7 Matching Annotations
- Mar 2024
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sites.google.com sites.google.com
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Growing up surrounded by the rich tapestry of Nantucket's maritime culture, I
Do you need this phrase? "maritime" is a powerful word. If we hear it too much it becomes heavy.
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ed her N
"by her,,,"
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its role as the birthplace of the Star Spangled Banner
the ship has a role and is a place? This strains logic. What do you mean?
Maybe a touch more about the Minden? This blurb refers to "resilience" and "patriotism" without mentioning why.
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sites.google.com sites.google.com
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Our art isn't just for collectors' walls—it's also found in the interiors of local hotels and homes.
While technically correct writing, this sentence is hart do read.
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ity. Al
How to transition between the two sentences? Maybe a semicolon or combining them.
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provided
"...to providing"
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since
"in 1983"
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