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  1. Sep 2017
    1. Carbon dioxide a colorless,

      I really like this draft. It's super strong, especially because it presents a lot to work with. Bravo!

    2. Carbon Dioxide has a lot of power in changing the climate.

      So at this point we see your post has bloomed off topic. The post is about the term "carbon dioxide" not the THING carbon dioxide. How does this affect the way you think about the post?

    3. Many people have doubts about it, but when scientist come up with evidence it kind of makes them be more open to the idea.

      Who doubts? What is the basis for their doubts? How do "Climate Change Deniers" respond to the term or use the term?

    4. The impact of the term is big because it is some proof that climate change does exist.

      The term itself cannot be proof. What do you mean?

    5. e graph Carbon dioxide is warming the earth and causing climate change.

      This doesn't seem like very much. Why does it matter if temps rise .8 degrees? And what does this have to do with the controversy?

    6. According to scientist working with NASA the temperature has gone up due to the amount of Carbon Dioxide in the air.

      What does this graphic tell us? What does it have to do with carbon dioxide?

    7. climate change.

      Adding sources with high credentials to this could really boost ethos.

    8. ion. The plants absorb

      What is the connection between these two sentences?

    9. Carbon Dioxide

      Why capitalize the term throughout?

    10. Carbon Dioxide (Co2)

      Could you format this to bring focus and attention to the term? Maybe add information to the title, or a subtitle, that intimates it plays a role in the controversy?