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“Black Lives Matter” has been culturally impacted by women. During an interview with Marcia Chatelan, she discusses not only has African American males been targeted by police officers, but so have women. African American women have been profiled, harassed, sexually assaulted, and brutalized by police because of their gender. “We know that girls and women of color are also dying. The question is: does anyone care” (Chatelain 3)? The interviewer, Kaavya Asoka, mentioned why the killings of women haven’t received the same attention has men? Chatelan believes sexism has something to do on why women aren’t getting any attention. Sexism is an act of being prejudice against women. Police being sexist against women because they believe a man’s skin color is more of a threat.
What does this have to do with the phrase: Black Lives Matter?
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Marcia Chatelan
who is this? why should we listen to her?
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people weren’t saying the phrase “Black Lives Matter”, but it was obvious that there were campaigns or movements to prevent discrimination and nonviolence acts.
Great! You're moving the focus to the phrase. So what is the connection between the history of discrimination against black people in America and the phrase?
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Police officers who are being acquitted for their poor mistakes is a challenge to the criminal justice system because there wasn’t any justice served.
What does the King incident have to do with the phrase Black Lives Matter?
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s ignored
The phrase is ignored? By whom? I don't know anyone who hasn't heard or said that phrase. Most people I know have weighed in on the issues the phrase evokes. Be sure to make a clear distinction between the phrase and the thing/s the phrase represents.
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the expression Black Lives Matter, most of us will readily agree that it is a powerful organization
The "expression" is "an organization"? What does that mean?
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nnotated Bibliographies
Nice work using space, images, attribution, quotations, and the 5 sentence format (mostly)!
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I believe some politicians would find this text useful so they can be aware of how Black Lives Matter can impact politics.
Who reads the independent? What is that source? What kind?
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nice observation!
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The students use tweets on Twitter to back up their evidence. In 2014, 66,159 tweets mentioned the “Black Lives Matter” hashtag.
Interesting and useful to have in here.
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The purpose of this interview is to inform people that sexism still exists and that police officers do not only target African American males, but women as well.
This seems a little misleading, given your identification of the thesis. Few credible people believe that sexism doesn't exist (perhaps no credible people... there is plenty of evidence to suggest that it does). Can you get more precise and consistent in this assessment?
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The intended audience is everyone.
Nope. Use your imagination: who is likely to do something with the information she provides? Who is she addressing when she writes "My life matters'? Not her mother, let's hope.
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Where do they come from?
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Black Lives Matter, argues when and where did the expression “Black Lives Matter” first emerged in public disclosure. She claims that Black Lives Matter originated in the South of 1954.
Can you combine these sentences? What happens when you do?
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intended audience is everyone
Not everyone is going to be responsive to Edwards' message. Is she speaking to people who might have a wrongheaded idea of what BLM means? Who would that be? Or perhaps she's speaking to people who sympathize with her cause but don't fully participate? Why would she want to do that?
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