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  1. Jun 2025
    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Zhao et al. provide new insights into the mechanism by which a high-fat diet (HFD) induces cardiac arrhythmia employing Drosophila as a model. HFD induces cardiac arrhythmia in both mammals and Drosophila. Both glucagon and its functional equivalent in Drosophila Akh are known to induce arrhythmia. The study demonstrates that Akh mRNA levels are increased by HFD and both Akh and its receptor are necessary for high-fat diet-induced cardiac arrhythmia, elucidating a novel link. Notably, Zhao et al. identify a pair of AKH receptor-expressing neurons located at the posterior of the heart tube. Interestingly, these neurons innervate the heart muscle and form synaptic connections, implying their roles in controlling the heart muscle. The study presented by Zhao et al. is intriguing, and the rigorous characterization of the AKH receptor-expressing neurons would significantly enhance our understanding of the molecular mechanism underlying HFD-induced cardiac arrhythmia.

      Many experiments presented in the manuscript are appropriate for supporting the conclusions while additional controls and precise quantifications should help strengthen the authors' arguments. The key results obtained by loss of Akh (or AkhR) and genetic elimination of the identified AkhR-expressing cardiac neurons do not reconcile, complicating the overall interpretation.

      The most exciting result is the identification of AkhR-expressing neurons located at the posterior part of the heart tube (ACNs). The authors attempted to determine the function of ACNs by expressing rpr with AkhR-GAL4, which would induce cell death in all AkhR-expressing cells, including ACNs. The experiments presented in Figure 6 are not straightforward to interpret. Moreover, the conclusion contradicts the main hypothesis that elevated Akh is the basis of HFD-induced arrhythmia. The results suggest the importance of AkhR-expressing cells for normal heartbeat. However, elimination of Akh or AkhR restores normal rhythm in HFD-fed animals, suggesting that Akh and AkhR are not important for maintaining normal rhythms. If Akh signaling in ACNs is key for HFD-induced arrhythmia, genetic elimination of ACNs should unalter rhythm and rescue the HFD-induced arrhythmia. An important caveat is that the experiments do not test the specific role of ACNs. ACNs should be just a small part of the cells expressing AkhR. Specific manipulation of ACNs will significantly improve the study. Moreover, the main hypothesis suggests that HFD may alter the activity of ACNs in a manner dependent on Akh and AkhR. Testing how HFD changes calcium, possibly by CaLexA (Figure 2) and/or GCaMP, in wild-type and AkhR mutant could be a way to connect ACNs to HFD-induced arrhythmia. Moreover, optogenetic manipulation of ACNs may allow for specific manipulation of ACNs.

      Interestingly, expressing rpr with AkhR-GAL4 was insufficient to eliminate both ACNs. It is not clear why it didn't eliminate both ACNs. Given the incomplete penetrance, appropriate quantifications should be helpful. Additionally, the impact on other AhkR-expressing cells should be assessed. Adding more copies of UAS-rpr, AkhR-GAL4, or both may eliminate all ACNs and other AkhR-expressing cells. The authors could also try UAS-hid instead of UAS-rpr.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study investigates the role of arginase-II (Arg-II) in cardiac aging. The authors challenge previous assumptions by demonstrating that Arg-II is not expressed in aged cardiomyocytes, but is upregulated in non-myocyte cells, specifically macrophages, fibroblasts, and endothelial cells. Using Arg-II knockout mice, they show protection against age-associated cardiac inflammation, fibrosis, apoptosis, endothelial-to-mesenchymal transition (EndMT), and ischemic injury. Mechanistically, Arg-II promotes IL-1β release from macrophages and increases mitochondrial ROS in fibroblasts, contributing to cardiac aging through both cell-autonomous and non-cell-autonomous mechanisms.

      The study is well-structured and combines genetic models, molecular assays, and histological analyses to support its conclusions. Including both human and mouse samples strengthens the translational relevance of the findings. The authors have addressed most of the reviewers' comments and have made efforts to improve the manuscript by adding experimental data, explanations, and further discussion.

      The data convincingly support their conclusions. This work provides valuable insights into the mechanisms of cardiac aging, aligns with growing evidence of non-cell-autonomous contributions to aging-related pathologies, and highlights the importance of intercellular signaling in maintaining cardiac health during aging.

      Although the use of cell-specific knockout mouse models would enhance the depth and translational potential of the findings, it is understandable that such an approach would be beyond the scope of a single study. This work lays the groundwork for future investigations into conditional Arg-II knockouts in specific cell types to elucidate the cell-specific roles of Arg-II in cardiac aging.

      Overall, this is a solid and impactful study with strong experimental support

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this manuscript by Wolfson et al., various adeno-associated viruses (AAVs) were delivered to mice to assess the cardiac-specificity, injury border-zone cardiomyocyte transduction rate, and temporal dynamics, with the goal of finding better AAVs for gene therapies targeting the heart. The authors delivered tissue regeneration enhancer elements (TREEs) controlling luciferase expression and used IVIS imaging to examine transduction in the heart and other organs. They found that luciferase expression increased in the first week after injury when using AAV9-TREE-Hsp68 promoter, waning to baseline levels by 7 weeks. However, AAV9 vectors transduced the liver, which was significantly reduced by using an AAV.cc84 liver de-targeting capsid. The authors then performed in vivo screening of AAV9 capsids and found AAV-IR41 to preferentially transduce injured myocardium when compared to AAV9. Finally, the authors combined TREEs with AAV-IR41 to show improved luciferase expression compared to AAV9-TREE at 7, 14, and 21 days after injury.

      Overall, this manuscript provides insights into TREE expression dynamics when paired with various heart-targeting capsids, which can be useful for researchers studying ischemic injury of murine hearts. While the authors have shown the success of using AAV9-TREEs in porcine hearts, it is unknown whether the expression dynamics would be similar in pigs or humans, as mentioned in the limitations.

      The following questions and concerns can be addressed to improve the manuscript:

      (1) From the IVIS data, it seems that the Hsp68 promoter might not be "normally silent in mouse tissues," specifically in the liver (Figure S1B). Are there any other promoters that can be combined with TREEs to induce cardiac-injury specific expression while minimizing liver expression? This could simplify capsid design to focus on delivery to injured areas.

      (2) Why is it that AAV9-TREE-Hsp68-Luc wane in expression (Figure 1C and 1D), whereas AAV.cc84-TREE-Hsp68-Luc expresses stably for over 2 months (3E)? This has important implications for the goal of transience in gene delivery.

      (3) AAV-IR41 was found to transduce cardiomyocytes in the injured zone. However, this capsid also shows a very strong off-target liver expression. From a capsid design perspective, is it possible to combine AAV-cc84 and AAV-IR41?

      (4) It would be helpful to see immunostaining for the various time points in Figure 5. Is it possible to use an anti-luciferase antibody (or AAV-TREE-Hsp68-eGFP) to compare the two TREE capsids?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript "Independent validation of transgenerational inheritance of learned pathogen avoidance in C. elegans" by Akinosho and Vidal-Gadea offers evidence that learned avoidance of the pathogen PA14 can be inherited for at least two generations. In spite of initial preference for the pathogen when exposed in a 'training session', 24 hours of feeding on this pathogen evoked avoidance. The data are robust, replicated in 4 trials, and the authors note that diminished avoidance is inherited in generations F1 and F2.

      Strengths:

      These results contrast with those reported by Gainey et al, who only observed intergenerational inheritance for a single generation. Although the authors' study does not explain why Gainey et el fail to reproduce the Murphy lab results, one possibility is that a difference in a media ingredient could be responsible.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors do not list the sources of their media ingredients, which might be important with regard to reproducibility.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents a useful finding that the high susceptibility to CLP sepsis of Kit-mutant mice is not due to mast cell deficiency, but to dysbiosis.

      However, the present data are insufficient and incomplete to support the conclusion, and would benefit from more rigorous approaches. With the mechanism part strengthened, this paper would be of interest to researchers on mast cell biology and mucosal immunology.

      Recommendations:

      (1) The authors showed that E. coli increases in the cecum of Kit-mutant mice, which causes high CLP susceptibility. However, they did not provide any evidence E. coli is responsible for the high susceptibility. In the Figure 3 experiments, the authors administered the same number of cecal bacteria and did not show the number of E. coli after the administration. The authors should provide evidence showing that depletion of E. coli decreases susceptibility.

      (2) The author should provide direct evidence of dysbiosis by, for example, shotgun sequencing of cecal and fecal contents.

      (3) In case the authors find dysbiosis, they should analyze the mechanisms by which Kit mutation causes dysbiosis.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The major conclusion of the manuscript is expressed in the title: "NR2F2 is required in the embryonic testis for Fetal Leydig Cell development" and also at the end of the introduction and all along the result part. All the authors' assertions are supported by very clear and statistically validated results from ISH, IHC, precise cell counting and gene expression levels by qPCR. The authors used two different conditional Nr2f2 gene ablation systems that demonstrate the same effects at the FLC level. They also showed that the haplo-insufficiency of Wt1 in the first system (knock-in Wt1-cre-ERT2) aggravated the situation in FLC differentiation by disturbing the differentiation of Sertoli cells and their secretion of pro-FLC factors, which had a confounding effect and encouraged them to use the second system. This demonstrates the great rigor with which the authors interpreted the results. In conclusion, all authors' claims and conclusions are justified by their high-quality results.

      Comments on revised version:

      In their revised version, the authors have taken full account of all my suggestions, and I congratulate them on this. I have no further comments to make on this new version.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors tested the efficiency of a model combining Pavlovian fear valuation and instrumental valuation. This model is amenable to many behavioral decision and learning setups - some of which have been or will be designed to test differences in patients with mental disorders (e.g., anxiety disorder, OCD, etc.).

      Strengths:

      (1) Simplicity of the model which can at the same time model rather complex environments.

      (2) Introduction of a flexible omega parameter.

      (3) Direct application to a rather advanced VR task.

      (4) The paper is extremely well written. It was a joy to read.

      Weaknesses:

      Almost none! In very few cases, the explanations could be a bit better.

      Comments on revised version:

      No further comments.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Azlan et al. identified a novel maternal factor called Sakura that is required for proper oogenesis in Drosophila. They showed that Sakura is specifically expressed in the female germline cells. Consistent with its expression pattern, Sakura functioned autonomously in germline cells to ensure proper oogenesis. In sakura KO flies, germline cells were lost during early oogenesis and often became tumorous before degenerating by apoptosis. In these tumorous germ cells, piRNA production was defective and many transposons were derepressed. Interestingly, Smad signaling, a critical signaling pathway for the GSC maintenance, was abolished in sakura KO germline stem cells, resulting in ectopic expression of Bam in whole germline cells in the tumorous germline. A recent study reported that Bam acts together with the deubiquitinase Otu to stabilize Cyc A. In the absence of sakura, Cyc A was upregulated in tumorous germline cells in the germarium. Furthermore, the authors showed that Sakura co-immunoprecipitated Otu in ovarian extracts. A series of in vitro assays suggested that the Otu (1-339 aa) and Sakura (1-49 aa) are sufficient for their direct interaction. Finally, the authors demonstrated that the loss of otu phenocopies the loss of sakura, supporting their idea that Sakura plays a role in germ cell maintenance and differentiation through interaction with Otu during oogenesis.

      Strengths:

      To my knowledge, this is the first characterization of the role of CG14545 genes. Each experiment seems to be well-designed and adequately controlled

      Weaknesses:

      However, the conclusions from each experiment are somewhat separate, and the functional relationships between Sakura's functions are not well established. In other words, although the loss of Sakura in the germline causes pleiotropic effects, the cause-and-effect relationships between the individual defects remain unclear.

      Comments on latest version:

      The authors have attempted to address my initial concerns with additional experiments and refutations. Unfortunately, my concerns, especially my specific comments 1-3, remain unaddressed. The present manuscript is descriptive and fails to describe the molecular mechanism by which Sakura exerts its function in the germline. Nevertheless, this reviewer acknowledges that the observed defects in sakura mutant ovaries and the possible physiological significance of the Sakura-Out interaction are worth sharing with the research community, as they may lay the groundwork for future research in functional analysis.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to determine whether a cryptic pocket in the VP35 protein of Zaire ebolavirus has a functional role in RNA binding and, by extension, in immune evasion. They sought to address whether this pocket could be an effective therapeutic target resistant to evolutionary evasion by studying its role in dsRNA binding among different filovirus VP35 homologs. Through simulations and experiments, they demonstrated that cryptic pocket dynamics modulate the RNA binding modes, directly influencing how VP35 variants block RIG-I and MDA5-mediated immune responses.<br /> The authors successfully achieved their aim, showing that the cryptic pocket is not a random structural feature but rather an allosteric regulator of dsRNA binding. Their results not only explain functional differences in VP35 homologs despite their structural similarity but also suggest that targeting this cryptic pocket may offer a viable strategy for drug development with reduced risk of resistance.

      This work represents a significant advance in the field of viral immunoevasion and therapeutic targeting of traditionally "undruggable" protein features. By demonstrating the functional relevance of cryptic pockets, the study challenges long-standing assumptions and provides a compelling basis for exploring new drug discovery strategies targeting these previously overlooked regions.

      Strengths:

      The combination of molecular simulations and experimental approaches is a major strength, enabling the authors to connect structural dynamics with functional outcomes. The use of homologous VP35 proteins from different filoviruses strengthens the study's generality, and the incorporation of point mutations adds mechanistic depth. Furthermore, the ability to reconcile functional differences that could not be explained by crystal structures alone highlights the utility of dynamic studies in uncovering hidden allosteric features.

      Weaknesses:

      While the methodology is robust, certain limitations should be acknowledged. For example, the study would benefit from a more detailed quantitative analysis of how specific mutations impact RNA binding and cryptic pocket dynamics, as this could provide greater mechanistic insight. This study would also benefit from providing a clear rationale for the selection of the amber03 force field and considering the inclusion of volume-based approaches for pocket analysis. Such revisions will strengthen the robustness and impact of the study.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors addressed the concerns raised.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:<br /> This manuscript describes the use of quantitative imaging approaches, that have been a key element of the labs work over the past years, to address one of the major unresolved discussions in trafficking: intra-Golgi transport. The approach used has been clearly described in the labs previous papers, and is thus clearly described. The authors clearly address the weaknesses in this manuscript, and do not overstate the conclusions drawn from the data. The only weakness not addressed is the concept of blocking COPI transport with BFA, which is a strong inhibitor and causes general disruption of the system. This is an interesting element of the paper, which I think could be improved upon by using more specific COPI inhibitors instead, although I understand that this is not necessarily straightforward.

      I commend the authors on their clear and precise presentation of this body of work, incorporating mathematical modelling with a fundamental question in cell biology. In all, I think that this is a very robust body of work, that provides a sound conclusion in support of the stable compartment model for the Golgi.

      General points:<br /> The manuscript contains a lot of background in its results sections, and the authors may wish to consider rebalancing the text: The section beginning at Line 175 is about 90% background and 10% data. Could some data currently in supplementary be included here to redress this balance, or this part combined with another?

      Minor points:<br /> Equation 2: A should be in front of the ln2. It's already resolved in equation 3, so likely only needs changing in the text

      Line 152: Why is there a lack of experimental data? High ER background and low golgi signal make it difficult to select ministacks: would be good to see examples of these images. Is 0 a relevant timepoint as cargo is still at the ER? Instead would a timepoint <5' be better demonstrate initial arrival in fast cargo, and 0' discarded?

      Table 1 Line 474: 1-3 independent replicates: is there a better way of incorporating this into the table to make it more streamlined? It would be useful to see each cargo as a mean with error. Is there a more demonstrative way to present the table, for example (but does not have to be) fastest cargo first (Tintra) as in Table 2?

      Line 264 / Fig 3B: It's unclear to me why the VHH-anti-GFP-mCherry internalisation approach was used, when the cells were expressing GFP, that could be used for imaging. Also, this introduces a question over trafficking of the VHH itself, to access the same compartments as the GFP-proteins are localised. It would be useful to describe the choice of this approach briefly in the text.

      446 Typo "internalization"

      Post-Revision

      I thank the authors for their work revising the paper in light of our comments. I am satisfied with their response, and I have no other comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors investigated the interactions between IRE and unfolded peptides using all-atom molecular dynamics simulations. The interactions between a couple of unfolded peptides and IRE might shed light on the activation of the UPR.

      Strengths:

      (1) Well-written manuscript tailored for a biology audience.

      (2) State-of-the-art structural predictions and all-atom simulations.

      (3) Validation with existing experimental data

      (4) Clear schematic diagram summarizing the mechanisms learned from simulations.

      (5) Shared simulation data and code in a public repository.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Improving presentation to include more computational details.

      (2) More quantitative analysis in addition to visual structures.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors take a holistic view of Drosophila immunity by selecting four major components of fly immunity often studied separately (Toll signaling, Imd signaling, phagocytosis, and melanization), and studying their combinatory effects on the efficiency of the immune response. They achieve this by using fly lines mutant for one of these components, or modules, as well as for a combination of them, and testing the survival of these flies upon infection with a plethora of pathogens (bacterial, viral, and fungal).

      Strengths:

      It is clear that this manuscript has required a large amount of hands-on work, considering the number of pathogens, mutations, and timepoints tested. In my opinion, this work is a very welcome addition to the literature on fly immune responses, which obviously do not occur in one type of response at a time, but in parallel, subsequently, and/or are interconnected. I find that the major strength of this work is the overall concept, which is made possible by the mutations designed to target the specific immune function of each module (at least seemingly) without major effects on other functions. I believe that the combinatory mutants will be of use for the fly community and enable further studies of the interplay of these components of immune response in various settings.

      To control for the effects arising from the genetic variation other than the intended mutations, the mutants have been backcrossed into a widely used, isogenized Drosophila strain called w1118. Therefore, the differences accounted for by the genotype are controlled.

      I also appreciate that the authors have investigated the two possible ways of dealing with an infection: tolerance and resistance, and how the modules play into those.

      Weaknesses:

      While controlling for the background effects is vital, the w1118 background is problematic (an issue not limited to this manuscript) because of the wide effects of the white mutation on several phenotypes (also other than eye color/eyesight). It is a possibility that the mutation influences the functionality of the immune response components, for example, via effects of the faulty tryptophan handling on the metabolism of the animal.

      I acknowledge that it is not reasonable to ask for data in different backgrounds better representing a "wild type" fly (however, that is defined is another question), but I think this matter should be brought up and discussed.

      The whole study has been conducted on male flies. Immune responses show quite extensive sex-specific variation across a variety of species studied, also in the fly. But the reasons for this variation are not fully understood. Therefore, I suggest that the authors conduct a subset of experiments on female flies to see if the findings apply to both sexes, especially the infection-specificity of the module combinations.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript is important due to the significance of the findings. The strength of evidence is convincing.

      Strengths:

      (1) Using a Novel SHERLOCK4AAT toolkit for diagnosis.

      (2) Identification of various sub-species of Trypanosomes.

      (3) Differentiating the animal subspecies from the human one.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The title is too long, and the use of definite articles should be reduced in the title.

      (2) The route of blood sample collection in the animals should be well defined and explained.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Tibial nerve (electrical) stimulation (TNS) has emerged over the past 15 years as a non-invasive method to treat bladder overactivity, but interestingly, new animal work has suggested that TNS could actually be used to excite the bladder when appropriately tuning the stimulation frequency, effectively inverting its effect, perhaps opening the door to treat different conditions (e.g., UAB). The present study tests how healthy people respond to low and high frequency TNS, with the authors showing that they can substantially delay people's first sensation of bladder fullness with high frequencies (20Hz, shown many times before) but also that they can slightly hasten people's first sensation with low frequencies (1Hz, new result in humans). Moreover, the authors develop a computational model of interconnected conductance-based simulated neurons arranged in a physiologically plausible circuit that reproduces some aspects of the frequency-dependent effects of TNS. Their simulations suggest that we might expect low-frequency TNS to also increase the duration of bladder contractions in humans. The study highlights a potential new research direction, optimizing TNS stimulation parameters to increase basal bladder excitability.

      Strengths:

      The main strength of the work is to call attention to a new possibility of inverting the effect of TNS in humans by manipulating stimulation frequency, opening new indications for the therapy. This is highly relevant because of the recent popularity of TNS and its non-invasiveness, which lends itself to rapid testing and evaluation for new conditions and a high willingness to adopt. The authors convincingly demonstrate a modest excitatory effect on bladder sensation with low-frequency TNS, which clearly warrants further investigation.

      The high-level design of the hypotheses, concepts, and experiments is clearly articulated in both the methods and in particularly clear diagrams, letting the reader focus their attention on the most important findings.

      It is rare to develop a new computational model of the lower urinary tract at a systems level, and even more so for it to incorporate circuits in the spinal cord and brainstem centers, and this work undoubtedly advances the field's ability to engineer such systems. Further, because the model is comprised of linked conductance-based point-neurons, it is an excellent tool to investigate how an arguably plausible wiring diagram for neural control of the LUT could result in stimulation frequency-dependent effects on pelvic efferents. It is a proof of concept demonstrating how their mechanistic hypothesis of TNS could be implemented neurophysiologically by the nervous system.

      Weaknesses:

      The main drawback of the work is the frequent overinterpretation of the results. The human study and computational model are both proof-of-principle studies because the experimental effect size and sample size are modest, and the computational model is poorly validated and does not generate physiologically typical cystometric responses in simulations that are designed to recapitulate nominal LUT behavior.

      Despite the stated caveats about the small effect in the human study, it should be emphasized throughout that this result is most reasonably interpreted as showing the possibility that TNS can have a low-frequency excitatory effect that merits follow-up, rather than a conclusive demonstration. The effect size is small (as the authors note) and should be placed in context with some minimally clinically important difference, if possible. The result is statistically significant, but even this may be subject to revision due to the small sample and the effect of post-hoc outlier removal and data analysis choices.

      Given the apparent mismatch between the model and the cystometric behavior at the systems level in the "normal" case (e.g., low capacity, low voiding efficiency, omitted pressure profiles, frequency, etc.) and the absence of quantitative model validation (e.g., it was not compared directly with any experimental data from human urodynamics or rodent cystometry, beyond the initial fit to the neural data, no sensitivity analyses were performed, no goodness of fit computed, etc.) the discussion should be much more circumspect about interpreting the results at a systems level and should probably contain a paragraph explicitly detailing the limitations of the model. The subsequent interpretation should focus narrowly on the neural circuitry, rather than things like contraction duration, where the model is at its strongest. As written, the authors over-interpret what the in silico study can reasonably be used to infer about LUT function.

      More justification is needed for why the contraction duration of the model is the central focus of analysis, when it connects only tentatively to the human study results, which focus on urgency. While not necessarily incorrect, a clearer link or motivation should be offered for how this informs our understanding of frequency-dependent TNS afferent or efferent inhibition during filling (which was the focus of the human studies and the abstract). In other words, why doesn't the model reproduce the 1Hz excitation effect of expediting void onset (or urgency in the human study), and why is it justified to look at contraction duration as a surrogate measure?

      The authors claim that "voiding behavior occurred earlier [at 1Hz stim in the model]", pointing to Figure 6A as evidence, but this panel appears to show a single example model run where 1Hz voiding occurs only ~1s earlier (display makes this very hard to estimate). This is insufficient evidence to support the claim. Later, it is stated that "TNS did not ... void much earlier". The claims should be made compatible, and all such claims should have reasonable supporting evidence.

      There are a number of reporting concerns that can be easily addressed:

      (1) Human Study:

      (a) To interpret the human study analysis, a fuller description of the "optional 10m inute extension" is necessary. How were participants presented with this option, how was blinding preserved, what fraction of participants accepted, and did phase 1 results influence their decisions to continue?

      (b) For reproducibility, details about the TNS parameters should be articulated, such as the method of determining "motor thresholds" (unless this is synonymous with "urge to urinate"), the shape of the stimulation pulses (e.g., biphasic, charge balanced), typical applied current, etc.

      (2) The Computational Model

      (a) The code availability statement for this type of work is inadequate. The model used for simulations in this work, as well as the code used to initialize (and randomize synaptic connections), needs to be hosted publicly because i) a model this intricate is extremely hard to reproduce/verify without code, ii) simulations are an essential piece of the argument, iii) hosting code requires very little overhead. Although there is an appropriate level of detail in the model description, it would not be possible to reproduce the model in any reasonable amount of time (or at all) because of the implementation-level details that are, understandably, omitted from the methods (e.g., what is a "unit", what 'exactly' do the connections in the PMC and PAG diagrams relate to, what were the final parameters used for all conductances, which parameters were "matched" to the original papers and which were not, etc.).

      b) Critical cystometric/urodynamic values that are typically analyzed to assess healthy LUT function are detrusor pressure (timeseries) and/or post-void residual or voiding efficiency (scalars). These should be included to verify that the model is representative of the "normal" case. This is especially important because the model's "normal" behavior appears to have extremely low voiding efficiency (Figure 6A).

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary

      In this work, Casu et al. have reported the characterization of a previously uncharacterized membrane protein CisA encoded in a non-canonical contractile injection system of Streptomyces coelicolor, CISSc, which is a cytosolic CISs significantly distinct from both intracellular membrane-anchored T6SSs and extracellular CISs. The authors have presented the first high-resolution structure of the extended CISSc structure. It revealed important structural insights of the extended state of this non-canonical CIS.

      To further explore how CISSc interacted with cytoplasmic membrane, they further set out to investigate a membrane protein CisA encoded in the CISSc cluster and previously hypothesized to be the membrane adaptor for CISSc; however, the structure revealed that it was not associated with CISSc. Using a fluorescence microscope and cell fractionation assay, the authors verified that CisA is indeed a membrane-associated protein. They further determined experimentally that CisA had a cytosolic N-terminal domain and a periplasmic C-terminus. The functional analysis of cisA mutant revealed that it is not required for CISSc assembly but is essential for the contraction, as a result, the deletion significantly affects CISSc-mediated cell death upon stress, timely differentiation, as well as secondary metabolite production. Although the work did not resolve the mechanistic detail how CisA interacts with CISSc structure, they used in-silico prediction of protein-protein interactions between monomeric CisA and CISSc components using Alphafold2-Multimer, which identified baseplate protein Cis11 as a potential interaction partner. Such prediction sets out a strong basis for future investigations to explore the molecular mechanistic details how CisA mediates the contraction via interactions with the CIS structural components such as Cis11. Using AlphaFold3, the authors also estimated the oligomerization state of CisA, which can be present as a pentamer. Authors further suggested that such oligomerization is mediated by the interaction of C-terminal solute-binding like domain.

      In general, the work provides solid data and a strong foundation for future investigation toward understanding the mechanism of CISSc contraction, and potentially, the relation between the membrane association of CISSc, the sheath contraction and the cell death.

      Major Strength:

      The paper is well-structured, and the conclusion of the study is supported by solid data and careful data interpretation were presented. The authors provided strong evidence on (1) the high-resolution structure of extended CISSc determined by cryo-EM, and the subsequent comparison with known eCIS structures, which sheds light on both its similarity and different features from other subtypes of eCISs in detail; (2) the topological features of CisA using fluorescence microscopic analysis, cell fractionation and PhoA-LacZα reporter assays, (3) functions of CisA in CISSc-mediated cell death and secondary metabolite production, likely via the regulation of sheath contraction, (4) structural prediction of the oligomerization state of CisA and potential interaction partners of CIS structure.

      Weakness:

      Due to technical limitations, authors are not able to experimentally demonstrate the direct interaction between CisA with baseplate complex of CISSc, since they could not express cisA in E. coli due to its potential toxicity. Therefore, there is a lack of biochemical analysis of direct interaction between CisA and baseplate wedge. However, they have provided solid AlphaFold2-multimer prediction data and identified baseplate protein Cis11 as a potential interaction partner. Such predictions will guide future work towards biochemical analysis to verify such interaction.

      While there is no direct evidence showing that CisA is responsible for tethering CISSc to the membrane upon stress, and the spatial and temporal relation between membrane association and contraction remains unclear, I recognize that this is above the scope of the current work, so I would expect further investigation to address these questions in future.

      Conclusion

      Overall, the work provides a valuable contribution to our understanding on the structure of a much less understood subtype of CISs, which is unique compared to both membrane-anchored T6SSs and host-membrane targeting eCISs. Authors have successfully demonstrated the role of CisA in the contraction of CISSc, along with solid and detailed analysis of the contraction state of the particles with or without CisA using cryo-ET. Using structural modeling, authors also identified the potential oligomerization state and possible interaction partner within the CIS particle.

      Importantly, the work serves as a strong foundation to further investigate how the sheath contraction works here. The work contributes to expanding our understanding of the diverse CIS superfamilies, with significant novelty.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Stephens et al. present a comprehensive study of TMEM16-members via coarse-grained MD simulations (CGMD). They particularly focus on the scramblase ability of these proteins and aim to characterize the "energetics of scrambling". Through their simulations, the authors interestingly relate protein conformational states to membrane's thickness and link those to the scrambling ability of TMEM members, measured as the trespassing tendency of lipids across leaflets. They validate their simulation with a direct qualitative comparison with Cryo-EM maps.

      Strengths:

      The study demonstrates an efficient use of CGMD simulations to explore lipid scrambling across various TMEM16 family members. By leveraging this approach, the authors are able to bypass some of the sampling limitations inherent in all-atom simulations, providing a more comprehensive and high-throughput analysis of lipid scrambling. Their comparison of different protein conformations, including open and closed groove states, presents a detailed exploration of how structural features influence scrambling activity, adding significant value to the field. A key contribution of this study is the finding that groove dilation plays a central role in lipid scrambling. The authors observe that for scrambling-competent TMEM16 structures, there is substantial membrane thinning and groove widening. The open Ca2+-bound nhTMEM16 structure (PDB ID 4WIS) was identified as the fastest scrambler in their simulations, with scrambling rates as high as 24.4 {plus minus} 5.2 events per μs. This structure also shows significant membrane thinning (up to 18 Å), which supports the hypothesis that groove dilation lowers the energetic barrier for lipid translocation, facilitating scrambling.

      The study also establishes a correlation between structural features and scrambling competence, though analyses often lack statistical robustness and quantitative comparisons. The simulations differentiate between open and closed conformations of TMEM16 structures, with open-groove structures exhibiting increased scrambling activity, while closed-groove structures do not. This finding aligns with previous research suggesting that the structural dynamics of the groove are critical for scrambling. Furthermore, the authors explore how the physical dimensions of the groove qualitatively correlate with observed scrambling rates. For example, TMEM16K induces increased membrane thinning in its open form, suggesting that membrane properties, along with structural features, play a role in modulating scrambling activity.

      Another significant finding is the concept of "out-of-the-groove" scrambling, where lipid translocation occurs outside the protein's groove. This observation introduces the possibility of alternate scrambling mechanisms that do not follow the traditional "credit-card model" of groove-mediated lipid scrambling. In their simulations, the authors note that these out-of-the-groove events predominantly occur at the dimer interface between TM3 and TM10, especially in mammalian TMEM16 structures. While these events were not observed in fungal TMEM16s, they may provide insight into Ca2+-independent scrambling mechanisms, as they do not require groove opening.

      Weaknesses:

      A significant challenge of the study is the discrepancy between the scrambling rates observed in CGMD simulations and those reported experimentally. Despite the authors' claim that the rates are in line experimentally, the observed differences can mean large energetic discrepancies in describing scrambling (larger than 1kT barrier in reality). For instance, the authors report scrambling rates of 10.7 events per μs for TMEM16F and 24.4 events per μs for nhTMEM16, which are several orders of magnitude faster than experimental rates. While the authors suggest that this discrepancy could be due to the Martini 3 force field's faster diffusion dynamics, this explanation does not fully account for the large difference in rates. A more thorough discussion on how the choice of force field and simulation parameters influence the results, and how these discrepancies can be reconciled with experimental data, would strengthen the conclusions. Likewise, rate calculations in the study are based on 10 μs simulations, while experimental scrambling rates occur over seconds. This timescale discrepancy limits the study's accuracy, as the simulations may not capture rare or slow scrambling events that are observed experimentally and therefore might underestimate the kinetics of scrambling. It's however, important to recognize that it's hard (borderline unachievable) to pinpoint reasonable kinetics for systems like this using the currently available computational power and force field accuracy. The faster diffusion in simulations may lead to overestimated scrambling rates, making the simulation results less comparable to real-world observations. Thus, I would therefore read the findings qualitatively rather than quantitatively. An interesting observation is the asymmetry observed in the scrambling rates of the two monomers. Since MARTINI is known to be limited in correctly sampling protein dynamics, the authors, in order to preserve the fold, have applied a strong (500 kJ mol-1 nm-2) elastic network. However, I am wondering how the ENM applies across the dimer and if any asymmetry can be noticed in the application of restraints for each monomer and at the dimer interface. How can this have potentially biased the asymmetry in the scrambling rates observed between the monomers? Is this artificially obtained from restraining the initial structure, or is the asymmetry somehow gatekeeping the scrambling mechanism to occur majorly across a single monomer? Answering this question would have far-reaching implications to better describe the mechanism of scrambling.

      Notably, the manuscript does not explore the impact of membrane composition on scrambling rates. While the authors use a specific lipid composition (DOPC) in their simulations, they acknowledge that membrane composition can influence scrambling activity. However, the study does not explore how different lipids or membrane environments or varying membrane curvature and tension, could alter scrambling behaviour. I appreciate that this might have been beyond the scope of this particular paper and the authors plan to further chase these questions, as this work sets a strong protocol for this study. Contextualizing scrambling in the context of membrane composition is particularly relevant since the authors note that TMEM16K's scrambling rate increases tenfold in thinner membranes, suggesting that lipid-specific or membrane-thickness-dependent effects could play a role.

      Comments on revisions:

      I have carefully reviewed the replies of the author, which address the points I raised and improved the manuscript by making the changes outlined in their response. Particularly, I am pleased to see that the authors report ensemble averages in Figure 1-supplement 1 and add relevant information in a newly created table. I welcome the refinement of the discussion towards a cautionary approach in describing quantitatively the findings of experiments and computations for what concerns scrambling rates. I still feel that proper statistical analysis to compare the distributions in Figure 3-figure supplement 6 would have made the points claimed even stronger, but - at the same time - I do see the points of the authors in commenting the differences between these distributions more qualitatively. Overall, I support the publication of this manuscript, it has been a pleasure to read it.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Meteorin proteins were initially described as secreted neurotrophic factors. In this manuscript, Eggeler et al. demonstrate a novel role for Meteorins in establish left-right axis formation in the zebrafish embryo. The authors generated null mutations in each of the three zebrafish meteorin genes - metrn, metrnla, and metrnlab. Triple mutant embryos displayed phenotypes strongly associated with left-right defects such as heart looping and visceral organ placement, and disrupted expression of Nodal-responsive genes, as did single mutants for metrn and metrnla. The authors then go on to demonstrate that these defects in left-right asymmetry are likely to due to defects in Kupffer's Vesicle and the progenitor dorseal forerunner cells including impaired lumen formation and reduced fluid flow, reduced clustering among DFCs, impaired DFC migration, mislocalization of apical proteins ZO-1 and aPKC, and detachment of DFCs from the EVL. Notably, the authors found that expression of marker genes sox32 and sox17 were not affected, suggesting Meteorins are required for DFC/KV morphogenesis but not necessarily fate specification. Finally, the authors show genetic interaction between Meteorins and integrin receptors, which were previously implicated in left-right patterning. In a supplemental figure, the manuscript also presents data showing expression of meteorin genes around the chick Hensen's node, suggesting that the left-right patterning functions may be conserved among vertebrates.

      Strengths:

      Strengths of this study include the generation of a triple mutant line that targets all known zebrafish meteorin family members. The experiments presented in this study were rigorous especially with respect to quantification and statistical analysis.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the authors convincingly demonstrate a role for Meteorins in zebrafish left-right patterning, data supporting a conserved role in other vertebrates is compelling but limited to one supplemental figure. This aspect would be interesting to follow up in future studies.

      Comments on revisions:

      I thank the authors for their thoughtful responses to the reviewers. They have adequately addressed all of my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Gylemo et al. present a manuscript focused on identifying the X-inactivation or X-inactivation escape status for 380 genes across 30 normal human tissues. X-inactivation status of X-linked genes across tissues is important for understanding sex-specific differences in X-linked gene expression and therefore traits, and the likely effect of X-linked pathogenic variants in females. These new data are significant as they double the number of genes that have been classified in the human, and double the number of tissues studied previously.

      Strengths:

      The strengths of this work are that they analyse 3 individuals from the GTex dataset (2 newly identified, 1 previously identified and published) that have highly/ completely skewed X inactivation, which allows the study of escape from X inactivation in bulk RNA-sequencing. The number of individuals and breadth of tissues analysed adds significantly to both the number of genes that have been classified and the weight of evidence for their claims. The additional 198 genes that have been classified and the reclassification of genes that previously had only limited support for their status is useful for the field.

      In analysing the data they find that tissue-specific escape from X inactivation appears relatively rare. Rather, if genes escape, even variably, it tends to occur across tissues. Similarly if a gene is inactivated, it is stable across tissues.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have answered all of my queries. While they have not been able to pinpoint the genetic cause of the highly skewed XCI cases in their cohort, I agree this is beyond the scope of this study. I have no further requests.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:<br /> Membrane-bound pyrophosphatases (mPPases) are homodimeric proteins that hydrolyze pyrophosphate and pump H+/Na+ across membranes. They are an attractive drug target against protist pathogens. Non-hydrolysable PPi analogue bisphosphonates such as risedronate (RSD) and pamidronate (PMD) serve as primary drugs currently used. Bisphosphonates have a P-C-P bond, with their central carbon can accommodate up to two substituents, allowing a large compound variability. Here authors solved two TmPPase structures in complex with the bisphosphonates etidronate (ETD) and zoledronate (ZLD) and monitored their conformational ensemble using DEER spectroscopy in solution. These results reveal the inhibition mechanism by these compounds, which is crucial for developing future small-molecule inhibitors.

      Strengths:<br /> Authors show that seven different bisphosphonates can inhibit TmPPase with IC50 values in the micromolar range. Branched aliphatic and aromatic modifications showed weaker inhibition. High-resolution structures for TmPPase with ETD (3.2 Å) and ZLD (3.3 Å) are determined. These structures reveal the binding mode and shed light on the inhibition mechanism. The nature of modification on the bisphosphonate alters the conformation of the binding pocket. The conformational heterogeneity is further investigated using EPR/DEER spectroscopy under several conditions. Altogether, this provides convincing evidence for a distinct conformational equilibrium of TmPPase in solution and further supports the notion of asymmetric inhibitor binding at the active site, while maintaining a symmetric conformation at the periplasmic interface.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Tran and colleagues report evidence supporting the expected yet undemonstrated interaction between the Pkd1 and Pkd2 gene products Pc1 and Pc2 and the Bicc1 protein in vitro, in mice, and collaterally, in Xenopus and HEK293T cells. The authors go on to convincingly identify two large and non-overlapping regions of the Bicc1 protein important for each interaction and to perform gene dosage experiments in mice that suggest that Bicc1 loss of function may compound with Pkd1 and Pkd2 decreased function, resulting in PKD-like renal phenotypes of different severity. These results led to examining a cohort of very early onset PKD patients to find three instances of co-existing mutations in PKD1 (or PKD2) and BICC1. Finally, preliminary transcriptomics of edited lines gave variable and subtle differences that align with the theme that Bicc1 may contribute to the PKD defects, yet are mechanistically inconclusive.

      These results are potentially interesting, despite the limitation, also recognized by the authors, that BICC1 mutations seem exceedingly rare in PKD patients and may not "significantly contribute to the mutational load in ADPKD or ARPKD". The manuscript has several intrinsic limitations that must be addressed.

      The manuscript contains factual errors, imprecisions, and language ambiguities. This has the effect of making this reviewer wonder how thorough the research reported and analyses have been.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the study presented by Itani and colleagues, it is shown that some strains of Aspergillus oryzae - especially those used industrially for the production of sake and soy sauce - develop hyphae with a significantly increased number of nuclei and cell volume over time. These thick hyphae are formed by branching from normal hyphae and grow faster and therefore dominate the colonies. The number of nuclei positively correlates with the thicker hyphae and also the amount of secreted enzymes. The addition of nutrients such as yeast extract or certain amino acids enhanced this effect. Genome and transcriptome analyses identified genes, including rseA, that are associated with the increased number of nuclei and enzyme production. The authors conclude from their data involvement of glycosyltransferases, calcium channels, and the tor regulatory cascade in the regulation of cell volume and number of nuclei. Thicker hyphae and an increased number of nuclei were also observed in high-production strains of other industrially used fungi such as Trichoderma reesei and Penicillium chrysogenum, leading to the hypothesis that the mentioned phenotypes are characteristic of production strains, which is of significant interest for fungal biotechnology.

      Strengths:

      The study is very comprehensive and involves the application of diverse state-of-the-art cell biological, biochemical, and genetic methods. Overall, the data are properly controlled and analyzed, figures and movies are of excellent quality.<br /> The results are particularly interesting with regard to the elucidation of molecular mechanisms that regulate the size of fungal hyphae and their number of nuclei. For this, the authors have discovered a very good model: (regular) strains with a low number of nuclei and strains with a high number of nuclei. Also, the results can be expected to be of interest for the further optimization of industrially relevant filamentous fungi.

      Weaknesses:

      There are only a few open questions concerning the activity of the many nuclei in production strains (active versus inactive), their number of chromosomes (haploid/diploid), and whether hyper-branching always leads to propagation of nuclei.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Yang et al. describes CCDC32 as a new clathrin mediated endocytosis (CME) accessory protein. The authors show that CCDC32 binds directly to AP2 via a small alpha helical region and cells depleted for this protein show defective CME. Finally, the authors show that the CCDC32 nonsense mutations found in patients with cardio-facial-neuro-developmental syndrome (CFNDS) disrupt the interaction of this protein to the AP2 complex. The results presented suggest that CCDC32 may act as both a chaperone (as recently published) and a structural component of the AP2 complex.

      Strengths:<br /> The conclusions presented are generally well supported by experimental data and the authors carefully point out the differences between their results and the results by Wan et al. (PNAS 2024).

      Weaknesses:<br /> The experiments regarding the role of CCDC32 in CFNDS still require some clarifications to make them clearer to scientists working on this disease. The authors fail to describe that the CCDC32 isoform they use in their studies is different from the one used when CFNDS patient mutations were described. This may create some confusion. Also, the authors did not discuss that the frame-shift mutations in patients may be leading to nonsense mediated decay.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:<br /> This study investigates the impact of mother-child neural synchronization and the quality of parent-child relationships on the development of Theory of Mind (ToM) and social cognition. Utilizing a naturalistic fMRI movie-viewing paradigm, the authors analyzed inter-subject neural synchronization in mother-child dyads and explored the connections between neural maturity, parental caregiving, and social cognitive outcomes. The findings indicate age-related maturation in ToM and social pain networks, emphasizing the importance of dyadic interactions in shaping ToM performance and social skills, thereby enhancing our understanding of the environmental and intrinsic influences on social cognition.

      Strengths:<br /> This research addresses a significant question in developmental neuroscience, by linking social brain development with children's behaviors and parenting. It also uses a robust methodology by incorporating neural synchrony measures, naturalistic stimuli, and a substantial sample of mother-child dyads to enhance its ecological validity. Furthermore, the SEM approach provides a nuanced understanding of the developmental pathways associated with Theory of Mind (ToM). The manuscript also addressed many concerns raised in the initial review. The adoption of the neuroconstructivist framework effectively frames neural and cognitive development as reciprocal, addressing prior concerns about causality. The justification for methodological choices, such as omitting resting-state baselines due to scanning challenges in children and using unit-weighted scoring for ToM tasks, further strengthens the study's credibility.

      Weaknesses:<br /> (1) The revised introduction has improved, particularly in framing the first goal-developmental changes in ToM and SPM networks-as a "developmental anchor" for goals 2 and 3. However, given prior research on age-related changes in these networks (e.g., Richardson et al., 2018), the authors should clarify whether this goal seeks to replicate prior findings or to extend them under new contexts. Specifying how this part differs from existing work and articulating specific hypotheses would enhance the focus.<br /> (2) I still have some reservations about retaining the slightly causal term "shape" in the title. While the manuscript now carefully avoids causal claims, the title may still be interpreted as implying directionality, especially by non-specialist audiences.<br /> (3) One more question about Figure 2A and 2B: adults and children showed highly similar response curves for video frames, yet some peaks (e.g., T02, T05, T06) are identified as ToM or SPM events only in adults. Whether statistical methods account for the differences? Or whether the corresponding video frames contain subtle social cues that only adults can process?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors present a clear expansion of biophysical (thermodynamic) theory regarding the binding of proteins to membrane-bound receptors, accounting for higher local concentration effects of the protein. To partially test the expanded theory, the authors perform in vitro experiments on the binding of ZO1 proteins to Claudin2 C-terminal receptors anchored to a supported lipid bilayer, and capture the effects that surface phase separation of ZO1 has on its adsorption to the membrane.

      Strengths:

      (1) The derived theoretical framework is consistent and largely well-explained.

      (2) The experimental and numerical methodologies are transparent.

      (3) The comparison between the best parameterized non-dilute theory is in reasonable agreement with experiments.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) In the theoretical section, what has previously been known, compared to which equations are new, should be made more clear.

      (2) Some assumptions in the model are made purely for convenience and without sufficient accompanying physical justification. E.g., the authors should justify, on physical grounds, why binding rate effects are/could be larger than the other fluxes.

      (3) I feel that further mechanistic explanation as to why bulk phase separation widens the regime of surface phase separation is warranted.

      (4) The major advantage of the non-dilute theory as compared with a best parameterized dilute (or homogenous) theory requires further clarification/evidence with respect to capturing the experimental data.

      (5) Discrete (particle-based) molecular modelling could help to delineate the quantitative improvements that the non-dilute theory has over the previous state-of-the-art. Also, this could help test theoretical statements regarding the roles of bulk-phase separation, which were not explored experimentally.

      (6) Discussion of the caveats and limitations of the theory and modelling is missing from the text.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In the present manuscript, Golf et al. investigate the consequences of astrocyte-specific deletion of Neuroligin (Nlgn) family cell adhesion proteins on synapse structure and function in the brain. Decades of prior research had shown that Neuroligins mediate their effects at synapses through their role in the postsynaptic compartment of neurons and their transsynaptic interaction with presynaptic Neurexins. More recently, it was proposed for the first time that Neuroligins expressed by astrocytes can also bind to presynaptic Neurexins to regulate synaptogenesis (Stogsdill et al. 2017, Nature). However, several aspects of the model proposed by Stogsdill et al. on astrocytic Neuroligin function conflict with prior evidence on the role of Neuroligins at synapse, prompting Golf et al. to further investigate astrocytic Neuroligin function in the current study. Using postnatal conditional deletion of Nlgn1-3 specifically from astrocytes in mice, Golf et al. show that virtually no changes in the expression of synaptic proteins or in the properties of synaptic transmission at either excitatory or inhibitory synapses are observed. Moreover, no alterations in the morphology of astrocytes themselves were found. To further extend this finding, the authors additionally analyzed human neurons co-cultured with mouse glia lacking expression of Nlgn1-4. No difference in excitatory synaptic transmission was observed between neurons cultured in the presence of wildtype vs. Nlgn1-4 conditional knockout glia. The authors conclude that while Neuroligins are indeed expressed in astrocytes and are hence likely to play some role there, this role does not include any direct consequences on synaptic structure and function, in direct contrast to the model proposed by Stogsdill et al.

      Overall, this is a strong study that addresses a fundamental and highly relevant question in the field of synaptic neuroscience. Neuroligins are not only key regulators of synaptic function, they have also been linked to numerous psychiatric and neurodevelopmental disorders, highlighting the need to precisely define their mechanisms of action. The authors take a wide range of approaches to convincingly demonstrate that under their experimental conditions, Nlgn1-3 are efficiently deleted from astrocytes in vivo, and that this deletion does not lead to major alterations in the levels of synaptic proteins or in synaptic transmission at excitatory or inhibitory synapses, or in the morphology of astrocytes. The authors have conducted an elegant and compelling analysis demonstrating efficient deletion of astrocytic Nlgn1-3, with deletion rates of 83-96% for Nlgn2 and Nlgn3, and 65-72% for Nlgn1. While the co-culture experiments provide additional support, they are not essential as the in vivo data on astrocytic Nlgn1-3 deletion are compelling on their own. Together, the data from this study provide compelling and important evidence that, whatever the role of astrocytic Neuroligins may be, they do not contribute substantially to synapse formation or function under the conditions investigated.

      Comments on revisions:

      All of my concerns have been satisfactorily addressed.<br /> The authors have fully addressed my concerns, and have in particular conducted a very elegant and compelling analysis of the degree of deletion of astrocytic Nlgn1-3/4 in their models. This greatly strengthens the main claims of their study and the fundamental nature of their conclusions for the field of synapse biology.<br /> Regarding the co-culture experiments, while I was initially concerned about the lack of controls demonstrating that glia affect synapse formation in human neurons, the authors have appropriately addressed this by clarifying the missing references and explaining that their culture system has been extensively validated in previous studies. Since the data on astrocytic Nlgn1-3 deletion in vivo are compelling on their own, the co-culture experiment provides useful additional support for the main conclusions.<br /> The authors have also added the mouse strain background information to the methods section as requested, which is important for interpreting potential differences with other studies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (public review):

      The manuscript by Christopher N. Rudzitis et al. describes the role of TGFβ2 in the transcription and functional expression of mechanosensitive channel isoforms, alongside studies on TM contractility in biomimetic hydrogels and intraocular pressure. Overall, it is a very interesting study, nicely designed, and will contribute to the available literature on TRPV4 sensitivity to mechanical forces.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Garcia-Mora et al. presented a two-step bioinformatics pipeline using H3K27ac ChIP-seq and RNA-seq data from 11 human embryonic tissues published by the same groups of senior authors. "First Search" identifies motifs for TFs that are both tissue-restricted in expression and enriched in tissue-specific enhancers. "Second Search" then looks for additional motifs that co-occur near each "First Search" motif. The authors here went further than previous motif co-occurrence/co-enrichment analyses by identifying TEAD motifs as (1) representing a ubiquitously expressed family and (2) showing high co-occurrence with tissue-specific motifs at tissue-specific enhancers. They then elaborate on this finding and speculate that "TEAD, in concert with cardiac-restricted transcriptional regulators, may contribute to the recruitment of CHD4 and may play a role in attenuating the activity of enhancers involved in cardiomyocyte differentiation." They also discussed validation experiments using the luciferase assay.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is well-written and easy to follow for the most part.

      Weaknesses:

      My main concerns and criticisms are about the sensitivity of the method and the validation of experiment designs and conclusions. Some examples where validation could be improved are as follows:

      (1) The authors propose a mechanism of a TF trio (TEAD - CHD4 - tissue-specific TFs). However, only one validation experiment checked CHD4. CHD4 binding was not mentioned at all in the other cases.

      (2) The authors integrated E12.5 TEAD binding with E11.5 acetylation data, and it would be important to show that this experimental approach is valid or otherwise qualify its limitations.

      (3) Motif co-occurrence analysis was extended to claiming TF interactions without further validation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors repeatedly measured the behavior of individual flies across several environmental situations in custom-made behavioral phenotyping rigs.

      Strengths:

      The study uses several different behavioral phenotyping devices to quantify individual behavior in a number of different situations and over time. It seems to be a very impressive amount of data. The authors also make all their behavioral phenotyping rig design and tracking software available, which I think is great, and I'm sure other folks will be interested in using and adapting to their own needs.

      Weaknesses/Limitations:

      I think an important limitation is that while the authors measured the flies under different environmental scenarios (i.e. with different lighting, temperature) they didn't really alter the "context" of the environment. At least within behavioral ecology, context would refer to the potential functionality of the expressed behaviors so for example, an anti-predator context, or a mating context, or foraging. Here, the authors seem to really just be measuring aspects of locomotion under benign (relatively low risk perception) contexts. This is not a flaw of the study, but rather a limitation to how strongly the authors can really say that this demonstrates that individuality is generalized across many different contexts. It's quite possible that rank-order of locomotor (or other) behaviors may shift when the flies are in a mating or risky context.

      I think the authors are missing an opportunity to use much more robust statistical methods It appears as though the authors used pearson correlations across time/situations to estimate individual variation; however far more sophisticated and elegant methods exist. The problem is that pearson correlation coefficients can be anti-conservative and additionally, the authors have thus had to perform many many tests to correlate behaviors across the different trials/scenarios. I don't see any evidence that the authors are controlling for multiple testing which I think would also help. Alternatively, though, the paper would be a lot stronger, and my guess is, much more streamlined if the authors employ hierarchical mixed models to analyse these data, which are the standard analytical tools in the study of individual behavioral variation. In this way, the authors could partition the behavioral variance into its among- and within-individual components and quantify repeatability of different behaviors across trials/scenarios simultaneously. This would remove the need to estimate 3 different correlations for day 1 & day 2, day 1 & 3, day 2 & 3 (or stripe 0 & stripe 1, etc) and instead just report a single repeatability for e.g. the time spent walking among the different strip patterns (eg. figure 3). Additionally, the authors could then use multivariate models where the response variables are all the behaviors combined and the authors could estimate the among-individual covariance in these behaviors. I see that the authors state they include generalized linear mixed models in their updated MS, but I struggled a bit to understand exactly how these models were fit? What exactly was the response? what exactly were the predictors (I just don't understand what Line404 means "a GLM was trained using the environmental parameters as predictors (0 when the parameter was not changed, 1 if it was) and the resulting individual rank differences as the response"). So were different models run for each scenario? for different behaviors? Across scenarios? What exactly? I just harp on this because I'm actually really interested in these data and think that updating these methods can really help clarify the results and make the main messages much clearer!

      I appreciate that the authors now included their sample sizes in the main body of text (as opposed to the supplement) but I think that it would still help if the authors included a brief overview of their design at the start of the methods. It is still unclear to me how many rigs each individual fly was run through? Were the same individuals measured in multiple different rigs/scenarios? Or just one?

      I really think a variance partitioning modeling framework could certainly improve their statistical inference and likely highlight some other cool patterns as these methods could better estimate stability and covariance in individual intercepts (and potentially slopes) across time and situation. I also genuinely think that this will improve the impact and reach of this paper as they'll be using methods that are standard in the study of individual behavioral variation

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Hill and colleagues use a novel reinforcement-based motor learning task ("RML"), asking how aspects of RML change over the course of development from toddler years through adolescence. Multiple versions of the RML task were used in different samples, which varied on two dimensions: whether the reward probability of a given hand movement direction was deterministic or probabilistic, and whether the solution space had continuous reach targets or discrete reach targets. Using analyses of both raw behavioral data and model fits, the authors report four main results: First, developmental improvements reflected 3 clear changes, including increases in exploration, an increase in the RL learning rate, and a reduction of intrinsic motor noise. Second, changes to the task that made it discrete and/or deterministic both rescued performance in the youngest age groups, suggesting that observed deficits could be linked to continuous/probabilistic learning settings. Overall, the results shed light on how RML changes throughout human development, and the modeling characterizes the specific learning deficits seen in the youngest ages.

      Strengths:

      (1) This impressive work addresses an understudied subfield of motor control/psychology - the developmental trajectory of motor learning. It is thus timely and will interest many researchers.

      (2) The task, analysis, and modeling methods are very strong. The empirical findings are rather clear and compelling, and the analysis approaches are convincing. Thus, at the empirical level, this study has very few weaknesses.

      (3) The large sample sizes and in-lab replications further reflect the laudable rigor of the study.

      (4) The main and supplemental figures are clear and concise.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript examines network mechanisms that allow networks of neurons to perform context-dependent decision-making.<br /> In a recent study, Pagan and colleagues identified two distinct mechanisms by which recurrent neural networks can perform such computations. They termed these two mechanisms input-modulation and selection-vector modulation. Pagan and colleagues demonstrated that recurrent neural networks can be trained to implement combinations of these two mechanisms, and related this range of computational strategies with inter-individual variability in rats performing the same task. What type of structure in the recurrent connectivity favors one or the other mechanism however remained an open question.

      The present manuscript addresses this specific question by using a class of mechanistically interpretable recurrent neural networks, low-rank RNNs.<br /> The manuscript starts by demonstrating that unit-rank RNNs can only implement the input-modulation mechanism, but not the selection-vector modulation. The authors then build rank three networks which implement selection-vector modulation, and show how the two mechanisms can be combined. Finally, they relate the amount of selection-vector modulation with the effective rank, ie the dimensionality of activity, of a trained full-rank RNN.

      Strength:

      - The manuscript is written in an obvious manner<br /> - The analytic approach adopted in the manuscript is impressive<br /> - Very clear identification of the mechanisms leading to the two types of context-dependent modulation<br /> - Altogether, this manuscript reports remarkable insights on a very timely question

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary/Significance of the findings:

      The authors have done a great job by extensively carrying out transcriptomic and epigenomic analyses in the primary human/mouse monocytes/macrophages to investigate TNF-PGE2 (TP) crosstalk and their regulation by IFN-γ in the Rheumatoid arthritis (RA) synovial macrophages. They proposed that TP induces inflammatory genes via a novel regulatory axis whereby IFN-γ and PGE2 oppose each other to determine the balance between two distinct TNF-induced inflammatory gene expression programs relevant to RA and ICI-arthritis.

      Strengths:

      The authors have done a great job on RT-qPCR analysis of gene expression in primary human monocytes stimulated with TNF and showing the selective agonists of PGE2 receptors EP2 and EP4 22 that signal predominantly via cAMP. They have beautifully shown IFN-γ opposes the effects of PGE2 on TNF-induced gene expression. They found that TP signature genes are activated by cooperation of PGE2-induced AP-1, CEBP, and NR4A with TNF-induced NF-κB activity. On the other hand, they found that IFN-γ suppressed induction of AP-1, CEBP, and NR4A activity to ablate induction of IL-1, Notch, and neutrophil chemokine genes but promoted expression of distinct inflammatory genes such as TNF and T cell chemokines like CXCL10 indicating that TP induces inflammatory genes via IFN-γ in the RA and ICI-arthritis.

      Comments on latest version:

      The authors have answered my questions and i recommend this manuscript for publication.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Before providing my review of the revised version of this study by Berger et al., which explores potential deliberate burials of Homo naledi within the Rising Star Cave System, I would like to briefly summarize the key points from my previous review of the earlier version (in 2023). Summarizing my previous review will provide context for assessing how effectively the revised study addresses the concerns I raised previously (in 2023).

      In my earlier comments, I highlighted significant methodological and analytical shortcomings that, in my view, undermined the authors' claim of intentional burials by Homo naledi. While the study presented detailed geological and fossil data, I found the evidence for intentional burials unconvincing due to insufficient application of archaeothanatological principles and other methodological gaps.

      My key concerns included:

      (1) The absence of a comprehensive archaeothanatological analysis, particularly with respect to taphonomic changes, bone articulations, and displacement patterns such as the collapse of sediments and bone remains into voids created by decomposition.

      (2) Missing or unclear illustrations of bone arrangements, which are critical for interpreting burial positions and processes.

      (3) A lack of detailed discussion on the sequence of decomposition, joint disarticulation, sediment infill, and secondary bone displacement.

      To convincingly support claims of deliberate burial, I argued that the study must reconstruct the timeline and processes surrounding death and deposition while clearly distinguishing natural taphonomic changes from intentional human actions. I emphasized the importance of integrating established archaeothanatological frameworks, such as those outlined by Duday et al. or Boulestin et al., to provide the necessary analytical rigor.

      I will now explain how the revised version of this study has successfully addressed all the concerns raised in my previous review and why I now think that the authors provide sufficient evidence for the presence of "repeated and patterned" deliberate burials (referred to as "cultural burials" by the authors) by Homo naledi within the Rising Star Cave System.

      In their revised manuscript, the authors have implemented substantial improvements in methodology, analytical depth, and overall presentation, which have effectively resolved the critical issues I previously highlighted. These revisions greatly strengthen their argument for intentional funerary practices. Importantly, the authors remain cautious in their interpretation of the evidence, explicitly refraining from inferring "symbolic" behavior or complex cognitive motivations behind these burials. Instead, they focus on presenting clear evidence for deliberate, patterned practices while leaving the broader implications for Homo naledi's cultural and cognitive capacities open for further investigation. This cautious approach adds to the credibility of their conclusions and avoids overextending the interpretation of the data.

      The authors' enhanced application of archaeothanatological principles now offers a more comprehensive and convincing interpretation of the burial features. Key gaps in the earlier version, such as the absence of detailed reconstructions of taphonomic processes, bone articulations, and displacement patterns, have been addressed with thorough analyses and clearer illustrations. The study also now includes a well-structured timeline of events surrounding death and deposition, demonstrating an improved ability to differentiate between natural processes and deliberate human actions. These additions lend greater clarity and rigor to the evidence, making the argument for intentional burials both robust and persuasive.

      Furthermore, the revised study presents detailed data on skeletal arrangements, decomposition sequences, and spatial patterns. This information is now relatively well illustrated and contextualized, enabling readers to better understand the complex processes involved in these burial practices. Importantly, the authors provide a stronger theoretical framework, integrating established archaeothanatological methodologies and taphonomic studies that situate their findings within broader archaeological and anthropological discussions of funerary behavior.

      That being said, there remain relatively minor issues that could be refined further. Addressing these would help ensure the study is as clear and accessible as possible to the reader. Such adjustments would enhance the overall readability and reinforce the study's impact within the scientific community.

      A - Suggested changes:

      While the revised version of this study marks a significant improvement, successfully addresses my previous major concerns and provides a convincing argument for deliberate burials by Homo naledi, I believe that including both one summary table + one summary figure for each of the three main locations and the-Hill Antechamber, and Dinaledi Chamber (Feature 1 and Puzzle Box)-would further enhance the clarity and accessibility of the findings. Such tables and figures would serve as a valuable reference, allowing readers to more easily follow how the detailed patterns observed at each site fit the criteria for distinguishing intentional from natural processes.

      The summary tables should consolidate key information for each location, such as:

      (1) Bone articulations: A comprehensive list of articulated skeletal elements, categorized by their anatomical relationships (e.g., labile vs. stable articulations).

      (2) Displacement patterns: Documentation of any spatial shifts in bone positions, noting directions and extents of disarticulation.

      (3) Sequence of decomposition: Observations regarding the sequence of decomposition, joint disarticulation and associated changes in bone arrangements.

      (4) Sediment interaction: Notes on sediment infill and its timing relative to decomposition, including evidence of secondary voids or delayed sediment deposition.

      (5) Distinguishing criteria: Clear indications of how each observed pattern supports intentional burial (e.g., structured placement, lack of natural transport mechanisms) versus natural processes (e.g., random dispersal, sediment-driven bone displacement).<br /> Including such tables would not only summarize the complex taphonomic and archaeothanatological data but also allow readers to quickly assess how the evidence supports the authors' conclusions. This approach would bridge the gap between the detailed narrative descriptions and the criteria necessary to differentiate deliberate funerary practices from natural occurrences.

      To streamline the main text further, many of the detailed descriptions of individual bones, specific displacement measurements, and other intricate observations could be moved to the supplementary data. This reorganization would maintain the richness of the data for those who wish to explore it in depth, while the summary tables would present the key findings concisely in the main text. This balance between accessibility and detail would ensure that the study appeals to both specialists requiring comprehensive data and readers looking for an overarching understanding of the findings.

      In addition to these structural changes, it is crucial to ensure that evidence is consistently illustrated throughout the text.

      Importantly the skeletal part representation is provided for Dinaledi Feature 1 in Figure 14, but similar data is not presented for the other burial features, such as those in the Hill Antechamber or Puzzle Box. This inconsistency could make it more challenging for readers to compare the features and fully appreciate the patterns of burial behavior across the different locations. Ensuring that similar types of evidence and analyses are presented uniformly for all features would strengthen the study and make its conclusions more cohesive and compelling.

      Adding supplementary figures to represent the skeletal part distribution (as in Figure 14) within each excavated area (i.e., not only for Dinaledi Feature 1 but also for Hill Antechamber and Puzzle Box) would significantly enhance the study's clarity and accessibility. These figures could provide a visual summary of skeletal part representation, allowing readers to easily understand the nature of human remains within each burial context.

      Specifically, such figures could:

      (1) Illustrate Skeletal Part Representation: By visually mapping the presence and location of various skeletal elements, the figures would make it easier for readers to assess the completeness and arrangement of remains in each feature. This is particularly important for interpreting patterns of bone articulation and disarticulation.<br /> For example, it is quite challenging to determine the exact number and characteristics of the human skeletal remains identified within the Puzzle Box and those recovered through the "subsurface collection" in its surrounding area. The authors state that "at least six individuals" were identified in this area (during "subsurface collection") but provide no further clarification. They simply mention that "most elements" were described previously, without specifying which elements or where this prior description can be found.

      (2) Highlight Articulations and Displacements: Figures could indicate which bones are articulated and their relative positions, as well as the spatial distribution of disarticulated elements. This would provide a clear visual context to support interpretations of taphonomic processes.

      (3) Facilitate Comparisons Across Locations: By presenting skeletal part representation consistently for each location, the figures would enable readers to directly compare features, reinforcing the argument for "repeated and patterned" behavior.

      (4) Simplify Complex Data: Instead of relying solely on textual descriptions, the visual format would allow readers to quickly grasp the key findings, making the study more accessible to a broader audience

      By including such figures alongside the proposed summary tables in the main text, the study would achieve a balance between detailed narrative descriptions and concise, visual representation of the data. This approach would strengthen the overall presentation and support the authors' conclusions effectively.

      Again, by presenting the data in a structured and comparative format, the new tables + figures could also highlight the differences and similarities between the three locations. This would reinforce the argument for "repeated and patterned" behavior, as the tables would make it easier to observe consistent burial practices across different contexts within the Rising Star Cave System.

      Adding these summary tables + figures, ensuring consistent presentation of evidence, and reallocating detailed descriptions to supplementary materials would not require significant new analysis. However, these organizational adjustments would greatly enhance the study's clarity, readability, and overall impact.

      B - A few additional changes are needed:

      Figure 8: This figure is critical but lacks clarity. Specifically:

      Panels 8a-c suffer from low contrast, making details difficult to discern.<br /> Panel 8d (sediment profile) is too small and lacks annotations that would aid interpretation.<br /> Figure S7: While this figure has significantly better contrast than Figures 8a-c, I am unable to identify the "articulated foot ... at right of frame," as mentioned in the caption. Please clarify this by adding annotations directly to the figure.

      Page 4, 2nd paragraph: In the sentence "Researchers thus have diverse opinions about how to test whether ...," the word "opinions" should be replaced with a more precise term, such as "approaches."

      C - In conclusion, I am impressed by the significant effort and meticulous work that has gone into this revised version of the study. The quality of the new evidence presented is commendable, and the findings now convincingly demonstrate not only clear evidence of intentional burial practices by Homo naledi but also compelling indications of post-depositional reworking. These advancements reflect a major improvement in the study's analytical rigor and the robustness of its conclusions, making it a valuable contribution to the understanding of early hominin funerary behavior.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript describes synaptic connectivity in Songbird cortex four main classes of sensory neurons afferents onto three known classes of projection neurons of the pre-motor cortical region HVC. HVC is a region associated with the generation of learned bird song. Investigators here use all male zebra finches to examine the functional anatomy of this region using patch clamp methods combined with optogenetic activation of select neuronal groups.

      Strengths:

      The quality of the recordings is extremely high and the quantity of data is on a very significant scale, this will certainly aid the field.

      Weaknesses:

      Could make the figures a little easier to navigate by having some atlas drawings.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed the minor concerns and suggestions

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this study, Wang and colleagues aimed to explore brain-wide activation patterns associated with NREM sleep oscillations, including slow oscillations (SOs), spindles, and SO-spindle coupling events. Their findings reveal that SO-spindle events corresponded with increased activation in both the thalamus and hippocampus. Additionally, they observed that SO-spindle coupling was linked to heightened functional connectivity from the hippocampus to the thalamus, and from the thalamus to the medial prefrontal cortex-three key regions involved in memory consolidation and episodic memory processes.

      This study's findings are timely and highly relevant to the field. The authors' extensive data collection, involving 107 participants sleeping in an fMRI while undergoing simultaneous EEG recording, deserves special recognition. If shared, this unique dataset could lead to further valuable insights.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors' efforts in revising the manuscript and addressing the reviewers' comments are certainly commendable. However, I remain concerned about potential issues in detecting sleep-related oscillations (SOs, spindles, and consequently coupled SO-spindle events), which may arise due to suboptimal parameter selection or inaccurate sleep staging, potentially impacting all subsequent analyses.

      A review of Supplementary Tables 1-4 reveals an unusually high number of detected SOs and spindles during sleep stage N1 and REM sleep. While the authors correctly note that a percentile-based detection approach will always identify a certain number of events across sleep stages, the particularly high counts in N1 and REM are concerning. To mitigate the limitations of this method, the authors could have performed event detection independently of sleep stages (i.e., across the entire dataset for each participant) and subsequently assigned the detected events to the corresponding sleep stages. If the event counts in N1 and REM remained disproportionately high, this would indicate a fundamental issue with the detection procedure.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work the authors trained RNN to perform a reversal task also performed by animals while PFC activity is recorded. The authors devised a new method to train RNN on this type of reversal task, which in principle ensures that the behavior of the RNN matches the behavior of the animal. They then performed some analysis of neural activity, both RNN and PFC recording, focusing on the neural representation of the reversal probability and its evolution across trials. Given the analysis presented, it has been difficult for me to asses at which point RNN can reasonably be compared to PFC recordings.

      Strengths:

      Focusing on a reversal task, the authors address a challenge in RNN training, as they do not use a standard supervised learning procedure where the desired output is available for each trial. They propose a new way of doing that.

      They attempt to confront RNN and neural recordings in behaving animals.

      Weaknesses:

      It would be nice to better articulate the analysis results of the two training set-ups (with and without 0 response during fixation). The dynamical system analysis is confusing, the notions of stationary and non-stationary dynamics and its relationship with attractors are puzzling. Is there a line attractor in one case (with inputs orthogonal to the integration direction being called back to the attractor, and reward input aligned with the stable direction)? In the other case, do we have a cylindrical attracting manifold on which activity circles around and is pushed along the axis of the cylinder by reward inputs? Which case is closest to the PFC recordings?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors build a statistical model that stochastically samples from a time-interval distribution of reorientation rates. The form of the distribution is extracted from a large array of behavioral data, is then used to describe not only the dynamics of individual worms (including the inter-individual variability in behavior), but also the aggregate population behavior. The authors note that the model does not require an assumption about behavioral state transitions, or evidence accumulation, as has been done previously, but rather that the stochastic nature of behavior is "simply the product of stochastic sampling from an exponential function".

      Strengths:

      This model provides a strong juxtaposition to other foraging models in the worm. Rather than evoking a behavioral transition function (that might arise from a change in internal state or the activity of a cell type in the network), or evidence accumulation (which again maps onto a cell type, or the activity of a network) - this model explains behavior via the stochastic sampling of a function of an exponential decay. The underlying model and the dynamics being simulated, as well as the process of stochastic sampling are well described and the model fits the exponential function (equation 1) to data on a large array of worms exhibiting diverse behaviors (1600+ worms from Lopez-Cruz et al). The work of this study is able to explain or describe the inter-individual diversity of worm behavior across a large population. The model is also able to capture two aspects of the reorientations, including the dynamics (to switch or not to switch) and the kinetics (slow vs fast reorientations). The authors also work to compare their model to a few others including the Levy walk (whose construction arises from a Markov process) to a simple exponential distribution, all of which have been used to study foraging and search behaviors.

      Weaknesses:

      This manuscript has two weaknesses that dampen the enthusiasm for the results. First, in all of the examples the authors cite where a Gillespie algorithm is used to sample from a distribution, be it the kinetics associated with chemical dynamics, or a Lotka-Volterra Competition Model, there are underlying processes that govern the evolution of the dynamics, and thus the sampling from distributions. In one of their references for instance, the stochasticity arises from the birth and death rates, thereby influencing the genetic drift in the model. In these examples, the process governing the dynamics (and thus generating the distributions from which one samples) are distinct from the behavior being studied. In this manuscript, the distribution being sampled from is the exponential decay function of the reorientation rate (lines 100-102). This appears to be tautological - a decay function fitted to the reorientation data is then sampled to generate the distributions of the reorientation data. That the model performs well, and matches the data is commendable, but it is unclear how that could not be the case if the underlying function generating the distribution was fit to the data.

      The second weakness is somewhat related to the first, in that absent an underlying mechanism or framework, one is left wondering what insight the model provides. Stochastic sampling a function generated by fitting the data to produce stochastic behavior is where one ends up in this framework, and the authors indeed point this out: "simple stochastic models should be sufficient to explain observably stochastic behaviors." (Line 233-234). But if that is the case, what do we learn about how the foraging is happening. The authors suggest that the decay parameter M can be considered a memory timescale; which offers some suggestion, but then go on to say that the "physical basis of M can come from multiple sources". Here is where one is left for want: The mechanisms suggested, including loss of sensory stimuli, alternations in motor integration, ionotropic glutamate signaling, dopamine, and neuropeptides are all suggested: this is basically all of the possible biological sources that can govern behavior, and one is left not knowing what insight the model provides. The array of biological processes listed are so variable in dynamics and meaning, that their explanation of what govern M is at best unsatisfying. Molecular dynamics models that generate distributions can point to certain properties of the model, such as the binding kinetics (on and off rates, etc.) as explanations for the mechanisms generating the distributions, and therefore point to how a change in the biology affects the stochasticity of the process. It is unclear how this model provides such a connection, especially taken in aggregate with the previous weakness.

      Providing a roadmap of how to think about the processes generating M, the meaning of those processes in search, and potential frameworks that are more constrained and with more precise biological underpinning (beyond the array of possibilities described) would go a long way to assuaging the weaknesses.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have addressed the main concerns of the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Lacy et al. is well written, with a clear and compelling introduction that effectively conveys the significance of the study. The methods are appropriate and well-executed, and the results, both in the main text and supplementary materials, are presented in a clear and detailed manner. The authors interpret their findings with appropriate caution.

      This work makes a valuable contribution to our understanding of the evolution of complementary sex determination (CSD) in ants. In particular, it provides important evidence for the ancient origin of a non-coding locus implicated in sex determination, and shows that, remarkably, this sex locus is conserved even in an ant species with a non-canonical reproductive system that typically does not produce males. I found this to be an excellent and well-rounded study, carefully analyzed and well contextualized.

      That said, I do have a few minor comments, primarily concerning the discussion of the potential 'ghost' CSD locus. While the authors acknowledge (line 367) that they currently have no data to distinguish among the alternative hypotheses, I found the evidence for an additional CSD locus presented in the results (lines 261-302) somewhat limited and at times a bit difficult to follow. I wonder whether further clarification or supporting evidence could already be extracted from the existing data. Specifically:

      (1) Line 268: I doubt the relevance of comparing the proportion of diploid males among all males between lines A and B to infer the presence of additional CSD loci. Since the mechanisms producing these two types of males differ, it might be more appropriate to compare the proportion of diploid males among all diploid offspring. This ratio has been used in previous studies on CSD in Hymenoptera to estimate the number of sex loci (see, for example, Cook 1993, de Boer et al. 2008, 2012, Ma et al. 2013, and Chen et al., 2021). The exact method might not be applicable to clonal raider ants, but I think comparing the percentage of diploid males among the total number of (diploid) offspring produced between the two lineages might be a better argument for a difference in CSD loci number.

      (2) If line B indeed carries an additional CSD locus, one would expect that some females could be homozygous at the ANTSR locus but still viable, being heterozygous only at the other locus. Do the authors detect any females in line B that are homozygous at the ANTSR locus? If so, this would support the existence of an additional, functionally independent CSD locus.

      (3) Line 281: The description of the two tra-containing CSD loci as "conserved" between Vollenhovia and the honey bee may be misleading. It suggests shared ancestry, whereas the honey bee csd gene is known to have arisen via a relatively recent gene duplication from fem/tra (10.1038/nature07052). It would be more accurate to refer to this similarity as a case of convergent evolution rather than conservation.

      (4) Finally, since the authors successfully identified multiple alleles of the first CSD locus using previously sequenced haploid males, I wonder whether they also observed comparable allelic diversity at the candidate second CSD locus. This would provide useful supporting evidence for its functional relevance.

      Overall, these are relatively minor points in the context of a strong manuscript, but I believe addressing them would improve the clarity and robustness of the authors' conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors apply the recently developed VARX model, which explicitly models intrinsic dynamics and the effect of extrinsic inputs, to simulated data and intracranial EEG recordings. This method provides a directed method of 'intrinsic connectivity'. They argue this model is better suited to the analysis of task neuroimaging data because it separates the intrinsic and extrinsic activity. They show: that intrinsic connectivity is largely unaltered during a movie-watching task compared to eyes open rest; intrinsic noise is reduced in the task; and there is intrinsic directed connectivity from sensory to higher-order brain areas.

      Strengths:

      (1) The paper tackles an important issue with an appropriate method.

      (2) The authors validated their method on data simulated with a neural mass model.

      (3) They use intracranial EEG, which provides a direct measure of neuronal activity.

      (4) Code is made publicly available and the paper is written well.

      Comments on revisions:'

      The authors have addressed my comments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Protein-DNA interactions and sequence readout represent a challenging and rapidly evolving field of study. Recognizing the complexity of this task, the authors have developed a compact and elegant model. They applied well-established approaches to address a difficult problem, effectively enhancing the information extracted from sparse contact maps by integrating an artificial decoy sequence set and available experimental data. This has resulted in a practical tool that can be adapted for use with other proteins.

      Strengths:

      The authors integrate sparse information with available experimental data to construct a model whose utility extends beyond the limited set of structures used for training.

      A comprehensive methods section is included, ensuring reproducibility.

      The authors provide a well-represented performance comparison between their model and other existing models.

      Additionally, the authors have shared their model as a GitHub project, reflecting their commitment to research transparency.

      Weaknesses:

      The coarse-graining procedure is quite convoluted, but the authors provide reasoning for the proposed scheme. The authors acknowledge discrepancies between data-driven and simulation models.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors used deep full-length single-cell sequencing to study the human photoreceptor development, with a particular emphasis on the characteristics of photoreceptors that may contribute to retinoblastoma.

      Strengths:

      This single-cell study captures gene regulation in photoreceptors across different developmental stages, defining post-mitotic cone and rod populations by highlighting their unique gene expression profiles through analyses such as RNA velocity and SCENIC. By leveraging full-length sequencing data, the study identifies differentially expressed isoforms of NRL and THRB in L/M cone and rod precursors, illustrating the dynamic gene regulation involved in photoreceptor fate commitment. Additionally, the authors performed high-resolution clustering to explore markers defining developing photoreceptors across the fovea and peripheral retina, particularly characterizing SYK's role in the proliferative response of cones in the RB loss background. The study provides an in-depth analysis of developing human photoreceptors, with the authors conducting thorough analyses using full-length single-cell RNA sequencing. The strength of the study lies in its design, which integrates single-cell full-length RNA-seq, long-read RNA-seq, and follow-up histological and functional experiments to provide compelling evidence supporting their conclusions. The model of cell type-dependent splicing for NRL and THRB is particularly intriguing. Moreover, the potential involvement of the SYK and MYC pathways with RB in cone progenitor cells aligns with previous literature, offering additional insights into RB development.

      Weaknesses:

      The manuscript feels somewhat unfocused, with a lack of a strong connection between the analysis of developing photoreceptors, which constitutes the bulk of the manuscript, and the discussion on retinoblastoma. Additionally, given the recent publication of several single-cell studies on developing human retina, it is important for the authors to cross-validate their findings and adjust their statements where appropriate.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have done quite thorough work addressing concerns raised by myself and other reviewers. The identification of unresolved developing state of rod/cone precursor cell is interesting and intriguing. I do not have much more to add.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this study, the authors used scanning electron microscopy (SEM) to image and analyze eleven Utah multielectrode arrays (including eight chronically implanted in four macaques). Four of the eight arrays had previously been used to deliver electrolytic lesions. Each intact electrode was scored in five damage categories. They found that damage disproportionately occurred to the outer edges of arrays. Importantly, the authors conclude that their electrolytic Lesioning protocol does not significantly increase material degradation compared to normal chronic use without lesion. Additionally, the authors have released a substantial public dataset of single-electrode SEM images of explanted Utah arrays.

      The paper is well-written and addresses an important stability issue for long-term chronically implanted array recordings and electrolytic lesioning, which is relevant to both basic science and translational research. By comparing lesioning and non-lesioning electrodes on the same array and within the same animal, the study effectively controls for confounds related to the animal and surgical procedures. The shared dataset, accessible via interactive plots, enhances transparency and serves as a valuable reference for future investigations. Below, we outline some major and minor concerns that could help improve the work.

      Major concerns:

      (1) Electrode impedance is a critical measurement to evaluate the performance of recording electrodes. It would be helpful if the authors could provide pre-explant and post-explant impedance values for each electrode alongside the five SEM damage scores. This would allow the readers to assess how well the morphological scores align with functional degradation.

      (2) The lesion parameters differ across experiments and electrodes. It would be helpful if the authors could evaluate whether damage scores (and/or impedance changes) correlate with total charge, current amplitude, duration, or frequency.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is the first study to show how a L-R bias in the relationship between numerical magnitude and space depends on brain lateralisation, and moreover, how is modulated by in ovo conditions.

      Strengths:

      Novel methodology for investigating the innateness and neural basis of an L-R bias in the relationship between number and space.

      Weaknesses:

      I would query the way the experiment was contextualised. They ask whether culture or innate pre-wiring determines the 'left-to-right orientation of the MNL [mental number line]'.

      The term, 'Mental Number Line' is an inference from experimental tasks. One of the first experimental demonstrations of a preference or bias for small numbers in the left of space and larger numbers in the right of space, was more carefully described as the spatial-numerical association of response codes - the SNARC effect (Dehaene, S., Bossini, S., & Giraux, P. (1993). The mental representation of parity and numerical magnitude. Journal of Experimental Psychology: General, 122, 371-396).

      This has meant that the background to the study is confusing. First, the authors note, correctly, that many other creatures, including insects, can show this bias, though in none of these has neural lateralisation been shown to be a cause. Second, their clever experiment shows that an experimental manipulation creates the bias. If it were innate and common to other species, the experimental manipulation shouldn't matter. There would always be an L-R bias. Third, they seem to be asserting that humans have a left-to-right (L-R) MNL. This is highly contentious, and in some studies, reading direction affects it, as the original study by Dehaene et al showed; and in others, task affects direction (e.g. Bachtold, D., Baumüller, M., & Brugger, P. (1998). Stimulus-response compatibility in representational space. Neuropsychologia, 36, 731-735, not cited). Moreover, a very careful study of adult humans, found no L-R bias (Karolis, V., Iuculano, T., & Butterworth, B. (2011), not cited, Mapping numerical magnitudes along the right lines: Differentiating between scale and bias. Journal of Experimental Psychology: General, 140(4), 693-706). Indeed, Rugani et al claim, incorrectly, that the L-R bias was first reported by Galton in 1880. There are two errors here: first, Galton was reporting what he called 'visualised numerals', which are typically referred to now as 'number forms' - spontaneous and habitual conscious visual representations - not an inference from a number line task. Second, Galton reported right-to-left, circular, and vertical visualised numerals, and no simple left-to-right examples (Galton, F. (1880). Visualised numerals. Nature, 21, 252-256.). So in fact did Bertillon, J. (1880). De la vision des nombres. La Nature, 378, 196-198, and more recently Seron, X., Pesenti, M., Noël, M.-P., Deloche, G., & Cornet, J.-A. (1992). Images of numbers, or "When 98 is upper left and 6 sky blue". Cognition, 44, 159-196, and Tang, J., Ward, J., & Butterworth, B. (2008). Number forms in the brain. Journal of Cognitive Neuroscience, 20(9), 1547-1556.

      If the authors are committed to chicks' MN Line they should test a series of numbers showing that the bias to the left is greater for 2 and 3 than for 4, etc.

      What does all this mean? I think that the paper should be shorn of its misleading contextualisation, including the term 'Mental Number Line'. The authors also speculate, usefully, on why chicks and other species might have a L-R bias. I don't think the speculations are convincing, but at least if there is an evolutionary basis for the bias, it should at least be discussed.

      This paper is very interesting with its focus on why the L-R bias exists, and where and why it does not.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Ye et al. have developed a theoretical model of osmotic pressure adaptation by osmolyte production and wall synthesis.

      Strengths:

      They validate their model predictions of a rapid increase in growth rate on osmotic shock experimentally using fission yeast. The study has several interesting insights which are of interest to the wider community of cell size and mechanics.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have in the revised manuscript addressed the aspects of the writing that were unclear. , that are listed previously as major and minor comments. We believe the issues raised by this reviewer have been adequately addressed in the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #4 (Public review):

      Thank you for the opportunity to provide a peer-review of this manuscript, which I first reviewed in 2023 under the title of '241,000 to 335,000 Years Old Rock Engravings Made by Homo naledi in the Rising Star Cave system, South Africa'. My review is brief as the authors state they have made "relatively minimal changes", so most of the comments I made in 2023 still stand. Some of the language is a little more temperate but the main issues of this potentially landmark study remain and undermine scientific acceptance of the findings claim. The fact that this is an initial report does not excuse it from the normal conventions of building arguments supported by empirical data. Again, the absence of a rock art expert on the authorial team causes recurring weaknesses still to be evident (would one ask a rock art expert to analyse a new fossil hominin skull for example?). Specifically, there are two major issues that need to be resolved before there is necessary and sufficient cause to assign the term 'rock engravings' to the marks in the Dinaledi chamber. These are authorship and dating.

       Authorship: The assertion that the 'rock engravings' are anthropogenic remains unsupported by empirical evidence, with a number of possible natural factors that could just as likely have caused the marks. Not to use image enhancements - which is standard in most rock art research and has been for some time - is a critical omission. The concerns stated about AI and data standards are not developed and the authors are directed to the literature in this field, for example this 2025 overview - https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1296207424002516. Again, having a rock art expert would show the AI concern to be valid but easily addressed using Data Standards. In the almost 2 years since the first pre-print was released, there has been ample time for high resolution photographs and scans of the purported 'rock engravings'; analysis of which by relevant experts could properly physically characterise the marks and thus establish more or less likely agents for their production. European-based researchers in particular has utilised this approach on material such as the Blombos ochre and marked bone from Europe and Africa. None of these methods is invasive or destructive.

      To then go on and link Homo naledi to these markings is premature, especially when this landscape has been home to multiple hominins. Most rock art sites do not contain the physical bodily remains of their makers so we assign authorship based on dating (such as for Neanderthal era art in Europe for example); the second critical issue in this report:

       Dating: There is no direct or closely associated chronometric dating of the 'rock engravings' or their immediate context, so the age range claimed is unsupported. Rock art dating is notoriously difficult - and why researchers closely scrutinise dates produced. In this case, however, the chronological context is physically so far removed from these rock markings, as to be misleading at best and need to be discounted until a proper programme of dating has commenced. The sources cited for rock art dating tend to be out of date and it would be standard practice to have a geochronologist assess the rock-marked areas and then establish dating protocols.

      Authorship and dating are cornerstone of archaeological/paleoanthropological work and need to established in the first instance. Until that has been done commensurate with current standards in global rock art research this potentially landmark finding cannot be taken as probable, only as possible. This is a pity as the last decade or so has revolutionised our understanding of the socially complex world multiple hominin species lived in, and marked in utilitarian and symbolic ways. The conditions for acceptance of ancient rock art has thus never been better, but the Dinaledi example needs to revisit research first principles around authorship and dating to be included as a credible part of this larger context. It would have been good to see a commitment to a coherent research programme to this end for this case study.

      I hope these observations are useful. As above I keep them short as there has been minimal change to the 2023 ms, and my detailed comments on that remain with the first version of the work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors present an interesting paper where they test the antagonistic pleiotropy theory. Based on this theory they hypothesize that genetic variants associated with later onset of age at menarche and age at first birth have a positive causal effect on a multitude of health outcomes later in life, such as epigenetic aging and prevalence of chronic diseases. Using a mendelian randomization and colocalization approach, the authors show that SNPs associated with later age at menarche are associated with delayed aging measurements, such as slower epigenetic aging and reduced facial aging and a lower risk of chronic diseases, such as type 2 diabetes and hypertension. Moreover, they identify 128 fertility-related SNPs that associate with age-related outcomes and they identified BMI as a mediating factor for disease risk, discussing this finding in the context of evolutionary theory.

      Strengths:

      The major strength of this manuscript is that it addresses the antagonistic pleiotropy theory in aging. Aging theories are not frequently empirically tested although this is highly necessary. The work is therefore relevant for the aging field as well as beyond this field, as the antagonistic pleiotropy theory addresses the link between fitness (early life health and reproduction) and aging.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors report evidence in support of the antagonistic pleiotropy theory in aging and discuss the discuss the disposable soma theory. Although both theories describe distinct mechanisms, separating them in empirical research is complicated and needs further studies in future research.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The investigation provides a computational as well as biochemical insights into the (un)binding mechanisms of a pair of psychoactive substances into cannabinoid receptors. A combination of molecular dynamics simulation and a set of state-of-the art statistical post-processing techniques were employed to exploit GPCR-ligand dynamics.

      Strengths:

      The strength of the manuscript lies in usage and comparison of TRAM as well as Markov state modelling (MSM) for investigating ligand binding kinetics and thermodynamics. Usually MSMs have been more commonly used for this purpose. But as the authors have pointed out, implicit in the usage of MSMs lie the assumption of detailed balance, which would not hold true for many cases especially those with skewed binding affinities. In this regard, the author's usage of TRAM which harnesses both biased and unbiased simulations for extracting the same, provides a more appropriate way-out.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While the authors have used TRAM (by citing MSM to be inadequate in these cases), the thermodynamic comparisons of both techniques provide similar values. In this case, one would wonder what advantage TRAM would hold in this particular case.

      (2) The initiation of unbiased simulations from previously run biased metadynamics simulations would almost surely introduce hysteresis in the analysis. The authors need to address these issues.

      (3) The choice of ligands in the current work seems very forced and none of the results compare directly with any experimental data. An ideal case would have been to use the seminal D.E. Shaw research paper on GPCR/ligand binding as a benchmark and then show how TRAM, using much lesser biased simulation times, would fare against the experimental kinetics or even unbiased simulated kinetics of the previous report

      (4) The method section of the manuscript seems to suggest all the simulations were started from a docked structure. This casts doubt on the reliability of the kinetics derived from these simulations that were spawned from docked structure, instead of any crystallographic pose. Ideally, the authors should have been more careful in choosing the ligands in this work based on the availability of the crystallographic structures.

      (5) The last part of using a machine learning-based approach to analyse allosteric interaction seems to be very much forced, as there are numerous distance-based more traditional precedent analyses that do a fair job of identifying an allosteric job.

      (6) While getting busy with the methodological details of TRAM vs MSM, the manuscript fails to share with sufficient clairty what the distinctive features of two ligand binding mechanisms are.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed most of the queries of the reviewer in an adequate manner. However, The current code availability section just provides the link to Python files to generate the plots. It is not very useful in its current form. The code availability section should provide a proper GitHub page that shows the usage of TRAM for the readers to execute. While Pyemma has been cited for TRAM, a python note book to reproduce the TRAM would be very instructive.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors use a genetic screen in C. elegans to investigate the physiological roles of polyunsaturated fatty acids (PUFAs). They screen for mutations that rescue fat-2 mutants, which have strong reductions in PUFAs. As a result, either mutations in fat-2 itself, or mutations in genes involved in the HIF-1 pathway, were found to rescue fat-2 mutants. Mutants in the HIF-1 pathway rescue fat-2 mutants by boosting its catalytic activity (via upregulated Fe2+). Thus, the authors show that in the context of fat-2 mutation, the sole genetic means to rescue PUFA insufficiency is to restore PUFA levels.

      Strengths:

      As C. elegans can produce PUFAs de novo as essential lipids, the genetic model is well suited to study the fundamental roles of PUFAs. The genetic screen finds mutations in convergent pathways, suggesting that it has reached near-saturation. The authors extensively validate the results of the screening and provide sufficient mechanistic insights to show how PUFA levels are restored in HIF-1 pathway mutants. As many of the mutations found to rescue fat-2 mutants are of gain-of-function, it is unlikely that similar discoveries could have been made with other approaches like genome-wide CRISPR screenings, making the current study distinctive. Consequently, the study provides important messages. First, it shows that PUFAs are essential for life. The inability to genetically rescue PUFA deficiency, except for mutations that restore PUFA levels, suggests that they have pleiotropic essential functions. In addition, the results suggest that the most essential functions of PUFAs are not in fluidity regulation, which is consistent with recent reviews proposing that the importance of unsaturation goes beyond fluidity (doi: 10.1016/j.tibs.2023.08.004 and doi: 10.1101/cshperspect.a041409). Thus, the study provides fundamental insights about how membrane lipid composition can be linked to biological functions.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors did a lot of efforts to answer the questions that arose through peer review, and now all the claims seem to be supported by experimental data. Thus, I do not see obvious weaknesses. Of course, it remains still unclear what PUFAs do beyond fluidity regulation, but this is something that cannot be answered from a single study. I just have one final proposition to make.

      I still do not agree with the answer to my previous comment 6 regarding Figure S2E. The authors claim that hif-1(et69) suppresses fat-2(wa17) in a ftn-2 null background (in Figure S2 legend for example). To claim so, they would need to compare the triple mutant with fat-2(wa17);ftn-2(ok404) and show some rescue. However, we see in Figure 5H that ftn-2(ok404) alone rescues fat-2(wa17). Thus, by comparing both figures, I see no additional effect of hif-1(et69) in an ftn-2(ok404) background. I actually think that this makes more sense, since the authors claim that hif-1(et69) is a gain-of-function mutation that acts through suppression of ftn-2 expression. Thus, I would expect that without ftn-2 from the beginning, hif-1(et69) does not have an additional effect, and this seems to be what we see from the data. Thus, I would suggest that the authors reformulate their claims regarding the effect of hif-1(et69) in the ftn-2(ok404) background, which seems to be absent (consistently with what one would expect).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This work is a nice contribution to the literature in articulating a specific, testable theory of how psychedelics act to generate hallucinations and plasticity. The connection to replay, however - including in the title, abstract, and framing throughout the paper - is not well fleshed out.

      In particular, the paper's framing seems to conflate replay, dreams, and top-down processing, but these are not one and the same. Picard-Delano et al. TICS 2023 provides a useful review of the differences between replay and dreams. One key point is that most replay has been observed during NREM sleep, but our canonically bizarre / vivid dreams occur during REM. Top-down connections have also been proposed to be used for many processes aside from replay. The paper would benefit from much more precision and nuance on these points.

      I believe the paper is missing demonstrations or speculation about how plasticity under various doses of psychedelics relates to changes in performance, which would be an important link to the replay-dependent learning literature.

      Are there renderings available for 'ripple' effects of psychedelics that could be included, to allow readers to compare the model's hallucinations to humans'? Short of this, it would be useful to have a more detailed description of what rippling is. (For those readers without firsthand knowledge!) It is currently difficult to assess how close the match is.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This methods paper proposes two changes to classic RSA, a popular method to probe neural representation in neuroimaging experiments: computing RSA at row/column level of RDM, and using mixed linear modeling to compute second-level statistics, using the individual row/columns to estimate a random effect of stimulus. The benefit of the new method is demonstrated using simulations and a re-analysis of a prior fMRI dataset on object perception and memory encoding.

      Strengths:

      (1) The paper is clearly written and features clear illustrations of the proposed method.

      (2) The combination of simulation and real data works well, with the same factors being examined in both simulations and real data, resulting in a convincing demonstration of the benefits of tRSA in realistic experimental scenarios.

      (3) I find the author's claim that tRSA is a promising approach to perform more complete modeling of cogneuro data, but also to conceptualize representation at the single trial/event level (cf Discussion section on P42), quite appealing.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While I generally welcome the contribution (see above), I take some issue with the accusatory tone of the manuscript in the Introduction. The text there (using words such as 'ignored variances', 'errouneous inferences', 'one must', 'not well-suited', 'misleading') appears aimed at turning cRSA in a 'straw man' with many limitations that other researchers have not recognized but that the new proposed method supposedly resolves. This can be written in a more nuanced, constructive manner without accusing the numerous users of this popular method of ignorance.

      (2) The described limitations are also not entirely correct, in my view: for example, statistical inference in cRSA is not always done using classic parametric statistics such as t-tests (cf Figure 1): the rsatoolbox paper by Nili et al. (2014) outlines non-parametric alternatives based on permutation tests, bootstrapping and sign tests, which are commonly used in the field. Nor has RSA ever been conducted at the row/column level (here referred to by the authors as 'trial level'; cf King et al., 2018).

      (3) One of the advantages of cRSA is its simplicity. Adding linear mixed effects modeling to RSA introduces a host of additional 'analysis parameters' pertaining to the choice of the model setup (random effects, fixed effects, interactions, what error terms to use) - how should future users of tRSA navigate this?

      (4) Here, only a single real fMRI dataset is used with a quite complicated experimental design for the memory part; it's not clear if there is any benefit of using tRSA on a simpler real dataset. What's the benefit of tRSA in classic RSA datasets (e.g., Kriegeskorte et al., 2008), with fixed stimulus conditions and no behavior?

      (5) The cells of an RDM/RSM reflect pairwise comparisons between response patterns (typically a brain but can be any system; cf Sucholutsky et al., 2023). Because the response patterns are repeatedly compared, the cells of this matrix are not independent of one another. Does this raise issues with the validity of the linear mixed effects model? Does it assume the observations are linearly independent?

      (6) The manuscript assumes the reader is familiar with technical statistical terms such as Type I/II error, sensitivity, specificity, homoscedasticity assumptions, as well as linear mixed models (fixed effects, random effects, etc). I am concerned that this jargon makes the paper difficult to understand for a broad readership or even researchers currently using cRSA that might be interested in trying tRSA.

      (7) I could not find any statement on data availability or code availability. Given that the manuscript reuses prior data and proposes a new method, making data and code/tutorials openly available would greatly enhance the potential impact and utility for the community.

      References

      King, M. L., Groen, I. I., Steel, A., Kravitz, D. J., & Baker, C. I. (2019). Similarity judgments and cortical visual responses reflect different properties of object and scene categories in naturalistic images. NeuroImage, 197, 368-382.

      Kriegeskorte, N., Mur, M., Ruff, D. A., Kiani, R., Bodurka, J., Esteky, H., ... & Bandettini, P. A. (2008). Matching categorical object representations in inferior temporal cortex of man and monkey. Neuron, 60(6), 1126-1141.

      Nili, H., Wingfield, C., Walther, A., Su, L., Marslen-Wilson, W., & Kriegeskorte, N. (2014). A toolbox for representational similarity analysis. PLoS computational biology, 10(4), e1003553.

      Sucholutsky, I., Muttenthaler, L., Weller, A., Peng, A., Bobu, A., Kim, B., ... & Griffiths, T. L. (2023). Getting aligned on representational alignment. arXiv preprint arXiv:2310.13018.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to show that connectivity patterns within spinal circuits composed of specific excitatory and inhibitory connectivity and with varying degrees of modularity could achieve tail beats at various frequencies as well as proper left-right coordination and rostrocaudal propagation speeds.

      Strengths:

      The model is simple, and the connectivity patterns explored are well supported by the literature.

      The conclusions are intuitive and support many experimental studies on zebrafish spinal circuits for swimming. The simulations provide strong support for the sufficiency of connectivity patterns to produce and control many hallmark features of swimming in zebrafish.

      Weaknesses:

      I only have two minor suggestions:

      (1) Figure 1A, if I interpret Figure 1B correctly, should there not be long descending projections as well that don't seem to be illustrated?

      (2) Page 5, It would be good to define what is meant by slow and fast here, as this definition changes with age in zebrafish (what developmental age)?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This comparative study of macaque species and the type of social interaction is both ambitious and inevitably comes with a lot of caveats. The overall conclusion is that more intolerant species have a larger amygdala. There are also opposing development profiles regarding amygdala volume depending on whether it is a tolerant or intolerant species.

      To achieve any sort of power, they have combined data from 4 centres, which have all used different scanning methods, and there are some resolution differences. The authors have also had to group species into 4 classifications - again to assist with any generalisations and power. They have focussed on the volumes of two structures, the amygdala and the hippocampus, which seems appropriate. Neither structure is homogeneous and so it may well be that a targeted focus on specific nuclei or subfields would help (the authors may well do this next) - but as the variables would only increase further along with the number of potential comparisons, alongside small group numbers, it seems only prudent to treat these findings are preliminary. That said, it is highly unlikely that large numbers of macaque brains will become available in the near future.

      This introduction is by way of saying that the study achieves what it sets out to do, but there are many reasons to see this study as preliminary. The main message seems to be twofold: (1) that more intolerant species have relatively larger amygdalae, and (2) that with development, there is an opposite pattern of volume change (increasing with age in intolerant species and decreasing with age in tolerant species). Finding 1 is the opposite of that predicted in Table 1 - this is fine, but it should be made clearer in the Discussion that this is the case, otherwise the reader may feel confused. As I read it, the authors have switched their prediction in the Discussion, which feels uncomfortable.

      It is inevitable that the data in a study of this complexity are all too prone to post hoc considerations, to which the authors indulge. In the case of Grade 1 species, the individuals have a lot to learn, especially if they are not top of the hierarchy, but at the same time, there are fewer individuals in the troop, making predictions very tricky. As noted above, I am concerned by the seemingly opposite predictions in Table 1 and those in the Discussion regarding tolerance and amygdala volume. (It may be that the predictions in Table 1 are the opposite of how I read them, in which case the Table and preceding text need to align.)

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors produce a new tool, BEHAV3D to analyse tracking data and to integrate these analyses with large and small scale architectural features of the tissue. This is similar to several other published methods to analyse spatio-temporal data, however, the connection to tissue features is a nice addition, as is the lack of requirement for coding. The tool is then used to analyse tracking data of tumour cells in diffuse midline glioma. They suggest 7 clusters exist within these tracks and that they differ spatially. They ultimately suggest that there these behaviours occur in distinct spatial areas as determined by CytoMAP.

      Strengths:

      - The tool appears relatively user-friendly and is open source. The combination with CytoMAP represents a nice option for researchers.

      - The identification of associations between cell track phenotype and spatial features is exciting and the diffuse midline glioma data nicely demonstrates how this could be used.

      Weaknesses:

      - The revision has dealt with many concerns, however, the statistics generated by the process are still flawed. While the statistics have been clarified within the legends and this is a great improvement in terms of clarity the underlying assumptions of the tests used are violated. The problem is that individual imaging positions or tracks are treated as independent and then analysed by ANOVA. As separate imaging positions within the same mouse are not independent, nor are individual cells within a single mouse, this makes the statistical analyses inappropriate. For a deeper analysis of this that is feasible within a review please see Lord, Samuel J., et al. "SuperPlots: Communicating reproducibility and variability in cell biology." The Journal of cell biology 219.6 (2020): e202001064. Ultimately, while this is a neat piece of software facilitating the analysis of complex data, the fact that it will produce flawed statistical analysis is a major problem. This problem is compounded by the fact that much imaging analysis has been analysed in this inappropriate manner in the past, leading to issues of interpretation and ultimately reproducibility.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Gekko et al investigate the impact of perturbing mitochondrial during early embryo development, through modulation of the mitochondrial fission protein Drp1 using Trim-Away technology. They aimed to validate a role for mitochondrial dynamics in modulating chromosomal segregation, mitochondrial inheritance and embryo development and achieve this through the examination of mitochondrial and endoplasmic reticulum distribution, as well as actin filament involvement, using targeted plasmids, molecular probes and TEM in pronuclear stage embryos through the first cleavages divisions. Drp1 deletion perturbed mitochondrial distribution, leading to asymmetric partitioning of mitochondria to the 2-cell stage embryo, prevented appropriate chromosomal segregation and culminated in embryo arrest. Resultant 2-cell embryos displayed altered ATP, mtDNA and calcium levels. Microinjection of Drp1 mRNA partially rescued embryo development. A role for actin filaments in mitochondrial inheritance is described, however the actin-based motor Myo19 does not appear to contribute.

      Overall, this study builds upon their previous work and provides further support for a role of mitochondrial dynamics in mediating chromosomal segregation and mitochondrial inheritance. In particular, Drp1 is required for redistribution of mitochondria to support symmetric partitioning and support ongoing development.

      Strengths:<br /> The study is well designed, the methods appropriate and the results clearly presented. The findings are nicely summarised in a schematic.

      The addition of further quantification, including mitochondrial cluster size, elongation/aspect ratio and ROS, as requested by the reviewers, has provided further evidence for the impact of Drp1 depletion on mitochondrial morphology and function.

      Understanding the role of mitochondria in binucleation and mitochondrial inheritance is of clinical relevance for patients undergoing infertility treatment, particularly those undergoing mitochondrial replacement therapy.

      Weaknesses (original manuscript):<br /> The authors first describe the redistribution of mitochondria during normal development, followed by alterations induced by Drp1 depletion. It would be useful to indicate time post-hCG for imaging of fertilised zygotes (first paragraph of the results/Figure 1) to compare with subsequent Drp1 depletion experiments.

      It is noted that Drp1 protein levels were undetectable 5h post-injection, suggesting earlier times were not examined, yet in Figure 3A it would seem that aggregation has occurred within 2 hours (relative to Figure 1).

      Mitochondria appear to be slightly more aggregated in Drp1 fl/fl embryos than in control, though comparison with untreated controls does not appear to have been undertaken. There also appears to be some variability in mitochondrial aggregation patterns following Drp1 depletion (Figure 2-suppl 1 B) which are not discussed.

      The authors use western blotting to validate the depletion of Drp1, however do not quantify band intensity. It is also unclear whether pooled embryo samples were used for western blot analysis.

      Likewise, intracellular ROS levels are examined however quantification is not provided. It is therefore unclear whether 'highly accumulated levels' are of significance or related to Drp1 depletion.

      In previous work, Drp1 was found to have a role as a spindle assembly checkpoint (SAC) protein. It is therefore unclear from the experiments performed whether aggregation of mitochondria separating the pronuclei physically (or other aspects of mitochondrial function) prevents appropriate chromosome segregation or whether Drp1 is acting directly on the SAC.

      Weaknesses (revised manuscript):

      The only remaining weakness is that the authors have not undertaken additional experiments to clarify any role for mitochondrial transport following Drp1 depletion.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Primates are a particularly important and oft-applied model for understanding the evolution of, e.g., life history and senescence in humans. Although there is a growing body of work on aging in primates, there are three components of primate senescence research that have been underutilized or understudied: (1) longitudinal datasets, (2) wild populations, and (3) (stone) tool-use behaviors. Therefore, the goal of this study was to (1) use a 17-year longitudinal dataset (2) of wild chimpanzees in the Bossou forest, (3) visiting a site for field experiments on nut-cracking. They sampled and analyzed data from five field seasons for five chimpanzees of old age. From this sample, Howard-Spink and colleagues noted a decline in tool-use and tool-use efficiency in some individuals, but not in others. The authors then conclude that there is a measurable effect of senescence on chimpanzee behavior, but that it varies individually. The study has major intellectual value as a building block for future research, but there are several major caveats.

      Strengths:

      With this study, Howard-Spink and colleagues make a foray into a neglected topic of research: the impact of the physiological and cognitive changes due to senescence on stone tool use in chimpanzees. Based on novelty alone, this is a valuable study. The authors cleverly make use of a longitudinal record covering 17 years of field data, which provides a window into long-term changes in the behavior of wild chimpanzees, which I agree cannot be understood through cross-sectional comparisons.

      The metrics of 'efficiency' (see caveats below) are suitable for measuring changes in technological behavior over time, as specifically tailored to the nut-cracking (e.g., time, number of actions, number of strikes, tool changes). The ethogram and the coding protocol are also suitable for studying the target questions and objectives. I would recommend, however, the inclusion of further variables that will assist in improving the amount of valid data that can be extrapolated (see also below).

      With this pilot, Howard-Spink and colleagues have established a foundation upon which future research can be designed, including further investigation with the Bossou dataset and other existing video archives, but especially future targeted data collection, which can be designed to overcome some of the limits and confounds that can be identified in the current study.

      Weaknesses:

      Although I agree with the reasoning behind conducting this research and understand that, as the authors state, there are logistical considerations that have to be made when planning and executing such a study, there are a number of methodological and theoretical shortcomings that either need to be more explicitly stated by the authors or would require additional data collection and analysis.

      One of the main limitations of this study is the small sample size. There are only 5 of the old-aged individuals, which is not enough to draw any inferences about aging for chimpanzees more generally. Howard-Spink and colleagues also study data from only five of the 17 years of recorded data at Bossou. The selection of this subset of data requires clarification: why were these intervals chosen, why this number of data points, and how do we know that it provides a representative picture of the age-related changes of the full 17 years?

      With measuring and interpreting the 'efficiency' of behaviors, there are in-built assumptions about the goals of the agents and how we can define efficiency. First, it may be that efficiency is not an intentional goal for nut-cracking at all, but rather, e.g., productivity as far as the number of uncrushed kernels (cf. Putt 2015). Second, what is 'efficient' for the human observer might not be efficient for the chimpanzee who is performing the behavior. More instances of tool-switching may be considered inefficient, but it might also be a valid strategy for extracting more from the nuts, etc. Understanding the goals of chimpanzees may be a difficult proposition, but these are uncertainties that must be kept in mind when interpreting and discussing 'decline' or any change in technological behaviors over time.

      For the study of the physiological impact of senescence of tool use (i.e., on strength and coordination), the study would benefit from the inclusion of variables like grip type and (approximate) stone size (Neufuss et al., 2016). The size and shape of stones for nut-cracking have been shown to influence the efficacy and 'efficiency' of tool use (i.e., the same metrics of 'efficiency' implemented by Howard-Spink et al. in the current study), meaning raw material properties are a potential confound that the authors have not evaluated.

      Similarly, inter- and intraspecific variation in the properties of nuts being processed is another confound (Falótico et al., 2022; Proffitt et al., 2022). If oil palm nuts were varying year-to-year, for example, this would theoretically have an effect on the behavioral forms and strategies employed by the chimpanzees, and thus, any metric of efficiency being collected and analyzed. Further, it is perplexing that the authors analyze only one year where the coula nuts were provided at the test site, but these were provided during multiple field seasons. It would be more useful to compare data from a similar number of field seasons with both species if we are to study age-related changes in nut processing over time (one season of coula nut-cracking certainly does not achieve this).

      Both individual personality (especially neophilia versus neophobia; e.g., Forss & Willems, 2022) and motivation factors (Tennie & Call, 2023) are further confounds that can contribute to a more valid interpretation of the patterns found. To draw any conclusions about age-related changes in diet and food preferences, we would need to have data on the overall food intake/preferences of the individuals and the food availability in the home range. The authors refer briefly to this limitation, but the implications for the interpretation of the data are not sufficiently underlined (e.g., for the relevance of age-related decline in stone tool-use ability for individual survival).

      Generally speaking, there is a lack of consideration for temporal variation in ecological factors. As a control for these, Howard-Spink and colleagues have examined behavioral data for younger individuals from Bossou in the same years, to ostensibly show that patterns in older adults are different from patterns in younger adults, which is fair given the available data. Nonetheless, they seem to focus mostly on the start and end points and not patterns that occur in between. For example, there is a curious drop in attendance rate for all individuals in the 2008 season, the implications of which are not discussed by the authors.

      As far as attendance, Howard-Spink and colleagues also discuss how this might be explained by changes in social standing in later life (i.e., chimpanzees move to the fringes of the social network and become less likely to visit gathering sites). This is not senescence in the sense of physiological and cognitive decline with older age. Instead, the reduced attendance due to changes in social standing seems rather to exacerbate signs of aging rather than be an indicator of it itself. The authors also mention a flu-like epidemic that caused the death of 5 individuals; the subsequent population decline and related changes in demography also warrant more discussion and characterization in the manuscript.

      Understandably, some of these issues cannot be evaluated or corrected with the presented dataset. Nonetheless, these undermine how certain and/or deterministic their conclusions can really be considered. Howard-Spink et al. have not strongly 'demonstrated' the validity of relationships between the variables of the study. If anything, their cursory observations provide us with methods to apply and hypotheses to test in future studies. It is likely that with higher-resolution datasets, the individual variability in age-related decline in tool-use abilities will be replicated. For now, this can be considered a starting point, which will hopefully inspire future attempts to research these questions.

      Falótico, T., Valença, T., Verderane, M. & Fogaça, M. D. Stone tools differences across three capuchin monkey populations: food's physical properties, ecology, and culture. Sci. Rep. 12, 14365 (2022).<br /> Forss, S. & Willems, E. The curious case of great ape curiosity and how it is shaped by sociality. Ethology 128, 552-563 (2022).<br /> Neufuss, J., Humle, T., Cremaschi, A. & Kivell, T. L. Nut-cracking behaviour in wild-born, rehabilitated bonobos (Pan paniscus): a comprehensive study of hand-preference, hand grips and efficiency. Am. J. Primatol. 79, e22589 (2016).<br /> Proffitt, T., Reeves, J. S., Pacome, S. S. & Luncz, L. V. Identifying functional and regional differences in chimpanzee stone tool technology. R. Soc. Open Sci. 9, 220826 (2022).<br /> Putt, S. S. The origins of stone tool reduction and the transition to knapping: An experimental approach. J. Archaeol. Sci.: Rep. 2, 51-60 (2015).<br /> Tennie, C. & Call, J. Unmotivated subjects cannot provide interpretable data and tasks with sensitive learning periods require appropriately aged subjects: A Commentary on Koops et al. (2022) "Field experiments find no evidence that chimpanzee nut cracking can be independently innovated". ABC 10, 89-94 (2023).

      Comments on Revised Version (from BRE):

      The authors have revised their methods to clarify why certain field seasons were chosen and have clarified aspects of their analysis relevant to this reviewer's concerns. The coula nut cracking data and results which were of a single season have now been restricted to the Supplementary. The revised discussion now includes a much more detailed limitations section including both ecological factors but also the effects of social aging. Stone tool size, grip and other factors are also acknowledged as being potentially important for measuring efficiency but the authors were unable to include in this study due to the nature of the dataset.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The Commander complex is a key player in endosomal recycling which recruits cargo proteins and facilitates the formation of tubulo-vesicular carriers. Squiers et al found COMMD3, a subunit of the Commander complex, could interact directly with ARF1 and regulate endosomal recycling.

      Strengths:

      Overall, this is a nice study that provides some interesting knowledge on the function of the Commander complex.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed all my previous concerns

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Ngo et al. use AlphaFold2 and Rosetta to model closed, open, and inactive states of the human ion channel hERG. Subsequent MD simulations and comparisons with experiment support the plausibility of their models.

      Strengths:

      Ngo et al. employ various computational methods to enhance AlphaFold2's prediction capabilities for the human voltage-gated potassium channel hERG. They guide AlphaFold2 to explore different protein conformations and states, including its open, closed, and inactivated forms, using targeted templates. Additionally, they applied the Rosetta FastRelax protocol with an implicit membrane to refine the conformation of each residue in the predictions and address steric clashes, along with molecular dynamics (MD) simulations to account for membrane-pore flexibility. The methodology is well-described, and the figures are clear and descriptive.

      The authors have addressed some of the concerns raised during the first round of reviews. For instance, to mitigate potential bias in selecting the inactivated conformation, they evaluated conformational variability via backbone dihedral angles at specific residues in the selectivity filter and the drug binding sites. They also evaluated the top representative model from inactivated-state-sampling Cluster 3 (termed "AF ic3"), which was initially excluded. This model is now included in the revised manuscript as Figure S9a, b. MD simulations confirmed that this state could be a potential alternative open-state conformation. The authors also acknowledged the limitation of their study by not incorporating other enhanced sampling methods and AF3.

      In the revised manuscript, the authors provided more extensive explanations of their methods. For example, they explained that their approach to template selection was guided by their experience-AlphaFold2 with larger templates often overly constraining predictions to the input structure, reducing its flexibility to explore alternative conformations. In contrast, smaller, targeted fragments increase the likelihood that AlphaFold2 will incorporate the desired structural features while predicting the rest of the protein. They also noted that pLDDT scores are not always reliable for selecting new or alternative conformations, citing proper references. They included a model from cluster 3 of the inactivated-state sampling process, which exhibited lower pLDDT scores to illustrate this further.

      Another point raised by the reviewers was the exclusion of the N-terminal PAS domain due to GPU memory limitations and its impact on the study. This omission may overlook the PAS domain's potential roles in gating kinetics and allosteric effects on drug binding. The authors acknowledged these limitations in the main text and highlighted the need for future studies to explore these regions in greater detail. They also alluded to potential future research to address these points. Additionally, they have made some of their analysis scripts and tools available on GitHub as a community resource.

      Weakness:

      The primary issue with the study is the lack of a general pipeline or strategy that can be universally applied to any system, even if limited to ion channels or membrane proteins. A related paper assessed the conformational variability in voltage-sensing domains (VSDs) by applying both the default MSA depth and a range of reduced MSA depths to enhance conformational diversity (please see https://doi.org/10.1101/2025.03.12.642934). They generated 600 models for 32 members of the voltage-gated cation channel superfamily and demonstrated that AlphaFold2 can predict a range of diverse structures of the VSDs, representing activated, deactivated, and intermediate conformations, with more diversity observed for some VSDs compared to others.

      The authors have addressed one of the reviewer's concerns about generalizability by including an example in Figure S14 of the modified text, showing how their approach can be applied to model another ion channel system. However, some outstanding questions remain: Is this method better suited for ion channels or membrane proteins with already solved structures and extensive research available? Can this pipeline be applied to other systems as well? Additionally, how does this method compare to other methods using MSA subsampling and other enhanced AF-based techniques to generate alternative conformations of proteins?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Ito and Toyoizumi present a computational model of context-dependent action selection. They propose a "hippocampus" network that learns sequences based on which the agent chooses actions. The hippocampus network receives both stimulus and context information from an attractor network that learns new contexts based on experience. The model is consistent with a variety of experiments, both from the rodent and the human literature, such as splitter cells, lap cells, and the dependence of sequence expression on behavioral statistics. Moreover, the authors suggest that psychiatric disorders can be interpreted in terms of over-/under-representation of context information.

      Strengths:

      This ambitious work links diverse physiological and behavioral findings into a self-organizing neural network framework. All functional aspects of the network arise from plastic synaptic connections: Sequences, contexts, and action selection. The model also nicely links ideas from reinforcement learning to neuronally interpretable mechanisms, e.g., learning a value function from hippocampal activity.

      Weaknesses:

      The presentation, particularly of the methodological aspects, needs to be majorly improved. Judgment of generality and plausibility of the results is hampered, but is essential, particularly for the conclusions related to psychiatric disorders. In its present form, it is unclear whether the claims and conclusions made are justified. Also, the lack of clarity strongly reduces the impact of the work in the larger field.

      More specifically:

      (1) The methods section is impenetrable. The specific adaptations of the model to the individual use cases of the model, as well as the posthoc analyses of the simulations, did not become clear. Important concepts are only defined in passing and used before they are introduced. The authors may consider a more rigorous mathematical reporting style. They also may consider making the methods part self-contained and moving it in front of the results part.

      (2) The description of results in the main text remains on a very abstract level. The authors may consider showing more simulated neural activity. It remains vague how the different stimuli and contexts are represented in the network. Particularly, the simulations and related statistical analyses underlying the paradigms in Figure 4 are incompletely described.

      (3) The literature review can be improved (laid out in the specific recommendations).

      (4) Given the large range of experimental phenomenology addressed by the manuscript, it would be helpful to add a Discussion paragraph on how much the results from mice and humans can be integrated, particularly regarding the nature of the context selection network.

      (5) As a minor point, the hippocampus is pretty much treated as a premotor network. Also, a Discussion paragraph would be helpful.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is important work that helps to uncover how the process of autophagy is initiated - via structural analyses of the initiating ULK1 complex. High resolution structural details and a mechanistic insight of this complex have been lacking and understanding how it assembles and functions is a major goal of a field that impacts many aspects of cell and disease biology. While we know components of the ULK1 complex are essential for autophagy, how they physically interact is far from clear. The work presented makes use of AlphaFold2 to structurally predict interaction sites between the different subunits of the ULK1 complex (namely ULK1, ATG13 and FIP200). Importantly, the authors go on to experimentally validate that these predicted sites are critical for complex formation by using site-directed mutagenesis and then go on to show that the three-way interaction between these components is necessary to induce autophagy in cells.

      Strengths:

      The data are very clear. Each binding interface of ATG13 (ATG13 with FIP300/ATG13 with ULK1) is confirmed biochemically with ITC and IP experiments from cells. Likewise, IP experiments with ULK1 and FIP200 also validate interaction domains. A real strength of the work is in the analyses of the consequences of disrupting ATG13's interactions in cells. The authors make CRISPR KI mutations of the binding interface point mutants. This is not a trivial task and is the best approach as everything is monitored under endogenous conditions. Using these cells the authors show that ATG13's ability to interact with both ULK1 and FIP200 is essential for a full autophagy response.

      Weaknesses:

      I think a main weakness here is the failure to acknowledge and compare results with an earlier preprint that shows essentially the same thing (https://doi.org/10.1101/2023.06.01.543278). Arguably, this earlier work is much stronger from a structural point of view as it relies not only on AlphaFold2 but also actual experimental structural determinations (and takes the mechanisms of autophagy activation further by providing evidence for a super complex between the ULK1 and VPS34 complexes). That is not to say that this work is not important, as in the least it independently helps to build a consensus for ULK1 complex structure. Another weakness is that the downstream "functional" consequences of disrupting the ULK1 complex are only minimally addressed. The authors perform a Halotag-LC3 autophagy assay, which essentially monitors the endpoint of the process. There are a lot of steps in between, knowledge of which could help with mechanistic understanding. Not in the least is the kinase activity of ULK1 - how is this altered by disrupting its interactions with ATG13 and/or FIP200?

      Update:

      I feel the authors have addressed my concerns in their revised manuscript

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      Bigge and colleagues use a sophisticated free-flight setup to study visuo-motor responses elicited in different parts of the visual field in the hummingbird hawkmoth. Hawkmoths have been previously shown to rely on translational optic flow information for flight control exclusively in the ventral and lateral parts of their visual field. Dorsally presented patterns, elicit a formerly completely unknown response - instead of using dorsal patterns to maintain straight flight paths, hawkmoths fly, more often, in a direction aligned with the main axis of the pattern presented (Bigge et al, 2021). Here, the authors go further and put ventral/lateral and dorsal visual cues into conflict. They found that the different visuomotor pathways act in parallel, and they identified a 'hierarchy': the avoidance of dorsal patterns had the strongest weight and optic flow-based speed regulation the lowest weight. The authors linked their behavioral results to visual scene statistics in the hawkmoths' natural environment. The partition of ventral and dorsal visuomotor pathways is well in line with differences in visual cue frequencies. The response hierarchy, however, seems to be dominated by dorsal features, that are less frequent, but presumably highly relevant for the animals' flight safety.

      Strengths

      The data are very interesting and unique. The manuscript provides a thorough analysis of free-flight behavior in a non-model organism that is extremely interesting for comparative reasons (and on its own). These data are both difficult to obtain and very valuable to the field.

      Weaknesses

      While the present manuscript clearly goes beyond Bigge et al, 2021, the advance could have perhaps been even stronger with a more fine-grained investigation of the visual responses in the dorsal visual field. Do hawkmoths, for example, show optomotor responses to rotational optic flow in the dorsal visual field?

      I find the majority of the data, which are also the data supporting the main claims of the paper, compelling. However, the measurements of flight height are less solid than the rest and I think these data should be interpreted more carefully.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript asks an interesting and important question: what part of 'cerebellar' motor dysfunction is an acute control problem vs a compensatory strategy to the acute control issue? The authors use a cerebellar 'blockade' protocol, consisting of high frequency stimuli applied to the cerebellar peduncle which is thought to interfere with outflow signals. This protocol was applied in monkeys performing center out reaching movements and has been published from this laboratory in several preceding studies. I found the take-home-message broadly convincing and clarifying - that cerebellar block reduces muscle activation acutely particularly in movements that involve multiple joints and therefore invoke interaction torques, and that movements progressively slow down to in effect 'compensate' for these acute tone deficits. The manuscript was generally well written, data were clear, convincing and novel. The key strengths are differentiating acute from sub-acute (within session but not immediate) kinematic consequences of cerebellar block.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Flowers et al. aimed to enhance the accuracy of automated ligand model building by refining the qFit-ligand algorithm. Recognizing that ligands can exhibit conformational flexibility even when bound to receptors, the authors developed a bioinformatic pipeline to model alternate ligand conformations while improving fitting and more energetically favorable conformations.

      Strengths:

      The authors present a computational pipeline designed to automatically model and fit ligands into electron density maps, identifying potential alternative conformations within the structures.

      Weaknesses:

      Ligand modeling, particularly in cases of poorly defined electron density, remains a challenging task. The procedure presented in this manuscript exhibits limitations in low-resolution electron density maps (lower than 2.0 Å) and low-occupancy scenarios. Considering that the maps used to establish the operational bounds of qFit-ligand were synthetically generated, it's likely that the resolution cutoff will be even stricter when applied to real-world data.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to develop a large-scale drug screen to identify B-lp modulators in a vertebrate whole-animal system. Using the zebrafish LipoGlo system that the authors had previously published and validated, the authors screened 2762 drug candidates to generate 49 hits and ultimately validated 19 drugs as genuine ApoB-lowering drugs. Using LipoGlo-Electrophoresis, the authors are able to obtain insights into the ApoB-lipoprotein size/subclass distribution. The authors further validate and study the mechanism of a strong hit, Enoxolone, known as also known as 18β-Glycyrrhetinic acid, which has previously been reported to modulate lipid metabolism. The authors also show that Enoxolone effects are mediated through HNF4⍺, which has been previously shown in the mouse system, but this is the first time it has been shown in the zebrafish.

      Strengths:

      The study was methodical and robust, using a published and well-validated zebrafish LipoGlo model. The authors validated the hits from the screen independently and considered the possibility that some drugs may have been detected as false positive results due to effects on the enzymatic activity of NanoLuciferase; only one hit, verteporfin, was shown to be a false positive. Using LipoGlo-Electrophoresis, the authors are able to obtain extra insights into the ApoB-lipoprotein size/subclass distribution. They showed that while enoxolone treatment reduces total B-lps, there are no overt changes in B-lp size distribution compared to vehicle-treated animals, other than a slight increase in the zero mobility (ZM) fraction, which contains very large particles and/or tissue aggregates. In contrast, the positive control, lomitapide, does show a change in B-lp size distribution compared to vehicle-treated animals - an increase in frequency of LDLs (low-density lipoprotein), but a decrease in VLDLs (very low-density lipoprotein). This study also assesses the LipoGlo-Electrophoresis profile of HNF4⍺ inhibitors. Work in the zebrafish larvae means that the effect on overall development and an entire vertebrate organism can also be assessed. Finally, the authors applied a thorough statistical measure to define a hit, using the Strictly Standardized Mean Difference (SSMD) method.

      Weaknesses:

      While the screen was thorough and well-validated, the authors missed a chance to provide a lot of extra significance to a wide range of readership. While the hits were thoroughly validated and displayed, the authors could have also presented the LipoGlo-Electrophoresis for all validated hits or at least a number of them. This would hugely increase the insights into these compounds. Also, the authors chose to validate and follow up a mechanism for Enoxolone, yet this hit was already known to modulate lipid metabolism through HNF4⍺, therefore, hugely limiting the impact of the paper. So what the authors have shown that is novel is only subtly added to this - consistent in vertebrate models, RNA sequencing of pathways, further validation of the HNF4⍺ pathway, and a profile of resulting B-lp size distribution. It seemed an easy way out to pick such a candidate, and they could have followed up by validating more thoroughly a completely novel drug. Also, the authors' prior paper showing the methodology also depicted complementary EM and LipoGlo-microscopy approaches. The microscopy especially, would have been an easy complementary add-on to the screen to really give extra insights into B-lp metabolism in a whole organism for all candidates. This felt like a missed opportunity.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study focused on the roles of the nuclear envelope proteins lamin A and C, as well as nesprin-2, encoded by the LMNA and SYNE2 genes, respectively, on gene expression and chromatin mobility. It is motivated by the established role of lamins in tethering heterochromatin to the nuclear periphery in lamina-associated domains (LADs) and modulating chromatin organization. The authors show that depletion of lamin A, lamin A and C, or nesprin-2 results in differential effects of mRNA and lncRNA expression, primarily affecting genes outside established LADs. In addition, the authors used fluorescent dCas9 labeling of telomeric genomic regions combined with live-cell imaging to demonstrate that depletion of either lamin A, lamin A/C, or nesprin-2 increased the mobility of chromatin, suggesting an important role of lamins and nesprin-2 in chromatin dynamics.

      Strengths:

      The major strength of this study is the detailed characterization of changes in transcript levels and isoforms resulting from depletion of either lamin A, lamin A/C, or nesprin-2 in human osteosarcoma (U2OS) cells. The authors use a variety of advanced tools to demonstrate the effect of protein depletion on specific gene isoforms and to compare the effects on mRNA and lncRNA levels.

      The TIRF imaging of dCas9-labeled telomeres allows for high-resolution tracking of multiple telomeres per cell, thus enabling the authors to obtain detailed measurements of the mobility of telomeres within living cells and the effect of lamin A/C or nesprin-2 depletion.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the findings presented by the authors overall confirm existing knowledge about the ability of lamins A/C and nesprin to broadly affect gene expression, chromatin organization, and chromatin dynamics, the specific interpretation and the conclusions drawn from the data presented in this manuscript are limited by several technical and conceptual challenges.

      One major limitation is that the authors only assess the knockdown of their target genes on the mRNA level, where they observe reductions of around 70%. Given that lamins A and C have long half-lives, the effect at the protein level might be even lower. This incomplete and poorly characterized depletion on the protein level makes interpretation of the results difficult. The description for the shRNA targeting the LMNA gene encoding lamins A and C given by the authors is at times difficult to follow and might confuse some readers, as the authors do not clearly indicate which regions of the gene are targeted by the shRNA, and they do not make it obvious that lamin A and C result from alternative splicing of the same LMNA gene. Based on the shRNA sequences provided in the manuscript, one can conclude that the shLaminA shRNA targets the 3' UTR region of the LMNA gene specific to prelamin A (which undergoes posttranslational processing in the cell to yield lamin A). In contrast, the shRNA described by the authors as 'shLMNA' targets a region within the coding sequence of the LMNA gene that is common to both lamin A and C, i.e., the region corresponding to amino acids 122-129 (KKEGDLIA) of lamin A and C. The authors confirm the isoform-specific effect of the shLaminA isoform, although they seem somewhat surprised by it, but do not confirm the effect of the shLMNA construct. Assessing the effect of the knockdown on the protein level would provide more detailed information both on the extent of the actual protein depletion and the effect on specific lamin isoforms. Similarly, given that nesprin-2 has numerous isoforms resulting from alternative splicing and transcription initiation. In the current form of the manuscript, it remains unclear which specific nesprin-2 isoforms were depleted, and to what extent (on the protein level).

      Another substantial limitation of the manuscript is that the current analysis, with the exception of the chromatin mobility measurements, is exclusively based on transcriptomic measurements by RNA-seq and qRT-PCR, without any experimental validation of the predicted protein levels or proposed functional consequences. As such, conclusions about the importance of lamin A/C on RNA synthesis and other functions are derived entirely from gene ontology terms and are not sufficiently supported by experimental data. Thus, the true functional consequences of lamin A/C or nesprin depletion remain unclear. Statements included in the manuscript such as "our findings reveal that lamin A is essential for RNA synthesis, ..." (Lines 79-80) are thus either inaccurate or misleading, as the current data do not show that lamin A is ESSENTIAL for RNA synthesis, and lamin A/C and lamin A deficient cells and mice are viable, suggesting that they are capable of RNA synthesis.

      Another substantial weakness is that the data and analysis presented in the manuscript raise some concerns about the robustness of the findings. Given that the 'shLMNA' construct is expected to deplete both lamin A and C, i.e., its effect encompasses the depletion of lamin A, which is achieved by the 'shLaminA' construct, one would expect a substantial overlap between the DEGs in the shLMNA and shLaminA conditions, with the shLMNA depletion producing a broader effect as it targets both lamin A and C. However, the Venn Diagram in Figure 4a, the genomic loci distribution in Figure 4b, and the correlation analysis in Supplementary Figure S2 show little overlap between the shLMNA and shLaminA conditions, which is quite surprising. In the mapping of the DEGs shown in Figure 4b, it is also surprising not to see the gene targeted by the shRNA, LMNA, found on chromosome 1, in the results for the shLMNA and shLamin A depletion.

      The correlation analysis in Supplementary Figure S2 raises further questions. The authors use doc-inducible shRNA constructs to target lamin A (shLaminA), lamin A/C (shLMNA), or nesprin-2 (shSYNE2). Thus, the no-dox control (Ctr) for each of these constructs would be expected to be very similar to the non-target scrambled controls (Ctrl.shScramble and Dox.shScramble). However, in the correlation matrix, each of the no-dox controls clusters more closely with the corresponding dox-induced shRNA condition than with the Ctrl.shScramble or Dox.shScramble conditions, suggesting either a very leaky dox-inducible system, strong effects from clonal selection, or substantial batch effects in the processing. Either of these scenarios could substantially affect the interpretation of the findings. For example, differences between different clonal cell lines used for the studies, independent of the targeted gene, could explain the limited overlap between the different shRNA constructs and result in apparent differences when comparing these clones to the scrambled controls, which were derived from different clones.

      The manuscript also contains several factually inaccurate or incorrect statements or depictions. For example, the depiction of the nuclear envelope in Figure 1 shows a single bilipid layer, instead of the actual double bi-lipid layer of the inner and outer nuclear membranes that span the nuclear lumen. The depiction further lacks SUN domain proteins, which, together with nesprins, form the LINC complex essential to transmit forces across the nuclear envelope. The statement in line 214 that "Linker of nucleoskeleton and cytoskeleton (LINC) complex component nesprin-2 locates in the nuclear envelope to link the actin cytoskeleton and the nuclear lamina" is not quite accurate, as nesprin-2 also links to microtubules via dynein and kinesin.

      The statement that "Our data show that Lamin A knockdown specifically reduced the usage of its primary isoform, suggesting a potential role in chromatin architecture regulation, while other LMNA isoforms remained unaffected, highlighting a selective effect" (lines 407-409) is confusing, as the 'shLaminA' shRNA specifically targets the 3' UTR of lamin A that is not present in the other isoforms. Thus, the observed effect is entirely consistent with the shRNA-mediated depletion, independent of any effects on chromatin architecture.

      The premise of the authors that lamins would only affect peripheral chromatin and genes at LADs neglects the fact that lamins A and C are also found in the nuclear interior, where they form stable structure and influence chromatin organization, and the fact that lamins A and C and nesprins additionally interact with numerous transcriptional regulators such as Rb, c-Fos, and beta-catenins, which could further modulate gene expression when lamins or nesprins are depleted.

      The comparison of the identified DEGs to genes contained in LADs might be confounded by the fact that the authors relied on the identification of LADs from a previous study (ref #28), which used a different human cell type (human skin fibroblasts) instead of the U2OS osteosarcoma cells used in the present study. As LADs are often highly cell-type specific, the use of the fibroblast data set could lead to substantial differences in LADs.

      Another limitation of the current manuscript is that, in the current form, some of the figures and results depicted in the figures are difficult to interpret for a reader not deeply familiar with the techniques, based in part on the insufficient labeling and figure legends. This applies, for example, to the isoform use analysis shown in Figure 3d or the GenometriCorr analysis quantifying spatial distance between LADs and DEGs shown in Figure 4c.

      Overall appraisal and context:

      Despite its limitations, the present study further illustrates the important roles the nuclear envelope proteins lamin A, lamin C, and nesprin-2 have in chromatin organization, dynamics, and gene expression. It thus confirms results from previous studies (not always fully acknowledged in the current manuscript) previously reported for lamin A/C depletion. For example, the effect of lamin A/C depletion on increasing mobility of chromatin had already been demonstrated by several other groups, such as Bronshtein et al. Nature Comm 2015 (PMID: 26299252) and Ranade et al. BMC Mol Cel Biol 2019 (PMID: 31117946). Additionally, the effect of lamin A/C depletion on gene and protein expression has already been extensively studied in a variety of other cell lines and model systems, including detailed proteomic studies (PMIDs 23990565 and 35896617).

      The finding that that lamin A/C or nesprin depletion not only affects genes at the nuclear periphery but also the nuclear interior is not particularly surprising giving the previous studies and the fact that lamins A and C are also founding within the nuclear interior, where they affect chromatin organization and dynamics, and that lamins A/C and nesprins directly interact with numerous transcriptional regulators that could further affect gene expression independent from their role in chromatin organization.

      The authors provide a detailed analysis of isoform switching in response to lamin A/C or nesprin depletion, but the underlying mechanism remains unclear. Similarly, their analysis of the genomic location of the observed DEGs shows the wide-ranging effects of lamin A/C or nesprin depletion, but lets the reader wonder how these effects are mediated. A more in-depth analysis of predicted regulator factors and their potential interaction with lamins A/C or nesprin would be beneficial in gaining more mechanistic insights.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript explores the role of PRMT1 in AMKL, highlighting its overexpression as a driver of metabolic reprogramming. PRMT1 overexpression enhances the glycolytic phenotype and extracellular acidification by increasing lactate production in AMKL cells. Treatment with the PRMT1 inhibitor MS023 significantly reduces AMKL cell viability and improves survival in tumor-bearing mice. Intriguingly, PRMT1 overexpression also increases mitochondrial number and mtDNA content. High PRMT1-expressing cells demonstrate the ability to utilize alternative energy sources dependent on mitochondrial energetics, in contrast to parental cells with lower PRMT1 levels.

      Strengths:

      This is a conceptually novel and important finding as PRMT1 has never been shown to enhance glycolysis in AMKL, and provides a novel point of therapeutic intervention for AMKL.

      Comments on revisions:

      The author has responded satisfactorily to the review comments and revised the manuscript accordingly.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:<br /> In the presented work by Wu et al. the authors investigate the role of the transcription factor Pu.1 in the survival and maintenance of microglia, the tissue resident macrophage population in the brain. To this end they generated a sophisticated new conditional pu.1 allele in zebrafish using CRISPR mediated genome editing which allows visual detection of expression of the mutant allele through a switch from GFP to dsRed after Cre-mediated recombination. Using EdU pulse-chase labelling, they first estimate the daily turnover rate of microglia in the adult zebrafish brain which was found to be higher than rates previously estimated for mice and humans. After conditional deletion of pu.1 in coro1a positive cells, they do not find a difference in microglia number at 2 and 8 days or 1 month post injection of Tamoxifen. However, at 3 month post injection, a strong decrease in mutant microglia could be detected. While no change in microglia number was detected at 1mpi, an increase in apoptotic cells and decreased proliferation as observed. RNA-seq analysis of WT and mutant microglia revealed an upregulation of tp53, which was shown to play a role in the depletion of pu.1 mutant microglia as deletion in tp53-/- mutants did not lead to a decrease in microglia number at 3mpi. Through analysis of microglia number in pU.1 mutants, the authors further show that the depletion of microglia in the conditional mutants is dependent on the presence of WT microglia. To show that the phenomenon is conserved between species, similar experiments were also performed in mice.

      This work expands on previous in vitro studies using primary human microglia. The majority of conclusions are well supported by the data, addition of controls and experimental details would strengthen the conclusions and rigor of the paper.

      Strengths:

      Generation of an elegantly designed conditional pu.1 allele in zebrafish that allows for the visual detection of expression of the knockout allele.<br /> The combination of analysis of pu.1 function in two model systems, zebrafish and mouse, strengthens the conclusions of the paper.<br /> Confirmation of the functional significance of the observed upregulation of tp53 in mutant microglia through double mutant analysis provides some mechanistic insight.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The presented RNA-Seq analysis of mutant microglia is underpowered and details on how the data was analyzed is missing. Only 9-15 cells were analyzed in total (3 pools of 3-5 cells each). Further the variability in relative gene expression of ccl35b.1, which was used as a quality control and inclusion criterion to define pools consisting of microglia, is extremely high (between ~4 and ~1600, Fig. S7A).

      (2) The authors conclude that the reduction of microglia observed in the adult brain after cKO of pu.1 in the spi-b mutant background is due to apoptosis (Lines 213-215). However, they only provide evidence of apoptosis in 3-5 dpf embryos, a stage at which loss of pu.1 alone does lead to a complete loss of microglia (Fig.2E). A control of pu.1 KI/d839 mutants treated with 4-OHT should be added to show that this effect is indeed dependent on the loss of spi-b. In addition, experiments should be performed to show apoptosis in the adult brain after cKO of pu.1 in spi-b mutants as there seems to be a difference in requirement of pu.1 in embryonic and adult stages.

      Comments on Revised Version (from BRE):

      The authors have elaborated on the details of the RNA-Seq procedure and clarified the distinct phenotypes observed with global versus condition pu.1 knockout. In addition, the authors' proposed collaborative relationship between Pu.1 and Spi-b has been expanded in the revised manuscript. The authors have addressed all the minor concerns raised by the reviewer.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:<br /> This manuscript by Tubert et al. presents the role of D5 receptors (D5R) in regulating the striatal cholinergic interneuron (CIN) pause response through D5R-cAMP-Kv1 inhibitory signaling. Their findings provide a compelling model explaining the "on/off" switch of the CIN pause, driven by the distinct dopamine affinities and the balance of D2R and D5R. Furthermore, the study bridges their previous finding of CIN hyperexcitability (Paz et al., Movement Disorder 2022) with the loss of the pause response in LID mice and demonstrates the restore of the pause through D1/D5 inverse agonist clozapine.

      Strengths:<br /> The study presents solid findings, and the writing is logically structured and easy to follow. The experiments are well-designed, properly combining ex vivo electrophysiology recording, optogenetics, and pharmacological treatment to dissect / rule out most, if not all, alternative mechanisms in their model.

      Weaknesses (fixed in this revision):<br /> In this round of revision, the authors have included additional experiments examining the role of D2R, and the possible clozapine effects on serotonin receptors in the LID off -L-DOPA ex vivo slices. Although, to our surprise, D2R agonism using quinpirole and sumanirole failed to restore the CIN pause, this study still provides new insights into the balance between D2R and D5R in modulating CIN pause.

      Overall, the authors' response adequately addressed concerns raised in the previous revision.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors used a clever and powerful approach to explore how Nav1.2 and Nav1.6 channels, which are both present in neocortical pyramidal neurons, differentially control firing properties of the neurons. Overall, the approach worked very well, and the results show very interesting differences when one or the other channel is partially inhibited. The experimental data is solid and the experimental data is very nicely complemented by a computational model incorporating the different localization of the two types of sodium channels.

      The revised manuscript has re-organized figures that make the results and interpretation easier to follow.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work explores the phenotypic developmental traits associated with Cu and Cd responses in teosinte parviglumis, a species evolutionary related to extant maize crops. Cu and Cd could serve as a proxy for heavy metals present in the soils. The manuscript explores potential genetic loci associated with heavy metal responses and domestication identified in previous studies. This includes heavy metal transporters, which are unregulated during stress. To study that, the authors compare the plant architecture of maize defective in ZmHMA1 and speculate on its association with domestication.

      Strengths:

      Very few studies covered the responses of teosintes to heavy metal stress. The physiological function of ZmHMA1 in maize also gives some novelty in this study. The idea and speculation section is interesting and well-implemented.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors explored Cu/Cd stress but not a more comprehensive panel of heavy metals, making the implications of this study quite narrow. Some techniques used, such as end-point RT-PCR and qPCR, are substandard for the field. The phenotypic changes explored are not clearly connected with the potential genetic mechanisms associated with them, with the exception of nodal roots. If teosintes in response to heavy metal have phenotypic similarity with modern landraces of maize, then heavy metal stress might have been a confounding factor in the selection of maize and not a potential driving factor. Similar to the positive selection of ZmHMA1 and its phenotypic traits. In that sense, there is no clear hypothesis of what the authors are looking for in this study, and it is hard to make conclusions based on the provided results to understand its importance. The authors do not provide any clear data on the potential influence of heavy metals in the field during the domestication of maize. The potential role of Tb-1 is not very clear either.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The revised version of the paper clarifies the authors' discoveries regarding daily changes in metabolite concentrations in the gut of adult female Drosophila melanogaster. The authors have addressed all the questions and made the necessary changes, thereby strengthening the value of the article. They demonstrate that various factors influence metabolite oscillations: circadian clock genotype, dietary regime and composition, and gut microbiota.<br /> The notable strengths of this research article remain unchanged: the originality of the experimental design with multiple conditions tested, the variety of detected metabolites, and the clarity in data presentation.

      Among the weaknesses, one may consider the following:<br /> Limitations of potential reproducibility: It is unclear whether another research team would identify the same set of cycling metabolites, although similar conclusions appear robust.<br /> Limitations of generalisation: While the conclusions regarding the influence of microbiota, circadian genotype, and dietary regime may be valid, the specific metabolic pathways affected might differ, whereas specific mechanistic explanations remain elusive.<br /> Accuracy of data interpretation: Addressed in comments to the authors. This point corresponds to interpretations discussed by the authors in the text of the manuscript, including beneficial effects of cycling metabolites and phenomenon of oscillation as a whole, its physiological relevance and lack of proofs for existence of any compensative effects, their relevance to metabolism in the gut.<br /> Nevertheless, the authors have clearly and thoroughly addressed all the reviewers' concerns, enabling a better interpretation of the entire study.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a meta-analysis of the relative contributions of spring forcing temperature, winter chilling, photoperiod and environmental variables in explaining plant flowering and leafing phenology. The authors develop a new summary variable called phenology lag to describe why species might have different responses than predicted by spring temperature.

      Strengths:

      The summary statistic is used to make a variety of comparisons, such as between observational studies and experimental studies.

      Weaknesses:

      By combining winter chilling effects, photoperiod effects, and environmental stresses that might affect phenology, the authors create a new variable that is hard to interpret. The authors do not provide information in the abstract about new insights that this variable provides.

      Comments:

      It would be useful to have a map showing the sites of the studies.

      The authors should provide a section in which the strengths and weaknesses of the approach are discussed. Is it possible that mixing different types of data, studies, sample sizes, number of years, experimental set-ups, and growth habits results in artifacts that influence the results?

      Now that the authors have created this new variable, phenological lag, which of the components that contribute to it has the most influence on it? Or which components are most influential in which circumstances? For example, what are some examples where photoperiod causes a phenological lag?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors present an interesting study on calibrating and validating a biventricular cardiac electromechanical model. This is an important contribution, but some questions remain about the quantitative validation and verification aspects of the study.

      Major comments:

      (1) The title and paper stress the importance of validation on several occasions. However, the actual validation performed is limited to the section in lines 427-439. Furthermore, it is entirely qualitative, making assessing the model's quality difficult. Most of the paper is focused on sensitivity analysis, which is also interesting but unrelated to validation. Can you include a quantitative comparison with deformation biomarkers? E.g., spatially quantify strain differences between simulation and in vivo data, or overlay the current configuration of the geometry with MRI in various views, and calculate a displacement error norm.

      (2) You mention the ASME V&V40 standards throughout your paper. Yet, you only address the "second V" validation, ignoring the "first V" verification. How did you ensure that your computational models are implemented correctly?

      (3) All parameters discussed in this publication are physical parameters. What is the sensitivity of your model outputs concerning computational parameters?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this important study, the authors examine the role of two zinc uptake transporters, Zip6 and Zip10, which are important during the maturation of oocytes, and are critical for both successful fertilization and early embryogenesis.

      Strengths:

      The authors report that oocytes from Zip10 knockout mice exhibit lower labile zinc content during oocyte maturation, decreased amounts of zinc exocytosis during fertilization, and affect the rate of blastocyst generation in fertilized eggs relative to a control strain. They do not observe these changes in their Zip6 knockout animals. The authors present clear and well-documented results from a broad range of experimental modalities in support of their conclusions.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors' statement that Zip10 is not expressed in the oocyte nuclei (line 252). Furthermore, in that study, ZIP10 was detected in the nuclear/nucleolar positions of oocytes of all follicular stages (Chen et al., 2023), which we did not observe. This is not supported by Figure 1, where some Zip10 signal is apparent in the primordial, primary, and secondary follicle oocytes. This statement should be corrected.

      (2) Based on the FluoZin-3AM data, there appears to be less labile zinc in the Zip10d/d oocyte, eggs, and embryos; however, FluoZin-3AM has a number of well-known artifacts and does not accurately capture the localization of labile zinc pools. The patterns do not correspond to the well-documented zinc-containing cortical vesicles. Another zinc probe, such as ZinPyr-4 or ZincBY-1 should be used to visualize the zinc vesicles and confirm that there is less labile zinc in these locations as well.

      (3) Line 268 The results indicate that ZIP10 is mostly responsible for the uptake of zinc ions in mouse oocytes. The situation seems a bit more complicated given that the differences in labile zinc content between oocytes from the WT and Zip10d/d animals are small (only 20-30 %) and that the zinc spark is diminished but still apparent at a low level in the Zip10d/d oocytes. Clearly, other factors are involved in zinc uptake at these stages. A variety of studies have suggested that Zip6 and Zip10 work together, perhaps even functioning as a heterodimer in some systems. The double KO would address this more clearly, but if it is not available, it might be more prudent to state that Zip10 plays some role in uptake of zinc in mouse oocytes while the role of Zip6 remains uncertain.

      (4) Zip6d/d oocytes did not have changes in labile zinc, nor did the lack of Zip6 have an impact on the zinc spark. However, Figure S1 does show a small amount of detectable Zip6 in the western blot. It is possible that this small amount could compensate for the complete lack of Zip6. Can ZIP6 be found in immunofluorescence of GV oocytes or MII eggs from the Zip6d/d animals? Additionally, it is possible that Zip6's role is only supplementary to that of Zip10. The authors should discuss this possibility. It would also be interesting to see if the Zip6/Zip10 double knockout displays greater defects compared to the Zip10 knockout when considering previous studies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      This study is inspired by the scanning movements observed in bees when performing visual recognition tasks. It uses a multilayered network, representing stages of processing in the visual lobes (lamina, medulla, lobula), and uses the lobula output as input to a model of associative learning in the mushroom body (MB). The network is first trained with short "scanning" sequences of natural images, in a non-associative adaptation process, and then several experimental paradigms where images are rewarded or punished are simulated, with the output of the MB able to provide the appropriate discriminative decisions (in some but not all cases). The lobula receptive fields formed by the initial adaptation process show spatiotemporal tuning to edges moving at particular orientations and speeds that are comparable to recorded responses of such neurons in the insect brain.

      There are two main limitations to the study in my view. First, although described (caption fig 1) as a model "inspired by the micromorphology" of the insect brain, implying a significant degree of accuracy and detail, there are many arbitrary features (unsupported by current connectomics). For example, the strongly constrained delay line structure from medulla to­ lobula neurons, and the use of a single MB0N that has input synapses that undergo facilitation and decay according to different neuromodulators. Second, while it is reasonable to explore some arbitrary architectural features, given that not everything is yet known about these pathways, the presented work does not sufficiently assess the necessity and sufficiency of the different components, given the repeated claims that this is the "minimal circuit" required for the visual tasks explored.

      Regarding the mushroom body (MB) learning model, it is strange that no reference is made to recent models closely tied to connectomic and other data in fruit flies, which suggests separate MBONS encode positive vs. negative value; that learning is not dependent on MB0N activity (so is not STDP); that feedback from MBONs to dopaminergic signalling plays an important role, etc. Possibly the MB of the bee operates in a completely different way to the fly, but the presented model relies on relatively old data about MB function, mostly from insects other than bees (e.g. locust) so its relationship to the increasingly comprehensive understanding emerging for the fly MB needs to be clarified. It is implied that the complex interaction of the differential effects of dopamine and octopamine, as modelled here, are required to learn the more complex visual paradigms, but it is not actually tested if simpler rules might suffice. Also, given previous work on models of view recognition in the MB, inspired by bees and ants, it seems plausible that simply using static 25×25 medulla activity as input to produce sparse activity in the KCs would be sufficient for MB0N output to discriminate the patterns used in training, including the face stimulus. Thus it is not clear whether the spatiotemporal input and the lobula encoding are necessary to solve these tasks.

      It is also difficult to interpret the range of results in fig 3. The network sometimes learns well, sometimes just adequately (perhaps comparable to bees), and sometimes fails. The presentation of these results does not seem to identify any coherent pattern underlying success or failure, other than that the ability to generalise seems limited. That is, recognition (in most cases) requires the presentation of exactly the same stimulus in exactly the same way (same scanning pattern, distance and speed). In particular, it is hard to know what to conclude when the network appears able to learn some "complex patterns" (spirals, faces) but fails to learn the apparently simple plus vs. multiplication symbol discrimination if it is trained and tested with a scan passing across the whole pattern instead of just the lower half.

      In summary, although it is certainly interesting to explore how active vision (scanning a visual pattern) might affect the encoding of stimuli and the ability to learn to discriminate rewarding stimuli, some claims in the paper need to be tempered or better supported by the demonstration that alternative, equally plausible, models of the visual and mushroom body circuits are not sufficient to solve the given tasks.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript uses live imaging to study the role of microtubules in the movement of ribeye aggregates in neuromast hair cells in zebrafish. The main findings are that

      (1) Ribeye aggregates, assumed to be ribbon precursors, move in a directed motion toward the active zone;<br /> (2) Disruption of microtubules and kif1aa increases the number of ribeye aggregates and decreases the number of mature synapses.

      The evidence for point 2 is compelling, while the evidence for point 1 is less convincing. In particular, the directed motion conclusion is dependent upon fitting of mean squared displacement that can be prone to error and variance to do stochasticity, which is not accounted for in the analysis. Only a small subset of the aggregates meet this criteria and one wonders whether the focus on this subset misses the bigger picture of what is happening with the majority of spots.

      Strengths:

      (1) The effects of Kif1aa removal and nocodozole on ribbon precursor number and size is convincing and novel.<br /> (2) The live imaging of Ribeye aggregate dynamics provides interesting insight into ribbon formation. The movies showing fusion of ribeye spots are convincing and the demonstrated effects of nocodozole and kif1aa removal on the frequency of these events is novel.<br /> (3) The effect of nocodozole and kif1aa removal on precursor fusion is novel and interesting.<br /> (4) The quality of the data is extremely high and the results are interesting.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) To image ribeye aggregates, the investigators overexpressed Ribeye-a TAGRFP under control of a MyoVI promoter. While it is understandable why they chose to do the experiments this way, expression is not under the same transcriptional regulation as the native protein and some caution is warranted in drawing some conclusions. For example, the reduction in the number of puncta with maturity may partially reflect regulation of the MyoVI promoter with hair cell maturity. Similarly, it is unknown whether overexpression has the potential to saturate binding sites (for example to motors), which could influence mobility. In the revised manuscript, the authors provide evidence to suggest that overexpression is not at unreasonably high levels, which is reasonable. However, I think it remains important to think of these caveats while reading the paper--especially keeping in mind that expression timing is undoubtedly influenced by the transcriptional control of the exogenous promoter .<br /> (2) The examples of punctae colocalizing with microtubules look clear (fig 1 F-G), but the presentation is anecdotal. It would be better and more informative, if quantified.<br /> (3) It appears that any directed transport may be rare. Simply having an alpha >1 is not sufficient to declare movement to be directed (motor driven transport typically has an alpha approaching 2). Due to randomness of a random walk and errors in fits in imperfect data will yield some spread in movement driven by Brownian motion. Many of the tracks in figure 3H look as thought they might be reasonably fit by a straight line (i.e. alpha = 1).<br /> (4) The "directed motion" shown here does not really resemble motor driven transport observed in other systems (axonal transport, for example) even in the subset that have been picked out as examples here. While the role for microtubules and kif1aa in synapse maturation is strong, it seems likely that this role may be something non-canonical (which would be interesting). In the revision, the authors do an excellent job of considering the issues brought up in point 3 and 4. While perhaps no longer a weakness, I am leaving the critiques here for context for the readers to consider. The added taxol results may not completely settle the issue, but are interesting and provide important information.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Chuah et al. reports the experimental results that suggest the occupancy of the HbYX pockets suffices for proteasome gate opening. The authors conducted cryo-EM reconstructions of two mutant archaeal proteasomes. The work is technically sound and may be of special interest in the field of structural biology of the proteasomes.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the work incrementally deepens our understanding of the proteasome activation and expands the structural foundation for therapeutic intervention of proteasome function. The evidence presented appears to be well aligned with the existing literature, which adds confidence in the presentation.

      Weaknesses:

      The paper may benefit from some minor revision by making improvements on the figures and necessary quantitative comparative studies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript offers an important contribution to the field of virology, especially concerning NNV entry mechanisms. The major strength of the study lies in the identification of MmMYL3 as a functional receptor for RGNNV and its role in macropinocytosis, mediated by the IGF1R-Rac1/Cdc42 signaling axis. This represents a significant advance in understanding NNV entry mechanisms beyond previously known receptors such as HSP90ab1 and HSC70. The data, supported by comprehensive in vitro and in vivo experiments, strongly justify the authors' claims about MYL3's role in NNV infection in marine medaka.

      Strengths:

      (1) The identification of MmMYL3 as a functional receptor for RGNNV is a significant contribution to the field. The study fills a crucial gap in understanding the molecular mechanisms governing NNV entry into host cells.

      (2) The work highlights the involvement of IGF1R in macropinocytosis-mediated NNV entry and downstream Rac1/Cdc42 activation, thus providing a thorough mechanistic understanding of NNV internalization process. This could pave the way for further exploration of antiviral targets.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed the concerns from reviewers. This manuscript can be published in the current form.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary

      Tanaka and colleagues addressed the role of the C-C chemokine receptor 4 (CCR4) in early atherosclerotic plaque development using ApoE-deficient mice on a standard chow diet as a model. Because several CD4+ T cell subsets express CCR4, they examined whether CCR4-deficiency alters the immune response mediated by CD4+ T cells. By histological analysis of aortic lesions, they demonstrated that the absence of CCR4 promoted the development of early atherosclerosis, with heightened inflammation linked to increased macrophages and pro-inflammatory CD4+ T cells, along with reduced collagen content. Flow cytometry and mRNA expression analysis for identifying CD4+ T cell subsets showed that CCR4 deficiency promoted higher proliferation of pro-inflammatory effector CD4+ T cells in peripheral lymphoid tissues and accumulation of Th1 cells in the atherosclerotic lesions. Interestingly, the increased pro-inflammatory CD4+ T cell response occurred despite the expansion of T CD4+ Foxp3+ regulatory cells (Tregs), found in higher numbers in lymphoid tissues of CCR4-deficient mice, suggesting that CCR4 deficiency interfered with Treg's regulatory actions. The findings contrast with earlier studies in a murine model of advanced atherosclerosis, where CCR4 deficiency did not alter the development of the aortic lesions. The authors included a thoughtful discussion about hypothetical mechanisms explaining these contrasting results, including putative differences in the role played by the CCL17/CCL22-CCR4 axis along the stages of atherosclerosis development in this murine model.

      Major strengths

      • Demonstration of CCR4 deficiency's impact on early atherosclerosis. CCR4 deficiency effects on the early atherosclerosis development in the Apoe-/-mice model were demonstrated by a quantitative analysis of the lesion area, inflammatory cell content and the expression profile of several pro- and anti-inflammatory markers.<br /> • Analysis of the T CD4+ response in various lymphoid tissues (peripheral and para-aortic lymph nodes and spleen) and the atherosclerotic aorta during the early phase of atherosclerosis in the Apoe-/-mice model. This analysis, combining flow cytometry and mRNA expression, showed that CCR4 deficiency enhanced T CD4+ cell activation, favouring the amplification of the typical biased Th1-mediated inflammatory response observed in the lymphoid tissues of hypercholesterolemic mice.<br /> • Treg transference experiments. Transference of Treg from Apoe-/- or Ccr4-/- Apoe-/- mice to Apoe-/- mice under a standard chow diet was useful for addressing the relevance of CCR4 expression on Tregs for the atheroprotective effect of this regulatory T cell subset during early atherosclerosis.

      Major weaknesses

      • Methodological Limitations: The controls used in the flow cytometry analysis were suboptimal, as neither cell viability nor doublets were assessed. This may have introduced artifacts, particularly when measuring less-represented cell populations within complex samples, such as in assays evaluating Treg migration to the aorta in atherosclerotic mice.<br /> • Incomplete understanding of CCR4-Mediated Mechanisms: The mechanisms by which CCR4 regulates early inflammation and the development of atherosclerosis were not fully clarified.

      I have previously addressed the study limitations and their global impact in my earlier reviews.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study presents an important finding to the field interested in recurrent processing and the role of NMDA-receptors herein. The evidence for improved decoding under memantine is convincing, while some open questions remain to be followed up in future studies (the lack of a behavioural effect, why is decoding improved rather than decreased?). It is an excellent example of how an unexpected finding can generate novel research ideas to the mechanisms underlying recurrent processing, suggesting that the answer lies in the differences in the effects of ketamine and memantine, rather than their commonalities.

      I would like to thank the authors for the great care they have taken in addressing my concerns. I think the revised manuscript is significantly easier to follow now that specific hypothesis have been formulated in the introduction, and the direction of the results is explicitly stated throughout the manuscript. I further appreciate the dampening of some of the claims that are not completely supported by the appropriate interactions.

      I think the resulting manuscript is an incredibly exciting contribution to our understanding of NMDA-receptor function, and a great example of how an unexpected finding can raise questions that could potentially drive the field forward. It shows how NMDA's role in recurrent processing is much more complicate than previously assumed, and reveals that it is not the commonalities between memantine and ketamine that are important in understanding recurrent processing, but rather the differences. I look forward to future studies that will target these differences.

      Overall great job.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Cell cycle control during nitrogen-fixing symbiosis is an important topic, but our understanding of the process is poor and lacks resolution, as the nodule is a complex organ with many cell types that undergo profound changes. The authors aim to define the cell cycle state of individual plant cells in the emerging nodule primordium, as a transcellular infection thread passes through the meristem to reach cells deep in the incipient nodule and releases bacteria to form symbiosomes. The authors used a number of cell cycle reporters, such as different Histone 3 variants and cyclins, to follow cell cycle progress in exquisite detail. They showed that the host cells in the path of an infection thread exhibit a cell fate distinct from their immediate neighbors: after entering the S phase similar to their neighbors, these cells exit the cell cycle and enter a special differentiated state. This is likely an important shift that allows the proper passage of the infection thread. Although definitive proof needs more investigation, they showed that a pioneering transcription factor, NF-YA1, likely represses these endoreduplicated cells from completing the cell cycle.

  2. May 2025
    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Arabanian and colleagues presents studies showing how inhibition of mitochondrial transcription and replication with a novel inhibitor of the mitochondrial polymerase, IMT, can promote AML cell death in combination with the Bcl2 inhibitor venetoclax. They further show that this combinatorial efficacy is evident in vivo in both the AML cell line MV411 and in a PDX model. Given the multiple studies showing the importance of Oxphos in maintaining AML cell survival, the current studies provide an additional strategy to inhibit Oxphos and thus improve the therapeutic management of AML.

      Strengths:

      A novel aspect of this work is that IMT is a new class of mitochondrial inhibitor that acts through inhibiting the mitochondrial polymerase. In addition, the demonstration of therapeutic efficacy both in vitro and in vivo (including with PDX), together with some data showing minimal toxicity, adds to the impact of this work. Their overall conclusion that IMT increases the potency of Vex in treating AMLs is supported.

      Comments on revisions:

      In all, the authors responded to most of the critiques, while two of the major critiques were not experimentally addressed. The work will still have potential impact, but will depend on further studies under more clinically relevant conditions and with a better understanding of drug effects.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study aims to elucidate the role of fibroblasts in regulating myocardium and vascular development through signaling to cardiomyocytes and endothelial cells. This focus is significant, given that fibroblasts, cardiomyocytes, and vascular endothelial cells are the three primary cell types in the heart. The authors employed a Pdgfra-CreER-controlled diphtheria toxin A (DTA) system to ablate fibroblasts at various embryonic and postnatal stages, characterizing the resulting cardiac defects, particularly in myocardium and vasculature development. Single-cell RNA sequencing (scRNA-seq) analysis of the ablated hearts identified collagen as a crucial signaling molecule from fibroblasts that influences the development of cardiomyocytes and vascular endothelial cells.

      This is an interesting manuscript; however, there are several major issues, including an over-reliance on the scRNA-seq data, which shows inconsistencies between replicates.

      Some of the major issues are described below.

      (1) The CD31 immunostaining data (Figure 3B-G) indicate a reduction in endothelial cell numbers following fibroblast deletion using PdgfraCreER+/-; RosaDTA+/- mice. However, the scRNA-seq data show no percentage change in the endothelial cell population (Figure 4D). Furthermore, while the percentage of Vas_ECs decreased in ablated samples at E16.5, the results at E18.5 were inconsistent, showing an increase in one replicate and a decrease in another, raising concerns about the reliability of the RNA-seq findings.

      (2) Similarly, while the percentage of Ven_CMs increased at E18.5, it exhibited differing trends at E16.5 (Fig. 4E), further highlighting the inconsistency of the scRNA-seq analysis with the other data.

      (3) Furthermore, the authors noted that the ablated samples had slightly higher percentages of cardiomyocytes in the G1 phase compared to controls (Fig. 4H, S11D), which aligns with the enrichment of pathways related to heart development, sarcomere organization, heart tube morphogenesis, and cell proliferation. However, it is unclear how this correlates with heart development, given that the hearts of ablated mice are significantly smaller than those of controls (Figure 3E). Additionally, the heart sections from ablated samples used for CD31/DAPI staining in Figure 3F appear much larger than those of the controls, raising further inconsistencies in the manuscript.

      (4) The manuscript relies heavily on the scRNA-seq dataset, which shows inconsistencies between the two replicates. Furthermore, the morphological and histological analyses do not align with the scRNA-seq findings.

      (5) There is a lack of mechanistic insight into how collagen, as a key signaling molecule from fibroblasts, affects the development of cardiomyocytes and vascular endothelial cells.

      (6) In Figure 1B, Col1a1 expression is observed in the epicardial cells (Figure 1A, E11.5), but this is not represented in the accompanying cartoon.

      (7) Do the PdgfraCreER+/-; RosaDTA+/- mice survive after birth when induced at E15.5, and do they exhibit any cardiac defects?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work highlights a novel role for platelet-derived growth factor (PDGF) in mitigating cellular senescence associated with age-related and painful intervertebral disc degeneration. Prior literature has demonstrated the importance of accumulation of senescent cells in mediating many of the pathological effects associated with the degenerate disc joint, such as inflammation and tissue breakdown. In this study the authors treat clinically relevant human nucleus pulposus and annulus fibrosus cells from patients undergoing discectomy with recombinant PDGF-AB/BB for 5 days and then deep phenotyped the outcomes using bulk RNA sequencing. In addition they irradiated healthy human disc cells which they subsequently treated with PDGF-AB/BB examining the expression of SASP-related markers and also PDGFRA receptor gene expression. Overall PDGF was able to down-regulate many senescent associated pathways and the degenerate phenotype in IVD cells. Altered pathways were associated with neurogenesis, mechanical stimuli, metabolism, cell cycle, reactive oxygen species and mitochondrial dysfunction. Overall the authors achieved their aims and the results by and large support their conclusions although improvements could be made to enhance the rigor of the study and findings

      Strengths:

      A major strength of this study is the use of human cells from patients undergoing discectomy for disc herniation as well as access to healthy human cells. Investigating the role of PDGF regarding cellular senescence in the degenerate disc joint is novel and an underexplored area of research which is a significant contribution to the field of spine. This study highlights a potential target for addressing cellular senescence where most of the prior focus has been on senolytic drugs. Such studies have broad implications to other age-related diseases where senescence plays a major role. The use of transcriptomics and therefore an unbiased approach to investigating the role of PDGF is also considered a strength as is the follow-up studies involving irradiating healthy human disc cells and treating these cells with PDGF. The combined assessment of both nucleus pulposus and annulus fibrosus cells in the context of these studies adds to the impact.

      Weaknesses:

      A weakness of these studies relates to qualitative data presented for the B-galactosidase assay. Quantification of such data sets would greatly strengthen the studies and lend further support to the hypotheses. The study in its current form could be strengthened by the inclusion of mechanistic studies probing the downstream PDGF receptor associated pathways for example specifically targeting or modulating the activity of the PDGF receptor PDGFRA.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their manuscript, Zhao et al. describe a link between JAK-STAT pathway activation in nephrocytes upon a high-fat diet. Nephrocytes are the homologs to mammalian podocytes, and it has been previously shown that metabolic syndrome and obesity is associated with worse outcomes for chronic kidney disease. A study from 2021 (Lubojemska et al.) could already confirm a severe nephrocyte phenotype upon feeding Drosophila a high fat diet and also linking lipid overflow by expressing adipose triglyceride lipase in the fat body to nephrocyte dysfunction. In this study, the authors identified a second pathway and mechanism, how lipid dysregulation impact on nephrocyte function. In detail, they show an activation of JAK-STAT signaling in nephrocytes upon feeding a high-fat diet, which was induced by Upd2 expression (a leptin-like hormone) in the fat body, the adipose tissue in Drosophila. Further, they could show genetic and pharmacological interventions can reduce JAK-STAT activation and thereby prevent the nephrocyte phenotype in the high-fat diet model.

      Strengths:

      The strength of this study is the combination of genetic tools and pharmacological intervention to confirm a mechanistic link between the fat body/adipose tissue and nephrocytes. Inter-organ communication is crucial in the development of several diseases, but the underlying mechanisms are only poorly understood. Using Drosophila, it is possible to investigate several players of one pathway, here JAK-STAT. This was done, by investigating the functional role of Hop, Socs36E and Stat92E in nephrocytes and has also been combined with feeding a high-fat diet, to assess restoration of nephrocyte morphology and function by inhibiting JAK-STAT signaling. Adding a translational approach was done by inhibiting JAK-STAT signaling with methotrexate, which also resulted in attenuated nephrocyte dysfunction. Expression of the leptin-like hormone upd2 in the fat body is a good approach to study inter-organ communication and the impact of other organs/tissue on nephrocyte function and expands their findings from nephrocyte function towards whole animal physiology.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the general findings of this study are of great interest, the number of flies investigated for the majority of the experiments is very low (6 flies). Also it is not clear whether the 6 flies used are from independent experiments to exclude differences in food/diet.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors combined time-lapse microscopy with biophysical modeling to study the mechanisms and timescales of gliding and reversals in filamentous cyanobacterium Fluctiforma draycotensis. They observed the highly coordinated behavior of protein complexes moving in a helical fashion on cells' surfaces and along individual filaments as well as their de-coordination, which induces buckling in long filaments.

      Strengths:

      The authors provided concrete experimental evidence of cellular coordination and de-coordination of motility between cells along individual filaments. The evidence is comprised of individual trajectories of filaments that glide and reverse on surfaces as well as the helical trajectories of membrane-bound protein complexes that move on individual filaments and are implicated in generating propulsive forces.

      Limitations:

      The biophysical model is one-dimensional and thus does not capture the buckling observed in long filaments. I expect that the buckling contains useful information since it reflects the competition between bending rigidity, the speed at which cell synchronization occurs, and the strength of the propulsion forces.

      Future directions:

      The study highlights the need to identify molecular and mechanical signaling pathways of cellular coordination. In analogy to the many works on the mechanisms and functions of multi-ciliary coordination, elucidating coordination in cyanobacteria may reveal a variety of dynamic strategies in different filamentous cyanobacteria.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study explores how signals from all sides of a developing limb, front/back and top/bottom, work together to guide the regrowth of a fully patterned limb in axolotls, a type of salamander known for its impressive ability to regenerate limbs. Using a model called the Accessory Limb Model (ALM), the researchers created early limb regenerates (called blastemas) with cells from different sides of the limb. They discovered that successful limb regrowth only happens when the blastema contains cells from both the top (dorsal) and bottom (ventral) of the limb. They also found that a key gene involved in front/back limb patterning, called Shh (Sonic hedgehog), is only turned on when cells from both the dorsal and ventral sides come into contact. The study identified two important molecules, Wnt10B and FGF2, that help activate Shh when dorsal and ventral cells interact. Finally, the authors propose a new model that explains how cells from all four sides of a limb, dorsal, ventral, anterior (front), and posterior (back), contribute at both the cellular and molecular level to rebuilding a properly structured limb during regeneration.

      Strengths:

      The techniques used in this study, like delicate surgeries, tissue grafting, and implanting tiny beads soaked with growth factors, are extremely difficult, and only a few research groups in the world can do them successfully. These methods are essential for answering important questions about how animals like axolotls regenerate limbs with the correct structure and orientation. To understand how cells from different sides of the limb communicate during regeneration, the researchers used a technique called in situ hybridization, which lets them see where specific genes are active in the developing limb. They clearly showed that the gene Shh, which helps pattern the front and back of the limb, only turns on when cells from both the top (dorsal) and bottom (ventral) sides are present and interacting. The team also took a broad, unbiased approach to figure out which signaling molecules are unique to dorsal and ventral limb cells. They tested these molecules individually and discovered which could substitute for actual dorsal and ventral cells, providing the same necessary signals for proper limb development. Overall, this study makes a major contribution to our understanding of how complex signals guide limb regeneration, showing how different regions of the limb work together at both the cellular and molecular levels to rebuild a fully patterned structure.

      Weaknesses:

      Because the expressional analyses are performed on thin sections of regenerating tissue, they provide only a limited view of the gene expression patterns in their experiments, opening the possibility that they could be missing some expression in other regions of the blastema. Additionally, the quantification method of the expressional phenotypes in most of the experiments does not appear to be based on a rigorous methodology. Therefore, performing alternate expressional analysis, using RNA-seq or qRT-PCR (for example) on the entire blastema would help validate that the authors are not missing something.

      Overall, the number of replicates per sample group is quite low (sometimes as low as 3), which is especially risky with challenging techniques like the ones the authors employ. The authors don't appear to have performed a power analysis to calculate the number of animals used in each experiment that are sufficient to identify possible statistical differences between groups. Increasing the sample sizes would substantially increase the rigor of their experiments.

      Likewise, the authors' use of an AI-generated algorithm to quantify symmetry on the dorsal/ventral axis, and this approach doesn't appear to account for possible biases due to tissue sectioning angles. They also appear to arbitrarily pick locations in each sample group to compare symmetry measurements. There are other methods, which include using specific muscle groups and nerve bundles as dorsal/ventral landmarks, that would more clearly show differences in symmetry.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The work presented in the manuscript by Tran et al deals with bacterial evolution in the presence of bacteriophage. Here, authors have taken three methicillin-resistant S. aureus strains that are also resistant to beta-lactams. Eventually, upon being exposed to phage, these strains develop beta-lactam sensitivity. Besides this, the strains also show other changes in their phenotype such as reduced binding to fibrinogen and hemolysis.

      Strengths:

      The experiments carried out are convincing to suggest such in vitro development of sensitivity to the antibiotics. Authors were also able to "evolve" phage in similar fashion thus showing enhanced virulence against the bacterium. In the end, authors carry out DNA sequencing of both evolved bacteria and phage and show mutations occurring in various genes. Overall, the experiments that have been carried out are convincing.

      Weaknesses:

      None. In the current version of the manuscript, I find the study complete.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The work presented in the manuscript by Tran et al deals with bacterial evolution in the presence of bacteriophage. Here, the authors have taken three methicillin-resistant S. aureus strains that are also resistant to beta-lactams. Eventually, upon being exposed to phage, these strains develop beta-lactam sensitivity. Besides this, the strains also show other changes in their phenotype such as reduced binding to fibrinogen and hemolysis.

      Strengths:

      The experiments carried out are convincing to suggest such in vitro development of sensitivity to the antibiotics. Authors were also able to "evolve" phage in a similar fashion thus showing enhanced virulence against the bacterium. In the end, authors carry out DNA sequencing of both evolved bacteria and phage and show mutations occurring in various genes. Overall, the experiments that have been carried out are convincing.

      Weaknesses:

      Although more experiments are not needed, additional experiments could add more information. For example, the phage gene showing the HTH motif could be reintroduced in the bacterial genome and such a strain can then be assayed with wildtype phage infection to see enhanced virulence as suggested. At least one such experiment proves the discoveries regarding the identification of mutations and their outcome. Secondly, I also feel that authors looked for beta-lactam sensitivity and they found it. I am sure that if they look for rifampicin resistance in these strains, they will find that too. In this case, I cannot say that the evolution was directed to beta-lactam sensitivity; this is perhaps just one trait that was observed. This is the only weakness I find in the work. Nevertheless, I find the experiments convincing enough; more experiments only add value to the work.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary

      This work investigated the immune response in the murine retina after focal laser lesions. These lesions are made with close to 2 orders of magnitude lower laser power than the more prevalent choroidal neovascularization model of laser ablation. Histology and OCT together show that the laser insult is localized to the photoreceptors and spares the inner retina, the vasculature and the pigment epithelium. As early as 1-day after injury, a loss of cell bodies in the outer nuclear layer is observed. This is accompanied by strong microglial proliferation to the site of injury in the outer retina where microglia do not typically reside. The injury did not seem to result in the extravasation of neutrophils from the capillary network, constituting one of the main findings of the paper. The demonstrated paradigm of studying the immune response and potentially retinal remodeling in the future in vivo is valuable and would appeal to a broad audience in visual neuroscience.

      Strengths

      Adaptive optics imaging of murine retina is cutting edge and enables non-destructive visualization of fluorescently labeled cells in the milieu of retinal injury. As may be obvious, this in vivo approach is a benefit for studying fast and dynamic immune processes on a local time scale - minutes and hours, and also for the longer days-to-months follow-up of retinal remodeling as demonstrated in the article. In certain cases, the in vivo findings are corroborated with histology.

      The analysis is sound and accompanied by stunning video and static imagery. A few different sets of mouse models are used: a) two different mouse lines, each with a fluorescent tag for neutrophils and microglia, b) two different models of inflammation - endotoxin-induced uveitis (EAU) and laser ablation are used to study differences in the immune interaction.

      One of the major advances in this article is the development of the laser ablation model for 'mild' retinal damage as an alternative to the more severe neovascularization models. This model would potentially allow for controlling the size, depth and severity of the laser injury opening interesting avenues for future study.

      The time-course, 2D and 3D spatial activation pattern of microglial activation are striking and provide an unprecedented view of the retinal response to mild injury.

      Editor's note: The authors have addressed all the previous concerns raised by the reviewers.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This revised study is an investigation of galanin and galanin receptor signaling on whole-brain activity in the context of recurrent seizure activity or under homeostatic basal conditions. The authors primarily use calcium imaging to observe whole-brain neuronal activity accompanied by galanin qPCR to determine how manipulations of galanin or the galr1a receptor affect the activity of the whole-brain under non-ictal conditions or when seizure activity occurs. The authors use their eaat2a-/- model (introduced in their Glia 2022 paper, PMID 34716961) that shows recurrent seizure activity as well as suppression of neuronal activity and locomotion interictally. It is compared to the well-known pentylenetetrazole (PTZ) pharmacological model of seizures in zebrafish. Given the literature cited in their Introduction, the authors hypothesize that galanin will exert a net inhibitory effect on brain activity in models of seizures/epilepsy. They were surprised to find that this hypothesis was only moderately supported in their eaat2a-/- model. In contrast, after PTZ, fish with galanin overexpression showed increased seizure number and reduced duration while fish with galanin KO showed reduced seizure number and increased duration.

      Previous concerns about sex or developmental biological variables were addressed, as their model's seizure phenotype emerges rapidly and long prior to the establishment of zebrafish sexual maturity. However, in the course of re-review, some additional concerns (below) were detected that, if addressed, could further improve the manuscript. These concerns relate to how seizures were defined from the measurement of fluorescent calcium imaging data. Overall, this study is important and convincing, and carries clear value for understanding the multifaceted functions that neuronal galanin can perform under homeostatic and disease conditions.

      Additional Concerns:

      - The authors have validated their ability to measure behavioral seizures quantitatively in their 2022 Glia paper but the information provided on defining behavioral seizures was limited. The definition of behavioral seizure activity is not expanded upon in this paper, but could provide detail about how the behavioral seizures relate to a seizure detected via calcium imaging.

      - Related to the previous point, for the calcium imaging, the difference between an increase in fluorescence that the authors think reflects increased neuronal activity and the fluorescence that corresponds to seizures is not very clear. This detail is necessary because exactly when the term "seizure" describes a degree of increased activity can be difficult to distinguish objectively.

      - The supplementary movies that were added were very useful, but raised some questions. For example, what brain regions were pulsating? What areas seemed to constantly exhibit strong fluorescence and was this an artifact? It seemed that sometimes there was background fluorescence in the body. Perhaps an anatomical diagram could be provided for the readers. In addition, there were some movies with much greater fluorescence changes - are these the seizures? These are some reasons for our request for clarified definitions of the term "seizure".

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Shengsheng Zhao et al. investigated the role of nucleolar and coiled-body phosphoprotein 1 (NOLC1) in relegating gastric cancer (GC) development and cisplatin-induced drug resistance in GC. They found a significant correlation between high NOLC1 expression and the poor prognosis of GC. Meanwhile, upregulation of NOLC1 was associated with cis-resistant GC. Experimentally, the authors demonstrate that knocking down NOLC1 increased GC sensitivity to Cis possibly by regulating ferroptosis. Mechanistically, they found NOLC1 suppressed ferroptosis by blocking the translocation of P53 from the cytoplasm to the nucleus and promoting its degradation. In addition, the authors also evaluated the effect of combinational treatment of anti-PD-1 and cisplatin in NOLC1 -knockdown tumor cells, revealing a potential role of NOLC1 in the targeted therapy for GC.

      Strengths:

      Chemoresistance is considered a major reason causing failure of tumor treatment and death of cancer patients. This paper explored the role of NOLC1 in the regulation of Cis-mediated resistance, which involves a regulated cell death named ferroptosis. These findings provide more evidence highlighting the study of regulated cell death to overcome drug resistance in cancer treatment, which could give us more potential strategies or targets for combating cancer.

      Weaknesses:

      More evidence supporting the regulation of ferroptosis induced by Cisplatin by NOLC1 should be added. Particularly, the role of ferroptosis in the cisplatin-resistance should be verified and whether NOLC1 regulates ferroptosis induced by additional FINs should be explored. Besides, the experiments to verify the regulation of ferroptosis sensitivity by NOLC1 are sort of superficial. The role of MDM2/p53 in ferroptosis or cisplatin resistance mediated by NOLC1 should be further studied by genetic manipulation of p53, which is the key evidence to confirm its contribution to NOLC1 regulation of GC and relative cell death.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors identified and characterized a regulatory mechanism based on transcriptional anti-termination that connects the two gene clusters, capsid and run-off replication (ROR) locus, of the bipartite Bartonella gene transfer agent (GTA). Among genes essential for GTA functionality identified in a previous transposon sequencing project, they found a potential antiterminatior of phage origin within the ROR locus. They employed fluorescence reporter and gene transfer assays of overexpression and knockout strains in combination with ChiPSeq and promoter-fusions to convincingly show that this protein indeed acts as an antiterminator counteracting attenuation of the capsid gene cluster expression.

      Impact on the field:

      The results provide valuable insights into the evolution of the chimeric BaGTA, a unique example of phage co-domestication by bacteria. A similar system found in the other broadly studied Rhodobacterales/Caulobacterales GTA family suggests that antitermination could be a general mechanism for GTA control.

      Strengths:

      Results of the selected and carefully designed experiments support the main conclusions.

      Weaknesses:

      The question why overexpression of the antiterminator does not increase the gene tranfer frequency needs to be answered in further studies.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors further improved the already strong manuscript. All my concerns have been addressed. The addition of a summry figure helps to understand the proposed mechanism.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      First, I would like to thank the authors for the response. I acknowledge that the authors show in previous studies that Rab3A acts from the presynaptic side at the NMJ, and that is, as the authors indicate, their impetus for the current study. However, mechanisms observed at a completely different type of synapses cannot be used as an argument for conclusions here. The authors also acknowledge that they should restrict their conclusions to the data in the current study, and they are merely proposing interpretations. Then perhaps they should restrict these interpretations to the discussion rather than make this claim in the abstract (lines 44-47). Here the authors ask whether Rab3A is involved in the homeostatic increase of postsynaptic AMPARs, am I understanding it correctly that their conclusion for this question is "increase in AMPAR levels in WT cultures is more variable than those in mEPSCs so that it is impossible to determine if Rab3A is involved at all"? If so, then this question has not been answered and should not be regarded as one of the main conclusions with the data presented here. It also remains unclear to me how this piece of inconclusive data serves the main objective of the study.

      The authors state at the end that the current study is just an extension of their previous work, and therefore their interpretations here further support the idea that Rab3A is acting presynaptically. I would argue that it is the conclusive data, rather than interpretations that lack concrete evidence, that support ideas and models. I think that we would all agree that immunostaining measurements can be very variable. However, if the authors are determined to use this approach to answer one of their major questions, then perhaps one way to significantly strengthen their conclusions is to find ways to somewhat overcome this technical limitation.

      Finally, I thank the authors for addressing other minor concerns of mine.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript employs serial block‐face electron microscopy (SBEM) and cryofixation to obtain high‐resolution, three‐dimensional reconstructions of Drosophila antennal sensilla containing olfactory receptor neurons (ORNs) that detect CO2. This method has been used previously by the same lab in Gonzales et. al, 2021. (https://elifesciences.org/articles/69896), which had provided an exemplary model by integrating high-resolution EM with electrophysiology and cell-type-specific labeling. The previous study ended up correlating morphology with activity for multiple olfactory sensillar types. Compared to the 2021 study, this current manuscript appears somewhat incomplete and lacks integration with activity.

      In fact older studies have also reported two-dimensional TEM images of the putative CO2 neuron in Drosophila (Shanbhag et al., 1999) and in mosquitoes (McIver and Siemicki, 1975; Lu et al, 2007), and in these instances reported that the dendritic architecture of the CO2 neuron was somewhat different (circular and flattened, lamellated) from other olfactory neurons.

      The authors claim that this approach offers an artifact‐minimized ultrastructural dataset compared to earlier. In this study, not only do they confirm this different morphology but also classify it into distinct subtypes (loosely curled, fully curled, split, and mixed). This detailed morphological categorization was not provided in prior studies (e.g., Shanbhag et al., 1999 ). The authors would benefit from providing quantitative thresholds or objective metrics to improve reproducibility and to clarify whether these structural distinctions correlate with distinct functional roles.

      Strengths:

      The study makes a convincing case that ab1C neurons exhibit a unique, flattened dendritic morphology unlike the cylindrical dendrites found in ab1D neurons. This observation extends previous qualitative TEM findings by not only confirming the presence of flattened lamellae in CO₂ neurons but also quantifying key morphometrics such as dendritic length, surface area, and volume, and calculating surface area-to-volume ratios. The enhanced ratios observed in the flattened segments are speculated to be linked to potential advantages in receptor distribution (e.g., Gr21a/Gr63a) and efficient signal propagation.

      Weaknesses:

      While the manuscript offers valuable ultrastructural insights and reveals previously unappreciated heterogeneity among CO₂-sensing neurons, several issues warrant further investigation in addition to the points made above.

      (1) Although this quantitative approach is robust compared to earlier descriptive reports, its impact is somewhat limited by the absence of direct electrophysiological data to confirm that ultrastructural differences translate into altered neuronal function. A direct comparison or discussion of how the present findings align with the functional data obtained from electrophysiology would strengthen the overall argument.

      (2) Clarifying the criteria for dendritic subtype classification with quantitative parameters would enhance reproducibility and interpretability. Moreover, incorporating electrophysiological recordings from ab1C neurons would provide compelling evidence linking structure and function, and mapping key receptor proteins through immunolabeling could directly correlate receptor distribution with the observed morphological diversity.

      (3) Even though Cryofixation is claimed to be superior to chemical fixation for generating fewer artifacts, authors need to confirm independently the variation observed in the CO2 neuron morphologies across populations. All types of fixation in TEMs cause some artifacts, as does serial sectioning. Without understanding the error rates or without independent validation with another method, it is hard to have confidence in the conclusions drawn by the authors of the paper.

      Addressing these concerns and integrating additional experiments would significantly bolster the manuscript's completeness and advancement.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The author of this manuscript aimed to uncover the mechanisms behind miRNA retention within cells. They identified PCBP2 as a crucial factor in this process, revealing a novel role for RNA-binding proteins. Additionally, the study discovered that SYNCRIP is essential for PCBP2's function, demonstrating the cooperative interaction between these two proteins. This research not only sheds light on the intricate dynamics of miRNA retention but also emphasizes the importance of protein interactions in regulating miRNA behavior within cells.

      Strengths:

      This paper makes important progress in understanding how miRNAs are kept inside cells. It identifies PCBP2 as a key player in this process, showing a new role for proteins that bind RNA. The study also finds that SYNCRIP is needed for PCBP2 to work, highlighting how these proteins work together. These discoveries not only improve our knowledge of miRNA behavior but also suggest new ways to develop treatments by controlling miRNA locations to influence cell communication in diseases. The use of liver cell models and thorough experiments ensures the results are reliable and show their potential for RNA-based therapies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors performed a genetic screen using deficiency lines and identified Uev1a as a factor that protects nurse cells from RasG12V-induced cell death. According to a previous study from the same lab, this cell death is caused by aberrant mitotic stress due to CycA upregulation (Zhang et al.). This paper further reveals that Uev1a forms a complex with APC/C to promote proteasome-mediated degradation of CycA.

      In addition to polyploid nurse cells, the authors also examined the effect of RasG12V-overexpression in diploid germline cells, where RasG12V-overexpression triggers active proliferation, not cell death. Uev1a was found to suppress its overgrowth as well.

      Finally, the authors show that the overexpression of the human homologs, UBE2V1 and UBE2V2, suppresses tumor growth in human colorectal cancer xenografts and cell lines. Notably, the expression of these genes correlates with the survival of colorectal cancer patients carrying the Ras mutation.

      Strength:

      This paper presents a significant finding that UBE2V1/2 may serve as a potential therapy for cancers harboring Ras mutations. The authors propose a fascinating mechanism in which Uev1a forms a complex with APC/C to inhibit aberrant cell cycle progression.

      Weakness:

      The quantification of some crucial experiments lacks sufficient clarity.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, Drs. Kercmar, Murko, and Bombek make a series of observations related to the role of AVP in pancreatic islets. They use the pancreatic slice preparation that their group is well known for. The observations on the slide physiology are technically impressive. However, I am not convinced by the conclusions of this manuscript for a number of reasons. At the core of my concern is perhaps that this manuscript appears to be motivated to resolve 'controversies' surrounding the actions of AVP on insulin and glucagon secretion. This manuscript adds more observations, but these do not move the field forward in improving or solidifying our mechanistic understanding of AVP actions on islets. A major claim in this manuscript is the beta cell expression of the V1b Receptor for AVP, but the evidence presented in this paper falls short of supporting this claim. Observations on the activation of calcium in alpha cells via V1b receptor align with prior observations of this effect.

      I have focused my main concerns below. I hope the authors will consider these suggestions carefully - please be assured that they were made with the intent to support the authors and increase the impact of this work.

      Strengths:

      The main strength of this paper is the technical sophistication of the approach and the analysis and representation of the calcium traces from alpha and beta cells.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The introduction is long and summarizes a substantive body of literature on AVP actions on insulin secretion in vivo. There are a number of possible explanations for these observations that do not directly target islet cells. If the goal is to resolve the mechanistic basis of AVP action on alpha and beta cells, the more limited number of papers that describe direct islet effects is more helpful. There are excellent data that indicate that the actions of AVP are mediated via V1bR on alpha cells and that V1bR is a) not expressed by beta cells and b) does not activate beta cell calcium at all at 10 nM - which is the same concentration used in this paper (Figure 4G) for peak alpha cell Ca2+ activation (see https://doi.org/10.1016/j.cmet.2017.03.017; cited as ref 30 in the current manuscript).

      (2) We know from bulk RNAseq data on purified alpha, beta, and delta cells from both the Huising and Gribble groups that there is no expression of V2a. I will point you to the data from the Huising lab website published almost a decade ago (http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.molmet.2016.04.007) - which is publicly available and can be used to generate figures (https://huisinglab.com/data-ghrelin-ucsc/index.html). They indicate the absence of expression of not only AVP2 receptors anywhere in the islet, but also the lack of expression of V1bra, V1brb, and Oxtr in beta cells. Instead of the detailed list of expression of these 4 receptors elsewhere in the body, it would be more directly relevant to set up their pancreatic slice experiments to summarize the known expression in pancreatic islets that is publicly available. It would also have helped ground the efforts that involved the generation of the V1aR agonist and V2R antagonist, which confirm these known AVP/OXT receptor expression patterns.

      (3) Importantly, the lack of V1br from beta cells does not invalidate observations that AVP affects calcium in beta cells, but it does indicate that these effects are mediated a) indirectly, downstream of alpha cell V1br or b) via an unknown off-target mechanism (less likely). The different peak efficacies in Figure 4G would also suggest that they are not mediated by the same receptor.

      (4) The rationale for the use of forskolin across almost all traces is unclear. It is motivated by a desire to 'study the AVP dependence of both alpha and beta cells at the same time'. As best as I can determine, the design choice to conduct all studies under sustained forskolin stimulation is related to the permissive actions of AVP on hormone secretion in response to cAMP-generating stimuli. The permissive actions by AVP that are cited are on hormone secretion, which in many cell types requires activation of both calcium and cAMP signaling. Whether the activation of V1br and subsequent calcium response is permitted by cAMP is unclear. I believe the argument the authors are making here is that the activation of beta cell calcium by AVP is permitted by forskolin. i.e., the cAMP stimulated by it in beta cells. However, the design does not account for the elevation of cAMP in alpha cells and subsequent release of glucagon, particularly upon co-stimulation with AVP, which permits glucagon release by activating a calcium response in alpha cells. This glucagon could then activate beta cells. If resolving the mechanism of action is the goal, often less is more. The activation of Gaq-mediated calcium is not cAMP dependent (although the downstream hormone secretion clearly often is). As was shown, AVP does not activate calcium in beta cells in the absence of cAMP. The experiments in Figures 1, 2, and 4 should have been completed in the absence of cAMP first.

      (5) It is unexpected that epinephrine in Figure 2 does not activate the alpha cell calcium? A recent paper from the same group (Sluga et al) shows robust calcium activation in alpha cells in a similar prep by 1 nM epinephrine, which is similar to the dose used here.

      (6) Figure 8 suggests a pharmacological activation of beta cell V1bR in the low pM range. How do the authors reconcile this comparison with the apparent absence of an effect of AVP stimulation at low pM to low nM doses in beta cells (Figure 4A)? I note that there are changes over time with sustained beta cell stimulation with 8 mM glucose, but these changes are relatively subtle, gradual, and quite likely represent the progression of calcium behaviors that would have occurred under sustained glucose, irrespective of these very low AVP concentrations. I will note that the Kd of the V1bR for AVP is around 1 nM, with tracer displacement starting around 100 pM according to the data in figure 5B, which is hard to reconcile with changes in beta cell calcium by AVP doses that start 10-100-fold lower than this dose at 1 and 10 pM (Figure 8).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Mohanty et al. present a new deep learning method to identify intracellular allosteric modulators of GPCRs. This is an interesting field for e.g. the design of novel small molecule inhibitors of GPCR signalling. A key limitation, as mentioned by the authors, is the limited availability of data. The method presented, Gcoupler, aims to overcome these limitations, as shown by experimental validation of sterols in the inhibition of Ste2p, which has been shown to be relevant molecules in human and rat cardiac hypertrophy models.<br /> They have made their code available for download and installation, which can easily be followed to set up software on a local machine.

      Strengths:

      - Clear GitHub repository

      - Extensive data on yeast systems

      Weaknesses:

      - No assay to directly determine the affinity of the compounds to the protein of interest.

      In conclusion, the authors present an interesting new method to identify allosteric inhibitors of GPCRs, which can easily be employed by research labs. Whilst their efforts to characterize the compounds in yeast cells, in order to confirm their findings, it would be beneficial if the authors show their compounds are active in a simple binding assay.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Tittelmeier et al. investigated the role of sphingolipid (SL) metabolism in the maintenance of endolysosomal vesicle integrity. They find that both impaired SL biosynthesis and degradation in C. elegans, decrease the fluidity of endolysosomal membranes and promote their rupture, while it has little effect on plasma membrane fluidity. Endolysosomal membrane fluidity is also negatively affected in human cells upon knockdown (KD) of a gene (SPHK2) involved in the SL degradation pathway. Aggregated forms of tau in both models (C. elegans and human cells) can also cause rigidification of the endolysosomal membrane, with SL homeostasis disruption having an additive effect, exacerbating endolysosomal rupture. Notably, KD of SPHK2 also increased the formation of tau foci, suggesting that compromised endolysosomal integrity may promote tau aggregation. These data provide a clearer understanding of how genetic manipulation of SL metabolism affects endolysosomal membranes and their rigidification in the context of tau aggregation. Supplementation of polyunsaturated fatty acids (PUFAs), which has a beneficial effect on Alzheimer's patients, improved membrane fluidity and reduced tau propagation in human cells and tau-associated neurotoxicity in C. elegans, suggesting a possible mechanism of action.

      Overall, the conclusions of this paper are supported by the data, with a few aspects requiring further clarification and elaboration.

      (1) A reference to Figure S2E-G, which shows that KD of SL biosynthesis genes do not affect the plasma membrane, is missing from the main text.

      (2) In Figure 3C, lipofectamine alone shows that it increases membrane rigidity (increased GP values), not membrane fluidity.

      (3) In Figure 3F, the EV cntl condition expressing F3:mCh tau should have increased LGALS3 foci compared to the mCh EV cntl according to Ref (20) and its Figure 2G (at least for Day 5 animals), which would be indicative of the tau spreading in hypodermal tissue. What C. elegans age was examined in Figure 3F? Can the authors provide evidence of the transmission of the F3:mCh tau from the touch receptor neurons to the hypodermis in the EV [similar to Figure 2C & D from Ref (20)] and compare it to the KDs? Otherwise, it seems that KD of SL genes impacts not only endolysosomal rupture but significantly affects tau accumulation/spreading as well (e.g., shown later in HEK cells, where SPHK2 KD increases the formation of tau-Venus foci).

      (4) Sphingolipids are essential membrane components and signaling molecules. Does KD of SL genes in C. elegans and the subsequent endolysosomal rupture cause any major, intermediate, or minor defects/phenotypes (in non-aggregation prone models, w/t..)?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The manuscript entitled "Structure of an oxygen-induced tubular nanocompartment in Pyrococcus furiosus" by Wenfei Song et al. employs whole-cell mass spectrometry and cryo-EM (including tomography, helical reconstruction, and single-particle analysis) to investigate the structure and function of the oxidoreductase Rubrerythrin (Rbr) from Pyrococcus furiosus. The study reports that under oxidative stress, Rbr forms a tubular structure, in contrast to its behaviour under anaerobic conditions. Authors characterized oxidoreductase Rubrerythrin (Rbr) from Pyrococcus furiosus under anaerobic conditions and formed a tubular structure when induced with oxidative stress. This study is well-designed. However, I have several questions related to the experimental design and the results obtained from those experiments, which are listed below.

      (1) The authors have mentioned that "Under aerobic conditions, Rbr levels are 3 to 13 times higher compared to anaerobic conditions (Figures 1a-d)." Also, they performed whole-cell mass spec to measure the overexpression of the Rbr enzyme under anaerobic conditions. Thus, from the above statement, I consider the authors' claim that P. furiosus cells were cultured under anaerobic conditions and then exposed to oxidative stress. While cell growth under anaerobic conditions appears perfectly fine, the authors conducted the rest of the experiment under aerobic conditions during mass spectrometry and cryo-EM sample preparation. As a baseline, the author first grew the cells in their preferred anaerobic environment and also imaged the same cells that were exposed to air (aerobic) after anaerobic growth. The cell growth in anaerobic conditions is perfectly fine. But how did authors make sure that during anaerobic conditions, the Rbr enzyme is not expressed or not formed? As a control experiment, authors should demonstrate that during mass spec and cryo-EM sample preparations, cells are not exposed to air or maintained in an anaerobic environment. From anaerobic conditions, whenever cells were selected for spec and cryo-EM, cells were exposed to O2, and definitely controlled cells were not in anaerobic conditions anymore.

      The authors collected P. furiosus wild-type or Rbr knockout cells in an anaerobic hood, but after that, they centrifuged the cells and plunged them using a Vitrobot. Are the instrument, centrifuge, and Vitrobot kept in an anaerobic environment? Recently, a few studies (anaerobic plunge-freezing in cryo-electron microscopy, Cook et al. (2024), Hands-Portman and Bakker (2022) DOI: 10.1039/D2FD00060A ) have mentioned the anaerobic plunge freeze setup for protein sample or cell freezing. I guess the authors did not use that setup. In these circumstances, the cell is already exposed to O2 during centrifugation and Vitrobot freezing. How were the control experiments properly performed in anaerobic conditions? A similar argument is true for Lamella grid preparation, where the enzyme was already exposed to O2, and single-particle grid preparation, where the purified enzyme is already exposed to O2. How were the control experiments properly performed in anaerobic conditions?

      (2) It is important to provide evidence that the overexpressed protein is actually in an anaerobic condition and is later induced with more O2. Also, authors should confirm biochemically that the overexpressed protein in their desired protein "oxidoreductase Rubrerythrin (Rbr)". No biochemical data were provided in this manuscript. During single-particle analysis, the authors had to purify the protein sample and confirm that these were their desired protein samples. No biochemical or biophysical experiments were performed to confirm that the overexpressed protein is the desired protein.

      (3) Figure 3, the atomic model looks different in all four tetramers. However, I have fitted the atomic model into the cryo-EM map, which looks reasonable. However, it will be easier for the reader to evaluate the model if the authors show different orientations of the atomic model, as well as if the authors could show that the atomic model fits the cryo-EM map.

      (4) How did the authors select initial particle sets like 24 lakhs when forming helices and not forming isolated particles?

      (5) The authors proposed a model for electron transfer upon oxidative stress. However, the data is not convincing that VLP is surrounded by Rbr and forms a tube-like structure. Generally, VLP is a sphere-like structure, and Rbr can form a tube-like structure when it interacts with spherical VLP. Rbr will surround VLP, and it will form a Rbr-decorated sphere-like structure.

      (6) It will also be important to comment on the diameter of Oxidative stress-induced tubules (OSITs) and 3D reconstruction and/or helical reconstruction of purified protein samples. The spherical cyan densities within the tube are not very clear. If VLP is surrounded by Rbr (Figure 4), extra Rbr densities will be observed on VLP in the tomogram (in Figure 1). However, in the tomogram, VLP is inside Oxidative stress-induced tubules (OSITs). Figure 1 is a contradicting Figure 4. The authors should explain it properly.

      (7) The authors performed helical reconstruction. Where is the Layer line calculation in helical reconstruction, and how do authors identify helical parameters for reconstruction?

      (8) The authors used an extremely confusing methodology, which was very difficult to follow. The authors performed tomography, helical reconstruction, and single-particle analysis. Why did the authors need 3 different image processing methods to resolve structures that are not clear to me? The authors should also show the proper fitting between the map and the model. In Supplemental Figure 6c, the overall fitting of the subdomain looks ok. However, many peptide chains and side chains are not fitted properly in the EM density map. It will be helpful to show proper side chain fitting. In Supplementary Fig. 6a, the authors binned the data (Bin 8 or Bin 2) but did not mention when they unbinned the data for data processing. Also, the authors implemented C2 symmetry during local refinement. Why do authors suddenly use C2 symmetry expansion?

      Minor Comments:

      (1) The authors should properly show a schematic diagram of the enzyme subdomains. It will help to understand interactions or tetrameric assembly.

      (2) The introduction is poorly written. It will really be helpful for the reader if the authors provide a proper introduction.

      (3) The atomic model did not fit into the cryo-EM, so it was hard to determine the overall fitting.

      (4) 17.1A pixel size? It's surprising.

      (5) It will be better to calculate local resolution and show the map's angular distribution. It is obvious that resolution at the peripheral region will be poorer than core region. Therefore, it will be better to calculate local resolution. Additionally, authors should show the map to model fitting.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript addresses the gap in knowledge related to the cardiac function of the S-denitrosylase SNO-CoA Reductase 2 (SCoR2; product of the Akr1a1 gene). Genetic variants in SCoR2 have been linked to cardiovascular disease, yet their exact role in the heart remains unclear. This paper demonstrates that mice deficient in SCoR2 show significant protection in a myocardial infarction (MI) model. SCoR2 also affected ketolytic energy production, antioxidant levels, and polyol balance through the S-nitrosylation of crucial metabolic regulators.

      Strengths:

      (1) Addresses a well-defined gap in knowledge related to the cardiac role of SNO-CoA Reductase 2. Besides the in-depth case for this specific player, the manuscript sheds more light on the links between S-nitrosylation and metabolic reprogramming in the heart.

      (2) Rigorous proof of requirement through the combination of gene knockout and in vivo myocardial ischemia/reperfusion.

      (3) Identification of precise Cys residue for SNO-modification of BDH1 as SCoR2 target in cardiac ketolysis

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The experiments with BDH1 stability were performed in mutant 293 cells. Was there a difference in BDH1 stability in myocardial tissue or primary cardiomyocytes from SCoR2-null vs -WT mice? The same question extends to PKM2.

      (2) In the absence of tracing experiments, the cross-sectional changes in ketolysis, glycolysis, or polyol intermediates presented in Figures 4 and 5 are suggestive at best. This needs to be stressed while describing and interpreting these results.

      (3) The findings from human samples with ischemic and non-ischemic cardiomyopathy do not seem immediately or linearly in line with each other and with the model proposed from the KO mice. While the correlation holds up in the non-ischemic cardiomyopathy (increased SNO-BDH1, SNO-PKM2 with decreased SCoR2 expression), how do the authors explain the decreased SNO-BDH1 with preserved SCoR2 expression in ischemic cardiomyopathy? This seems counterintuitive as activation of ketolysis is a quite established myocardial response to ischemic stress. It may help the overall message clarity to focus the human data part on only NICM patients.

      (4) This issue is partially linked to point #(3). Currently, important evidence that is lacking is the demonstration of sufficiency for SCoR2 in S-nytrosylation of targets and cardiac remodeling. Does SCoR2 overexpression in the heart or isolated cardiomyocytes reduce S-nitrosylation of BDH1 and other targets, thus affecting heart function at baseline or under stress?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This is an excellent paper. The ability to measure the immune response to multiple viruses in parallel is a major advancement for the field, which will be relevant across pathogens (assuming the assay can be appropriately adapted). I only have a few comments, focused on maximising the information provided by the sera.

      Firstly, one of the major findings is that there is wide heterogeneity in responses across individuals. However, we could expect that individuals' responses should be at least correlated across the viruses considered, especially when individuals are of a similar age. It would be interesting to quantify the correlation in responses as a function of the difference in ages between pairs of individuals. I am also left wondering what the potential drivers of the differences in responses are, with age being presumably key. It would be interesting to explore individual factors associated with responses to specific viruses (beyond simply comparing adults versus children).

      Relatedly, is the phylogenetic distance between pairs of viruses associated with similarity in responses?

      Figure 5C is also a really interesting result. To be able to predict growth rates based on titers in the sera is fascinating. As touched upon in the discussion, I suspect it is really dependent on the representativeness of the sera of the population (so, e.g., if only elderly individuals provided sera, it would be a different result than if only children provided samples). It may be interesting to compare different hypotheses - so e.g., see if a population-weighted titer is even better correlated with fitness - so the contribution from each individual's titer is linked to a number of individuals of that age in the population. Alternatively, maybe only the titers in younger individuals are most relevant to fitness, etc.

      In Figure 6, the authors lump together individuals within 10-year age categories - however, this is potentially throwing away the nuances of what is happening at individual ages, especially for the children, where the measured viruses cross different groups. I realise the numbers are small and the viruses only come from a small numbers of years, however, it may be preferable to order all the individuals by age (y-axis) and the viral responses in ascending order (x-axis) and plot the response as a heatmap. As currently plotted, it is difficult to compare across panels

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Uphoff and colleagues present the results of a study focused on characterizing the binding of SVEP1 to TIE1 along with Angiopoietin-2. Starting with computational prediction of SVEP1 binding to TIE1, the authors identify the region of SVEP1 that serves as a high-affinity ligand for TIE1. Advanced studies identify a weak secondary binding site within SVEP1 that appears to be sufficient but not necessary for its interaction with TIE1 based on in vivo rescue experiments. The most novel contribution of the manuscript seems to be the identification of angiopoietin-1 and -2 as co-factors that seem to enhance the binding of SVEP1 with TIE1 and impact downstream AKT signaling. They propose a complex in which SVEP1 binds to TIE1 and ANG2.

      Although the first set of results is essentially confirmatory, the identification of ANG-2 as a "co-factor" enhancing the binding of SVEP1 to TIE1 and associated downstream signaling (i.e., Figures 3 and 4) is novel and is of interest. However, the manuscript and its conclusions would greatly benefit from some clarifying details and additional experiments to ensure rigor and support specific claims.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In the present study the authors have investigated the effects of mutations on Rep protein ability to package DNA within the gene therapy vector, AAV. A detailed investigation of Rep mutants selected from a library has been probed for their ability to produce active virions. While the concept is interesting the outcome effects are very limited.

      The major issue is the lack of immediate applicability and relevance in the vector production pipeline for AAV. The authors have found that with the synthetic GFP transgene cargo, mutations of the p19 promoter did not lead to enhanced AAV vector packing. Thus the data is quite preliminary and a complete characterization may be necessary to further enhance the translational potential of the approach.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript studies the prey capture by archer fish, which observe the initial values of motion of aerial prey they made fall by spitting on them, and then rapidly turn to reach the ballistic landing point on the water surface. The question raised by the article is whether this incredibly fast decision-making process is hardwired and thus unmodifiable or can be adjusted by experience to follow a new rule, namely that the landing point is deflected from a certain amount from the expected ballistic landing point. The results show that the fish learn the new rule and use it afterwards in a variety of novel situations that include height, side and speed of the prey, and which preserve the speed of the fish's decision. Moreover, a remarkable finding presented in this work is the fact that fish that have learned to use the new rule can relearn to use the ballistic landing point for an object based on its shape (a triangle) while keeping simultaneously the 'deflected rule' for an object differing in shape (a disc); in other words, fish can master simultaneously two decision-making rules based on the different shape of objects.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript relies on a sophisticated and clever experimental design that allows changing the apparent landing point of a virtual prey using a virtual reality system. Several robust controls are provided to demonstrate the reliability and usefulness of the experimental setup.

      Overall, I like very much the idea conveyed by the authors that even stimuli triggering apparently hardwired responses can be relearned in order to be associated to a different response, thus showing the impressive flexibility of circuits that are sometimes considered as mediating pure reflexive responses. This is the case - as an additional example - of the main component of the Nasanov pheromone of bees (geraniol), which triggers immediate reflexive attraction and appetitive responses, and which can, nevertheless, be learned by bees in association with an electric shock so that bees end up exhibiting avoidance and the aversive response of sting extension to this odorant(1), which is a fully unnatural situation, and which shows that associative aversive learning is strong enough to override preprogrammed responding, thus reflecting an impressive behavioral flexibility.

      Weaknesses:

      As a general remark, there is some information that I missed and that are mandatory in the analysis of behavioral changes: one is the variability in the performances displayed. The authors mentioned that the results reported come from 6 fish (which is a low sample size). How were the individual performances in terms of consistency? Were all fish equally good in adjusting/learning the new rule? How did errors vary according to individual identity? It seems to me that this kind of information should be available as the authors reported that individual fish could be recognized and tracked (see lines 620-635) and is essential for appreciating the flexibility of the system under study.

      The other information that I could not find explained in a proper way is referred to the speed of the learning process. Admittedly, fish learn in an impressive way the new rule and even two rules simultaneously; yet, how long did they need to achieve this? In the article, Fig 2 mention that at least 6 training stages (each defined as a block of 60 evaluated turn decisions, which actually shows that the standard term 'Training Block' would be more appropriate) were required for the fish to learn the 'deflected rule'. While this means 360 trials (turning starts), I was left with the question of how long did this process last? How many hours, days, weeks were needed for the fish to learn? And as mentioned above, were al fish equally fast in learning? I would appreciate explaining this very important point because learning dynamics is relevant to understanding the flexibility of the system.

      Comments After Revision:

      There was consensus among reviewers that the authors addressed the initial critiques adequately and that the manuscript improved accordingly. The revision clarified several methodological aspects, and the addition of the new Fig. 2 was particularly helpful. It elucidates the experimental approach used in the study and offers essential context for understanding points that may have been unclear in the previous version.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study advances our understanding of information encoding in the DLPFC and PMD brain regions. The conclusions are supported with convincing and robust analyses conducted on monkey datasets and trained RNN models. However, there are some concerns regarding the interpretation of findings related to the information bottleneck theory and the mapping of brain areas in the RNN simulations.

      The authors' justification regarding mapping between model areas and anatomical areas remains insufficient, in my opinion. However, I recognize that my initial critique may not have been fully clear. The issue I see is this: whichever area is mapped to the first RNN module will trivially exhibit stimulus information, and downstream regions will naturally show a gradual loss of that information if one simply reads out their responses.

      Thus, the observed stimulus loss in later modules could be an inevitable consequence of the model's structure, rather than a meaningful analog to the PFC-PMd transition. This point requires more careful justification or a reevaluation of the proposed mapping.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors have previously shown that the mouse neonatal cerebellum can regenerate damage to granule cell progenitors in the external granular layer, through reprogramming of gliogenic nestin-expressing progenitors (NEPs). The mechanisms of this reprogramming remain largely unknown. Here the authors used scRNAseq and ATACseq of purified neonatal NEPs from P1-P5 and showed that ROS signatures were transiently upregulated in gliogenic NEPs ve neurogenic NEPs 24 hours post injury (P2). To assess the role of ROS, mice transgenic for global catalase activity were assessed to reduce ROS. Inhibition of ROS significantly decreased gliogenic NEP reprogramming and diminished cerebellar growth post-injury. Further, inhibition of microglia across this same time period prevented one of the first steps of repair - the migration of NEPs into the external granule layer. This work is the first demonstration that the tissue microenvironment of the damaged neonatal cerebellum is a major regulator of neonatal cerebellar regeneration. Increased ROS is seen in other CNS damage models, including adults, thus there may be some shared mechanisms across age and regions, although interestingly neonatal cerebellar astrocytes do not upregulate GFAP as seen in adult CNS damage models. Another intriguing finding is that global inhibition of ROS did not alter normal cerebellar development.

      Strengths:

      This paper presents a beautiful example of using single cell data to generate biologically relevant, testable hypotheses of mechanisms driving important biological processes. The scRNAseq and ATACseq analyses are rigorously conducted and conclusive. Data is very clearly presented and easily interpreted supporting the hypothesis next tested by reduce ROS in irradiated brains.

      Analysis of whole tissue and FAC sorted NEPS in transgenic mice where human catalase was globally expressed in mitochondria were rigorously controlled and conclusively show that ROS upregulation was indeed decreased post injury and very clearly the regenerative response was inhibited. The authors are to be commended on the very careful analyses which are very well presented and again, easy to follow with all appropriate data shown to support their conclusions.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors also present data to show that microglia are required for an early step of mobilizing gliogenic NEPs into the damaged EGL. While the data that PLX5622 administration from P0-P5 or even P0-P8 clearly shows that there is an immediate reduction of NEPs mobilized to the damaged EGL, there is no subsequent reduction of cerebellar growth such that by P30, the treated and untreated irradiated cerebella are equivalent in size. There is speculation in the discussion about why this might be the case. Additional experiments and tools are required to assess mechanisms. Regardless, the data still implicate microglia in the neonatal regenerative response, and this finding remains an important advance.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the present work, Zhang et al investigate the involvement of the bacterial DNA damage repair SOS response in the evolution of beta-lactam drug resistance in Escherichia coli. Using a combination of microbiological, bacterial genetics, laboratory evolution, next-generation, and live-cell imaging approaches, the authors propose short-term (transient) drug resistance evolution can take place in RecA-deficient cells in an SOS response-independent manner. They propose the evolvability of drug resistance is alternatively driven by the oxidative stress imposed by accumulation of reactive oxygen species and compromised DNA repair. Overall, this is a nice study that addresses a growing and fundamental global health challenge (antimicrobial resistance).

      Strengths:

      The authors introduce new concepts to antimicrobial resistance evolution mechanisms. They show short-term exposure to beta-lactams can induce durably fixed antimicrobial resistance mutations. They propose this is due to compromised DNA repair and oxidative stress. Antibiotic resistance evolution under transient stress is poorly studied, so the authors' work is a nice mechanistic contribution to this field.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors revisions have significantly addressed weaknesses previously identified earlier in the review process.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Hypothalamic neural circuits that control body weight develop during the lactation period in rodents. Exposure to maternal high-fat diet during this period (MHFD-L) program has lasting effects on their neuroanatomical organization and function. Microglia sense environmental signals and can sculpt developing circuits by promoting or pruning synaptic connections. Here, the authors examine the contribution of microglia to the effects of MHFD-L to reduce projections from AgRP neurons in the ARH to the PVH, a critical node in circuits regulating energy balance. Using detailed histomorphometric analyses of Iba-1+ cells in the three brain regions (ARH, PVH, and BNST) at two time points (P16 and P30), the authors show that microglial volume and complexity increase, while cell numbers decrease across this period. Exposure to MHFD-L is associated with a transient increase in microglial complexity/volume at P16 in the PVH but not in the other brain regions or time points assessed. Depleting microglia using a pharmacological approach reversed effects of MHD-L on AgRP outgrowth and body weight.

      Strengths:

      (1) The Introduction is well-written and provides a good overview of what is known about the roles of microglia in sculpting developing circuits in the hippocampus and cortex. This provides a strong rationale for the current investigations in the hypothalamus.

      (2) High-quality imaging and detailed 3-D reconstructions of Iba-1 staining in microglia are used to perform unbiased analyses of microglial complexity and to quantify the spatial relationship between microglial processes and AgRP terminals.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The central claim of the manuscript is that microglia in the PVH sculpt the density of AgRP inputs to the PVH in a temporally and spatially restricted manner. While the findings of the microglial ablation experiment are consistent with this hypothesis, they do not prove causality, since their manipulations were not limited to the PVH. Further studies are needed to exclude the possibility that increased outgrowth from AgRP neurons results from direct actions in the ARH or indirect consequences of changes in growth rates.

      (2) Impacts of microglial depletion were only assessed in adulthood. Given the hypothesized importance of differences in microglia at P16 and not at P30, it would be helpful to demonstrate that PLX5622 does indeed affect microglia at P16, when the circuit is most sensitive to maternal influences.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      This important study uncovers a novel mechanism for L-leucine uptake by M. tuberculosis and shows that targeting this pathway with 'Semapimod' interferes with bacterial metabolism and virulence. These results identify the leucine uptake pathway as a potential target to design new anti-tubercular therapy.

      Strengths

      The authors took numerous approaches to prove that L-leucine uptake of M. tuberculosis is an important physiological phenomenon and may be effectively targeted by 'Semapimod'. This study utilizes a series of experiments using a broad set of tools to justify how the leucine uptake pathway of M. tuberculosis may be targeted to design new anti-tubercular therapy.

      Weaknesses

      The study does not explain how L-leucine is taken up by M. tuberculosis, leaving the mechanism unclear. Even though 'Semapimod' binds to the PpsB protein, the relevant connection between changes in PDIM and amino acid transport remains incomplete. Also, the fact that the drug does not function on WT bacteria makes it a weak candidate to consider its usefulness for a therapeutic option.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study shows that type I interferon (IFN-I) signaling helps protect against mycobacterial infection. Using human gene expression data and a zebrafish model, the authors find that reduced IFN-I activity is linked to more severe disease. They also show that zebrafish lacking the IFN-I signaling gene stat2 are more vulnerable to infection due to poor macrophage migration. These results suggest a protective role for IFN-I in mycobacterial disease, challenging previous findings from other animal models.

      Strengths:

      Strengths of the manuscript include the use of human clinical samples to support relevance to disease, along with a genetically tractable zebrafish model that enables mechanistic insight.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The manuscript presents intriguing human data showing an inverse correlation between IFN-I gene signatures and TB disease, but the findings remain correlative and may be cohort-specific. Given that the skin is not a primary site of TB and is relatively immunotolerant, the biological relevance of downregulated IFN-I-related genes in this tissue to systemic or pulmonary TB is unclear.

      (2) The reliance on stat2 CRISPants in zebrafish offers a limited view of IFN-I signaling. Including additional crispant lines targeting other key regulators (e.g., ifnar1, tyk2, irf3, irf7) would strengthen the interpretation and clarify whether the observed effects reflect broader IFN-I pathway disruption.

      (3) The conclusion that IFN-I is protective contrasts with established findings from murine and non-human primate models, where IFN-I is often detrimental. While the authors highlight species differences, the lack of functional human data and reliance on M. marinum in zebrafish limit the translational relevance. A more balanced discussion addressing these discrepancies would improve the manuscript.

      (4) Quantification of bacterial burden using fluorescence intensity alone may not accurately reflect bacterial viability. Complementary methods, such as qPCR for bacterial DNA, would provide a more robust assessment of antimicrobial activity.

      (5) Finally, the authors should clarify whether impaired macrophage recruitment in stat2 crispants results from defects in chemotaxis, differentiation, or survival, and address discrepancies between their human blood findings and prior studies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The majority of CD8+ T cell responses rely on the proper presentation of antigens through stable MHC-I (but not requiring a stable immunological synapse). This work highlights a new approach to build an array of stable peptide MHC-I using temperature exchange, which can be used to identify antigen-specific CD8+ T cells.

      Strengths:

      In this work, the authors have proposed an alternative method to reload the peptide MHC-I molecule. Their temperature-exchange approach is distinct from current reloadable peptide MHC technologies involving photolabile peptide, empty MHC-I (Nat Commun 11, 1314 (2020). https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-020-14862-4), tapasin/TAPBPR chaperone-assisted (eLife 7:e40126.), enzyme exchangeable (WO2020226570) and small alcohol (Curr Res Immunol. 2022 Aug 18;3:167-174. doi: 10.1016/j.crimmu.2022.08.002) approaches.

      Weaknesses:

      However, the proposed temperature-exchange approach does not substantially improve the quality of antigen-specific T cells that can be identified using the photolabile peptide MHC-I molecules.

      The time saved using the temperature-exchange protocol may not be a pull factor as the photolabile peptide MHC-I approach is not unreasonably laborious.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the manuscript by Mahen et al., entitled "Gut Microbe-Derived Trimethylamine Shapes Circadian Rhythms Through the Host Receptor TAAR5," the authors investigate the interplay between a host G protein-coupled receptor (TAAR5), the gut microbiota-derived metabolite trimethylamine (TMA), and the host circadian system. Using a combination of genetically engineered mouse and bacterial models, the study demonstrates a link between microbial signaling and circadian regulation, particularly through effects observed in the olfactory system. Overall, this manuscript presents a novel and valuable contribution to our understanding of host-microbe interactions and circadian biology. However, several sections would benefit from improved clarity, organization, and mechanistic depth to fully support the authors' conclusions.

      Strengths:

      (1) The manuscript addresses an important and timely topic in host-microbe communication and circadian biology.

      (2) The studies employ multiple complementary models, e.g., Taar5 knockout mice, microbial mutants, which enhance the depth of the investigation.

      (3) The integration of behavioral, hormonal, microbial, and transcript-level data provides a multifaceted view of the observed phenotype.

      (4) The identification of olfactory-linked circadian changes in the context of gut microbes adds a novel perspective to the field.

      Weaknesses:

      While the manuscript presents compelling data, several weaknesses limit the clarity and strength of the conclusions.

      (1) The presentation of hormonal, cytokine, behavioral, and microbiome data would benefit from clearer organization, more detailed descriptions, and functional grouping to aid interpretation.

      (2) Some transitions-particularly from behavioral to microbiome data-are abrupt and would benefit from better contextual framing.

      (3) The microbial rhythmicity analyses lack detail on methods and visualization, and the sequencing metadata (e.g., sample type, sex, method) are not clearly stated.

      (4) Several figures are difficult to interpret due to dense layouts or vague legends, and key metabolites and gene expression comparisons are either underexplained or not consistently assessed across models.

      (5) Finally, while the authors suggest a causal role for TAAR5 and its ligand in circadian regulation, the current data remain correlative; mechanistic experiments or stronger disclaimers are needed to support these claims.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors meticulously characterized EC-specific Tgfbr1, Tgfbr2, or double knockout in the retina, demonstrating through convincing immunostaining data that loss of TGF-β signaling disrupts retinal angiogenesis and choroidal neovascularization. Compared to other genetic models (Fzd4 KO, Ndp KO, VEGF KO), the Tgfbr1/2 KO retina exhibits the most severe immune cell infiltration. The authors proposed that TGF-β signaling loss triggers vascular inflammation, attracting immune cells - a phenotype specific to CNS vasculature, as non-CNS organs remain unaffected.

      Strengths:

      The immunostaining results presented are clear and robust. The authors performed well-controlled analyses against relevant mouse models. snRNA-seq corroborates immune cell leakage in the retina and vascular inflammation in the brain.

      Weaknesses:

      The causal link between TGF-β loss, vascular inflammation, and immune infiltration remains unresolved. The authors' model posits that EC-specific TGF-β loss directly causes inflammation, which recruits immune cells. However, an alternative explanation is plausible: Tgfbr1/2 KO-induced developmental defects (e.g., leaky vessels) permit immune extravasation, subsequently triggering inflammation. The observations that vein-specific upregulation of ICAM1 staining and the lack of immune infiltration phenotypes in the non-CNS tissues support the alternative model. Late-stage induction of Tgfbr1/2 KO (avoiding developmental confounders) could clarify TGF-β's role in retinal angiogenesis versus anti-inflammation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The current study seeks to understand the neural mechanisms underlying geometric reasoning. Using fMRI with both children and adults, the authors found that contrasting simple geometric shapes with naturalistic images (faces, tools, houses) led to responses in the dorsal visual stream, rather than ventral regions that are generally thought to represent shape properties. The authors followed up on this result using computational modeling and MEG to show that geometric properties explain distinct variance in the neural response beyond what is captured by a CNN.

      Strengths:

      These findings contribute much-needed neural and developmental data to the ongoing debate regarding shape processing in the brain and offer additional insights into why CNNs may have difficulty with shape processing. The motivation and discussion for the study are appropriately measured, and I appreciate the authors' use of multiple populations, neuroimaging modalities, and computational models to explore this question.

      Weaknesses:

      Given that the primary take away from this study is that geometric shape information is found in the dorsal stream, rather than the ventral stream there is very little there is very little discussion of prior work in this area (for reviews, see Freud et al., 2016; Orban, 2011; Xu, 2018). Indeed, there is extensive evidence of shape processing in the dorsal pathway in human adults (Freud, Culham, et al., 2017; Konen & Kastner, 2008; Romei et al., 2011), children (Freud et al., 2019), patients (Freud, Ganel, et al., 2017), and monkeys (Janssen et al., 2008; Sereno & Maunsell, 1998; Van Dromme et al., 2016), as well as the similarity between models and dorsal shape representations (Ayzenberg & Behrmann, 2022; Han & Sereno, 2022).

      The presence of activation in aIPS led the authors to interpret their results to mean that geometric reasoning draws on the same processes as mathematical thinking. However, there is not enough evidence in the current study to support this claim.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Lipid transfer between membranes is essential for lipid biosynthesis across different organelle membranes. Ups1-Mdm35 is one of the best-characterized lipid transfer proteins, responsible for transferring phosphatidic acid (PA) between the mitochondrial outer membrane (OM) and inner membrane (IM), a process critical for cardiolipin (CL) synthesis in the IM. Upon dissociation from Mdm35, Ups1 binds to the intermembrane space (IMS) surface of the OM, extracts a PA molecule, re-associates with Mdm35, and moves through the aqueous IMS to deliver PA to the IM. Here, the authors analyzed the early steps of this PA transfer - membrane binding and PA extraction - using a combination of in vitro biochemical assays with lipid liposomes and purified Ups1-Mdm35 to measure liposome binding, lipid transfer between liposomes, and lipid extraction from liposomes. The authors found that membrane curvature, a previously overlooked property of the membrane, significantly affects PA extraction but not PA insertion into liposomes. These findings were further supported by MD simulations.

      Strengths:

      The experiments are well-designed, and the data are logically interpreted. The present study provides an important basis for understanding the mechanism of lipid transfer between membranes. 

      Weaknesses:

      The physiological relevance of membrane curvature in lipid extraction and transfer still remains open.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study describes the key observation that SATB1 binds directly to so-called BUR elements. This is in contrast to several other reports describing SATB1 binding to promoters and enhancers. This discrepancy is explained by the authors to depend on the features of the ChIP technique being used. Urea-ChIP, innovated by the authors, strips off protein-protein interactions that compound conventional ChIP methods. The authors convincingly make the case that SATB1 and a key genome organiser, CTCF, largely bind different sites, as particularly evident in Figure 2A. In contrast, standard ChIP shows considerable overlap between their sites (Figure 2-figure supplement 1). The report documents convincingly that SATB1 partitions the genome independent of so-called TADs to influence expression patterns. SATB1 controls long-range interactions in thymocytes, and knock down of SATB1 does not affect the TAD patterns.

      Strengths:

      A new and innovative adaptation of ChIP-seq (urea ChIP-seq) has enabled the authors to successfully question existing data on the patterns of SATB1 binding to the genome. The authors provide a wealth of data to reinforce their claims. This report thus rectifies misconceptions about SATB1 function, which is particularly important given its role in metastasising cancer cells.

      Weaknesses:

      None

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors proposed a neural network model to explore the spatial representations of the hippocampal CA1 and entorhinal cortex (EC) and the remapping of these representations when multiple environments are learned. The model consists of a recurrent network and output units (a decoder) mimicking the EC and CA1, respectively. The major results of this study are: the EC network generates cells with their receptive fields tuned to a border of the arena; the decoder develops neuron clusters arranged in a hexagonal lattice. Thus, the model accounts for entrohinal border cells and CA1 place cells. It suggests that the remapping of place cells occurs between different environments through state transitions corresponding to unstable dynamical modes in the recurrent network.

      Strengths:

      The authors found a spatial arrangement of receptive fields similar to their model's prediction in experimental data recorded from CA1. Thus, the model proposes plausible mechanisms to generate hippocampal spatial representations without relying on grid cells. The model also suggests an interesting possibility that path integration is not the speciality of grid cells.

      Weaknesses:

      The role of grid cells in the proposed view, i.e., the boundary-to-place-to-grid model, remains elusive. The model can generate place cells without generating entorhinal grid cells. Moreover, the model can generate hexagonal grid patterns of place cells in a large arena. Whether and how the proposed model is integrated into the entire picture of the hippocampal-entorhinal memory processing remains elusive.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This revised paper describes an investigation of galanin and galanin receptor signaling on whole-brain activity in the context of recurrent seizure activity or under homeostatic basal conditions. The authors primarily use calcium imaging to observe whole-brain neuronal activity accompanied by galanin qPCR to determine how manipulations of galanin or the galr1a receptor affect the activity of the whole-brain under non-ictal conditions or when seizure activity occurs. The authors use their eaat2a-/- model (introduced in their Glia 2022 paper, PMID 34716961) that shows recurrent seizure activity as well as suppression of neuronal activity and locomotion interictally. It is compared to the well-known pentylenetetrazole (PTZ) pharmacological model of seizures in zebrafish. Given the literature cited in their Introduction, the authors hypothesize that galanin will exert a net inhibitory effect on brain activity in models of seizures/epilepsy. They were surprised to find that this hypothesis was only moderately supported in their eaat2a-/- model. In contrast, after PTZ, fish with galanin overexpression showed increased seizure number and reduced duration while fish with galanin KO showed reduced seizure number and increased duration.

      Previous concerns about sex or developmental biological variables were addressed, as their model's seizure phenotype emerges rapidly and long prior to the establishment of zebrafish sexual maturity. However, it remains unclear whether all seizures detected via calcium imaging alone are also seizures that are detectable at the level of animal behavior. To confirm this, a validation of the threshold used for calcium imaging of "neuronal seizures" would be required to determine if this threshold detects only "neuronal seizures" that co-occur with behavioral seizures. Overall, this study is important and convincing, and carries clear value for understanding the multifaceted functions that neuronal galanin can perform under homeostatic and disease conditions.

      Additional Concerns:

      - The authors have validated their ability to measure behavioral seizures quantitatively in their 2022 Glia paper but the information provided on defining behavioral seizures as they map onto seizures detected via imaging alone was limited. The definition of behavioral seizure activity as it relates to calcium fluctuations is not expanded upon in this paper, but could provide detail about how the behavioral seizures relate to a seizure detected via calcium imaging alone.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In their manuscript with the title "Integrated transcriptomic analysis of human induced pluripotent stem cell (iPSC)-derived osteogenic differentiation reveals a regulatory role of KLF16", Ru et al. have analyzed the gene expression changes during the osteogenic differentiation of iPSC-derived mesenchymal stem/stromal cells into preosteoblasts and osteoblasts. As part of the computational analyses, they have investigated the transcription factor regulatory network mediating this differentiation process, which has also led to the identification of the transcription factor KLF16. Overexpression experiments in vitro and the analysis of heterozygous KLF16 knockout mice in vivo indicate that KLF16 is an inhibitor of osteogenic differentiation.

      The integrated analysis of iPSC bulk transcriptomic data is a major strength of the study, and it is also great that the authors provide deeper functional characterization of the transcription factor KLF16, one of the newly identified candidate regulators of osteogenic differentiation.

      However, characterization of KLF16 expression in the mouse and validation of the knockout model are currently lacking. Alternative explanations for the mutant phenotype should be considered to improve the strength of the conclusions.

      If all issues can be addressed, the study would provide an important resource for the field that would facilitate future research on the regulation of osteogenesis in vitro and in vivo, with potential implications for preclinical and clinical research as well as bioengineering.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Krishnan et al devised three paradigms to perform contextual fear conditioning in head-fixed mice. Each of the paradigms relied on head-fixed mice running on a treadmill through virtual reality arenas. The authors tested the validity of three versions of the paradigms by using various parameters. The authors have addressed some of my initial concerns in their revised manuscript.

      Strengths:

      The authors have devised three new contextual fear conditioning paradigms in head-fixed mice. The authors tested a number of parameters towards optimization of this approach.

      Weaknesses:

      While some experimental parameters were tested in the manuscript, it appears that a large amount of additional testing and optimization will be required before reliable behavioral responses can be acquired and ultimately for the paradigm(s) to be useful for answering biological questions. One major factor will be optimizing parameters such that head-fixed mice in this paradigm can (largely) recapitulate what is observed in freely behaving mice. This may be challenging however, as they have previously published one of the three paradigms and the extensive additional testing they did in this current manuscript did not greatly improve the experimental setup. This may indicate limited immediate usefulness for the community as significant work likely remains for optimization.

      Achievement of Aims:

      The authors have put a significant amount of work in testing the paradigms, and as a result, progress has been made towards their usefulness in the field. However, a significant amount of optimization likely exists.

      Impact on the field:

      The development of a reliable paradigm for studying contextual fear in head-fixed animals would be a strong contribution to the field as it would enable sophisticated cell and circuit imaging analyses. This study is a good start towards this goal, but significant optimization is required for the paradigm(s) to fully benefit the field - especially to allow those who may have less experience in these approaches to use it in their own research.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      I appreciate the author's responses to my original review. This is a comprehensive analysis of CAPE on C. difficile activity. It seems like this compound effects all aspects of C. difficile, which could make it effective during infection but also make it difficult to understand the mechanism. Even considering the authors responses, I think it is critical for the authors to work on the conclusions regarding the infection model. There is some protection from disease by CAPE but some parameters are not substantially changed. For instance, weight loss is not significantly different in the C. difficile only group versus the C. difficile + CAPE group. Histology analysis still shows a substantial amount of pathology in the C. difficile + CAPE group. This should be discussed more thoroughly using precise language.

      The authors did a good job addressing my concerns regarding the infection model by providing a more accurate descriptions in the Results section for histology. However, the weight loss improvement by CAPE does not look like a significant effect, although it is trending towards improvement. This should be more accurately described.

      Another minor concern is that the current Abstract is overstating the amount of disease attenuation. I would replace "remarkably reduces the pathology" with "reduces some of the pathology"

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors build a gene expression model based on histone post-translational modifications, and find that H3K27ac is correlated with gene expression. They compare to other gene prediction methods such as DeepChrome. They proceed to perturb H3K27ac at 13 gene promoters in two cell types, and measure gene expression changes to test their model.

      Strengths:

      The combination of multiple methods to model expression, along with utilizing 6 histone datasets in 13 cell types allowed the authors to build a model that correlates between 0.7-0.79 with gene expression.<br /> They compare three cells types to other prediction models, and this figure should be included in the main figures.<br /> They use dCas9-p300 fusions to perturb H3K27ac and monitor gene expression to test their model. Ranked correlations of the HEK293 data showed some support for the predictions after perturbation of H3K27ac.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors state in the latest submission that the primary use case of this work is related to predicting epigenome editing outcomes, not predicting gene expression from chromatin. However the first four figures all relate to gene expression prediction. The only main figure that shows epigenome editing prediction is panel 6E. If this authors wish to highlight the use case of this work they should redo figures, including moving panels from current supplemental figures to show this.

      The perturbation of 5 genes in K562 with perturb-seq data shows a modest correlation of ~0.5 and is still only shown in supplemental figures, which is odd as this is the true test case of their model in my opinion. The authors are then left to speculate the reasons why the outcome of epigenome editing doesn't fit their predictions, which highlights the limited value in the current version of this method.<br /> As mentioned before, testing genes that were not expressed being most activated by dCas9-p300 weaken the correlations vs. looking at a broad range of different gene expression as the original model was trained on.

      If the authors want this method to be used to predict outcomes of epigenome editing, expanding to dCas9-KRAB and other CRISPRa methods (SAM and VPR) would be useful. Those datasets are published and could be analyzed for this manuscript and show how the model holds up across cell types and epigenome editing methods.

      The utility of this method as described here, to predict gRNA outcomes seems modest and limited. It is fairly trivial to test 10 or more gRNAs for a single gene to find the best one, and the authors show limited prediction and occasionally no benefit. For example, with CHD8 and CD79 the gRNA with the highest prediction had the lowest actual impact on gene expression of the gRNAs tested. For many other genes the gRNA's prediction and gene expression outcome show no correlation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Authors in this study previously reported that BYL719, an inhibitor of PI3Kα, suppressed heterotopic ossification in mice model of a human genetic disease, fibrodysplasia ossificans progressive, which is caused by the activation of mutant ACVR1/R206H by Activin A. The aim of this study is to identify the mechanism of BYL719 for the inhibition of heterotopic ossification. They found that BYL719 suppressed heterotopic ossification in two ways: one is to inhibit the specification of precursor cells for chondrogenic and osteogenic differentiation and the other is to suppress the activation of inflammatory cells.

      Strengths:

      This study is based on authors' previous reports and the experimental procedures including the animal model are established. In addition, to confirm the role of PI3Kα, authors used the conditional knock-out mice of the subunit of PI3Kα. They clearly demonstrated the evidence indicating that the targets of PI3Kα is not members of TGFBR by a newly established experimental method.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, the presented data were closely related to those previously published by authors' group or others and there were very few new findings. The molecular mechanisms through which BYL719 inhibits HO remain unclear, even in the revised manuscript.<br /> Heterotopic ossification in mice model was not stable and inappropriate for the scientific evaluation.<br /> The method for chondrogenic differentiation was not appropriate, and the scientific evidence of successful differentiation was lacking.<br /> The design of gene expression profile comparison was not appropriate and failed to obtain the data for the main aim of this study.<br /> The experiments of inflammatory cells were performed cell lines without ACVR1/R206H mutation, and therefore the obtained data were not precisely related to the inflammation in FOP.

      Comments on revisions:

      In the R2 version, the authors performed additional experiments using mice with inducible human R206H ACVR1A. BM-MSCs isolated from these mice were used to investigate the effect of Activin-A. The results again suggested that BYL79 inhibited the chondrogenic differentiation of BM-MSCs. However, there are still no data demonstrating the effect of BYL79 on cell growth in these in vitro experiments. In Figures 7A-D, 10 μM BYL79 strongly inhibited the proliferation of inflammatory cells, suggesting that growth inhibition may have contributed to the results shown in Figure 5.

      The main point of discussion concerns the significance of the comparisons made. The fundamental disagreement arises from the role of Activin-A in R206H cells and its effect on chondrogenic differentiation. The authors' rebuttal regarding my comments on the RNA-seq analyses should be reconsidered. The core issue lies in the interpretation of Activin-A's role in R206H cells and the distinction between chondrogenic differentiation and ossification.

      A key feature of R206H mutant cells is that they respond to Activin-A by activating Smad1/5 signaling-comparable in quality to the signaling induced by BMP6 in WT cells. Another important point, as also acknowledged by the authors, is that Activin-A can transduce Smad2/3 signaling via its canonical receptor, ACVR1B. These dual signaling pathways synergistically contribute to chondrogenic differentiation in precursor cells such as FAPs. Several reports have demonstrated that the combined activation of TGF-β and BMP signaling promotes chondrogenesis more strongly than either pathway alone.

      Since the PI3Kα inhibition effect on HO is already known, a critical question in this study is whether BYL79 also inhibits the Smad2/3 pathway. A straightforward experiment would be to compare WT cells treated with Activin-A alone versus Activin-A plus BYL79, and to perform GO term enrichment analyses related specifically to chondrogenic differentiation, not ossification. Additionally, comparing R206H cells treated with Activin-A/BYL79 and WT cells treated with BMP6/BYL79 could help identify gene sets inhibited by BYL79 via Smad2/3 signaling. If these comparisons reveal no specific effect on genes related to chondrogenesis, the effect of BYL79 may be limited to suppression of BMP-mediated osteogenesis. Unfortunately, the authors appear to show little interest in addressing this issue.

      Regarding Figure 7, the authors' rebuttal should also be reconsidered. Since the R2 version employed FOP model mice, it would have been possible to evaluate the effects of BYL79 on inflammatory cells harboring the R206H mutation. This could have enabled a more precise assessment of BYL79's influence on inflammatory signaling. While the authors repeatedly claim that BYL79's effect is not specific to any particular ligand or the presence of the FOP mutation, the role of TGF-β signaling in the development of endochondral heterotopic ossification is well recognized. Therefore, the mechanism of BYL79 should be clarified before considering its therapeutic application

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript asks an interesting and important question: what part of 'cerebellar' motor dysfunction is an acute control problem vs a compensatory strategy to the acute control issue? The authors use a cerebellar 'blockade' protocol, consisting of high frequency stimuli applied to the cerebellar peduncle which is thought to interfere with outflow signals. This protocol was applied in monkeys performing center out reaching movements and has been published from this laboratory in several preceding studies. I found the take-home-message broadly convincing and clarifying - that cerebellar block reduces muscle activation acutely particularly in movements that involve multiple joints and therefore invoke interaction torques, and that movements progressively slow down to in effect 'compensate' for these acute tone deficits. The manuscript was generally well written, data were clear, convincing and novel. The key strengths are differentiating acute from sub-acute (within session but not immediate) kinematic consequences of cerebellar block.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, "Neocortical Layer-5 tLTD Relies on Non-Ionotropic Presynaptic NMDA Receptor Signaling", Thomazeau et al. seek to determine the role of presynaptic NMDA receptors and the mechanism by which they mediate expression of frequency-independent timing-dependent long-term depression (tLTD) between layer-5 (L5) pyramidal cells (PCs) in the developing mouse visual cortex. By utilizing sophisticated methods, including sparse Cre-dependent deletion of GluN1 subunit via neonatal iCre-encoding viral injection, in vitro quadruple patch clamp recordings, and pharmacological interventions, the authors elegantly show that L5 PC->PC tLTD is 1) dependent on presynaptic NMDA receptors, 2) mediated by non-ionotropic NMDA receptor signaling, and 3) is reliant on JNK2/Syntaxin-1a (STX1a) interaction (but not RIM1αβ) in the presynaptic neuron. The study elegantly and pointedly addresses a long-standing conundrum regarding the lack of frequency dependence of tLTD.

      Strengths:

      The authors did a commendable job presenting a very polished piece of work with high-quality data that this Reviewer feels enthusiastic about. The manuscript has several notable strengths. Firstly, the methodological approach used in the study is highly sophisticated and technically challenging, and successfully produced high-quality data that were easily accessible to a broader audience. Secondly, the pharmacological interventions used in the study targeted specific players and their mechanistic roles, unveiling the mechanism in question step-by-step. Lastly, the manuscript is written in a well-organized manner that is easy to follow. Overall, the study provides a series of compelling evidence that leads to a clear illustration of mechanistic understanding.

      Weakness:

      No major weaknesses were noted.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates the developmental and lifelong consequences of reduced foxf2 dosage in zebrafish, a gene associated with human stroke risk and cerebral small vessel disease (CSVD). The authors show that a ~50% reduction in foxf2 function through homozygous loss of foxf2a leads to a significant decrease in brain pericyte number, along with striking abnormalities in pericyte morphology-including enlarged soma and extended processes-during larval stages. These defects are not corrected over time but instead persist and worsen with age, ultimately affecting the surrounding endothelium. The study also makes an important contribution by characterizing pericyte behavior in wild-type zebrafish using a clever pericyte-specific Brainbow approach, revealing novel interactions such as pericyte process overlap not previously reported in mammals.

      Strengths:

      This work provides mechanistic insight into how subtle, developmental changes in mural cell biology and coverage of the vasculature can drive long-term vascular pathology. The authors make strong use of zebrafish imaging tools, including longitudinal analysis in transgenic lines to follow pericyte number and morphology over larval development, and then applied tissue clearing and whole brain imaging at 3 and 11 months to further dissect the longitudinal effects of foxf2a loss. The ability to track individual pericytes in vivo reveals cell-intrinsic defects and process degeneration with high spatiotemporal resolution. Their use of a pericyte-specific Zebrabow line also allows, for the first time, detailed visualization of pericyte-pericyte interactions in the developing brain, highlighting structural features and behaviors that challenge existing models based on mouse studies. Together, these findings make the zebrafish a valuable model for studying the cellular dynamics of CSVD.

      Weaknesses:

      While the findings are compelling, several aspects could be strengthened. First, quantifying pericyte coverage across distinct brain regions (forebrain, midbrain, hindbrain) would clarify whether foxf2a loss differentially impacts specific pericyte lineages, given known regional differences in developmental origin, with forebrain pericytes being neural crest-derived and hindbrain pericytes being mesoderm-derived. Second, measuring foxf2b expression in foxf2a mutants would better support the interpretation that total FOXF2 dosage is reduced in a graded fashion in heterozygote and homozygote foxf2a mutants. Finally, quantifying vascular density in adult mutants would help determine whether observed endothelial changes are a downstream consequence of prolonged pericyte loss. Correlating these vascular changes with local pericyte depletion would also help clarify causality.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates the role of GMCL1 in regulating the mitotic surveillance pathway (MSP), a protective mechanism that activates p53 following prolonged mitosis. The authors identify a physical interaction between 53BP1 and GMCL1, but not with GMCL2. They propose that the ubiquitin ligase complex CRL3-GMCL1 targets 53BP1 for degradation during mitosis, thereby preventing the formation of the "mitotic stopwatch" complex (53BP1-USP28-p53) and subsequent p53 activation. The authors show that high GMCL1 expression correlates with resistance to paclitaxel in cancer cell lines that express wild-type p53. Importantly, loss of GMCL1 restores paclitaxel sensitivity in these cells, but not in p53-deficient lines. They propose that GMCL1 overexpression enables cancer cells to bypass MSP-mediated p53 activation, promoting survival despite mitotic stress. Targeting GMCL1 may thus represent a therapeutic strategy to re-sensitize resistant tumors to taxane-based chemotherapy.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript presents potentially interesting observations. The major strength of this article is the identification of GMCL1 as a 53BP1 interaction partner. The authors identified relevant domains and showed that GMCL1 controls 53BP1 stability. The authors further show a potentially interesting link between GMCL1 status and sensitivity to Taxol.

      Weaknesses:

      However, the manuscript is significantly weakened by unsubstantiated mechanistic claims, overreliance on a non-functional model system (U2OS), and overinterpretation of correlative data. To support the conclusions of the manuscript, the authors must show that the GMCL1-dependent sensitivity to Taxol depends on the mitotic surveillance pathway.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The yeast double-stranded RNA endonuclease Rnt1, a homolog of bacterial RNAse III, mediates the processing of pre-rRNA, pre-snRNA, and pre-snoRNA molecules. Cells lacking Rnt1 exhibit pronounced growth defects, particularly at lower temperatures. In this manuscript, Notice-Sarpaning examines whether these growth defects can be attributed at least in part to a function of Rnt1 in mRNA degradation. To test this, the authors apply parallel analysis of RNA ends (PARE), which they developed in previous work, to identify polyA+ fragments with 5' monophosphates in RNT1 yeast that are absent in rnt1Δ cells. Because such RNAs are substrates for 5' to 3' exonucleolytic decay by Rat1 in the nucleus or Xrn1 in the cytoplasm, these analyses were performed in a rat1-ts xrn1Δ background. The data recapitulate known Rtn1 cleavage sites in rRNA, snRNAs, and snoRNAs, and identify 122 putative novel substrates, approximately half of which are mRNAs. Of these, two-thirds are predicted to contain double-stranded stem loop structures with A/UGNN tetraloops, which serve as a major determinant of Rnt1 substrate recognition. Rtn1 resides in the nucleus, and it likely cleaves mRNAs there, but cleavage products seem to be degraded after export to the cytoplasm, as analysis of published PARE data shows that some of them accumulate in xrn1Δ cells. The authors then leverage the slow growth of rnt1Δ cells for experimental evolution. Sequencing analysis of thirteen faster-growing strains identifies mutations predominantly mapping to genes encoding nuclear exosome co-factors. Some of the strains have mutations in genes encoding a larat-debranching enzyme, a ribosomal protein nuclear import factor, poly(A) polymerase 1, and the RNA-binding protein Puf4. In one of the puf4 mutant strains, a second mutation is also present in YDR514C, which the authors identify as an mRNA substrate cleaved by Rnt1. Deletion of either puf4 or ydr514C marginally improves the growth of rnt1Δ cells, which the authors interpret as evidence that mRNA cleavage by Rnt1 plays a role in maintaining cellular homeostasis by controlling mRNA turnover.

      While the PARE data and their subsequent in vitro validation convincingly demonstrate Rnt1-mediated cleavage of a small subset of yeast mRNAs, the data supporting the biological significance of these cleavage events is substantially less compelling. This makes it difficult to establish whether Rnt1-mediated mRNA cleavage is biologically meaningful or simply "collateral damage" due to a coincidental presence of its target motif in these transcripts.

      (1) A major argument in support of the claim that "several mRNAs rely heavily on Rnt1 for turnover" comes from comparing number of PARE reads at the transcript start site (as a proxy for fraction of decapped transcripts) and at the Rnt1 cleavage site (as a proxy for fraction of Rnt1-cleaved transcripts). The argument for this is that "the major mRNA degradation pathway is through decapping". However, polyA tail shortening usually precedes decapping, and transcripts with short polyA tails would be strongly underrepresented in PARE sequencing libraries, which were constructed after two rounds of polyA+ RNA selection. This will likely underestimate the fraction of decapped transcripts for each mRNA. There is a wide range of well-established methods that can be used to directly measure differences in the half-life of Rnt1 mRNA targets in RNT1 vs rnt1Δ cells. Because the PARE data rely on the presence of a 5' phosphate to generate sequencing reads, they also cannot be used to estimate what fraction of a given mRNA transcript is actually cleaved by Rnt1.

      (2) Rnt1 is almost exclusively nuclear, and the authors make a compelling case that its concentration in the cytoplasm would likely be too low to result in mRNA cleavage. The model for Rnt1-mediated mRNA turnover would therefore require mRNAs to be cleaved prior to their nuclear export in a manner that would be difficult to control. Alternatively, the Rnt1 targets would need to re-enter prior to cleavage, followed by export of the cleaved fragments for cytoplasmic decay. These processes would need to be able to compete with canonical 5' to 3' and 3' to 5' exonucleolytic decay to influence mRNA fate in a biologically meaningful way.

      (3) The experimental evolution clearly demonstrates that mutations in nuclear exosome factors are the most frequent suppressors of the growth defects caused by Rnt1 loss. This can be rationalized by stabilization of nuclear exosome substrates such as misprocessed snRNAs or snoRNAs, which are the major targets of Rnt1. The rescue mutations in other pathways linked to ribosomal proteins (splicing, ribosomal protein import, ribosomal mRNA binding) support this interpretation. By contrast, the potential suppressor mutation in YDR514C does not occur on its own but only in combination with a puf4 mutation; it is also unclear whether it is located within the Rnt1 cleavage motif or if it impacts Rnt1 cleavage at all. This can easily be tested by engineering the mutation into the endogenous YDR514C locus with CRISPR/Cas9 or expressing wild-type and mutant YDR514C from a plasmid, along with assaying for Rnt1 cleavage by northern blot. Notably, the growth defect complementation of YDR514C deletion in rnt1Δ cells is substantially less pronounced than the growth advantage afforded by nuclear exosome mutations (Figure S9, evolved strains 1 to 5). These data rather argue for a primary role of Rnt1 in promoting cell growth by ensuring efficient ribosome biogenesis through pre-snRNA/pre-snoRNA processing.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper measures associations between RNA transcript levels and important reproductive traits in the model organism C. elegans. The authors go beyond determining which gene expression differences underlie reproductive traits, but also (1) build a model that predicts these traits based on gene expression and (2) perform experiments to confirm that some transcript levels indeed affect reproductive traits. The clever study design allows the authors to determine which transcript levels impact reproductive traits, and also which transcriptional differences are driven by stochastic vs environmental differences. In sum, this is a rather comprehensive study that highlights the power of gene expression as a driver of phenotype, and also teases apart the various factors that affect the expression levels of important genes.

      Strengths:

      Overall, this study has many strengths, is very clearly communicated, and has no substantial weaknesses that I can point to. One question that emerges for me is about the extent to which these findings apply broadly. In other words, I wonder whether gene expression levels are predictive of other phenotypes in other organisms. I think this question has largely been explored in microbes, where some studies (PMID: 17959824) but not others (PMID: 38895328) find that differences in gene expression are predictive of phenotypes like growth rate. Microbes are not the primary focus here, and instead, the discussion is mainly focused on using gene expression to predict health and disease phenotypes in humans. This feels a little complicated since humans have so many different tissues. Perhaps an area where this approach might be useful is in examining infectious single-cell populations (bacteria, tumors, fungi). But I suppose this idea might still work in humans, assuming the authors are thinking about targeting specific tissues for RNAseq.

      In sum, this is a great paper that really got me thinking about the predictive power of gene expression and where/when it could inform about (health-related) phenotypes.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors used MEFs expressing the R1441G mutant of leucine-rich repeat kinase 2 (LRRK2), a mutant associated with the early onset of Parkinson's disease. They report that in these cells LAMP2 fluorescence is higher but BMP fluorescence is lower, MVE size is reduced, and that MVEs contain less ILVs. They also report that LAMP2-positive EVs are increased in mutant cells in a process sensitive to LRRK2 kinase inhibition but are further increased by glucocerebrosidase (GCase) inhibition, and that total di-22:6-BMP and total di-18:1-BMP are increased in mutant LRRK2 MEFs compared to WT cells by mass spectrometry. They also report that LRRK2 kinase inhibition partially restores cellular BMP levels, and that GCase inhibition further increases BMP levels, and that in EVs from the LRRK2 mutant, LRRK2 inhibition decreases BMP while GCase inhibition has the opposite effect. Moreover, they report that the BMP increase is not due to increased BMP synthesis, although the authors observe that CLN5 is increased in LRRK2 mutant cells. Finally, they report that GW4869 decreases EV release and exosomal BMP, while bafilomycin A1 increases EV release. They conclude that LRRK2 regulates BMP levels (in cells) and release (via EVs). They also conclude that the process is modulated by GCase in LRRK2 mutant cells, and that these studies may contribute to the use of BMP-positive EVs as a biomarker for Parkinson's disease and associated treatments.

      Strengths:

      This is an interesting paper, which provides novel insights into the biogenesis of exosomes with exciting biomedical potential. However, I have comments that authors need to address to clarify some aspects of their study.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The intensity of LAMP2 staining is increased significantly in cells expressing the R1441G mutant of LRRK2 when compared to WT cells (Figure 1C). Yet mutant cells contain significantly smaller MVEs with fewer ILVs, and the MVE surface area is reduced (Figure 1D-F). This is quite surprising since LAMP2 is a major component of the limiting membrane of late endosomes. Are other proteins of endo-lysosomes (eg, LAMP1, CD63, RAB7) or markers (lysotracker) also decreased (see also below)?

      (2) LRRK2 has been reported to interact with endolysosomal membranes. Does the R1441G mutant bind LAMP2- and/or BMP-positive membranes? Does the mutant affect endolysosomes?

      (3) Immunofluorescence data indicate that BMP is decreased in mutant LRRK2-expressing cells compared to WT (Figure 1A-B), but mass spec data indicate that di-22:6-BMP and di-18:1-BMP are increased (Figure 3). Authors conclude that the BMP pool detected by mass spec in mutant cells is less antibody-accessible than that present in wt cells, or that the anti-BMP antibody is less specific and that it detects other analytes. This is an awkward conclusion, since the IF signal with the antibody is lower (not higher): why would the antibody be less specific? Could it be that the antibody does not see all BMP isoforms equally well? Moreover, the observations that mutant cells contain smaller MVEs (Figure 1D-F) with fewer ILVs are consistent with the IF data and reduced BMP amounts. This needs to be clarified.

      Mass spectrometry data are only shown for two BMP species (di-22:6, di-18:1). What are the major BMP isoforms in WT cells? The authors should show the complete analysis for all BMP species if they wish to draw quantitative conclusions about the amounts of BMP in wt and mutant cells. Finally, BMP and PG are isobaric lipids. Fragmentation of BMPs or PGs results in characteristic fingerprints, but the presence of each daughter ion is not absolutely specific for either lipid. This should be clarified, e.g., were BMP and PG separated before mass spec analysis? Was PG affected? The authors should also compare the BMP data with mass spec data obtained with a control lipid, e.g., PC.

      (4) It is quite surprising that the amounts of labeled BMP continue to increase for up to 24h after a short 25min pulse with heavy BMP precursors (Figure 4B).

      (5) It is argued that upregulation of CLN5 may be due to an overall upregulation of lysosomal enzymes, as LAMP2 levels were also increased (Figure 2A, C, E). Again, this is not consistent with the observed decrease in MVE size and number (Figure 1D-F). As mentioned above, other independent markers of endo-lysosomes should be analyzed (eg, LAMP1, CD63, RAB7), and/or other lysosomal enzymes (e.g. cathepsin. D).

      (6) The authors report that the increase in BMP is not due to an increase in BMP synthesis (Figure 4), although they observe a significant increase in CLN5 (Figure 5A) in LRRK2 mutant cells. Some clarification is needed.

      (7) Authors observe that both LAMP2 and BMP are decreased in EVs by GW4869 and increased by bafilomycin (Figure 6). Given my comments above on Figure 1, it would also be nice to illustrate/quantify the effects of these compounds on cells by immunofluorescence.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study examines the metabolic regulation of progenitor proliferation and differentiation in the developing retina. The authors observe dynamic changes in glycolytic gene expression in retinal progenitors and use various strategies to test the role of glycolysis. They find that elevated glycolysis in Pten-cKO retinas results in alteration of RPC fate, while inhibition of glycolysis has converse effects. They specifically test the role of elevated glycolysis using dominant active cytoPFKB3, which demonstrates the selective effects of elevated glycolysis on progenitor proliferation and rod differentiation. They then show that elevated glycolysis modulates both pHi and Wnt signaling, and provide evidence that these pathways impact proliferation and differentiation of progenitors, particularly affecting rod photoreceptor differentiation.

      Strengths:

      This is a compelling and rigorous study that provides an important advance in our understanding of metabolic regulation of retina development, addressing a major gap in knowledge. A key strength is that the study utilizes multiple genetic and pharmacological approaches to address how both increased or decreased glycolytic flux affect retinal progenitor proliferation and differentiation. They discover elevated Wnt signaling pathway genes in Pten cKO retina, revealing a potential link between glycolysis and Wnt pathway activation. Altogether the study is comprehensive and adds to the growing body of evidence that regulation of glycolysis plays a key role in tissue development.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Following expression of cytoPFKB3, which results in increased glycolytic flux, BrDU labeling was performed at e12.5 and increased labeled cells were detected in the outer nuclear layer. But whether these are cones or rods is not established. The rest of the analysis is focused on the precocious maturation of rhodopsin-labelled outer segments, and the major conclusions emphasize rod photoreceptor differentiation. Therefore it is unclear whether there is an effect on cone differentiation for either Pten cKO or cytoPFKB3 transgenic retina. It is also not established whether rods are born precociously. Presumably this would be best detected by BrDU labeling at later embryonic stages.

      (2) The authors find that there is upregulation of multiple Wnt pathway components in Pten cKO retina. They further show that inhibiting Wnt signaling phenocopies the effects of reducing glycolysis. However, they do not test whether pharmacological inhibition of Wnt signaling reverses the effects of high glycolytic activity in Pten cKO retinas. Thus the argument that Wnt is a key downstream effector pathway regulating rod photoreceptor differentiation is weak.

      (3) The use of sodium acetate to force protein acetylation is quite non-specific and will have effects beyond beta-catenin acetylation (which the authors acknowledge). Thus it is a stretch to state that "forced activation of beta-catenin acetylation" mimics the impact of Pten<br /> loss/high glycolytic activity in RPCs since the effects could be due to acetylation of other proteins.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Homologous recombination (HR) is a critical pathway for repairing double-strand DNA breaks and ensuring genomic stability. At the core of HR is the RAD51-mediated strand-exchange process, in which the RAD51-ssDNA filament binds to homologous double-stranded DNA (dsDNA) to form a characteristic D-loop structure. While decades of biochemical, genetic, and single-molecule studies have elucidated many aspects of this mechanism, the atomic-level details of the strand-exchange process remained unresolved due to a lack of atomic-resolution structure of RAD51 D-loop complex.<br /> In this study, the authors achieved this by reconstituting a RAD51 mini-filament, allowing them to solve the RAD51 D-loop complex at 2.64 Å resolution using a single particle approach. The atomic resolution structure reveals how specific residues of RAD51 facilitate the strand exchange reaction. Ultimately, this work provides unprecedented structural insight into the eukaryotic HR process and deepens the understanding of RAD51 function at the atomic level, advancing the broader knowledge of DNA repair mechanisms.

      Strengths:

      The authors overcame the challenge of RAD51's helical symmetry by designing a minifilament system suitable for single-particle cryo-EM, enabling them to resolve the RAD51 D-loop structure at 2.64 Å without imposed symmetry. This high resolution revealed precise roles of key residues, including F279 in Loop 2, which facilitates strand separation, and basic residues on site II that capture the displaced strand. Their findings were supported by mutagenesis, strand exchange assays, and single-molecule analysis, providing strong validation of the structural insights.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite the detailed structural data, some structure-based mutagenesis data interpretation lacks clarity. Additionally, the proposed 3′-to-5′ polarity of strand exchange relies on assumptions from static structural features, such as stronger binding of the 5′-arm-which are not directly supported by other experiments. This makes the directional model compelling but contradicts several well-established biochemical studies that support a 5'-to-3' polarity relative to the complementary strand (e.g., Cell 1995, PMID: 7634335; JBC 1996, PMID: 8910403; Nature 2008, PMID: 18256600).

      Overall:

      The 2.6 Å resolution cryoEM structure of the RAD51 D-loop complex provides remarkably detailed insights into the residues involved in D-loop formation. The high-quality cryoEM density enables precise placement of each nucleotide, which is essential for interpreting the molecular interactions between RAD51 and DNA. Particularly, the structural analysis highlights specific roles for key domains, such as the N-terminal domain (NTD), in engaging the donor DNA duplex.

      This structural interpretation is further substantiated by single-molecule fluorescence experiments using the KK39,40AA NTD mutant. The data clearly show a significant reduction in D-loop formation by the mutant compared to wild-type, supporting the proposed functional role of the NTD observed in the cryoEM model.

      However, the strand exchange activity interpretation presented in Figure 5B could benefit from a more rigorous experimental design. The current assay measures an increase in fluorescence intensity, which depends heavily on the formation of RAD51-ssDNA filaments. As shown in Figure S6A, several mutants exhibit reduced ability to form such filaments, which could confound the interpretation of strand exchange efficiency. To address this, the assay should either: (1) normalize for equivalent levels of RAD51-ssDNA filaments across samples, or (2) compare the initial rates of fluorescence increase (i.e., the slope of the reaction curve), rather than endpoint fluorescence, to better isolate the strand exchange activity itself.

      Based on the structural features of the D-loop, the authors propose that strand pairing and exchange initiate at the 3'-end of the complementary strand in the donor DNA and proceed with a 3'-to-5' polarity. This conclusion, drawn from static structural observations, contrasts with several well-established biochemical studies that support a 5'-to-3' polarity relative to the complementary strand (e.g., Cell 1995, PMID: 7634335; JBC 1996, PMID: 8910403; Nature 2008, PMID: 18256600). While the structural model is compelling and methodologically robust, this discrepancy underscores the need for further experiments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study reports on the existence of subpopulations of isogenic E. coli and P. aeruginosa cells that are tolerant to the antimicrobial peptide tachyplesin and are characterized by accumulation of low levels of a fluorescent tachyplesin-NBD conjugate. The authors then set out to address the molecular mechanisms, providing interesting insights even though the mechanism remains incompletely defined: The work demonstrates that increased efflux may cause this phenotype, putatively together with other changes in membrane lipid composition. The authors further demonstrate that pharmacological manipulation can prevent generation of tolerance. The authors are cautious in their interpretation and the claims made are largely justified by the data.

      Strengths:

      Going beyond the commonly used bulk techniques for studying susceptibility to AMPs , Lee et al. used of fluorescent antibiotic conjugates in combination with flow cytometry analysis to study variability in drug accumulation at the single cell level. This powerful approach enabled the authors to expose bimodal drug accumulation pattern that were condition dependent, but conserved across a variety of E. coli clinical isolates. Using cell sorting in combination with colony-forming unit assays as well as quantitative fluorescence microscopic analysis in a microfludics-setup the authors compellingly demonstrate that low accumulators (where fluorescence signal is mostly restricted to the membrane), can survive antibiotic treatment, whereas high accumulators (with high intracellular fluorescence) were killed.

      The relevance of efflux for the ´low accumulator´ phenotype and its survival is convincingly demonstrated by the following lines of evidence: i) A time-course experiment on tachyplesin-NBD pre-loaded cells revealed that all cells initially were high accumulators, before a subpopulation of cells subsequently managed to reduce signal intensity, demonstrating that the ´low accumulator´ phenotype is an induced response and not a pre-existing property. Ii) Double-mutants deficient in the delta acrA delta tolC double-KO, which showed reduced levels of low accumulators´. Interestingly, ´low accumulator´populations were nearly abrogated in bacteria deficient in the qse quorum sensing system, suggesting its centrality for the tachyplesin response. Even though this system may control acrA, the strength of the phenotype may suggest that it may control additional as-of-yet unidenitified factors relevant in the response to tachyplesin. Iii) treatment with efflux pump inhibitor sertraline and verapamil (even though some caution needs to be taken since it is not perfectly selective, see weakness) prevents generation of low accumulators. The observation that sertraline enhances tachyplesin-based killing is an important basis for developing combination therapies.

      The study convincingly illustrates how susceptibility to tachyplesin adaptively changes in a heterogeneous way dependent on the growth phases and nutrient availability. This is highly relevant also beyond the presented example of tachyplesin and similar subpopulation-based adaptive changes to the susceptibility towards antimicrobial peptides or other drugs may occur during infections in vivo and they would likely be missed by standardized in vitro susceptibility testing.

      Weaknesses:

      Some mechanistic questions regarding tachyplesin-accumulation and survival remain. One general shortcoming of the setup of the transcriptomics experiment is that the tachyplesin-NBD probe itself has antibiotic efficacy and induces phenotypes (and eventually cell death) in the ´high accumulator´ cells. As the authors state themselves, this makes it challenging to interpret whether any differences seen between the two groups are causative for the observed accumulation pattern of if they are a consequence of differential accumulation and downstream phenotypic effects.

      I have a few minor concerns regarding new data that was added during the revision:

      - The statement ´ Moreover, we found that the fluorescence of low accumulators decreased over time when bacteria were treated with 20 μg mL´ is, in my opinion, not supported by the data shown in Figure S4C. That figure shows that the abundance of ´low accumulator´ cells decreases over time. Following the rationale that protease K treatment may cleave surface-associated/extracellular tachyplesin-NDB, this should lead to a shift of ´low accumulator´population to the left, indicating reduced fluorescence intensity per cell. This is not so case, but the population just disappears. However, after 120 min of treatment more cells appear in the ´high accumulator´ state. This result is somewhat puzzling.

      - The authors used the metabolic dye resazurin to measure the metabolic activity of low vs. high accumulators. I am not entirely convinced that the lower fluorescence resorufin-fluorescence in tachyplesin-NBD accumulators really indicates lower metabolic activity, since a cell's fluorescence levels would also be affected by the cellular uptake and efflux. It appears plausible that the lower resorufin-fluorescence may result from reduced accumulation/increased efflux in the´low-tachyplesin NBD´ population.

      Comment on revisions: All my previous comments have been satisfactorily addressed by the authors.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors made a thorough revision of the manuscript, strengthening the message. They also considered all the comments made by the reviewers and provided appropriate and convincing arguments.

      Strengths:

      The revised manuscript clarifies all the major points raised by the reviewers, and the way the information is presented (in the text, figures and tables) is clear.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors provided an appropriate and convincing rebuttal regarding the potential weakness I pointed out in the first review of the manuscript. Therefore, I do not see any major issue in their work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Nosaka et al is a comprehensive study exploring the involvement of IL1beta signaling in a 2-hit model of lung injury + ventilation, with a focus on modulation by hypothermia.

      Strengths:

      The authors demonstrate quite convincingly that interleukin 1 beta plays a role in the development of ventilator-induced lung injury in this model, and that this role includes the regulation of neutrophil extracellular trap formation. The authors use a variety of in vivo animal-based and in vitro cell culture work, and interventions including global gene knockout, cell-targeted knockout and pharmacological inhibition, which greatly strengthen the ability to make clear biological interpretations.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have addressed my concerns/queries.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Zhang et al., reported that CHMP5 restricts bone formation by controlling endolysosome-mitochondrion-mediated cell senescence. Zhang et al., report a novel role of CHMP5 on osteogenesis through affecting cell senescence. Overall, it is an interesting study and provides new insights in the field of cells senescence and bone.

      Strengths:

      Analyzed the bone phenotype OF CHMP5-periskeletal progenitor-CKO mouse model and found the novel role of senescent cells on osteogenesis and migration.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The role and mechanism of CHMP5 gene deletion in enhancing osteogenesis via cellular senescence remain insufficiently elucidated.

      (2) The use of the ADTC5 cell line as a skeletal precursor/progenitor model is suboptimal.

      Overall, the results support their conclusions.

      The impact of this work on the field is its proposal that cellular senescence may exert either inhibitory or promotive effects on osteogenic capacity, depending on cell type and context.

      The revised manuscript has addressed most of the concerns raised during the initial review.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, "Forecasting protein evolution by integrating birth-death population models with structurally constrained substitution models", David Ferreiro and co-authors present a forward-in-time evolutionary simulation framework that integrates a birth-death population model with a fitness function based on protein folding stability. By incorporating structurally constrained substitution models and estimating fitness from ΔG values using homology-modeled structures, the authors aim to capture biophysically realistic evolutionary dynamics. The approach is implemented in a new version of their open-source software, ProteinEvolver2, and is applied to four viral proteins from HIV-1 and SARS-CoV-2.

      Overall, the study presents a compelling rationale for using folding stability as a constraint in evolutionary simulations and offers a novel framework and software to explore such dynamics. While the results are promising, particularly for predicting biophysical properties, the current analysis provides only partial evidence for true evolutionary forecasting, especially at the sequence level. The work offers a meaningful conceptual advance and a useful simulation tool, and sets the stage for more extensive validation in future studies.

      Strengths:

      The results demonstrate that fitness constraints based on protein stability can prevent the emergence of unrealistic, destabilized variants - a limitation of traditional, neutral substitution models. In particular, the predicted folding stabilities of simulated protein variants closely match those observed in real variants, suggesting that the model captures relevant biophysical constraints.

      Weaknesses:

      The predictive scope of the method remains limited. While the model effectively preserves folding stability, its ability to forecast specific sequence content is not well supported. Only one dataset (HIV-1 MA) is evaluated for sequence-level divergence using KL divergence; this analysis is absent for the other proteins. The authors use a consensus Omicron sequence as a representative endpoint for SARS-CoV-2, which overlooks the rich longitudinal sequence data available from GISAID. The use of just one consensus from a single time point is not fully justified, given the extensive temporal and geographical sampling available. Extending the analysis to include multiple timepoints, particularly for SARS-CoV-2, would strengthen the predictive claims. Similarly, applying the model to other well-sampled viral proteins, such as those from influenza or RSV, would broaden its relevance and test its generalizability.

      It would also be informative to include a retrospective analysis of the evolution of protein stability along known historical trajectories. This would allow the authors to assess whether folding stability is indeed preserved in real-world evolution, as assumed in their model.

      Finally, a discussion on the impact of structural templates - and whether the fixed template remains valid across divergent sequences - would be valuable. Addressing the possibility of structural remodeling or template switching during evolution would improve confidence in the model's applicability to more divergent evolutionary scenarios.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study presents an investigation of the visual and chemical properties and mating behaviour in Morpho butterflies, aimed at addressing the nature of divergence between closely related species in sympatry. The study species consists of three subspecies of Morpho helenor (bristowi, theodorus, and helenor), and the conspecific Morpho achilles achilles. The authors postulate that whereas the iridescent blue signals of all (sub)species should function as a predator reduction signal (similar to aposematism) and therefore exhibit convergence, the same signals should indicate divergence if used as a mating signal, particularly in sympatric populations. They also assess chemical profiles among the species to assess the potential utility of scent in mediating species/sex discrimination.

      The authors first used reflectance spectrometry to calculate hue, brightness, and chroma, plus two measures of "iridescence" (perhaps better phrased as angular dependence) in each (sub)species. This indicated the ubiquitous presence of sexual dimorphism in brightness (males brighter), which also appears to be the case for iridescence (Figure 3A-B). Analysis of these data also indicated that whereas there is evidence for divergence among subspecies in allopatry, the same evidence is lacking for species in sympatry (P = 0.084). This was supported further by visual modelling, which showed that both conspecifics and birds should be (theoretically) capable of perceiving the colour difference among allopatric populations of M. helenor, whereas the same is not true for the sympatric species.

      The authors then conducted mate choice trials, first using live individuals and second using female dummies. The live experiments indicated the presence of assortative mating among the two subspecies of M. helenor (bristowi and theodorus). The dummy presentations indicated (a) bristowi males prefer conspecific wings, whereas theodorus have no preference, (b) bristowi males prefer the con(sub)specific colour pattern, (c) theodorus prefer the con(sub)specific iridescence when the pattern is manipulated to be similar among female dummies. A fourth experiment, using sympatric M. achilles and M. helenor, indicated no preference for conspecific female dummies. Finally, chemical analysis indicated substantial differences between these two species in putative pheromone compounds, and especially so in the males.

      The authors conclude that the similarity of iridescence among species in sympatry is suggestive of convergence upon a common anti-predation signal. Despite some behavioural evidence in favour of colour (iridescence)-based mate discrimination, chemical differences between Achilles and Helenor are posed as more likely to function for species isolation than visual differences.

      Overall, I enjoyed reading this manuscript, which presents a valiant attempt at studying visual, chemical and behavioural divergence in this iconic group of butterflies.

      Major comments

      My only major comment concerns the authors' favoured explanation for aposematism (or evasive mimicry) for convergence among species, which is based upon the you-can't-catch-me hypothesis first presented by Young 1971. Although there is supporting work showing that iridescent-like stimuli are more difficult to precisely localize by a range of viewers, most of the evidence as applied to the Morpho system is circumstantial, and I'm not certain that there is widespread acceptance of this hypothesis. Given that the present study deals with closely-related (sub)species, one alternative explanation - a "null" hypothesis of sorts - is for a lack of divergence (from a common starting point) as opposed to evolutionary convergence per se. in other words, two subspecies are likely to retain ancestral character states unless there is selection that causes them to diverge. I feel that the manuscript would benefit from a discussion of this alternative, if not others. Signalling to predators could very well be involved in constraining the extent of convergence, but this seems a little premature to state as an up-front conclusion of this work. There is also the result of a *dorsal* wing manipulation by Vieira-Silva et al. 2024 (https://doi.org/10.1111/eth.13517), which seems difficult to reconcile in light of this explanation. Whereas this paper is cited by the authors, a more nuanced discussion of their experimental results would seem appropriate here.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors extend their SPLASH framework with single-cell RNA-seq in mind, in two ways. First, they introduce "compactors", which are possible paths branching out from an anchor. Second, they introduce a workflow to classify compactors according to the type of biological sequence variation represented (splicing, SNV, etc). They focus on simulated data for fusion detection, and then focus on analyzing the Tabula sapiens Smart-seq2 data, showing extensive results on alternative splicing analysis, VDJ, and repeat elements.

      This is strong work with an impressive array of biological investigations and results for a methods paper. I have various concerns about terminology and comparisons, as follows (in a somewhat arbitrary order, apologies).

      (1) The discussion of the weaknesses of the consensus sequence approach of SPLASH is an odd way to motivate SPLASH+ in my opinion, in that SPLASH is not yet so widely used, so the baseline for SPLASH+ is really standard alignment-based approaches. It is fine to mention consensus sequence issues briefly, but it felt belabored.

      (2) Regarding compactors reducing alignment cost: the comparison should really be between compactor construction and alignment vs read alignment (and maybe vs modern contig construction algorithms and alignment).

      (3) The language around "compactors" is a bit confusing, where the authors sometimes refer to the tree of possibilities from an anchor as a "compactor", and sometimes a compactor is a single branch. Presumably, ideally, compactors should be DAGs, not trees, i.e., they can connect back together. Perhaps the authors could comment on whether this matters/would be a valuable extension.

      (4) The main oddness of the splicing analysis to me is not using cell-type/state in any way in the statistical testing. This need not be discrete cell types: psiX, for example, tested whether exonic PSI was variable with reference to a continuous gene expression embedding. Intuitively, such transcriptome-wide signal should be valuable for a) improving power and b) distinguishing cell-type intrinsic/"noisy" from cell-type specific splicing variation. A straightforward way of doing this would be pseudobulking cell types. Possibly a more sophisticated hierarchical model could be constructed also.

      (5) A secondary weakness is that some informative reads will not be used, for example, unspliced reads aligning to an alterantive exons. This relates to the broader weakness of SPLASH that it is blind to changes in coverage that are not linked to a specific anchor (which should be acknowledged somewhere, maybe in the Discussion). In the deeply sequenced SS2 data, this is likely not an issue, but might be more limiting in sparser data. A related issue is that coverage change indicative of, e.g., alternative TSS or TES (that do not also include a change in splice junction use) will not be detected. In fairness, all these weaknesses are shared by LeafCutter. It would be valuable to have a comparison to a more "traditional" splicing analysis approach (pick your favorite of rMATS, MISO, SUPPA).

      (6) "We should note that there is no difference between gene fusions and other RNA variants (e.g., RNA splicing) from a sequence assembly viewpoint". Maybe this is true in an abstract sense, but I don't think it is in reality. AS can produce hundreds of isoforms from the same gene, and be variable across individual cells. Gene fusions are generally less numerous/varied and will be shared across clonal populations, so the complexity is lower. That simplicity is balanced against the challenge that any genes could, in principle, fuse.

      (7) For the fusion detection assessment, SPLASH+ is given the correct anchor for detection. This feels like cheating since this information wouldn't usually be available. Can the authors motivate this? Are the other methods given comparable information? Also, TPM>100 seems like a very high expression threshold for the assessment.

      (8) Why are only 3'UTRs considered and not 5'? Is this because the analysis is asymmetric, i.e., only considering upstream anchors and downstream variation? If so, that seems like a limitation: how much additional variation would you find if including the other direction?

      (9) I don't find the theoretical results very meaningful. Assuming independent reads (equivalently binomial counts) has been repeatedly shown to be a poor assumption in sequencing data, likely due to various biases, including PCR. This has motivated the use of overdispersed distributions such as the negative Binomial and beta binomial. The theory would be valuable if it could say something at a specified level of overdispersion. If not, the caveat of assuming no overdispersion should be clearly stated.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Tanja Nielsen et al. present a novel strategy for the identification of candidate genes in Congenital Heart Disease (CHD). Their methodology, which is based on comprehensive experiments across cell models, Drosophila and zebrafish models, represents an innovative, refreshing and very useful set of tools for the identification of disease genes, in a field which are struggling with exactly this problem. The authors have applied their methodology to investigate the pathomechanisms of Hypoplastic Left Heart Syndrome (HLHS) - a severe and rare subphenotype in the large spectrum of CHD malformations. Their data convincingly implicates ribosomal proteins (RPs) in growth and proliferation defects of cardiomyocytes, a mechanism which is suspected to be associated with HLHS.

      By whole genome sequencing analysis of a small cohort of trios (25 HLHS patients and their parents), the authors investigated a possible association between RP encoding genes and HLHS. Although the possible association between defective RPs and HLHS needs to be verified, the results suggest a novel disease mechanism in HLHS, which is a potentially substantial advance in our understanding of HLHS and CHD. The conclusions of the paper are based on solid experimental evidence from appropriate high- to medium-throughput models, while additional genetic results from an independent patient cohort are needed to verify an association between RP encoding genes and HLHS in patients.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study elucidated the impact of GATA4 on aging- and injury-induced cartilage degradation and osteoarthritis (OA) progression, based on the team's finding that GATA expression is positively correlated with aging in human chondrocytes. By integrating cell culture of human chondrocytes, gene manipulation tools (siRNA, lentivirus), biological/biochemical analyses and murine models of post-traumatic OA, the team found that increasing GATA4 levels reduced anabolism and increased catabolism of chondrocytes from young donors, likely through upregulation of the BMP pathway, and that this impact is not correlated with TGF-β stimulation. Conversely, silencing GATA4 by siRNA attenuated catabolism and elevated aggrecan/collagen II biosynthesis of chondrocytes from old donors. The physiological relevance of GATA4 was further validated by the accelerated OA progression observed in lentivirus-infected mice in the DMM model.

      Strengths:

      This is a highly significant and innovative study that provides new molecular insights into cartilage homeostasis and pathology in the context of aging and disease. The experiments were performed in a comprehensive and rigorous manner. The data were interpreted thoroughly in the context of the current literature.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While it is convincing that GATA4 expression is elevated in elderly individuals, and that it has a detrimental impact on cartilage health, the authors might want to add further discussion on the variability among individual human donors, especially given the finding that the elevation of GATA4 was not observed in chondrocytes from donor O1 (Figure 1G).

      (2) It might also be worth adding additional discussion on the interplay between senescent chondrocytes and the dysfunctional ECM during aging. As noted by the authors, aging is associated with decreased sGAG content and likely degenerative changes in the collagen II network, so the microniche of chondrocytes, and thus cell-matrix crosstalk through the pericellular matrix, is also altered or impaired.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This foundational study builds on prior work from this group to reveal the complexities underlying ligand-dependent RXRγ-Nur77 heterodimer formation, offering a compelling re-evaluation of their earlier conclusions. The authors examine how a library of RXR ligands influences the biophysical, structural, and functional properties of Nur77. They find that although the Nur77-RXRγ heterodimer shares notable functional similarities with the Nurr1-RXRα complex, it also exhibits unique features, notably, both dimer dissociation and classical agonist-driven activities. This work advances our understanding of the nuanced behaviors of nuclear receptor heterodimers, which have important implications for health and disease.

      Strengths:

      (1) Builds on previous work by providing a comprehensive analysis that examines whether Nur77-RXRγ heterodimer formation parallels that of the Nurr1-RXRα complex.

      (2) Systematic evaluation of a library of RXR ligands provides a broad survey of functional outputs.

      (3) Careful reanalysis of previous work sheds new light on how NR4A heterodimers function.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Some conclusions appear overstated or are not well substantiated by the work presented. It's unclear how the data support a non-classical mode of agonism, for example, based on the data shown.

      (2) Some assays have relatively few replicates, with only two in some cases.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Pavri and colleagues examine in-depth how the local transcriptional landscape affects somatic hypermutation (SHM) of variable region genes. They use the human Burkitt lymphoma Ramos cell line as a model system to examine AID-induced SHM.

      The authors delete Emu and demonstrate that the epigenetic marks at the Ig loci do not correlate with their mutability. They define algorithms to map the V gene promoters and their mutational load in Ramos cells overexpressing AID and failed to find a correlation between mutation frequency and nascent transcription or transcription strength or between mutation frequency and polII stalling. Additionally, the authors show that convergent transcription may not be a major player for SHM. The authors additionally knock-in two other human V genes into the endogenous Vh gene in Ramos cells, and again failed to observe any significant correlation between PolII stalling and SHM. The authors also observe a similar lack of correlation between SHM (at the B-18 gene) and nascent transcription features in germinal center B cells. Overall, the authors conclude that mutation patterns in V genes are not linked to transcriptional features but are rather hard-wired into the sequence. The authors propose that premature transcription termination might have a role in promoting AID recruitment and activity at Ig genes.

      Strengths:

      The mechanisms that allow AID recruitment to Ig genes during SHM are very poorly understood. Many mechanisms have been proposed, with most invoking transcriptional features, including stalling, convergent transcription, etc. This work, demonstrating the lack of correlation with the proposed models, is of much importance to the field. The experiments are well done, and even though the results are generally "negative", they are highly relevant to our current understanding of SHM.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors propose premature transcription termination as a possible mechanism to determine V gene mutability, but the study does not experimentally address such possibilities.

      Comments:

      (1) It would be important for the authors to compare their results in Figure S1 at the B1-8 locus with those reported several years ago by Schatz and colleagues (Odegard et al, Immunity, 2005) and discuss if the results are different from what the authors report here. This is important as the first two figures essentially corroborate previous results that the Emu enhancer is important for transcription through the V genes.

      (2) The authors mention that AID recruitment is facilitated by Ig enhancers. Is endogenous AID recruited to the V genes in the absence of Emu in the Ramos cells?

      (3) The authors should explain how their results are different from those reported by the Schatz lab in their recent study (Wu et al, Mol Cell, 2025), demonstrating that ELOF1-mediated transcriptional pausing might promote SHM.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper aims at understanding the effects of plasticity in shaping dynamics and structure of cortical circuits, as well as on how that depends on aspects as network structure and dendritic processing.

      Strengths:

      The level of biological detail included is impressive, and the numerical simulations appear to be well executed. Additionally, they have done a commendable job in open-sourcing the model.

      Weaknesses (after revision):

      - As noted in my initial review, the observation that network activity remains stable without an explicit homeostatic mechanism-while acknowledged by the authors as consistent with previous findings (e.g., Higgins et al., 2014)-is not clearly framed as a replication or validation step in the current manuscript. For instance, the abstract states: "In our exploratory simulations, plasticity acted sparsely and specifically, firing rates and weight distributions remained stable without additional homeostatic mechanisms," without noting that this outcome has been previously reported, albeit in models with different levels of biological detail. Furthermore, in the general response to reviewers, the authors list this as the first item in their summary of phenomena accounted for by the model, which gives the impression that it is being presented as a primary result.<br /> If this finding is instead meant to serve as a necessary validation that prior results continue to hold under the authors' extended modeling framework-including multicompartmental neurons, stochastic synaptic transmission, and a modified calcium-based plasticity rule-this should be made more explicit in both the abstract and main text. Unless there were specific reasons to suspect that these model extensions might disrupt previously observed stability, the conceptual contribution of this validation step remains unclear.<br /> I would encourage the authors to revise the manuscript to clarify the role and novelty of this result in the context of existing literature and to briefly motivate why confirming this property in their model was an important step.

      - While the revised manuscript includes improvements in the discussion of the generality and specificity of the findings, it still offers limited interpretability and mechanistic insight. As it stands, the simulations provide limited understanding of the underlying principles or mechanisms at play, which constrains the broader conclusions that can be drawn from the work.

      - In my first review, I suggested that the comparison with the MICrONS dataset could be made more informative-specifically by showing the same quantification of Figure 7D (7B in the previous version) in a version of the model without plasticity and clarifying the interpretation of Figure 8B, where the data appears to align closely with the model before plasticity.<br /> In their response, the authors explain that several of these features remain largely unchanged before and after plasticity. For example, they note that total $g_{\text{AMPA}}$ increases with $k$-edge indegree even in the initial model configuration. I appreciate this clarification, but it highlights a conceptual point that should be more clearly addressed in the manuscript. If the aspects of the model that align with MICrONS data are already present before plasticity, then these similarities reflect properties of the initial network architecture or baseline dynamics, rather than outcomes shaped by the plasticity process itself.<br /> If this interpretation is correct, it represents an interesting and potentially important finding. However, it is not currently articulated in the text. The manuscript places strong emphasis on the role of plasticity in shaping network structure and dynamics, yet the comparisons with MICrONS data appear to reflect features that do not depend on plasticity. Clarifying this distinction would help readers better appreciate the implications of the model-data comparison and discern which conclusions are genuinely supported by the data.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study aims the describe the single-cell transcriptomes of H pylori-associated (Hp) gastric cancers and tumour microenvironment (TME), as a starting point to understand TME diversity stratified by Hp status.<br /> RNAseq was performed for gastric cancers with current Hp+ (from N=9 people), ex-Hp+ (N=6), non-Hp (N=6), and healthy gastric tissue (N=6).<br /> The study expands on previous single-cell transcriptomic studies of gastric cancers and was motivated by previous observations about the effect of H pylori status on therapeutic outcomes. The study includes a brief review of previous work and provides valuable context for this study.

      Strengths:

      The observations are supported by solid RNAseq study design and analysis. The authors describe correlations between Hp status and inferred molecular characteristics including cell lineages, enrichment for cell subclusters identifed as tumour-infiltrating lyphocyte cell types, tumour-infiltrating myeloid cells and cancer-associated fibroblasts.<br /> The observed correlations between Hp status and enrichment of cell subclusters were broadly corroborated using comparisons to deconvolved bulk RNAseq from publicly available gastric cancer data, providing a convincing starting point for understanding the diversity of tumour microenvironment by Hp-status.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors acknowledge several limitations of this study.<br /> The correlations with HP-status are based on a small number of participants per Hp category (N=9 with current Hp+; N=6 for ex-HP+ and non-HP), and would benefit from further validation to establish reproducibility in other cohorts.<br /> The ligand-receptor cross-talk analysis and the suggestion that suppressive T cells could interact with the malignant epithelium through TIGIT-NECTIN2/PVR pairs, are preliminary findings based on transcriptomic analysis and immunostaining and will require further validation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This revised manuscript investigates the role and the mechanism by which PDE1 impacts NSCLC progression, providing solid data to demonstrate that PDE1 binds to m6A reader YTHDF2, in turn, regulating STAT3 signaling pathway through its interaction, promoting metastasis and angiogenesis. The study provides a valuable information to lung cancer field.

      Strength:

      The study uncovers a novel PDE1A/YTHDF2/SOCS2/STAT3 pathway in NSCLC progression and the findings provide a potential treatment strategy for NSCLC patients with metastasis.

      Weakness:

      Given that physical interaction of PDE1A and YTHDF2 plays a critical role in PDE1A-mediated NSCLC metastasis, the in vivo data to show that YTHDF2 mimics the effect of PDE1A in metastasis will strength the manuscript although this point was mentioned in the revised manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors investigate the phosphotransfer capacity of Ser/Thr kinase IκB kinase (IKK), a mediator of cellular inflammation signaling. Canonically, IKK activity is promoted by activation loop phosphorylation at Ser177/Ser181. Active IKK can then unleash NF-κB signaling by phosphorylating repressor IκBα at residues Ser32/Ser26. Noting the reports of other IKK phosphorylation sites, the authors explore the extent of autophosphorylation.

      Semi-phosphorylated IKK purified from Sf9 cells, exhibits the capacity for further autophosphorylation. Anti-phosphotyrosine immunoblotting indicated unexpected tyrosine phosphorylation. Contaminating kinase activity was tested by generating a kinase-dead K44M variant, supporting the notion that the unexpected phosphorylation was IKK-dependent. In addition, the observed phosphotyrosine signal required phosphorylated IKK activation loop serines.

      Two candidate IKK tyrosines were examined as the source of the phosphotyrosine immunoblotting signal. Activation loop residues Tyr169 and Tyr188 were each rendered non-phosphorylatable by mutation to Phe. The Tyr variants decreased both autophosphorylation and phosphotransfer to IκBα. Likewise, Y169F and Y188F IKK2 variants immunoprecipitated from TNFa-stimulated cells also exhibited reduced activity in vitro.

      The authors further focus on Tyr169 phosphorylation, proposing a role as a phospho-sink capable of phosphotransfer to IκBα substrate. This model is reminiscent of the bacterial two-component signaling phosphotransfer from phosphohistidine to aspartate. Efforts are made to phosphorylate IKK2 and remove ATP to assess the capacity for phosphotransfer. Phosphorylation of IκBα is observed after ATP removal, although there are ambiguous requirements for ADP.

      Strengths:

      Ultimately, the authors draw together the lines of evidence for IKK2 phosphotyrosine and ATP-independent phosphotransfer to develop a novel model for IKK2-mediated phosphorylation of IκBα. The model suggests that IKK activation loop Ser phosphorylation primes the kinase for tyrosine autophosphorylation. With the assumption that IKK retains the bound ADP, the phosphotyrosine is conformationally available to relay the phosphate to IκBα substrate. The authors are clearly aware of the high burden of evidence required for this unusual proposed mechanism. Indeed, many possible artifacts (e.g., contaminating kinases or ATP) are anticipated and control experiments are included to address many of these concerns. The analysis hinges on the fidelity of pan-specific phosphotyrosine antibodies, and the authors have probed with two different anti-phosphotyrosine antibody clones. Taken together, the observations are thought-provoking, and I look forward to seeing this model tested in a cellular system.

      Weaknesses:

      Multiple phosphorylated tyrosines in IKK2 were apparently identified by mass spectrometric analyses. LC-MS/MS spectra are presented, but fragments supporting phospho-Y188 and Y325 are difficult to distinguish from noise. It is common to find non-physiological post-translational modifications in over-expressed proteins from recombinant sources. Are these IKK2 phosphotyrosines evident by MS in IKK2 immunoprecipitated from TNFa-stimulated cells? Identifying IKK2 phosphotyrosine sites from cells would be especially helpful in supporting the proposed model.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Brickwedde et al. investigate the role of alpha oscillations in allocating intermodal attention. A first EEG study is followed up with an MEG study that largely replicates the pattern of results (with small to be expected differences). They conclude that a brief increase in the amplitude of auditory and visual stimulus-driven continuous (steady-state) brain responses prior to the presentation of an auditory - but not visual - target speaks to the modulating role of alpha that leads them to revise a prevalent model of gating-by-inhibition.

      Overall, this is an interesting study on a timely question, conducted with methods and analysis that are state-of-the-art. I am particularly impressed by the author's decision to replicate the earlier EEG experiment in MEG following the reviewer's comments on the original submission. Evidently, great care was taken to accommodate the reviewers suggestions.

      In an earlier version, I was struggling with the report for two main reasons: It was difficult to follow the rationale of the study, due to structural issues with the narrative and missing information or justifications for design and analysis decisions, and I was not convinced that the evidence is strong, or even relevant enough for revising the mentioned alpha inhibition theory.

      The authors have addressed my concerns through extensive revisions, and I find that it is now easier to follow, and makes a better case for rethinking how alpha may influence sensory processing through a clearer presentation of results and additional arguments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      In this study, the authors used RNAscope to explore the expression of RTN4RL2 RNA in hair cells and spiral ganglia. Through RTN4RL2 gene knockout mice, they demonstrated that the absence of RTN4RL2 leads to pre-synaptic changes of an increase in the size of presynaptic ribbons and a depolarized shift in the activation of calcium channels in inner hair cells. Additionally, they observed a post-synaptic reduction in GluA2-4 AMPA receptors and identified additional "orphan PSDs" not paired with presynaptic ribbons via immunostaining and an increased number of type I SGNs that are not connected with a ribbon synapse via serial block face imaging. These synaptic alterations ultimately resulted in an increased hearing threshold in mice, confirming that the RTN4RL2 gene is essential for normal hearing. These data are intriguing as they suggest that RTN4RL2 contributes to the proper formation and function of auditory afferent synapses and is critical for normal hearing. Most strikingly, the post-synaptic changes and hearing threshold changes are similar to recently published results by Carlton et al, 2024 on a mutation in Bai1, which is a potential binding partner for RTN4RL2. Overall this work provides some clues to the function of RTN4RL2 in the cochlea, but further studies are required to elucidate the function.

      A few points would improve the manuscript and the strength of the data presented.

      (1) A quantitative assessment is necessary in Figure 1 when discussing RNA scope data. It would be beneficial to show that expression levels are quantitatively reduced in KO mice compared to wild-type mice. This suggestion also applies to Figure 3D, which examines expression levels of Gria2. Data is provided for KO reduction in SGN, but not showing that hair cell labeling is specific. If slides are not available for the young ages, showing hair cell expression at P40 would be sufficient along with a loss of labeling at in the KO at P40.

      (2) In Figure 2, the authors present a morphological analysis of synapses and discuss the presence of "orphan PSDs." I agree that Homer1 not juxtaposed with Ctbp2 is increased in KO mice compared to the control group. However, in quantifying this, they opted to measure the number of Ctbp2 puncta with Homer 1 juxtaposed, which indicates the percentages of orphan ribbons rather than directly quantifying the number of Homer1 not juxtaposed with Ctbp2. Quantifying the number of Homer1 not juxtaposed with Ctbp2 would more clearly represent "orphan PSDs" and provide stronger support for the discussion surrounding their presence. A measurement of these was provided in the rebuttal letter, and while this number much more clearly demonstrates the increase in the number of orphan puncta, this analysis is not provided in the manuscript. This number also suggests the number of orphan receptors may be quite high, outnumbering ribbons 2:1.

      (3) In Figure 3, the authors discuss GluA2/3 puncta reduction and note that Gria2 RNA expression remains unchanged. However, the GluA2/3 labeling is done at 1-1.5 months, whereas the Gria2 RNAscope is done at P4. Additionally, there is a lack of quantification for Gria2 RNA expression due to their tissue being processed separately. RNA scope at a comparable age to the GluA2/3 would be stronger support for their statement that Gria2 expression is comparable despite a reduction in GluA2/3 puncta.

      (4) In Figure 4, the authors indicate that RTN4RL2 deficiency reduces the number of type 1 SGNs connected to ribbons. Given that the number of ribbons remains unchanged (Figure 2), it is important to clearly explain the implications of this finding. It is already known that each type I SGN forms a single synaptic contact with a single IHC. The fact that the number of ribbons remains constant while additional "orphan PSDs" are present suggests that the overall number of SGNs might need to increase to account for these findings, however, the authors noted no change in the number of SGN soma. This discrepancy is important to point out.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors had two aims: First, to decompose the attentional blink (AB) deficit into the two components of signal detection theory: sensitivity and bias. Second, the authors aimed to assess the two subcomponents of sensitivity: detection and discrimination. They observed that the AB is only expressed in sensitivity. Furthermore, detection and discrimination were doubly dissociated. Detection modulated N2p and P3 ERP amplitude, but not frontoparietal beta-band coherence, whereas this pattern was reversed for discrimination.

      Strengths:

      The experiment is elegantly designed, and the data -both behavioral and electrophysiological- are aptly analyzed. The outcomes, in particular the dissociation between detection and discrimination blinks, are very consistently and clearly supported by the results. The discussion of the results is also appropriately balanced.

      Weaknesses:

      The lack of an effect of stimulus contrast does not seem very surprising from what we know of the nature of AB already. Low-level perceptual factors are not thought to cause the AB. This is fine, as there are also other, novel findings reported. In their revision, the authors have bolstered the importance of these (null) findings by referring to AB-specific papers that would have predicted different outcomes in this regard.

      The ERP analyses are extended in the revised manuscript, including those of the N1 component, which is now more appropriately analyzed at more lateral electrode sites.

      Impact & Context:<br /> The results of this study will likely influence how we think about selective attention in the context of the AB phenomenon. In their revision, the authors have further extended their theoretical framing by referring to recent work on the nature of the AB deficit, showing that it can be discrete (all-or-none) and gradual.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to explore and better understand the complex topographical organization of the human pulvinar, a brain region crucial for various high-order functions such as perception and attention. They sought to move beyond traditional histological subdivisions by investigating continuous 'gradients' of cortical connections along the dorsoventral and mediolateral axes. Using advanced imaging techniques and a comprehensive PET atlas of neurotransmitter receptors, the study aimed to identify and characterize these gradients in terms of structural connections, functional coactivation, and molecular binding patterns. Ultimately, the authors targeted to provide a more nuanced understanding of pulvinar anatomy and its implications for brain function in both healthy and diseased states.

      Strengths:

      A key strength of this study lies in the authors' effort to comprehensively combine multimodal data, encompassing both functional and structural connectomics, alongside the analysis of major neurotransmitter distributions. This approach enabled a more nuanced understanding of the overarching organizational principles of the pulvinar nucleus within the broader context of whole-brain connectivity. By employing cortex-wide correlation analyses of multimodal embedding patterns derived from 'gradients,' which provide spatial maps reflecting the underlying connectomic and molecular similarities across voxels, the study offers a thorough characterization of the functional neuroanatomy of the pulvinar.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite its strengths, the current manuscript falls short in presenting the authors' unique perspectives on integrating the diverse biological principles derived from the various neuroimaging modalities. The findings are predominantly reported as correlations between different gradient maps, without providing the in-depth interpretations that would allow for a more comprehensive understanding of the pulvinar's role as a central hub in the brain's network.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This work describes the single-cell expression profiling of thousands of cells of recombinant genotypes from a model natural-variation system, a cross between two divergent yeast strains.

      I appreciate the addition of lines 282-291, which now makes the authors' point about one advantage of the single-cell technique for eQTL mapping clearly: the authors don't need to normalize for culture-to-culture variation the way standard bulk methods do (e.g. in Albert et al., 2018 for the current yeast cross), and without this normalization, they can integrate analyses of expression with those of estimates of growth behaviors from the abundance of a genotype in the pool. The main question the manuscript addresses with the latter, in Figure 3, is how much variation in growth appears to have nothing to do with expression, for which the answer the authors given is 30%. I agree that this represents a novel finding. The caveats are (1) the particular point will perhaps only be interesting to a small slice of the eQTL research community; (2) the authors provide no statistical controls/error estimate or independent validation of the variance partitioning analysis in Figure 3, and (3) the authors don't seem to use the single-cell growth/fitness estimates for anything else, as Figure 4 uses loci mapped to growth from a previously published, standard culture-by-culture approach. It would be appropriate for the manuscript to mention these caveats.

      I also think it is not appropriate for the manuscript to avoid a comparison between the current work and Boocock et al., which reports single-cell eQTL mapping in the same yeast system. I recommend a citation and statement of the similarities and differences between the papers.

      I appreciate the new statement about the single-cell technique affording better power in eQTL mapping (lines 445-453).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Whole-brain network modeling is a common type of dynamical systems-based method to create individualized models of brain activity incorporating subject-specific structural connectome inferred from diffusion imaging data. This type of model has often been used to infer biophysical parameters of the individual brain that cannot be directly measured using neuroimaging but may be relevant to specific cognitive functions or diseases. Here, Ziaeemehr et al introduce a new toolkit, named "Virtual Brain Inference" (VBI), offering a new computational approach for estimating these parameters using Bayesian inference powered by artificial neural networks. The basic idea is to use simulated data, given known parameters, to train artificial neural networks to solve the inverse problem, namely, to infer the posterior distribution over the parameter space given data-derived features. The authors have demonstrated the utility of the toolkit using simulated data from several commonly used whole-brain network models in case studies.

      Strengths:

      (1) Model inversion is an important problem in whole-brain network modeling. The toolkit presents a significant methodological step up from common practices, with the potential to broadly impact how the community infers model parameters.

      (2) Notably, the method allows the estimation of the posterior distribution of parameters instead of a point estimation, which provides information about the uncertainty of the estimation, which is generally lacking in existing methods.

      (3) The case studies were able to demonstrate the detection of degeneracy in the parameters, which is important. Degeneracy is quite common in this type of model. If not handled mindfully, they may lead to spurious or stable parameter estimation. Thus, the toolkit can potentially be used to improve feature selection or to simply indicate the uncertainty.

      (4) In principle, the posterior distribution can be directly computed given new data without doing any additional simulation, which could improve the efficiency of parameter inference on the artificial neural network if well-trained.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While the posterior estimator was trained with a large quantity of simulated data, the testing/validation is only demonstrated with a single case study (one point in parameter space) per model. This is not sufficient to demonstrate the method's accuracy and reliability, but only its feasibility. Demonstrating the accuracy and reliability of the posterior estimation in large test sets would inspire more confidence.

      (2) The authors have only demonstrated validation of the method using simulated data, but not features derived from actual EEG/MEG or fMRI data. So, it is unclear if the posterior estimator, when applied to real data, would produce results as sensible as using simulated data. Human data can often look quite different from the simulated data, which may be considered out of distribution. Thus, the authors should consider using simulated test data with out-of-distribution parameters to validate the method and using real human data to demonstrate, e.g., the reliability of the method across sessions.

      (3) The z-scores used to measure prediction error are generally between 1-3, which seems quite large to me. It would give readers a better sense of the utility of the method if comparisons to simpler methods, such as k-nearest neighbor methods, are provided in terms of accuracy.

      (4) A lot of simulations are required to train the posterior estimator, which seems much more than existing approaches. Inferring from Figure S1, at the required order of magnitudes of the number of simulations, the simulation time could range from days to years, depending on the hardware. Although once the estimator is well-trained, the parameter inverse given new data will be very fast, it is not clear to me how often such use cases would be encountered. Because the estimator is trained based on an individual connectome, it can only be used to do parameter inversion for the same subject. Typically, we only have one session of resting state data from each participant, while longitudinal resting state data where we can assume the structural connectome remains constant, is rare. Thus, the cost-efficiency and practical utility of training such a posterior estimator remains unclear.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The cerebellum is known to be vulnerable to aging, yet specific cell type vulnerability remains understudied. This important study convincingly demonstrates that the normal aged mouse cerebellum exhibits Purkinje cell loss, and that the vulnerable PCs to age are arranged on the basis of the known zebrin stripe pattern that represents a particular subtype of the PCs. Although the patterns of PC loss were analyzed qualitatively, the phenotype is robust enough to clearly appreciate that PC loss occurs predominantly in zebrin-negative regions when combined with zebrin immunohistochemistry. Interestingly, the authors demonstrate that this phenotype appears stochastically even within the inbred C57BL/6J mouse strain examined, though the mechanisms behind this individual variability remain unexplored. In contrast to the expectation that the PC loss could account for age-related motor decline, the authors did not find any correlation between them. While the authors attempt to draw parallels with normal human aging, the human phenotypes have not been conclusively shown to match those in mice beyond the occurrence of potentially age-related PC loss. Future studies should investigate why this PC loss phenotype occurs stochastically across the population and whether these findings parallel human cerebellar aging.

      Strength:

      (1) Banding pattern of PC loss is very clearly demonstrated by combining immunostaining for zebrin.

      (2) A critical methodological concern that a standard PC marker, calbindin, could be compromised in aging has been addressed by performing control experiments with appropriate counterstaining.

      (3) Parallels with neurodegenerative phenotype would be helpful to understand the mechanisms of PC loss in the future.

      Weakness:

      (1) Limited strain diversity: The study exclusively uses C57BL/6J mice despite known genetic and motor differences even the closely related strains like C57BL/6N.

      (2) No correlation quantified between the degree of PC loss, aging, and motor performance.

      (3) It has not been demonstrated whether the neurodegenerative changes are indeed observed in zebrin-negative PCs.

      (4) The mechanisms of why only a subset of mice show PC loss remain unexplored and not discussed.

      (5) Linkages with normal human aging and cerebellar function are not well supported. While motor behavioral assays captured phenotypes that mimic aged people, correlation with PC loss is demonstrated to be absent in mice. It remains unclear whether this PC loss phenomenon is universal or specific to a particular individual; and whether specific to a human PC subtype.

      (6) Analyses in the paraflocculus are currently not easy to understand. This lobule has heterogeneous PC subtypes, developmentally or molecularly. Zebrin-weak and Zebrin-intense PCs are known to be arranged in stripes, which resembles the pattern of developmentally defined PC subsets (Fujita et al., 2014, Plos one; Fujita et al., 2012, J Neurosci). In the data presented, it is hard to appreciate whether the viewing angle is consistent relative to the angle of the paraflocculus. This may be a limitation of the analysis of the paraflocculus in general, that the orientation of this lobule is so susceptible to fixation and dissection. Discrepancy between PC loss stripe and zebrin pattern may be an overstatement, because appropriate analyses on the paraflocculus would require a rigorously standardized analytic method.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors were building on prior research linking cortical norepinephrine in a test of attentional set shifting. They extended prior research by assessing the effects of excitatory or inhibitory DREADDs prior to the test of attentional set shifting.

      Strengths:

      The use of DREADDs in the previously validated test of attentional set shifting improves temporal control of corticopetal, noradrenergic pathways during behavior. While mice typically require multiple intradimensional shifts to form an attentional set, the subjects in the current study perform a variant of the task similar to that used in humans, improving the translational validity of the work.

      Weaknesses:

      A critical piece of evidence needed to support the behavioral claim that mice form an attentional set is a statistically significant difference between the number of trials to reach criterion at the intradimensional vs. the extradimensional stage of the task. Based on prior literature, this could be done as a planned comparison, which would improve the power to detect differences beyond that found using an HSD test. An additional methodological ambiguity is the amount of time between the administration of CNO and the performance of the ED. As reported, it seems likely that the DREADDS were impacting performance at multiple stages of the test.

      Overall, the authors seem to have achieved their aims, but have failed to provide critical statistical support for claims made.

      The work is likely to be of interest to the burgeoning number of scientists investigating the role of cortical norepinephrine in cognitive flexibility.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This Phase II clinical trial investigates the combination of Gamma Knife Stereotactic Body Radiation Therapy (SBRT) with Tislelizumab for the treatment of metastatic colorectal cancer (mCRC) in patients with proficient mismatch repair (pMMR). The study addresses a critical clinical challenge in the management of pMMR CRC, focusing on the selection of appropriate candidates. The results suggest that the combination of Gamma Knife SBRT and Tislelizumab provides a safe and potent treatment option for patients with pMMR/MSS/MSI-L mCRC who have become refractory to first- and second-line chemotherapy. The study design is rigorous, and the outcomes are promising.

      Advantage:

      The trial design was meticulously structured, and appropriate statistical methods were employed to rigorously analyze the results. Bioinformatics approaches were utilized to further elucidate alterations in the patient's tumor microenvironment and to explore the underlying factors contributing to the observed differences in treatment efficacy. The conclusions drawn from this trial offer valuable insights for managing advanced colorectal cancer in patients who have not responded to first- and second-line therapies.

      Weakness:

      (1) Clarity and Structure of the Abstract<br /> - Results Section: The results section should contain important data, I suggest some important sequencing data should be shown to enhance understanding.<br /> (2) As the author using the NanoString assay for transcriptome analysis, more detail should be shown such as the version of R, and the bioinformatics analysis methods.<br /> (3) It is interesting for included patients that PD-L1 increase expression after Gamma Knife Stereotactic Body Radiation Therapy (SBRT) treatment, How to explain it?<br /> (4) It would be helpful to include a brief discussion of the limitations of the study, such as sample size constraints and their impact on the generalizability of the results. This will give readers a more comprehensive understanding of the findings.<br /> (5) Language Accuracy: There are a few instances where wording could be more professional or precise.

      Revision comment:

      The author had responded to all questions and improved the manuscript. The author's answers and revisions are very satisfactory to me. I believe it is an important study for the immunotherapy of colorectal cancer.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study of Rollenhagen et al examines the ultrastructural features of Layer 1 of human temporal cortex. The tissue was derived from drug-resistant epileptic patients undergoing surgery, and was selected as further from the epilepsy focus, and as such considered to be non-epileptic. The analyses has included 4 patients with different age, sex, medication and onset of epilepsy. The manuscript is a follow-on study with 3 previous publications from the same authors on different layers of the temporal cortex:

      Layer 4 - Yakoubi et al 2019 eLife<br /> Layer 5 - Yakoubi et al 2019 Cerebral Cortex,<br /> Layer 6 - Schmuhl-Giesen et al 2022 Cerebral Cortex

      They find, the L1 synaptic boutons mainly have single active zone a very large pool of synaptic vesicles and are mostly devoid of astrocytic coverage.

      Strengths:

      The MS is well written easy to read. Result section gives a detailed set of figures showing many morphological parameters of synaptic boutons and surrounding glial elements. The authors provide comparative data of all the layers examined by them so far in the Discussion. Given that anatomical data in human brain are still very limited, the current MS has substantial relevance.<br /> The work appears to be generally well done, the EM and EM tomography images are of very good quality. The analyses is clear and precise.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors made all the corrections required and answered all of my concerns, included additional data sets, and clarified statements where needed.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors hypothesized that chemostat propagated viromes could modulate the GM and reduce NEC lesions while avoiding potential side effects, such as the earlier onset of diarrhea. This is interesting.

      Major Comments:

      (1) As the authors state that the aim of the research is 'We hypothesized that chemostat propagated viromes could modulate the GM and reduce NEC lesions while avoiding potential side effects, such as earlier onset of diarrhea'.<br /> a) For the efficacy, in Figure 5, there is no significance in stomach pathology and enterocolitis between groups, even between the control group and experimental groups, is it because of the low incidence of NEC? This may affect the statistical power of the conclusions. Therefore, it is unclear how one can draw the conclusion that chemostat can reduce NEC lesions?<br /> b) Convincing pathology images would be helpful.<br /> c) For the safety, such as body weight development, FVT had no statistical significance difference from control, CVT, and CVT-MO. So how can the authors draw the conclusion that chemostat can avoid potential side effects?<br /> d) There is a lack of evidence to convince the reader that there is a decrease in eukaryotic viruses. More quantitative data here would be useful.

      (2) Questions regarding Figure 3F:<br /> a) How can the medium have 'the baseline viral content'?<br /> b) What is the statistical significance of the relative abundance of specific eukaryotic viruses?<br /> c) The hosts for some of the listed eukaryotic viruses are neither pigs or humans, as such, the significance of a decrease in these viruses to humans is unclear.

      (3) In this study, pH 6.5 was selected as the pH value for chemostat cultivation, but considering the different adaptability of different bacteria to pH, it is recommended to further explore the effect of pH on bacteria and virus groups. In particular, it was optimized to maintain the growth of beneficial bacteria such as Lactobacillaceae and Bacteroides in order to improve the effect of chemostat cultivation.

      (4) Please improve the quality of the images, charts, error bars, and statistical significance markers throughout and mark the n's. used in each experiment.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Trac, Huang, et al used the AZ Drug Combination Prediction DREAM challenge data to make a new random forest-based model for drug synergy. They make comparisons to the winning method and also show that their model has some predictive capacity for a completely different dataset. They highlight the ability of the model to be interpretable in terms of pathway and target interactions for synergistic effects.

      In their revised manuscript and response, the authors have tried to address all points. I do not fully agree with them about the definition of overfitting still. If the objective it to identify synergies given any 2 drugs, not just those in a dataset at different doses, then the results certainly appear overfit to the training set given the performance degradation. However, at this time, I cannot add any useful suggestions to improve performance.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Liu and colleagues applied Mendelian Randomization (MR) techniques to study the causal relationship of atherosclerosis (categorized into four subtypes) and intracranial aneurysms (classified as unruptured or ruptured), as well as the potential mediation by 12 plasma matrix metalloproteinase (MMP) levels. The authors have followed rigorous MR analysis guidelines by using multiple analytical approaches, implementing strict selection criteria, and employing comprehensive sensitivity analyses. One of the strengths is the lack of overlapping samples in their two-sample MR analysis. This approach helps mitigate potential biases and increases the reliability of their causal inference. The analysis is fundamentally sound, but there are still several nuanced areas where the methodology could be strengthened. Given that most of the identified causal associations do not hold after correcting for multiple tests, the conclusions should be carefully reviewed to be fully supported by the results.

      The recommendations below are meant to enhance the already robust approach.

      (1) The selection of 12 MMPs lacks a clear, explicit rationale in the provided excerpt. A more detailed explanation of why these specific MMPs were chosen would strengthen the methodological rigor.

      (2) Adjusting p-value for multiple testing using Bonferroni correction needs to be elucidated better.

      (3) The authors should provide a more robust explanation of why they shifted from 5×10-9 to 5×10-6 to select genomic instruments.

      (4) Egger's intercept may be a more robust approach for this study to test horizontal pleiotropy rather than MR-PRESSO.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      The report by Dalas and colleagues introduces a significant novelty in the field of pentameric ligand-gated ion channels (pLGICs). Within this family of receptors, numerous structures are available, but a widely recognised problem remains in assigning structures to functional states observed in biological membranes. Here, the authors obtain both structural and functional information of a pLGIC in a liposome environment. The model receptor ELIC is captured in the resting, desensitized, and open states. Structures in large nanodiscs, possibly biased by receptor-scaffold protein interactions, are also reported. Altogether, these results set the stage for the adoption of liposomes as a proxy for the biological membranes, for cryoEM studies of pLGICs and membrane proteins in general.

      Strengths

      The structural data is comprehensive, with structures in liposomes in the 3 main states (and for each, both inward-facing and outward-facing), and an agonist-bound structure in the large spNW25 nanodisc (and a retreatment of previous data obtained in a smaller disc). It adds up to a series of work from the same team that constitutes a much-needed exploration of various types of environment for the transmembrane domain of pLGICs. The structural analysis is thorough.

      The tone of the report is particularly pleasant, in the sense that the authors' claims are not inflated. For instance, a sentence such as "By performing structural and functional characterization under the same reconstitution conditions, we increase our confidence in the functional annotation of these structures." is exemplary.

      Weaknesses

      Core parts of the method are not described and/or discussed in enough detail. While I do believe that liposomes will be, in most cases, better than, say, nanodiscs, the process that leads from the protein in its membrane down to the liposome will play a big role in preserving the native structure, and should be an integral part of the report. Therefore, I strongly felt that biochemistry should be better described and discussed. The results section starts with "Optimal reconstitution of ELIC in liposomes [...] was achieved by dialysis". There is no information on why dialysis is optimal, what it was compared to, the distribution of liposome sizes using different preparation techniques, etc... Reading the title, I would have expected a couple of paragraphs and figure panels on liposome reconstitution. Similarly, potential biochemical challenges are not discussed. The methods section mentions that the sample was "dialyzed [...] over 5-7 days". In such a time window, most of the members of this protein family would aggregate, and it is therefore a protocol that can not be directly generalised. This has to be mentioned explicitly, and a discussion on why this can't be done in two days, what else the authors tested (biobeads? ... ?) would strengthen the manuscript.

      To a lesser extent, the relative lack of both technical details and of a broad discussion also pertains to the cryoEM and thallium flux results. Regarding the cryoEM part, the authors focus their analysis on reconstructions from outward-facing particles on the basis of their better resolutions, yet there was little discussion about it. Is it common for liposome-based structures? Are inward-facing reconstructions worse because of the increased background due to electrons going through two membranes? Are there often impurities inside the liposomes (we see some in the figures)? The influence of the membrane mimetics on conformation could be discussed by referring to other families of proteins where it has been explored (for instance, ABC transporters, but I'm sure there are many other examples). If there are studies in other families of channels in liposomes that were inspirational, those could be mentioned. Regarding thallium flux assays, one argument is that they give access to kinetics and set the stage for time-resolved cryoEM, but if I did not miss it, no comparison of kinetics with other techniques, such as electrophysiology, nor references to eventual pioneer time-resolved studies are provided.

      Altogether, in my view, an updated version would benefit from insisting on every aspect of the methodological development. I may well be wrong, but I see this paper more like a milestone on sample prep for cryoEM imaging than being about the details of the ELIC conformations.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This Phase II clinical trial investigates the combination of Gamma Knife Stereotactic Body Radiation Therapy (SBRT) with Tislelizumab for the treatment of metastatic colorectal cancer (mCRC) in patients with proficient mismatch repair (pMMR). The study addresses a critical clinical challenge in the management of pMMR CRC, focusing on the selection of appropriate candidates. The results suggest that the combination of Gamma Knife SBRT and Tislelizumab provides a safe and potent treatment option for patients with pMMR/MSS/MSI-L mCRC who have become refractory to first- and second-line chemotherapy. The study design is rigorous, and the outcomes are promising.

      Advantage:

      The trial design was meticulously structured, and appropriate statistical methods were employed to rigorously analyze the results. Bioinformatics approaches were utilized to further elucidate alterations in the patient's tumor microenvironment and to explore the underlying factors contributing to the observed differences in treatment efficacy. The conclusions drawn from this trial offer valuable insights for managing advanced colorectal cancer in patients who have not responded to first- and second-line therapies.

      Weakness:

      (1) Clarity and Structure of the Abstract<br /> - Results Section: The results section should contain important data, I suggest some important sequencing data should be shown to enhance understanding.<br /> (2) As the author using the NanoString assay for transcriptome analysis, more detail should be shown such as the version of R, and the bioinformatics analysis methods.<br /> (3) It is interesting for included patients that PD-L1 increase expression after Gamma Knife Stereotactic Body Radiation Therapy (SBRT) treatment, How to explain it?<br /> (4) It would be helpful to include a brief discussion of the limitations of the study, such as sample size constraints and their impact on the generalizability of the results. This will give readers a more comprehensive understanding of the findings.<br /> (5) Language Accuracy: There are a few instances where wording could be more professional or precise.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Ning and colleagues present studies supporting a role for breast carcinoma amplified sequence 2 (Bcas2) in positively regulating primitive wave hematopoiesis through amplification of beta-catenin-dependent (canonical) Wnt signaling. The authors present compelling evidence that zebrafish bcas2 is expressed at the right time and place to be involved in primitive hematopoiesis, that there are primitive hematopoietic defects in hetero- and homozygous mutant and knockdown embryos, that Bcas2 mechanistically positively regulates canonical Wnt signaling, and that Bcas2 is required for nuclear retention of B-cat through physical interaction involving armadillo repeats 9-12 of B-cat and the coiled-coil domains of Bcas2. Overall, the data and writing are clean, clear, and compelling. This study is a first rate analysis of a strong phenotype with highly supportive mechanistic data. The findings shed light on the controversial question of whether, when, and how canonical Wnt signaling may be involved in hematopoietic development.

      In the revised version of their previous work, they have included responses to some of our suggestions for minor experiments and edits. We previously suggested they examine the structural compatibility of a Bcas2/beta-catenin dimer with binding to the DNA-binding protein Tcf7l1 (previously Tcf3), which would be expected for a beta-catenin nuclear-retention factor that potentiates canonical Wnt signaling responses. Although the authors did not test compatibility of Bcas2 with Tcf3 binding to beta-catenin, they show that a three-way complex with the family member Tcf4 is possible (Fig. S12), which suggests that Lef/Tcf family binding in general is plausible.

      The authors' acceptance of our suggestion to evaluate cdx and hox gene expression is welcome, as these genes have previously been defined as canonical Wnt targets (Lengerke et al., 2009) that regionalize the lateral plate mesoderm (LPM) and confer pre-hematopoietic identity there (Davidson et al., 2003; Davidson and Zon, 2004). The authors' finding that cdx4 and hoxa9a are diminished in the bcas2 mutants (Fig. S7) validates this suggestion and seem to imply that the primary defect here is specification of the early hematopoietic field in the LPM, however the results are a little confusing or surprising given that scl - which is unaffected in the bcas2 mutant (Fig. 2A) - is a downstream target of Cdx4 (Davidson et al., 2003, Fig. 1b, 3d). The results in the current submission imply that early maintenance of pre-hematopoietic competence in the LPM is a canonical-Wnt-directed phenomenon separable from the earliest specification of the hematopoietic field. We believe it would be of value to further evaluate regulation of cdx1, which has been shown to cooperate with cdx4 in regulation of the LPM hematopoietic field, as well as analyze some of the putative downstream hox family targets.

      We previously reviewed the article as suitable for publication and we continue to support our prior assessment. The authors have presented strong data supporting a role for Bcas2 in hematopoietic development across phyla and a mechanistic involvement in promoting canonical Wnt signaling.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study features clear and compelling phenotypes and results.<br /> (2) The manuscript narrative exposition and writing are clear and compelling.<br /> (3) The authors have attended to important technical nuances sometimes overlooked, for example, focusing on different pools of cytosolic or nuclear b-catenin.<br /> (4) The study sheds light on a controversial subject: regulation of hematopoietic development by canonical Wnt signaling and presents clear evidence of a role.<br /> (5) The authors present evidence of phylogenetic conservation of the pathway.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This paper describes an interesting observation that ER-targeted misfolded proteins are trapped within vesicles inside nucleus to facilitate quality control during cell division. This work supports the concept that transient sequestration of misfolded proteins is a fundamental mechanism of protein quality control. The authors satisfactorily addressed several points asked in the review of first submission. The manuscript is improved but still unable to fully address the mechanisms.

      Strengths:

      The observations in this manuscript are very interesting and open up many questions on proteostasis biology.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite inclusions of several protein-level experiments, the manuscript remained a microscopy-driven work and missed the opportunity to work out the mechanisms behind the observations.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      The study is an innovative and fundamental study that clarified important aspects of brain processes for integration of information from speech and iconic gesture (i.e., gesture that depicts action, movement, and shape), based on tDCS, TMS and EEG experiments. They evaluated their speech and gesture stimuli in information-theoretic ways and calculated how informative speech is (i.e., entropy), how informative gesture is, and how much shared information speech and gesture encode. The tDCS and TMS studies found that the left IFG and pMTG, the two areas that were activated in fMRI studies on speech-gesture integration in the previous literature, are causally implicated in speech-gesture integration. The size of tDC and TMS effects are correlated with entropy of the stimuli or mutual information, which indicates that the effects stems from the modulation of information decoding/integration processes. The EEG study showed that various ERP (event-related potential, e.g., N1-P2, N400, LPC) effects that have been observed in speech-gesture integration experiments in the previous literature are modulated by the entropy of speech/gesture and mutual information. This makes it clear that these effects are related to information decoding processes. The authors propose a model of how speech-gesture integration process unfolds in time, and how IFG and pMTG interact with each other in that process.

      Strengths

      The key strength of this study is that the authors used information-theoretic measures of their stimuli (i.e., entropy and mutual information between speech and gesture) in all of their analyses. This made it clear that the neuro-modulation (tDCS, TMS) affected information decoding/integration and ERP effects reflect information decoding/integration. This study used tDCS and TMS methods to demonstrate that left IFG and pMTG are causally involved in speech-gesture integration. The size of tDCS and TMS effects are correlated with information-theoretic measures of the stimuli, which indicate that the effects indeed stem from disruption/facilitation of information decoding/integration process (rather than generic excitation/inhibition). The authors' results also showed correlation between information-theoretic measures of stimuli with various ERP effects. This indicates that these ERP effects reflect the information decoding/integration process.

      Weakness

      The "mutual information" cannot capture all types of interplay of the meaning of speech and gesture. The mutual information is calculated based on what information can be decoded from speech alone and what information can be decoded from gesture alone. However, when speech and gesture are combined, a novel meaning can emerge, which cannot be decoded from a single modality alone. When example, a person produce a gesture of writing something with a pen, while saying "He paid". The speech-gesture combination can be interpreted as "paying by signing a cheque". It is highly unlikely that this meaning is decoded when people hear speech only or see gestures only. The current study cannot address how such speech-gesture integration occur in the brain, and what ERP effects may reflect such a process. The future studies can classify different types of speech-gesture integration and investigate neural processes that underlie each type. Another important topic for future studies is to investigate how the neural processes of speech-gesture integration change when the relative timing between the speech stimulus and the gesture stimulus changes.

      Comments on revisions: The authors addressed my concerns well.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Luo et. al. use SHAPE-MaP to find suitable RNA targets in Porcine Epidemic Diarrhoea Virus. Results show that dynamic and transient structures are good targets for small molecules, and that exposed strand regions are adequate targets for siRNA. This work is important to segment the RNA targeting.

      Strengths:

      This work is well done and the data supports its findings and conclusions. When possible, more than one technique was used to confirm some of the findings.

      Weaknesses:

      The study uses a cell line that is not porcine (not the natural target of the virus). That being said, authors used a widely used cell line that has been used in similar studies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Noise invariance is an essential computation in sensory systems for stable perception across a wide range of contexts. In this paper, Landemard et al. perform functional ultrasound imaging across primary, secondary, and tertiary auditory cortex in ferrets to uncover the mesoscale organization of background invariance in auditory cortex. Consistent with previous work, they find that background invariance increases throughout the cortical hierarchy. Importantly, they find that background invariance is largely explained by progressive changes in spectrotemporal tuning across cortical stations, which are biased towards foreground sound features. To test if these results are broadly relevant, they then re-analyze human fMRI data and find that spectro-temporal tuning fails to explain background invariance in human auditory cortex.

      Strengths:

      (1) Novelty of approach: Though the authors have published on this technique previously, functional ultrasound imaging offers unprecedented temporal and spatial resolution in a species where large-scale calcium imaging is not possible and electrophysiological mapping would take weeks or months. Combining mesoscale imaging with a clever stimulus paradigm, they address a fundamental question in sensory coding.

      (2) Quantification and execution: The results are generally clear and well supported by statistical quantification.

      (3) Elegance of modeling: The spectrotemporal model presented here is explained clearly and, most importantly, provides a compelling framework for understanding differences in background invariance across cortical areas.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Interpretation of the cerebral blood volume signal: While the results are compelling, more caution should be exercised by the authors in framing their results, given that they are measuring an indirect measure of neural activity, this is the difference between stating "CBV in area MEG was less background invariant than in higher areas" vs. saying "MEG was less background invariant than other areas". Beyond framing, the basic properties of the CBV signal should be better explored:

      a) Cortical vasculature is highly structured (e.g. Kirst et al.( 2020) Cell). One potential explanation for the results is simply differences in vasculature and blood flow between primary and secondary areas of auditory cortex, even if fUS is sensitive to changes in blood flow, changes in capillary beds, etc (Mace et al., 2011) Nat. Methods.. This concern could be addressed by either analyzing spontaneous fluctuations in the CBV signal during silent periods or computing a signal-to-noise ratio of voxels across areas across all sound types. This is especially important given the complex 3D geometry of gyri and sulci in the ferret brain.

      b) Figure 1 leaves the reader uncertain what exactly is being encoded by the CBV signal, as temporal responses to different stimuli look very similar in the examples shown. One possibility is that the CBV is an acoustic change signal. In that case, sounds that are farther apart in acoustic space from previous sounds would elicit larger responses, which is straightforward to test. Another possibility is that the fUS signal reflects time-varying features in the acoustic signal (e.g. the low-frequency envelope). This could be addressed by cross-correlating the stimulus envelope with fUS waveform. The third possibility, which the authors argue, is that the magnitude of the fUS signal encodes the stimulus ID. A better understanding of the justification for only looking at the fUS magnitude in a short time window (2-4.8 s re: stimulus onset) would increase my confidence in the results.

      (2) Interpretation of the human data: The authors acknowledge in the discussion that there are several differences between fMRI and fUS. The results would be more compelling if they performed a control analysis where they downsampled the Ferret fUS data spatially and temporally to match the resolution of fMRI and demonstrated that their ferret results hold with lower spatiotemporal resolution.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      It is my pleasure to review this manuscript from Stoffers, Lacin, and colleagues, in which they identify pairs of transcription factors unique to (almost) every ventral nerve cord hemilineage in Drosophila and use these pairs to create reagents to label and manipulate these cells. The advance is sold as largely technical-as a pipeline for identifying durably expressed transcription factor codes in postmitotic neurons from single cell RNAseq data, generating knock-in alleles in the relevant genes, using these to match transcriptional cell types to anatomic cell types, and then using the alleles as a genetic handle on the cells for downstream explication of their function. Yet I think the work is gorgeous in linking expression of genes that are causal for neuron-type-specific characteristics to the anatomic instantiations of those neurons. It is astounding that the authors are able to use their deep collective knowledge of hemilineage anatomy and gene expression to match 33 of 34 to transcriptional profiles. Together with other recent studies, this work drives a major course correction in developmental biology, away from empirically identified cell type "markers" (in Drosophila neuroscience, often genomic DNA fragments that contain enhancers found to be expressed in specific neurons at specific times), and towards methods in which the genes that generate neuronal type identity are actually used to study those neurons. Because the relationship between fate and form/function are built into the tools, I believe that this approach will be a trojan horse to integrate the fields of neural development and systems neuroscience.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed my (minor) suggestions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a clear and systematic study on trial history influences on the performance of monkeys in a target selection paradigm. The primary contribution of the paper is to add a twist in which the target information is revealed after, rather than before, the cue to make a foveating eye movement. This twist results in a kind of countermanding of an earlier "uninformed" saccade plan by a new one occurring right after the visual information is provided. As with countermanding tasks in general, time now plays a key factor in success in this task, and it is time that allows the authors to quantitatively assess the parametric influences of things like previous target location, previous target identity, and previous correctness rate on choice performance. The results are logical and consistent with the prior literature, but the authors also highlight novelties in the interpretation of prior-trial effects that they argue are enabled by the use of their paradigm.

      Strengths:

      Careful analysis of a multitude of variables influencing behavior

      Weaknesses:

      Results appear largely confirmatory

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed the previous comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors made a thorough revision of the manuscript, strengthening the message. They also considered all the comments made by the reviewers and provided appropriate and convincing arguments.

      Strengths:

      The revised manuscript clarifies all the major points raised by the reviewers, and the way the information is presented (in the text, figures and tables) is clear.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors provided an appropriate and convincing rebuttal regarding the potential weakness I pointed out in the first review of the manuscript. Therefore, I do not see any major issue in their work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors perform a remarkably comprehensive, rigorous, and extensive investigation into the spatiotemporal dynamics between ribosomal accumulation, nucleoid segregation, and cell division. Using detailed experimental characterization and rigorous physical models, they offer a compelling argument that nucleoid segregation rates are determined at least in part by the accumulation of ribosomes in the center of the cell, exerting a steric force to drive nucleoid segregation prior to cell division. This evolutionarily ingenious mechanism means cells can rely on ribosomal biogenesis as the sole determinant for the growth rate and cell division rate, avoiding the need for two separate 'sensors,' which would require careful coupling.

      Strengths:

      In terms of strengths; the paper is very well written, the data are of extremely high quality, and the work is of fundamental importance to the field of cell growth and division. This is an important and innovative discovery enabled through the combination of rigorous experimental work and innovative conceptual, statistical, and physical modeling.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors have reasonably addressed by minor weaknesses raised in the first round of reviews, and I see no other weaknesses at this point worth raising.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The regulation of kinesin is fundamental to cellular morphogenesis. Previously, it has been shown that OSM-3, a kinesin required for intraflagellar transport (IFT), is regulated by autoinhibition. However, it remains totally elusive how the autoinhibition of OSM-3 is released. In this study, the authors have shown that NEKL-3 phosphorylates OSM-3 and release its autoinhibition.

      The authors found NEKL-3 directly phosphorylates OSM-3 (Figure 1). The phophorylated residue is the "elbow" of OSM-3. The authors introduced phospho-dead (PD) and phospho-mimic (PM) mutations by genome editing and found that the OSM-3(PD) protein does not form cilia, and instead, accumulates to the axonal tips. The phenotype is similar to another constitutive active mutant of OSM-3, OSM-3(G444A) (Imanishi et al., 2006; Xie et al., 2024). osm-3(PM) has shorter cilia, which resembles with loss of function mutants of osm-3 (Figure 2). The authors did structural prediction and shows that G444E and PD mutations change the conformation of OSM-3 protein (Figure 3). In the single molecule assays G444E and PD mutations exhibited increased landing rate (Figure 4). By unbiased genetic screening, the authors identified a suppressor mutant of osm-3(PD), in which A489T occurs. The result confirms the importance of this residue. Based on these results, the authors suggest that NEKL-3 induces phosphorylation of the elbow domain and inactivates OSM-3 motor when the motor is synthesized in the cell body. This regulation is essential for the proper cilia formation.

      Strengths:

      The finding is interesting and gives new insight into how IFT motor is regulated.

      Comments on revisions: In the revised manuscript, the authors describe why they focused on NEKL-3 and detailed experimental procedures are presented.

      My only minor concern is the title, which appears to be too general. Researchers in the motor protein field may firstly assume this paper focuses on kinesin-1, because the "elbow" domain was originally suggested in kinesin-1. This paper newly determines the elbow region of OSM-3 and shows its crucial role in autoinhibition. Therefore, a more specific title, "Kinesin-2 Autoinhibition Requires Elbow Phosphorylation" or "OSM-3 Autoinhibition Requires Elbow phosphorylation" may be better.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Salmonella is interesting due to its life within a compact compartment, which we call SCV or Salmonella containing vacuole in the field of Salmonella. SCV is a tight-fitting vacuole where the acquisition of nutrients is a key factor by Salmonella. The authors among many nutrients, focused on beta-alanine. It is also known that Salmonella requires beta-alanine from many other studies. The authors have done in vitro RAW macrophage infection assays and In vivo mouse infection assays to see the life of Salmonella in the presence of beta-alanine. They concluded by comprehending that beta-alanine modulates the expression of many genes including zinc transporters which is required for pathogenesis.

      [Editors' note: The authors have appropriately addressed the previous reviewers' concerns.]

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      The dogma in the Trypanosome field is that transmission by Tsetse flies is ensured by stumpy forms. This has been recently challenged by the Engstler lab (Schuster et al. ), who showed that slender forms can also be transmitted by teneral flies. In this work, the authors aimed to test whether transmission by slender forms is possible and frequent. The authors observed that most stumpy forms infections with teneral and adult flies were successful while only 1 out of 24 slender form infections were successful.

      The comparison of midgut infection in adult vs teneral flies was significant in most of the conditions. However, the critical comparison is still missing: within each type of fly (adult or teneral), was the MG infection significantly different between slender and stumpy forms?

      Figure 2 convincingly demonstrates the effect of the metabolite N-acetylglucosamine on Tsetse infection. This addition helps better integrate the study with previous work. I thank the authors for their effort in performing this experiment.

      It is still remains unknown why this work and Schuster et al. reached different conclusions. As a result it remains unclear in which conditions slender forms could be important for transmission. Several variables could explain differences between the two groups: the strain used, the presence or absence of glutathione, how Tsetse colonies were maintained, thorough molecular and cellular characterisation of slender and stumpy forms (to avoid using intermediate forms as slender forms), comparison to recent field parasite strains.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors assemble 222 publicly available bone marrow single-cell RNA sequencing samples from healthy donors and primary AML, including pediatric, adolescent, and adult patients at diagnosis. Focusing on one specific subtype, t(8;21), which, despite affecting all age classes, is associated with better prognosis and drug response for younger patients, the authors investigate if this difference is reflected also in the transcriptomic signal. Specifically, they hypothesize that the pediatric and part of the young population acquires leukemic mutations in utero, which leads to a different leukemogenic transformation and ultimately to differently regulated leukemic stem cells with respect to the adult counterpart. The analysis in this work heavily relies on regulatory network inference and clustering (via SCENIC tools), which identifies regulatory modules believed to distinguish the pre-, respectively, post-natal leukemic transformation. Bulk RNA-seq and scATAC-seq datasets displaying the same signatures are subsequently used for extending the pool of putative signature-specific TFs and enhancer elements. Through gene set enrichment, ontology, and perturbation simulation, the authors aim to interpret the regulatory signatures and translate them into potential onset-specific therapeutic targets. The putative pre-natal signature is associated with increased chemosensitivity, RNA splicing, histone modification, stem-ness marker SMARCA2, and potentially maintained by EP300 and BCLAF1.

      Strengths:

      The main strength of this work is the compilation of a pediatric AML atlas using the efficient Cellxgene interface. Also, the idea of identifying markers for different disease onsets, interpreting them from a developmental angle, and connecting this to the different therapy and relapse observations, is interesting. The results obtained, the set of putative up-regulated TFs, are biologically coherent with the mechanisms and the conclusions drawn. I also appreciate that the analysis code was made available and is well documented.

      Weaknesses:

      There were fundamental flaws in how methods and samples were applied, a general lack of critical examination of both the results and the appropriateness of the methods for the data at hand, and in how results were presented. In particular:

      (1) Cell type annotation:

      a) The 2-phase cell type annotation process employed for the scRNA-seq sample collection raised concerns. Initially annotated cells are re-labeled after a second round with the same cell types from the initial label pool (Figure 1E). The automatic annotation tools were used without specifying the database and tissue atlases used as a reference, and no information was shown regarding the consensus across these tools.

      b) Expression of the CD34 marker is only reported as a selection method for HSPCs, which is not in line with common practice. The use of only is admitted as a surface marker, while robust annotation of HSPCs should be done on the basis of expression of gene sets.

      c) During several analyses, the cell types used were either not well defined or contradictory, such as in Figure 2D, where it is not clear if pySCENIC and AUC scores were computed on HSPCs alone or merged with CMPs. In other cases, different cell type populations are compared and used interchangeably: comparing the HSPC-derived regulons with bulk (probably not enriched for CD34+ cells) RNA samples could be an issue if there are no valid assumptions on the cell composition of the bulk sample.

      (2) Method selection:

      a) The authors should explain why they use pySCENIC and not any other approach. They should briefly explain how pySCENIC works and what they get out in the main text. In addition they should explain the AUCell algorithm and motivate its usage.

      b) The obtained GRN signatures were not critically challenged on an external dataset. Therefore, the evidence that supports these signatures to be reliable and significant to the investigated setting is weak.

      (3) There are some issues with the analysis & visualization of the data.

      (4) Discussion:

      a) What exactly is the 'regulon signature' that the authors infer? How can it be useful for insights into disease mechanisms?

      b) The authors write 'Together this indicates that EP300 inhibition may be particularly effective in t(8;21) AML, and that BCLAF1 may present a new therapeutic target for t(8;21) AML, particularly in children with inferred pre-natal origin of the driver translocation.' I am missing a critical discussion of what is needed to further test the two targets. Put differently: Would the authors take the risk of a clinical study given the evidence from their analysis?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work aims to characterize the neural signaling cascade underlying the initiation of metamorphosis in Ciona larvae. Combining gene-specific functional analyses, pharmacological experiments, and live imaging approaches, the authors identify the molecular players downstream of GABA to initiate Ciona metamorphosis. The results of this study will serve as a useful framework for future research on animal metamorphosis.

      Strengths:

      Taking advantage of the Ciona model system, the authors meticulously conducted genetic manipulation and pharmacological experiments to test the epistatic relationships among the signaling players controlling the initiation of Ciona metamorphosis. The experiments were well designed, and the results were convincing. Based on the experimental data, the final working model proposed by the authors will server as an important foundation for further investigation on metamorphosis controls in Ciona and other marine invertebrate larvae.

      Weaknesses:

      In this revised manuscript, the authors have greatly improved the descriptions of their experimental results, and have clarified my previous concerns. I do not have further comments on "weaknesses".

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors combine a clever use of historical clinical data on infection duration in immunologically naive individuals and queuing theory to infer the force of infection (FOI) from measured multiplicity of infection (MOI) in a sparsely sampled setting. They conduct extensive simulations using agent based modeling to recapitulate realistic population dynamics and successfully apply their method to recover FOI from measured MOI. They then go on to apply their method to real world data from Ghana before and after an indoor residual spraying campaign.

      Strengths:

      - The use of historical clinical data is very clever in this context<br /> - The simulations are very sophisticated with respect to trying to capture realistic population dynamics<br /> - The mathematical approach is simple and elegant, and thus easy to understand

      Weaknesses:

      - The assumptions of the approach are quite strong, and the authors have made clear that applicability is constrained to individuals with immune profiles that are similar to malaria naive patients with neurosyphilis. While the historical clinical data is a unique resource and likely directionally correct, it remains somewhat dubious to use the exact estimated values as inputs to other models without extensive sensitivity analysis.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Cellulose is a major component of the primary cell wall of growing cells and it is made by cellulose synthases (CESAs) organized into multi-subunit complexes in the plasma membrane. Previous results have resolved the structure of secondary cell wall CESAs, which are only active in a subset of cells. Here, the authors evaluate the structure of CESAs from soybean (Glycine max, Gm) via cryo-EM and compare these structures to secondary cell wall CESAs. First, they express a select member of the GmCESA1, GmCESA3, or GmCESA6 families in insect cells, purified these proteins as both monomers and homotrimers, and demonstrated their capacity to incorporate 3H-labelled glucose into cellulase-sensitive product in a pH and divalent cation (e.g., Mg2+) -dependant fashion (Figure 2). Although CESA1, CESA3, and a CESA6-like isoforms are essential for cellulose synthesis in Arabidopsis, in this study, monomers and homotrimers both showed catalytic activity, and there was more variation between individual isoforms than between their oligomerization states (i.e., CESA3 monomers and trimers showed similar activities, which were substantially different from CESA1 monomers or trimers).

      They next use cryo-EM to solve the structure of each homotrimer to ~3.0 to 3.3 A (Figure 3). They compare this with PttCESA8 and find important similarities, such as the unidentified density at a positively-charged region near Arg449, Lys452, and Arg453; and differences, such as the position and relatively low resolution (suggesting higher flexibility) of TM7, which presumably creates a large lateral lipid-exposed channel opening, rather than the transmembrane pore in PttCESA8. Like PttCESA8, an oligosaccharide in the translocation channel was co-resolved with the protein structure. Neither the N-terminal domains nor the CSRs (a plant-specific insert into the cytosolic loop between TM2 and TM3) are resolved well.

      Several previous models have proposed that the cellulose synthase complexes may be composed of multiple heterotrimers, but since the authors were able to isolate beta-glucan-synthesizing homotrimers, their results challenge this model. Using the purified trimers, the authors investigated how the CESA homotrimers might assemble into higher order complexes. They detected interactions between each pair of CESA homotrimers via pull down assays (Figure 4), although these same interactions were also detected among monomers (Supplemental Figure 4). Neither catalytic activity nor these inter-homotrimer interactions required the N-terminal domain (Figure 5). When populations of homotrimers were mixed, they formed larger aggregations in vitro (Figure 6) and displayed increased activity, compared to the predicted additive activity of each enzyme alone (Figure 7). Intriguingly, this synergistic behavior is observed even when one trimer is chemically inactivated before mixing (supplemental figure 7), suggesting that the synergistic effects are due to structural interactions.

      The main strength of this manuscript is its detailed characterization of the structure of multiple CESAs implicated in primary cell wall synthesis, which complements previous studies of secondary cell wall CESAs. They provide a comprehensive comparison of these new structures with previously resolved CESA structures and discuss several intriguing similarities and differences. The synergistic activity observed when different homotrimers are mixed is a particularly interesting result. These results provide fundamental in vitro support for a cellulose synthase complex comprised of a hexamer of CESA homotrimers.

      The main weakness of the manuscript is that the authors' evidence that these proteins make cellulose in vitro is limited to beta-glucanase-sensitive digestion of the product. Previous reports characterizing CESA structures have used multiple independent methods: sensitivity and resistance of the product to various enzymes, linkage analysis, and importantly, TEM of the product to ensure that it makes genuine cellulose microfibrils, rather than amorphous beta-glucan.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Li and colleagues study the fate of endothelial cells in a mouse model of ischemic stroke. Using genetic lineage tracing approaches, they find that endothelial cells give rise to non-endothelial cells, which they term "E-pericytes." They further show that depleting these cells exacerbates blood-brain barrier leakage and worsens functional recovery. The authors also provide evidence that endothelial-to-mesenchymal transition, myeloid cell-derived TGFβ1, and endothelial TGFβRII are involved in this process. These are potentially interesting findings, however, the experimental evidence that endothelial cells undergo transdifferentiation to non-endothelial cells is weak, as is the evidence that these cells are pericytes. Addressing this foundational weakness will facilitate interpretation of the other findings.

      In this revised manuscript, the authors corrected labeling errors and included negative controls for flow cytometry and immunohistochemistry data. They did not, however, substantively address the major weaknesses below related to rigorously demonstrating the cellular origin and identity of "E-pericytes."

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors address an important question about blood vessel function and plasticity in the context of stroke.

      (2) The authors use a variety of genetic approaches to understand cell fate in the context of stroke. Particularly commendable is the use of several complementary lineage tracing strategies, including an intersectional strategy requiring both endothelial Cre activity and subsequent mural cell NG2 promoter activity.

      (3) The authors address upstream cellular and molecular mechanisms, including roles for myeloid-derived TGFβ.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors use Cdh5-CreERT2; Ai47 mice to permanently label endothelial cells and their progeny with eGFP. They then isolate eGFP+ cells from control and MCAO RP7D and RP34D brains, and use single cell RNA-seq to identify the resulting cell types. Theoretically, all eGFP+ cells should be endothelial cells or their progeny. This is a very powerful and well-conceived experiment. The authors use the presence of a pericyte cluster as evidence that endothelial to pericyte transdifferentiation occurs. However, pericytes are also present in the scRNA-seq data from sham mice, as are several other cell types such as fibroblasts and microglia. This suggests that pericytes and these other cell types might have been co-purified (e.g., as doublets) with eGFP+ endothelial cells during FACS and may not themselves be eGFP+. Pericyte-endothelial doublets are common in scRNA-seq given that these cell types are closely and tightly associated. Additionally, tight association (e.g., via peg-socket junctions) can cause fragments of endothelial cells to be retained on pericytes (and vice-versa) during dissociation. Finally, it is possible that after stroke or during the dissociation process, endothelial cells lyse and release eGFP that could be taken up by other cell types. All of these scenarios could lead to purification of cells that were not derived (transdifferentiated) from endothelial cells. Authors note that the proportion of pericytes increased in the stroke groups, but it does not appear this experiment was replicated and thus this conclusion is not supported by statistical analysis. The results of pseudotime and trajectory analyses rely on the foundation that the pericytes in this dataset are endothelial-derived, which, as discussed above, has not been rigorously demonstrated.

      (2) I have the same concern regarding inadvertent purification of cells that were not derived from endothelial cells in the context of the bulk RNA-seq experiment (Fig. S4), especially given the sample-to-sample variability in gene expression in the RP34D, eGFP+ non-ECs group (e.g., only 2/5 samples are enriched for mesenchymal transcription factor Tbx18, only 1/5 samples are enriched for mural cell TF Heyl). If the sorted eGFP+ non-ECs were pericytes, I would expect a strong and consistent pericyte-like gene expression profile.

      (3) Authors use immunohistochemistry to understand localization, morphology, and marker expression of eGFP+ cells in situ. The representative "E-pericytes" shown in Fig. 3A-D are not associated with blood vessels, and the authors' quantification also shows that the majority of such cells are not vessel-associated ("avascular"). By definition, pericytes are a component of blood vessels and are embedded within the vascular basement membrane. Thus, concluding that these cells are pericytes ("E-pericytes") may be erroneous.

      (4) CD13 flow cytometry and immunohistochemistry are used extensively to identify pericytes. In the context of several complementary lineage tracing strategies noted in Strength #2, CD13 immunohistochemistry is the only marker used to identify putative pericytes (Fig. S3J-M). In stroke, CD13 is not specific to pericytes; dendritic cells and other monocyte-derived cells express CD13 (Anpep) in mouse brain after stroke (PMID: 38177281, https://anratherlab.shinyapps.io/strokevis/).

      (5) Authors conclude that "EC-specific overexpression of the Tgfbr2 protein by a virus (Tgfbr2) decreases Evans blue leakage, promotes CBF recovery, alleviates neurological deficits and facilitates spontaneous behavioral recovery after stroke by increasing the number of E-pericytes." All data in Fig. 10, however, compare endothelial Tgfbr2 overexpression to a DsRed overexpression control. There is no group in which Tgfbr2 is overexpressed but "E-pericytes" are eliminated with DTA (this is done in Fig. 9B, but this experiment lacks the Tgfbr2 overexpression-only control). Thus, the observed functional outcomes cannot be ascribed to "E-pericytes"; it remains possible that endothelial Tgfbr2 overexpression affects EB leakage, CBF, and behavior through alternative mechanisms.

      In response to this comment, authors wrote: "in Figures 9A-B, we observed no significant difference in Evans blue leakage between the Tgfbr2 overexpression group and the Tgfbr2 overexpression + DTA group (P=0.8153), this suggests that the impact of Tgfbr2 overexpression on the blood-brain barrier (BBB) is primarily attributed from the E-pericytes generated by Tgfbr2 expression."

      I do not see data from a Tgfbr2 overexpression-only group in Fig. 9B. Further, I do not understand authors' logic: If the mechanism by which EC Tgfbr2 overexpression acts to reduce BBB leakage is by increasing the number of "E-pericytes," depleting "E-pericytes" with DTA in this context should increase BBB leakage.

      (6) Single-cell and bulk RNA-seq data are not available in a public repository (such as GEO). Depositing these data would facilitate their independent reevaluation and reuse.

      In response to this comment, authors indicated they submitted data to GEO, but did not provide an accession number.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Tolossa et al. analyze Inter-spike intervals from various freely available datasets from the Allen Institute and from a dataset from Steinmetz et al.. They show that they can modestly decode between gross brain regions (Visual vs. Hippocampus vs. Thalamus), and modestly separate sub areas within brain regions (DG vs. CA1 or various visual brain areas). The core result is that a multi-layer perceptron trained on the ISI distributions can modestly classify different brain areas and perhaps in a reasonably compelling way generalize across animals. The result is interesting but the exact problem formulation still feels a tad murky to me because I am worried the null is a strawman and I'm unsure if anyone has ever argued for this null hypothesis ("the impact of anatomy on a neuron's activity is either nonexistent or unremarkable"). Given the patterns of inputs to different brain areas and the existence of different developmental origin and different cell types within these areas, I am unclear why this would be a good null hypothesis. Nevertheless, the machine learning is reasonable, and the authors demonstrate that a nonlinear population based classifier can pull out reasonable information about the brain area and layer.

      Strengths:

      The paper is reasonably well written, and the definitions are quite well done. For example, the authors clearly explained transductive vs. inductive inference in their decoders. E.g., transductive learning allows the decoder to learn features from each animal, whereas inductive inference focuses on withheld animals and prioritizes the learning of generalizable features. The authors walk the reader through various analyses starting as simply as PCA, then finally showing a MLP trained on ISI distributions and PSTHs performs modestly well in decoding brain area. The key is ISI distributions work well in inductive settings for generalizing from one mouse to the other.

      Weaknesses:

      As articulated in my overall summary, I still found the null hypothesis a tad underwhelming. I am not sure this is really a valid null hypothesis ("the impact of anatomy on a neuron's activity is either nonexistent or unremarkable"), although in the statistical sense it is fine. The authors took on board some of the advice from the first review and clarified the paper but there are portions that are unnecessarily verbose (e.g., "Beyond fundamental scientific insight, our findings may be of benefit in various practical applications, such as the continued development of brain-machine interfaces and neuroprosthetics"). Also, given that ISIs cannot separate between visual areas, why is the statement that these are conserved. I still find it somewhat underwhelming that the thalamus, hippocampus , and visual cortex have different ISI distributions. Multiple researchers have reported similar things in cortex perhaps without the focus on decoding area from these ISI distributions.

      All in all, it is an interesting paper with the notion that ISI distributions can modestly predict brain area and layer. It could have some potential for a tool for neuropixels, although this needs to be developed further for this use case.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This paper tests the hypothesis that perceptual switches during the presentation of ambiguous stimuli are accompanied by changes in neuromodulation that alter neural gain and trigger abrupt changes in brain activity. To test this hypothesis, the study combines pupillometry, artificial recurrent network (RNN) analysis and fMRI recording. In particular, the study uses methods of energy landscape analysis inspired by physics, which is particularly interesting.

      Strengths<br /> - The authors should be commended for combining different methods (pupillometry, RNNs, fMRI) to test their hypothesis. This combination provides a mechanistic insight into perceptual switches in the brain and artificial neural networks.<br /> - The study combines different viewpoints and fields of scientific literature, including neuroscience, psychology, physics, dynamical systems. In order to make this combination more accessible to the reader, the different aspects are presented in a pedagogical way to be accessible to all fields.<br /> - This combination of methods and viewpoints is rarely done, so it is very useful.<br /> - The authors introduce dynamic gain modulation in their recurrent neural network, which is novel. They devote a section of the paper to studying the dynamics, fixed points and convergence of this type of network.

      Weaknesses<br /> - The study may not be specific to perceptual switches. This is because the study relies on a paradigm in which participants report when they identify a switch in the item category. Therefore, it is unclear whether the effects reported in the paper are related to the perceptual switch itself, to attention, or to the detection of behaviourally relevant events. The authors are cautious and explicitly acknowledge this point in their study.<br /> - The demonstration of the causal role of gain modulation in perceptual switches is partial. This causality is clearly demonstrated in the simulation work with the RNN. However, it is not fully demonstrated in the pupil analysis and the fMRI analysis. One reason is that this work is correlative (which is already very informative).<br /> - Some effects may reflect the expectation of a perceptual switch rather than the perceptual switch itself. To mitigate this risk, the design of the fMRI task included catch trials, in which no switch occurs, to reduce the expectation of a switch. The pupil study, however, did not include such catch trials.<br /> - The paper uses RNN-based modelling to provide mechanistic insight into the role of gain modulation in perceptual switches. However, the RNN solves a task that differs from that performed by human participants, which may limit the explanatory value of the model. The RNN is provided with two inputs characterising the sensory evidence supporting the first and last image category in the sequence (e.g. plane and shark). In contrast, observers in the task don't know in advance the identity of the last image at the beginning of the sequence. The brain first receives sensory evidence about the image category (e.g. plane) with which the sequence begins, which is very easy to recognise, then it sees a sequence of morphed images and has to discover what the final image category will be. To discover the final image category, the brain considers several possibilities for the second images (it is a shark?, a frog?, a bird?, etc.), rather than comparing the likelihood of just two categories. This search process among many alternatives and the perceptual switch in the task is therefore different from the competition between only two inputs in the RNN.<br /> - Another aspect of the motivation for the RNN model remains unclear. The authors introduce dynamic gain modulation in the RNN, but it is not clear what the added value of dynamic gain modulation is. Both static (Fig. S1) and dynamic (Fig. 2F) gain modulation lead to the predicted effect: faster switching when the gain is larger.<br /> - The authors are to be commended for addressing their research questions with multiple tools and approaches. There are links between the different parts of the study. The RNN and the pupil are linked by the notion of gain modulation, the RNN and the fMRI analysis are linked by the study of the energy landscape, the fMRI study and the pupil study are indirectly linked by previous work for this group showing that the peak in LC fMRI activity precedes a flattening of the energy landscape. These links are very interesting but could have been stronger and more complete.

      Comments on revisions:

      I thank the authors for their responses.<br /> My review presents points that the authors themselves present as weaknesses or limitations. It also includes points that cannot be addressed in a revision (e.g. causality).<br /> Regarding the fact that the RNN only considers two categories, whereas subjects consider more categories (because they don't know the final image), I have toned down my remark (removing "markedly" different, removing the fact that the hypothesis space is vast given that participants have some priors). I also removed the qualifier "mechanistically" different, because it can be understood in different ways. The point remains that the proposed model has 2 inputs, the corresponding network in the brain has >2 inputs (because it considers more categories than the RNN), which is different, and which is the point of my remark. I think it may limit the value of the model, but I don't think it is not "sensible".

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Baniulyte and Wade describe how translation of an 8-codon uORF denoted toiL upstream of the topAI-yjhQP operon is responsive to different ribosome-targeting antibiotics, consequently controlling translation of the TopAI toxin as well as Rho-dependent termination with the gene.

      Strengths:

      The authors used multiple different approaches such as a genetic screen to identify factors such as 23S rRNA mutations that affect topA1 expression and ribosome profiling to examine the consequences of various antibiotics on toiL-mediated regulation.

      Weaknesses: Future experiments will be needed to better understand the physiological role of the toiL-mediated regulation and elucidate the mechanism of specific antibiotic sensing.

      The results are clearly described, and the revisions have helped to improve the presentation of the data.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors were trying to show that a novel neuronal metallothionein of poorly defined function, GIF/MT3, is actually heavily persulfidated in both the Zn-bound and apo (metal-free) forms of the molecule as purified from a heterologous (bacterial) or native host. Evidence in support of this conclusion is strong, with both spectroscopic and mass spectrometry evidence strongly consistent with this general conclusion. The authors would appear to have achieved their aims.

      Strengths:

      The analytical data in support of the author's primary conclusions are strong. The authors also provide some modeling evidence that supports the contention that MT3 (and other MTs) can readily accommodate a sulfane sulfur on each of the 20 cysteines in the Zn-bound structure, with little perturbation of the overall structure. This is not the case with Cys trisulfides, which suggests that the persulfide-metallated state is clearly positioned at lower energy relative to the immediately adjacent thiolate- or trisulfidated metal coordination complexes.

      Weaknesses:

      The biological significance of the findings is not entirely clear. On the one hand, the analytical data are solid (albeit using a protein derived from a bacterial over-expression experiment), and yes, it's true that sulfane S can protect Cys from overoxidation, but everything shown in the summary figure (Fig. 9D) can be done with Zn release from a thiol by ROS, and subsequent reduction by the Trx/TR system. In addition, it's long been known that Zn itself can protect Cys from oxidation. I view this as a minor shortcoming that will motivate follow-up studies.

      Impact:

      The impact will be high since the finding is potentially disruptive to the MT field for sure. The sulfane sulfur counting experiment (the HPE-IAM electrophile trapping experiment) may well be widely adopted by the field. Those in the metals field always knew that this was a possibility, and it will interesting to see the extent to which metal binding thiolates broadly incorporate sulfane sulfur into their first coordination shells.

      Comments on revisions:

      The revised manuscript is only slightly changed from the original, with the inclusion of a supplementary figure (Fig. S2) and minor changes in the text. The authors did not choose to carry out the quantitative Zn binding experiment (which I really wanted to see), but given the complexities of the experiment, I'll let it go.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In 2021 (PMID: 33503405) and 2024 (PMID: 38578830) Constantinou and colleagues published two elegant papers in which they demonstrated that the Topbp1 checkpoint adaptor protein could assemble into mesoscale phase-separated condensates that were essential to amplify activation of the PIKK, ATR, and its downstream effector kinase, Chk1, during DNA damage signalling. A key tool that made these studies possible was the use of a chimeric Topbp1 protein bearing a cryptochrome domain, Cry2, which triggered condensation of the chimeric Topbp1 protein, and thus activation of ATR and Chk1, in response to irradiation with blue light without the myriad complications associated with actually exposing cells to DNA damage.

      In this current report Morano and co-workers utilise the same optogenetic Topbp1 system to investigate a different question, namely whether Topbp1 phase-condensation can be inhibited pharmacologically to manipulate downstream ATR-Chk1 signalling. This is of interest, as the therapeutic potential of the ATR-Chk1 pathway is an area of active investigation, albeit generally using more conventional kinase inhibitor approaches.

      The starting point is a high throughput screen of 4730 existing or candidate small molecule anti-cancer drugs for compounds capable of inhibiting the condensation of the Topbp1-Cry2-mCherry reporter molecule in vivo. A surprisingly large number of putative hits (>300) were recorded, from which 131 of the most potent were selected for secondary screening using activation of Chk1 in response to DNA damage induced by SN-38, a topoisomerase inhibitor, as a surrogate marker for Topbp1 condensation. From this the 10 most potent compounds were tested for interactions with a clinically used combination of SN-38 and 5-FU (FOLFIRI) in terms of cytotoxicity in HCT116 cells. The compound that synergised most potently with FOLFIRI, the GSK3-beta inhibitor drug AZD2858, was selected for all subsequent experiments.

      AZD2858 is shown to suppress the formation of Topbp1 (endogenous) condensates in cells exposed to SN-38, and to inhibit activation of Chk1 without interfering with activation of ATM or other endpoints of damage signalling such as formation of gamma-H2AX or activation of Chk2 (generally considered to be downstream of ATM). AZD2858 therefore seems to selectively inhibit the Topbp1-ATR-Chk1 pathway without interfering with parallel branches of the DNA damage signalling system, consistent with Topbp1 condensation being the primary target. Importantly, neither siRNA depletion of GSK3-beta, or other GSK3-beta inhibitors were able to recapitulate this effect, suggesting it was a specific non-canonical effect of AZD2858 and not a consequence of GSK3-beta inhibition per se.

      To understand the basis for synergism between AZD2858 and SN-38 in terms of cell killing, the effect of AZD2858 on the replication checkpoint was assessed. This is a response, mediated via ATR-Chk1, that modulates replication origin firing and fork progression in S-phase cell under conditions of DNA damage or when replication is impeded. SN-38 treatment of HCT116 cells markedly suppresses DNA replication, however this was partially reversed by co-treatment with AZD2858, consistent with the failure to activate ATR-Chk1 conferring a defect in replication checkpoint function.

      Figures 4 and 5 demonstrate that AZD2858 can markedly enhance the cytotoxic and cytostatic effects of SN-38 and FOLFIRI through a combination of increased apoptosis and growth arrest according to dosage and treatment conditions. Figure 6 extends this analysis to cells cultured as spheroids, sometimes considered to better represent tumor responses compared to single cell cultures.

      Significance:

      Liquid phase separation of protein complexes is increasingly recognised as a fundamental mechanism in signal transduction and other cellular processes. One recent and important example was that of Topbp1, whose condensation in response to DNA damage is required for efficient activation of the ATR-Chk1 pathway. The current study asks a related but distinct question; can protein condensation be targeted by drugs to manipulate signalling pathways which in the main rely on protein kinase cascades?

      Here, the authors identify an inhibitor of GSK3-beta as a novel inhibitor of DNA damage-induced Topbp1 condensation and thus of ATR-Chk1 signalling.

      This work will be of interest to researchers in the fields of DNA damage signalling, biophysics of protein condensation, and cancer chemotherapy.

      Comments on latest version:

      Morano et al. have revised their manuscript in response to the points raised by reviewer #3 as follows.

      1) Fig. 2E: Correcting the previously erroneous labelling of this Fig. makes it match the textual description.

      2) Figs 3A and B: The revised textual description of the flow cytometry BrdU incorporation is now precise.

      3) Fig. 3E: Removing the suspect WB images is a pragmatic decision that does not significantly affect the overall conclusions of the paper.

      4) Fig. 3D: Despite its puzzling appearance this data is now described accurately in the text as "DSBs remained elevated after the combined treatment" rather than "increased after the combined treatment. A more convincing increase in the presumed damaged DNA band is evident in Fig. 4D when AZD2858 is combined with a much lower concentration of SN38 (1.5nM) which could mean that the concentration used in Fig. 3D (300nM) induced maximal damage that could not be further enhanced.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Despite over 50 years of investigation, our understanding of how the ubiquitous heat shock response, governed by the transcription factor HSF1, was regulated was minimal. In recent years, a coordinated yet simple negative feedback circuit has been elucidated in high detail that centers on the chaperone Hsp70 as a direct-binding inhibitor of HSF1 transcriptional activation. However, roles for the obligatory Hsp70 J-domain partner co-chaperones are currently poorly understood. The present study applies several orthogonal techniques to the question and uncovers an unexpected role for the nuclear JDP Apj1 in attenuation of the heat shock response (HSR) via removal of Hsf1 from HSEs in heat shock gene promoter regions. Interestingly, Apj1 appears to play no role in initiating repression of Hsf1, as null mutants do not exhibit constitutive derepression of the HSR. This role is likely filled by the general nucleo/cytoplasmic JDP Ydj1, as previously reported. These results enhance understanding of HSR regulation and underscore the pivotal role that chaperones play in controlling pro-survival gene expression.

      Overall, the work is exceptionally well done and controlled, and the results are properly and appropriately interpreted. Several of the approaches, while powerful, are somewhat indirect (i.e., following gene expression via ribosomal profiling) but ultimately provide a compelling answer to the main question being asked. However, at the end of the day, there is really only one major finding here: Apj1 regulates Hsf1 attenuation via Hsp70. That finding is strongly supported by the experimental data but lacks the one piece of mechanistic evidence found in other recent papers - differential binding of Ssa1/2 to Hsf1 at either the N- or C-terminal binding sites.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      I would like to thank the authors for the revision and the input they invested in this study.

      With the revised text of the study, my earlier criticism holds, and your arguments about the counterfactual approach are irrelevant to that. The recent rise of the counterfactual approach might likely mirror the fact that there are too many scientists behind their computers, and few go into the field to collect in situ data. Studies like the one presented here are a good intellectual exercise but the real impact is questionable. All your main conclusions are inferred from published studies on 7! bird species. In addition, spatial sampling in those seven species was not ideal in relation to your target questions. Thus, no matter how fancy your findings look, the basic fact remains that your input data were for 7 bird species only! Your conclusion, „our study provides a novel understanding of how QTP shapes migration patterns of birds, " is simply overstretching.

      The way you respond to my criticism on L 81-93 is something different than what you admit in the rebuttal letter. The text of the ms is silent about the drawbacks and instead highlights your perspective. I understand you; you are trying to sell the story in a nice wrapper. In the rebuttal you state: „we assume species' responses to environments are conservative and their evolution should not discount our findings." But I do not see that clearly stated in the main text.

      In your rebuttal, you respond to my criticism of "No matter how good the data eBird provides is, you do not know population-specific connections between wintering and breeding sites" when you responded: ... "we can track the movement of species every week, and capture the breeding and wintering areas for specific populations" I am having a feeling that you either play with words with me or do not understand that from eBird data nobody will be ever able to estimate population-specific teleconnections between breeding and wintering areas. It is simply impossible as you do not track individuals. eBird gives you a global picture per species but not for particular populations. You cannot resolve this critical drawback of your study. I am sorry that you invested so much energy into this study, but I see it as a very limited contribution to understanding the role of a major barrier in shaping migration.

      My modest suggestion for you is: go into the field. Ideally use bird radars along the plateau to document whether the birds shift the directions when facing the barrier.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary :

      The paper proposes a model to explain the learning that occurs in brain-computer interface (BCI) tasks when animals need to adapt to novel BCI decoders. The model consists of a network formulation of the "re-aiming" learning strategy, which assumes that BCI learning does not modify the underlying neural circuitry, but instead occurs through a reorganization of existing neural activity patterns.

      The authors formalize this in a recurrent neural network (RNN) model, driven by upstream inputs that live in a low-dimensional space.

      They show that modelling BCI learning as reorganization of these upstream inputs can explain several experimental findings, such as the difference in the ability of animals to adapt to within vs outside-manifold perturbations, biases in the decoded behaviour after within-manifold perturbations, or qualitative changes in the neural responses observed during credit assignment rotation perturbations or operant conditioning of individual neurons.

      Overall, while the idea of re-aiming as a learning strategy has previously been proposed in the literature, the authors show how it can be formalized in a network model, which allows for more direct comparisons to experimental data.

      Strengths:

      The paper is very well written. The presentation of the model is clear, and the use of vanilla RNN dynamics driven by upstream inputs that are constant in time is consistent with the broader RNN modeling literature.

      The main value of the paper lies in the fact that it proposes a network implementation for a learning strategy that had been proposed previously. The network model has a simple form, but the optimization problem is performed in the space of inputs, which requires the authors to solve a nonlinear optimization problem in that space.

      While some of the results (eg the fact that the model can adapt to within but not outside-manifold perturbations) are to be expected based on the model assumptions, having a network model allows to make more direct and quantitative comparisons to experiments, to investigate analytically how much the dimension of the output is constrained by the input, and to make predictions that can be tested in data.

      The authors perform such comparisons across three different experiments. The results are clearly presented, and the authors show that they hold for various RNN connectivities.

      Weaknesses :

      The authors mention alternative models (eg, based on synaptic plasticity in the RNN and/or input weights) that can explain the same experimental data that they do, they do not provide any direct comparisons to those models.

      Thus, the main argument that the authors have in favor of their model is the fact that it is more plausible because it relies on performing the optimization in a low-dimensional space. It would be nice to see more quantitative arguments for why the re-aiming strategy may be more plausible than synaptic plasticity (either by showing that it explains data better, or explaining why it may be more optimal in the context of fast learning).

      In particular, the authors model the adaptation to outside-manifold perturbations (OMPs) through a "generalized re-aiming strategy". This assumes the existence of additional command variables, which are not used in the original decoding task, but can then be exploited to adapt to these OMPs. While this model is meant to capture the fact that optimization is occurring in a low-dimensional subspace, the fact that animals take longer to adapt to OMPs suggests that WMPs and OMPs may rely on different learning mechanisms, and that synaptic plasticity may actually be a better model of adaptation to OMPs. It would be important to discuss how exactly generalized re-aiming would differ from allowing plasticity in the input weights, or in all weights in the network. Do those models make different predictions, and could they be differentiated in future experiments?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      I am not familiar with mathematical modeling of gene expression, so I will evaluate this manuscript solely from a biological point of view.

      Kerlin et al. combined single-molecule RNA FISH and mathematical modeling approaches to quantitatively characterize changes in the transcriptional dynamics of three neighboring genes at the FOS locus in response to estradiol (E2) stimulation. They showed that the neighboring JDP2 and BATF genes, located on the same side of the TAD boundary, exhibit highly coordinated bursting dynamics. While FOS and JDP2/BATF are strongly insulated (~7:1 intra-to-inter-domain contact ratio) by the TAD boundary, correlated bursting dynamics were still observed between these gene pairs, suggesting that enhancers can bypass strong insulation sites. The authors proposed that burst co-occurrence arises from the activity of ERα-bound enhancers at the locus. They also proposed that the burst size correlation between two neighboring genes located on the same side of the TAD boundary results from local spreading of histone marks.

      Strengths:

      The direct visualization of coordinated transcriptional bursting across a strong insulation site is novel. This finding was carefully analyzed using the mathematical framework developed by the authors.

      Weaknesses:

      Several models were proposed based on single-molecule RNA FISH analysis of the FOS locus, but the generality of these findings remains uncertain. The proposed models were not directly tested through follow-up experiments, leaving the authors' conclusions largely speculative.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      While immune cell distribution in tuberculosis (TB) is well documented, research on its disruption in diabetes-tuberculosis (DM-TB) comorbidity remains limited. In this study, Chaudhary et al. explore immune cell perturbations in DM-TB using single-cell RNA sequencing (scRNA-seq), providing key insights into the impaired host immune response. By elucidating the molecular mechanisms underlying immune dysfunction in DM-TB, this study addresses an important knowledge gap. The study demonstrates that diabetes impairs lung immune cell infiltration and contributes to a dampened immune response against Mycobacterium tuberculosis. Reduced Th1 and M1 macrophage populations indicate a compromised ability to mount an effective pro-inflammatory response, which is essential for TB control. The observed increase in IL-16 signaling and reduction in TNF and IFN-II responses suggest a shift toward a more immunosuppressive or dysregulated inflammatory state. The interplay between chronic inflammation, hyperglycemia, and dyslipidemia in diabetes further exacerbates immune dysfunction, reinforcing the idea that metabolic disorders significantly impact TB pathogenesis.

      Strengths:

      This well-designed study employs robust methodology, well-executed experiments, and a well-written manuscript. The use of scRNA-seq is a notable strength, offering high-resolution analysis of immune cell heterogeneity in the lung environment. Additionally, the study corroborates its findings in a long-term infection model, demonstrating that chronic M. tuberculosis (H37Rv) infection in diabetic mice leads to increased bacterial burden and worsened tissue pathology.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The study focuses on CD3⁺ and CD11c⁺ cells but does not extensively examine other key immune players that may contribute to DM-TB pathogenesis. Given that diabetes affects multiple immune compartments, a broader immune profiling approach would provide a more comprehensive understanding.

      (2) While the study identifies increased IL-16 signaling and reduced TNF/IFN-II responses, the precise molecular mechanisms driving these changes remain unclear. Further investigation into metabolic-immune crosstalk (e.g., how hyperglycemia affects immune cell differentiation and cytokine secretion) would strengthen the mechanistic depth of the findings.

      (3) The study suggests targeting IL-16 and Th17 cells as potential therapeutic strategies; however, no experimental validation (e.g., testing IL-16 inhibitors in DM-TB models) is provided. Validating these interventions would enhance their translational relevance.

      (4) Incorporating clinical samples (e.g., PBMCs from DM-TB patients) could help bridge the gap between murine and human studies, offering more translational insights into disease mechanisms.

      Overall, this study provides valuable findings, but addressing these concerns would further strengthen its impact on understanding DM-TB immunopathogenesis.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Garibova et al. investigated the conservation of sperm recognition and interaction with the egg envelope in two groups of distantly related animals: mammals (mouse) and fish (zebrafish). Previous work and key physiological differences between these two animal groups strongly suggest that mouse sperm would be incapable of interaction with the zebrafish egg envelope (chorion) and its constituent proteins, though homologous to the mammalian zona pellucida (ZP). Indeed, the authors showed that mouse sperm do not bind recombinant zebrafish ZP proteins nor the intact chorion. Surprisingly, however, mouse sperm are able to locate and bind to the zebrafish micropyle, a specialized canal within the chorion that serves as the egg's entry point for sperm. This study suggests that sperm attraction to the egg might be highly conserved from fish to mammals and depends on the presence of a still unknown glycosylated protein within the micropyle. The authors further demonstrate that mouse sperm are able to enter the micropyle and accumulate within the intrachorionic space, potentially through a CatSper-dependent mechanism.

      Strengths:

      The authors convincingly demonstrate that mouse sperm do not bind zebrafish ZP proteins or the chorion. Furthermore, they make the interesting observation that mouse sperm are able to locate and enter the zebrafish micropyle in an MP-dependent manner, which is quite unexpected given the large evolutionary distance between these species, the many physiological differences between mouse and zebrafish gametes, and the largely different modes of both fertilization and reproduction in these species. This may indicate that the sperm chemoattractant in the egg is conserved between mammals and fish; however, whether zebrafish sperm are attracted to mouse eggs was not tested.

      Weaknesses:

      The key weakness of this study lies in the rationale behind the overall investigation. In mammals, the zona pellucida (ZP) has been implicated in binding sperm in a taxon-specific manner, such that human sperm are incapable of binding the mouse ZP. Indeed, work by the corresponding author showed that this specificity is mediated by the N-terminal region of the ZP protein ZP2 (Avella et al., 2014). The N-termini of human and mouse ZP2 share 48% identity, which is higher than the overall identity between mouse and zebrafish ZP2, with the latter ortholog entirely lacking the N-terminal domain that is essential for sperm binding to the ZP. Given this known specificity for mouse vs. human sperm-ZP binding, it does not follow that mouse sperm would bind ZP proteins from not only a species that is much more distantly related, but also one that is not even a mammal, the zebrafish. Furthermore, the fish chorion does not play a role in sperm binding at all, while the mammalian ZP can bind sperm at any location. On the contrary, the zebrafish chorion prevents polyspermy by limiting sperm entry to the single micropyle.

      In addition, though able to provide some information regarding the broad conservation of sperm-egg interaction mechanisms, the biological relevance of these findings is difficult to describe. Fish and mammals are not only two very distinct and distantly related animal groups, but also employ opposite modes of fertilization and reproduction (external vs. internal, oviparous vs viviparous). Fish gametes interact in a very different environment compared to mammals and lack many typically mammalian features of fertilization (e.g., sperm capacitation, presence of an acrosome, interaction with the female reproductive tract), making it difficult to make any physiologically relevant claims from this study. While this study may indicate conserved mechanisms of sperm attraction to the egg, the identity of the molecular players involved is not investigated. With this knowledge, the reader is forced to question the motivation behind much of the study.

      During fertilization in fish, the sperm enters the micropyle and subsequently, the egg, as it is simultaneously activated by exposure to water. During egg activation, the chorion lifts as it separates from the egg and fills with water. This mechanism prevents supernumerary sperm from entering the egg after the successfully fertilizing sperm has bound and fused. In this study, the authors show that mouse sperm enter the micropyle and accumulate in the intrachorionic space. Whether any sperm successfully entered the egg is not addressed, and the status of egg activation is not reported. In Supplementary Videos 3-4, the egg shown has been activated for some time, as evident by the separation of yolk and cytoplasm, yet the chorion is only partially expanded (likely due to mouse IVF conditions). How multiple sperm were able to enter the micropyle but presumably not the egg is not addressed, yet this suggests that the zebrafish mechanism of blocking polyspermy (fertilization by multiple sperm) is not effective for mouse sperm or is rendered ineffective due to mouse IVF conditions. The authors do not discuss these observations in the context of either species' physiological process of fertilization, highlighting the lack of biological context in interpreting the results.

      The authors further show that the zebrafish micropyle does not trigger the acrosome reaction in mouse sperm. Whether the acrosome reacts is not correlated with a sperm's ability to cross the micropyle opening, as both acrosome-intact and acrosome-reacted sperm were observed within the intrachorionic space. While the acrosome reaction is a key event during mammalian fertilization and is required for sperm to fertilize the egg, zebrafish sperm do not contain an acrosome. Thus, these results are particularly difficult to interpret biologically, bringing into question whether this observation has biological relevance or is a byproduct of egg activation/chorion lifting that indirectly draws sperm into the chorion.

      The final experiments regarding CatSper1's role in mediating mouse sperm entry into the micropyle/chorion are not convincing. As no molecular interactions are described or perturbed, the reader cannot be sure whether the sperm's failure to enter is due to signaling via CatSper1 or whether the overall failure to undergo hyperactivation limits sperm motility such that the mutant sperm can no longer find and enter the zebrafish micropyle. Indeed, in Figure 5E, no CatSper1 mutant sperm are visible near any part of the egg, suggesting that overall motility is impaired, and this is not a phenotype specific to interactions with the micropyle.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigates the mechanism by which chronic stress induces locus coeruleus (LC) neuron degeneration. The authors demonstrate that chronic stress leads to internalization of α2A-adrenergic receptors (α2A-ARs) on LC-neurons, causing increased cytosolic noradrenaline (NA) accumulation and subsequent production of the neurotoxic metabolite DOPEGAL via monoamine oxidase A (MAO-A). The study suggests a mechanistic link between stress-induced α2A-AR internalization, disrupted autoinhibition, elevated NA metabolism, asparagine endopeptidase (AEP) activation, and Tau pathology relevant to Alzheimer's disease (AD). The conclusions of this paper are mostly well supported by data, but some aspects of image acquisition need to be extended.

      Strengths:

      This study clearly demonstrates the effects of chronic stimulation on the excitability of LC neurons using electrophysiological techniques. It also elucidates the role of α2-adrenergic receptor (α2-AR) internalization and the associated upstream and downstream signaling pathways of GIRK1 using a range of pharmacological agents, highlighting the innovative nature of the work.

      Additionally, the study identifies the involvement of the MAO-A-DOPEGAL-AEP pathway in this process. The topic is timely, the proposed mechanistic pathway is compelling, and the findings have translational relevance, particularly regarding therapeutic strategies targeting α2A-AR internalization in neurodegenerative diseases.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The manuscript reports that chronic stress for 5 days increases MAO-A levels in LC neurons, leading to the production of DOPEGAL, activation of AEP, and subsequent tau cleavage into the tau N368 fragment, ultimately contributing to neuronal damage. However, the authors used wild-type C57BL/6 mice, and previous literature has indicated that AEP-mediated tau cleavage in wild-type mice is minimal and generally insufficient to cause significant behavioral alterations. Please clarify and discuss this apparent discrepancy.

      (2) It is recommended that the authors include additional experiments to examine the effects of different durations and intensities of stress on MAO-A expression and AEP activity. This would strengthen the understanding of stress-induced biochemical changes and their thresholds.

      (3) Please clarify the rationale for the inconsistent stress durations used across Figures 3, 4, and 5. In some cases, a 3-day stress protocol is used, while in others, a 5-day protocol is applied. This discrepancy should be addressed to ensure clarity and experimental consistency.

      (4) The abbreviation "vMAT2" is incorrectly formatted. It should be "VMAT2," and the full name (vesicular monoamine transporter 2) should be provided at first mention.