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  1. May 2019
    1. Images of the cent

      Your workflow is consistent and orderly. It is refreshing to see consistency and neatness in all your work and reserach. Moving forward, it would be really interesting to see how all your research and findings influence your design. Look forward to seeing it all. Good job overall!

    1. IGNITY

      Great research thus far. It would be good to see more of how your research has influenced your design decisions for the Endeavour foundation. Look forward to seeing it all.

    1. Job well done being consistent week in and week out. You have clearly are well informed in your process work and the reader definitely has a good understanding of what it is you are trying to accomplish through looking at your process journal. Keen to see you ideas come into fruition! Great work overall!

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    1. their bodies

      Going from research and process work for the Endeavour Foundation project, It's great to see the beginning of your research and thinking that will affect your design decisions. Moving forward, think about showing the reader more hands on, messy work. Paul mentioned before how he likes to see mess and thought process so no doubt the behind the scenes stuff you usually hide will earn you extra points:) But good effort so far!

  3. Apr 2019
    1. Very extensive research undertaken this far into the assignment. Really interested to see how you translate this into your design choices int he space we have been given. Keep it up!

    1. l interior designer in

      Great WorkFlow thus far and a great journal design. You are probably still yet to post, but might i recommend a use of mixed modes to showcase your research and how it has influenced your design. Keen to see what your findings are and how they influence your design choices.

    1. Your workflow is very promising with some pretty great concepts in there. Good use of research to influence your design and a good workflow. Keen to see how your design turns out!

    1. Your journey throughout the project is consistent and promising with a wide array of process work documentation accounting for your research. Really agree with the other comments and keep up the great work! Look forward to seeing the journey unfold more.

    2. disability

      Great start in the research department. You are probably getting to this part, but have you considered drawing parallels to your research and outlining how what you have found influences your design decisions? Overall, great start to the design process

    1. f the space that

      Not sure whether there i missed a page, however i cannot seem to find your week to week process journals. Have you considered making your journal platform easier to navigate? It is a bit unclear where to look and i do not see any process weekly work. I am sure you are doing them, I just do not have access on my end.

    1. social in

      There is evidence that you are keeping up with the weeks, but not entirely. Have you considered organising your journal in a clear and concise manner to make it simpler for the viewer to navigate and understand your working progress? You still have time to add more information, but overall solid effort!

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    1. e and e

      Great start to the research process! Your timeline is informative and playful, great use of colour and a legend to guide you and the viewer as to what state each week is in. Would be good to see where your research has led you. Overall, solid effort!

    1. - Encourage involve

      Very in depth, raw research. Good to see a variety of modes that display your findings. Will be interesting to see how your research will influence your design. Great effort!

    1. CT TIM

      Your timeline is succinct and to the point. You are most probably getting to this part, however. evidence that you are following through with your timeline and keeping on track is beneficial. But again, I am sure i have beat you to that and you are on it! Overall, Great work!

  5. Mar 2019
    1. rk swimming po

      Lots of great research and information. Your blog says tells the reader you have spent a vast amount of time collating the information you portrayed. It is possible i may have missed it, but have you considered defining your habitus? Otherwise, good balance of the text to imagery ratio!

    1. Your blog is playful and fun and makes the reading experience a bit less dragging. In saying that, some parts are left leaving the reader what it is they are looking at. Great content and a solid effort overall!

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    1. 1 - Disability

      Great in depth notes int he first and last weeks to date. Are you aware your blog is missing some notes for Weeks 2 and 3? As well as a bit more visuals to help aid all the great content you have. Overall a solid effort!

    1. Great Blog Outlook, opening your blog invokes feelings of suspense as you feel like you have to know what this blog is about. It starts out intriguing and then gets very wordy. I would recommend being consistent with word to image ratio all the way through. Otherwise, great effort!