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Lots of great research and information. Your blog says tells the reader you have spent a vast amount of time collating the information you portrayed. It is possible i may have missed it, but have you considered defining your habitus? Otherwise, good balance of the text to imagery ratio!
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Your blog is playful and fun and makes the reading experience a bit less dragging. In saying that, some parts are left leaving the reader what it is they are looking at. Great content and a solid effort overall!
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Great in depth notes int he first and last weeks to date. Are you aware your blog is missing some notes for Weeks 2 and 3? As well as a bit more visuals to help aid all the great content you have. Overall a solid effort!
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Great Blog Outlook, opening your blog invokes feelings of suspense as you feel like you have to know what this blog is about. It starts out intriguing and then gets very wordy. I would recommend being consistent with word to image ratio all the way through. Otherwise, great effort!
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