed metabolites, and that contained mutants in both hot and cold strains. From this set, they chose the PxSODC gene for further functional validation, as it has previously been shown to be involved in the response of insects to abiotic stress with its antioxidative role in cellular defense. At the constant 26{degree sign}C, this gene showed lower expression across development in evolved strains compared to the ancestral population, while it showed similar expression patterns under thermal stress. Knockdown of PxSODC resulted in decreased survival rates at high temperatures and higher freezing points compared to the ancestral population. Based on this validation, the authors hypothesize that the non-synonymous mutation in the PxSODC gene that they found in the cold and hot evolved populations might alter the conformation of the PxSODC protein, increasing enzyme capacity. Their experimental evolution experiment furthermore indicates the capacity of the pest species, the diamondback moth, to adapt to a wide range of temperatures, providing insights into its capacity for global dispersal.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors did a tremendous amount of work to characterize the mechanisms underlying thermal adaptation in the diamondback moth, artificially selecting populations for three years in the lab and characterizing how they evolved as a result at different biological levels: from phenotypes in different life stages, to larval metabolites and gene transcription, to functionally validating how one of the resulting gene candidates influences the capacity to deal with thermal stress.

      (2) The paper identifies and provides further evidence for candidate genetic mechanisms that might be particularly important for thermal adaptation in insects, including lipid metabolism, oxidoreductase activity, and DNA methylation. It is furthermore interesting that the authors found similar mechanisms to be involved in both the adaptation to cold and hot environments. Their functional validation of some of the genes involved in these mechanisms is very useful to understand how these genes might be causally involved in insect thermal adaptation.

      (3) The paper also has applied value: the diamondback moth is a pest species with a wide distribution, so understanding its adaptive capacity to different thermal environments is important for predicting the prevalence and potential further range expansion of this species under future climate change.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Cong et al. investigated the regulatory effects of ABHD6 on AMPARs. The authors performed adequate electrophysiology recordings to show the exact pattern of this regulation and covered major critical points.

      Strengths:

      The authors have performed high-quality ephys recordings and examined all potential regulatory aspects of ABHD6 on AMPARs. This is important to understand the AMPAR functions.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors discussed CNIH-2 extensively from line 92-110 in the introduction, however, they did not perform related experiments. I suggest they move this part to the discussion where they also discussed the roles of CNIH.

      (2) The authors need to report the "n" for all the experiments they have presented in this manuscript. How many cells were recorded in each condition? How many batches? This information has to be in all of the figure legends, but it is missing except Fig. 4.

      (3) One question is what the physiological meanings of this regulatory effect are. The authors may consider adding some discussions.

      (4) About statistics. The authors need to add more details and make sure their statistics sound. For example, they also need to check the equality of variances. In their Table EVs, where the P values are reported, the authors need to report which statistics they have used, one-way ANOVA, K-W test, or others, and the exact post-hoc test type for each comparison. For one-way ANOVA, report the F values simultaneously with the P values in all figure legends.

      (5) Fig. 3J, the authors need to correct the label of the Y axis. It is shifted.

      Comments on revised version.

      In the revised manuscript, the authors have addressed all my concerns. The manuscript has been substantially strengthened by additional data and discussion.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Burnsdon et al. aim to study PIK3CA-related overgrowth spectrum (PROS) by establishing a mosaic zebrafish model with overexpression of pik3ca carrying hotspot mutations, coupled with an mScarlet+ reporter. Using fluorescence microscopy, the authors demonstrated that overexpression of pik3ca with a number of hotspot mutations led to mesodermal and particularly vascular malformations in the zebrafish model. Interestingly, they found a paucity of mScarlet+ mutant cells in the vascular lesions, consistent with the finding of low PIK3CA mutation burden in PROS tissue. Such data suggest a non-cell-autonomous effect of PIK3CA mutation. Following this logic, the authors performed single-cell RNA-Sequencing on zebrafish overexpressing WT pik3ca and mutant pik3ca at 19 hpf, and demonstrated widespread transcriptomic perturbations across multiple lineages, including lineage frequencies, key cell pathways, and cell-cell interactions. Importantly, they demonstrate that mScarlet+ cells carrying mutant pik3ca cluster separately from other cell types, do not demonstrate clear lineage identity, and have a general downregulation in signaling components.

      Overall, the conclusions in the manuscript are well-supported by the presented data. The imaging studies are particularly convincing. The transcriptomic analysis generated a list of potential pathways to further investigate and potentially target with future therapeutic interventions. Importantly, this study provides a valuable in vivo model of PROS that: 1) recapitulates key features of PROS (e.g., multiple mesodermal defects, paucity of mutation burden in lesions suggesting non-cell-autonomous interactions); 2) is scalable; and 3) offers direct visualization of lesion development, compatible with time-course live imaging. This model will be valuable to further understand PROS and potentially study other diseases where the PIK3CA pathway is altered (e.g., certain cancers).

      The following are not necessarily weaknesses of the data, but rather suggestions where the manuscript could be further strengthened:

      (1) The model recapitulates the variability of mesodermal lesions in PROS. It would be valuable to utilize this model to further study factors that are associated with the development of more severe lesions (e.g., by comparing samples with more severe lesions to those unaffected despite carrying the mutations, Figure 1F).

      (2) ScRNA-seq analysis could be enriched with a comparison between cells overexpressing mutant pik3ca vs. those overexpressing WT pik3ca.

      (3) In the scRNA-Seq analysis, it is curious that the C0 cluster, enriched with mScarlet+ cells, is found to have downregulated signaling interactions (Fig. 5C), yet exerts a widespread non-cell-autonomous effect. Meanwhile, there is also a noticeable loss of certain lineages (e.g., notochord, Figure 4E) and related cell-cell interactions (e.g., notochord-related interaction, Figure 5A). A deeper exploration of the basis of the non-cell-autonomous effect would be valuable.

      (4) The scRNA-Seq analysis was performed at one time point (19 hpf). Additional analysis (not necessarily by scRNA-Seq) at other time points to study whether findings at 19 hpf are persistent throughout development or undergo dynamic changes (e.g., cell fate/state of mSc+ mutant cells) would be helpful.

      (5) The scRNA-Seq analysis provides a valuable list of perturbed interactions that could be targeted by future therapeutic approaches. Validation of the scRNA-Seq findings with protein-level analysis, and studying the effect of targeting some of the pathways on the disease phenotype, would offer valuable data for the community.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents an ambitious and technically challenging spatial-transcriptomic atlas of 26 gastruloids using seqFISH. The authors introduce quantitative metrics (mixing score, exposure index, L-metric / scL-metric, spatial L-metric, triplets) to characterize spatial organization at multiple scales. The dataset is valuable, and several analyses are original, particularly the rank-based L-metric family for mutual exclusivity.

      Strengths:

      The authors generate one of the most detailed spatial transcriptomic datasets of gastruloids to date. They propose creative computational metrics (L-metric/scL-metric) to quantify mutual exclusivity of gene expression without predefined thresholds, and they explore organizational principles from single-cell topology to cluster-level structure. Many observations align well with known gastruloid biology, such as posterior robustness and anterior variability. The writing is generally clear, and the figures are rich.

      Weaknesses:

      Several central claims rely on metrics whose computation and justification are insufficiently explained, making it difficult to assess how robust or interpretable the results are. Many choices in the analysis appear arbitrary or are insufficiently motivated (normalization schemes, choice of parameters such as the number of neighbors, the distance cutoffs, hierarchical clustering setup, and so on). The interpretations of spatial consistency, gene-program inference, and endothelial heterogeneity are plausible but might be stronger than the evidence currently supports.

      The manuscript would benefit from stronger benchmarking, quantification of uncertainty, and explicit controls for known artifacts in spatial transcriptomics (e.g., spillover, 2D slicing, cell type assignment entropy). The biological insights are promising, but since several depend on methodological assumptions that have not yet been demonstrated to be stable, they would benefit from clearer methodological explanation.

      The work is rich and could become a reference dataset. Then, clarifying and validating the quantitative methods will considerably strengthen the impact and reliability of the conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The study addresses the long-standing question in molecular biology and genetics: why has nature selected the current genetic code (SGC, or standard genetic code)? The authors have tested 'error minimization theory', one of the prevailing hypotheses to explain this. Their approach is to create a minimum genetic code (MGC) and its variants (3^9 theoretical possible codes). Using three parameters to quantify the effect of mutations (Polarity, volume, and hydropathy), they computationally test the cost of these genetic codes (3^9) by simulations. Finally, they test this cost experimentally using an in vitro translation system with 10 select genetic code variants with a range of costs (low to high). They use three randomly mutated reporter genes for this purpose - beta-galactosidase, luciferase, and mSG. They find no correlation between the cost of the genetic code and the reporters' output. Based on these observations, they suggest that error-minimization theory may not explain the current egocentric code.

      The question they are asking is very exciting, and their approach is solid. The authors are very careful in their analyses and conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors of this study are trying to resolve how cellular infection by enteropathogenic E. coli (EPEC) subverts cellular signaling pathways to promote infection and dampen immune responses. Specifically, alteration in calcium dynamics has been evidenced in the prior literature as a potential initiator of these adaptions, and this study provides ideas and mechanistic detail as to how cellular calcium dynamics may be subverted by pathogens.

      Strengths:

      The clear strengths of this paper relate to the new ideas inherent in the proposed hypothesis and their support from the experimental approaches used. Overall, the proposed work provides new ideas in this area, which will benefit from further investigation. Certainly, this is an interesting and challenging paradigm to pick apart mechanistically, and is important for improving treatments from intestinal infections. The authors have provided additional data to clarify and expand on concerns raised during the original review, and these additions are helpful.

      Comments on revised version.

      Thorough response to original review. No further comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Zhang and colleagues examine the role of participant selection in creating and using functional templates to improve analyses using hyperalignment. Hyperalignment aligns participants' functional MRI data to a shared functional template, analogous to the anatomical templates used to bring anatomical MRI data into a shared space (e.g., MNI152). The question of appropriate template creation is especially pressing for population-level analyses, where a large number of demographic groups (e.g., different age ranges, clinical statuses) may be included in the same analysis. These different demographic groups may have differences in their functional organization that complicate the creation of a single study-specific functional template.

      To provide an initial investigation of the potential effect of demographic-specific templates, the authors use the publicly available Cam-CAN dataset which contains participants from 18 to 87 years of age. They define a young adult (< 45 years of age) and an older adult group (> 65 years of age) from this dataset with approximately the same number of participants. They investigate whether "age-congruent" templates (i.e. defined in the same age group they are used) improve three analyses where hyperalignment has been previously shown to boost performance: inter-subject correlation, predicting individual connectomes, and predicting individual functional responses. Using the Cam-CAN derived older adult template, they then replicate the ISC analyses using the publicly available Dallas Lifespan Brain Study (DLBS).

      Overall, the presented results are highly suggestive that age-congruent templates consistently improve performance, though the absolute effects are small.

      Strengths:

      The use of a separate validation sample-re-using the same template calculated with Cam-CAN-highlights the potential of developing independent templates for individual demographic groups and then distributing these for wider use, analogous to the MNI templates that are widely used throughout the field of neuroimaging. This suggests that the potential impact of this framework is significant.

      Weaknesses:

      In their revision, the authors have addressed the previously raised "weaknesses" by providing guidance for researchers interested in using age-specific hyperalignment templates in practice.

      Impact:

      Overall, this work is likely to encourage future development of age-specific functional templates in the imaging community.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors describe a tunable Bessel beam two-photon microscope (tBessel-TPFM) designed to overcome a common limitation of Bessel-based volumetric imaging: axial shifts of the effective focus during Bessel beam parameter tuning. Their optical design allows independent control of axial beam length and resolution while keeping the axial center fixed. This is extensively validated through simulations and experiments.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of the work is the breadth of validation combined with the level of technical detail provided. The authors carefully characterize the optical performance of the system and clearly explain the design choices and underlying derivations, which will make it easier for others to understand and implement. The authors demonstrate the utility of the method across several in vivo applications, including neurovascular imaging, blood flow measurements, optogenetic stimulation, and microglial dynamics.

      Weaknesses:

      In the in vivo demonstrations, the authors employ different Bessel beam configurations across experiments, but the beam parameters are not dynamically tuned during live imaging. A video example showing continuous or interactive tuning of the Bessel beam within a single in vivo imaging sequence would further highlight the practical advantages of this platform and strengthen the case for its potential applications. In addition, while excitation powers are reported, the manuscript does not place these values in the broader context of known photodamage thresholds for two-photon microscopy, which would be helpful to the readers. Denoising/image restoration are applied in one of the in vivo examples, but it is unclear why this step was used specifically for this dataset and whether it was necessary to achieve adequate SNR or primarily included as an additional demonstration.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigated the effect of prolonged iron limitation (which does stop growth but does not lead to cell death) alters central metabolism in M. tuberculosis. The major tool they used is metabolomics combined with stable isotope tracing. They show that the Krebs cycle is still active, despite the fact that it is dependent on some iron-dependent enzymes. They show that carbon flux through the oxidative branch of the Krebs cycle is stalled, resulting in the accumulation of metabolites, such as malate and alpha-ketoglutarate that are partially secreted. Apparently, the carbon flux from glycolysis is partially diverted to the reductive branch of the Krebs cycle. This is not achieved by using the glyoxylate shunt but probably through the GABA shunt. This unprecedented split of the Krebs cycle and malate secretion allows a continuous flow of carbon through the core of carbon metabolism, overcoming the metabolic stalling triggered by iron starvation.

      Strengths:

      Novel insight in the central metabolism of a major pathogen and its adaptation to iron starvation. Carefully conducted experimentation. Paper ends with a clear and helpful model.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors show some surprising and important findings, but would need a little more effort to really substantiate this. Especially the role of the GABA shunt should be genetically tested, as they did for ICL and the glyoxylate shunt.

      Also, the dataset 1 is not very convincing, it is only based on transcriptomics and shown with up or down, hardly a strong base for major conclusions. The very least you want is actual differences, preferable on the protein level, where it really counts....

      Comments on the revised version:

      In the revised version all these points were appropriately dealt with and discussed, although some of them textually and not experimentally, but for reasons that are logical.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors design a custom Bayesian model to estimate the probabilities of access, use and use given access of insecticide-treated nets in six African countries, providing sub-national estimates and inferring the average duration of ITN use and access. An individual-based model was employed to simulate malaria epidemics and estimate the effectiveness of different ITN distribution strategies. The study finds that the mean probability of use or access did not reach 80% (a universal coverage formerly targeted by WHO) for any of the regions even for biennial campaigns, demonstrates that switching from triennial to biennial distribution campaigns increases population use by 7.9%, and evaluates the impact of employing more efficient ITNs on P. falciparum prevalence.

      Strengths:

      The authors developed a data-driven model that accounts for data collection imperfections and sources of uncertainty while differentiating between ITN use and access. They developed a methodology to infer the timing of mass campaign from publicly available data instead of assuming fixed dates. The probability of use given access allows determining the regions where ITN distribution is least effective. This work can help better inform future interventions by identifying regions where increasing mass campaign frequency or employing better ITNs are most effective. Finally, in addition to insights on ITN access and use for the six countries analyzed, the paper contributes with a methodological framework that can likely be extended to other countries.

      Weaknesses:

      Since the models employed are rather complex, the methodology description may be hard to follow for some readers. In addition, the models assume many hypotheses, including exponential decay of ITN use/access and narrow prior distributions. It is worth noting that, in the revised version of the manuscript, the authors justified the choice of exponential decay and narrow prior distributions, and made a significant effort to clarify the methodology and the model equations.

      Comments on revised version:

      I appreciate the improvements made to the text. The methodology description is much clearer now. I have no further suggestions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Programmed DNA elimination is increasingly recognised as an important phenomenon across many species, including in animals. Exactly how widespread is still unclear, and the function of PDE is even more mysterious in most species where it has been described. PDE has been discovered in several nematode species, and in this manuscript, the authors carry out a more extensive search for PDE. They find PDE in many species, indicating that it is widespread across the phylum.

      Strengths:

      The large number of species across many different clades provides good evidence that the phenomenon has evolved many times independently. The work will therefore prompt many further studies characterising individual species, and potentially linking the evolution of the phenomenon to other features of these species' ecological characteristics.

      Weaknesses:

      The major technical weakness of this project is the assay that is used to evaluate PDE. First, this assay is clearly insensitive, as the authors acknowledge, O. tipulae, which has PDE, does not appear in their screen. Second, the assay gives no information about breakpoints and only limited, non-quantitative information about how much DNA is eliminated. Thus, their data really is only a preliminary screen, which would need to be confirmed by genomic assays.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors set out to test the extent to which differences in learning capacity and experience contribute to behavioural variation in a genetically identical population under identical environmental conditions.

      Strengths:

      The authors developed and used a scaled-up version of a simple two-choice behavioural paradigm, allowing them to test thousands of individuals across multiple genotypes. They then deployed clever and powerful statistical analysis methods and provided compelling evidence for a role of variability in learning in the expression of behavioural variation.

      Weaknesses:

      There are no major weaknesses, although some level of longitudinal analysis to strengthen the evidence for a strict definition of individuality would be a welcome extension of a future study. In addition, it would have been very interesting, although understandably beyond the current scope, to delineate a potential source of learning variability in the brain.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript presents a substantial technical advance for the genetic manipulation of Blastocystis by establishing an integrated workflow for stable episomal transgenesis, antibiotic selection, clonal recovery, and reporter-based imaging in the ST7-B subtype. The study is particularly valuable because it combines multiple previously fragmented approaches into a coherent and practically applicable toolkit, including endogenous regulatory elements, optimized electroporation conditions, selectable markers, and anaerobic compatible fluorescent reporters. This methodological work greatly expands the molecular toolbox and future studies focused on both basic and infection biology can now build on the ability to express and localize proteins in fixed as well as live cells.

      The microscopy data are convincing and clearly demonstrate functional reporter expression and successful recovery of stable transgenic lines. Nevertheless, because this is primarily a methodological paper, the study would be further strengthened by the inclusion of Western blot validation of reporter expression and bicistronic constructs. In particular, biochemical analysis of the P2A-containing constructs would help assess the efficiency of ribosomal skipping and exclude the possible presence of uncleaved fusion proteins, thereby providing stronger support for the interpretation of the imaging data and the functionality of the expression system.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Nian and colleagues comprehensively apply metabolomics, molecular, and genetic approaches to demonstrate that CLas hijacks the DA/DcDop2-miR-31a-AKH-JH signaling cascade to enhance lipid metabolism and fecundity in D. citri, while concurrently promoting its own replication.

      Strengths:

      These findings provide solid evidence of a mutualistic interaction between CLas proliferation and ovarian development in the insect host. This insight significantly advances our understanding of the molecular interplay between plant pathogens and vector insects and offers novel targets and strategies for HLB field management.

      Weaknesses:

      While the article investigates the involvement of dopamine signaling and specific microRNAs in enhancing fecundity and pathogen proliferation, it still needs to provide a detailed mechanistic understanding of these interactions. The precise molecular pathways and feedback mechanisms by which CLas manipulates dopamine signaling in Diaphorina citri remain unclear.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Ioakeimidis and colleagues studied miscrostructural abnormalities in N=56 Huntington's disease (HD) patients compared to N=57 normative controls. The authors used a powerful MRI Connectom scanner and applied the SANDI model to estimate the soma size, neurite size, soma density, and extracellular fraction in key subcortical nuclei related to HD. In the striatum, they found decreased soma density and increased soma size, which also seemed to become more pronounced in advanced HD individuals in the final exploratory analyses. The authors conducted important analyses to find whether the SANDI measures correlate with clinical scores (i.e., QMotor) and whether the variance of the striatal volume is explained by the SANDI measures. They found a relationship of SANDI measures to both.

      Strengths:

      The study is both innovative and of high interest for the HD community. The authors provide a rich pool of statistical analyses and results which anticipate the questions that may emerge in the HD research community. Statistics are carefully chosen and image processing is done with state-of-the-art methods and tools. The sample size gives sufficient credibility to the findings. Altogether, I think this study sets a milestone in the attempts of the HD community to understand neuropathological processes with non-invasive methods, and extends the current knowledge of microstructural anomalies identified in HD with diffusion MRI. More importantly, the newly identified anomalies in soma size and soma density open new avenues for studying these biological effects further, and perhaps develop these biomarkers for use in clinical trials.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) An important question is whether the SANDI measures, which require an expensive scanner and elaborate processing, are better biomarkers than the more traditional DTI measures. Can the authors compare the effect size of FA/MD with SANDI measures. In some of the plots and tables, FA/MD seem to have comparable, if not higher, correlations with QMotor or CAP scores. On the same vein, it is unclear whether DTI measures were included in hierarchical stepwise regression. I wonder if the stepwise models may have picked up FA/MD instead of SANDI measures if they are given a chance. Overall, I hope the authors can discuss their findings also in this light of cost vs. benefit of adopting SANDI in future studies, which is an important topic for clinical trials.

      (2) Similar to the above point, it is very important to consider how strong the biomarking signal is from SANDI measures compared to the good old striatal volume. Some plots seem to indicate that volumes still have the highest correlation with QMotor, and highest effect size in group comparisons. It would be helpful for the community to know where do the new SANDI measures stand compared to the most typically used volumes in terms of effect size.

      (3) The diffusion measures are inevitably correlated to some degree. Please provide a correlation matrix in supplementary material including all DWI measures to enable readers to understand better how similar SANDI measures are between each other or vs. other DTI measures. Perhaps adding volumes to this correlation matrix may also be a good future reference.

      (4) ISS stages:

      (a) The online ISS calculator requires cut-offs derived from the longitudinal Freesurfer pipeline, while the authors do not have longitudinal data. Thus, the ISS classification might be inaccurate to some degree if the authors used the FS cross-sectional pipeline. Please review this issue and see if updated cut-offs should be used to classify participants.<br /> (b) Were there really no participants with ISS 0 among 56 HD individuals, please clarify in the manuscript?<br /> (c) A note on terminology that might be confusing to some readers. According to the creators of ISS, the ISS stages are created for research only, they are not used or applied in the clinic. On the other hand, the terms "premanifest" and "manifest" have a clinical meaning, typically based on the diagnostic confidence level. The assignment of ISS0-1 to premanifest and ISS2-3 to manifest may create some non-trivial confusion, if not opposition, in some segments the HD community. The authors can keep their current terminology but will need to at least clarify to the reader that this assignment is speculative, does not fully match the clinically-based categories, and should not be confused with similarly named groups in the previous literature.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors have moved to address many points from reviewers. The manuscript had indeed become more objective, transparent, and to the point. The amount of information and analyses is large, which perhaps is inevitable when new methods are being tested for the first time in a neurodegenerative disease.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      This study uses functional MRI to evaluate visual contrast sensitivity across the visual field at the level of the visual cortex, testing the method as a proof of principle in a small group of normally sighted individuals, modelling both normal vision and simulated vision loss, as well as a patient with independently verified vision loss. The results suggest a promising technique to measure vision objectively across the visual field and overcomes the requirement for careful fixation which is often challenging in those with low vision or sight loss.

      Strengths

      • Objective measure of central vision: The proposed method may provide a more comprehensive and objective assessment of residual visual function in individuals with sight loss. This may be particularly useful for those with central visual field loss without the requirement of stable fixation or subjective motor responses.

      • More sensitive measure: The use of slope to calculate contrast sensitivity across a range of contrasts within the brain is clever and likely more sensitive than single threshold measurements or standard clinical measures of visual acuity using letter charts. Standard supra-threshold (high contrast) tests are not ideal for capturing residual vision or partial vision loss.

      • Good agreement with standard atlas: The Benson atlas provides a good estimate of visual field maps within V1 based on anatomical landmarks, and the authors take steps to refine this informed by cortical magnification and V1 surface area (brain size) for each individual participant. This could allow the technique to be generalised without the need to collect lengthy individual mapping data from every participant.

      • Within-subject reproducibility: The measurements appear to be sensitive and reproducible, particularly in those with normal vision, and are consistent with known features of visual sensitivity differences in different parts of the visual field.

      • Potential tool to measure visual field sensitivity in controls: Even if the proposed methods are not ideal for widespread clinical translation, they do offer an exciting tool to test hypotheses about visual field differences in healthy controls. For example, there seems to be an increase in sensitivity on either side of the simulated ring scotoma (Fig 6 - perhaps due to the release of lateral inhibition?). Reliability measures suggest that individual differences are consistent in healthy controls (although not tested statistically, perhaps due to the small sample size?). Whether they reflect behaviourally meaningful differences in visual field sensitivity could be tested in individuals by comparing them to behavioural measures across the visual field.

      • Potential tool to test novel treatments: The proposed techniques could be used to test within-subject changes in visual function in environments that are equipped to measure and analyse fMRI data, including clinical trials aimed at determining the success of novel treatments. Preliminary testing in healthy controls with eye movements also suggests that the method is suitable for testing low vision patients with unstable fixation (e.g., nystagmus), and the authors have modelled the effects of varying amounts and types of eye movements on functional outcome measures.

      Weaknesses

      • Questionable sensitivity to differences in patients. The variability in heat maps across healthy control participants is somewhat surprising, and it is uncertain whether they represent actual visual sensitivity differences or an artifact of the measurement technique, e.g., due to signal-to-noise differences introduced by local variations in brain anatomy. Thus, it is uncertain whether the substantial variance across controls will allow for a sufficiently stable baseline to detect meaningful differences in individual patients. Also, as the authors rightly point out, Benson atlas does not model differences along meridians, so that upper/lower field differences might not be detectable. However, the authors acknowledge that this is a pilot study, and further testing a wider range of scotoma types in patients and simulated in controls will only improve the methods. Furthermore, the ability to capture visual field representations in human visual cortex is also likely to improve with computational advances, making the use of atlases more feasible, obviating the need for individualised population receptive field mapping.

      • Potential for clinical translation. Although it is a sensitive measure, functional MRI is costly, is not available in all clinical settings, requires significant post-processing analyses, and may be contraindicated in some individuals due to safety (e.g., metallic implants) or other concerns (e.g., claustrophobia). These could present significant barriers to widespread clinical translation, if this were the ultimate goal of the study.

      • Limited range of spatial frequencies. The spatial frequencies tested were still quite low (0.3 and 3cpd) compared to measures such a visual acuity. Extending the measurements to higher spatial frequencies could allow better characterization of central vision, although necessarily for peripheral vision. However, this may depend on the typical visual abilities of the patient population of interest.

      Appraisal and Impact:

      The authors used appropriate and robust methods to assess and model known features of visual sensitivity differences across the visual field in sighted controls. In addition, the assessment technique successfully captured sensitivity changes due to simulated and actual partial field loss but was also fairly resilient to eye movements and fixation instability, typical of patients with sight loss. Although currently providing a proof of principle, the method is likely to improve with further testing and increasing normative sample sizes, and as computational methods continue to advance visual field map predictions. Although it may not be adopted widely as a standard clinical assessment technique due to the expense and other obstacles, it would provide a valuable tool in assessing clinical populations, for example in the context of clinical trials to assess suitability for treatment interventions or monitor treatment outcomes.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript addresses a clear and widely relevant question: how ongoing fluctuations in alertness during wakefulness relate to large scale patterns of coordinated brain activity. The authors combine high field magnetic resonance imaging with simultaneous pupil measurements, and they compute an edgewise measure of arousal-related coupling for every pair of regions. Their main contribution is to show that arousal-related coupling is low dimensional and organized into seven reproducible "connectivity communities", each with characteristic network pair compositions. A secondary contribution is the observation that these communities exhibit systematic but community-specific hemispheric asymmetries, including a striking left/right dissociation within the ventral attention network, where the left side participates broadly across communities while the right side forms a more cohesive, segregated arousal responsive module. A final contribution is cross-context generalization: the same organizational structure and lateralization signatures are largely preserved during naturalistic movie watching.

      Strengths:

      (1) The paper moves beyond state contrasts and quantifies arousal related modulation continuously within wakefulness, directly addressing a gap highlighted in the Introduction.

      (2) The hemispheric asymmetry result is not framed as a crude global dominance effect; the authors explicitly test and argue that the key signal lies in structured spatial heterogeneity rather than mean shifts.

      (3) The cross-paradigm replication in movie watching is a strong design choice and supports the claim that the organizational motifs are not limited to unconstrained rest.

      (4) Arousal effects on BOLD signals and on pupil size can have different delays. The authors have now tested lagged relationships (for example shifting the pupil series forward and backward) to show that the main community structure and lateralization results are not sensitive to an arbitrary temporal alignment.

      (5) Time resolved connectivity results are now shown to be robust to changes in parameters.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In their manuscript "TGF-β drives the conversion of conventional NK cells into uterine tissue-resident NK cells to support murine pregnancy", Yokoyama and colleagues investigate the role of Tgfbr2 expression by NK cells in the formation of tissue-resident uterine NK cells and subsequent importance in murine pregnancy. By transferring congenic splenic conventional NK cells into pregnant mice, they show conversion of circulating NK cells into uterine ivCD45 negative tissue-resident NK cells. When interfering with the formation of uterine trNK cells, spiral artery remodelling was impaired, fetal resorption rates were increased, and litter sizes were reduced.

      Generally, this is a research topic of high interest, yet the manuscript is lacking detailed mechanistical insights and some questions remain open. At the current state, the data represent an interesting characterisation of the Tgfbr2-fl/fl Ncr1-Cre mice in pregnancy, but considering 1) the recent publication by the group (Ref#17) on the role of Eomes+ cNK cells during pregnancy, 2) the previously described role of Tgfbr2 and autocrine TGFb expression for uterine NK cell differentiation in virgin mice (also cited by the authors), and 3) the well-known relevance of uterine NK cells during pregnancy, additional experiments addressing the specific role of Tgfb during pregnancy would help to improve novelty and significance of the manuscript.

      Comments on revised version:

      In their revised version of the manuscript and their point-by-point response, the authors have very carefully addressed and discussed all of our concerns and suggestions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study identified U2AF1/2 as a regulator of pre-mRNA splicing that either promotes or supresses the splicing of introns on different genes. The authors then focused on two genes PURPL and MALAT1 that U2AF1/2 can promote intron retention of specific introns, and characterized the biological implications of these introns regulated by U2AF1/2.

      Strengths:

      (1) The experiments in this manuscript are relatively rigorously designed and performed, often with validation checks such as verifying the knockout, verifying the treatment itself doesn't have an effect, etc.

      (2) The experiments provided comprehensive support for the claims that these specific introns are important for the stability or nuclear localization of the RNA, as well as that U2AF1/2 suppresses the splicing of these introns.

      (3) The writing of the manuscript is very clear and doesn't overstate the conclusions that can be drawn from the experiments.

      Weaknesses:

      I think one main weakness of this study is the lack of a deeper analysis of the mechanisms. Whether studying the mechanism is within the scope of this paper is probably debatable, but with the current experiment setup and data, I believe there are some analyses that can be relatively easily done to enhance the value or significance of this study. My detailed questions and suggestions are listed below:

      (1) Line 194-195 and Figure 2A: How many RBPs are included in "other RBPs" in line 194? Does "other RBPs" only include PTBP1, PRPF8 and SRSF1 in Figure 2A, or do they include all the ~100 RBPs with HepG2 eCLIP data available on ENCODE? If U2AF1/2 have the highest occupancy around the intron 2 region among the ~100 RBPs, it would be nice to visualize it.

      (2) Figure 2A and 2B: Why didn't U2AF2 show interaction with exon 2 and 3 in RNA-IP but showed enrichment over exon 2 and exon 3 regions in the eCLIP data?

      (3) Figure 3C - 3F: Maybe I misinterpreted the experiments, but to my understanding, these experiments showed that the exogenous PURPL with intron 2 promoted cell proliferation compared to when the exogenous PURPL wasn't induced, but didn't compare to the effect of the same amount of PURPL with intron 2 removed. Wouldn't it be clearer to compare the effects of exogenous PURPL with intron 2 and exogenous PURPL without intron 2 to pinpoint whether the effect is related to intron 2? Without an intron 2 specific experiment, these current experiments don't seem to provide much added value than "PURPL promotes cell proliferation".

      (4) It's not very clear what proportion of these introns are retained in the endogenous PURPL and MALAT1 in various tissues, cell types and conditions. I think it will be valuable to provide this background (either from previous research, public database or data from this study).

      (5) Since U2AF1/2 have a wide range of targets as demonstrated by Figure 4A, I think it would be valuable to have some experiments that directly disrupt the interaction between U2AF1/2 and PURPL and MALAT1 and test the effect on splicing outcomes, such as by mutating the sequence that U2AF1/2 bind to. The section on the weak py-tract of PURPL touched upon this topic but focused more on how the weak py-tract causes the intron 2 retention in the background rather than how U2AF1/2 binding and action were affected by sequence mutations. I think experiments on disrupting the direct binding between U2AF1/2 on targets can provide valuable mechanistic insights.

      (6) Across all the target genes of U2AF1/2, it might be feasible to do some systematic analysis to find what correlates with whether U2AF1/2 have a promoting or suppressing effect on intron splicing. For example, do genes with decreased IR after U2AF2 depletion systematically have a weak py-tract compared to genes with increased IR? This dataset can potentially provide many hypotheses for understanding the dual role of U2AF1/2.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors describe the first deep neurological characterization of WAC mutation in two vertebrate species (zebrafish and mouse). They examine these at various levels, guided by the work in humans that has associated a heterozygous WAC mutation with DeSantos Shinawi Syndrome (DESSH). Therefore, they investigate the animals for a variety of phenotypes, following a template for what is seen when characterizing a new mouse/fish model of a developmental disability gene. Investigations include analysis of skull and jaw for abnormalities(both species), MRI of brain structure(in mice), electrophysiology(mice), assessment of signaling pathways (by Western blot, in mice), cell counts (both, more in mice), transcriptomics (mice), and behavior (both).

      Generally, this describes an important first characterization of the consequences of the mutation. Most of the studies appear well-conducted and reasonably powered, thus solid or convincing.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigate the behavior of oncogenic cells in mammary and bronchial epithelia. They observe that individual oncogenic cells are preferentially excluded from the mammary epithelium, but they remain integrated in the bronchial epithelium. They also observe that clusters of oncogenic cells form a compact cluster in mammary epithelium, but they disperse in the bronchial epithelium. The authors demonstrate experimentally and in the vertex model simulations that the difference in observed behavior is due to the differential tension between the mutant and wild-type cells due to a differential expression of actin and myosin.

      Strengths:

      (1) Very detailed analysis of experiments to systematically characterize and quantify differences between mammary and bronchial epithelia.

      (2) Detailed comparison between the experiments and vertex model simulations to identify the differential cell line tension between the oncogenic and wild-type cells as one of the key parameters that are responsible for the different behavior of oncogenic cells in mammary and bronchial epithelia.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Overall, this is a solid manuscript that delivers an important community resource. The execution is relatively simple, but the value is real, the work is rigorously performed, and the open dissemination through Zenodo, the F1000Research YCharOS Gateway and OGA is well executed. The effort invested in generating the knockout lines for validation experiments is a clear strength of the study. I have a number of comments that I think would strengthen the resource and the conclusions drawn from it.

      Below, I list specific points.

      (1) The rationale for the selection of these 33 genes is insufficient. The authors lean on the Nijs & Van Damme classification and on PubMed entry counts, but the number of PubMed entries is not a meaningful criterion for what constitutes an important ALS protein - some of the most disease-relevant genes are precisely those with fewer publications, while heavily cited genes such as CAV1 carry weak ALS-specific evidence. The authors should provide a more transparent and biologically motivated rationale for inclusion and exclusion (ClinGen evidence tier, replicated GWAS signals, large meta-analyses, ALSoD) and explain why specific risk genes outside this list were not part of ALS-RAP.

      (2) "107 of 231 (46%) demonstrated specific target staining in IF." The criteria used to define "specific target staining" at the IF level are not stated. From the Galectin-1 example, the mosaic WT/KO strategy provides a binary readout, but for proteins with low expression, weak punctate staining or unusual subcellular distributions, a single threshold is unlikely to capture specificity uniformly across 231 antibodies.

      (3) Several claims in the manuscript depend on differential protein abundance across cell types. As presented, these claims are supported by qualitative Western blot images only. They should be substantiated by quantification across multiple biological replicates.

      (4) This manuscript represents a unique opportunity to address antibody recognition of splicing variants, which is something of of considerable value to the community. For each target, the predicted isoforms in Ensembl could be cross-referenced against the observed bands, and the pattern of bands compared across cell types could be informative about which isoforms each antibody captures. This would convert ambiguous "extra bands" into useful biological information and would substantially increase the value of the resource. I strongly encourage the authors to include this analysis.

      (5) The iPSC-derived microglia receive a comprehensive QC panel (IBA1/PU.1 IF, CD45/CD11b flow, qRT-PCR for nine canonical markers; Figure S4), which allows the reader to assess culture purity. The other iPSC-derived lineages - motor neurons, dopaminergic neurons, oligodendrocytes and astrocytes - are validated by a single marker each in WB (Figure S3) without purity quantification. Given that several conclusions of the manuscript rest on the cell-type-specific detection of ALS-associated proteins, equivalent quality control should be performed for the other lineages so that the reader can evaluate the purity of each preparation.

      (6) The robustness of the resource would be substantially increased by validating at least a subset of the targets in a second iPSC background, in at least some of the cell types analysed.

      (7) The newly developed SGC scFv antibodies are arguably the most novel reagent contribution of this manuscript, yet they receive a single sentence in the body of the paper. A more thorough description is warranted.

      (8) Accessibility of the resource through Zenodo is not straightforward - the reader currently has to navigate to individual antibody characterization reports one by one to extract recommendations for a given target. While the use of an established public repository is important for permanence, a dedicated ALS-RAP website with an interactive, searchable interface - filterable by target, application, host species and clonality - would meaningfully improve uptake. The relationship between such a portal and the existing OGA platform should also be clarified.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      While the importance of asparagine in the differentiation and activation of CD8 T cells has been previously reported, its role in CD4 T cells remained unclear. Using culture media containing specific amino acids, the authors demonstrated that extracellular asparagine promotes CD4 T cell proliferation. Consistent with this, depletion of extracellular asparagine using PEG-AsnASE suppressed CD4 T cell activation. Proteomic analysis focusing on asparagine content revealed that, during the early phase of T cell activation, most asparagine incorporated into proteins is derived from extracellular sources. The authors further confirmed the importance of extracellular asparagine in vivo, demonstrating improved EAE pathology.

      While the data are well organized and convincing, the mechanism by which asparagine deficiency leads to altered T cell differentiation remains unclear. It is also necessary to investigate the transporters involved in asparagine uptake. In particular, elucidating whether different T cell subsets utilize the same or distinct transport mechanisms would provide important insight into the immunoregulatory role of asparagine.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have addressed the previous concerns, and the manuscript has been significantly improved.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study by Jonker et al., examines how the metabolic adaptations to the microenvironment by pancreatic ductal adenocarcinomas (PDAC) present vulnerabilities that could be used for therapeutic purposes. The evidence supporting the claims of the authors is mostly solid, and the multiplicity of models used, as well as the combination of in vitro and in vivo work are appreciated, but some conclusions would benefit from additional substantiation. This work would be of interest to biologists working on the impact of microenvironment and metabolism in cancer, and especially those investigating pancreatic cancer.

      In this study, the authors use mostly "doublings per day" as an indicator of cell death, notably for figures 4 to 6. However, proliferative arrest (or a decrease in the proliferative rate) is not necessarily synonymous with cell death. It might be nice to complement these experiments with a true measure of cell death (e.g. PI uptake).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents a comparative analysis of optomotor behavior in zebrafish and medaka larvae. Using multiple behavioral paradigms, the authors argue that the two species differ in both the spatial and temporal integration of visual motion. They further decompose turning behavior into large- and small-turn components and use a simple mechanistic model to capture several of the main response features. Overall, the study addresses an interesting question, and the comparative framework gives the work a clear conceptual appeal.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of the manuscript is the breadth of the behavioral analysis. The authors use several stimulus paradigms to probe spatial extent, temporal persistence, and response dynamics, which makes the cross-species comparison richer and more informative than a single-assay study. The decomposition into large and small turn components is also a useful feature of the work, as it provides a more structured account of where the species differences may arise. The modeling further helps organize the results and offers a useful framework for interpreting the behavioral differences.

      Weaknesses:

      The main limitations are in presentation and clarity rather than in the overall motivation or approach. In several places, it is difficult to determine exactly how some quantities are summarized statistically, and some figures and legends would benefit from clearer explanations. In addition, a few of the more specific interpretive claims would be strengthened by more explicit statistical framing and slightly clearer presentation. These issues appear addressable and do not detract from the overall interest of the study.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript, "Modality-Specific and Amodal Language Processing by Single Neurons," presents an intracranial electrophysiology study investigating how language is represented in the human brain across spoken and written modalities. The authors analyze activity from over one thousand single neurons and local field potentials recorded in twenty-one neurosurgical patients while participants read and listened to sentences. Using encoding models based on temporal receptive fields, they examine whether neural responses track modality-specific features, such as phonological and orthographic information, as well as higher-level linguistic features. The results are interpreted as evidence for a dissociation between modality-specific processing in sensory regions and modality-independent ("amodal") representations in temporal and frontal cortices, supporting a two-stage model of language processing.

      Strengths:

      This study uses a rare and valuable dataset, combining single-neuron recordings with broader field potential measures in human participants. The large-scale recording, in terms of both neuron count and anatomical coverage across multiple regions and individuals, represents a significant technical achievement for intracranial research.

      The use of encoding models to relate neural activity to multiple levels of linguistic representation is methodologically rigorous and provides a unified framework to compare phonological, orthographic, and higher-level features. This approach allows the authors to systematically test how different aspects of language are represented across neurons and regions.

      Another key strength is the attempt to directly link concepts from Linguistics to neural data. By framing the results in terms of modality-specific versus amodal representations, the study engages with longstanding theoretical questions and offers a potential bridge between linguistic theory and systems neuroscience.

      The manuscript is also very well written, and the data are presented clearly and effectively. The inclusion of raw data and raster plots is particularly valuable, as it allows readers to directly assess the neural responses and strengthens the transparency of the analyses.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite these strengths, the central claims of the paper are not fully supported by the analyses presented, and several key issues limit the strength of the conclusions.

      A primary concern is the lack of clear reporting and statistical characterization of the proportion of neurons that significantly encode the tested linguistic features. While the paper presents illustrative examples and regional patterns of encoding, it does not systematically quantify how many neurons exhibit significant effects across conditions, nor does it provide formal statistical comparisons of these proportions across brain regions or feature types. As a result, it is difficult to determine whether the reported dissociations reflect robust population-level phenomena or relatively sparse subsets of neurons identified through model fitting. Figure 2H offers a visual depiction of the distribution of Brain-Score (a measure of model evaluation) across the fusiform gyrus and superior temporal gyrus, but it falls short of providing formal statistical testing or quantitative summaries, limiting its interpretability in supporting the authors' claims. Given that the authors employ temporal receptive field (TRF) analyses, the framework naturally allows for straightforward quantification of the proportion of neurons that significantly encode any linguistic features in the model, which could be reported by region as well as by stimulus condition (auditory vs. visual). Including such analyses would further strengthen the population-level interpretation of the results.

      Relatedly, the interpretation of "amodal" neurons is not sufficiently substantiated. The classification of neurons as modality-independent relies on encoding model performance across conditions, but the statistical criteria for establishing cross-modal generalization are not always clearly defined or rigorously tested. Without explicit comparisons (e.g., testing whether the same neurons significantly encode features in both modalities above chance, and whether this exceeds what would be expected under appropriate null models), the claim of modality-independent representation remains somewhat underdetermined.

      More generally, the reliance on encoding models introduces some interpretational ambiguity. Although the observed dissociation between fusiform and superior temporal regions is consistent with orthographic and phonological processing, respectively, the feature spaces used in the models are partially linked to lower-level sensory properties (e.g., visual form and acoustic features). The authors' single-neuron results suggest these effects reflect genuine linguistic selectivity, but the findings do not uniquely distinguish between linguistic and perceptual explanations. While fully disentangling these factors may be beyond the scope of the current study, the manuscript could benefit from a brief discussion acknowledging these correlations or clarifying how lower-level sensory contributions were considered.

      Another limitation is that the proposed two-stage model of language processing is not directly tested against competing hypotheses. While the dissociation between modality-specific and amodal representations is consistent with this model, the authors note that higher-level features, such as syntax, may be encoded in a distributed or overlapping manner. These possibilities are not systematically tested, so the conclusions risk overinterpreting correlational patterns as evidence for a specific processing hierarchy. A more explicit discussion or quantitative consideration of these alternative accounts would strengthen the interpretation, while still allowing the two-stage model to be presented as a plausible framework.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      This paper is an interesting conceptual work where certain hotspot areas were found to induce unique gait patterns. These patterns differed from a classic change in speed or gait pattern from a walk to a gallop. From this, a hypothesis was formed that these areas could be important for possible alternative walking patterns seen, for example, during pathologies such as Parkinson's disease or perhaps related to stalking behaviors.

      While I liked the work and found it interesting, it remains descriptive in that the actual behaviors observed can't be causally related to a particular behavior such as stalking or shuffling. If the necessity or sufficiency of this region was related to a specific hunting behavior, for example, its interest to the field would be greater.

      Nevertheless, this paper does contribute to growing evidence that specific behaviors can be triggered by specific neuronal populations within the brainstem.

  3. May 2026
    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript aims to elucidate the mechanistic basis for the long-standing observation that DNA methylation and the histone variant H2A.Z occupy mutually exclusive genomic regions. The authors test two hypotheses: (i) that DNA methylation intrinsically destabilizes H2A.Z nucleosomes, thereby preventing H2A.Z retention, and (ii) that DNA methylation suppresses H2A.Z deposition by ATP-dependent chromatin-remodelling complexes. The revised manuscript addresses a number of previous concerns, and the manuscript has therefore improved accordingly. However, several limitations remain.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed a number of my previous concerns, and the manuscript has improved accordingly. However, several limitations remain that, in my view, constrain the strength of the conclusions. In particular, the absence of a direct comparison with a canonical nucleosome assembled on the same DNA template. This control is essential to determine whether the observed effects are specific to H2A.Z or reflect more general properties of methylated DNA-nucleosome interactions. Notably, even within the authors' own data, there is a trend suggesting that methylated canonical H2A nucleosomes may also exhibit increased accessibility. Although this does not reach statistical significance, the authors themselves argue that subtle differences can be biologically meaningful; it is therefore plausible that extended digestion conditions (e.g., longer HinfI exposure) could reveal a significant effect. Unless a direct structural comparison with a canonical nucleosome is performed, the possibility that the reported phenomenon is not specific to H2A.Z remains. This is compounded by the reliance on a single restriction enzyme-based assay, which represents a limited experimental approach. Such an approach is insufficient to unequivocally support the central claim that DNA methylation increases accessibility of H2A.Z-containing nucleosomes. Additional orthogonal assays would be required to substantiate this conclusion. With respect to the cryo-EM analysis of methylated and unmethylated 601L H2A.Z nucleosomes, and in general, the authors still do not adequately consider the positional context of CpG methylation. Extensive literature demonstrates that the effects of DNA methylation on canonical nucleosome structure and stability are highly position-dependent. Without accounting for the location of methylated CpGs relative to key DNA-histone contact sites, the structural data remain difficult to interpret mechanistically. Overall, while the manuscript has improved, it remains a relatively limited study that draws broad mechanistic conclusions from a minimal experimental data.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigated the effects of a low-protein diet (LPD) and a high sugar- and fat-rich diet (Western diet, WD) on paternal metabolic and reproductive parameters and feto-placental development and gene expression. They did not observe significant effects on fertility; however, they reported gut microbiota dysbiosis, alterations in testicular morphology, and severe detrimental effects on spermatogenesis. In addition, they examined whether the adverse effects of these diets could be prevented by supplementation with methyl donors. Although LPD and WD showed limited negative effects on paternal reproductive health (with no impairment of reproductive success), the consequences on fetal and placental development were evident and, as reported in many previous studies, were sex-dependent.

      Strengths:

      This study is of high quality and addresses a research question of great global relevance, particularly in light of the growing concern regarding the exponential increase in metabolic disorders, such as obesity and diabetes, worldwide. The work highlights the importance of a balanced paternal diet in regulating the expression of metabolic genes in the offspring at both fetal and placental levels. The identification of genes involved in metabolic pathways that may influence offspring health after birth is highly valuable, strengthening the manuscript and emphasizing the need to further investigate long-term outcomes in adult offspring.

      The histological analyses performed on paternal testes clearly demonstrate diet-induced damage. Moreover, although placental morphometric analyses and detailed histological assessments of the different placental zones did not reveal significant differences between groups, their inclusion is important. These results indicate that even in the absence of overt placental phenotypic changes, placental function may still be altered, with potential consequences for fetal programming.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have adequately addressed all my previous comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Muscle hypertrophy is a major regulator of human health and performance. Here, van der Pilj and colleagues assess the role of the giant elastic protein, titin, in regulating the longitudinal hypertrophy of diaphragm muscles following denervation. Interestingly, the authors find an early hypertrophic response, with 30% new serial sarcomeres added within 6 days, followed by subsequent muscle atrophy. Using RBM20 mutant mice, which express a more compliant titin, the authors discovered that this longitudinal hypertrophy is mediated via titin mechanosensing. Through an omics approach, it is suggested that the Muscle ankyrin proteins may regulate this approach. Genetic ablation of MARPs 1-3 blocks the hypertrophic response, although single knockouts are more variable, suggesting extensive complementation between these titin binding proteins. Finally, it is found through the administration of rapamycin that the mTOR signalling pathway plays a role in longitudinal hypertrophic growth.

      Strengths:

      This paper is well written and uses an impressive suite of genetic mouse models to address this interesting question of what drives longitudinal muscle growth.

      Weaknesses:

      While the findings are of interest, they lack sufficient mechanistic detail in the current state to separate cross-sectional versus longitudinal hypertrophy. The authors have excellent tools such as the RBM20 model to functionally dissect mTOR signalling to these processes. It is also unclear if this process is unique to the diaphragm or is conserved across other muscle groups during eccentric contractions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work identifies a previously unknown way that red light can slow ageing. The authors show that red light lowers the level of a protein called SIRT4 in skin cells. Reducing SIRT4 boosts fatty acid use and increases a type of histone modification that keeps genes active. These changes help cells clear away signs of ageing, reduce inflammation, and restore normal metabolism. The findings open the possibility of developing new treatments that target SIRT4 to reverse age‑related decline.

      Strengths:

      The evidence is solid because the authors use several complementary methods. They test red light in both cultured cells and naturally aged mice, and they confirm the key role of SIRT4 by silencing its gene. Measurements of metabolism, protein changes, and ageing markers all point in the same direction. However, the exact way red light lowers SIRT4 levels is not fully explained, which leaves a minor gap. Overall, the conclusions are well supported and convincing.

      Weaknesses:

      The paper does not evolve to use the mechanistic discoveries of the manuscript to help our community to identify the mechanism of photobiomodulation, which is not known so far.

      I would like to draw attention to a recently published paper by Herrera et al. (FEBS Letters 2025, doi:10.1002/1873-3468.70195), which shows that red light (660 nm) stimulates mitochondrial fatty acid oxidation in keratinocytes via AMPK‑dependent phosphorylation of ACC, without altering expression of electron transport chain complexes. I believe this paper is highly complementary to the current study.

      Herrera et al. demonstrate that red light increases basal, ATP‑linked, and maximal oxygen consumption rates in keratinocytes specifically through enhanced fatty acid oxidation (inhibited by etomoxir). This independently validates the central finding of the current manuscript, i.e., red light boosts lipid metabolism, strengthening the robustness of this concept.

      While the current manuscript focuses on the SIRT4‑MCD axis, Herrera et al. identify AMPK phosphorylation and ACC inhibition as key effectors. The authors can integrate and expand their discussion, since SIRT4 downregulation may converge on AMPK activation, or they may represent parallel, reinforcing mechanisms. This would enrich the mechanistic model and open new hypotheses.

      The mechanism of photobiomodulation: Herrera et al. explicitly challenge the prevailing paradigm that red light acts solely via cytochrome c oxidase (by showing long‑lasting effects, unchanged OXPHOS protein levels, and no difference in permeabilised cells). The current finding (red light acts through SIRT4 downregulation, i.e., not direct enzymatic activation) aligns perfectly with Herrera´s critique.

      Long‑term metabolic effects - Herrera et al. show that a single red light exposure elevates oxygen consumption for up to 2 days. The current study focuses on changes at 12‑24 h. Their data extend the time window and suggest that the metabolic reprogramming you describe may persist longer than currently discussed, which is clinically relevant.

      Discussing Herrera et al.'s results would not only acknowledge independent, corroborating evidence but would also allow the authors to position their SIRT4‑centric mechanism within a broader, emerging understanding of red‑light photobiomodulation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors investigate the impact of the deletion of the small GTPase regulator ARHGEF6 on the development and physiology of interneurons. Using public databases, they first show that ARHGEF6 is enriched in interneurons or in areas that give rise to them, both in development and adulthood, in humans and mice. Using a complete KO mouse previously reported, and using a GAD67-GFP reporter mice line, they show that in the adult mouse cortex and hippocampus, there is a notorious reduction GFP+ cells. These mice show increased apoptotic cells at different timepoints and areas of the brain during development. In the developing cortex of ARHGEF6-KO mice, there are fewer IN in all layers of the developing cortex, and cells present processes not correctly oriented. IN from the hippocampus in culture show reduced excitability and impaired neurite branching. The authors then established isogenic hiPSCs lines to study ARHGEF6 deletion in human cells and differentiated ventral forebrain neurons, to find interneuron-related and non-related phenotypes. Most importantly, human interneurons grown in organoids show reduced branching and altered growth cone morphology. The authors claim that the novel interneuron phenotypes found in these models can explain, in part, the human intellectual disabilities associated with mutations in this protein. The study is well conducted and opens new avenues of research not only for the role of small GTPases regulation in early nervous system development, but also for how interneuron deficiencies impact a wider range of intellectual disability syndromes found in humans.

      However, most conclusions of the present version would be strengthened after considering the following comments:

      Major comments

      (1) The reported biological processes evaluated at different developmental stages may be directly or indirectly related to ARHGEF6 function itself. As a model of a hereditary disease, full organism gene deletion is valid, since the human patients suffer from that condition as well. However, to investigate the roles of a protein, complete deletions may not be very accurate since they can give rise to phenotypes that are only indirectly related to the protein function itself. Most conclusions of the present manuscript should either be discussed in this regard or add evidence for a direct role of the protein. One such evidence is typically performed with acute knockdowns in culture, or in developing brains by in utero electroporation. For example, Figure 1C shows that the principal excitatory neurons in the hippocampus do not express ARHGEF6. However, most electrophysiological and behavioral evidence of defects in ARHGEF6-KO mice arises from evaluating these cells (Remakers et al., 2012). I am not suggesting that either previous or actual evidence is wrong. But I believe readers would benefit from a clear distinction (or add caution notes) between a functional consequence of the deletion (that can be months away and in other cells than the actual molecular defect) and a true cell biological function of the protein under study. In favor of the authors, this is a concern with most conclusions derived from KO organisms.

      (2) Figure 1E-G H I. All conclusions are made with a GAD67-GFP reporter, which is a very powerful and reliable tool for large-scale screening. All the conclusions of the paper would be strengthened if some immunohistochemical staining in the same areas of specific markers for interneurons would be added as supporting complementary evidence.

      (3) Cell death in development: It is surprising that the high amount of TUNEL staining during development does not translate into gross histological changes in the adult brain (studied elsewhere). Can authors discuss possible explanations?

      (4) Section 4 (Figures 2F-J) - The authors present this staining as an analysis of migration. Normally, migration studies are performed with a "pulse-chase" paradigm, where a single cohort is labeled and then followed over time (normally by in utero electroporation of a fluorescent protein). Tissue is then fixed at different time points, and migration can be followed. On the contrary, the evidence is from a single point, in an experimental setting in which all Gad67 IN are stained, and hence, one cannot imply a defect in migration. The differences between WT and ARHGEF6-KO are obvious and interesting; it is just that they cannot be solely attributed to a problem in migration.

      Also, a true phenotype of migration in the current setting should have found that the cells that failed to migrate are accumulated in deeper layers. My impression is that the changes in IN per layer are easier explained by total cell number, rather than migration. Perhaps evaluating earlier timepoints could clarify this.

      (5) It is known that ARHGEF6 deletion produces severe F-actin phenotypes in neurons. Have the authors confirmed in their hippocampal cultures GAD67 cells ALSO have these phenotypes? Stress fibers in somas, growth cones, and actin patches along neurites.

      (6) Section 4. The authors present data for deficient migration of the GFP-labeled interneurons. Is it possible to assess, in the same sections, whether other cell types are also affected? Although the hypothesis that ARHGEF6 deletion will have an impact in IN is well rooted in expression data, by assessing other cell types, one can even include a positive control or evidence for a cell-autonomous phenotype.

      (7) ARHGEDF6 deletion has an important impact on organoid development (size, shape, etc). Have the authors analysed whether these organoids produced fewer interneurons?

      (8) In assembloids, the differences in migration parameters are very small between WT and ARHGEF6-KO, which reinforces that perhaps what is observed in the different layers of cortex during mouse development is likely not entirely due to migration, as concluded.

      (9) To properly weigh the present evidence -interneuron deficits- using the ARHGEF6-KO model, authors should include a deeper discussion in light of much work that has been done using these mice. How does the finding of a diminished IN population in the brain of these mice explain the large amount of electrophysiological and behavioral evidence produced before with these animals? Perhaps the most important work to discuss these aspects is the initial ARHGEF6-KO report by Ramakers and colleagues (2012), but there are others.

      Minor comments

      (1) Figure 1A. It looks clear that the GE shows the highest expression of ARHGEF6; however, the reader needs the reference levels where the log2 expression is calculated. What are the reference levels?

      (2) Have the authors compared the number of GAD67-eGFP cells in the hippocampal cultures between WT and ARHGEF6-KO mice?

      (3) Section 3, as a caution note, authors should mention that it is not possible to know from the evidence provided which cells are dying.

      (4) In the dorsal-ventral assembloids, it is expected that the ventral organoid would contain lots of GFP expression compared to the dorsal, but in the image shown (Figure 5A) both parts of the assembloid seem to have the same amount and distribution of GFP. How is that possible?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript describes an investigation into the effect of diet and exercise interventions in WT and transgenic (male and female) mice who are exposed to either a high-fat or a low-fat diet. The outcome variables include MRI volume and brain morphology, as well as memory performance. First, this study measured the impact of genotype (WT vs 3xTgAD mice), then examined the impact of a high-fat or low-fat diet in each group, and finally examined the impact of a low-fat diet, exercise, or a combined low-fat diet and exercise intervention. This is an important study as it allows us to better understand how changes to lifestyle can affect neurocognitive function and potentially change a person's AD risk.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study uses a well-controlled longitudinal design, allowing the authors to track how diet and exercise interventions influence brain and behaviour over time.

      (2) The integration of multiple levels of analysis (brain imaging, behaviour, and multivariate modelling) provides a rich and comprehensive assessment of intervention effects.

      (3) The inclusion of both genotype and sex as key variables strengthens the relevance and interpretability of the findings, given known differences in risk and response across groups.

      Weaknesses:

      There are a lot of analyses in this paper, and I had a little bit of trouble distilling the major take-home messages. For example, I was left wondering:

      (1) If the effect of genotype and the effect of the high-fat diet were consistent in the current study compared to the authors' previous work (e.g. Rollins et al., 2019). A more direct report on the consistency of these findings (maybe even an overlap map, if possible) would benefit the reader.

      (2) How consistent/different are the volumetric and morphometric (DBM) results from each other? Especially in the regions of interest (hippocampus and cerebellum), are increases in volumes always related to "expansion" of a given region using DBM? Some of the similarities are reported in the results, but for transparency, a side-by-side table comparing the results across techniques for each effect of interest might provide more clarity.

      (3) I was interested in the Partial Least Squares approach that the authors used to investigate how patterns of brain measures relate to the behavioral variables. Because they are presented mostly in the supplement (except for Figure 6E), it's difficult to map the LVs described onto the univariate contrasts in Figures 2-5. In general, greater clarity is needed regarding how the PLS-derived latent variables relate to the univariate findings, and whether the emphasis on LV3 reflects a principled selection or post hoc interpretation.

      (4) If I understand the results correctly, there were only modest differences in behavior reported, and the patterns were somewhat inconsistent across sex and genotype. In fact, the authors report that the high-fat diet alone did not impair memory on the Morris Water maze (line 323). The discrepancy between robust neuroanatomical effects and relatively modest behavioural changes raises important questions about the functional significance of the observed structural alterations.

      (5) On line 507, the authors state, "Notably, 3xTgAD mice already show smaller brain volumes at baseline, which may constrain the detectable impact of the diet." Is this true for the entire brain or just the hippocampus and cerebellum? Would a global reduction in brain volume due to the 3xTgAD AD model affect the interpretation of the intervention effects?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors develop a miniaturized MR1 construct (SMART-MR1) in which the α1/α2 platform is stabilized by a synthetic domain, and show that it can bind ligands, engage a cognate TCR, and recapitulate native-like recognition by cryo-EM.

      Strengths:

      The work is well-written, technically strong and carefully executed. The authors combine biochemical, biophysical and structural approaches, including ITC, NMR and cryo-EM, to show that SMART-MR1 behaves in a manner closely resembling native MR1. The reduction in size and the demonstration of solution NMR are clear practical advantages for certain types of mechanistic studies.

      Weaknesses:

      The main limitation is that the manuscript does not clearly establish a practical advantage over existing MR1 formats, such as single-chain MR1-β2M or previously described stabilized constructs. The comparison is largely framed against native MR1, which risks overstating the problem, and on the basis of the data presented, it is unlikely that other researchers will adopt this system. In addition, the choice of the A-F7 TCR as a validation reagent may overestimate the generality of the approach, as this receptor is known to exhibit relatively broad ligand tolerance, including recognition of MR1 presenting vitamin B6 metabolites (PDB 9CGR) and structurally diverse synthetic ligands. The extent to which SMART-MR1 supports recognition by a broader range of MR1-restricted TCRs is not addressed.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to evaluate whether integrating genomic (SNP) and transcriptomic information with machine learning can improve phenotypic prediction of polygenic traits across environments. The manuscript explored not only the predictability across models and predictor feature sets, but also attempted to identify meaningful genes and interactions underlying trait variation.

      Strengths:

      The main strength of the manuscript is its integration of SNP, transcriptomic, and phenotype datasets for 426 sorghum genotypes between Texas and Michigan. It provides a systematic comparison of predictor types (SNP versus transcriptomic abundance) and model strategies to integrate them.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Experimental Design

      The experimental design raises several concerns that should be clarified before strong biological conclusions are drawn from the transcriptomic analyses.

      First, the transcriptomic sampling is not well aligned with the developmental stages most relevant to the phenotypes being modeled. Leaf tissue was collected at a single time point in each environment, whereas traits such as flowering time, biomass, tiller count, and panicle height arise from developmental processes occurring over extended and potentially distinct temporal windows. Consequently, the measured expression profiles are likely to reflect physiological states specific to the sampling dates (May 5-6 in Texas and June 22-24 in Michigan) rather than the regulatory processes underlying the target phenotypes.

      Second, the phrase "haphazardly randomized" is questionable for a field experiment. It is unclear whether the design included formal randomization, blocking, row/column structure, or spatial correction. Without explicit accounting for spatial field heterogeneity, environmental variation within sites may confound genotype and transcriptomic effects.

      Third, the Methods do not clearly describe biological replication for RNA-seq. If each genotype-by-environment combination were represented by a single transcriptomic sample, then within-genotype expression variance cannot be estimated. This is important because transcript abundance is highly sensitive to microenvironment, sampling time, tissue status, developmental stage, and technical variation. The absence of replication significantly weakens confidence in gene-level feature importance and gene-gene interaction claims.

      Four, the analysis of expression differences across environments is based on a simple subtraction (TX - MI) followed by correlation with genetic similarity. This approach is not standard in transcriptomic analysis and does not account for variability, replication, or statistical uncertainty. Conventional methods for assessing differential expression and genotype-by-environment interactions rely on model-based frameworks that explicitly estimate variance components and test for interaction effects. Without such modeling, the observed expression differences may reflect noise or confounding factors rather than genotype-driven responses.

      (2) SHAP contribution values

      Although SHAP is a well-established framework for decomposing model predictions into feature-level contributions, its use in this manuscript raises several concerns regarding interpretation, statistical validity, and biological inference.

      First, SHAP values quantify the contribution of features within the fitted model, conditional on the joint distribution of inputs and the model structure. They do not represent causal effects or direct biological importance. There is a difference where SHAP values are often in log-odds and the regression model uses absolute units. Without a fair evaluation of model fit, the interpretation of SHAP values needs to take a cautious step because a model could fit poorly when a feature shows very high SHAP values.

      In genomic data, where features are highly correlated due to linkage disequilibrium and co-expression, SHAP values can distribute contribution values across correlated variables in ways that are not uniquely identifiable. As a result, features highlighted as "important" may reflect correlation structure rather than true functional relevance.

      This correlative structure can be exacerbated in this manuscript because of the use of TPM-normalized transcript abundances as predictor variables without biological replicates. Assume the estimates of transcript abundances are robust, TPM values are compositional, with a constant-sum constraint that creates dependencies among all genes that induce negative correlations. This issue is particularly relevant for the interpretation of gene importance and interaction effects, where correlated predictors can lead to unstable and non-unique attributions. This biological interpretation of transcript-based features remains uncertain.

      (3) Result interpretation

      For example, in page 11, "plasticity SNP- and transcriptomic-based models generally outperformed single-environment models for traits with low cross-environment correlation, such as green-up (Fig. 2c, r = -0.13, p < 8.3 × 10⁻³) and tiller count (Fig. 2f, r = -0.08, p = 0.1) (Supplementary Fig. S1).", is too broad. For green-up, the Diff model appears much better than MI, but not clearly better than TX.

      And, same page 11, "...Diffexp was more predictive than SNPs for trait plasticity in biomass, flowering time, and tiller count..." only holds true for biomass, not flowering time, or tiller count.

      The aspect of "complementary information" between SNP and transcriptomic models in page 12 is stronger than what is supported by Figure 2. Figure 2 shows different predictive performance, but it does not by itself demonstrate complementarity. Establishing complementarity requires evidence that combining SNP+T improves prediction consistently or captures distinct, non-overlapping signals. Yet the preceding section says SNP+T outperformed either single data type in only 15% of cases, with modest gains. This is confusing. Also, there was not G+T in Figure 2; it is SNP+T.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This review is valuable in principle because circadian rhythms in zebrafish are unexplored and therefore this degree is valuable in principle. There are a number of significant weaknesses that should be addressed for it to have an impact. First, while the review covers a broad range of topics in chronobiology, it does not put them in context. Placing zebrafish work in the context of other model organisms that are better understood and other fish species would broaden the appeal. The review could also expand to a discussion of sleep, where the understanding in zebrafish is much more advanced. Critically, providing a novel framework, identifying new areas of opportunity and limitations of the system would expand the interest to non-zebrafish research groups. In addition, there are a number of misstatements/mis-citations that are critical to correct. Therefore, I find this review potentially impactful, but its current form is likely to limit its impact.

      Strengths:

      Focusing on decentralized photo sensing is a strength because it is relatively unique to zebrafish.

      The breadth of discussion in zebrafish is a strength.

      Weaknesses:

      It might be helpful to reorganize the review with an introduction on what is known in other better studied systems to be highly conserved, then to focus in on the components of zebrafish that are discussed here.

      A weakness is the lack of integration with other model organisms and other fish systems. Therefore, the narrow focus on zebrafish is unlikely to appeal to broader audiences.

      It's surprising that there is not more discussion of sleep, which has been studied in detail, and its relationship to the clock.

      Discussions of limitations of the model, including adult vs larval analysis and challenges performing long-term behavioral analysis in fish, would be valuable.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Sheidaei et al. report how chromosomes are favourably positioned to facilitate kinetochore-microtubule interactions during early mitosis. Studying kinetochore capture during early prophase is extremely difficult due to kinetochore crowding, but the team has taken up the challenge by classifying types of kinetochore movements, carefully marking kinetochore positions in early mitosis, and linking these to map their fate/next positions over time. The work is an excellent addition to the chromosome segregation field, as most of the literature has thus far focused on tracking kinetochores at slightly later stages of mitosis. The authors show that PANEM facilitates chromosome positioning toward the interior of the newly forming spindle, which in turn promotes chromosome congression. In the absence of PANEM, chromosomes end up in unfavourable locations and fail to form proper kinetochore-microtubule interactions. The work highlights the perinuclear actomyosin network in early mitosis (PANEM) as a key spatial and temporal element of chromosome congression, a step that precedes the segregation process.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors' revisions have brought clarity to the description of movements in many of the figures. The manuscript ties a fundamental process to differences in cancer cell lines.

      The work extends their published discovery that an actomyosin network forms on the cytoplasmic side of the nuclear envelope during prophase. The current manuscript explains how this network facilitates chromosome capture and congression by tracking the motions of individual kinetochores during early mitosis. The findings are broadly useful for the cell division and cytoskeletal fields.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Here, the authors performed a phylogenetic analysis of mitochondrial ATP/ADP carrier (AAC) proteins. They also performed a structure-based screen for remote homologs, seeking to reveal their evolutionary origins. The authors claim that AACs are found at the root of their family tree, and through a structure-based homolog search protocol, identify putative prokaryotic homologs.

      The proposed evolutionary history of AACs is bold and complicated, but the phylogenetic methodology and the way in which the tree is interpreted are incomplete and unconvincing. Further, the structure-based search strategy uses very relaxed cutoffs for fold similarity, which may be fine, but it does not clearly justify this decision. This is potentially very problematic, as I did not find the quantitative or qualitative assessments of fold similarity particularly compelling.

      In summary, the authors have presented a bold and extremely interesting hypothesis for the evolution of these proteins, but there is insufficient support for their claims.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors are presenting a very interesting hypothesis about the birth of these proteins, including that they may have undergone a radical rearrangement in their sequence at some point in evolution.

      (2) The paper makes use of appropriate tools for structure-based homolog identification.

      (3) Identification of a conserved sequence motif in these twilight zone proteins would be a rare and interesting occurrence, and could be consistent with their proposed homology.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The phylogenetic analysis and its interpretations are incomplete. The authors regularly refer to the root of the tree, and its placement is given central importance. However, the methodology by which they selected the root is unexplained. This is notable, as the proposed root is curious and quite confusing. It implies that (at least) yeast and Paramecium AACs are independently paraphyletic. While certainly not impossible, this evokes quite a complicated evolutionary history. The taxonomy of this gene family, when rooted this way, does not seem to echo the phylogeny of species, suggesting an extremely complex history of duplication/loss and horizontal gene transfer, none of which the authors discuss in detail. Perhaps more clearly and specifically: I'm very surprised by the branching order at the root, where there are three independent branches of fungal proteins, followed by the excavate proteins in a monophyletic clade, followed by several independent branches of the Paramecium proteins. I very much expect incomplete lineage sorting at this evolutionary depth, but this seems extreme to the point that I question if it is accurately placed. More directly: this very much looks like an unrooted tree, presented radially.

      (2) The Bayesian and ML trees seem quite incongruent, but this is not discussed. In fact, the text states that they "exhibit a similar tree topology." This is admittedly very difficult to assess without very carefully going over the tree, branch by branch, but there are nevertheless differences, the most obvious being paraphyly vs monophyly of taxon-specific AAC clades. Do the authors have any comments on this, and can they show some sort of consensus tree? How does this affect their interpretation?

      (3) Presenting branch support as similarly-sized points makes it nearly impossible to actually judge the strength of support.

      (4) The use of structure for remote homology detection is becoming increasingly popular, and in my opinion, is very powerful. But it is still much too early to be taken for granted. The methodology must be justified. Most importantly, the authors have not clearly described why they chose these quantitative cutoffs (I'm mostly thinking of the Dali Z-score cutoff, which here seems very low for a transmembrane protein of this size, as the Z-score is very dependent on alignment length). The authors reference categories defined by tool authors, but why a Z-score of 3, specifically? The same goes for TM scores. There are not yet any defined best practices, to my knowledge, so the authors should independently validate/justify their approach in some way and/or cite and discuss relevant literature (there have been a growing number of these screens using similar approaches in recent years).

      (5) The proposed homologs have very little quantitative structural similarity to the query structure, or to each other, as shown in Figure 3 (and hence my concerns about the methodology). Also, I did not find the structural alignments in the supplement or Figure 4 to be qualitatively compelling. They simply appear too different, and I cannot discard this qualitative assessment because the quantitative similarities are likewise very weak. It's not clear to me if this is because the folds are in fact different, or if my view of them is a presentation issue (perhaps it could be improved by visualizing more angles, or more carefully cartooning the similarities and differences).

      (6) The authors point out that the alpha-helices are ordered differently in YihY and CysZ, and that their membrane orientation is flipped. Taken at face value, I would view this as evidence against homology. This could perhaps be more reasonably explained as convergent global fold similarity resulting from different underlying structures. However, the authors imply that this may be the result of the transposition of the sequences encoding these alpha helices, yet there is no convincing description or argument concerning when and how this could have occurred. I think this would be a deeply interesting phenomenon, but there is insufficient evidence and discussion to seriously consider whether or not it is homology or convergence.

      (7) Following up on comment #5, the authors did perform a very interesting in silico experiment by transposing sequences to reorder the helices. They then note that structural similarity improved. This is very, very interesting, but without other evidence of homology between the transposed alpha helices, I do not think this disproves alternative hypotheses. Does any such evidence exist?

      (8) The authors show in Figure 5E-F that sequence transposition flips the membrane orientation, such that YihY and CysZ have extracellular termini (which you would expect from homologs, I suppose). But it is just cartooned and not discussed. Is this computationally or experimentally supported?

      (9) The putative presence of a conserved motif would be a very compelling piece of evidence consistent with homology. However, it is not clear to me in the text which proteins actually have the repeats - is it truly just CysZ? What does this mean for YihY? Further, what specifically is being proposed to be homologous? Is SLC25 repeat 2 proposed to be homologous to CysZ repeat 2 (and the same for 3 to 3)? If so, this would seem to have implications for the transposition hypothesis. The helix nomenclature (e.g., H1-6) suggests homology across the proteins (i.e, H1 is homologous to H1); however, wouldn't the presence of these conserved domains instead, for example, suggest homology between SLC H3 and CysZ H2? The authors' conclusions are not clear, and it is difficult to interpret what the implications are for assessing homology.

      (10) The sequence retrieval methods are incomplete, so it is impossible to reproduce the searches or to judge their accuracy and scope. What were the E-value cutoffs and other settings used in the searches?

      (11) The phylogenetic methods are incomplete. What substitution models were used, and how were they chosen? What branch support method was used? What were the stop conditions of the Bayesian analysis (e.g. did the authors monitor for convergence, and how)? How much of the Bayesian analysis was considered burn-in, if any? And echoing points 1 & 2 above, how were these phylogenies rooted?

      (12) Throughout, there is a distinct lack of careful, evolutionarily informative language.

      (i) In reference to the phylogeny, the authors frequently refer to "grouping," but it's not entirely clear what this means. Referring to clades and their branching order would be more informative.

      (ii) The authors refer to the excavate branch as the "most ancient." Whether or not excavates most closely resemble LECA is somewhat irrelevant, because the branch itself is not the most ancient - it is equally as ancient as its sister branch, which may be all other eukaryotes.

      (iii) Likewise, the authors refer to bacterial proteins as "the evolutionary ancestor of mitochondrial AACs," and state that "AAC emerged from the conserved sulfat transporter CysZ." But extant bacteria are not the ancestors of mitochondria - nor are extant proteins descended from other extant proteins. They are, perhaps more accurately, cousins.

      (iv) The authors refer to AACs as "evolutionarily founder member of the SLC25 carrier family," but I'm not sure that has a clear evolutionary meaning, unless the authors mean to say that the common ancestor was more AAC-like than anything-else-like. Even if the rooting is accurate, a basal branch does not necessarily reflect the ancestral state.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Overall, this is an excellent paper, making use of a newly developed system for monitoring the behaviour of chromatophores in the skin of (mostly) free swimming bobtail squid and European cuttlefish. The manuscript is very well written, clearly presented and very well structured. The central finding, that individual chromatophores are connected to multiple motor neurones, is not new. Novelty instead comes from the ability to measure the actuation of chromatophore sections across wide areas of skin in free-swimming animals, showing the diversity of local motor units and reinforcing the notion that individual chromatophores are not necessarily the individual units of colour change, but rather local motor units that cover multiple neighbour and near neighbour chromatophore muscles. This is an excellent finding and one that will shape our understanding of the neural control of cephalopod skin colour. I have a number of minor points below that the authors will need to address before acceptance.

      Strengths:

      The methodological approach to collecting large amounts of data about local variations in the expansion of sections of chromatophores is exciting, and the analysis pipeline for clustering sections of chromatophores whose spontaneous activity correlated over time is powerful and exciting.

      Comments on revisions:

      All concerns have been addressed in the revised version of the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Large Language Models have revolutionized Artificial Intelligence and can now match or surpass human language abilities on many tasks. This has fuelled interest in cognitive neuroscience in exposing representational similarities between Language Models and brain recordings of language comprehension. The current study breaks from this mold by: (1) Systematically identifying sentence structures for which brain and Large Language Model representations diverge. (2) Accounting for such sentence structures using a model structured by semantic roles. As such the study may now fuel interest in characterizing how Large Language Models and brain representations differ, which may prompt new more brain like language models.

      Strengths:

      * This study presents a bold challenge to a literature trend that has touted similarities between Transformer models and human cognition based on representational correlations with brain activity. This challenge is substantiated by identifying sentences for which brain and model representations of sentences diverge.

      * This study conducts a rigorous pre-registered analysis of a comprehensive selection of the state-of-the-art Large Language Models, on a controlled sentence comprehension fMRI dataset. The analysis is conducted within a Representation Similarity framework to support similarity comparisons between graph structures and brain activity without needing to vectorize graphs. Transformer models are predicted and shown to diverge from brain representations on subsets of sentences with similar word-level content but different sentence structures.

      * The study introduces a 7T fMRI sentence comprehension dataset and accompanying human sentence similarity ratings which may be a fruitful resource for developing more human-like language models. Unlike other model-based sentence datasets, the relation between grammatical structure and word-level content is controlled, and subsets of sentences for which models and brains diverge are identified.

      Weaknesses:

      * The interpretation of findings is nuanced. Although Transformers underperform as brain models on the critical subsets of controlled sentences, a Transformer outperforms all other models when evaluated on the union of all sentences when both word-level content and structure vary. Transformers also yield equivalent or better models of human behavioral data. Thus, although Transformers have demonstrable flaws as human models which are pinpointed here, in the general case (some) Transformers are more human-like than the other models considered.

      * There may be confounds between the critical sentence structure manipulations and visual processing. This is inconvenient because activation in brain regions that process semantics tends to partially correlate with low-level representations of sentence surface features encoded in visual cortex. Although the study commendably controls for confounds associated with sentence length, correlations with the key sentence structure models are most salient in visual cortex and diminish in other brain networks when V1-V4 activation is controlled for.

      * Sentence similarity computations are emphasized as the basis for unifying comparative analyses of graph structures and vector data. A strength of this approach is that correlation is not always the ideal similarity metric. However, a weakness is that similarity computations are not unified across models. This has practical consequences because different similarity metrics applied to the same model produce positive or negative correlations with brain data and repeating analyses with a different representational dissimilarity measure seems to produce some anomalous results.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors investigate how cytosolic acetyl-CoA metabolism influences replicative aging in budding yeast. They propose that acetyl-CoA regulates aging through three major pathways: (1) mitochondrial transport to support mitochondrial function, (2) fatty acid synthesis, and (3) global protein acetylation. The data show that AMPK activation promotes mitochondrial import of acetyl-CoA and partially mitigates mitochondrial decline in a subset of aging cells.

      Furthermore, the engineered A2A strain, which enhances mitochondrial acetyl-CoA utilization while relieving inhibition of fatty acid synthesis, increases the proportion of cells exhibiting a "low senescence" phenotype.

      Overall, this is a thoughtful and potentially impactful study that advances our understanding of metabolic control of aging. Addressing the points below, particularly by refining interpretations and, where feasible, incorporating additional analyses, will further strengthen the manuscript and its conclusions.

      Strengths:

      The study has several notable strengths. It addresses an important question by shifting the focus from lifespan to preservation of late-life fitness, which is highly relevant to aging biology. The work integrates metabolic, genetic, and functional analyses to link cytosolic acetyl-CoA flux with distinct aging outcomes, and the engineering of the A2A strain provides a clear and elegant demonstration of how coordinated pathway modulation can improve cellular fitness.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While the manuscript focuses on mitochondrial transport and fatty acid synthesis, cytosolic acetyl-CoA is also a key regulator of histone acetylation and chromatin silencing. It would strengthen the study to consider whether acetyl-CoA depletion contributes to improved fitness through enhanced rDNA silencing. Given the well-established role of rDNA instability in yeast aging, additional experiments examining rDNA silencing and stability would be valuable. For example, monitoring rDNA copy number changes (not necessarily ERCs) under AMPK activation, oleic acid supplementation, and in the A2A strain, similar to approaches used in the authors' prior work, would help clarify whether chromatin regulation contributes to the observed phenotypes.

      (2) The current data do not fully distinguish whether AMPK activation and oleic acid supplementation act on distinct subpopulations of aging cells. An alternative explanation is that oleic acid supplementation enhances mitochondrial function and acts additively with AMPK activation, thereby increasing the fraction of cells in the "low senescence" state. Since this distinction is not central to the main conclusions, I suggest softening the language around subpopulation specificity. Emphasizing instead that the A2A strain coordinately modulates multiple branches of acetyl-CoA metabolism to improve late-life fitness would maintain the strength of the central message without overinterpretation.

      (3) The manuscript proposes that lipid starvation and excess acetyl-CoA are major drivers of senescence in distinct subpopulations of wild-type aging cells. This conclusion is not yet fully supported by the presented data. Direct measurements of age-dependent divergence in acetyl-CoA and fatty acid levels at the single-cell level would be needed to substantiate this model. Based on the current evidence, a more conservative interpretation would be that aging cells exhibit differential sensitivity to perturbations in acetyl-CoA and lipid metabolism. Accordingly, I recommend revising the statement in the Abstract ("We further implicate lipid starvation and excess acetyl coenzyme A availability as major drivers of senescence...") and the corresponding discussion text to better align with the data.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Feddersen & Bramkamp determined important characteristics of how MinD protein binds/dissociates to/from the membrane, and dimerizes in relation to its ATPase activity. The presented data clearly shows the differences in function of MinD homologs from B. subtilis and E. coli.

      Strengths:

      The work presents well-executed experiments that lead to interesting conclusions and a new model of how Min system works during B. subtilis mid-cell division. Importantly, this model is supported by in vitro characterization of well-chosen mutants in the functional domains of MinD. Outstandingly, most of the in vitro data are confirmed by single-molecule localization microscopy.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study explores the dynamic association between malate dehydrogenase (MDH1) and citrate synthase (CIT1) in Saccharomyces cerevisiae, with the aim of linking this interaction to respiratory metabolism. Utilizing a NanoBiT split-luciferase system, the authors monitor protein-protein interactions in vivo under various metabolic conditions.

      Major Concerns:

      (1) NanoBiT Signal May Reflect Protein Abundance Rather Than Interaction Strength<br /> In Figure 1C, the authors report increased MDH1-CIT1 interaction under respiratory (acetate) conditions and decreased interaction during fermentation (glucose), as indicated by NanoBiT luminescence. However, this signal appears to correlate strongly with the expression levels of MDH1 and CIT1, raising the possibility that the observed luminescence reflects protein abundance rather than specific interaction dynamics. To resolve this, NanoBiT signals should be normalized to the expression levels of both proteins to distinguish between abundance-driven and interaction-driven changes.

      (2) Lack of Causal Evidence<br /> The study presents a series of metabolic perturbation experiments (e.g., arsenite, AOA, antimycin A, malonate) and correlates changes in metabolite levels with NanoBiT signals. However, these data are correlative and do not establish a functional role for the MDH1-CIT1 interaction in metabolic regulation. To demonstrate causality, the authors should implement approaches to specifically disrupt the MDH1-CIT1 interaction. One strategy could involve using a 15-residue peptide (Pept1) derived from the Pro354-Pro366 region of CIT1, previously shown to mediate the interaction or introducing the cit1Δ3 (Arg362Glu) mutation, which perturbs binding. Metabolic flux analysis using ^13C-labeled glucose and mitochondrial respiration assays (e.g., Seahorse) could then assess functional consequences.

      (3) Absence of Protein Expression Controls Under Perturbation Conditions<br /> In experiments involving acetate, arsenite, AOA, antimycin A, and malonate, the authors infer changes in MDH1-CIT1 association based solely on NanoBiT signals. However, no accompanying data are provided on MDH1 and CIT1 protein levels under these conditions. This omission weakens the conclusions, as altered expression rather than interaction strength could underlie the observed luminescence changes. Immunoblotting or quantitative proteomics should be used to confirm constant protein expression across conditions.

      Conclusion:

      Although the central question is compelling and the use of NanoBiT in live cells is a strength, the manuscript requires additional experimental rigor. Specifically, normalization of interaction signals, introduction of causative perturbations, and validation of protein expression are essential to substantiate the study's claims.

      Comments on revised version:

      The manuscript is much improved.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Castanheira et al. investigate the role of spatial attention for planning during three maze navigation experiments (one new experiment and two existing datasets). Effective planning in complex situations requires the construction of simplified representations of the task at hand. The authors find that these mental representations (as assessed by conscious awareness) of a given stimulus are influenced by (spatially) surrounding stimuli. Individual participants varied in the degree to which attention influenced their task representations, and this attentional effect correlated with the sparsity of representations (as measured by the range of awareness reports across all stimuli). Spatially grouping task-relevant information on either the left or right side of the maze led to mental representations more similar to optimal representations predicted by the value-guided construal (VGC) model - a normative model describing a theoretical approach to simplifying complex task information. Finally, the authors propose an update to this model, incorporating an attentional spotlight component; the revised descriptive model predicts empirical task representations better than the original (normative) VGC model.

      Strengths:

      The novelty of this study lies in the proposal and investigation of a cognitive mechanism through which a normative model like value-guided construal can enable human planning. After proposing attention as this mechanism, the authors make concrete hypotheses about mismatches between the VGC predictions and real human behavior, which are experimentally validated. Thus, not only does this study describe a possible mechanism for simplification of task information for planning, but the authors also propose a descriptive model, revising VGC to incorporate this attentional component.

      A strength of this paper is the variety of investigative approaches: analysis of existing data, novel experiment, and a computational approach to predict experimental findings from a theoretical model. Analyzing pre-existing datasets increases the size of the participant cohort and strengthens the authors' conclusions. Meanwhile, comparing the predictions of the existing normative model and the authors' own refined model is a clever approach to substantiate their claims. In addition, the authors describe several crucial controls, which are key to the interpretability of their results. In particular, the eye tracking results were critical.

      In summary, this paper constitutes an important step toward a more complete understanding of the human ability to plan.

      Comments on revised version:

      I am overall happy with the revision and agree that the authors have addressed most of the comments.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Castanheira et al. investigate the role of spatial attention for planning during three maze navigation experiments (one new experiment and two existing datasets). Effective planning in complex situations requires the construction of simplified representations of the task at hand. The authors find that these mental representations (as assessed by conscious awareness) of a given stimulus are influenced by (spatially) surrounding stimuli. Individual participants varied in the degree to which attention influenced their task representations, and this attentional effect correlated with the sparsity of representations (as measured by the range of awareness reports across all stimuli). Spatially grouping task-relevant information on either the left or right side of the maze led to mental representations more similar to optimal representations predicted by the value-guided construal (VGC) model - a normative model describing a theoretical approach to simplifying complex task information. Finally, the authors propose an update to this model, incorporating an attentional spotlight component; the revised descriptive model predicts empirical task representations better than the original (normative) VGC model.

      Strengths:

      The novelty of this study lies in the proposal and investigation of a cognitive mechanism through which a normative model like value-guided construal can enable human planning. After proposing attention as this mechanism, the authors make concrete hypotheses about mismatches between the VGC predictions and real human behavior, which are experimentally validated. Thus, not only does this study describe a possible mechanism for simplification of task information for planning, but the authors also propose a descriptive model, revising VGC to incorporate this attentional component.

      A strength of this paper is the variety of investigative approaches: analysis of existing data, novel experiment, and a computational approach to predict experimental findings from a theoretical model. Analyzing pre-existing datasets increases the size of the participant cohort and strengthens the authors' conclusions. Meanwhile, comparing the predictions of the existing normative model and the authors' own refined model is a clever approach to substantiate their claims. In addition, the authors describe several crucial controls, which are key to the interpretability of their results. In particular, the eye tracking results were critical.

      In summary, this paper constitutes an important step toward a more complete understanding of the human ability to plan.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) There is a critical conceptual gap in the study and its interpretation, mainly due to the reliance on a self-report metric of awareness (rather than an objective measure of behavioral performance).

      a. Awareness is tested by a 9-point self-report scale. It is currently unclear why awareness of task-irrelevant obstacles in this task would necessarily compromise optimal planning. There is no indication of whether self-reported awareness affects performance (e.g., navigation path distance, time to complete the maze, number of errors). Such behavioral evidence of planning would be more compelling.

      b. Relatedly, it would have been more convincing to have an objective measure of awareness, for instance, how the presence or absence of a "task-irrelevant" obstacle affects performance (e.g., change navigation path distance or time to complete the maze), or whether participants can accurately recall the location of obstacles.

      c. Consequently, I'm not sure that we can conclude that the spatial context does impact participants' ability to plan spatial navigation or to "incorporate task-relevant information into their construal". We know that the spatial context affects subjective (self-reported) awareness, but the authors do not present evidence that spatial context affects behavioral performance.

      d. Another concern that may complicate interpretation is the following: Figure 3c shows improved VGC model predictions (steeper slope) for mazes with greater lateralization. However, there are notable outliers in these plots, where a high lateralization index does not correspond to good model performance. There is currently no discussion/explanation of these cases.

      (2) I noticed an issue with clarity regarding task-relevance. It is currently not fully clear which obstacles are "task irrelevant". Also, the term is used inconsistently, sometimes conflating with "awareness". For example, in the "Attentional spotlight model of task representations" section, the authors state that "task-relevant information becomes less relevant when surrounded by task-irrelevant information". But they really mean that participants become less aware of those task-relevant obstacles. I assume task-relevance is an objective characteristic related to maze organization, not to a participant's construal. Indeed, the following paragraph provides evidence of model predictions of awareness.

      (3) The behavioral paradigm has some distinct disadvantages, and the validity of the task is not backed up by behavioral data.

      a. I understand the need for central fixation, but it also makes the task less naturalistic.

      b. The task with its top-down grid view does not seem to mimic real human navigation. Though this grid may be similar to mental maps we form for navigation, the sensory stimuli corresponding to possible paths and to spatial context during real-life navigation are very different.

      c. Behavioral performance is not reported, so it is unknown whether participants are able to properly complete the task. The task seems pretty difficult to navigate, especially when the obstacles disappear, and in combination with the central fixation.

      d. There is no discussion of whether/how this navigation task generalizes to other forms of planning.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aiming in developing a neural mass model characterized by few collective variables mimicking the dynamics of a network of Hodgkin - Huxley neurons encompassing ion-exchange mechanisms. They describe in details the derivation of the mean-field model , then they compare experimental results obtained for the hippocampus of a mice with the neural network simulations and the mean-field results. Furthermore, they report a bifurcation analysis of the developed model and simulation of a small network containing various coupled neural masses, somehow moving towards the simulation of an entire connectome.

      Strengths:

      The author attempts to develop a mean-field model for a globally coupled network of heterogeneous Hodgkin-Huxley neurons with explicit ion exchange mechanism between the cell interior and exterior.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) They do not employ the reduction methodology more suited for the single neuron model they consider.<br /> (2) Their derivation of the neural mass model is based on several assumptions, and not all well justified.<br /> (3) Their formulation of the mean-field derivation is unnecessary complicated, it can be strongly simplified by following previously published approaches to derive biologically realistic neural masses.<br /> (4) Their model seems to work only for highly synchronized situations and not for the standard asynchronous evolution usually observed in neural circuits.

      General Statements:

      The authors honestly declared the many limitations of their approach, once assumed this the results of the mean-field are somehow inconsistent with the neural network simulations as expected.

      The authors suggest to employ this model for the simulations on the whole connectome to follow seizure propagation, however I believe that a simpler model, as the Epileptor, remains superior in this respect to this model. That indeed includes biophysical parameters but their correspondence with the ones employed in the network dynamics remain elusive, due to the many assumptions required to derive this mean field model. Furthermore it is more complicated than the Epileptor, I do not think that the present model will be largely employed by the community.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have corrected mistakes present in the manuscript and put a correct list of references.

      However, they refuse

      (1) To simplify the formulation of the model, the model contains unnecessary complications, as I have clearly written in my report, the authors agree, but they do not want to change the formulation;

      (2) To derive the mean field model in a simpler way, as possible, and as I asked many times in my Referee report, this would help the readers to understand the important aspect of the derivation, without not needed and confusing complicated formulations;

      (3) To compare direct simulations of the network with neural mass results in sub-section "Bifurcation analysis: emergent network states and multistability" to show bistability, as I asked.

      As a matter of fact the performed modifications do not solve my previous doubts on the validity of the results reported in the manuscript.

      Therefore, my previous assessments remain valid.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents an elegant and innovative imaging approach to visualize DNase activity at the interface between macrophages and extracellular substrates. The platform is technically strong and enables the study of localized DNA degradation with high spatial resolution. The work is of clear interest and provides a useful framework to investigate how immune cells process extracellular DNA. However, several aspects of the mechanistic interpretation and conceptual framing would benefit from clarification.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study introduces a creative and well-designed imaging platform that allows visualization of localized DNase activity at cell-substrate interfaces.

      (2) The approach is technically robust and represents a valuable tool that could be broadly useful to the field.

      (3) The experiments are thoughtfully designed and address an important question regarding how immune cells interact with extracellular DNA.

      (4) The work opens interesting avenues for studying DNA processing in contexts such as infection and inflammation.

      Weaknesses:

      While the experimental approach is strong, several key conclusions rely on interpretations that would benefit from further clarification:

      (1) First, the conclusion that DNaseX is recruited to phagocytic cups from the "cytoplasm" appears conceptually imprecise. Given that DNaseX is a membrane-anchored protein, it is unlikely to exist as a freely soluble cytoplasmic pool. A more plausible interpretation is that DNaseX is supplied from intracellular membrane compartments. This interpretation would also be more consistent with the data showing dependence on a membrane anchor.

      (2) Second, the interpretation that actin polymerization is not required for DNaseX recruitment raises concerns. Phagocytic cup formation is known to depend strongly on actin dynamics, and it is therefore unclear whether the structures observed under actin inhibition represent fully formed functional cups or partial cell-substrate contacts. This distinction is important for interpreting recruitment versus activity, particularly since enzymatic activity is reduced under these conditions.

      (3) Third, the identification of DNaseX as the main nuclease responsible for the observed activity is not fully resolved. The conclusions rely primarily on gene silencing and staining approaches, but the specificity of these strategies relative to other nucleases is not addressed. It therefore remains possible that additional enzymes contribute to the observed activity.

      (4) Finally, the interpretation of the biofilm experiments may be overstated. While the data clearly show localized DNA degradation in contact with macrophages, it is not fully established that this process depends specifically on phagocytic cup structures. An alternative explanation is that membrane-associated DNase activity more generally mediates this effect. In addition, the physiological relevance of this mechanism would benefit from further discussion.

      Overall, the study is technically strong and introduces a valuable methodology, but several central conclusions are only partially supported by the current data and would benefit from more cautious interpretation and clearer conceptual framing.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this study, the authors address the molecular mechanism underlying the transcriptional changes during erythroid differentiation from hematopoietic progenitor cells. The authors combine single-molecule live cell imaging and CUT&RUN to analyze the chromatin binding properties of the GATA2 transcription factor prior to and after initiation of differentiation into the erythroid cell lineage. Using three distinct cellular systems, the authors demonstrate that the chromatin binding of GATA2 is transiently increased early in the differentiation process, as evidenced by increased chromatin binding residence time and the emergence of new genomic binding sites identified by CUT&RUN. The strength of the study lies in the combination of single-molecule imaging, which reports on binding dynamics but is agnostic of the binding site, with CUT&RUN, which reports on the binding sites but does not provide dynamic information. The authors clearly demonstrate that chromatin binding of GATA2 is altered early in the differentiation process and is later displaced as cells switch to expression of GATA1, which has been previously observed. The use of three distinct cell lines, in particular the GATA2-SNAP mouse model, is a strength in principle; however, the results are not fully consistent between the different cell systems. A key difference is that the G1E-ER4 and HPC7 cell line models express HaloTagged GATA2 in addition to the endogenous GATA2 protein. The authors go through great lengths to control GATA2-HaloTag expression levels, but they use polyclonal cell lines and do not analyze expression levels of the GATA2-HaloTag transgene, which is a key variable in interpreting their experimental results. Finally, a key variable determined in their single-molecule analysis is the number of binding events observed during the distinct differentiation changes. The number of binding events observed is influenced by the expression level of the tagged protein, which in turn is controlled by the Shield-1 ligand, and the fraction of molecules labeled with the HaloTag ligand. Since transgene protein levels and the labeling efficiency were not determined, it is hard to assess how reliable the measurements of the number of binding events are across all cell lines.

      To address the weaknesses summarized above the authors could take the following steps:

      (1) Determine the expression levels of the GATA2-HaloTag transgene over the course of differentiation under the conditions used for single-molecule imaging. This will not only allow them to determine the expression of the transgene but also the endogenous untagged protein with which the GATA2-HaloTag fusion proteins compete for binding sites.

      (2) To determine the fraction of molecules labeled during imaging, the authors could carry out a titration of the HaloTag ligand and compare the amount of labeled protein under single-molecule imaging conditions to that of saturating labeling of the HaloTag. This approach will ensure that the number of labeled molecules per cell is comparable across experimental conditions and allow the authors to draw more solid conclusions regarding the number of binding events.

      (3) The analysis of residence times using single-molecule imaging requires robust single-particle tracking without gaps or interruptions of trajectories. The authors should show images of their particle trajectories to demonstrate that their tracking is robust. Or even better, movies superimposing the trajectories onto the imaging data.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript addresses an important and timely question in the molecular simulation of biomolecular condensates. Most residue-level coarse-grained models used for IDP phase separation employ implicit solvent and represent effective interactions through relatively simple pairwise potentials. While these models have been very useful, they usually do not explicitly distinguish direct contacts from solvent-separated interactions, nor do they include an energetic barrier associated with water removal. This manuscript attempts to address that limitation by introducing desolvation-inspired terms into coarse-grained models and examining their consequences for phase behavior, chain conformations, dense-phase packing, and dynamics.

      Strengths:

      The central idea is physically well motivated. Using a simple homopolymer model, the authors show that increasing the desolvation barrier suppresses phase separation, whereas stabilizing solvent-separated contacts enhances phase separation. They further show that solvent-separated interactions can reduce dense-phase over-compaction, which is a meaningful result given the known challenges in obtaining both accurate single-chain dimensions and realistic dense-phase properties from the same coarse-grained model. The finding that desolvation-like terms can reshape dense-phase packing without simply rescaling the overall interaction strength is interesting and could be useful for future model development. I also found the attempt to connect conformational changes across dilute and dense phases with thermal distance from the critical point to be intriguing. The dynamic analysis, including the FRAP-like simulations and the discussion of kinetic arrest during coarsening, adds another useful dimension to the work.

      Weaknesses:

      At the same time, there are several places where the manuscript would benefit from more careful framing. First, the desolvation terms are still effective coarse-grained parameters rather than a direct representation of water molecules. The language sometimes gives the impression that desolvation is being treated explicitly, whereas the model introduces desolvation-inspired effective interactions into an implicit-solvent framework. Second, the conformational analysis is interesting, but the broader context of prior work on dilute-to-dense phase conformational reorganization of IDPs could be more clearly discussed. This would help clarify what is new in the present work, whether it is the conformational change itself, its dependence on desolvation terms, or the proposed scaling with distance from the critical point. Third, the dynamic results are potentially useful, but the manuscript should more clearly articulate what is nontrivial beyond the expected slowing of local rearrangements by an added barrier in the potential.

      Overall, I think this is a useful and potentially important contribution.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Hann and colleagues introduce a gaze-based analytical framework designed to capture, on a trial-by-trial basis, how people form and revise their predictions during implicit probabilistic sequence learning. Using an eye-tracking adaptation of an alternating sequence task, they record the first anticipatory saccade during the response-stimulus interval and classify each such saccade along two dimensions: whether it was directed toward a high- or low-probability upcoming stimulus (the learning-dependent vs. not-learning-dependent distinction), and whether the anticipated location coincided with the stimulus that actually appeared. A complementary iterative-updating metric codes whether a participant's prediction for a given three-element context is repeated or revised on successive encounters of that context.

      On the basis of these measures, the authors report that errors congruent with the inferred regularity - which they interpret as reflecting environmental noise - become progressively more frequent than errors reflecting an inaccurate internal model; that participants show a pronounced tendency to repeat their previous prediction rather than revise it; and that updates depend more on whether a prior belief is congruent with the task's statistical structure than on whether the previous prediction was confirmed. They interpret these results as evidence that statistical learning is less error-driven and more repetition-based (Hebbian in character) than is typically assumed.

      Strengths:

      The methodological ambition of the work is considerable, and the paper makes several contributions that are likely to be useful to the implicit-learning and predictive-processing communities. Using the first anticipatory saccade as a pre-response behavioral readout of prediction is conceptually well-motivated: it provides a trial-by-trial index of predictive orienting at a temporal resolution that manual reaction times cannot deliver, and it does so before the outcome of the trial is known. The explicit distinction between errors arising because the task's outcome is stochastic - that is, predictions congruent with the statistical structure but unconfirmed by the stochastic sample - and errors arising because the internal model is inaccurate is a theoretically meaningful move: predictive-coding and Bayesian accounts have long argued that these two sources of surprise should carry different weight for model revision, and the authors offer a behavioral operationalization of that distinction. The analytical pipeline is not tied to the specific paradigm used here and could be applied to other probabilistic sequence-learning tasks, which gives it broader methodological utility than a single-paradigm report. Finally, the demonstration that learners maintain their prior across successive occurrences of the same context, even when it has been disconfirmed by the most recent outcome, is a robust behavioral observation that speaks directly to an unresolved debate about whether statistical learning is dominantly error-driven.

      Weaknesses:

      The framework and the core behavioral observations are valuable, but several inferential steps - from the gaze signal to the cognitive constructs the authors invoke - are not fully supported by the present design, and these gaps affect how readers should interpret the stronger theoretical conclusions.

      The "process-pure" framing conflates sensitivity with construct purity. The authors repeatedly describe the eye-tracking measure as providing a more process-pure index of statistical learning than manual-response paradigms. Anticipatory saccades are themselves a learned motor behavior - the oculomotor system is among the most plastic motor outputs the primate brain generates, and sequence learning in the saccadic system is well-documented. The present design does not dissociate learning of the statistical structure from learning of the oculomotor sequence that expresses it, so the measure is not, on its face, free from the motor-learning confound that the authors criticize in button-press paradigms. The framing should be read as aspirational rather than as demonstrated by the present data.

      The oculomotor reaction-time data do not show the canonical signature of statistical learning. Reaction times for low-probability trials rise across epochs while those for high-probability trials remain approximately flat (Figure 5). The emerging difference between the two trial types, therefore, appears to be driven by a slowing of responses to low-probability stimuli rather than by a facilitation of responses to high-probability ones, and the authors do not rule out the alternative interpretations that this pattern reflects fatigue, a motor floor effect, or inhibition of unexpected locations. Because no fixation constraint is imposed during the response-stimulus interval, pre-stimulus gaze drift toward the anticipated location will artifactually reduce reaction time on precisely those trials the authors wish to treat as learning-driven; the fact that measured reaction times remain well above zero even on trials classified as correct anticipations is itself evidence that this contamination is present. The oculomotor reaction-time data, therefore, do not provide as clean a verification of learning as the manuscript implies.

      The correct/error labeling of anticipatory saccades incorporates information that the participant did not have. Because the first saccade occurs during the response-stimulus interval - that is, before the upcoming stimulus is revealed - the participant's internal predictive state is identical whether the trial is subsequently classified as a learning-dependent correct response or a learning-dependent error. Any difference in the epochwise frequency of these two categories must therefore be driven, at least in part, by the external stochastic structure of the task rather than by a difference in the predictive process itself. In particular, the observation that learning-dependent errors are the most frequent saccade type (Figure 7) is predicted by the prior probabilities of the outcomes alone, given a high-probability prediction, without appeal to any difference in predictive state. Readers should recognize that the theoretically meaningful contrast is between learning-dependent and not-learning-dependent anticipations (two categories), and that the four-way split risks confounding predictive state with outcome stochasticity.

      The iterative-updating metric does not distinguish prior revision from alternative processes. The binary update / no-update code, computed across non-contiguous occurrences of the same three-element context, does not discriminate between a genuine update of the internal model, simple episodic retrieval of a previously encountered triplet, and oculomotor perseveration. Without a formal generative model to anchor the interpretation, the central theoretical claim - that statistical learning is less error-driven than commonly assumed - is underdetermined by the data. The repetition pattern the authors observe is equally consistent with an error-driven model equipped with a low learning rate in a stable environment, an interpretation the authors themselves acknowledge in the Discussion. Adjudicating between these possibilities requires comparison against explicit computational models, which the present manuscript does not provide.

      Data loss and the absence of fixation control. An interpretable saccade is detected on fewer than half of all trials (48.76%; line 889), and the manuscript does not report the distribution of saccade counts per interval, the per-condition trial counts after all exclusions, or the decomposition of the 20% missing-data threshold into its underlying causes. Given that the entire inferential apparatus rests on this subset of trials, the degree of data loss is a relevant context for the reader. Separately, no fixation constraint is imposed between trials: the participant's starting gaze position at the onset of each response-stimulus interval is whatever position was reached at the end of the preceding response, and this starting position carries trial-history information correlated with the upcoming stimulus. This leaves open the possibility that what is classified as predictive orienting partly reflects the mechanical consequences of where the eye happened to be at the end of the previous trial. The authors defend the absence of a fixation cross on the grounds that it would transform the transitional structure of the task, but this is an empirical claim presented without a supporting citation.

      Heterogeneity within the high-probability condition is not addressed. The two routes to a high-probability triplet in the design - pattern-random-pattern (50% of trials) and random-pattern-random (12.5%) - differ both in their base rate and in the reliability of the contextual cue they provide. Collapsing across these subtypes is an analytical choice that may conceal heterogeneity in the underlying learning process.

      Appraisal: Do the results support the authors' conclusions?

      The framework succeeds in providing a trial-by-trial behavioral readout of predictive orienting that is more fine-grained than conventional reaction-time measures, and the behavioral dissociation between errors congruent with the regularity and errors reflecting an inaccurate internal model is a genuine empirical contribution. The conclusions about the mechanistic nature of statistical learning should be read as motivating hypotheses for future modeling work rather than as settled empirical claims.

      Impact and utility:

      The analytical framework introduced here is likely to be useful to researchers working on implicit learning, predictive processing, and Bayesian models of perception and cognition. The measure of predictive orienting and the iterative-updating code could be adapted to a range of probabilistic learning paradigms, and the behavioral dissociation between noise-driven and model-mismatch errors fills a methodological gap that the field has long acknowledged. The authors share their data and code openly, which will facilitate reuse. The most durable contribution of the paper is methodological; the theoretical claims about the nature of statistical learning will require additional computational modeling before they can be regarded as established.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors leverage a high-powered 7T fMRI dataset of subjects viewing naturalistic audiovisual movies to elucidate the topographic organization of the human auditory cortex. By applying a nonlinear pRF model, they successfully map tonotopic gradients extending beyond the auditory core into the STG and STS areas. A primary finding is a medial-to-lateral gradient of increasing response compressivity, which the authors claim mirrors the hierarchical cascade architecture of the visual system. Furthermore, the modeling reveals that regions exhibiting high speech selectivity predominantly occupy the low-frequency portions of non-primary tonotopic maps. The authors argue that this architecture reflects an efficient coding mechanism where the cortex magnifies specific spectral features to facilitate the transition from acoustic encoding to flexible speech representation.

      Overall, the study presents concise analyses and compelling high-resolution results that advance our understanding of auditory cortical organization. However, the manuscript currently exhibits several significant theoretical and methodological gaps that temper its broader claims. Most notably, the authors' reliance on a spatial, retinotopic-like analogy overlooks the fundamentally temporal nature of audition. Decoding continuous, natural speech relies heavily on dynamic, full-spectrum temporal integration and contextual recurrent computations, which are difficult to reconcile with the purely static, low-frequency spatial tuning observed here.

      Strengths:

      (1) The utilization of ultra-high-field 7T functional imaging combined with large-scale, naturalistic continuous stimuli provides an excellent signal-to-noise ratio and captures cortical responses under ecologically valid conditions.

      (2) The application of a non-linear pRF encoding model provides a robust, quantitative method for parameterizing and mapping tonotopic features across the cortex, moving beyond simple contrast-based parcellations.

      (3) The manuscript effectively demonstrates the relationship between category selectivity (e.g., speech) and underlying tonotopy, drawing an elegant and structurally useful analogy to the well-established relationship between category selectivity and retinotopy in the visual cortex.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While the PCA mapping of the functional and structural parameter space is visually compelling, the robustness of this representational geometry across varying acoustic contexts remains ambiguous. Because the model relies on the specific statistical regularities of a single naturalistic audiovisual stimulus set, it is unclear if this low-dimensional structure would hold when tested against isolated speech sounds, environmental noise, or spectrally matched non-speech control stimuli.

      (2) The methodological descriptions currently lack the computational precision required for replication and deep evaluation. I would suggest that the exact mathematical formulation of the encoding model be fully specified in the Methods section. This should include an explicit definition of the objective function, a clear accounting of all terms and hyperparameters utilized during the fitting process, and the exact dimensionalities of both the input feature space and the resulting parameter space.

      (3) There is a critical theoretical disconnect between the observed static, low-frequency tuning in the STG and the known acoustic requirements for continuous speech perception. Speech is a full-spectrum signal; while fundamental frequencies and formants dominate the lower spectrum (which is vital for processing dynamic pitch contours), high-frequency bands (>1 kHz) carry indispensable phonetic information, such as the rapid spectrotemporal dynamics of consonants, especially fricatives. If the speech-responsive cortex is primarily and statically tuned to a low-frequency spectrum, it is unclear how the dynamic, high-frequency spectral information required for semantic decoding is represented. A rich body of electrophysiological literature documents diverse spectrogram coding in the STG. For example, Mesgarani et al. (Science, 2014) demonstrated using spectrotemporal receptive field models that neural populations in the STG are tuned to both low and high-frequency spectrograms well above 1 kHz. The authors must address this discrepancy and attempt to reconcile their static tonotopic findings with the existing literature on dynamic speech encoding.

      (4) While drawing parallels between visual and auditory processing hierarchies is conceptually attractive, the modalities face fundamentally different computational challenges. Vision is largely resolved in space, making a retinotopic spatial coding strategy ecologically and computationally sound. Audition, however, evolves continuously in time. Complex temporal structure, continuous temporal integration, and contextual recurrent computations are paramount for auditory processing, particularly for speech comprehension. In this sense, a purely spatial or tonotopic coding framework is insufficient to fully explain the complex temporal processing dynamics required in the higher-order auditory domain.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors study cardiac deceleration during threat responses in Drosophila. Particularly, it focuses on identifying the neuronal control of this deceleration. Using behavioral and cardiac tracking and analysis, genetics, and calcium imaging, they identify two pairs of dopaminergic neurons involved in cardiac deceleration during air puff responses

      Strengths:

      The study is overall well done, and the paper is clearly written. Particularly, the work on identifying the two pairs of dopaminergic neurons involved in cardiac deceleration using a series of drivers and generating new ones is rigorous and extensive. Finally, the authors manipulate the heartbeat to investigate how it influences threat responses

      Weaknesses:

      There are, however, several points that need to be clarified, as some claims are not entirely supported by evidence.

      The authors, for example, claim that dopaminergic neurons are responsible for cardiac deceleration (during the air puff, lines 182-3, page 9). However, based on the work in this study, it seems that other neurons could be involved in this control as well. In addition to dopaminergic neurons, the authors test serotonergic and octopaminergic neurons, which, based on silencing experiments, also show an implication in heart-beat deceleration. Furthermore, because they find that dopaminergic neurons are the only ones that, upon thermogenetic activation, lead to lower heart beat frequency, they conclude that the dopaminergic neurons are responsible for air -puff induced cardiac deceleration.

      However, these activation experiments are done in a different context than the air puff experiments (at a higher temperature, which could have an effect on the heartbeat changes upon activation of different neuron groups), and because silencing of other monoaminergic neuron types during the air puff also resulted in less cardiac deceleration, one cannot exclude the implication of octopaminergic or serotonergic neurons in air-puff-induced deceleration.

      Activation experiments without high temperatures (using, for example, optogenetics) and/or in the presence of the air puff would be important to determine that the dopaminergic neurons are the main type of monoaminergic neurons involved in air-puff-induced cardiac deceleration. Otherwise, the related claims should be rephrased in a way that clearly doesn't exclude a possible implication of other monoaminergic neurons.

      Regarding the interactions between the cardiac deceleration and locomotion, the authors propose, based on the results, that the optogenetic cardiac deceleration is sufficient to induce an increase in locomotion, and that it is the decrease in heartbeat that would be responsible via interoceptive pathways to trigger an increase in locomotion. In the model they propose, the DA-WED neurons would induce a decrease in heartbeat that, in turn, would trigger an increase in locomotion. There is not enough proof that cardiac deceleration is the one that triggers an increase in locomotion during air puff responses. As the authors themselves state, the experiments that would demonstrate this would involve preventing cardiac deceleration while optogenetically activating DA-WED. It can therefore not be excluded that the DA-WED neurons trigger an increase in locomotion that is possibly modulated by the cardiac activity. Both alternatives should be considered (models in Figures 4 and 5).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study addresses an important question regarding exercise-induced modulation of pain in women, but the conclusions appear to be based on relatively limited and selective evidence. The authors report an interaction between exercise intensity and stimulus intensity, which they interpret as evidence for exercise-induced hypoalgesia and conclude that fitness, but not sex, modulates this effect. However, this main result relies on a relatively small interaction that emerges only under specific conditions, with inconsistent findings across pain modalities and stimulus intensities, and an analysis approach that does not fully exploit the continuous pain ratings collected. The lack of a baseline condition further limits the interpretability of the findings as reflecting hypoalgesia, and overall, the data provide a rather constrained basis for drawing broader conclusions.

      Strengths:

      (1) The focus on women is important and timely, particularly given the ambiguity in prior findings and the historical bias toward male-dominated samples.

      (2) The attempt to revisit previous findings in a new cohort is valuable in principle.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The core interpretation may not be fully supported by the data

      The central claim-that the results demonstrate exercise-induced hypoalgesia and its dependence on fitness but not sex-does not appear to be fully supported by the evidence presented.

      1.1 Lack of baseline condition

      The absence of a no-exercise baseline substantially limits interpretation. The study compares high- and low-intensity exercise, but without a baseline, it is not possible to determine whether either condition produces hypoalgesia or hyperalgesia relative to calibration. The observed HI-LI difference, therefore, reflects only a relative contrast between exercise intensities, not an absolute reduction in pain. As a result, attributing the findings to "hypoalgesia" may be difficult to justify fully.

      1.2 Lack of internal replication across conditions

      The reported effect is highly specific and does not clearly generalise across the experimental design. It emerges significantly only for heat pain at the highest stimulus intensity, with no clear effects for other intensities and for pressure pain. Moreover, the main statistical result is a relatively small interaction effect with a modest p value, which translates into a difference of approximately 6-8 VAS units on a 150 scale. This combination-a small effect size, limited statistical strength, and restriction to a single condition-substantially weakens the evidence for a robust or generalisable effect.

      1.3 Deviations from the original study and selective use of data

      Although framed as a follow-up to previous work, the current study introduces substantial methodological changes, particularly in the acquisition and scaling of pain ratings (continuous vs post-hoc ratings, modified VAS with sub-threshold range). Despite collecting rich continuous data, the analysis focuses on peak responses to approximate the previous study. While this may aid comparability, it results in a strong emphasis on a single data point (highest intensity), rather than leveraging the full dataset. This limits both interpretability and comparability.

      1.4 Over-reliance on null results regarding sex differences

      The conclusion that fitness, but not sex, modulates exercise-induced pain may not be directly supported by the data presented. The current study includes only highly fit women, and comparisons with men or less-fit women rely on non-significant differences in a previous cohort. The absence of a significant difference does not provide evidence for equivalence, and no formal statistical support for a null effect is provided. As such, conclusions about the absence of sex differences would unfortunately benefit from more cautious interpretation.

      (2) Limited sample and lack of diversity

      The dataset is narrow in scope, comprising a small sample (N = 21) of healthy, highly fit women. Key demographic characteristics (e.g. age range, BMI distribution) are not fully presented, explored or discussed. This limits generalisability and makes it difficult to draw broader conclusions about exercise-induced pain modulation in women, as the main focus of the study.

      (3) Methodological choices limit the interpretability of the data

      Several methodological decisions would benefit from stronger justification:

      3.1 The use of a non-standard VAS scale (0-150 with a fixed pain threshold at 50) is unconventional and may influence how participants report pain, while limiting comparability with related literature.

      3.2 Participants explicitly reported expecting exercise to reduce pain, introducing a potential confound that is not presently addressed.

      3.3 A more comprehensive use of the full time series of pain ratings would provide a stronger and more transparent basis for interpretation of the present findings.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In the manuscript "Cancer cells differentially modulate mitochondrial respiration to alter redox state and enable biomass synthesis in nutrient-limited environments", Chang et al investigate how cancer cells respond to the limitation of certain environmental nutrients by regulating the cellular NAD+/NADH ratio. They focus on serine and lipid metabolism, pathways known to be controlled by the NAD+/NADH ratio, and propose that changes in mitochondrial respiration in response to deprivation of these nutrients can influence the NAD+/NADH ratio, thereby impacting biomass synthesis.

      While the study is descriptive in nature and does not investigate specific molecular mechanisms that explain the crosstalk between nutrient availability and mitochondrial redox changes, the experimental component is robust, and the conclusions are well supported by the results. Some suggestions could further refine the conclusions and enhance the quality of the manuscript.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have provided a very comprehensive response. Their updated paper has improved, and the critiques have been mitigated.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Core conclusions are well-supported by data: co-folding outperforms docking in known ligand pose/affinity prediction (validated by RMSD and IC₅₀ correlation), struggles with false positive discrimination in virtual screens (lower AUC values), and is complementary to docking (non-correlated errors, distinct strengths in drug discovery stages).

      Strengths:

      Unprecedented prospective design with 557 novel Mac1-ligand complexes ensures rigorous, independent evaluation of co-folding methods, provides an unbiased and rigorous benchmark dataset, which contains structures and compounds absent from the co-folding models training sets. Comprehensive comparison of 3 co-folding tools (AlphaFold3, Chai-1, Boltz-2) with DOCK3.7 across diverse targets and metrics enables nuanced performance assessment. The revised results clarify an intriguing finding: co-folding can predict correct ligand poses even when protein formations are mispredicted. The study clearly demonstrates complementary roles of co-folding (superior pose/affinity prediction for known ligands) and docking (better hit prioritization), and addresses deep learning memorization concerns via ligand similarity analysis.

      Weaknesses:

      The study identifies a major limitation of co-folding-failure to capture rare protein conformational changes, which deserve future investigation. The authors include uncalibrated Boltz-2 affinity data (addressing a prior comment) but note that large-scale free energy perturbation (FEP) comparisons are beyond their capabilities.

      Appraisal of Aims Achieved:

      The authors successfully achieved their primary aims and the results provide strong, well-supported evidence for their core conclusions. Key conclusions are grounded in the study's unbiased, training-set independent data, ensures the conclusions are not confounded by model memorization and are broadly applicable to the field's use of these co-folding models.

      Field Impact:

      This study provides a critical reality check for the field: co-folding models are powerful tools for pose prediction but are not yet standalone solutions for virtual screening, a key distinction that will prevent over-reliance on these models and guide more rational tool selection.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Original Review:

      The manuscript by Eroglu and Hobert presents a set of strains each harboring up to three fluorescently tagged endogenous proteins. While there is technically nothing wrong with the method and the images are beautiful, we struggled to appreciate the advance of this work - who is this paper for?

      As a technical method, the advance is minimal since the first author had already demonstrated that three mutations (fluorophore insertion and co-CRISPR marker) could be introduced simultaneously.

      As a pilot for creating genome-scale resources, it is not clear whether three different fluorophores in one animal, while elegantly designed and implemented, will be desired by the broader community.

      Finally, the interpretation of the patterns observed in the created lines leaves much to be desired. A Table with all the observations must be included and can replace the tedious (and often wrong) descriptions of the observations with the different lines. It would be too much to point out every mistaken expectation of protein expression. Two examples include:

      The expectation that ACDH-10 is enriched in the intestine and epidermal tissues (hypodermis) is naïve - there are multiple paralogs of this protein (look at WormPaths or WormFlux) that may share functions in different tissues. There is also no reason to assume that fatty acid metabolism does not occur in other tissues (including the germline). Finally, there are no published studies about this enzyme, so we really don't know for sure what it's doing.

      The expectation that HXK-1 is ubiquitously expressed is similarly naïve. There are three paralogous enzymes that are all associated with the same reaction, and we have shown that these three function redundantly in vivo, perhaps in different tissues (PMID: 40011787). Moreover, single cell RNA-seq data (PMID: 38816550) also shows enrichment of hxk-1 in gonadal sheath cells.

      The table should have at least the following information: gene/protein name - Wormbase ID - TPM levels of single cell data assigned to tissues for L2, L4 and adult (all published) - tissues in which expression is observed in the lines presented by the authors.

      Other points:

      (1) We would encourage the authors to provide systematic validation of the reported insertions. The manuscript reports that 24 of 30 tags were isolated and visible but does not clearly state whether each isolated line was confirmed by sequence‑level validation to be correctly in‑frame and free of unintended mutations at the target locus.

      (2) The manuscript presents aggregated success counts (e.g., 8/10 mTagBFP2 tags, 9/10 mStayGold, 7/10 mScarlet3) and useful narrative descriptions of injection outcomes. We suggest also to include per‑locus success rates.

      (3) For pools that required re‑injection after initial failures, we would like to see a description of the specific changes that were made to the injection mixes or procedures (e.g., new repair template prep, different Cas9 reagent lot, guide redesign). This will be useful troubleshooting information for others.

      (4) The authors states that the fluorophore sequences are codon-optimized for C. elegans. We suggest they provide the exact donor/tag sequences used specifically state whether the fluorophore sequences contain any synthetic/artificial introns or other sequence modifications (e.g., silent PAM‑disrupting mutations) were included in the donor templates.

      (5) Page 3: Include a reference for "The C. elegans genome encodes around 20,000 genes"

      We hope these comments are useful.

      Comments on Revised Version:

      Overall, we found the responses to be quite recalcitrant.

      We have one remaining composite concern about the comparison between observed expression patterns with the new strains versus published data.

      First, the authors only report patterns for one stage while it should be not too much effort to image the different life stages. However, since this is a revision, we are not formally requesting they do this.

      Second, in the now provided Table (thank you) 'observed expression' (last column) is lacking for 9 of the 30 proteins, and for 6 of these the procedure was not successful. Why not report patterns for the other three? It is confusing also because on page 5, the authors say that "overall, 24 of 30 tags ...all of which were visible with fluorescence stereomicroscopy" - are we missing something? Also, they then said that they "obtained 6/9 of the originally failed tags"; why are the corresponding patterns not included in table 1, and are 9 proteins still labeled as "no" in the "success?" Column?

      Third, we strongly feel that the response to our comments about expression patterns is not adequate. On page 5 the authors say that "all proteins were expected to be ubiquitously expressed" and that "scRNA-seq indicated that transcript abundance was ubiquitous and without strong tissue-specific enrichment with few exceptions". However, in their rebuttal, the authors now argue for tissue-specific expression for proteins with paralogs, turning around their own argument! Moreover, their Table indicates that many genes show tissue-enriched expression by RNA-seq while many of their tagged proteins exhibit ubiquitous expression.

      Overall, this indicates that both the overall accomplishment of generating tagged protein strains and analyzing their expression is oversold.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to determine Molidustat targets and the potential utility of these findings. They clearly demonstrate that Molidustat interferes with GSTP1 and some other proteins on top of PHD2. They also demonstrate that PHD2 deletion is not sufficient to recapitulate Molidustat effects in cells and proteomes. Finally, they demonstrate synthetic lethality in organoids for Molidustat and APC deletion.

      Strengths:

      The data on Molidustat proteomes, GSTP1 binding, inhibition and metabolic health of organoids is really clear. All biochemical, docking and omic data are really strong. The potential impact of these findings could be the use of Molidustat in APC null tumours and awareness of potential off-target effects.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Synesthesia is a neurological condition where stimulation of one sensory channel leads to involuntary, automatic, and consistent experience of another, unrelated percept. For example, Sir Francis Galton (1880, Nature) famously described the robust tendency of some individual (synesthetes) to associate numerals with a distinct color. Ever since, synesthesia keeps attracting a broad interest in the cognitive neurosciences in light of its implications for the study of domains such as perception, consciousness, and brain connectivity, among others.

      Strauch, Leenaars, and Rouw measured pupil size in a group of 16 grapheme-color synesthetes and two matched control groups. The participants were presented with gray digits - that is, visual stimuli having identical physical properties in terms of brightness. Each participant subsequently rated the corresponding evoked color and brightness: unlike controls, synesthetes did so in a very consistent and reliable fashion. Accordingly, this was also shown in their pupils: despite the same objective luminance, digits associated with brighter percepts caused their pupils to constrict and digits associated with darker percepts caused their pupils to dilate more than controls. These results highlight how crossmodal correspondences are deeply rooted in synesthetes, and puts forward pupillometry as a particularly appealing biomarker for some phenomenological experience (at least those grounded in "brightness").

      Further strengths of the technique are its temporal resolution and its responsiveness to several constructs. Across several tasks, the authors show for example that responses to synesthetic light are somewhat slower than responses to real light (i.e., they are likely mediated), but at the same time faster than responses to mental imagery. The role of mental imagery can also be reasonably dismissed when considering the second feature of pupil size: its responsiveness to mental effort and cognitive load. The pupils tend to dilate with demanding, challenging tasks, and this was the case when control participants were asked to report the color of a digit for which they did not consistently experience a synesthetic association. The same task was, instead, seemingly effortless for synesthetes, again speaking in favor of the automaticity of number-color correspondences in their case.

      Overall, the findings by Strauch, Leenaars, and Rouw are highly significant for the field and likely to be impactful. The strength of their evidence, when accounting for the relatively small sample size and the inherent variability of both phenomenology (color perception and subjective reporting) and physiology (pupil size), is adequate and sufficiently convincing.

      Comments on revisions:

      I thank the authors for addressing all my comments in a satisfactory way. I think that the paper has improved, especially in terms of transparency of the reporting and clarity of the results.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Chang et al. attempted to analyze a large number of ribo-seq datasets through a standardized pipeline, identifying novel non-canonical ORFs and elucidating their evolutionary and expression characteristics.

      Strengths:

      (1) The datasets analyzed by the authors are sufficiently comprehensive, and the use of standardized pipelines ensures excellent analytical consistency.

      (2) Their analyses of ORF evolution and co-expression further deepen our understanding of these ORFs.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors primarily conducted analyses through bioinformatics, lacking sufficient wet-lab experimental evidence.

      (2) Some analytical methods and standards were not clearly presented in the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Meijer and colleagues investigated the effects of inactivation (conditional silencing) of cortical layer 6b neurons on sleep-wake states and EEG spectral power under the following three conditions: during natural sleep-wake states, after sleep deprivation, or after intracerebroventricular administration of orexin A and B. The authors report that silencing of L6b neurons did not have a significant effect on the total time spent in sleep-wake states, duration or number of state epochs, or the response to sleep deprivation. However, silencing of L6b neurons did slow down theta-frequency (6-9 Hz) during wake and REM sleep, and reduced the total EEG power during NREM sleep. Infusion of orexin A in the mice in which cortical layer 6b neurons were inactivated produced an increase in wakefulness. A similar effect was observed after infusion of orexin A in the mice in which these neurons were not silenced, but the effect (i.e., increase in wakefulness) was of a smaller magnitude. Silencing of cortical layer 6b neurons attenuated the effect of orexin B in increasing theta activity, as was observed in the control mice. The authors conclude that the cortical neurons in layer 6b play an essential role in state-dependent dynamics of brain activity, vigilance state control and sleep regulation.

      Strengths:

      - A focus on cortical layer 6b neurons, which is an understudied neuronal population, especially in the context of brain and behavioral state transitions.

      - The authors used a well-established mouse model to study the effect of inactivation of cortical layer 6b neurons.

      Weaknesses:

      - Although the authors used a highly selective approach to silence layer 6b neurons, the observed changes in EEG oscillations cannot be solely attributed to layer 6b neurons because of the ICV route for orexin administration.

      - The rationale for using only male rats is not provided.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have addressed my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigate how ELF3, a disordered scaffolding protein in the plant circadian Evening Complex, responds to temperature by forming reversible nuclear condensates. They focus on the C-terminal prion-like domain and on a variable polyglutamine tract within it, asking how the tract length and surrounding sequence context tune temperature-responsive structural and condensation behavior. Using a tiered set of computational approaches, including sequence heuristics, hierarchical chain-growth ensembles, all-atom enhanced-sampling simulations, and coarse-grained condensate simulations of 100 monomers, they characterize wild-type, polyQ deletion, polyQ expansion, and an aromatic-disrupting F527A variant. In the revised manuscript, the central claim has been reframed so that polyQ length is now described as tuning condensate material properties rather than driving temperature-sensitive phase separation, with temperature-responsive condensation attributed primarily to a sticker-rich aromatic contact network.

      Strengths:

      The biological question is important and timely, and the multiscale computational strategy provides a fresh view of an intrinsically disordered protein and its variants. The all-atom enhanced sampling analyses identify a temperature-dependent long-range aromatic contact involving F527 and a methionine-tyrosine coordination motif, which are concrete and mechanistically interesting observations beyond what coarse-grained or sequence-only methods could provide. In response to the previous round of review the authors have added replicate averaged statistics with error bars on the new condensate analyses, introduced new dynamics observables including effective diffusivity, an anomalous diffusion exponent, the self van Hove function, shape anisotropy, per chain radius of gyration in the condensed phase, and a condensate lifetime, provided cluster size time series for transparency, justified the choice of polyQ tract lengths against published Arabidopsis polymorphisms, expanded the Methods with explicit formulas for the new analyses, and included a split half convergence check for the all atom ensembles. The reframing toward a sticker spacer interpretation is consistent with recent experimental work and represents a more cautious and defensible reading of the data.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite these substantive additions, several core concerns from the previous review remain only partially addressed, and, on close reading, the new supplementary analyses do not robustly support the reframed claim that polyQ length tunes condensate material properties. Error bars and replicate-averaged statistics were added to the new condensate panels, but the helical propensity and per-residue analyses throughout the rest of the manuscript still show only a single curve per temperature, so variability for these key observables remains unreported. Several of the newly added dynamics observables show that the variants are essentially indistinguishable within the reported uncertainty: the self van Hove distributions, the shape anisotropy distributions, and the per chain radius of gyration distributions in the condensed phase overlap almost entirely across variants, and the anomalous diffusion exponent has between replica spreads at low temperature that exceed the variant to variant differences, with variant orderings that change with temperature. The variant-dependent signal that does survive, namely a drop in condensate lifetime for the polyQ expansion and the aromatic mutant at the highest temperature studied, rests on a single temperature point, with replicate spreads spanning most of the metric's dynamic range.

      The cluster size time series at higher temperatures shows the dominant cluster oscillating over a wide range across replicas, indicating intermittent dissolution and incomplete convergence in the very temperature regime where the variant-specific claims are made. The only convergence test provided is a split-half radius-of-gyration analysis for the all-atom ensembles, with no slab-geometry or coexistence-density check for the coarse-grained condensate simulations. The polyQ deletion variant forms dominant clusters comparable in size to wild type at low and intermediate temperatures, which on its own argues that variable polyQ presence is not a primary determinant of clustering and supports the earlier concern that the temperature sensitive behavior is dominated by generic chain length and aromatic sticker effects rather than polyQ specific sequence effects, a concern that the reframing softens but does not resolve. Statistical significance is not assessed anywhere, and with three replicas and largely overlapping error bars, claims of variant-specific differences would benefit from explicit statistical tests. Minor quality control issues are also visible in the supplementary material, including a mislabeling of the aromatic mutant in two analysis panels and an inconsistent trajectory length for one variant at one temperature.

      Additional Context for Readers:

      Readers should interpret the molecular mechanism proposed here with caution. The reframing from polyQ length driving temperature-sensitive phase separation to polyQ length tuning of condensate material properties is more scientifically measured and aligns with recent experimental work, but several of the supplementary observables introduced to support this revised claim indicate that the variants studied are statistically indistinguishable within the reported replicate uncertainty. The most robust observation in the revised work is that the prion-like domain undergoes a temperature-responsive break of an aromatic contact in all-atom simulations and that aromatic sticker contacts dominate inter-protein interactions in coarse-grained condensate simulations. The mechanistic role of the polyQ tract, beyond generic chain length and hydration effects, remains, as in the original submission, not clearly established by the simulations presented. Independent experimental validation of the proposed aromatic contact and of the predicted material-state differences between polyQ variants will be needed to establish the molecular mechanism, and improved condensate convergence tests, uniformly reported error bars across all simulation-derived figures, and explicit statistical tests of variant-versus-variant differences would substantially strengthen confidence in the conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study introduces a method that combines physical expansion of cells, imaging-guided isolation of defined regions, and protein identification to enable compartment-resolved analysis of protein composition at the subcellular scale. The authors aim to address a central limitation in existing approaches, namely the loss of spatial information during sample preparation or the indirect nature of proximity-based labeling methods. Using several cellular compartments as examples, they demonstrate that their approach can recover compartment-enriched protein sets and identify candidate proteins with previously unassigned localization.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of this work is the conceptual simplicity and accessibility of the approach. By combining established techniques in a modular way, the method avoids the need for genetic manipulation or specialized labeling strategies, making it broadly adaptable across experimental systems. The ability to directly select regions of interest based on imaging represents a clear advantage over indirect enrichment strategies and allows flexible targeting of both membrane-bound and non-membrane-bound compartments.

      The experimental design is also a strong aspect of the study. The use of complementary comparison strategies-analyzing isolated compartments alongside matched "subtracted" controls-provides an internal framework for assessing enrichment and depletion, increasing confidence in spatial assignment. The application of the method across multiple organelles of different sizes and properties demonstrates versatility, and the reported specificity for several compartments is encouraging. In particular, the ability to profile small and biochemically challenging structures highlights a potentially important niche for the approach.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite these strengths, several methodological limitations constrain the interpretation of the results. The most important relates to spatial accuracy in three dimensions. While lateral resolution is improved through physical expansion, the lack of depth resolution introduces uncertainty regarding contributions from structures above and below the selected region. Although the authors argue that this does not substantially affect specificity, the current evidence is largely indirect, and a more rigorous quantification of potential contamination would strengthen this conclusion.<br /> Quantitative interpretation also remains challenging. Because the measurements reflect total protein abundance rather than local concentration, differences in compartment size and protein density can influence enrichment values, particularly for small structures embedded within larger volumes. This issue is evident in the analysis of smaller compartments and complicates direct comparison across conditions. Additional normalization or modeling would help clarify how to interpret these measurements.

      Another limitation concerns variability in the expansion process and its downstream consequences. Differences in expansion factor across samples may affect the definition of regions of interest and introduce variability in sampling, yet the impact of this variability is not fully explored. Similarly, the use of a modified chemical treatment to preserve proteins for downstream analysis is central to the workflow but is not extensively validated with respect to preservation of spatial organization.

      While the identification of previously unannotated proteins is an appealing aspect of the study, validation is limited to a small number of examples, and broader support from independent datasets or literature context is lacking. In addition, the study primarily focuses on steady-state measurements in a single cell type, and therefore does not yet demonstrate the ability of the method to capture dynamic or condition-dependent changes in protein localization.

      Finally, the positioning of the method relative to existing approaches could be more clearly articulated. Although qualitative comparisons are provided, a more systematic and quantitative benchmarking against alternative strategies would help readers better understand the specific advantages and trade-offs.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      The paper investigates whether the real-time physical experience of the body shapes high-level physical reasoning. Participants played a set of computerized tool-use reasoning games (the Virtual Tools paradigm) in which they must use knowledge of physical laws - including gravity, collisions, and inertia - to guide a ball into a target area. In Study 1, participants played the games under terrestrial gravity while receiving either Galvanic Vestibular Stimulation (GVS), which introduces noise into the vestibular organ and disrupts gravitational signalling, or a Sham condition with matched skin sensation. In Study 2, a separate cohort played the same games redesigned under hypogravity (0.5 g - half Earth g) or hypergravity (2 g - double Earth g), again with concurrent GVS or Sham stimulation. Performance was assessed through success rate, number of attempts, and time per attempt; strategy was assessed through the spatial distance between successive tool placements and the frequency of tool switching across attempts. A post-hoc gravity-weighted index (GWI) was computed to compare the effect of vestibular perturbation across the two studies. The main finding is that GVS impairs performance in gravity-dependent games under terrestrial gravity, yet the same perturbation appears to be neutral or even beneficial when the game environment involves non-terrestrial gravity - a result the authors interpret as evidence for an adaptable, body-grounded internal model of physics.

      Strengths

      One of the most notable strengths of this work is its conceptual positioning at the intersection of embodied cognition and physical reasoning. Rather than treating the human body either as an abstract information-processing device or as a purely biomechanical system, the authors take seriously the idea that cognition is scaffolded by ongoing sensorimotor state - and they test this idea with a paradigm that is both tractable and theoretically motivated. The use of the Virtual Tools paradigm is well-suited to this goal: the games vary systematically in their reliance on gravitational predictions, allowing selective impairment (rather than general disruption) to serve as a signature of embodied physical reasoning.

      The dual-study design is another strength. Testing the same vestibular perturbation under terrestrial and altered game-gravity conditions, and observing a reversal in its effect depending on context, provides a form of internal control that is conceptually compelling. The additional clustering analyses (Dirichlet Process Gaussian Mixture Model and leave-one-out kernel density classification) strengthen the strategy results beyond raw distance measures, confirming that GVS systematically shifts participants' spatial exploration strategies.

      The paper is also clearly written and engages meaningfully with relevant theoretical frameworks - predictive coding, embodied cognition, and stochastic resonance - making it accessible and stimulating for a broad audience.

      Weaknesses

      (1) Absence of multiple-comparisons correction. A large number of game-level pairwise t-tests are conducted in both studies (upward of twenty per study) without correction for familywise error rate. The game-level effects that anchor the main narrative - in Study 1 alone: Remove, GoalMove, Spiky, Falling_A, Shafts_B, Gap, and Chaining - arise from an uncorrected pool of comparisons. The probability that some of these constitute false positives is non-trivial. The authors should apply a correction (e.g., Benjamini-Hochberg) or at a minimum discuss this limitation explicitly.

      (2) The facilitation claim rests on a post-hoc and arbitrarily parameterized index. The gravity-weighted index (GWI), which drives the central cross-study comparison, uses integer coefficients (1, 2, 3) to weight games by gravity dependency level. These coefficients are entirely arbitrary and bear no principled relationship to the actual gravitational magnitudes used in the study. Why not use the gravity dependency ratings themselves, or the empirically estimated gravity impact scores from the computational modelling mentioned in the Methods? The choice of weights should be either principled or tested across a range of values to demonstrate robustness. Furthermore, the notation in equation (1) as currently typeset reads as "Gravity minus Weighted Index" rather than "Gravity-Weighted Index"; this should be corrected.

      (3) The "facilitation" interpretation exceeds what the data in Study 2 directly support. Across all games in Study 2, GVS versus Sham differences in absolute performance are non-significant in all directions. The facilitation claim derives entirely from the GWI being higher in Study 2 than in Study 1 - a between-subjects comparison involving different participant groups and a non-pre-registered metric. The language of "facilitation" should be tempered accordingly, or the authors should provide additional analyses to support this framing.

      (4) Gravitational manipulation is visual only, and the vestibular system is only one component of the gravity-sensing network. Gravity perception results, as the authors very well know, from a distributed multisensory integration process that involves, in addition to the vestibular system, visual, proprioceptive, and visceral inputs. The present paradigm manipulates gravitational context solely through visual cues and targets the vestibular system through GVS - a point the authors acknowledge but do not discuss in sufficient depth. It is important to distinguish clearly between real gravitational alterations (as achieved in parabolic flight or centrifuge environments, where the entire body is physically subjected to a different gravitational vector) and virtually altered gravity, where only one sensory modality is targeted while others remain anchored to 1 g. The scope of the conclusions should reflect this distinction.

      (5) The choice of 0.5 g and 2 g may lack sensitivity. Combining the two altered-gravity conditions in Study 2, because no significant effect of hypo versus hypergravity was found, is statistically pragmatic but conceptually unsatisfying. There is evidence in the space physiology literature that gravitational processing is not linearly symmetric around 1 g: threshold effects exist below and above terrestrial gravity that may not be captured by modest deviations (half and double g) - see refs below. It is worth discussing whether the absence of a hypo/hyper distinction in Study 2 reflects a genuine equivalence or a lack of sensitivity, and whether more extreme conditions (e.g., near-zero g or 4-5 g) might reveal different processing regimes. Whether 0.5 g and 2 g were sufficient to saturate the system or merely insufficient to perturb it remains an open question with direct implications for the interpretation of the null GWI effects on strategy measures.

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      (6) High-level reasoning is not defined with sufficient precision. The term "high-level reasoning" appears from the title onward and in the heading of the Study 1 results section (line 138), but it is never formally defined. The reader needs a clearer account of what distinguishes high-level physical reasoning from low-level sensorimotor prediction, and where the games used here fall along that continuum. What specific physical competencies - ballistic trajectories, free-fall predictions, collision dynamics, frictional forces, inertial effects - are required across the game set? When describing the subset of games that drive key effects, this information is critical for evaluating whether effects are specific to gravity reasoning or to some other physical concept.

      (7) Performance measures are disconnected from underlying kinematics. The performance measures (success rate, number of attempts, time per attempt) are coarse, high-level summaries. Time per attempt is used as a proxy for performance efficiency, yet participants received no instructions regarding speed, and different individuals may have adopted systematically different speed-accuracy trade-offs. It would be valuable to know whether time per attempt correlates with attempt number within a given game (which would indicate within-game learning) and whether mouse movement data - trajectory, velocity, hesitation - were recorded and could be analysed to provide more mechanistic insight into strategy formation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Fukui et al. re-examined the ATP hydrolysis mechanism in GHKL ATPases, revealing a cooperative role of two conserved acidic residues rather than one. The authors have used a range of biochemical and structural techniques on various mutants from different members of the GHKL ATPase family to test and validate their proposed mechanism.

      Through a detailed re-analysis of their previously published structure of the aqMutL NTD (ATPase domain) in complex with AMPPCP, they identified Glu29 and Glu32 as interacting with nucleophilic water for the catalysis. The authors carefully dissected the respective roles of these two acidic residues with a series of site-directed mutations. Mutations at Glu29 impaired ATPase activity without affecting protein secondary structure or ATP binding in the case of the E29Q mutant. Moreover, mutations at Glu32 did not affect secondary structure (except for E32G) but reduced ATPase activity. Activity was abolished when both residues (E29Q/E32Q) were mutated.

      The authors extended their study to another GHKL ATPase, aqGyrB. Their findings further supported the cooperative function of the corresponding acidic residues in aqGyrB (Glu48 and Asp51) during ATP hydrolysis. Mutation of these residues partially impaired ATP hydrolysis without affecting protein secondary structure. ATPase activity was completely lost in the double mutant E48Q/D51M. While the E48Q mutant retained the ability to bind ATP, the E48A mutant did not. High-resolution structures of the WT and E48A, E48Q, D51A, and D51N mutants of the aqGyrB NTD demonstrated that nucleophilic water positioning depended on these residues. E48 played a dominant role in water positioning and is critical for stabilising ATP lid formation and associated conformational changes, whereas D51 contributed cooperatively to catalysis.

      The authors investigated the functional impact of mutating the corresponding residues in the human MutL homologs PMS2 and MLH1. Clinical variants consistently exhibited reduced or abolished ATPase activity, providing a potential molecular basis for Lynch syndrome through impaired DNA mismatch repair.

      Lastly, through evolutionary analysis, the authors inferred that the second acidic residue was likely present in the common ancestor of MutL, GyrB, and MORC proteins, but was lost in the case of Hsp90.

      Strengths:

      (1) This study contains a detailed structural and biochemical analysis of a biologically important set of GHKL ATPases. The authors identify a second acidic residue that is conserved and contributes to catalysis in a large subset of GHKL ATPases. An updated and extended mechanistic model of ATP hydrolysis by this class of enzymes is proposed, which involves cooperative and partially overlapping roles for the catalytic residue pair. This revised mechanistic model is invaluable for the interpretation of clinical variants of GHKL ATPases such as PMS2 and MLH1.

      (2) The work described was performed to an excellent and rigorous technical standard. The structural and biochemical data are sound. The evidence supporting the claims is compelling.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The identification in this study of a second acidic residue contributing to catalysis but not absolutely essential for catalysis is a useful finding. However, given that many structures of GHLK ATPases have been determined with different nucleotide analogs bound and that the essential role of the first acidic residue is well established, the importance and scope of the advances described here remain focused within the field of study of GHKL ATPases.

      (2) The authors assessed the consequences of variants in the human MutL homologs PMS2 and MLH1, but various other human GHKL ATPases contain clinically relevant variants, some of which have stronger disease associations than the mutations examined in this study. A broader analysis of the effect (or likely effect) of disease-linked mutations in GHKL ATPases would have strengthened this study.

      (3) In MLH1, the E37K mutation completely abolishes ATPase activity, but the corresponding mutations in aqMutL, aqGyrB, and PMS2 do not. It remains unclear why E37K in MLH1 leads to complete loss of activity, as the authors propose that water molecule positioning via the first acidic residue, as well as ATP lid stabilisation and associated conformational changes, should still be possible.

      (4) The authors do not examine ATP binding in the E32 mutants of aqMutL NTD and the D51 mutants of aqGyrB, or AMPPNP binding of the NLH1 and PMS2 mutants. Hence, the relative contributions of the acidic residues to ATP binding and hydrolysis remain partially unclear.

      (5) The ATPase assays for PMS2 and MLH1 (Figure 7 and Table 1) were performed with purification/solubility tags still present. Hence, it cannot be ruled out that these tags influence the measured activities.

      (6) The authors suggest that the two-acidic-residue mechanism proposed in this study could be shared among several GHKL ATPase families, yet they also state that the hydrogen-bonding network was not observed in MutL and MORC family proteins. This raises doubt about how conserved the mechanism is, e.g., in MutL and MORC proteins.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is an extremely interesting mouse study, trying to understand how sepsis is tolerated during obesity/NAFLD. The researchers combine a well-established model of NASH (Choline-deficiency with High Fat Diet) with a sepsis model (IP injection of 10mg/kg LPS), leading to dramatic mortality in mice. Using this model, they characterize the complex contributions of immune cells. Specifically, they find that NK-cells and Neutrophils contribute the most to mortality in this model due to IFNG and PD-L1+ Neutrophils.

      Strengths:

      The biggest strength of the manuscript is how clear the primary phenotypes/endpoints of their model are. Within 6 hours of LPS injection, there is a stark elevation of liver inflammation and damage, which is exacerbated by a High Fat/CholineDeficient diet (HFCD). And after 1 day, almost all of the mice die. Using these endpoints, the authors were able to identify which cells were critical for mortality in the model and the specific mediators involved.

      Comments on revisions:

      I have no further comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Schwarze et al. investigated whether synaptic efficacy is brain-region specific. To this end, they compared synaptic connections established by layer 5 (L5) neocortical pyramidal cells and between L5 and L2/3 pyramidal cells. In order to identify the mechanism of this brain region specificity, the authors employed several experimental approaches, including paired electrophysiological recordings, extracellular stimulation, low- and high-affinity intracellular calcium chelators (EGTA and BAPTA), multiple probability fluctuation analysis (MPFA), and intracellular measurements of calcium transients as well as computational modelling. The findings of the present study indicate that synaptic connections in the primary somatosensory cortex (S1) are significantly stronger and more reliable than those in the prefrontal cortex (PFC).

      The study is timely, and the topic is of significant interest to the neuroscience community. Despite the extensive research that has been carried out on the neuroanatomy and receptor distribution of different brain regions, comparatively little attention has been paid to differences in synaptic physiology. The authors' approach is characterised by its elegance and comprehensive nature, and the conclusions drawn are compelling. Nevertheless, there are a number of unresolved issues.

      Major points:

      (1) The authors state that data from the S1 cortex were obtained in a previous study. In the context of an explicitly comparative study (PFC vs. S1cortex), it would have been advantageous for the authors to perform a subset of experiments in which both cortices were obtained from a single animal. This is a feasible undertaking, given the spatial separation of the PFC and S1 cortex.

      (2) Figure 1A is somewhat misleading because it could suggest that the authors have performed dual recordings in identified PFC pyramidal cells.

      (3) PFC and S1 cortex in rodents differ markedly in their morphological organisation. For example, in all sensory cortices, layer 4 is very pronounced; however, in the PFC of rodent,s no clear layer 4 can be found. On the other hand, PFC shows a clear separation of layers 2 and 3, which is not visible inthe S1 cortex. Furthermore, PFC pyramidal cells in layers 2, 3, and 5 exhibit significant heterogeneity, diverging considerably from those found in layers 5a and 5b of S1 cortex. Thus, there is no clear correlation between L5 pyramidal cells in the PFC and the S1 cortex. In order to achieve a meaningful comparison of the data obtained in PFC and S1 cortex, it is necessary for the authors to determine whether the record is from similar pyramidal cell populations.

      (3) In addition, PFC pyramidal cells in layer 2, 3 and 5 are highly heterogeneous and differ markedly from those in layer 5a and 5b of S1 cortex. To achieve a meaningful comparison of the data obtained in the PFC and the S1 cortex, the authors need to determine whether the record from similar pyramidal cell populations.

      (4) For the S1 cortex, in rats it has been found that L5 synaptic connection between pairs of L5a pyramidal cells and pairs of L5b pyramidal cells differ markedly with respect to mean EPSP amplitude, latency and coefficient of variation (cv, a surrogate measure for the synaptic release probability) (cf. Markram et al., 1997; Frick et al., 2008). It is therefore likely that PFC and S1 pre- and postsynaptic pyramidal cells are not only morphologically and electrophysiological distinct but also with respect to their synaptic properties. At least, the authors need to discuss these confounding issues and preferentially address them experimentally. For example, it would be helpful to demonstrate that paired recordings were made from the same pyramidal cell types, perhaps by documenting their morphology and/or firing patterns. In addition, they should discuss the marked difference in EPSP amplitude and putative release probability between their data and the earlier studies.

      (5) In order to perform multiple probability fluctuation analysis (MPFA), a parabolic fit with a mere three points is inadequate, particularly because 2 mM and 5 mM Ca2+ are close to the peak of the variance-to-mean parabola, and only 1 mM Ca2+ is on its initial linear part. A more meaningful result would have been obtained with an additional Ca2+ concentration between 1.0 and 2.0 mM, as these are closer to the physiological range. In this context, the authors should have quoted the more recent and more detailed paper by the Silver group (Saviane and Silver, 2006; Lanore and Silver, 2016) and not just the Clements and Silver review paper.

      (6) Methods: The authors should clarify whether their paired recordings from L5 pyramidal cells involved whole-cell recordings from both pre- and postsynaptic neurons. From Figure 1B, it appears as if the presynaptic neurons were not recorded in whole cell mode but rather stimulated in cell-attached mode. This is also reflected in the artefact visible in the current trace recorded in the postsynaptic neuron. The authors should explicitly state their methodological approach and mention how reliable the timing of the presynaptic action potential was under these circumstances. The same holds true for the extracellular stimulation protocol. A significantly more detailed description of the experimental protocol is necessary here.

      (7) Methods: The authors use Student's t-test for data comparison. The authors should verify that the data distribution was indeed normal, e.g. by using a Shapiro-Wilk test. If this is not the case, non-parametric tests should be used.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors set out to test whether a defined set of small molecules can lessen damaging effects caused by venoms from several Bothrops species, and whether these effects are consistent enough to suggest a broadly applicable approach. They present a cross-venom dataset spanning in-vitro activity readouts and blood-based functional outcomes, and include a chicken embryo model to explore whether venom inhibition can translate into improved survival. The central message is that certain small molecules can reduce specific venom-driven effects across multiple samples, providing a comparative resource for the field and a basis for prioritizing future validation.

      Strengths:

      The main value of this work is the breadth and structure of the dataset, which places multiple venoms and multiple readouts into a single, comparable framework that should be useful for readers evaluating patterns across samples. The experimental flow is generally coherent, moving from activity measurements to functional outcomes and then to an in-vivo test, which helps the reader understand how the authors link mechanism-oriented assays to more integrated endpoints. The manuscript also provides practical information for the community by highlighting which readouts appear most consistently affected across venoms, which can help guide hypothesis generation and study design in follow-up work.

      Comments on revisions:

      I would like to thank the authors for answering my questions. The manuscript has gained in quality, knowing the limitations that are now better stated in the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Based on a detailed dataset, the authors present a novel Bayesian approach to classify malaria cases as either imported or locally acquired.

      Strengths:

      The proposed Bayesian approach for case classification is simple, well justified, and allows the integration of parasite genomics, travel history, and epidemiological data.

      Weakness:

      While the authors aim to classify cases as imported or locally acquired, the method does not quantify the contribution of each case type to overall transmission, which the authors leave for future study.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work introduces a novel framework to systematically learn the latent dimensions of single-cell data, grounded in the theory of the Riemannian manifold. The authors demonstrate how this framework can be applied to various important tasks, such as estimating intrinsic dimensionalities, annotating cell types, etc. They did a great job of tackling an important but not yet established problem in the field and approaching it with a theoretically sound and novel approach. I think after a more rigorous and comprehensive validation, this work could be impactful.

      Strengths:

      - Dimensionality reduction is a routine step in analyzing many high-dimensional data, such as molecular data. While the downstream analysis results depend heavily on this step, existing methods rely on strong assumptions and are sometimes heuristic. The authors present a novel, theoretically grounded approach to address this important problem.

      - The authors demonstrated its usability in downstream analysis in a comprehensive manner. Especially, they show evidence suggesting novel T-cell subpopulations.

      - I commend the authors for releasing and maintaining their software well with comprehensive documentation. This significantly increases the usability and accessibility of the method.

      Weaknesses:

      - The paper lacks experiments that validate the results. It would be beneficial to see additional evaluation settings with better-established ground truths to more strongly demonstrate the method's effectiveness.

      - Batch effects are prevalent in single-cell data. The paper does not adequately address how the proposed method handles this issue.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Ding et al. examine the role of TIE1 in cardiac chamber morphogenesis using genetic mouse models targeting Tie1, Tek, or both, and analyzing endocardial cell-mediated chamber formation across multiple embryonic developmental and postnatal stages, supported by analysis of published single-cell datasets and new bulk RNA seq analyses of murine cardiac tissue. The authors find that Tie1 and Tek expression is higher in atrial than ventricular endocardial cells. Notably, endothelial Tie1 is required for atrial trabeculation at E12.5, but is less critical in ventricular trabeculation. TIE1 also acts synergistically with TIE2 during atrial trabeculation. While Tie1 deficiency alone does not cause defects at E10.5, combined heterozygous deletion of Tek disrupts both atrial and ventricular development at E10.5. This synergy is further supported by analyses at later embryonic stages and in postnatal hearts.

      Strengths:

      The study is well-designed, clearly written, and supported by high-quality figures. The performed experiments demonstrate a previously unrecognized role for Tie1 in cardiac development and identify synergistic control of cardiac morphogenesis by Tie1 and Tie2. This synergy is consistent with the previously identified roles of Tie1 and Tek in venous development and with Tie1 involvement in angiopoietin-dependent postnatal vascular and lymphatic remodeling. Together, these findings support a role for Tie1 as a contributor to Ang1-Tie2 signaling during heart development.

      Weaknesses:

      The manuscript does not include direct mechanistic studies; however, RNA seq analysis of atria and ventricles showed reduced expression of Tek, Dll1, and Notch1 upon Tie1 deficiency in developing hearts. Although previously reported mechanisms, such as TIE1-TIE2 heterodimer formation and effects on endothelial junctions, migration, or survival are discussed, no direct mechanistic experiments are performed. Addressing some of these mechanisms would have clarified the basis of Tie1-Tie2 synergy. As two distinct Tie1 models are used, including one targeting the kinase domain, the authors should state whether phenotypes differed or were similar between models.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors review the study of the neural correlates of consciousness (NCCs). They discuss several of the difficulties that researchers must face when studying NCCs, and argue that several of these difficulties can be alleviated by using intracranial recordings in humans.

      They describe what constitutes an NCC, and the difficulties to distinguish between an NCC proper from the prerequisites and consequences of conscious processing.

      They also describe the two main types of experimental designs used to study NCCs. These are the contrastive approach (with its report and non-report variants), and the supraliminal approach, each with their own merits and pitfalls.

      They discuss the limitations of non-invasive methods, such as fMRI, EEG and MEG, as well as the limitations of the use of invasive recordings in non-human animals.

      After setting the stage in this way, the authors provide an extensive review on the knowledge acquired by using invasive recordings in humans. This included population level measurements in vision and in other sensory modalities, as well as single neuron level studies. The authors also discuss studies of subcortical NCCs.

      The second half of this work discusses the theoretical insights gained through the use of intracranial recordings, as well as their limitations, and a perspective for future work.

      Strengths:

      This work offers an impressive review, which will serve as a useful reference document, both for newcomers to the study of NCC as for experienced researchers. The inclusion of non-visual and subcortical NCCs is of particular merit, as these have been understudied.

      Besides serving as a review, this work includes a perspective, exploring several directions to pursue for the progress of the field.

      Weaknesses:

      No major weaknesses.

      Appraisal of whether the authors achieved their aims:

      In this work, the authors have gathered an impressive review, and have discussed several important problems in the field of study of NCCs, as well as provided a perspective on how the field could move forward.

      Discussion of the likely impact of the work on the field:

      This work has the potential of becoming a must read for anyone working in the field of consciousness research.

      Comment on revised version:

      The authors have addressed all my concerns. Once again, my compliments for a nice piece of work.