Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In this paper, authors investigated the role of RUNT-related transcription factor 2 (RUNX2) in oral squamous carcinoma (OSCC) growth and resistance to ferroptosis. They found that RUNX2 suppresses ferroptosis through transcriptional regulation of peroxiredoxin-2. They further explored the upstream positive regulator of RUNX2, HOXA10 and found that HOXA1/RNUX2/PRDX2 axis protects OSCC from ferroptosis.

Strengths:

The study is well designed and provides a novel mechanism of HOXA1/RNUX2/PRDX2 control of ferroptosis in OSCC.

Weaknesses:

According to the data presented in (Figure 2F, Figure 3F and G, Figure 5D and Figure 6E and F), apoptosis seems to be affected in the same amount as ferroptosis by HOXA1/RNUX2/PRDX2 axis, which raises a question on the authors' specific focus on ferroptosis in this study. Reasonably, authors should adapt the title and the abstract in a way that it recapitulates the whole data, which is HOXA1/RNUX2/PRDX2 axis control of cell death, including ferroptosis and apoptosis in OSCC.

Comments on revisions:

The revised manuscript has been well improved, and I'm satisfied with the authors' response to my comments.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Epiney et al. use single-nuclei RNA sequencing (snRNA-seq) to characterize the lineage of Type-2 (T2) neuroblasts (NBs) in the adult Drosophila brain. To isolate cells born from T2 NBs, the authors used a genetic tool that specifically allows the permanent labeling of T2-derived cell types, which are then FAC-sorted for snRNA-seq. This effective labeling approach also allows them to compare the isolated T2 lineage cells with T1-derived cell types by a simple exclusion method. The authors begin by describing a transcriptomic atlas for all T1 and T2-derived neuronal and glia clusters, reporting that the T2-derived lineage comprises 161 neuronal clusters, in contrast to the T1 lineage which comprises 114 of them. The authors then use the expression of VAChT, VGlut, Gad1, Tbh, Ple, SerT, and Tdc2 to show that T2 neuroblasts generate all major neuron classes of fast-acting neurotransmitters. Strikingly, they show that a subset of glia and neuronal clusters have disproportionate enrichment in males or females, suggesting that T2 neuroblasts generate sex-biased cell types. The authors then proceed to characterize neuropeptide expression across T2-derived neuronal clusters and argue that the same neuropeptide can be expressed across different cell types, while similar cell types can express distinct neuropeptides. The functional implication of both observations, however, remains to be tested. Furthermore, the authors describe combinatorial transcription factor (TF) codes that are correlated with neuropeptide expression for T2-derived neurons along with an overall TF code for all T2-derived cell types, both of which will serve as an important starting point for future investigations. Finally, the authors map well-studied neuronal types of the central complex to the clusters of their T2-derived snRNA-seq dataset. They use known marker combinations, bulk RNA-seq data and highly specific split-GAL4 driver lines to annotate their T2-derived atlas, establishing a comprehensive transcriptomic atlas that would guide future studies in this field.

Strengths:

This study provides an in-depth transcriptomic characterization of neurons and glia derived from Type-2 neuroblast lineages. The results of this manuscript offer several future directions to investigate the mechanisms of diversifying neuronal identity. The datasets of T1-derived and T2-derived cells will pave the way for studies focused on the functional analysis of combinatorial TF codes specifying cell identity, sex-based differences in neurogenesis and gliogenesis, the relationship between neuropeptide (co)expression and cell identity, and the differential contributions of distinct progenitor populations to the same cell type.

Weaknesses:

The study presents several important observations based on the characterization of Type II neuroblast-derived lineages. However, a mechanistic insight is missing for most observations. The idea that there is a sex-specific bias to certain T2-derived neurons and glial clusters is quite interesting, however, the functional significance of this observation is not tested or discussed extensively. Finally, the authors do not show whether the combinatorial TF code is indeed necessary for neuropeptide expression or if this is just a correlation due to cell identity being defined by TFs. Functional knockdown of some candidate TFs for a subset of neuropeptide-expressing cells would have been helpful in this case.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have addressed my recommendations.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors developed a novel tool, SCellBOW, to perform cell clustering and infer survival risks on individual cancer cell clusters from the single cell RNA seq dataset. The key ideas/techniques used in the tool include transfer learning, bag of words (BOW), and phenotype algebra which is similar to word algebra from natural language processing (NLP). Comparisons with existing methods demonstrated that SCellBOW provides superior clustering results and exhibits robust performance across a wide range of datasets. Importantly, a distinguishing feature of SCellBOW compared to other tools is its ability to assign risk scores to specific cancer cell clusters. Using SCellBOW, the authors identified a new group of prostate cancer cells characterized by a highly aggressive and dedifferentiated phenotype.

Strengths:

The application of natural language processing (NLP) to single-cell RNA sequencing (scRNA-seq) datasets is both smart and insightful. Encoding gene expression levels as word frequencies is a creative way to apply text analysis techniques to biological data. When combined with transfer learning, this approach enhances our ability to describe the heterogeneity of different cells, offering a novel method for understanding the biological behavior of individual cells and surpassing the capabilities of existing cell clustering methods. Moreover, the ability of the package to predict risk, particularly within cancer datasets, significantly expands the potential applications.

Weaknesses:

Given the promising nature of this tool, it would be beneficial for the authors to test the risk-stratification functionality on other types of tumors with high heterogeneity, such as liver and pancreatic cancers, which currently lack clinically relevant and well-recognized stratification methods. Additionally, it would be worthwhile to investigate how the tool could be applied to spatial transcriptomics by analyzing cell embeddings from different layers within these tissues.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors investigated the population structure of the invasive weed Lantana camara from 36 localities in India using 19,008 genome-wide SNPs obtained through ddRAD sequencing.

Strengths:<br /> The manuscript is well-written, the analyses are sound, and the figures are of great quality.

Weaknesses:

The narrative almost completely ignores the fact that this plant is popular in horticultural trade and the different color morphs that form genetic populations are most likely the result of artificial selection by humans for certain colors for trade, and not the result of natural selfing. Although it may be possible that the genetic clustering of color morphs is maintained in the wild through selfing, there is no evidence in this study to support that. The high levels of homozygosity are more likely explained as a result of artificial selection in horticulture and relatively recent introductions in India. Therefore, the claim of the title that "the population structure.. is shaped by its mating system" is in part moot, because any population structure is in large part shaped by the mating system of the organism, but further misleading because it is much more likely artificial selection that caused the patterns observed.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

The authors present tviblindi, an algorithm to infer cell development trajectories from single-cell molecular data. The paper is well-written and the algorithm is conceptually interesting. However, the validation is incomplete as the comparison against existing trajectory inference methods is weak: although the lack of a proper benchmark was pointed out as the main weakness of the original version of the manuscript, the revised version still only contains qualitative comparisons against state-of-the-art methods.

Both me and Reviewer 2 pointed out that the lack of a proper benchmark against state-of-the-art methods on a wider variety of datasets (including scRNA-seq data) was a major weakness of the original version of the manuscript. In response to this criticism, the authors now did the following:

- They ran various competitor methods on the datasets that were used already for the previous version of the manuscript.<br /> - They ran tviblindi and two of the competitors on two public scRNA-seq datasets.<br /> - For all datasets, they qualitatively assessed the trajectories computed by tviblindi and its competitors and argued that tviblindi's trajectories better reflect the biological signal in the data.<br /> - The results of all of these additional analyses are reported in the supplement, which has now become very lengthy (88 pages).

In my opinion, this is insufficient to establish that tviblindi is comparable or even superior to the state of the art in the field. To show that this is the case, the authors would have to carry out a systematic benchmark study which relies on quantitative evaluation metrics rather than on qualitative intepretations of trajectories. As method developers, we are all susceptive to confirmation bias when comparing our new algorithms to the state of the art. To avoid this pitfall, reporting quantitative performance metrics is required. At the moment, the only quantitative metric reported by the authors is runtime, which is insufficient.

Moreover, the results of a benchmark study should be reported in the main manuscript, not in the supplement. When presenting a new algorithm in a field as crowded as trajectory inference, a benchmark against the state of the art serves to establish trust in the new algorithm and to provide the readers with a rationale to use it for their research. For this, the results of the benchmark have to be presented prominently and should not be hidden in the supplement.

A second major criticism raised in Reviewer 2's review of the original version of the manuscript is that tviblindi invites cherry picking due to its inherently interactive design. In response to this, the authors now argue at length that "the data-driven expert interpretation approach of tviblindi" (quote from Section 2.2.2) is a strength rather than a weakness. If we concede for the sake of the argument that tviblindi's "expert interpretation approach" is indeed a strength of the method (although I tend to agree with Reviewer 2 that it is rather a limitation), usability for biologists becomes critical. However, given the current implementation of tviblindi, its usability is far from optimal. The authors do not provide tviblindi as a web interface that is directly usable for domain experts without programming experience and not even as a package that is installable via some widely used package manager such as conda. Instead, they implemented tviblindi as an R package with a Shiny GUI that can either run in a Docker container or requires the installation of several dependencies. I therefore strongly doubt that many biologists will be able or willing to run tviblindi, which substantially limits the value of its "expert interpretation approach". Moreover, tviblindi does not support Apple silicon, which prevented also myself from testing the tool.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In this work, Huang et al. revealed the complex regulatory functions and transcription network of 172 unknown transcriptional factors (TFs) in Pseudomonas aeruginosa PAO1. They have built a global TF-DNA binding landscape and elucidated binding preferences and functional roles of these TFs. More specifically, the authors established a hierarchical regulatory network and identified ternary regulatory motifs, and co-association modules. Since P. aeruginosa is a well known pathogen, the authors thus identified key TFs associated with virulence pathways (e.g., quorum sensing [QS], motility, biofilm formation), which could be potential drug targets for future development. The authors also explored the TF conservation and functional evolution through pan-genome and phylogenetic analyses. For the easy searching by other researchers, the authors developed a publicly accessible database (PATF_Net) integrating ChIP-seq and HT-SELEX data.

Strengths:

(1) The authors performed ChIP-seq analysis of 172 TFs (nearly half of the 373 predicted TFs in P. aeruginosa) and identified 81,009 significant binding peaks, representing one of the largest TF-DNA interaction studies in the field. Also, The integration of HT-SELEX, pan-genome, and phylogenetic analyses provided multi-dimensional insights into TF conservation and function.

(2) The authors provided informative analytical Framework for presenting the TFs, where a hierarchical network model based on the "hierarchy index (h)" classified TFs into top, middle, and bottom levels. They identified 13 ternary regulatory motifs and co-association clusters, which deepened our understanding of complex regulatory interactions.

(3) The PATF_Net database provides TF-target network visualization and data-sharing capabilities, offering practical utility for researchers especially for the P. aeruginosa field.

Weaknesses:

(1) There is very limited experimental validation for this study. Although 24 virulence-related master regulators (e.g., PA0815 regulating motility, biofilm, and QS) were identified, functional validation (e.g., gene knockout or phenotypic assays) is lacking, leaving some conclusions reliant on bioinformatic predictions. Another approach for validation is checking the mutations of these TFs from clinical strains of P. aeruginosa, where chronically adapted isolates often gain mutations in virulence regulators.

(2) ChIP-seq in bacteria may suffer from low-abundance TF signals and off-target effects. The functional implications of non-promoter binding peaks (e.g., coding regions) were not discussed.

(3) PATF_Net currently supports basic queries but lacks advanced tools (e.g., dynamic network modeling or cross-species comparisons). User experience and accessibility remain underevaluated. But this could be improved in the future.

Achievement of Aims and Support for Conclusions

(1) The authors successfully mapped global P. aeruginosa TF binding sites, constructed hierarchical networks and co-association modules, and identified virulence-related TFs, fulfilling the primary objectives. The database and pan-genome analysis provide foundational resources for future studies.

(2) The hierarchical model aligns with known virulence mechanisms (e.g., LasR and ExsA at the bottom level directly regulating virulence genes). Co-association findings (e.g., PA2417 and PA2718 co-regulating pqsH) resonate with prior studies, though experimental confirmation of synergy is needed.

Impact on the Field and Utility of Data/Methods

(1) This study fills critical gaps in TF functional annotation in P. aeruginosa, offering new insights into pathogenicity mechanisms (e.g., antibiotic resistance, host adaptation). The hierarchical and co-association frameworks are transferable to other pathogens, advancing comparative studies of bacterial regulatory networks.

(2) PATF_Net enables rapid exploration of TF-target interactions, accelerating candidate regulator discovery.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In their manuscript, the authors provide compelling evidence that stimulus-frequency otoacoustic emission (SFOAE) phase-gradient delays predict the sharpness (quality factors) of auditory-nerve-fiber (ANF) frequency tuning curves in budgerigars. In contrast with mammals, neither SFOAE- nor ANF-based measures of cochlear tuning match the frequency dependence of behavioral tuning in this species of parakeet. Although the reason for the discrepant behavioral results (taken from previous studies) remains unexplained, the present data provide significant and important support for the utility of otoacoustic estimates of cochlear tuning, a methodology previously explored only in mammals.

Strengths:

* The OAE and ANF data appear solid and believable. (The behavioral data are taken from previous studies and the resulting limitations are discussed.)

* No other study in birds (and only a single previous study in mammals) has combined behavioral, auditory-nerve, and otoacoustic estimates of cochlear tuning in a single species.

* SFOAE-based estimates of cochlear tuning were obtained by assuming that the tuning ratio estimated in chicken applies also to the budgerigar. Possible complications arising from an avian apical-basal transition analogous to that found in mammals are discussed.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

By combining bioinformatical and experimental approaches, the authors address the question why several vertebrate lineages lack specific genes of the necroptosis pathway, or those that regulate the interplay between apoptosis and necroptosis. The lack of such genes was already known from previous publications, but the current manuscript provides a more in-depth analysis and also uses experiments in human cells to address the question of functionality of the remaining genes and pathways. A particular focus is placed on RIPK3/RIPK1 and their dual roles in inducing NFkB and/or necroptosis.

Strengths:

The well documented bioinformatical analyses provide a comprehensive data basis of the presence/absence of RIP-kinases, other RHIM proteins, apoptosis signaling proteins (FADD,CASP8,CASP10) and some other genes involved in these pathway. Several of these genes are known to be missing in certain animal lineages, which raises the question why their canonical binding partners are present in these species. By expressing several such proteins (both wildtype and mutants destroying particular interaction regions) in human cells, the authors succeed in establishing a general role of RIPK3 and RIPK1 in NFkB activation. This function appears to be better conserved and more universal than the necroptotic function of the RHIM proteins. The authors also scrutinize the importance of the kinase function and RHIM integrity for these separate functionalities.

Weaknesses:

A weakness of the presented study is the experimental restriction to human HEK293 cells. There are several situations where the functionality of proteins from distant organisms (like lampreys or even mussels) in human cells is not necessarily indicative of their function in native context. In some cases, these problems are addressed by co-expressing potential interaction partners, but not all of these experiments are really informative. However, I agree with the authors that it is not possible to perform all the experiments in native cells, and that comparing all proteins in the same (human) cell type allows for a better comparison.

The conclusions drawn by the authors are supported by convincing evidence. I have no doubts that this study will be very useful for future studies addressing the evolution of necroptosis and its regulation by NFkB and apoptosis.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors have provided a mechanism by which how presence of truncated P53 can inactivate function of full length P53 protein. The authors proposed this happens by sequestration of full length P53 by truncated P53. In the study, the performed experiments are well described.

Significance:

The work in significant, since it points out more mechanistic insight how wild type full length P53 could be inactivated in the presence of truncated isoforms, this might offer new opportunity to recover P53 function as treatment strategies against cancer.

Comments on latest version:

The authors have made significant effort to address my concerns using the system available to them. I find the justifications provided in the rebuttal letter and the revised figures satisfactory. My initial concerns regarding the overexpression system have been largely addressed. However, the experimental system used by the authors lacks the means to measure the effect on endogenous p53, which remains a limitation.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The concept that trained immunity, as defined, can be beneficial to subsequent immune challenges is important in the broad context of health and disease. The significance of this manuscript is the finding that trained immunity is actually a two-edged sword, herein, detrimental in the context of LPS-induced Acute Lung Injury that is mediated by AMs.

Strengths:

Several lines of evidence in different mouse models support this conclusion. The postulation that differences in immune responses in individuals is linked to differences in the mycobiome and consequent B-glucan makeup is provocative.

Weaknesses:

However, the findings that the authors state are relevant to sepsis are actually confined to a specific lung injury model and not classically-defined sepsis, the ontogeny of the reprogrammed AMs is uncertain, and links in the proposed signaling pathways need to be strengthened.

Comments on the latest version:

The manuscript is improved with further clarifications and additional experimentation. My prior concerns are addressed.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript presents a study on expectation manipulation to induce placebo and nocebo effects in healthy participants. The study follows standard placebo experiment conventions with the use of TENS stimulation as the placebo manipulation. The authors were able to achieve their aims. A key finding is that placebo and nocebo effects were predicted by recent experience, which is a novel contribution to the literature. The findings provide insights into the differences between placebo and nocebo effects and the potential moderators of these effects.

Specifically, the study aimed to:

(1) assess the magnitude of placebo and nocebo effects immediately after induction through verbal instructions and conditioning<br /> (2) examine the persistence of these effects one week later, and<br /> (3) identify predictors of sustained placebo and nocebo responses over time.

Strengths:

An innovation was to use sham TENS stimulation as the expectation manipulation. This expectation manipulation was reinforced not only by the change in pain stimulus intensity, but also by delivery of non-painful electrical stimulation, labelled as TENS stimulation.

Questionnaire-based treatment expectation ratings were collected before conditioning and after conditioning, and after the test session, which provided an explicit measure of participants' expectations about the manipulation.

The finding that placebo and nocebo effects are influenced by recent experience provides a novel insight into a potential moderator of individual placebo effects.

Weaknesses:

There are a limited number of trials per test condition (10), which means that the trajectory of responses to the manipulation may not be adequately explored.

On day 8, one stimulus per stimulation intensity (i.e., VAS 40, 60, and 80) was applied before the start of the test session to re-familiarise participants with the thermal stimulation. There is a potential risk of revealing the manipulation to participants during the re-familiarization process, as they were not previously briefed to expect the painful stimulus intensity to vary without the application of sham TENS stimulation.

The differences between the nocebo and control conditions in pain ratings during conditioning could be explained by the differing physiological effects of the different stimulus intensities, so it is difficult to make any claims about expectation effects here.

A randomisation error meant that 25 participants received an unbalanced number of 448 trials per condition (i.e., 10 x VAS 40, 14 x VAS 60, 12 x VAS 80).

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Previous studies have shown that the MSH6 family of mismatch repair proteins contains an unstructured N-terminal domain that contains either a PWWP domain, a Tudor domain or neither and that the interaction of the histone reader domains with the appropriate histone H3 modification enhances mismatch repair, and hence reduces mutation rates in coding regions to some extent. However, the elimination of the MSH6-histone modification probably does not completely eliminate mismatch repair, although the published papers on this point do not seem definitive.

In this study, the authors perform a details phylogenetic analysis of the presence of the PWWP and Tudor domains in MSH6 proteins across the tree of life. They observe that there are basically three classes of organisms that contain either a PWWP domain, a Tudor domain, or neither. On the basis of their analysis, they suggest that this represents convergent evolution of the independent acquisition of histone reader domains and that key amino acid residues in the reader domains are selected for.

Strengths:

The phylogenetic aspects of the work seem well done and the basic evolutionary conclusions of the work are well supported. The basic evolutionary conclusions are interesting and there is little to criticize from my perspective.

Weaknesses:

A major concern about this paper is that the authors fail to put their work into the proper context of what is already known about the N-terminus of MSH6. Further, their structural studies, which are really structural illustrations, are misleading, often incorrect, and not always helpful in addition to having been published before.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Is peristimulus alpha (8-14 Hz) frequency and/or phase involved in shaping the length of visual and audiovisual temporal binding windows, as posited by the discrete sampling hypothesis? If so, to what extent and perceptual scenario are they functionally relevant? The authors addressed such questions by collecting EEG data during the completion of the widely-known 2-flash fusion paradigm, administered both in a standard (i.e., visual only, F2) and audiovisual (i.e., 2 flashes and 1 beep, F2B1) fashion. Instantaneous frequency estimation performed over parieto-occipital sensors revealed slower alpha rhythms right after stimulus onset in the F2B1 condition, as compared to the F2, a pattern found to correlate with the difference between modality-specific ISIs (F2B1-F2). Of note, peristimulus alpha frequency differed also between 1 vs 2 flashes reports, although in the visual modality only (i.e., faster alpha oscillations in 2 flash percept vs 1 flash). This pattern of results was reinvigorated in a causal manner via occipital tACS, which was capable of, respectively, narrowing down vs enlarging the temporal binding window of individuals undergoing 13 Hz vs 8 Hz stimulation in the F2 modality alone. To elucidate what the oscillatory signatures of crossmodal integration might be, the authors further focused on the phase of posterior alpha rhythms. Accordingly, the Phase Opposition Sum proved to significantly differ between modalities (F2B1 vs F2) during the prestimulus time window, suggesting that audiovisual signals undergo finer processing based on the ongoing phase of occipital alpha oscillations, rather than the speed at which these rhythms cycle. As a last bit of information, a computational model factoring in the electrophysiological assumptions of both the discrete sampling hypothesis and auditory-induced phase-resetting was devised. Analyses run on such synthetic data were partially able to reproduce the patterns witnessed in the empirical dataset. While faster frequency rates broadly provide a higher probability to detect 2 flashes instead of 1, the occurrence of a concurrent auditory signal in cross-modal trials should cause a transient elongation (i.e. slower frequency rate) of the ongoing alpha cycle due to phase-reset dynamics (as revealed via inter-trial phase clustering), prompting larger ISIs during F2B1 trials. Conversely, the model provides that alpha oscillatory phase might predict how well an observer dissociates sensory information from noise (i.e., perceptual clarity), with the second flash clearly perceived as such as long as it falls within specific phase windows along the alpha cycle.

Strengths:

The authors leveraged complementary approaches (EEG, tACS, and computational modelling), the results thereof not only integrate, but depict an overarching mechanistic scenario elegantly framing phase-resetting dynamics into the broader theoretical architecture posited by the discrete sampling hypothesis. Analyses on brain oscillations (either via frequency sliding and phase opposition sum) mostly appear to be methodologically sound, and very-well supported by tACS results. Under this perspective, the modelling approach serves as a convenient tool to reconcile and shed more light on the pieces of evidence gathered on empirical data, returning an appealing account on how cross-modal stimuli interplay with ongoing alpha rhythms and differentially affect multisensory processing in humans.

Weaknesses:

Some information relative to the task and the analyses is missing. For instance, it is not entirely clear from the text what the number of flashes actually displayed in explicit short trials is (1 or 2?). We believe it is always two, but it should be explicitly stated.

Moreover, the sample size might be an issue. As highlighted by a recent meta-analysis on the matter (Samaha & Romei, 2024), an underpowered sample size may very well drive null-findings relative to tACS data in F2B1 trials, in interplay with broad and un-individualized frequency targets.

Some criticality arises regarding the actual "bistability" of bistable trials, as the statistics relative to the main task (i.e., the actual means and SEMs are missing) broadly point toward a higher proclivity to report 2 instead of 1 flash in both F2B1 and F2 trials. This makes sense to some extent, given that 2 flashes have always been displayed (at least in bistable trials), yet tells about something botched during the pretest titration procedure.

Coming to the analyses on brain waves, one main concern relates to the phase-reset-induced slow-down of posterior alpha rhythms being of true oscillatory nature, rather than a mere evoked response (i.e., not sustained over time). Another question calling for some further scrutiny regards the overlooked pattern linking the temporal extent of the IAF differences between F2 and F2B1 trials with the ISIs across experimental conditions (explicit short, bistable, and explicit long). That is, the wider the ISI, the longer the temporal extent of the IAF difference between sensory modalities. Although neglected by the authors, such a trend speaks in favour of a rather nuanced scenario stemming from not only auditory-induced phase-reset alpha cycle elongation, but also some non-linear and perhaps super-additive contribution of flash-induced phase-resetting. This consideration introduces some of the issues about the computational simulation, which was modelled around the assumption of phase-resetting being triggered by acoustic stimuli alone. Given how appealing the model already is, I wonder whether the authors might refine the model accordingly and integrate the phase-resetting impact of visual stimuli upon synthetic alpha rhythms. Relatedly, I would also suggest the authors to throw in a few more simulations to explore the parameter space and assay, to which quantitative extent the model still holds (e.g. allowing alpha frequency to randomly change within a range between 8 and 13 Hz, or pivoting the phase delay around 10 or 50 ms). As a last remark, I would avoid, or at least tone down, concluding that the results hereby presented might reconcile and/or explain the null effects in Buergers & Noppeney, 2022; as the relationship between IAFs and audiovisual abilities still holds when examining other cross-modal paradigms such as the Sound-Induced Flash-Illusion (Noguchi, 2022), and the aforementioned patterns might be due to other factors, such as a too small sample size (Samaha & Romei, 2024).

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Summary:

In this paper, the authors aimed to test the ability of bumblebees to use bird-view and ground-view for homing in cluttered landscapes. Using modelling and behavioural experiments, the authors showed that bumblebees rely most on ground-views for homing.

Strengths:

The behavioural experiments are well-designed, and the statistical analyses are appropriate for the data presented. 

Weaknesses:

Views of animals are from a rather small catchment area.

Missing a discussion on why image difference functions were sufficient to explain homing in wasps (Murray and Zeil 2017).

The artificial habitat is not really 'cluttered' since landmarks are quite uniform, making it difficult to infer ecological relevance.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper tackles an important question: What drives the predictability of pre-stimulus brain activity? The authors challenge the claim that "pre-onset" encoding effects in naturalistic language data have to reflect the brain predicting the upcoming word. They lay out an alternative explanation: because language has statistical structure and dependencies, the "pre-onset" effect might arise from these dependencies, instead of active prediction. The authors analyze two MEG datasets with naturalistic data.

Strengths:

The paper proposes a very reasonable alternative hypothesis for claims in prior work. Two independent datasets are analyzed. The analyses with the most and least predictive words are clever, and nicely complement the more naturalistic analyses.

Weaknesses:

I have to admit that I have a hard time understanding one conceptual aspect of the work, and a few technical aspects of the analyses are unclear to me. Conceptually, I am not clear on why stimulus dependencies need to be different from those of prediction. Yes, it is true that actively predicting an upcoming word is different from just letting the regression model pick up on stimulus dependencies, but given that humans are statistical learners, we also just pick up on stimulus dependencies, and is that different from prediction? Isn't that in some way, the definition of prediction (sensitivity to stimulus dependencies, and anticipating the most likely upcoming input(s))?

This brings me to some of the technical points: If the encoding regression model is learning one set of regression weights, how can those reflect stimulus dependencies (or am I misunderstanding which weights are learned)? Would it help to fit regression models on for instance, every second word or something (that should get rid of stimulus dependencies, but still allow to test whether the model predicts brain activity associated with words)? Or does that miss the point? I am a bit unclear as to what the actual "problem" with the encoding model analyses is, and how the stimulus dependency bias would be evident. It would be very helpful if the authors could spell out, more explicitly, the precise predictions of how the bias would be present in the encoding model.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This fMRI study shows that two regions of the visual cortex (BA18 and BA19) of blind and sighted individuals carry information about the physical similarity of objects denoted by words. This effect was found for written words (Braille in blind, visual in sighted) but not spoken words. The evidence complements earlier studies reporting physical similarity effects in the occipitotemporal cortex of blind and sighted individuals (e.g., Peelen et al., 2014).

Strengths:

The study addresses an important question in the fields of neural plasticity and visual cortex organization. The study is generally well-conducted and the findings are clearly presented.

Weaknesses:

While the evidence is statistically strong, it is currently incomplete because of missing control analyses (see below). The framing of the results, as arguing against the pluripotent cortex account, is not entirely convincing as it was not clear that the study addressed the key predictions of that account.

Main comments:

(1) The study is framed as a test of Bedny's "cognitively pluripotent cortex" proposal (2017) that attributes the increased visual cortex response to linguistic stimuli in blind individuals to high-level cognitive functions. Key evidence for this account came from studies showing increased responses in blind visual cortex to certain grammatical manipulations and to solving mathematical equations. The current study did not include such manipulations. Instead, the current study focused on the representation of objects denoted by single words. Bedny's account did not make a strong argument that the physical similarity of word referents should be differently represented in blind and sighted individuals - if it did, please state this explicitly. Indeed, evidence that (some regions of) the visual cortex represent objects similarly in blind and sighted individuals does not seem incompatible with it.

(2) Throughout the manuscript (including the abstract) it was not clear what was meant with "visual cortex" or "visual areas"; whether this refers to early visual cortex (V1/BA17) or to visual cortex more generally (e.g., BA17-BA19, occipitotemporal cortex (MT, etc)). This is important for the theoretical arguments and for the interpretation of the results. If visual cortex = BA17, the current results point to potentially important differences between blind and sighted individuals, with the physical similarity of objects only observed in the visual cortex of the blind. If visual cortex is meant to include areas beyond BA17, the blind and sighted show similarities in the current study, although such similarities have been observed before using similar research approaches.

(3) Related to the point above, the abstract does not accurately describe the results, as it only describes the similarities between blind and sighted but not the differences. The study revealed differences between groups, particularly in BA17 - primary visual cortex. The differences between the groups are also illustrated by the strikingly different searchlight results in the two groups separately (Figure S6). These differences do not reach significance in a whole-brain-corrected contrast, but that likely reflects a lack of power (particularly for a between-group contrast).

(4) Results were found for written words but not spoken words (Figure S9). This is somewhat surprising considering that the visual cortex was more strongly activated for written words in the sighted, with this activation presumably not adding any information about the physical properties of word referents. Together with the widespread significance of clusters correlating with the physical similarity matrix (Figure 6), this raises the possibility of a confound. It would be good to ensure that this is not the case, e.g., you could create similarity matrices based on word length, word visual similarity (e.g., overlap in letters), and word frequency, and correlate these matrices with the physical similarity matrix to ensure that these correlations are not positive (or if they are, partial it out).

(5) The study included a task manipulation, with participants either judging physical or conceptual properties. This task manipulation is a central aspect of the design but does not feature anywhere in the results, and is also not discussed or introduced in the text. It would be interesting to know whether the results depend on the property (physical/conceptual) being task-relevant. But more importantly, a potential concern is that the responses in the task (given for each object using a two-response button box) correlate with physical or conceptual similarity and that this explains the fMRI findings. For example, two objects that are elongated would both receive a "yes" button press when participants answer the question "is this elongated"; these objects would also be rated as physically similar. This may apply more to physical than conceptual similarity. To exclude this possibility, the responses need to be analysed and included in the fMRI analyses, either as a regressor in the GLM or as another matrix to be partialed out at the final stage of analysis.

(4) Many of the blind participants had some residual vision (9/20 had light perception, 2/20 had contour perception); this could possibly have prevented the reorganization of visual cortex.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

It is known that the nrp operon is induced by copper deprivation and encodes the synthesis of chalkophores. The authors carried out a genetic analysis that revealed transcriptional differences for WT and Mtb∆nrp when exposed to the copper chelator tetrathiomolybdate (TTM). The authors found that copper chelation results in upregulation of genes in the chalkophore cluster as well as genes involved in the respiratory chain: including, components of the heme-dependent oxidase CytBD and subunits of the bcc:aa3 heme-copper oxidase. Utilizing several knockout variants and inhibitors, the authors showed that copper starvation survival requires chalkophore synthesis and that copper starvation results in dysfunctional bcc:aa3 oxidase. By monitoring oxygen consumption, they go on to show that copper deprivation inhibits respiration through the bcc:aa3 oxidase. Lastly, the authors compare virulence of WT Mtb, Mtb∆nrp and MtbΔnrpΔcydAB strains in mice spleen and lung. The Mtb∆nrp strain showed mild attenuation, but virulence in MtbΔnrpΔcydAB was severely attenuated and complementation with the chalkophore biosynthetic pathway restored Mtb virulence. These results suggest that chalkophore mediated protection of the respiratory chain is critical to Mtb virulence, and that redundant respiratory oxidases within Mtb provide respiratory chain flexibility that may promote host adaptation.

This new information about Mtb biology may be leveraged for drug discovery, highlighting that the Mtb respiratory pathway is a promising drug target, where one may target the Mtb chalkophore biosynthetic pathway in conjunction with CytBD, to obliterate Mtb.

Strengths: Overall, the paper is very clear and well written, with thorough and well-thought-out experimentation.

No weaknesses.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have addressed all the reviewers' comments.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

In this paper, the authors had 2 aims:

(1) Measure macaques' aversion to sand and see if its' removal is intentional, as it likely in an unpleasurable sensation that causes tooth damage.

(2) Show that or see if monkeys engage in suboptimal behavior by cleaning foods beyond the point of diminishing returns, and see if this was related to individual traits such as sex and rank, and behavioral technique.

They attempted to achieve these aims through a combination of geochemical analysis of sand, field experiments, and comparing predictions to an analytical model.

The authors' conclusions were that they verified a long-standing assumption that monkeys have an aversion to sand as it contains many potentially damaging fine grained silicates, and that removing it via brushing or washing is intentional.

They also concluded that monkeys will clean food for longer than is necessary, i.e. beyond the point of diminishing returns, and that this is rank-dependent.

High and low-ranking monkeys tended not to wash their food, but instead over-brushed it, potentially to minimize handling time and maximize caloric intake, despite the long-term cumulative costs of sand.

This was interpreted through the *disposable soma hypothesis*, where dominants maximize immediate needs to maintain rank and increase reproductive success at the potential expense of long-term health and survival.

Strengths:

The field experiment seemed well designed, and their quantification of the physical and mineral properties of quartz particles (relative to human detection thresholds) seemed good relative to their feret diameter and particle circularity (to a reviewer that is not an expert in sand). The *Rank Determination* and *Measuring Sand* sections were clear.

In achieving Aim 1, the authors validated a commonly interpreted, but unmeasured function, of macaque and primate behavior-- a key study/finding in primate food processing and cultural transmission research.

I commend their approach in trying to develop a quantitative model to generate predictions to compare to empirical data for their second aim.<br /> This is something others should strive for.

I really appreciated the historical context of this paper in the introduction and found it very enjoyable and easy to read.

I do think that interpreting these results in the context of the *disposable soma hypothesis* and the potential implications in the *paleolithic matters* section about interpreting dental wear in the fossil record are worthwhile.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, Muramoto and colleagues have examined a mechanism by which the executioner caspase Drice is activated in a non-lethal context in Drosophila. The authors have comprehensively examined this in the Drosophila olfactory receptor neurons using sophisticated techniques. In particular, they had to engineer a new reporter by which non-lethal caspase activation could be detected. The authors conducted a proximity labeling experiment and identified Fasciclin 3 as a key protein in this context. While removal of Fascilin 3 did not block non-lethal caspase activation (likely because of redundant mechanisms), its overexpression was sufficient to activate non-lethal caspase activation.

Strengths:

While non-lethal functions of caspases have been reported in several contexts, far less is known about the mechanisms by which caspases are activated in these non-lethal contexts. So, the topic is very timely. The overall detail of this work is impressive and the results, for the most part, are well controlled and justified.

Weaknesses:

The behavioral results shown in Fig. 6 need more explanation and clarification (more details below). As currently shown, the results of Fig. 6 seem uninterpretable. Also, overall presentation of the Figures and description in legends can be improved.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have adequately addressed my comments.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In a 1.5m diameter, 0.8m high circular arena bumblebees were accustomed to exit the entrance to their nest on the floor surrounded by an array of identical cylindrical landmarks and to forage in an adjacent compartment which they could reach through an exit tube in the arena wall at a height of 28cm. The movements of one group of bees were restricted to a height of 30cm, the height of the landmark array, while the other group was able to move up to heights of 80cm, thus being able to see the landmark array from above.

During one series of tests, the flights of bees returning from the foraging compartment were recorded as they tried to reach the nest entrance on the floor of the arena with the landmark array shifted to various positions away from the true nest entrance location. The results of these tests showed that the bees searched for the net entrance in the location that was defined by the landmark array.

In a second series of tests, access to the landmark array was prevented from the side, but not from top, by a transparent screen surrounding the landmark array. These tests showed that the bees of both groups rarely entered the array from above, but kept trying to enter it from the side.

The authors express surprise at this result because modelling the navigational information supplied by panoramic snapshots in this arena had indicated that the most robust information to the location of the nest entrance within the landmark array was supplied by views of the array from above, leading to the following strong conclusions:

line 51: "Snapshot models perform best with bird's eye views";<br /> line 188: "Overall, our model analysis could show that snapshot models are not able to find home with views within a cluttered environment but only with views from above it.";<br /> line 231: "Our study underscores the limitations inherent in snapshot models, revealing their inability to provide precise positional estimates within densely cluttered environments, especially when compared to the navigational abilities of bees using frog's-eye views."

Strengths:

The experimental set-up allows to record the flight behaviour of bees in great spatial and temporal detail and in principle also to reconstruct the visual information available to the bees throughout the arena.

Modelling: The revised manuscript now presents the results of modelling that includes information potentially available to the bees from the arena wall and in particular from the top edge of the arena.

As I predicted, this increases the width of rotational image difference functions and therefore provides directional guidance over a larger range of misalignments. However, the authors dismiss the modelling results based on such reconstructed views which more realistically describe the information available to the bumblebees, because (line 291ff): 'Further simulations with a rendered arena wall led to worse results because the agent was mainly led to the centre of the arena (Fig. S17, Fig. S18-21)".

What the modelling in Fig. 17 actually shows is that the agent is led more or less exactly to the 'entry points' to the arena chosen by the real bees (Fig. 4). The authors ignore this and in their rebuttal state that 'We hypothesised that the arena wall and object location created ambiguity'. The problem here is that you don't remove potential 'ambiguity' for real bees by ignoring information they are unlikely to ignore.

Behavioural analysis: The full potential of the set-up was not used to understand how the bees' navigation behaviour develops over time in this arena and what opportunities the bees have had to learn the location of the nest entrance during repeated learning flights and return flights.

Without a detailed analysis of the bees' behaviour during 'training', including learning flights and return flights, it is very hard to follow the authors' conclusions. The behaviour that is observed in the tests may be the result of the bees' extended experience shuttling between the nest and the entry to the foraging arena at 28cm height in the arena wall. For instance, it would have been important to see the return flights of bees following the learning flights shown in Fig. 17.

Basically both groups of bees (constrained to fly below the height of landmarks (F) or throughout the height of the arena (B)) had ample opportunities to learn that the nest entrance lies on the floor of the landmark array. The only reason why B-bees may not have entered the array from above when access from the side was prevented may simply be that bumblebees, because they bumble, find it hard to perform a hovering descent into the array.

The revised manuscript does not address my concerns. The rebuttal states that a detailed analysis of learning and return flights was 'outside the scope of this particular study', that their experimental design 'does not require the entire history of the bee's trajectory to be tested', that 'the entire flight history...will require...effort...conceptually' and that it would be 'difficult to test a hypothesis'.

These responses clarify the frustrating problem with this study: The authors are more concerned with testing hypotheses than with trying to understand how bumblebees learn to cope with a situation which constrains their learning choreography and confronts them with the one fundamental problem view-based homing has: repetitive scene elements.

Homing is an experience-dependent process and to understand what cues the bees used to navigate this set-up requires an analysis of the whole learning process. For instance, it may well be that the B+G+ bees initially did enter the array from above, but subsequently learnt a more efficient route into the array, by simply entering it from the side, followed by 'unguided' searching.

General: The most serious weakness of the set-up is that it is spatially and visually constrained, in particular lacking a distant visual panorama, which under natural conditions is crucial for the range over which rotational image difference functions provide navigational guidance. In addition, the array of identical landmarks is not representative of natural clutter and, because it is visually repetitive, poses unnatural problems for view-based homing algorithms. This is the reason why the functions degrade so quickly from one position to the next (Fig. 9-12) when more distant scene elements are excluded.

In conclusion, I do not feel that I have learnt anything useful from this experiment; it does suggest, however, that to fully appreciate and understand the homing abilities of insects, there is no alternative but to investigate these abilities in the natural conditions in which they have evolved. A nice start would be to build camera-based 3D models of natural bumblebee nest entrance environments and analyse whether there are any particularly unusual challenges for the visual localization of the nest entrance.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary and Strengths:

The study focuses on PIM1 and 2 in CD8 T cell activation and differentiation. These two serine/threonine kinases belong to a large network of Serine/Threonine kinases that acts following engagement of the TCR and of cytokine receptors and phosphorylates proteins that control transcriptional, translational and metabolic programs that result in effector and memory T cell differentiation. The expression of PIM1 and PIM2 is induced by the T-cell receptor and several cytokine receptors. The present study capitalized on high-resolution quantitative analysis of the proteomes and transcriptomes of Pim1/Pim2-deficient CD8 T cells to decipher how the PIM1/2 kinases control TCR-driven activation and IL-2/IL-15-driven proliferation, and differentiation into effector T cells.

Quantitative mass spectrometry-based proteomics analysis of naïve OT1 CD8 T cell stimulated with their cognate peptide showed that the PIM1 protein was induced within 3 hours of TCR engagement and its expression was sustained at least up to 24 hours. The kinetics of PIM2 expression was protracted as compared to that of PIM1. Such TCR-dependent expression of PIM1/2 correlated with the analysis of both Pim1 and Pim2 mRNA. In contrast, Pim3 mRNA was only expressed at very low levels and the PIM3 protein not detected by mass spectrometry. Therefore, PIM1 and 2 are the major PIM kinases in recently activated T cells. Pim1/Pim2 double knockout (Pim dKO) mice were generated on a B6 background and found to express lower number of splenocytes. No difference in TCR/CD28-driven proliferation was observed between WT and Pim dKO T cells over 3 days in culture. Quantitative proteomics of >7000 proteins further revealed no substantial quantitative or qualitative differences in protein content or proteome composition. Therefore, other signaling pathways can compensate for the lack of PIM kinases downstream of TCR activation.

Considering that PIM1 and PIM2 kinase expression is regulated by IL-2 and IL-15, antigen-primed CD8 T cells were expanded in IL-15 to generate memory phenotype CD8 T cells or expanded in IL-2 to generate effector cytotoxic T lymphocytes (CTL). Analysis of the survival, proliferation, proteome, and transcriptome of Pim dKO CD8 T cells kept for 6 days in IL-15 showed that PIM1 and PIM2 are dispensable to drive the IL-15-mediated metabolic or differentiation programs of antigen-primed CD8 T cells. Moreover, Pim1/Pim2-deficiency had no impact on the ability of IL-2 to maintain CD8 T cell viability and proliferation. However, WT CTL downregulated expression of CD62L whereas the Pim dKO CTL sustained higher CD62L expression. Pim dKO CTL were also smaller and less granular than WT CTL. Comparison of the proteome of day 6 IL-2 cultured WT and Pim dKO CTL showed that the latter expressed lower levels of the glucose transporters, SLC2A1 and SLC2A3, of a number of proteins involved in fatty acid and cholesterol biosynthesis, and CTL effector proteins such as granzymes, perforin, IFNg and TNFa. Parallel transcriptomics analysis showed that the reduced expression of perforin and some granzymes correlated with a decrease in their mRNA whereas the decreased protein levels of granzymes B and A, and of the glucose transporters SLC2A1 and SLC2A3 did not correspond with decreased mRNA expression. Therefore, PIM kinases are likely required for IL-2 to maximally control protein synthesis in CD8 CTL. Along that line, the translational repressor PDCD4 was increased in Pim dKO CTL and pan-PIM kinase inhibitors caused a reduction in protein synthesis rates in IL-2 expanded CTL. Finally, the differences between Pim dKO and WT CTL in terms of CD62L expression resulted in that Pim dKO CTL but not WT CTL retained the capacity to home to secondary lymphoid organs. In conclusion, this thorough and solid study showed that the PIM1/2 kinases shape the effector CD8 T cell proteomes rather than transcriptomes and are important mediators of IL2-signalling and CD8 T cell trafficking.

Weaknesses: None

Comments on revisions:

The authors have been able to provide in their rebuttal letter fair answers to most of the queries primarily raised by Reviewer 2 and they have incorporated the corresponding results in the revised text. It makes the paper stronger.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Malaria transmission in the Gambia is highly seasonal, whereby periods of intense transmission at the beginning of the rainy season are interspersed by long periods of low to no transmission. This raises several questions about how this transmission pattern impacts the spatiotemporal distribution of circulating parasite strains, how parasites persist during the dry season, and how asymptomatic infections contribute to maintaining transmission during the low/no transmission season.

Combining a molecular barcode genotyping using 101 bi-allelic SNPs and SNPs from Whole Genome Sequence (WGS) in a "consensus barcode", the authors aimed at measuring the relatedness between parasites at different spatial (i.e., individual, household, village, and region) and temporal (i.e., high, low, and the corresponding the transitions) levels by assessing the fraction of the genome having a common ancestry (i.e. Identity-by-Descent (IBD)).

By measuring the Complexity of Infection (COI) and parasite relatedness by IBD the authors show that a large fraction of infections is polygenomic and stable over time, resulting in a high recombinational diversity. Moreover, they show that transmission intensity increases during the transition from the dry to wet seasons. However, they find that there is a higher probability of finding similar genotypes within the same household, but this similarity rapidly disappears over time and is not observed between different villages. If there is no drug selection during the dry season, and if resistance results in a fitness cost, alleles associated with drug resistance may change in frequency. The authors looked at the frequencies of six drug-resistance haplotypes (aat1, crt, dhfr, dhps, kelch13, and mdr1), and found no evidence of changes in allele frequencies associated with seasonality. They also find chronic infections lasting from one month to one and a half years with no dependence on age or gender.

This work makes use of genomic information and IBD analytic tools to show parasite relatedness from asymptomatic infections at different spatial and temporal scales, thus providing a better understanding of the transmission dynamics of malaria in highly seasonal environments.

Strength:

The authors use a combination of high-quality barcodes (425 barcodes representing 101 bi-allelic SNPs) and 199 high-quality genome sequences to infer the fraction of the genome with shared Identity by Descent (IBD) (i.e. a metric of recombination rate) over several time points covering two years. The barcode and whole genome sequence combination allows full use of a large dataset, to confidently infer the relatedness of parasite isolates at various spatiotemporal scales and show the advantage of using genomic information for understanding malaria transmission dynamics.

The authors aimed to establish how seasonal transmission cycles shape the spatiotemporal parasite population structure using metrics such as parasite genetic diversity, genetic relatedness, and frequency of drug resistance alleles, as well as the contribution of asymptomatic chronic carriers to sustained transmission. The results support their conclusions.

Using a combination of molecular barcodes and available whole genome sequence datasets opens new opportunities to understand malaria transmission dynamics in different transmission settings. This allows for data analysis at different spatiotemporal granularities, having a practical utility for identifying malaria control targets and acquiring metrics to evaluate malaria control programs. The development of molecular barcodes using similar SNPs by different malaria control programs would be of great utility to compare and understand malaria transmission dynamics in different settings worldwide.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper examines changes in relaxation time (T1 and T2) and magnetization transfer parameters that occur in a model system and in vivo when cells or tissue are depolarized using an equimolar extracellular solution with different concentrations of the depolarizing ion K+. The motivation has been revised to state that the results suggest a potential approach to non-invasively detect changes in membrane potential using MRI.

Strengths:

The authors argue that the use of various concentrations of KCL in the extracellular fluid depolarize or hyperpolarize the cell pellets used, and that this change in membrane potential is the driving force for the T2 (and T1-supplementary material) changes observed. In particular, they report an increase in T2 with increasing KCL concentration in the extracellular fluid (ECF) of pellets of SH-SY5Y cells. To offset the increasing osmolarity of the ECF due to the increase in KCL, the NaCL molarity of the ECF is proportionally reduced. The authors measure the intracellular voltage using patch clamp recordings, which is a gold standard. With 80 mM of KCL in the ECF, a change in T2 of the cell pellets of ~10 ms is observed with the intracellular potential recorded as about -6 mv. A very large T1 increase of ~90 ms is reported under the same conditions. The PSR (ratio of hydrogen protons on macromolecules to free water) decreases by about 10% at this 80 mM KCL concentration. Similar results are seen in a Jurkat cell line and similar, but far smaller changes are observed in vivo, for a variety of reasons discussed. As a final control, T1 and T2 values are measured in the various equimolar KCL solutions. As expected, no significant changes in T1 and T2 of the ECF were observed for these concentrations.

Weaknesses:

While the concepts presented are interesting, and the actual experimental methods seem to be nicely executed, the conclusions are not supported by the data for a number of reasons. This is not to say that the data isn't consistent with the conclusions, but there are other controls not included that would be necessary to draw the conclusion that it is membrane potential that is driving these T1 and T2 changes. The results are consistent with Stroman et al. Magn. Reson. in Med. 59:700-706 (increased T2 with KCL) as well as some other cited work. However all those authors emphasize that cell swelling is the mechanism, not cell membrane potentials.

It is well established that cells swell/shrink upon depolarization/hyperpolarization. Cell swelling is accompanied by increased light transmittance in vivo, and this should be true in the pellet system as well. In a beautiful series of experiments, Stroman et al. (2008) showed in perfused brain slices that the cells swell upon equimolar KCL depolarization and the light transmittance increases. The time course of these changes is quite slow, of the order of many minutes, both for the T2-weighted MRI signal and for the light transmittance. Stroman et al. also show that hypoosmotic changes produce the exact same timecourse as the KCL depolarization changes (and vice versa for the hyperosmotic changes - which cause cell shrinkage). Their conclusion therefore, was that cell swelling (not membrane potential) was the cause of the T2-weighted changes observed, and that these were relatively slow (on the scale of many minutes).

What are the implications for the current study? Well, for one, the authors cannot exclude cell swelling as the mechanism for T2 changes, as they have not measured that. It is however well established that cell swelling occurs during depolarization, so this is not in question. Water in the pelletized cells is in slow/intermediate exchange with the ECF, and the solutions for the two compartment relaxation model for this are well established (see Menon and Allen, Magn. Reson. in Med. 20:214-227 (1991). The T2 relaxation times should be multiexponential (see point (3) further below). The current work cannot exclude cell swelling as the mechanism for T2 changes (it is mentioned in the paper, but not dealt with). Water entering cells dilutes the protein structures, changes rotational correlation times of the proteins in the cell and is known to increase T2. The PSR confirms that this is indeed happening, so the data in this work is completely consistent with the Stroman work and completely consistent with cell swelling associated with depolarization. The authors should have performed light scattering studies to demonstrate the degree cell swelling or shrinkage. Measuring intracellular potential is not enough to clarify the mechanism.

So why does it matter whether the mechanism is cell swelling or membrane potential? The reason is response time. Cell swelling due to depolarization is a slow process, slower than hemodynamic responses that characterize BOLD. And in fact, cell swelling under normal homeostatic conditions in vivo is virtually non-existent. Only sustained depolarization events typically associated with non-naturalistic stimuli or brain dysfunction produce cell swelling. Membrane potential changes associated with neural activity, on the other hand, are very fast. In this manuscript, the authors have convincingly shown a signal change that is virtually the same as what was seem in the Stroman publication, but they have not shown that there is a response that can be detected with anything approaching the timescale of an action potential. So one cannot definitely say that the changes observed are due to membrane potential. One can only say they are consistent with cell swelling, regardless of what causes the cell swelling. The First line of the discussion still claims that T2 relaxation time and pool size ratio (PSR) can detect responses to membrane potential changes modulated by ionic solutions. However, in the absence of cell swelling controls, this cannot be stated.

For this mechanism to be relevant to measuring neuronal activity directly or explaining techniques such DIANA, one needs to show that the cell swelling changes occur within a millisecond, which has never been reported. If one knows the populations of ECF and pellet, the T2s of the ECF and pellet and the volume change of the cells in the pellet, one can model any expected T2 changes due to neuronal activity. I think one would find that these are minuscule within the context of an action potential, or even bulk action potentials.

Comments on revisions:

The manuscript is well written and my previous methodological concerns have been clarified as well. There are no flaws in the experiments, but the interpretation really depends on simultaneous measurements of cell volume and membrane potential, which have yet to be done.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors conduct a causal analysis of years of secondary education on brain structure in late life. They use a regression discontinuity anlaysis to measure the impact of a UK law change in 1972 that increased the years of mandatory education by 1 year. Using brain imaging data from the UK Biobank, they find essentially no evidence for 1 additional year of education altering brain structure in adulthood.

Strengths:

The authors pre-registered the study and the regression discontinuity was very carefully described and conducted. They completed a large number of diagnostic and alternate analyses to allow for different possible features in the data. (Unlike a positive finding, a negative finding is only bolstered by additional alternative anlayses).

Weaknesses:

While the work is of high quality for the precise question asked, ultimately the exposure (1 additional year of education) is a very modest manipulation and the outcome measured long after the intervention. Thus a null finding here is completely consistent educational attainement (EA) in fact having an impact on brain structure, where EA may reflect elements of training after second education (e.g. university, post-graduate qualifications, etc) and not just stopping education at 16 yrs yes/no.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The goal of this work is to define the functions of T-box transcription factors Tbx3 and Tbx5 in the adult mouse ventricular cardiac conduction system (VCS) using a novel conditional mouse allele in which both genes are targeted in cis. A series of studies over the past 2 decades by this group and others have shown that Tbx3 is a transcriptional repressor that patterns the conduction system by repressing genes associated with working myocardium, while Tbx5 is a potent transcriptional activator of "fast" conduction system genes in the VCS. In a previous work, the authors of the present study further demonstrated that Tbx3 and Tbx5 exhibit an epistatic relationship whereby the relief of Tbx3-mediated repression through VCS conditional haploinsufficiency allows better toleration of Tbx5 VCS haploinsufficiency. Conversely, excess Tbx3-mediated repression through overexpression results in disruption of the fast-conduction gene network despite normal levels of Tbx5. Based on these data the authors proposed a model in which repressive functions of Tbx3 drive adoption of conduction system fate, followed by segregation into a fast-conducting VCS and slow-conduction AVN through modulation of the Tbx5/Tbx3 ratio in these respective tissue compartments.

The question motivating the present work is: If Tbx5/Tbx3 ratio is important for slow versus fast VCS identity, what happens when both genes are completely deleted from the VCS? Is conduction system identity completely lost without both factors and if so, does the VCS network transform into a working myocardium-like state? To address this question, the authors have generated a novel mouse line in which both Tbx5 and Tbx3 are floxed on the same allele, allowing complete conditional deletion of both factors using the VCS-specific MinK-CreERT2 line, convincingly validated in previous work. The goal is to use these double conditional knockout mice to further explore the model of Tbx3/Tbx5 co-dependent gene networks and VCS patterning. First the authors demonstrate that the double conditional knockout allele results in the expected loss of Tbx3 and Tbx5 specifically in the VCS when crossed with Mink-CreERT2 and induced with tamoxifen. The double conditional knockout also results in premature mortality. Detailed electrophysiological phenotyping demonstrated prolonged PR and QRS intervals, inducible ventricular tachycardia, and evidence of abnormal impulse propagation along the septal aspect of the right ventricle. In addition, the mutants exhibit downregulation of VCS genes responsible for both fast conduction AND slow conduction phenotypes with upregulation of 2 working myocardial genes including connexin-43. The authors conclude that loss of both Tbx3 and Tbx5 results in "reversion" or "transformation" of the VCS network to a working myocardial phenotype, which they further claim is a prediction of their model and establishes that Tbx3 and Tbx5 "coordinate" transcriptional control of VCS identity.

Overall Appraisal:

As noted above, the present study does not further explore the Tbx5/Tbx3 ratio concept since both genes are completely knocked out in the VCS. Instead, the main claims are that absence of both factors results in a transcriptional shift of conduction tissue towards a working myocardial phenotype, and that this shift indicates that Tbx5 and Tbx3 "coordinate" to control VCS identity and function. However, only limited data are presented to support the claim of transcriptional reprogramming since the knockout cells are not directly compared to working myocardial cells at the transcriptional level and only a small number of key genes are assessed (versus genome-wide assessment). In addition, the optical mapping dataset has alternative interpretations that are not excluded or thoroughly discussed.

In sum, while this study adds an elegantly constructed genetic model to the field, the data presented mostly fit within the existing paradigm of established functions of Tbx3 and Tbx5. The authors present some evidence to support the claim that VCS cells adopt a working myocardial phenotype in the absence of Tbx3 and Tbx5, but some key experiments that could more definitively test this model were not performed, reducing the degree to which the data support the conclusions.

Strengths:

(1) Successful generation of a novel Tbx3-Tbx5 double conditional mouse model<br /> (2) Successful VCS-specific deletion of Tbx3 and Tbx5 using a VCS-specific inducible Cre driver line<br /> (3) Well-powered and convincing assessments of mortality and physiological phenotypes<br /> (4) Isolation of genetically modified VCS cells using flow.

Weaknesses:

(1) In general, the data is consistent with a long-standing and well-supported model in which Tbx3 represses working myocardial genes and Tbx5 activates expression of VCS genes, which seem like distinct roles in VCS patterning.<br /> (2) More direct quantitative comparison of Tbx5 Adult VCS KO with Tbx5/Tbx3 Adult VCS double KO would be helpful to ascertain whether deletion of Tbx3 on top of Tbx5 deletion changes the underlying phenotype in some discernable way beyond mRNA expression of a few genes. Superficially, the phenotypes look quite similar at the EKG and arrhythmia inducibility level and no optical mapping data from single Tbx5 KO is presented for comparison to the double KO. I understand that single Tbx5 VCS KO mutants have been evaluated in previous publications but I think in order to evaluate the claims presented here, it would be important to do a direct comparison using the same assays and conditions.<br /> (3) The authors claim that double knockout VCS cells transform to working myocardial fate, but there is no comparison of gene expression levels between actual working myocardial cells and the Tbx3/Tbx5 DKO VCS cells so it's hard to know if the data reflect an actual cell state change or a more non-specific phenomenon with global dysregulation of gene expression or perhaps dedifferentiation. I understand that the upregulation of Gja1 and Smpx is intended to address this, but it's only two genes and it seems relevant to understand their degree of expression relative to actual working myocardium. In addition, the gene panel is somewhat limited and does not include other key transcriptional regulators in the VCS such as Irx3 and Nkx2-5. RNA-seq in these populations would provide a clearer comparison among the groups.<br /> (4) From the optical mapping data, it is difficult to distinguish between the presence of (1) a focal proximal right bundle branch block due to dysregulation of gene expression in the VCS but overall preservation of the right bundle and its distal ramifications; from (2) actual loss of the VCS with reversion of VCS cells to a working myocardial fate. Related to this, the authors claim that this experiment allows for direct visualization of His bundle activation, but can the authors confirm or provide evidence that the tissue penetration of their imaging modality allows for imaging of a deep structure like the AV bundle as opposed to the right bundle branch which is more superficial? Does the timing of the separation of the sharp deflection from the subsequent local activation suggest visualization of more distal components of the VCS rather than the AV bundle itself? Additional clarification would be helpful.

impact:

The present study contributes a novel and elegantly constructed mouse model to the field. The data presented generally corroborate existing models of transcriptional regulation in the VCS. Acknowledging that the present work is strong start, some additional studies not included in the present manuscript will be needed for this new mouse model to decisively advance the field of VCS transcriptional biology.

Joint Public Review:

In this manuscript, the authors aim to evaluate the robustness of stable asymmetric polarization patterns by analyzing both a minimal 2-node network and a more biologically realistic 5-node network based on the C. elegans polarization system. They introduce a computational pipeline for systematically exploring reaction-diffusion network dynamics. Their study highlights the limitations of the widely used 2-node antagonistic network, demonstrating its susceptibility to simple modifications that disrupt polarization. However, they show that polarization stability can be restored by combining multiple regulatory mechanisms, and that spatially varying kinetic parameters can fine-tune the interface position. The authors further investigate the 5-node network of C. elegans, identifying key parameters that enhance its robustness against perturbations. Their findings provide novel insights into the mechanisms that ensure stable polarization in biological systems.

The major strengths of this work lie in its rigorous computational approach and the clarity of its findings. The authors demonstrate that the widely used 2-node antagonistic network is highly sensitive to parameter changes, requiring precise fine-tuning to maintain stable polarization. However, they show that stability can be restored through compensatory modifications, which expand the range of parameter sets supporting polarization. By further exploring spatial parameter variations, the authors reveal how compensatory adjustments can stabilize polarization patterns, offering insights into potential biological mechanisms regulating interface localization.

Extending their analysis to the C. elegans polarization network, the authors construct a 5-node model grounded in an extensive literature review. Their computational pipeline identifies key parameters that enhance robustness, and their model successfully replicates experimental observations, even in mutant conditions. Notably, among 34 possible network structures, only the naturally evolved 5-node network with mutual inhibition between specific components maintains stable polarization, highlighting its evolutionary optimization. This work significantly advances our understanding of polarization maintenance and provides a valuable framework for future in silico experiments.

Despite its strengths, the study has some limitations related to simplifying assumptions. The model neglects cortical flows and the role of actomyosin dynamics, which are known to be crucial during the establishment phase of polarization in the C. elegans zygote. While the authors focus on the maintenance phase, the absence of these biomechanical effects may limit the model's applicability to the full polarization process. Additionally, the assumption of infinitely fast cytoplasmic diffusion disregards potential effects of cytoplasmic flows on the stability of molecular distributions. Experimental measurements suggest that cytoplasmic diffusion coefficients are only an order of magnitude higher than membrane diffusion coefficients, meaning that finite diffusion combined with cytoplasmic flows could influence polarization stability. Although the authors acknowledge and discuss these limitations, incorporating these effects in future models could provide a more complete picture of the polarization dynamics in C. elegans embryos.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

This study uses MEG to test for a neural signature of the trial history effect known as 'serial dependence.' This is a behavioral phenomenon whereby stimuli are judged to be more similar than they really are, in feature space, to stimuli that were relevant in the recent past (i.e., the preceding trials). This attractive bias is prevalent across stimulus classes and modalities, but a neural source has been elusive. This topic has generated great interest in recent years, and I believe this study makes a unique contribution to the field.

Specifically, while previous neuroimaging studies have found apparent reactivations of previous information, or repulsive biases that may indirectly relate to serial dependence, here Fischer at al. find an attractive bias in neural activity patterns that aligns with the direction of the behavioral effect. Moreover, the data show that the bias emerges later in a trial, after perceptual encoding, which speaks to an ongoing debate about whether such biases are perceptual or decisional.

The revised preprint thoroughly addresses many of the initial concerns, but the results are still open to interpretation. For instance, the model training/testing regime allows that some training data timepoints may be inherently noisier than others (e.g., delay period more so than encoding), and potentially more (or differently) susceptible to bias. The S1 and S2 epochs show no attractive bias, but they may also be based on more high fidelity training sets (i.e., encoding), and therefore less susceptible to the bias that is evident in the retrocue epoch. So, the results could reflect that serial dependence is indeed a post-perceptual process, or it may instead be that the WM representations, as detected with these MEG analyses, become noisier and more subject to reveal the attractive bias over time.

The results are intriguing, but the study was not powered to examine whether there is any feature-specificity to the neural bias (e.g., whether it matches the behavioral pattern that biases are amplified within a particular range of feature distances between stimuli). Nor do analyses get at temporally precise information about when attractive and repulsive biases appear, which would help to better reconcile the work with previous findings. As in, the reconstructions average across coarse trial epochs. The S1 and S2 reconstructions show no attractive bias, and appear to show subtle repulsion, but if the timing were examined more precisely, we might see repulsion magnified at earlier timepoints that shift toward attraction at later time points, thereby counteracting the effect. That is to say that the averaging approach, across feature values and timepoints, still leaves these important theoretical questions unresolved.

Nonetheless, the work marks an important step in identifying the neurophysiological bases of serial dependence. Ideally, all of the data, including the eye-tracking, would be made available so that others might try to address some of these follow-up questions.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript by Egawa and colleagues investigates differences in nodal spacing in an avian auditory brain stem circuit. The results are clearly presented and data are of very high quality. The authors make two main conclusions:

(1) Node spacing, i.e. internodal length, is intrinsically specified by the oligodendrocytes in the region they are found in, rather than axonal properties (branching or diameter).

(2) Activity is necessary (we don't know what kind of signaling) for normal numbers of oligodendrocytes and therefore the extent of myelination.

These are interesting observations, albeit phenomenon. I have only a few criticisms that should be addressed:

(1) The use of the term 'distribution' when describing the location of nodes is confusing. I think the authors mean rather than the patterns of nodal distribution, the pattern of nodal spacing. They have investigated spacing along the axon. I encourage the authors to substitute node spacing or internodal length for node distribution.

(2) In Seidl et al. (J Neurosci 2010) it was reported that axon diameter and internodal length (nodal spacing) were different for regions of the circuit. Can the authors help me better understand the difference between the Seidl results and those presented here?

(3) The authors looked only in very young animals - are the results reported here applicable only to development, or does additional refinement take place with aging?

(4) The fact that internodal length is specified by the oligodendrocyte suggests that activity may not modify the location of nodes of Ranvier - although again, the authors have only looked during early development. This is quite different than this reviewer's original thoughts - that activity altered internodal length and axon diameter. Thus, the results here argue against node plasticity. The authors may choose to highlight this point or argue for or against it based on results in adult birds?:

Significance:

This paper may argue against node plasticity as a mechanism for tuning of neural circuits. Myelin plasticity is a very hot topic right now and node plasticity reflects myelin plasticity. this seems to be a circuit where perhaps plasticity is NOT occurring. That would be interesting to test directly. One limitation is that this is limited to development.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Ma & Yang et al. report a new investigation aimed at elucidating one of the key nutrients S. Typhimurium (STM) utilizes with the nutrient-poor intracellular niche within macrophage, focusing on the amino acid beta-alanine. From these data, the authors report that beta-alanine plays important roles in mediating STM infection and virulence. The authors employ a multidisciplinary approach that includes some mouse studies, and ultimately propose a mechanism by which panD, involved in B-Ala synthesis, mediates regulation of zinc homeostatisis in Salmonella.

Strengths and weaknesses:

The results and model are adequately supported by the authors' data. Further work will need to be performed to learn whether the Zn2+ functions as proposed in their mechanism. By performing a small set of confirmatory experiments in S. Typhi, the authors provide some evidence of relevance to human infections.

Impact:

This work adds to the body of literature on the metabolic flexibility of Salmonella during infection that enable pathogenesis.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Summary:

This paper describes a new approach to detecting directed causal interactions between two genes without directly perturbing either gene. To check whether gene X influences gene Z, a reporter gene (Y) is engineered into the cell in such a way that (1) Y is under the same transcriptional control as X, and (2) Y does not influence Z. Then, under the null hypothesis that X does not affect Z, the authors derive an equation that describes the relationship between the covariance of X and Z and the covariance of Y and Z. Violation of this relationship can then be used to detect causality.

The authors benchmark their approach experimentally in several synthetic circuits. In 4 positive control circuits, X is a TetR-YFP fusion protein that represses Z, which is an RFP reporter. The proposed approach detected the repression interaction in 2 of the 4 positive control circuits. The authors constructed 16 negative control circuit designs in which X was again TetR-YFP, but where Z was either a constitutively expressed reporter, or simply the cellular growth rate. The proposed method detected a causal effect in two of the 16 negative controls, which the authors argue is perhaps not a false positive, but due to an unexpected causal effect. Overall, the data support the potential value of the proposed approach.

Strengths:

The idea of a "no-causality control" in the context of detected directed gene interactions is a valuable conceptual advance that could potentially see play in a variety of settings where perturbation-based causality detection experiments are made difficult by practical considerations.

By proving their mathematical result in the context of a continuous-time Markov chain, the authors use a more realistic model of the cell than, for instance, a set of deterministic ordinary differential equations.

The authors have improved the clarity and completeness of their proof compared to a previous version of the manuscript.

Limitations:

The authors themselves clearly outline the primary limitations of the study: The experimental benchmark is a proof of principle, and limited to synthetic circuits involving a handful of genes expressed on plasmids in E. coli. As acknowledged in the Discussion, negative controls were chosen based on the absence of known interactions, rather than perturbation experiments. Further work is needed to establish that this technique applies to other organisms and to biological networks involving a wider variety of genes and cellular functions. It seems to me that this paper's objective is not to delineate the technique's practical domain of validity, but rather to motivate this future work, and I think it succeeds in that.

Might your new "Proposed additional tests" subsection be better housed under Discussion rather than Results?

I may have missed this, but it doesn't look like you ran simulation benchmarks of your bootstrap-based test for checking whether the normalized covariances are equal. It would be useful to see in simulations how the true and false positive rates of that test vary with the usual suspects like sample size and noise strengths.

It looks like you estimated the uncertainty for eta_xz and eta_yz separately. Can you get the joint distribution? If you can do that, my intuition is you might be able to improve the power of the test (and maybe detect positive control #3?). For instance, if you can get your bootstraps for eta_xz and eta_yz together, could you just use a paired t-test to check for equality of means?

The proof is a lot better, and it's great that you nailed down the requirement on the decay of beta, but the proof is still confusing in some places:

- On pg 29, it says "That is, dividing the right equation in Eq. 5.8 with alpha, we write the ..." but the next equation doesn't obviously have anything to do with Eq. 5.8, and instead (I think) it comes from Eq 5.5. This could be clarified.

- Later on page 29, you write "We now evoke the requirement that the averages xt and yt are stationary", but then you just repeat Eq. 5.11 and set it to zero. Clearly you needed the limit condition to set Eq. 5.11 to zero, but it's not clear what you're using stationarity for. I mean, if you needed stationarity for 5.11 presumably you would have referenced it at that step.

It could be helpful for readers if you could spell out the practical implications of the theorem's assumptions (other than the no-causality requirement) by discussing examples of setups where it would or wouldn't hold.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

The manuscript by Rios et al. investigates the potential of GSK3 inhibition to reprogram human macrophages, exploring its therapeutic implications in conditions like severe COVID-19. The authors present convincing evidence that GSK3 inhibition shifts macrophage phenotypes from pro-inflammatory to anti-inflammatory states, thus highlighting the GSK3-MAFB axis as a potential therapeutic target. Using both GM-CSF- and M-CSF-dependent monocyte-derived macrophages as model systems, the study provides extensive transcriptional, phenotypic, and functional characterizations of these reprogrammed cells. The authors further extend their findings to human alveolar macrophages derived from patient samples, demonstrating the clinical relevance of GSK3 inhibition in macrophage biology.

The experimental design is sound, leveraging techniques such as RNA-seq, flow cytometry, and bioenergetic profiling to generate a comprehensive dataset. The study's integration of multiple model systems and human samples strengthens its impact and relevance. The findings not only offer insights into macrophage plasticity but also propose novel therapeutic strategies for macrophage reprogramming in inflammatory diseases.

Strengths:

(1) Robust Experimental Design: The use of both in vitro and ex vivo models adds depth to the findings, making the conclusions applicable to both experimental and clinical settings.

(2) Thorough Data Analysis: The extensive use of RNA-seq and gene set enrichment analysis (GSEA) provides a clear transcriptional signature of the reprogrammed macrophages.

(3) Relevance to Severe COVID-19: The study's focus on macrophage reprogramming in the context of severe COVID-19 adds clinical significance, especially given the relevance of macrophage-driven inflammation in this disease.

Weaknesses:

There are no significant weaknesses in the study.

Joint Public Review:

Summary:

In this study, Daniel et al. used three cognitive tasks to investigate behavioural signatures of cerebellar degeneration. In the first two tasks, the authors found that if an equation was incorrect, reaction times slowed significantly more for cerebellar patients than for healthy controls. In comparison, the slowing in the reaction times when the task required more operations was comparable to normal controls. In the third task, the authors show increased errors in cerebellar patients when they had to judge whether a letter string corresponded to an artificial grammar.

Strengths:

Overall, the work is methodologically sound and the manuscript well written. The data do show some evidence for specific cognitive deficits in cerebellar degeneration patients.

Weaknesses:

The current version has some weaknesses in the visual presentation of results. Overall, the study lacks a more precise discussion on how the patterns of deficits relate to the hypothesized cerebellar function.

The reviewers and the editor agreed that the data are interesting and point to a specific cognitive deficit in cerebellar patients. However, in the discussion, we were somewhat confused about the interpretation of the result:

If the cerebellum (as proposed in the introduction) is involved in forming expectations in a cognitive task, should they not show problems both in the expected (1+3 =4) and unexpected (1+3=2) conditions? Without having formed the correct expectation, how can you correctly say "yes" in the expected condition? No increase in error rate is observed - just slowing in the unexpected condition. But this increase in error rate was not observed. If the patients make up for the lack of prediction by using some other strategy, why are they only slowing in the unexpected case?

If the cerebellum is NOT involved in making the prediction, but only involved in detecting the mismatch between predicted and real outcome, why would the patients not show specifically more errors in the unexpected condition?

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The topic of tumor-immune co-evolution is an important, understudied topic with, as the authors noted, a general dearth of good models in this space. The authors have made important progress on the topic by introducing a stochastic branching process model of antigenicity/immunogenicity and measuring the proportion of simulated tumors that go extinct. The model is extensively explored, and the authors provide some nice theoretical results in addition to simulated results.

Major comments

The text in lines 183-191 is intuitively and nicely explained. However, I am not sure all of it follows from the figure panels in Figure 2. For example, the authors refer to a mutation that has a large immunogenicity, but it's not shown how many mutations, or the relative size of the mutations in Figure 2. The same comment holds true for the claim that spikes also arise for mutations with low antigenicity.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Processing in the primary visual cortex (V1) of mice is not only based on sensory inputs but also strongly modulated by locomotion. In this study, Meier et al. ask whether neurons that are modulated by locomotion form clusters in V1. Their work is based on previous studies from their lab establishing a modularity in the organization of primary visual cortex based on M2-muscarinic-acetylcholine-receptor-positive patches and interpatches (Ji et al. 2015, D'Souza et al. 2019). In these studies, they have highlighted the clustering of specific visual pathways and inhibition. In the current study, they extend this modularity to motor inputs, confirming a clustering of locomotion modulated neurons but also show that these clusters overlap with the M2-negative interpatches of layer 1. Finally, they establish a blueprint for visual processing streams in V1, segregating projections to and from lateral visual areas (LM, AL, and RL) from projections to and from the lateral areas, including the visual area PM, the retrosplenial cortex (RSP), and the secondary motor area (MOs).

Conceptually, this study provides an important finding in the organization of locomotion-related signaling in primary visual cortex, which clearly has substantial implications for sensory processing in visual cortex. While the anatomical data are solid, the link to physiology is incomplete. In conclusion, there are numerous issues that leave the main findings in some doubt, so the authors have some work to do before I find this story convincing.

Major issues:

(1) The major results in this study rely on proper quantification of neuronal responses during resting and running. Recently, it has been reported that hemodynamic occlusion can strongly influence measurements of fluorescent changes using two-photon imaging (Yogesh et al. 2025, doi.org/10.1101/2024.10.29.620650). Since it is unclear whether there is an inherent bias in vasculature and hemodynamic occlusion in M2 patches and interpatches, a quantification of the effect of hemodynamic occlusion would be necessary. This control would ideally be done using mice with GFP expression to test if there is still a clustering of locomotion-modulated neurons that overlaps with M2-negative interpatches. Alternatively, the authors should at the very least quantify the vascularization in M2 patches and interpatches.

(2) To assess the effects, the authors use a correlation analysis for many of their findings (e.g., Figures 2b,c, 4j,k, ...). This, however, is inappropriate to assess the significance of the results. I suggest redoing all statistics with hierarchical bootstrap sampling (Saravanan et al. 2020, PMID: 33644783) or similar.

(3) The authors use two different measures to assess whether and to what extent a neuron is locomotion sensitive, the LMI and "locomotion-responsive". While the LMI is defined based on recording in the light and dark (Figure 2), the "locomotion-responsiveness" is defined only in the dark (Figure 3a,c,d). The link between the two measures should be clarified.

a) Additionally, Figure 2b shows higher average LMI for interpatches, but the locomotion-responsive fraction is similar in interpatches and patches (relative number of pairs in Figure 3c and Figure 3d). How do the authors explain this discrepancy?

b) How is the LMI calculated - based on the average or the maximum response over stimuli? One particular stimulus? If the LMI is defined for each stimulus separately, what is plotted in Figure 2b?

(4) In the last panels of Figures 4-7, the authors analyze the alignment of cell bodies with the M2 patches. While in superficial layers it might be straightforward to align the cell body locations with the M2 patches and interpatches in layer 1, this alignment does not appear to be trivial for deeper layers. The authors should provide additional material to convince the reader of the proper alignment.

(5) Related to point 4 above - Given the importance of a proper alignment of M2 patches with the in vivo imaging, the in vivo - ex vivo alignment should be more convincing than Figure 1 C-E. Measuring M2 patches in vivo (as the authors have tried to do) would have provided more solid evidence. Have the authors tried to remove the dura for their in vivo imaging to increase signal-to-noise? In any case, more examples of proper alignment are necessary.

(6) The authors state that locomotion selectively affects M2-/M2- pairs based on Figure 3c. However, to make this claim, there should be a significant difference between the correlation of stimulus-driven noise of M2-/M2- locomotion-responsive pairs and M2-/M2- locomotion-unresponsive pairs, AND no significant difference in the same analysis for M2+/M2+ pairs (i.e., testing the differences between the bars in Figure 3c and Figure 3d).

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors use a sophisticated task design and Bayesian computational modeling to test their hypothesis that information generalization (operationalized as a combination of self-insertion and social contagion) in social situations is disrupted in Borderline Personality Disorder. Their main finding relates to the observation that two different models best fit the two tested groups: While the model assuming both self-insertion and social contagion to be present when estimating others' social value preferences fit the control group best, a model assuming neither of these processes provided the best fit to BPD participants.

Strengths:

The revisions have substantially strengthened the paper and the manuscript is much clearer and easier to follow now. The strengths of the presented work lie in the sophisticated task design and the thorough investigation of their theory by use of mechanistic computational models to elucidate social decision-making and learning processes in BPD.

Weaknesses:

Some critical concerns remain after the first revision, particularly regarding the use of causal language and the clarity of the hypotheses and results, specified in the points below.

(1) The authors frequently refer to their predictions and theory as being causal, both in the manuscript and in their response to reviewers. However, causal inference requires careful experimental design, not just statistical prediction. For example, the claim that "algorithmic differences between those with BPD and matched healthy controls" are "causal" in my opinion is not warranted by the data, as the study does not employ experimental manipulations or interventions which might predictably affect parameter values. Even if model parameters can be seen as valid proxies to latent mechanisms, this does not automatically mean that such mechanisms cause the clinical distinction between BPD and CON, they could plausibly also refer to the effects of therapy or medication. I recommend that such causal language, also implicit to expressions like "parameter influences on explicit intentional attributions", is toned down throughout the manuscript.

(2) Although the authors have now much clearer outlined the stuy's aims, there still is a lack of clarity with respect to the authors' specific hypotheses. I understand that their primary predictions about disruptions to self-other generalisation processes underlying BPD are embedded in the four main models that are tested, but it is still unclear what specific hypotheses the authors had about group differences with respect to the tested models. I recommend the authors specify this in the introduction rather than refering to prior work where the same hypotheses may have been mentioned.

(3) Caveats should also be added about the exploratory nature of the many parameter group comparisons. If there are any predictions about group differences that can be made based on prior literature, the authors should make such links clear.

(4) I'm not sure I understand why the authors, after adding multiple comparison correction, now list two kinds of p-values. To me, this is misleading and precludes the point of multiple comparison corrections, I therefore recommend they report the FDR-adjusted p-values only. Likewise, if a corrected p-value is greater than 0.05 this should not be interpreted as a result.

(5) Can the authors please elaborate why the algorithm proposed to be employed by BPD is more 'entropic', especially given both their self-priors and posteriors about partners' preferences tended to be more precise than the ones used by CON? As far as I understand, there's nothing in the data to suggest BPD predictions should be more uncertain. In fact, this leads me to wonder, similarly to what another reviewer has already suggested, whether BPD participants generate self-referential priors over others in the same way CON participants do, they are just less favourable (i.e., in relation to oneself, but always less prosocial) - I think there is currently no model that would incorporate this possibility? It should at least be possible to explore this by checking if there is any statistical relationship between the estimated θ_ppt^m and 〖p(θ〗_par |D^0).

"To note, social contagion under M3 was highly correlated with contagion under M1 (see Fig S11). This provides some preliminary evidence that trauma impacts beliefs about individualism directly, whereas trauma and persecutory beliefs impact beliefs about prosociality through impaired trait mentalising" - I don't understand what the authors mean by this, can they please elaborate and add some explanation to the main text?

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Demonstrate the breadth of IgA response as determined by isolating individual antigen-specific B cells and generating mAbs in mice following intranasal immunization of mice with SARS-CoV2 Spike protein. The findings show that some IgA mAb can neutralize the virus, but many do not. Notable immunization with Wuhan S protein generates a weak response to the omicron variant.

Strengths:

Detailed analysis characterizing individual B cells with the generation of mAbs demonstrates the response's breadth and diversity of IgA responses and the ability to generate systemic immune responses.

Comments on Revision:

I have re-reviewed the paper and responses to my and other reviewers' comments. I feel the authors have adequately addressed my and other reviewer's comments.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Goal: Find downstream targets of cmk-1 phosphorylation, identify one that also seems to act in thermosensory habituation, test for genetic interactions between cmk-1 and this gene and assess where these genes are acting in the thermosensory circuit during thermosensory habituation.

Methods: Two in vitro analyses of cmk-1 phosphorylation of C. elegans proteins. Thermosensory habituation of cmk-1 and tax-6 mutants and double mutants was assessed by measuring rate of heat evoked reversals (reversal probability) of C. elegans before and after 20s ISI repeated heat pulses over 60 minutes.

Conclusions: cmk-1 and tax-6 act in separate habituation processes primarily in AFD, that interact complexly, but both serve to habituate the thermosensory reversal response. They found that cmk-1 primarily acts in AFD and tax-6 primarily acts in RIM (and FLP for naïve responses). They also identified hundreds of potential cmk-1 phosphorylation substrates in vitro.

Strengths:

The effects size in the genetic data is quite strong and a large number of genetic interaction experiments between cmk-1 and tax-1 demonstrate a complex interaction.

A major concern concerning this manuscript was the assumption that the process they are observing is habituation. The two previously cited papers using this (or a very similar) protocol, Lia and Glauser 2020 and Jordan and Glauser 2023, both use the word 'adaptation' to describe the observed behavioral decrement. Jordan and Glauser 2023 does occasionally use the words 'habituation' or 'habituation-like' 10 times, however it uses 'adaptation' over 100 times. It is critical to distinguish habituation from sensory adaptation (or fatigue) in this thermal reversal protocol. These processes are often confused/conflated, however they are very different; sensory adaptation is a process that decreases how much the nervous system is activated by a repeated stimulus, therefore it can even occur outside of the nervous system. Habituation is a learning process where the nervous system responds less to a repeated stimulus, despite (at least part of the nervous system) the nervous system still being similarly activated by the stimulus. Habituation is considered an attentional process, while adaptation is due to fatigue of sensory transduction machinery. Control experiments such as tests for dishabituation (where application of a different stimulus causes recovery of the decremented response) or rate of spontaneous recovery (more rapid recovery after short inter-stimulus intervals) are required to determine if habituation or sensory adaptation are occurring. These experiments will allow the results to be interpreted with clarity; without them, it isn't actually clear what biological process is actually being studied. The authors have accepted this distinction and now correctly call the process adaptation.

While there was originally some discrepancy between the two in vitro phosphorylation experiments and the in silico predictions, the revision has cleared up the issues.<br /> Figure 3 -S1: This model has been adjusted to more closely fit the data.

The authors have expanded the discussion about the significance of the sites of cmk-1 and tax-6 function in the neural circuit.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript described a structure-guided approach to graft important antigenic loops of the neuraminidase to a homotypic but heterologous NA. This approach allows the generation of well-expressed and thermostable recombinant proteins with antigenic epitopes of choice to some extent. The loop-grafted NA was designated hybrid.

Strengths:

The hybrid NA appeared to be more structurally stable than the loop-donor protein while acquiring its antigenicity. This approach is of value when developing a subunit NA vaccine which is difficult to express. So that antigenic loops could be potentially grafted to a stable NA scaffold to transfer strain-specific antigenicity.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript by Kremer et al. characterizes the tissue-specific responses to changes in TFAM levels and mtDNA copy number in prematurely aging mice (polg mutator model). The authors find that overexpression of TFAM can have beneficial or detrimental effects depending on the tissue type. For instance, increased TFAM levels increase mtDNA copy number in the spleen and improve spleen homeostasis but do not elevate mtDNA copy number in the liver and impair mtDNA expression. Similarly, the consequences of reduced TFAM expression are tissue-specific. Reduced TFAM levels improve brown adipocyte tissue function while other tissues are unaffected. The authors conclude that these tissue-specific responses to altered TFAM levels demonstrate that there are tissue-specific endogenous compensatory mechanisms in response to the continuous mutagenesis produced in the prematurely aging mice model, including upregulation of TFAM expression, elevated mtDNA copy number, and altered mtDNA gene expression. Thus, the impact of genetically manipulating global TFAM expression is limited and there must be other determinants of mtDNA copy number under pathological conditions beyond TFAM.

Strengths:

Overall, this is an interesting study. It does a good job of demonstrating that given the multi-functional role of TFAM, the outcome of manipulating its activity is complex.

Weaknesses:

No major weaknesses noted. The authors have adopted all our suggestions to improve the clarity of the manuscript.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In this paper Kawasaki et al describe a regulatory role for the PIWI/piRNA pathway in rRNA regulation in Zebrafish. This regulatory role was uncovered through a screen for gonadogenesis defective mutants, which identified a mutation in the meioc gene, a coiled-coil germ granule protein. Loss of this gene leads to redistribution of Piwil1 from germ granules to the nucleolus, resulting in silencing of rRNA transcription.

Strengths:

Most of the experimental data provided in this paper is compelling. It is clear that in the absence of meioc, PiwiL1 translocates in to the nucleolus and results in down regulation of rRNA transcription. the genetic compensation of meioc mutant phenotypes (both organismal and molecular) through reduction in PiwiL1 levels are evidence for a direct role for PiwiL1 in mediating the phenotypes of meioc mutant.

Weaknesses:

Questions remain on the mechanistic details by which PiwiL1 mediated rRNA down regulation, and whether this is a function of Piwi in an unperturbed/wildtype setting. There is certainly some evidence provided in support of the a natural function for piwi in regulating rRNA transcription (figure 5A+5B). However, the de-enrichment of H3K9me3 in the heterozygous (Figure 6F) is very modest and in my opinion not convincingly different relative to the control provided. It is certainly possible that PiwiL1 is regulating levels through cleavage of nascent transcripts. Another aspect I found confounding here is the reduction in rRNA small RNAs in the meioc mutant; I would have assumed that the interaction of PiwiL1 with the rRNA is mediated through small RNAs but the reduction in numbers do not support this model. But perhaps it is simply a redistribution of small RNAs that is occurring. Finally, the ability to reduce PiwiL1 in the nucleolus through polI inhibition with actD and BMH-21 is surprising. What drives the accumulation of PiwiL1 in the nucleolus then if in the meioc mutant there is less transcription anyway?

Despite the weaknesses outlined, overall I find this paper to be solid and valuable, providing evidence for a consistent link between PIWI systems and ribosomal biogenesis. Their results are likely to be of interest to people in the community, and provide tools for further elucidating the reasons for this link.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The study starts with the notion that in an AD-like disease model, ILC2s in the Rag1 knock-out were expanded and contained relatively more IL-5+ and IL-13+ ILC2s. This was confirmed in the Rag2 knock-out mouse model.

By using a chimeric mouse model in which wild-type knock-out splenocytes were injected into irradiated Rag1 knock-out mice, it was shown that even though the adaptive lymphocyte compartment was restored, there were increased AD-like symptoms and increased ILC2 expansion and activity. Moreover, in the reverse chimeric model, i.e. injecting a mix of wild-type and Rag1 knock-out splenocytes into irradiated wild-type animals, it was shown that the Rag1 knock-out ILC2s expanded more and were more active. Therefore, the authors could conclude that the RAG1 mediated effects were ILC2 cell-intrinsic.

Subsequent fate-mapping experiments using the Rag1Cre;reporter mouse model showed that there were indeed RAGnaïve and RAGexp ILC2 populations within naïve mice. Lastly, the authors performed multi-omic profiling, using single-cell RNA sequencing and ATAC-sequencing, in which a specific gene expression profile was associated with ILC2. These included well-known genes but the authors notably also found expression of Ccl1 and Ccr8 within the ILC2. The authors confirmed their earlier observations that in the RAGexp ILC2 population, the Th2 regulome was more suppressed, i.e. more closed, compared to the RAGnaïve population, indicative of the suppressive function of RAG on ILC2 activity. I do agree with the authors' notion that the main weakness was that this study lacks the mechanism by which RAG regulates these changes in ILC2s.

The manuscript is very well written and easy to follow, and the compelling conclusions are well supported by the data. The experiments are meticulously designed and presented. I wish to commend the authors for the study's quality.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors aimed to classify hepatocellular carcinoma (HCC) patients into distinct subtypes using a comprehensive multi-omics approach. They employed an innovative consensus clustering method that integrates multiple omics data types, including mRNA, lncRNA, miRNA, DNA methylation, and somatic mutations. The study further sought to validate these subtypes by developing prognostic models using machine learning algorithms and extending the findings through single-cell RNA sequencing (scRNA-seq) to explore the cellular mechanisms driving subtype-specific prognostic differences.

Strengths:

(1) Comprehensive Data Integration: The study's integration of various omics data provides a well-rounded view of the molecular characteristics underlying HCC. This multi-omics approach is a significant strength, as it allows for a more accurate and detailed classification of cancer subtypes.

(2) Innovative Methodology: The use of a consensus clustering approach that combines results from 10 different clustering algorithms is a notable methodological advancement. This approach reduces the bias that can result from relying on a single clustering method, enhancing the robustness of the findings.

(3) Machine Learning-Based Prognostic Modeling: The authors rigorously apply a wide array of machine learning algorithms to develop and validate prognostic models, testing 101 different algorithm combinations. This comprehensive approach underscores the study's commitment to identifying the most predictive models, which is a considerable strength.

(4) Validation Across Multiple Cohorts: The external validation of findings in independent cohorts is a critical strength, as it increases the generalizability and reliability of the results. This step is essential for demonstrating the clinical relevance of the proposed subtypes and prognostic models.

Weaknesses:

(1) Inconsistent Storyline:<br /> Despite the extensive data mining and rigorous methodologies, the manuscript suffers from a lack of a coherent and consistent narrative. The transition between different sections, particularly from multi-omics data integration to single-cell validation, feels disjointed. A clearer articulation of how each analysis ties into the overall research question would improve the manuscript.

(2) Questionable Relevance of Immune Cell Activity Analysis:<br /> The evaluation of immune cell activities within the cancer cell model raises concerns about its meaningfulness. The methods used to assess immune function in the tumor microenvironment may not be fully appropriate, potentially limiting the insights gained from this part of the study.

(3) Incomplete Single-Cell RNA-Seq Validation:<br /> The validation of the findings using single-cell RNA-seq data appears insufficient to fully support the study's claims. While the authors make an effort to extend their findings to the single-cell level, the analysis lacks depth. A more comprehensive validation is necessary to substantiate the robustness of the identified subtypes.

(4) Figures and Visualizations:<br /> Several figures in the manuscript are missing necessary information, which affects the clarity of the results. For instance, the pathways in Figure 3A could be clustered to enhance interpretability, the blue bar in Figure 4A is unexplained, and Figure 4B is not discussed in the text. Additionally, the figure legend in Figure 7C lacks detail, and many figure descriptions merely repeat the captions without providing deeper insights.

(5) Appraisal of the Study's Aims and Results<br /> The authors have set out to achieve an ambitious goal of classifying HCC patients into distinct prognostic subtypes and validating these findings through both bulk and single-cell analyses. While the methodologies employed are innovative and the data integration comprehensive, the study falls short in fully achieving its aims due to inconsistencies in the narrative and incomplete validation. The results partially support the conclusions, but the lack of coherence and depth in certain areas limits the overall<br /> impact of the study.

(6) Impact on the Field<br /> If the identified weaknesses are addressed, this study has the potential to significantly impact the field of HCC research. The multi-omics approach combined with machine learning is a powerful framework that could set a new standard for cancer subtype classification. However, the current state of the manuscript leaves some uncertainty regarding the practical applicability of the findings, particularly in clinical settings.

(7) Additional Context<br /> For readers and researchers, this study offers a valuable look into the potential of integrating multi-omics data with machine learning to improve cancer classification and prognostication. However, readers should be aware of the noted weaknesses, particularly the need for more consistent narrative development and comprehensive validation of the methods. Addressing these issues could greatly enhance the study's utility and relevance to the community.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have addressed the reviewers' concerns effectively.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Public Review

The authors investigated the role of the C. elegans Flower protein, FLWR-1, in synaptic transmission, vesicle recycling, and neuronal excitability. They confirmed that FLWR-1 localizes to synaptic vesicles and the plasma membrane and facilitates synaptic vesicle recycling at neuromuscular junctions. They observed that hyperstimulation results in endosome accumulation in flwr-1 mutant synapses, suggesting that FLWR-1 facilitates the breakdown of endocytic endosomes. Using tissue-specific rescue experiments, the authors showed that expressing FLWR-1 in GABAergic neurons restored the aldicarb-resistant phenotype of flwr-1 mutants to wild-type levels. By contrast, cholinergic neuron expression did not rescue aldicarb sensitivity at all. They also showed that FLWR-1 removal leads to increased Ca2+ signaling in motor neurons upon photo-stimulation. From these findings, the authors conclude that FLWR-1 helps maintain the balance between excitation and inhibition (E/I) by preferentially regulating GABAergic neuronal excitability in a cell-autonomous manner.

Overall, the work presents solid data and interesting findings, however the proposed cell-autonomous model of GABAergic FLWR-1 function may be overly simplified in my opinion.

Most of my previous comments have been addressed; however, two issues remain.

(1) I appreciate the authors' efforts conducting additional aldicarb sensitivity assays that combine muscle-specific rescue with either cholinergic or GABergic neuron-specific expression of FLWR-1. In the revised manuscript, they conclude, "This did not show any additive effects to the pure neuronal rescues, thus FLWR-1 effects on muscle cell responses to cholinergic agonists must be cell-autonomous." However, I find this interpretation confusing for the reasons outlined below.

Figure 1 - Figure Supplement 3B shows that muscle-specific FLWR-1 expression in flwr-1 mutants significantly restores aldicarb sensitivity. However, when FLWR-1 is co-expressed in both cholinergic neurons and muscle, the worms behave like flwr-1 mutants and no rescue is observed. Similarly, cholinergic FLWR-1 alone fails to restore aldicarb sensitivity (shown in the previous manuscript). These observations indicate a non-cell-autonomous interaction between cholinergic neurons and muscle, rather than a strictly muscle cell-autonomous mechanism. In other words, FLWR-1 expressed in cholinergic neurons appears to negate or block the rescue effect of muscle-expressed FLWR-1. Therefore, FLWR-1 could play a more complex role in coordinating physiology across different tissues. This complexity may affect interpretations of Ca2+ dynamics and/or functional data, particularly in relation to E/I balance, and thus warrants careful discussion or further investigation.

(2) The revised manuscript includes new GCaMP analyses restricted to synaptic puncta. The authors mention that "we compared Ca2+ signals in synaptic puncta versus axon shafts, and did not find any differences," concluding that "FLWR-1's impact is local, in synaptic boutons." This is puzzling: the similarity of Ca2+ signals in synaptic regions and axon shafts seems to indicate a more global effect on Ca2+ dynamics or may simply reflect limited temporal resolution in distinguishing local from global signals due to rapid Ca2+ diffusion. The authors should clarify how they reached the conclusion that FLWR-1 has a localized impact at synaptic boutons, given that synaptic and axonal signals appear similar. Based on the presented data, the evidence supporting a local effect of FLWR-1 on Ca2+ dynamics appears limited.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors propose a new method to quantitatively assess morphogenetic processes during organismal development. They apply their method to ascidian morphogenesis and thus find that gastrulation is a two-step process.

The method applies to morphogenetic changes of surfaces. It consists of the following steps: first, surface deformations are quantified based on microscopy images without requiring cellular segmentation and tracking. This is achieved by mapping, at each time point, a polygonal mesh initially defined on a sphere to the surface of the embryo. The mapped vertices of this polygonal mesh then serve as (Lagrangian) markers for the embryonic surface. From these, one can infer the deformation of the surface, which can be expressed in terms of the strain tensor at each point of the surface. Changes in the strain tensor give the strain rate, which captures the morphogenetic processes. Second, at each time point, the strain rate field is decomposed in terms of spherical harmonics. Finally, the evolution of the weights of the various spherical harmonics in the decomposition is analysed via a wavelet analysis. The authors apply their workflow to ascidian development between 4 and 8.7 hpf. From their analysis they find clear indications for gastrulation and neurulation and identify two sub-phases of gastrulation, namely, endoderm invagination and 'blastophore closure'.

Strengths:

The combination of various tools allows the authors to obtain a quantitative description of the developing embryo without the necessity of identifying fiducial markers. Visual inspection shows that their method works well. Furthermore, this quantification then allows for an unbiased identification of different morphogenetic phases.

Weaknesses:

At times, the explanation of the method is hard to follow, unless the reader is already familiar with concepts like level-set methods or wavelet transforms. Furthermore, the software for performing the determination of Lagrangian markers or the subsequent spectral analysis does not seem to be available to the readers.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

The revised manuscript by Genzoni et al. reports the striking discovery of a regulatory role for trophic eggs. Prior to this study, trophic eggs were widely assumed to play a nutritional role in the colony, but this study shows that trophic eggs can suppress queen development, and therefore, can play a role in regulating caste determination in specific social contexts. In this revised version of the manuscript, the authors have addressed many of the concerns raised in the first version regarding the lack of sufficient information and context in the Introduction and Discussion. I have several (mostly minor) comments I would like the authors to address:

Comments:

(1) The authors' experimental design is based on the comparison of a larva-only (control) versus larva+3 trophic eggs (treatment). The authors convincingly show that the larva plus 3 trophic eggs treatment has an inhibitory effect versus larva-only control. However, the authors should have also done a treatment composed of larva + 3 viable eggs to determine if the inhibitory effect observed on queens is specific to trophic eggs or whether it is an inhibitory effect of all eggs. This has had important mechanistic consequences, because if the inhibitory effect is specific to trophic eggs, it means there are specific inhibitory factors deposited in trophic eggs during oogenesis and the differences observed between trophic versus viable eggs are meaningful beyond just nutritional differences. If the inhibitory effect is a property of all eggs, then the inhibitory factor is dumped into all eggs and the differences observed between trophic and viable eggs are related to something else. In all cases, this reviewer is not necessarily asking that they perform this additional treatment, but the authors have to be clear in the text that they cannot claim that the inhibitory effect is specific to trophic eggs alone without doing this experiment.

(2) The other untested assumption the authors are making is that queen-laid trophic eggs would behave the same as worker-laid trophic eggs. This is apparent in the Discussion (line 422). They should instead highlight the interesting question of whether worker-laid trophic eggs would be similar in composition and have the same effect on caste as queen-laid eggs.

(3) To this reviewer, they are missing a crucial explanation in the discussion. As far as this reviewer knows, young queens produce a higher proportion of trophic eggs than older queens, meaning that trophic egg production decreases with age of the queen. This raises the possibility that trophic eggs may, in part, function to prevent the production of more virgin queens in young and immature colonies with small colony sizes. This would allow colonies to invest in producing more workers at a time when rapidly expanding the colony is crucial in young colonies' life. Production of trophic eggs, therefore, may have a dual function: one for nutrition and larval survival, and one in suppressing queen development in immature young colonies. It can be said then that trophic eggs can regulate / influence caste determination in specific social / life history contexts of the colony, rather than only proposing that trophic eggs are a constant attempt by the queen to manipulate her offspring. I prefer the superorganism explanation, but readers should at least hear explanations at the individual and superorganism scales as a way of explaining the authors' discovery that trophic eggs suppress further queen development.

(4) Why did the authors change the wording from caste "determination" to caste "differentiation." Determination is more appropriate because the trophic eggs do not affect morphogenesis of queens or workers, but rather the developmental switch between queens and workers.

(5) Khila and Abouheif (2008) is listed in the References but not cited in the text.

(6) On Line 70-81: "...may play a role in the regulation of body size" - I think the authors are trying to be broad in their language here since one study showed trophic eggs increased worker size but didn't induce queens, but this statement implies that the hypothesis is that trophic eggs act via body size to affect caste. Since the authors don't measure body size changes, only binary caste outcome, this is not the best way to set up the question. Could instead just conclude that previous work shows an effect on both caste and body size.

(7) Paragraph beginning line 432: this paragraph seems out of place, not well connected to previous parts of discussion. It introduces the term "egg cannibalism" without defining it - not clear if this is meant as a synonym for eating of trophic eggs, or broader (i.e., eating viable eggs also). Could either remove the paragraph, or better set up the context that egg-eating behaviour is common in ants, could have evolved for worker policing reasons and/or for nutritional exchange, trophic eggs (and potentially co-option of trophic eggs for caste determination functions) presumably evolved in this context of existing egg-eating behaviour.

(8) Line 41: Should read 'play an important part.

(9) Line 51: The food that was given is listed, but there is no information about the quantity of food given.

(10) Line 74: The paragraph states that queens were isolated for 16 hours per day. However, it lacks a clear reason for this specific duration. Why 16 hours? Could this isolation period have impacted egg quality or larval development?

(11) Line 76: The eggs were collected every 8 hours and then held for 10 days until hatching. This is a very long time for eggs to be held outside of the normal colony environment. This could have a large impact on the viability of the eggs, and the resulting larvae.

(12) Line 78: twice "that" in "suggested that that the larger castes"

(13) Lines 96-97: the following sentence is unclear: "The question mark indicates that it is unclear whether about the evidence for the production trophic eggs by queens and workers"

(14) Line 209: By simply stating "binomial GLMM," the authors are leaving out a crucial piece of information. Readers cannot fully understand how the model was fitted or how the coefficients should be interpreted without knowing the link function. Therefore, the critique is that for complete and replicable science, the link function must be reported.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors' stated aim is to introduce so-called Minkowski tensors to characterize and quantify the shape of cells in tissues. The authors introduce Minkowski tensors and then define the p-atic order q_p, where p is an integer, as a cell shape measure. They also introduce a previously defined measure of p-atic order in the form of the parameter γ_p. The authors compute q_pp for data obtained by simulating an active vertex model and a multiphase field model, where they focus on p=2 and p=6 - nematic and hexatic order - as the two values of highest biological relevance. Based on their analysis, the authors claim that q₂ and q₆ are independent, that there is no crossover for the coarse-grained quantities, that the comparison of q_p for different values of p is not meaningful, and determine the dependence of the mean value of q₂ and q₆q₆ on cell activity and deformability. They then apply their method to data from MDCK monolayers and argue that the γ_p "fail to capture the nuances of irregular cell shapes".

Strength:

The work presents a set of parameters that are useful for analyzing cell shape.

Weaknesses:

The main weakness of the manuscript is that the points that the authors make are not sufficiently elaborated or supported by the data. Although they start out with Minkowski tensors, they eventually only consider the parameters q_p, which can be defined without any recourse to Minkowski tensors. Also, I dare to doubt that the average reader will benefit from the introduction to Minkowski tensors as it remains abstract and does not really go beyond repeating definitions. Eventually, for me, the work boils down to the statement that when you want to characterize (2d) cell shape, then it is better to take the whole cell contour instead of only the positions of the vertices of a polygon that approximates the full cell shape. By the way, for polygons, the q_p and γ_p should convey the same information as the vertex positions contain the whole geometric information.

Some statements made about the values of q_p are not supported by the data. For example, an independence of values of q₂ and q₆ cannot be inferred from Figure 7. Actually, Figure 8 points to some dependence between these values as the peaks of the pdfs move in the opposite direction as deformability and activity are changed. Figure 1 suggests that in general, larger cells have lower values of q_p for all p. Some more serious quantification should be obtained here.

The presented experimental data on MDCK cells is anecdotal.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In recent years, it has become increasingly evident how beautifully intricate IAC are at the nanoscale. Studies like the one presented here that shed light on the precise inner organisation of IAC are thus quite important and relevant in order to obtain a better in-depth understanding of IAC functioning and the contribution of different integrin subtypes to cell adhesive and mechanotransductive processes.

Interestingly, the authors found a distinct localisation of α5β1 and αVβ3 integrin nanoclusters within focal adhesion of human fibroblasts, with α5β1 integrin nanoclusters being at the periphery of IAC and αVβ3 integrin nanoclusters randomly distributed. Furthermore, a surprisingly high percentage of inactive integrins within IAC and relatively low spatial integrin colocalisation with adaptor proteins has been shown.

Strengths:

This is a very thoroughly performed STORM-based assessment of the nanodistribution of α5β1 and αVβ3 nanoclusters within IAC (and outside). The image quality is outstanding, and the authors have meticulously executed the experiments and the image analyses.

Weaknesses:

The only weakness is maybe that the manuscript remains descriptive. However, the high quality of the "description" of the nano-organisation of IAC by this scrupulous study is really important to better understand the inner workings of IAC. It provides a very solid foundation to look deeper into the (patho)physiological implications of this organisation, see recommendations (which are rather suggestions in this case).

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Early and accurate diagnosis is critical to treating N. fowleri infections, which often lead to death within 2 weeks of exposure. Current methods-sampling cerebrospinal fluid are invasive, slow, and sometimes unreliable. Therefore, there is a need for a new diagnostic method. Russell et al. address this need by identifying small RNAs secreted by Naegleria fowleri (Figure 1) that are detectable by RT-qPCR in multiple biological fluids including blood and urine. SmallRNA-1 and smallRNA-2 were detectable in plasma samples of mice experimentally infected with 6 different N. fowleri strains, and were not detected in uninfected mouse or human samples (Figure 4). Further, smallRNA-1 is detectable in the urine of experimentally infected mice as early as 24 hours post-infection (Figure 5). The study culminates with testing human samples (obtained from the CDC) from patients with confirmed N. fowleri infections; smallRNA-1 was detectable in cerebrospinal fluid in 6 out of 6 samples (Figure 6B), and in whole blood from 2 out of 2 samples (Figure 6C). These results suggest that smallRNA-1 could be a valuable diagnostic marker for N. fowleri infection, detectable in cerebrospinal fluid, blood, or potentially urine.

Strengths:

This study investigates an important problem, and comes to a potential solution with a new diagnostic test for N. fowleri infection that is fast, less invasive than current methods, and seems robust to multiple N. fowleri strains. The work in mice is convincing that smallRNA1 is detectable in blood and urine early in infection. Analysis of patient blood samples suggest that whole blood (but not plasma) could be tested for smallRNA-1 to diagnose N. fowleri infections.

Weaknesses:

(1) There are not many N. fowleri cases, so the authors were limited in the human samples available for testing. It is difficult to know how robust this biomarker is in whole blood (only 2 samples were tested, both had detectable smallRNA-1), serum (1 out of 1 sample tested negative), or human urine (presumably there is no material available for testing). This limitation is openly discussed in the last paragraph of the discussion section.

(2) There seems to be some noise in the data for uninfected samples (Figures 4B-C, 5B, and 6C), especially for those with serum (2E). While this is often orders of magnitude lower than the positive results, it does raise questions about false positives, especially early in infection when diagnosis would be the most useful. A few additional uninfected human samples may be helpful.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The study investigates how neuropeptidergic signaling affects sleep regulation in Drosophila larvae. The authors first conduct a screen of CRISPR knock-out lines of genes encoding enzymes or receptors for neuropeptides and monoamines. As a result of this screen, the authors follow up on one hit, the hugin receptor, PK2-R1. They use genetic approaches, including mutants and targeted manipulations of PK2-R1 activity in insulin-producing cells (IPCs) to increase total sleep amounts in 2nd instar larvae. Similarly, dilp3 and dilp5 null mutants and genetic silencing of IPCs show increases in sleep. The authors also show that hugin mutants and thermogenetic/optogenetic activation of hugin-expressing neurons caused reductions in sleep. Furthermore, they show through imaging-based approaches that hugin-expressing neurons activate IPCs. A key finding is that wash-on of hugin peptides, Hug-γ and PK-2, in ex vivo brain preparations activates larval IPCs, as assayed by CRTC::GFP imaging. The authors then examine how the PK2-R1, hugin, and IPC manipulations affect adult sleep. Finally, the authors examine how Ca2+ responses through CRTC::GFP imaging in adult IPCs are influenced by the wash-on of hugin peptides. The conclusions of this paper are somewhat well supported by data, but some aspects of the experimental approach and sleep analysis need to be clarified and extended.

Strengths:

(1) This paper builds on previously published studies that examine Drosophila larval sleep regulation. Through the power of Drosophila genetics, this study yields additional insights into what role neuropeptides play in the regulation of Drosophila larval sleep.

(2) This study utilizes several diverse approaches to examine larval and adult sleep regulation, neural activity, and circuit connections. The impressive array of distinct analyses provides new understanding into how Drosophila sleep-wake circuitry in regulated across the lifespan.

(3) The imaging approaches used to examine IPC activation upon hugin manipulation (either thermogenetic activation or wash-on of peptides) demonstrate a powerful approach for examining how changes in neuropeptidergic signaling affect downstream neurons. These experiments involve precise manipulations as the authors use both in vivo and ex vivo conditions to observe an effect on IPC activity.

Weaknesses:

Although the paper does have some strengths in principle, these strengths are not fully supported by the experimental approaches used by the authors. In particular:

(1) The authors show total sleep amount over an 18-hour period for all the measures of 2nd instar larval sleep throughout the paper. However, published studies have shown that sleep changes over the course of 2nd instar development, so more precise time windows are necessary for the analyses in this study.

(2) Previously published reports of sleep metrics in both Drosophila larvae and adults include the average number of sleep episodes (bout number) and the average length of sleep episodes (bout length). Neither of these metrics is included in the paper for either the larval sleep or adult sleep data. Not including these metrics makes it difficult for readers to compare the findings in this study to previously published papers in the established Drosophila sleep literature.

(3) Because Drosophila adult & larval sleep is based on locomotion, the authors need to show the activity values for the experiments supporting their key conclusions. They do show travel distances in Figure 2 - Figure Supplement 1, however, it is not clear how these distances were calculated or how the distances relate to the overall activity of individual larvae during sleep experiments. It is also concerning that inactivation of the PK2-R1-expressing neurons causes a reduction in locomotion speed. This could partially explain the increase in sleep that they observe.

(4) The authors rely on homozygous mutant larvae and adult flies to support many of their conclusions. They also rely on Gal4 lines with fairly broad expression in the Drosophila brain to support their conclusions. Adding more precise tissue-specific manipulations, including thermogenetic activation and inhibition of smaller populations of neurons in the study would be needed to increase confidence in the presented results. Similarly, demonstrating that larval development and feeding are not affected by the broad manipulations would strengthen the conclusions.

(5) Many of the experiments presented in this study would benefit from genetic and temperature controls. These controls would increase confidence in the presented results.

(6) The authors claim that their findings in larvae uncover the circuit basis for larval sleep regulation. However, there is very little comparison to published studies demonstrating that neuropeptides like Dh44 regulate larval sleep. Because hugin-expressing neurons have been shown to be downstream of Dh44 neurons, the authors need to include this as part of their discussion. The authors also do not explain why other neuropeptides in the initial screen are not pursued in the study. Given the effect that these manipulations have on larval sleep in their initial screen, it seems likely that other neuropeptidergic circuits regulate larval sleep.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Using highly specific antibody reagents for biological research is of prime importance. In the past few years, novel approaches have been proposed to gain easier access to such reagents. This manuscript describes an important step forward toward the rapid and widespread isolation of antibody reagents. Via the refinement and improvement of previous approaches, the Perrimon lab describes a novel phage-displayed synthetic library for nanobody isolation. They used the library to isolate nanobodies targeting Drosophila secreted proteins. They used these nanobodies in immunostainings and immunoblottings, as well as in tissue immunostainings and live cell assays (by tethering the antigens on the cell surface).

Since the library is made freely available, it will contribute to gaining access to better research reagents for non-profit use, an important step towards the democratisation of science.

Strengths:

(1) New design for a phage-displayed library of high content.

(2) Isolation of valuble novel tools.

(3) Detailed description of the methods such that they can be used by many other labs.

Weaknesses:

My comments largely concentrate on the representation of the data in the different Figures.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors wanted to better understand how the various septin-associated kinases contribute to septin organization and function in budding yeast. This question has been recently addressed by similar kinds of studies but there are still some open questions, particularly as regards to what extent the kinases may interact with and/or modify components of the contractile ring that drives cytokinesis.

Strengths:

This study uses sensitive imaging with good temporal and spatial resolution to monitor the localization of various proteins in living cells. Particularly informative is the use of a GFP/GFP-binding-protein "tethering" approach to ask if the requirement for one protein can be bypassed by physically tethering another protein to a third protein. Results from a yeast two-hybrid assay for measuring protein-protein interactions in vivo are buttressed by direct in vitro binding assays using purified proteins, which is important given the likelihood of "bridging" interactions between yeast proteins in the two-hybrid approach. The authors' conclusions are quite well supported by the data.

Weaknesses:

A control for non-specific binding is missing from the in vitro binding assay. The figures suffer sometimes from the very small text in the labels, which obscures understanding. Ultimately, while the study provides some interesting and novel insights, we still don't understand which phosphorylation events on which proteins are important for the events occurring at the molecular level, so the advance in knowledge is somewhat incremental.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Using single-unit recording in 4 regions of non-human primate brains, the authors tested whether these regions encode computational variables related to model-based and model-free reinforcement learning strategies. While some of the variables seem to be encoded by all regions, there is clear evidence for stronger encoding of model-based information in the anterior cingulate cortex and caudate.

Strengths:

The analyses are thorough, the writing is clear, and the work is well-motivated by prior theory and empirical studies.

Weaknesses:

My comments here are quite minor.

The correlation between transition and reward coefficients is interesting, but I'm a little worried that this might be an artifact. I suspect that reward probability is higher after common transitions, due to the fact that animals are choosing actions they think will lead to higher reward. This suggests that the coefficients might be inevitably correlated by virtue of the task design and the fact that all regions are sensitive to reward. Can the authors rule out this possibility (e.g., by simulation)?

The explore/exploit section seems somewhat randomly tacked on. Is this really relevant? If yes, then I think it needs to be integrated more coherently.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

In the manuscript entitled "Rtf1 HMD domain facilitates global histone H2B monoubiquitination and regulates morphogenesis and virulence in the meningitis-causing pathogen Cryptococcus neoformans" by Jiang et al., the authors employ a combination of molecular genetics and biochemical approaches, along with phenotypic evaluations and animal models, to identify the conserved subunit of the Paf1 complex (Paf1C), Rtf1, and functionally characterize its critical roles in mediating H2B monoubiquitination (H2Bub1) and the consequent regulation of gene expression, fungal development, and virulence traits in C. deneoformans or C. neoformans. Specially, the authors found that the histone modification domain (HMD) of Rtf1 is sufficient to promote H2B monoubiquitination (H2Bub1) and the expression of genes related to fungal mating and filamentation, and restores the fungal morphogenesis and pathogenicity defects caused by RTF1 deletion. These findings highlight the critical contribution of Rtf1's HMD to epigenetic regulation and cryptococcal virulence. This work will be of interest to fungal biologists and medical mycologists, particularly those studying fungal epigenetic regulation and fungal morphogenesis.

Comments on revisions:

The revised manuscript addresses all my previous concerns satisfactorily.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors show for the first time that deleting GLS from rod photoreceptors results in the rapid death of these cells. The death of photoreceptor cells could result from loss of synaptic activity because of a decrease in glutamate, as has been shown in neurons, changes in redox balance, or nutrient deprivation.

Strengths:

The strength of this manuscript is that the author shows a similar phenotype in the mice when Gls was knocked out early in rod development or the adult rod. They showed that rapid cell death is through apoptosis, and there is an increase in the expression of genes responsive to oxidative stress.

Comments on revisions:

The authors addressed all of my concerns in their responses to reviewers.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The study investigates the potential influence of the response criterion on neural decoding accuracy in consciousness and unconsciousness, utilizing either simulated data or reanalyzing experimental data with post-hoc sorting data.

Strengths:

When comparing the neural decoding performance of Target versus NonTarget with or without post-hoc sorting based on subject reports, it is evident that response criterion can influence the results. This was observed in simulated data as well as in two experiments that manipulated the subject response criterion to be either more liberal or more conservative. One experiment involved a two-level response (seen vs unseen), while the other included a more detailed four-level response (ranging from 0 for no experience to 3 for a clear experience). The findings consistently indicated that adopting a more conservative response criterion could enhance neural decoding performance, whether in conscious or unconscious states, depending on the sensitivity or overall response threshold.

The uneven distribution of trails for Target (75%) and NonTarget (25%) was identified as a potential weakness in the initial review of this study. Nevertheless, we support the authors' assertion that their analysis methodology validates comparing liberal and conservative approaches. Future investigations could further explore differences between liberal and conservative on different ratios of Target vs NonTarget, particularly when the proportion of Target matches or falls below that of NonTarget.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Guo, Hue et al., is focused on understanding the epigenetic activity and functional dependencies for two different fusions found in spindle cell rhabdomyosarcoma, VGLL2::NCOA2 and TEAD1::NCOA2. They use a variety of models and methods; specifically, ectopic expression of the fusions in human 293T cells to perform RNAseq (both fusions), CUT&RUN (VGLL2::NCOA2) and BioID mass spec (both fusions). These data identify that the VGLL2::NCOA2 fusion has peaks that are enriched for TEAD motifs. Further, CPB/p300 CUT&RUN support an enrichment of binding sites and three TEAD targets in VGLL2::NCOA2 and TEAD1::NCOA2 expressing cells. They also functionally evaluate genetic and chemical dependencies (TEAD inhibition), and found this was only effective for the VGLL2::NCOA2 fusion, and not for TEAD1::NCOA2. Using complementary biochemical approaches, they suggest (with other supporting data) the fusions regulate TEAD transcriptional outputs via a YAP/TAZ independent mechanism. Further, they expand into a C2C12 myoblast model and show that TEAD1::NCOA2 is transforming in colony formation assays and in mouse allograft. These strategies for TEAD1-NCOA2 are consistent with previous published strategies using VGLL2::NCOA2. Importantly, they show that a CBP/p300 (a binding partner found in their BioID mass spec) small molecule inhibitor suppresses tumor formation using this mouse allograft model, and that the tumors are less proliferative, and have a reduction in transcriptional of three TEAD target genes. They complement in vivo data with biochemical approaches, and suggest this interface with p300 (for VGLL2::NCOA2) is through the NCOA2 fusion partner, as Co-IP in HEK293T with a mutant fusion that does not contain NCOA2 loses the association with endogenous p300. The data is interesting and suggests new biology for these fusion-oncogenes. However, the choice of 293T may limit the broad applicability of the findings. Strikingly, in 293T there was more transcriptional overlap with the VGLL2-NCOA2 fusion with the YAP5SA mutant than with TEAD1-NCOA2. Further, there is an additional opportunity to directly compare transcriptional profiles in 293T to the human disease and in the mouse allograft system to directly compare and discuss VGLL2-NCOA2 and TEAD1-NCOA2 histological differences or how A485 treatment may change the histology. Overall, the breadth of methods used in this study, and comparison of the two fusion-oncogene's biology is of interest to the fusion-oncogene, pediatric sarcoma, and epigenetic therapeutic targeting fields.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Giménez-Orenga et al. investigate the origin and pathophysiology of myalgic encephalomyelitis/chronic fatigue syndrome (ME/CFS) and fibromyalgia (FM). Using RNA microarrays, the authors compare the expression profiles and evaluate the biomarker potential of human endogenous retroviruses (HERV) in these two conditions. Altogether, the authors show that HERV expression is distinct between ME/CFS and FM patients, and HERV dysregulation is associated with higher symptom intensity in ME/CFS. HERV expression in ME/CFS patients is associated with impaired immune function and higher estimated levels of plasma cells and resting CD4 memory T cells. This work provides interesting insights into the pathophysiology of ME/CFS and FM, creating opportunities for several follow-up studies.

Strengths:

(1) Overall, the data is convincing and supports the authors' claims. The manuscript is clear and easy to understand, and the methods are generally well-detailed. It was quite enjoyable to read.<br /> (2) The authors combined several unbiased approaches to analyse HERV expression in ME/CFS and FM. The tools, thresholds, and statistical models used all seem appropriate to answer their biological questions.<br /> (3) The authors propose an interesting alternative to diagnosing these two conditions. Transcriptomic analysis of blood samples using an RNA microarray could allow a minimally invasive and reproducible way of diagnosing ME/CFS and FM.

Weakness:<br /> (1) While this work makes several intriguing observations, some results will need to be validated in future studies using experimental approaches.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study uses in vivo multimodal high-resolution imaging to track how microglia and neutrophils respond to light-induced retinal injury from soon after injury to 2 months post-injury. The in vivo imaging finding was subsequently verified by ex vivo study. The results suggest that despite the highly active microglia at the injury site, neutrophils were not recruited in response to acute light-induced retinal injury.

Strengths:

An extremely thorough examination of the cellular-level immune activity at the injury site. In vivo imaging observations being verified using ex vivo techniques is a strong plus.

Weaknesses:

This paper is extremely long, and in the perspective of this reviewer, needs to be better organized. Update: Modifications have been made throughout, which has made the manuscript easier to follow.

Study weakness: though the finding prompts more questions and future studies, the findings discussed in this paper is potentially important for us to understand how the immune cells respond differently to different severity level of injury. The study also demonstrated an imaging technology which may help us better understand cellular activity in living tissue during earlier time points.

Comments on revisions:

I appreciate the thorough clarification and re-organization by the authors, and the messages in the manuscript are now more apparent. I recommend also briefly discussing limitations/future improvements in the discussion or conclusion.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

The manuscript now compares the WNet3D quantitatively against other methods on all four datasets:

Figure 1b shows results on the mouse cortex dataset, comparing StarDist, CellPose, SegResNet, SwinUNetR against self-supervised (or learning-free methods) WNet3D and Otsu thresholding.

Figure 2b shows results on an unnamed dataset (presumably the mouse cortex dataset), comparing StarDist, CellPose, SegResNet, SwinUNetR with different levels of training data against WNet3D.

Figure 3 shows results on three datasets (Platynereis-ISH-Nuclei-CBG, Platynereis-Nuclei-CBG, and Mouse-Skull-Nuclei-CBG), comparing StarDist, CellPose against WNet3D and Otsu thresholding.

It is unclear whether the Otsu thresholding baseline was given the same post-processing as the WNet3D. Figure 1b shows two versions for WNet3D ("WNet3D - No artifacts" and "WNet3D"), but only one for Otsu thresholding. Given that post-processing (or artifact removal) seems to have a substantial impact on accuracy, the authors should clarify whether the Otsu thresholding results were treated in the same way and if Otsu thresholding was not post-processed. Figure 2a would also benefit from including the thresholding results (with and without artifact removal).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The goal of the paper was to trace the transitions hippocampal microglia undergo along aging. ScRNA-seq analysis allowed the authors to predict a trajectory and hypothesize about possible molecular checkpoints, which keep the pace of microglial aging. E.g. TGF1b was predicted as a molecule slowing down the microglial aging path and indeed, loss of TGF1 in microglia led to premature microglia aging, which was associated with premature loss of cognitive ability. The authors also used the parabiosis model to show how peripheral, blood-derived signals from the old organism can "push" microglia forward on the aging path.

Strengths:

A major strength and uniqueness of this work is the in-depth single-cell dataset, which may be a useful resource for the community, as well as the data showing what happens to young microglia in heterochronic parabiosis setting and upon loss of TGFb in their environment.

Weaknesses:

All weaknesses were addressed during revision.

Overall:

In general, I think the authors did a good job following the initial observations and devised clever ways to test the emerging hypotheses. The resulting data are an important addition to what we know about microglial aging and can be fruitfully used by other researchers, e.g. those working on microglia in a disease context.

Comments on revisions:

All my comments were addressed.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This study addresses the question of how task-relevant sensory information affects activity in motor cortex. The authors use various approaches to address this question, looking at single units and population activity. They find that there are three subtypes of modulation by sensory information at the single unit level. Population analyses reveal that sensory information affects the neural activity orthogonally to motor output. The authors then compare both single unit and population activity to computational models to investigate how encoding of sensory information at the single-unit level is coordinated in a network. They find that an RNN that displays similar orbital dynamics and sensory modulation to motor cortex also contains nodes that are modulated similarly to the three subtypes identified by the single unit analysis.

Strengths:

The strengths of this study lie in the population analyses and the approach of comparing single-unit encoding to population dynamics. In particular, the analysis in Figure 3 is very elegant and informative about the effect of sensory information on motor cortical activity. The task is also well designed to suit the questions being asked and well controlled.

It is commendable that the authors compare single-unit to population modulation. The addition of the RNN model and perturbations strengthen the conclusion that the subtypes of individual units all contribute to the population dynamics.

Weaknesses:

The main weaknesses of the study lie in the categorization of the single units into PD shift, gain and addition types. The single units exhibit clear mixed selectivity, as the authors highlight. Therefore, the subsequent analyses looking only at the individual classes in the RNN are a little limited. Another weakness of the paper is that the choice of windows for analyses is not properly justified and the dependence of the results on the time windows chosen for single unit analyses is not assessed. This is particularly pertinent because tuning curves are known to rotate during movements (Sergio et al. 2005 Journal of Neurophysiology).

This study uses insights from single-unit analysis to inform mechanistic models of these population dynamics, which is a powerful approach, but is dependent on the validity of the single-cell analysis, which I have expanded on below.

I have clarified some of the areas that would benefit from further analysis below:

Task:

The task is well designed, although it would have benefited from perhaps one more target speed (for each direction). One monkey appears to have experienced one more target speed than the others (seen in Figure 3C). It would have been nice to have this data for all monkeys, although, of course, unfeasible given that the study has been concluded.

Single unit analyses:

The choice of the three categories (PD shift, gain addition) is not completely justified in a satisfactory way. It would be nice to see whether these three main categories are confirmed by unsupervised methods.

The decoder analyses in Figure 2 provide evidence that target speed modulation may change over the trial. Therefore, it is important to see how the window considered for the firing rate in Figure 1 (currently 100ms pre - 100ms post movement onset) affects the results. Whilst it is of course understandable that a window must be chosen and will always be slightly arbitrary, using different windows and comparing the results of two or three different sizes or timed windows would be more convincing that the results are not dependent on this particular window.

RNN:

Mixed selectivity is not analysed in the RNN, which would help to compare the model to the real data where mixed selectivity is common. The CCA and Procrustes analysis are a good start to validate the claim of similarity between RNN and neural dynamics, rather than allowing comparisons to be dominated by geometric similarities that may be features of the task. However, some of the disparity values for the Procrustes analysis are quite high, albeit below that of the shuffle. Maybe a comment about this in the text should be included. There is also an absence of alternate models to compare the perturbation model results to.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors describe a "beads-on-a-string" (BOAS) immunogen, where they link, using a non-flexible glycine linker, up to eight distinct hemagglutinin (HA) head domains from circulating and non-circulating influenzas and assess their immunogenicity. They also display some of their immunogens on ferritin NP and compare the immunogenicity. They conclude that this new platform can be useful to elicit robust immune responses to multiple influenza subtypes using one immunogen and that it can also be used for other viral proteins.

Strengths:

The paper is clearly written. While the use of flexible linkers has been used many times, this particular approach (linking different HA subtypes in the same construct resembling adding beads on a string, as the authors describe their display platform) is novel and could be of interest.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have addressed most comments. Some mistakes/issues remain:

TI should be defined earlier on line 61 not on line 196

No legend for Figure 3E - it looks like this is where the authors did the first immunization with the "mix" to compare to the BOAs but strangely they do not mention this in the response to reviewers letter and only mention fig 6G and 7<br /> Maybe add "mix" to the title of Figure 3?

In Figure 6G they do show the response to the mix but do not mention it in the immunizations for that figure. Also weird because obviously the mix is not a NP while this figure addresses NP format.

Line 796 - pseudo viruses

The authors should add some clarification in the paper as they did in response to reviewers.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Rossi et al. asked whether gait adaptation is solely a matter of slow perceptual realignment or if it also involves fast/flexible stimulus-response mapping mechanisms. To test this, they conducted a series of split-belt treadmill experiments with ramped perturbations, revealing behavior indicative of a flexible, automatic stimulus-response mapping mechanism.

Strengths:

(1) The study includes a perceptual test of leg speed, which correlates with the perceptual realignment component of motor aftereffects. This indicates that changes in motor performance are not fully accounted for by perceptual realignment.

(2) The study evaluates the possible contributions of explicit strategy using a framework (Tsay et al., 2024) and provides evidence for minimal strategy involvement in split-belt adaptation through subjective reports.

(3) The study incorporates qualitatively distinct, hypothesis-driven models of adaptation and proposes a new framework that integrates these mechanisms. Relatedly, the study considers a range of alternative models, demonstrating that perceptual recalibration and remapping uniquely explain the patterns of behavior and aftereffects, ruling out models that focus solely on a single process (e.g., PReMo, PEA, memory of errors, optimal feedback control) and others that do not incorporate remapping (dual rate state space models).

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Summary:

Zhang et al. demonstrate that CD4+ single positive (SP) thymocytes, CD4+ recent thymic emigrants (RTE), and CD4+ T naive (Tn) cells from Cd11c-p28-flox mice, which lack IL-27p28 selectively in Cd11c+ cells, exhibit a hyper-Th1 phenotype instead of the expected hyper Th2 phenotype. Using IL-27R-deficient mice, the authors confirm that this hyper-Th1 phenotype is due to IL-27 signaling via IL-27R, rather than the effects of monomeric IL-27p28. They also crossed Cd11c-p28-flox mice with autoimmune-prone Aire-deficient mice and showed that both T cell responses and tissue pathology are enhanced, suggesting that SP, RTE, and Tn cells from Cd11c-p28-flox mice are poised to become Th1 cells in response to self-antigens. Regarding mechanism, the authors demonstrate that SP, RTE, and Tn cells from Cd11c-p28-flox mice have reduced DNA methylation at the IFN-g and Tbx21 loci, indicating 'de-repression', along with enhanced histone tri-methylation at H3K4, indicating a 'permissive' transcriptional state. They also find evidence for enhanced STAT1 activity, which is relevant given the well-established role of STAT1 in promoting Th1 responses, and surprising given IL-27 is a potent STAT1 activator. This latter finding suggests that the Th1-inhibiting property of thymic IL-27 may not be due to direct effects on the T cells themselves.

Strengths:

Overall the data presented are high quality and the manuscript is well-reasoned and composed. The basic finding - that thymic IL-27 production limits the Th1 potential of SP, RTE, and Tn cells - is both unexpected and well described.

Weaknesses from the original round of review:

A credible mechanistic explanation, cellular or molecular, is lacking. The authors convincingly affirm the hyper-Th1 phenotype at epigenetic level but it remains unclear whether the observed changes reflect the capacity of IL-27 to directly elicit epigenetic remodeling in developing thymocytes or knock-on effects from other cell types which, in turn, elicit the epigenetic changes (presumably via cytokines). The authors propose that increased STAT1 activity is a driving force for the epigenetic changes and resultant hyper-Th1 phenotype. That conclusion is logical given the data at hand but the alternative hypothesis - that the hyper-STAT1 response is just a downstream consequence of the hyper-Th1 phenotype - remains equally likely. Thus, while the discovery of a new anti-inflammatory function for IL-27 within the thymus is compelling, further mechanistic studies are needed to advance the finding beyond phenomenology.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors define the principles that, based on first principles, should be guiding the optimisation of trascription factors with intrinsically disordered regions (IDR). The first part of the study defines the following principles to optimize the binding affinities to the genome in the receiving region that is called the "antenna": (i) reduce the target to IDR-binding distance on the genome, (ii) optimise the distance betwee the DNA binding domain and the binding sites on the IDR to be as close as possible to the distance between their binding sites on the genome; (iii) keep the same number of binding sites and their targets and modulate this number with binding strength, reducing them with increased strenght; (iv) modulate the binding strenght to be above a threshold that depends on the proportion of IDR binding sites in the antenna. The second part defines the scaling of the seach time in function of key parameters such as the volume of the nucleus, and the size of the antenna, derived as a combination of 3D search of the antenna and 1D "octopusing" on the antenna. The third part focuses on validation, where the current results are compared to binding probabilith data from a single experiment, and new experiment are proposed to further validate the model as well as testing designed transcription factors.

Strengths:

The strength of this work is that it provides simple, interpretable and testable theoretical conclusions. This will allow the derived design principles to be understood, evaluated and improved in the future. The theoretical derivations are rigorous. The authors provides a comparison to experiments, and also propose new experiments to be performed in the future, this is a great value in the paper since it will set the stage and inspire new experimental techniques. Further, the field needs inspiration and motivations to develop these techniques, since they are required to benchmark the transcription factors designed with the methods presented in this paper, as well as to develop novel data based or in vivo methods that would greatly benefit the field. As such, this paper is a fundamental contribution to the field.

Weaknesses:

The model assumption that the interaction between the transcription factor and the DNA outside of the antenna region is negligible is probably too strong for many/most transcription factors, particularly in organisms with a longer genome than yeasts. The model presents many first principles to drive the design of transcription factor, but arguably, other principles and mechanisms might also play a role by being beneficial to the search and binding process. Specifically: (i) a role of the IDR in complex formation and cooperativity between multiple trascription factors, (ii) ability of the IDR to do parallel searching based on multiple DNA binding sites spaced by disordered regions, (iii) affinity of the IDR to specific compartmentalisations in the nucleus reducing the search time, etc. The paper would be improved by a discussion over alternative mechanisms.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper uses state-of-the-art techniques to define the cellular composition and its complexity in two rodent species (mice and rats). The study is built on available datasets but extends those in a way that future research will be facilitated. The study will be of high impact for the study of metabolic control.

Strengths:

(1) The study is based on experiments that are combined with two exceptional data sets to provide compelling evidence for the cellular composition of the DVC.

(2) The use of two rodent species is very useful.

Weaknesses:<br /> There is no conceptual weakness, the performance of experiments is state-of-the-art, and the discussion of results is appropriate. One minor point that would further strengthen the data is a more distinct analysis of receptors that are characteristic of the different populations of neuronal and non-neuronal cells; this part could be improved. Currently, it is only briefly mentioned, e.g., line 585ff. See also lines 603ff; it is true that the previous studies lack some information about the neurotransmitter profile of cells, but combining all data sets should result in an analysis of the receptors as well, e.g. in the form of an easy-to-read table.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

This was a clearly written manuscript that did an excellent job summarizing complex data. In this manuscript, Cuevas-Zuviría et al. use protein modeling to generate over 5,000 predicted structures of nitrogenase components, encompassing both extant and ancestral forms across different clades. The study highlights that key insertions define the various Nif groups. The authors also examined the structures of three ancestral nitrogenase variants that had been previously identified and experimentally tested. These ancestral forms were shown in earlier studies to exhibit reduced activity in Azotobacter vinelandii, a model diazotroph.

This work provides a useful resource for studying nitrogenase evolution. However, its impact is somewhat limited due to a lack of evidence linking the observed structural differences to functional changes. For example, in the ancestral nitrogenase structures, only a small set of residues (lines 421-431) were identified as potentially affecting interactions between nitrogenase components. Why didn't the authors test whether reverting these residues to their extant counterparts could improve nitrogenase activity of the ancestral variants?

Additionally, the paper feels somewhat disconnected. The predicted nitrogenase structures discussed in the first half of the manuscript were not well integrated with the findings from the ancestral structures. For instance, do the ancestral nitrogenase structures align with the predicted models? This comparison was never explicitly made and could have strengthened the study's conclusions.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The present study addresses whether physiological signals influence aperiodic brain activity with a focus on age-related changes. The authors report age effects on aperiodic cardiac activity derived from ECG in low and high-frequency ranges in roughly 2300 participants from four different sites. Slopes of the ECGs were associated with common heart variability measures, which, according to the authors, shows that ECG, even at higher frequencies, conveys meaningful information. Using temporal response functions on concurrent ECG and M/EEG time series, the authors demonstrate that cardiac activity is instantaneously reflected in neural recordings, even after applying ICA analysis to remove cardiac activity. This was more strongly the case for EEG than MEG data. Finally, spectral parameterization was done in large-scale resting-state MEG and ECG data in individuals between 18 and 88 years, and age effects were tested. A steepening of spectral slopes with age was observed, particularly for ECG and, to a lesser extent, in cleaned MEG data in most frequency ranges and sensors investigated. The authors conclude that commonly observed age effects on neural aperiodic activity can mainly be explained by cardiac activity.

Strengths:

Compared to previous investigations, the authors demonstrate effects of aging on the spectral slope in the currently largest MEG dataset with equal age distribution available. Their efforts of replicating observed effects in another large MEG dataset and considering potential confounding by ocular activity, head movements, or preprocessing methods are commendable and highly valuable to the community. This study also employs a wide range of fitting ranges and two commonly used algorithms for spectral parameterization of neural and cardiac activity, hence providing a comprehensive overview of the impact of methodological choices. The authors discuss their findings in-depth and give recommendations for the separation of physiological and neural sources of aperiodic activity.

Weaknesses:

While the study's aim is well-motivated and analyses rigorously conducted, it remains vague what is reflected in the ECG at higher frequency ranges that contributed to the confounding of the age effects in the neural data. However, the authors address this issue in their discussion.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In this paper Weber et al. investigate the role of 4 dopaminergic neurons of the Drosophila larva in mediating the association between an aversive high-salt stimulus and a neutral odor. The 4 DANs belong to the DL1 cluster and innervate non-overlapping compartments of the mushroom body, distinct from those involved in appetitive associative learning. Using specific driver lines for individual neurons, the authors show that activation of the DAN-g1 is sufficient to mimic an aversive memory and it is also necessary to form a high-salt memory of full strength, although optogenetic silencing of this neuron has only a partial phenotype. The authors use calcium imaging to show that the DAN-g1 is not the only DAN responding to salt. DAN-c1 and d1 also respond to salt, but they seem to play no role for the associative memory. DAN-f1, which does not respond to salt, is able to lead to the formation of a memory (if optogenetically activated), but it is not necessary for the salt-odor memory formation in normal conditions. However, when silenced together with DAN-g1, it enhances the memory deficit of DAN-g1. Overall, this work brings evidence of a complex interaction between DL1 DANs in both the encoding of salt signals and their teaching role in associative learning, with none of them being individually necessary and sufficient for both functions.

Strengths:

Overall, the manuscript contributes interesting results that are useful to understand the organization and function of the dopaminergic system. The behavioral role of the specific DANs is accessed using specific driver lines which allow to test their function individually and in pairs. Moreover, the authors perform calcium imaging to test whether DANs are activated by salt, a prerequisite for inducing a negative association to it. Proper genetic controls are carried across the manuscript.

Weaknesses:

The authors use two different approaches to silence dopaminergic neurons: optogenetics and induction of apoptosis. The results are not always consistent, but the authors discuss these differences appropriately. In general, the optogenetic approach is more appropriate as developmental compensations are not of major interest for the question investigated.

The physiological data would suggest the role of a certain subset of DANs in salt-odor association, but a different partially overlapping set is necessary in behavioral assays (with a partial phenotype). No manipulation completely abolishes the salt-odor association, leaving important open questions on the identity of the neural circuits involved in this behavior.

The EM data analysis reveals a non-trivial organization of sensory inputs into DANs, but it is difficult to extrapolate a link to the functional data presented in the paper.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Using the well-studied oxalate-microbiome-host system, the authors propose a novel conceptual and experimental framework for developing targeted bacteriotherapies using a three-phase pre-clinical workflow. The third phase is based on a 'complex system theoretical approach' in which multi-omics technologies are combined in independent in vivo and in vitro models to successfully identify the most pertinent variables that influence specific phenotypes in diet-host-microbe systems. The innovation relies on the third phase since phase I and phase II are the dominant approaches everyone in the microbiome field uses.

Strengths:

The authors used a multidisciplinary approach which included i] fecal transplant of two distinct microbial communities into Swiss-Webster mice (SWM) to characterize the host response (hepatic response-transcriptomics) and microbial activity (untargeted metabolomics of the stool samples) to different oxalate concentrations; 2] longitudinal analysis of the N. albigulia gut microbiome composition in response to varying concentrations of oxalate by shotgun metagenomics, with deep bioinformatic analyses of the genomes assembled; and 3] development of synthetic microbial communities around oxalate metabolisms and evaluation of these communities' activity into oxalate degradation in vivo.

Weaknesses:

This study presents a valuable finding on the oxalate-microbiome-host system using a multitude of approaches. Although the multidisciplinary approach allows for a unique perspective on the system and more robust conclusions, it is challenging for any authors to present all the data clearly and systematically in a conclusive way-especially when introducing unfamiliar concepts such as a complex systems theoretical approach.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this study, the authors build upon previous research that utilized non-invasive EEG and MEG by analyzing intracranial human ECoG data with high spatial resolution. They employed a receptive field mapping task to infer the retinotopic organization of the human visual system. The results present compelling evidence that the spatial distribution of human alpha oscillations is highly specific and functionally relevant, as it provides information about the position of a stimulus within the visual field.

Using state-of-the-art modeling approaches, the authors not only strengthen the existing evidence for the spatial specificity of the human dominant rhythm but also provide new quantification of its functional utility, specifically in terms of the size of the receptive field relative to the one estimated based on broad band activity.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Astrocytes are known to express neuroligins 1-3. Within neurons, these cell adhesion molecules perform important roles in synapse formation and function. Within astrocytes, a significant role for neuroligin 2 in determining excitatory synapse formation and astrocyte morphology was shown in 2017. However, there has been no assessment of what happens to synapses or astrocyte morphology when all three major forms of neuroligins within astrocytes (isoforms 1-3) are deleted using a well characterized, astrocyte specific, and inducible cre line. By using such selective mouse genetic methods, the authors here show that astrocytic neuroligin 1-3 expression in astrocytes is not consequential for synapse function or for astrocyte morphology. They reach these conclusions with careful experiments employing quantitative western blot analyses, imaging and electrophysiology. They also characterize the specificity of the cre line they used. Overall, this is a very clear and strong paper that is supported by rigorous experiments. The discussion considers the findings carefully in relation to past work. This paper is of high importance, because it now raises the fundamental question of exactly what neuroligins 1-3 are actually doing in astrocytes. In addition, it enriches our understanding of the mechanisms by which astrocytes participate in synapse formation and function. The paper is very clear, well written and well illustrated with raw and average data.

Comments on revisions:

My previous comments have been addressed. I have no additional points to make and congratulate the authors.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The behavioral strategies underlying decisions based on perceptual evidence are often studied in the lab with stimuli whose elements provide independent pieces of decision-related evidence that can thus be equally weighted to form a decision. In more natural scenarios, in contrast, the information provided by these pieces is often correlated, which impacts how they should be weighted. Tardiff, Kang & Gold set out to study decisions based on correlated evidence and compare observed behavior of human decision makers to normative decision strategies. To do so, they presented participants with visual sequences of pairs of localized cues whose location was either uncorrelated, or positively or negatively correlated, and whose mean location across a sequence determined the correct choice. Importantly, they adjusted this mean location such that, when correctly weighted, each pair of cues was equally informative, irrespective of how correlated it was. Thus, if participants follow the normative decision strategy, their choices and reaction times should not be impacted by these correlations. While Tardiff and colleagues found no impact of correlations on choices, they did find them to impact reaction times, suggesting that participants deviated from the normative decision strategy. To assess the degree of this deviation, Tardiff et al. adjusted drift diffusion models (DDMs) for decision-making to process correlated decision evidence. These fits, and a comparison of different model variants revealed that participants considered correlations when weighing evidence, but did so with a slight underestimation of magnitude of this correlation. This finding made Tardiff et al. conclude that participants followed a close-to normative decision strategy that adequately took into account correlated evidence.

Strength:

The authors adjust a previously used experimental design to include correlated evidence in a simple, yet powerful way. The way it does so is easy to understand and intuitive, such that participants don't need extensive training to perform the task. Limited training makes it more likely that the observed behavior is natural and reflective of every-day decision-making. Furthermore, the design allowed the authors to make the amount of decision-related evidence equal across different correlation magnitudes, which makes it easy to assess whether participants correctly take account of these correlations when weighing evidence: if they do, their behavior should not be impacted by the correlation magnitude.

The relative simplicity with which correlated evidence is introduced also allowed the authors to fall back to the well-established DDM for perceptual decisions, that has few parameters, is known to implement the normative decision strategy in certain circumstances, and enjoys a great deal of empirical support. The authors show how correlations ought to impact these parameters, and which changes in parameters one would expect to see if participants mis-estimate these correlations or ignore them altogether (i.e., estimate correlations to be zero). This allowed them to assess the degree to which participants took into account correlations on the full continuum from perfect evidence weighting to complete ignorance. More specifically, the authors showed that a consistent mis-estimation of the correlation magnitude would not impact the fraction of correct choices (as they observe), but only the reaction times. With this, they could show that participants in fact performed rational evidence weighting if one assumed that they slightly underestimated the correlation magnitude.

Weaknesses:

While the authors convincingly demonstrate that the observed decision-making behavior seems to stem from a slight underestimation of the correlation magnitudes, their experimental paradigm did not allow them to determine the origin of this bias. Through additional analyses they rule out various possibilities, like the impact of a Bayesian prior on estimated correlations. Nonetheless, the authors provide no normative explanation of the observed bias.

A further minor weakness is that the authors only focus on a single normative aspect of the observed behavior, namely on whether participants optimally accumulate decision-related evidence across time. Another question is whether participants tune their decision boundaries to maximize reward rates or some other overall performance measures. While the authors discuss that the chosen diffusion models (DDMs) have the potential of also implementing normative decisions in the latter sense, the authors' analysis does not address this question in the context of their task.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

"Unraveling the Role of Ctla-4 in Intestinal Immune Homeostasis: Insights from a novel Zebrafish Model of Inflammatory Bowel Disease" generates a 14bp deletion/early stop codon mutation that is viable in a zebrafish homolog of ctla-4. This mutant exhibits an IBD-like phenotype, including decreased intestinal length, abnormal intestinal folds, decreased goblet cells, abnormal cell junctions between epithelial cells, increased inflammation, and alterations in microbial diversity. Bulk and single-cell RNA-seq show upregulation of immune and inflammatory response genes in this mutant (especially in neutrophils, B cells, and macrophages) and downregulation of genes involved in adhesion and tight junctions in mutant enterocytes. The work suggests that the makeup of immune cells within the intestine is altered in these mutants, potentially due to changes in lymphocyte proliferation. Introduction of recombinant soluble Ctla-4-Ig to mutant zebrafish rescued body weight, histological phenotypes, and gene expression of several pro-inflammatory genes, suggesting a potential future therapeutic route.

Strengths:

- Generation of a useful new mutant in zebrafish ctla-4<br /> - The demonstration of an IBD-like phenotype in this mutant is extremely comprehensive.<br /> - Demonstrated gene expression differences provide mechanistic insight into how this mutation leads to IBD-like symptoms.<br /> - Demonstration of rescue with a soluble protein suggests exciting future therapeutic potential<br /> - The manuscript is mostly well organized and well written.

Initial Weaknesses were addressed during review.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

This work presents data from three species (mice, rats, and humans) performing an evidence accumulation task, that has been designed to be as similar as possible between species (and is based on a solid foundation of previous work on decision-making). The tasks are well-designed, and the analyses are solid and clearly presented - showing that there are differences in the overall parameters of the decision-making process between the species. This is valuable to neuroscientists who aim to translate behavioral and neuroscientific findings from rodents to humans and offers a word of caution for the field in readily claiming that behavioral strategies and computations are representative of all mammals. The dataset would be of great interest to the community and may be a source of further modelling of across-species behavior, but unfortunately, neither data or code are currently shared.

A few other questions remain, that make the conclusions of the paper a bit hard to assess:

(1) The main weakness is that the authors claim that all species rely on evidence accumulation as a strategy, but this is not tested against other models (see e.g. Stine et al. https://elifesciences.org/articles/55365): the fact that the DDM fits rather well does not mean that this is the strategy that each species was carrying out.

(2) In all main analyses, it is unclear what the effect is of the generative flash rate and how this has been calibrated between species. Only in Figure 6C do we see basic psychometric functions, but these should presumably also feature as a crucial variable dominating the accuracy and RTs (chronometric functions) across species. The very easy trials are useful to constrain the basic sensorimotor differences that may account for RT variability, e.g. perhaps the small body of mice requires them to move a relatively longer distance to trigger the response.

(3) The GLM-HMM results (that mice are not engaged in all trials) are very important, but they imply that mouse DDM fits may well be more similar to rats and humans if done only on engaged trials. Could it be that the main species differences are driven by different engagement state occupations?

(4) It would be very helpful if the authors could present a comprehensive overview (perhaps a table) of the factors that may be relevant for explaining the observed species differences. This may include contextual/experimental variables (age range (adolescent humans vs. mice/rats, see https://www.jax.org/news-and-insights/jax-blog/2017/november/when-are-mice-considered-old; reward source, etc) and also outcomes (e.g. training time required to learn the task, # trials per session and in total).

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Sakelaris and Riecke used computational modeling to explore how neurogenesis and sequential integration of new neurons into a network support memory formation and maintenance. They focus on the integration of granule cells in the olfactory bulb, a brain area where adult neurogenesis is prominent. Experimental results published in recent years provide an excellent basis to address the question at hand by biologically constrained models. The study extends previous computational models and provides a coherent picture of how multiple processes may act in concert to enable rapid learning, high stability of memories, and high memory capacity. This computational model generates experimentally testable predictions and is likely to be valuable to understand the roles of neurogenesis and related phenomena in memory. One of the key findings is that important features of the memory system depend on transient properties of adult-born granule cells such as enhanced excitability and apoptosis during specific phases of the development of individual neurons. The model can explain many experimental observations and suggests specific functions for different processes (e.g., importance of apoptosis for continual learning). While this model is obviously a massive simplification of the biological system, it conceptualizes diverse experimental observations into a coherent picture, it generates testable predictions for experiments, and it will likely inspire further modeling and experimental studies. Nonetheless, there are issues that the authors should address.

Strengths:

(1) The model can explain diverse experimental observations.

(2) The model directly represents the biological network.

Weaknesses:

As with many other models of biological networks, this model contains major simplifications.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In this paper, Thomas et al. set out to study seasonal brain gene expression changes in the Eurasian common shrew. This mammalian species is unusual in that it does not hibernate or migrate but instead stays active all winter while shrinking and then regrowing its brain and other organs. The authors previously examined gene expression changes in two brain regions and the liver. Here, they added data from the hypothalamus, a brain region involved in the regulation of metabolism and homeostasis. The specific goals were to identify genes and gene groups that change expression with the seasons and to identify genes with unusual expression compared to other mammalian species. The reason for this second goal is that genes that change with the season could be due to plastic gene regulation, where the organism simply reacts to environmental change using processes available to all mammals. Such changes are not necessarily indicative of adaptation in the shrew. However, if the same genes are also expression outliers compared to other species that do not show this overwintering strategy, it is more likely that they reflect adaptive changes that contribute to the shrew's unique traits.

The authors succeeded in implementing their experimental design and identified significant genes in each of their specific goals. There was an overlap between these gene lists. The authors provide extensive discussion of the genes they found.

The scope of this paper is quite narrow, as it adds gene expression data for only one additional tissue compared to the authors' previous work in a 2023 preprint. The two papers even use the same animals, which had been collected for that earlier work. As a consequence, the current paper is limited in the results it can present. This is somewhat compensated by an expansive interpretation of the results in the discussion section, but I felt that much of this was too speculative. More importantly, there are several limitations to the design, making it hard to draw stronger conclusions from the data. The main contribution of this work lies in the generated data and the formulation of hypotheses to be tested by future work.

Strengths:

The unique biological model system under study is fascinating. The data were collected in a technically sound manner, and the analyses were done well. The paper is overall very clear, well-written, and easy to follow. It does a thorough job of exploring patterns and enrichments in the various gene sets that are identified.

I specifically applaud the authors for doing a functional follow-up experiment on one of the differentially expressed genes (BCL2L1), even if the results did not support the hypothesis. It is important to report experiments like this and it is terrific to see it done here.

Comments on revised version:

This updated version of the paper is improved compared to its initial version. As such, the strengths remain the same as before, with a fascinating model system and an interesting research question. The earlier weaknesses related to overinterpretation of the data have been largely fixed by shortening the paper and adding appropriate caveats throughout. The paper now also includes a significance test for its overlap between gene lists. While this turned out to be negative (i.e., there is not more overlap between lists than expected by chance), reporting this result transparently has strengthened the paper.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary

In this manuscript, De La Forest Divonne et al. build a repertory of hemocytes from adult Pacific oysters combining scRNAseq data with cytologic and biochemical analyses. Three categories of hemocytes were described previously in this species (i.e. blast, hyalinocyte and granulocytes). Based on scRNAseq data, the authors identified 7 hemocyte clusters presenting distinct transcriptional signatures. Using Kegg pathway enrichment and RBGOA, the authors determined the main molecular features of the clusters. In parallel, using cytologic markers, the authors classified 7 populations of hemocytes (i.e. ML, H, BBL, ABL, SGC, BGC, and VC) presenting distinct sizes, nucleus sizes, acidophilic/basophilic, presence of pseudopods, cytoplasm/nucleus ratio and presence of granules. Then, the authors compared the phenotypic features with potential transcriptional signatures seen in the scRNAseq. The hemocytes were separated in a density gradient to enrich for specific subpopulations. The cell composition of each cell fraction was determined using cytologic markers and the cell fractions were analysed by quantitative PCR targeting major cluster markers (two per cluster). With this approach, the authors could assign cluster 7 to VC, cluster 2 to H, and cluster 3 to SGC. The other clusters did not show a clear association with this experimental approach. Using phagocytic assays, ROS, and copper monitoring, the authors showed that ML and SGC are phagocytic, ML produces ROS, and SGC and BGC accumulate copper. Then with the density gradient/qPCR approach, the authors identified the populations expressing anti-microbial peptides (ABL, BBL, and H). At last, the authors used Monocle to predict differentiation trajectories for each subgroup of hemocytes using cluster 4 as the progenitor subpopulation.

The manuscript provides a comprehensive characterisation of the diversity of circulating immune cells found in Pacific oysters.

Strengths

The combination of scRNAseq, cytologic markers and gradient based hemocyte sorting offers an integrative view of the immune cell diversity.<br /> Hemocytes represent a very plastic cell population that has key roles in homeostatic and challenged conditions. Grasping the molecular features of these cells at the single-cell level will help understand their biology.<br /> This type of study may help elucidate the diversification of immune cells in comparative studies and evolutionary immunology.

Weaknesses

Several figures show inconsistency leading to erroneous conclusions and some conclusions are poorly supported. Moreover, the manuscript remains highly descriptive with limited comparison with the available literature.

Comments on revisions:

The authors replied to most comments.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, the authors develop a novel method to infer ecologically-informative parameters across healthy and diseased states of the gut microbiota, although the method is generalizable to other datasets for species abundances. The authors leverage techniques from theoretical physics of disordered systems to infer different parameters - mean and standard deviation for the strength of bacterial interspecies interactions, a bacterial immigration rate, and the strength of demographic noise - that describe the statistics of microbiota samples from two groups-one for healthy subjects and another one for subjects with chronic inflammation syndromes. To do this, the authors simulate communities with a modified version of the Generalized Lotka-Volterra model and randomly-generated interactions, and then use a moment-matching algorithm to find sets of parameters that better reproduce the data for species abundances. They find that these parameters are different for the healthy and diseased microbiota groups. The results suggest, for example, that bacterial interaction strengths, relative to noise and immigration, are more dominant for microbiota dynamics in diseased states than in healthy states.

We think that this manuscript brings an important contribution that will be of interest in the areas of statistical physics, (microbiota) ecology, and (biological) data science. The evidence of their results is solid and the work improves the state-of-the-art in terms of methods. There are a few weaknesses that, in our opinion, the authors could address to further improve the work.

Strengths:

(1) Using a fairly generic ecological model, the method can identify the change in the relative importance of different ecological forces (distribution of interspecies interactions, demographic noise, and immigration) in different sample groups. The authors focus on the case of the human gut microbiota, showing that the data are consistent with a higher influence of species interactions (relative to demographic noise and immigration) in a disease microbiota state than in healthy ones.

(2) The method is novel, original, and it improves the state-of-the-art methodology for the inference of ecologically relevant parameters. The analysis provides solid evidence for the conclusions.

Weaknesses:

In the way it is written, this work might be mostly read by physicists. We believe that, with some rewriting, the authors could better highlight the ecological implications of the results and make the method more accessible to a broader audience.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

The manuscript by Liao et al investigates the mechanisms that induce ephrin expression in spinal cord lateral motor column (LMC) neurons to facilitate axon guidance into the dorsal and ventral limb. The authors show that Sp1 and its co-activators p300 and CBP are required to induce ephrin expression to modulate the responsiveness of motor neurons to external ephrin cues. The study is well done and convincingly demonstrates the role of Sp1 in motor neuron axon guidance.

Further discussion and clarification of some results would further improve the study.

(1) The mechanism that the authors propose (Figure 7) and is also supported by their data is that Sp1 induces ephrinA5 in LMCm and ephrinB2 in LMCl to attenuate inappropriate responses to external ephrins in the limb. Therefore, deletion of Sp1 should result in mistargeting of LMCl and LMCm axons, as shown in the mouse data, but no overt changes in the number of axons in the ventral and dorsal limb. From the mouse backfills, it seems that an equal number of LMCm/LMCl project into the wrong side of the limb. However, the chick data show an increase of axons projecting into the ventral limb in the Sp1 knockout. Is this also true in the mouse? The authors state that medial and lateral LMC neurons differ in their reliance on Sp1 function but that is not supported by the mouse backfill data (27% vs 32% motor neurons mistargeted). Also, the model presented in Figure 7 does not explain how Sp1 overexpression leads to axon guidance defects.

(2) The authors do not directly show changes in ephrin expression in motor neurons, either in chick or mouse, after Sp1 knockout, which is the basis of their model. The experiment in Figure 4G seems to be Sp1 overexpression rather than knockdown (as mentioned in the results) and NSC-34 cells may not be relevant to motor neurons in vivo. NSC-34 experiments are also not described in the methods.

(3) There is no information about how the RNA-sequencing experiment was done (which neurons were isolated, how, at what age, how many replicates, etc) so it is hard to interpret the resulting data.

(4) It is unclear why the authors chose to use a Syn1-cre driver rather than a motor neuron restricted cre driver. Since this is a broad neuronal cre driver, the behavioral defects shown in Figure 7 may not be solely due to Sp1 deletion in motor neurons. Are there other relevant neuronal populations that express Sp1 that are targeted by this cre-mediated deletion?

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

In this study, Li et al et al. investigated the role of miR-283 in regulating cardiac aging and its potential contribution to age-related bradyarrhythmia. Using Drosophila as a model, the authors demonstrated that systemic overexpression or knockdown of miR-283 induced age-associated bradycardia. Notably, the study found that miR-283 knockdown in ventral-lateral neurons (LNvs), rather than in the heart, was sufficient to induce bradyarrhythmia, an effect the authors linked to the upregulation of miR-283 expression in both the brain and heart. The study also explored the beneficial impact of exercise on cardiac aging, showing that endurance training mitigated bradyarrhythmia, correlating with reduced miR-283 accumulation in the brain and myocardium.

The conclusions of this paper are mostly well supported by data; however, some concerns arise from the unexpected finding that bradyarrhythmia was triggered by miR-283 knockdown in LNvs rather than in the heart, suggesting a non-cell-autonomous mechanism. A more precise mechanistic explanation linking miR-283 dysregulation in LNvs to cardiac dysfunction would strengthen the study's conclusions. While the authors propose cwo as a potential target of miR-283, no functional experiments were conducted to confirm its role in mediating miR-283's effects. Additionally, it remains unclear whether reduced miR-283 levels in LNvs lead to accelerated aging rather than a cardiac-specific effect. Likewise, the potential influence of miR-283 on the circadian clock and its broader impact on aging warrant further investigation.

Major Comments:

(1) A significant concern arises from the unexpected outcome observed in miR-283 knockdown in LNvs, which suggests a non-cell-autonomous mechanism. Elucidating the mechanisms by which miR-283 deficiency leads to the observed phenotypes would provide a more comprehensive understanding of the study's implications.

(2) The authors propose cwo as a potential target of miR-283; however, no functional experiments were conducted to confirm its role in mediating miR-283's effects. Similarly, direct evidence demonstrating that cwo is a bona fide target of miR-283 in LNvs should be provided.

(3) It remains unclear whether miR-283 knockdown in LNvs results in accelerated aging rather than a cardiac-specific effect. This hypothesis is supported by observations that pdf>miR-283SP animals exhibit systemic premature senescence (elevated SA-β-gal activity in both the heart and brain), cardiac dysfunction, impaired climbing ability, and reduced lifespan.

(4) The finding that reduced miR-283 levels in LNvs lead to accelerated aging raises an important, yet unexplored, question: does miR-283 influence the circadian clock, thereby broadly affecting aging?

Two aspects of this question should be addressed:<br /> (a) Is the circadian rhythm disrupted in miR-283 knockdown experiments?<br /> (b) Do circadian rhythm defects impact aging?

(5) The authors state that miR-283 knockdown in LNvs led to bradyarrhythmia, which was mainly caused by miR-283 upregulation in the whole brain and heart. However, it is unclear which experiments support this conclusion. Could the authors clarify this point?

(6) Given that miR-283 expression varies with age, could the upregulation of miR-283 in both the brain and heart be a consequence of accelerated aging rather than a specific effect of miR-283 knockdown in LNvs?

(7) While the beneficial effects of exercise on cardiac function appear clear, the claim that this effect is mediated through miR-283 function in LNvs seems premature. The data suggest that exercise-induced improvement occurs in both wild-type and miR-283-SP animals, raising the possibility that exercise acts through a miR-283-independent mechanism.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, Rosero and Bai examined how the well-known thermosensory neuron in C. elegans, AFD, regulates context-dependent locomotory behavior based on the tactile experience. Here they show that AFD uses discrete cGMP signalling molecules and independent of its dendritic sensory endings regulates this locomotory behavior. The authors also show here that AFD's connection to one of the hub interneurons, AIB, through gap junction/electrical synapses, is necessary and sufficient for the regulation of this context-dependent locomotion modulation.

Strengths:

This is an interesting paper showcasing how a sensory neuron in C. elegans can employ a distinct set of molecular strategies and different physical parts to regulate a completely distinct set of behaviors, which were not been shown to be regulated by AFD before. The experiments were well performed and the results are clear. However, there are some questions about the mechanism of this regulation. This reviewer thinks that the authors should address these concerns before the final published version of this manuscript.

Weaknesses:

(1) The authors argued about the role of prior exposure to different physical contexts which might be responsible for the difference in their locomotory behaviour. However, the worms in the binary chamber (with both non-uniformly sized and spaced pillars) experienced both sets of pillars for one hour prior to the assay and they were also free to move between two sets of environments during the assay. So, this is not completely a switch between two different types of tactile barriers (or not completely restricted to prior experience), but rather a difference between experiencing a more complex environment vs a simple uniform environment. They should rephrase their findings. To strictly argue about the prior experience, the authors need to somehow restrict the worms from entering the uniform assay zone during the 1hr training period.

(2) The authors here argued that the sensory endings of AFD are not required for this novel role of AFD in context-dependent locomotion modulation. However, gcy-18 has been shown to be exclusively localized to the ciliated sensory endings of AFD and even misexpression of GCY-18 in other sensory neurons also leads to localizations in sensory endings (Nguyen et. al., 2014 and Takeishi et. al., 2016). They should check whether gcy-18 or tax-2 gets mislocalized in kcc-3 or tax-1 mutants.

(3) MEC-10 was shown to be required for physical space preference through its action in FLP and not the TRNs (PMID: 28349862). Since FLP is involved in harsh touch sensation while TRNs are involved in gentle touch sensation, which are the neuron types responsible for tactile sensation in the assay arena? Does mec-10 rescue in TRNs rescue the phenotype in the current paper?

(4) The authors mention that the most direct link between TRNs and AFD is through AIB, but as far as I understand, there are no reports to suggest synapses between TRNs and AIB. However, FLP and AIB are connected through both chemical and electrical synapses, which would make more sense as per their mec-10 data. (the authors mentioned about the FLP-AIB-AFD circuit in their discussion but talked about TRNs as the sensory modality). mec-10 rescue experiment in TRNs would clarify this ambiguity.

(5) Do inx-7 or inx-10 rescue in AFD and AIB using cell-specific promoters rescue the behaviour?

(6) How Guanylyl cyclase gcy-18 function is related to the electrical synapse activity between AFD and AIB? Is AFD downstream or upstream of AIB in this context?

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, Campbell et al. assess how intracranial theta-burst stimulation (TBS) applied to the basolateral amygdala in 23 epilepsy patients affects neuronal spiking in the medial temporal lobe and prefrontal cortex during a visual recognition memory task.

Strengths:

This is an incredibly rare dataset; collecting single-unit spiking data from behaving humans during active intracranial stimulation is a Herculaean task, with immense potential for translational studies of how stimulation may be applied to modulate biological mechanisms of memory. The authors utilize careful, high-quality methodology throughout (e.g. task design, spike recording and sorting, statistical analysis), providing high confidence in the validity of their findings.

Weaknesses:

(1) This is an exploratory study that doesn't explore quite enough. Critically, the authors make a point of mentioning that neuronal firing properties vary across cell types, but only use baseline firing rate as a proxy metric for cell type. This leaves several important explorations on the table, not limited to the following:<br /> a) Do waveform shape features, which can also be informative of cell type, predict the effect of stimulation?<br /> b) Is the autocorrelation of spike timing, which can be informative about temporal dynamics, altered by stimulation? This is especially interesting if theta-burst stimulation either entrains theta-rhythmic spiking or is more modulatory of endogenously theta-modulated units.<br /> c) The authors reference the relevance of spike-field synchrony (30-55 Hz) in animal work, but ignore it here. Does spike-field synchrony (comparing the image presentation to post-stimulation) change in this frequency range? This does not seem beyond the scope of investigation here.<br /> d) How does multi-unit activity respond to stimulation? At this somewhat low count of neurons (total n=156 included) it would be valuable to provide input on multi-unit responses to stimulation as well.<br /> e) Several intracranial studies have implicated proximity to white matter in determining the effects of stimulation on LFPs; do the authors see an effect of white matter proximity here?

(2) It is a little confusing to interpret stimulation-induced modulation of neuronal spiking in the absence of stimulation-induced change in behavior. How do the authors findings tell us anything about the neural mechanisms of stimulation-modulated memory if memory isn't altered? In line with point #1, I would suggest a deeper dive into behavior (e.g. reaction time? Or focus on individual sessions that do change in Figure 4A?) to make a stronger statement connecting the neural results to behavioral relevance.

(3) It is not clear to me why the assessment of firing rates after image onset and after stim offset is limited to one second - this choice should be more theoretically justified, particularly for regions that spike as sparsely as these.

(4) This work coincides with another example of human intracranial stimulation investigating the effect on firing rates (doi: https://doi.org/10.1101/2024.11.28.625915). Given how incredibly rare this type of work is, I think the authors should discuss how their work converges with this work (or doesn't).

(5) What information does the pseudo-population analysis add? It's not totally clear to me.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

This is an interesting manuscript aimed at improving the transcriptome characterization of 52 C. elegans neuron classes. Previous single-cell RNA seq studies already uncovered transcriptomes for these, but the data are incomplete, with a bias against genes with lower expression levels. Here, the authors use cell-specific reporter combinations to FACS purify neurons and bulk RNA sequencing to obtain better sequencing depth. This reveals more rare transcripts, as well as non-coding RNAs, pseudogenes, etc. The authors develop computational approaches to combine the bulk and scRNA transcriptome results to obtain more definitive gene lists for the neurons examined.

To ultimately understand features of any cell, from morphology to function, an understanding of the full complement of the genes it expresses is a pre-requisite. This paper gets us a step closer to this goal, assembling a current "definitive list" of genes for a large proportion of C. elegans neurons. The computational approaches used to generate the list are based on reasonable assumptions, the data appear to have been treated appropriately statistically, and the conclusions are generally warranted. I have a few issues that the authors may choose to address:

(1) As part of getting rid of cross-contamination in the bulk data, the authors model the scRNA data, extrapolate it to the bulk data and subtract out "contaminant" cell types. One wonders, however, given that low expressed genes are not represented in the scRNA data, whether the assignment of a gene to one or another cell type can really be made definitive. Indeed, it's possible that a gene is expressed at low levels in one cell, and high levels in another, and would therefore be considered a contaminant. The result would be to throw out genes that actually are expressed in a given cell type. The definitive list would therefore be a conservative estimate, and not necessarily the correct estimate.

(2) It would be quite useful to have tested some genes with lower expression levels using in vivo gene-fusion reporters to assess whether the expression assignments hold up as predicted. i.e. provide another avenue of experimentation, non-computational, to confirm that the decontamination algorithm works.

(3) In many cases, each cell class would be composed of at least 2 if not more neurons. Is it possible that differences between members of a single class would be missed by applying the cleanup algorithms? Such transcripts would be represented only in a fraction of the cells isolated by scRNAseq, and might then be considered not real.

(4) I didn't quite catch whether the precise staging of animals was matched between the bulk and scRNAseq datasets. Importantly, there are many genes whose expression is highly stage-specific or age-specific so even slight temporal differences might yield different sets of gene expression.

(5) To what extent does FACS sorting affect gene expression? Can the authors provide some controls?

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors investigate the role of different specific dopaminergic neurons in the mushroom body of Drosophila larvae for learning and innate behavior. All the tested neurons are thought to be involved in punishment learning. The authors discover that artificial activation of single DANs in training leads to safety learning, but not punishment learning. Furthermore, activation of single DANs can lead to changes in locomotion behavior, which can affect light preference. The authors provide a deeper understanding of the functional diversity of single dopamine neurons; however, it is unclear how translatable these findings are to learning experiments with real punishment stimuli.

Strengths:

The authors attempt to disentangle what kind of memories are formed with the activation of different dopamine neurons - safety learning, and punishment learning, will the US be required to test for recall or not? They do indeed find differences and the results will be of interest to the learning and memory community.

Interestingly, optogenetic activation of a single DAN during training leads to safety memory, but not punishment memory. Furthermore, DAN activation also affects innate locomotion, and the authors can show that optogenetic activation of different DANs affects locomotion differently.

Weaknesses:<br /> All experiments in the manuscript use optogenetic activation of DANs, thus it is not clear what kind of memories are formed. Several stimuli can be used as punishment, such as electric shock, salt, bitter, and light - it is not clear what kind of memory the authors investigate here. The findings could be discussed in the context of what DANs respond to. Furthermore, studies in adults and larvae showed that most DANs can code for both valences - etc., aversive DANs can be activated by punishment, and inhibited by reward. Thus, safety learning might be a result of a decrease in activity in DANs during odor presentation. The authors also do not discuss possible feedback loops from MBONs to DANs across compartments. Could such connections allow for safety learning in larvae?

The authors show that artificial activation with different light intensities can form different memories and that increasing the light intensity sometimes leads to no memories. Also, using different optogenetic tools reveals different results. This again raises the question of how applicable the results will be for learning with real stimuli. Is there a natural stimulus that only induces safety learning, but no punishment learning?<br /> The authors provide a detailed behavioral analysis of locomotion behavior; however, the detailed analysis seems unnecessary for that dataset. Modulation of speed and bending rate has been described before with simpler methods (specifically for MBONs). The revealed locomotion phenotypes probably affect larval locomotion during memory recall with light activation, thus the authors should show that larvae are potentially able to move during light-on memory tests.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors sequenced 888 individuals from the 1000 Genomes Project using the Oxford Nanopore long-read sequencing method to achieve highly sensitive, genome-wide detection of structural variants (SVs) at the population level. They conducted solid benchmarking of SV calling and systematically characterized the identified SVs. While short-read sequencing methods, including those used in the 1000 Genomes Project, have been widely applied, they exhibit high accuracy in detecting single nucleotide variants (SNVs) and small insertions and deletions but have limited sensitivity for SV detection. This study significantly enhances SV detection capabilities, establishing it as a valuable resource for human genetic research. Furthermore, the authors constructed an SV imputation panel using the generated data and imputed SVs in 488,130 individuals from the UK Biobank. They then conducted a proof-of-principle genome-wide association study (GWAS) analysis based on the imputed SVs and selected traits within the UK Biobank. Their findings demonstrate that incorporating SV-GWAS analysis provides additional insights beyond conventional GWAS frameworks focusing on SNVs, particularly in improving fine mapping.

Strengths:

The authors constructed a high-sensitivity reference panel of genome-wide SVs at the population level, addressing a critical gap in the field of human genetics. This resource is expected to significantly advance research in human genetics. They demonstrated the imputation of SVs in individuals from the UK Biobank using this panel and conducted a proof-of-concept SV-based GWAS. Their findings highlight a novel and effective strategy for integrating SVs into GWAS, which will facilitate the analysis of human genetic data from the UK Biobank and other datasets. Their conclusions are supported by comprehensive analyses.

Weaknesses:

(1) Although the authors employ state-of-the-art analytical approaches for the identification of SVs, the overall accuracy remains suboptimal, as indicated by an F1 score of 74.0%, particularly in tandem repeat regions. To enhance accuracy, it would be beneficial to explore alternative SV detection methods or develop novel approaches. Given the value of the reference panel and the fact that improved SV accuracy would lead to more precise SV imputation and GWAS results, investing effort in methodological refinement is highly encouraged.

(2) From the Methods section, it appears that the authors employed Beagle for both the "leave-one-out" imputation and the UK Biobank imputation. It would be better to explicitly clarify this in the Results section and provide a detailed description of the corresponding procedures and parameters in the Methods section for both analyses, as this represents a key aspect of the study. Additionally, Beagle is not specifically designed for SV imputation, the imputation quality of SVs is generally lower than that of SNVs. Exploring strategies to improve SV imputation, such as developing a novel method with reference panel data, may enhance performance. It is also important to assess how this reduced imputation quality may influence GWAS results. For instance, it would be useful to examine whether associated SVs exhibit higher imputation quality and whether SVs with lower quality are less likely to achieve significant association signals. In addition, the lower imputation quality observed for INV, DUP, and BND variants (Figure 3) may be due to their greater lengths (Figure 2). It is better to investigate the relationship between SV length and imputation quality.

(3) All examples presented in the manuscript focus on SVs that overlap with genes. It may also be valuable to investigate SVs that do not overlap with genes but intersect with enhancer regions. SVs can contribute to disease by altering regulatory elements, such as enhancers, which play a crucial role in gene expression. Including such analyses would further demonstrate the utility of SV-GWAS and provide deeper insights into the functional impact of SVs.

(4) The data availability link currently provides only a VCF file ("sniffles2_joint_sv_calls.vcf.gz") containing the identified SVs. It would be beneficial for the authors to make all raw sequencing data (FASTQ files) and key processed datasets (such as alignment results and merged SV and SNV files) available. Providing these resources would enable other researchers to develop improved SV detection and imputation methods or conduct further genetic analyses. Furthermore, establishing a dedicated website for data access, along with a genome browser for SV visualization, could significantly enhance the impact and accessibility of the study. Additionally, all code, particularly the SV imputation pipeline accompanied by a detailed tutorial, should be deposited in a public repository such as GitHub. This would support researchers in imputing SVs and conducting SV-GWAS on their own datasets.

Joint Public Review:

Pannexin (Panx) hemichannels are a family of heptameric membrane proteins that form pores in the plasma membrane through which ions and relatively large organic molecules can permeate. ATP release through Panx channels during the process of apoptosis is one established biological role of these proteins in the immune system, but they are widely expressed in many cells throughout the body, including the nervous system, and likely play many interesting and important roles that are yet to be defined. Although several structures have now been solved of different Panx subtypes from different species, their biophysical mechanisms remain poorly understood, including what physiological signals control their activation. Electrophysiological measurements of ionic currents flowing in response to Panx channel activation have shown that some subtypes can be activated by strong membrane depolarization or caspase cleavage of the C-terminus. Here, Henze and colleagues set out to identify endogenous activators of Panx channels, focusing on the Panx1 and Panx2 subtypes, by fractionating mouse liver extracts and screening for activation of Panx channels expressed in mammalian cells using whole-cell patch clamp recordings. The authors present a comprehensive examination with robust methodologies and supporting data that demonstrate that lysophospholipids (LPCs) directly Panx-1 and 2 channels. These methodologies include channel mutagenesis, electrophysiology, ATP release and fluorescence assays, and molecular modelling. Mouse liver extracts were initially used to identify LPC activators, but the authors go on to individually evaluate many different types of LPCs to determine those that are more specific for Panx channel activation. Importantly, the enzymes that endogenously regulate the production of these LPCs were also assessed along with other by-products that were shown not to promote pannexin channel activation. In addition, the authors used synovial fluid from canine patients, which is enriched in LPCs, to highlight the importance of the findings in pathology. Overall, we think this is likely to be an important study because it provides strong evidence that LPCs can function as activators of Panx1 and Panx2 channels, linking two established mediators of inflammatory responses and opening an entirely new area for exploring the biological roles of Panx channels. This study provides an excellent foundation for future studies and importantly provides clinical relevance.

[Editors' note: this paper has been through two rounds of review and revisions, available here: https://sciety.org/articles/activity/10.1101/2023.10.23.563601]

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This study aims to understand the malaria antigen-specific cTfh profile of children and adults living in malaria holoendemic area. PBMC samples from children and adults were unstimulated or stimulated with PfSEA-1A or PfGARP in vitro for 6h and analysed by a cTfh-focused panel. Unsupervised clustering and analysis on cTfh was performed. The main conclusions are: A) the children cohort has a more diverse (cTfh1/2/17) recall responses compared to adults (mainly cTfh17) and, B) Pf-GARP stimulates better cTfh17 responses in adults, thus a promising vaccine candidate.

Strengths:

This study is, in general, well-designed and with excellent data analysis. The use of unsupervised clustering is a nice attempt to understand the heterogeneity of cTfh cells.

Weaknesses:

The authors have provided additional data in Supplementary Figures 14-16. However, I remain concerned about whether cTfh cells are truly responding to antigen stimulation. In Supplementary Figure 15A-F, the IFNg responses appear as expected, SEB elicits the strongest response, as it stimulates bulk T cells, and the staining is promising, showing a clear distinction between IFNg+ and IFNg- populations. However, in Supplementary Figure 15I-N, the IL-21 secretion assay is concerning. The FACS plots make it difficult to distinguish IL-21+ from IL-21- cells, raising concerns about the validity of this analysis. Additionally, in panel J, the responses to PfSEA-1A or PfGARP appear even greater than those to SEB stimulation. In PBMCs, only a small percentage of T cells should be specific to a particular antigen. How can the positive control (SEB) produce a weaker response than stimulation with a specific antigen? This suggests that the IL-21 secretion assay may not have worked, making the authors' interpretation unreliable.

I also have similar concerns about the IL-4 secretion in Sup Figure 16. First, the FACS plot shows that appear double-positive for IL-21 and IL-4, so it suggests the staining may be due to autofluorescence rather than true cytokine signals. Also in B-C the responses of SEB stimulation is generally weaker than stimulated by one antigen, further questioning the reliability of the IL-4 assay. In summary, I am not convinced that the in vitro antigen stimulation assay worked as intended. Consequently, the manuscript's claims regarding PfSEA-1A- and PfGARP-specific cTfh responses are not sufficiently supported by the presented data.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

This is a comprehensive study that sheds light on how Wag31 functions and localises in mycobacterial cells. A clear link to interactions with CL is shown using a combination of microscopy in combination with fusion fluorescent constructs, and lipid specific dyes. Furthermore, studies using mutant versions of Wag31 shed light on the functionalities of each domain in the protein. My concerns/suggestions for the manuscript are minor:

(1) Ln 130. A better clarification/discussion is required here. It is clear that both depletion and overexpression have an effect on levels of various lipids, but subsequent descriptions show that they affect different classes of lipids.<br /> (2) The pulldown assays results are interesting, but the links are tentative.<br /> (3) The authors may perhaps like to rephrase claims of effects lipid homeostasis, as my understanding is that lipid localisation rather than catabolism/breakdown is affected.

In response to the above reviews the authors have made the required changes in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, the authors re-analyzed a public dataset (Rademaker et al, 2019, Nature Neuroscience) which includes fMRI and behavioral data recorded while participants held an oriented grating in visual working memory (WM) and performed a delayed recall task at the end of an extended delay period. In that experiment, participants were pre-cued on each trial as to whether there would be a distracting visual stimulus presented during the delay period (filtered noise or randomly-oriented grating). In this manuscript, the authors focused on identifying whether the neural code in retinotopic cortex for remembered orientation was 'stable' over the delay period, such that the format of the code remained the same, or whether the code was dynamic, such that information was present, but encoded in an alternative format. They identify some timepoints - especially towards the beginning/end of the delay - where the multivariate activation pattern fails to generalize to other timepoints, and interpret this as evidence for a dynamic code. Additionally, the authors compare the representational format of remembered orientation in the presence vs absence of a distracting stimulus, averaged over the delay period. This analysis suggested a 'rotation' of the representational subspace between distracting orientations and remembered orientations, which may help preserve simultaneous representations of both remembered and viewed stimuli. Intriguingly, this rotation was a bit smaller for Expt 2, in which the orientation distractor had a greater behavioral impact on the participants' behavioral working memory recall performance, suggesting that more separation between subspaces is critical for preserving intact working memory representations.

Strengths:

(1) Direct comparisons of coding subspaces/manifolds between timepoints, task conditions, and experiments is an innovative and useful approach for understanding how neural representations are transformed to support cognition

(2) Re-use of existing dataset substantially goes beyond the authors' previous findings by comparing geometry of representational spaces between conditions and timepoints, and by looking explicitly for dynamic neural representations

(3) Simulations testing whether dynamic codes can be explained purely by changes in data SNR are an important contribution, as this rules out a category of explanations for the dynamic coding results observed

Weaknesses:

(1) Primary evidence for 'dynamic coding', especially in early visual cortex, appears to be related to the transition between encoding/maintenance and maintenance/recall, but the delay period representations seem overall stable, consistent with some previous findings. However, given the simulation results, the general result that representations may change in their format appears solid, though the contribution of different trial phases remains important for considering the overall result.

(2) Converting a continuous decoding metric (angular error) to "% decoding accuracy" serves to obfuscate the units of the actual results. Decoding precision (e.g., sd of decoding error histogram) would be more interpretable and better related to both the previous study and behavioral measures of WM performance.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors investigate ligand and protein-binding processes in GPCRs (including dimerization) by the multiple walker supervised molecular dynamics method. The paper is interesting and it is very well written.

Strengths:

The authors' method is a powerful tool to gain insight on the structural basis for the pharmacology of G protein-coupled receptors.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Activated male Plasmodium gametocytes undergo very rapid nuclear division, while keeping the nuclear envelope intact. There is interest in how events inside the nucleus are co-ordinated with events in the parasite cytoplasm, to ensure that each nucleus is packaged into a nascent male gamete.

This manuscript by Zeeshan et al describes the organisation of a nuclear membrane bridging protein, SUN1, during nuclear division. SUN1 is expected from studies in other organisms to be a component of a bridging complex (LINC) that connects the inner nuclear membrane to the outer nuclear membrane, and from there to the cytoplasmic microtubule-organising centres, the centrosome and the basal body.

The authors show that knockout of the SUN1 in gametocytes leads to severe disruption of the mitotic spindle and failure of the basal bodies to segregate. The authors show convincingly that functional SUN1 is required for male gamete formation and subsequent oocyst development.

The authors identified several SUN1-interacting proteins, thus providing information about the nuclear membrane bridging machinery.

Strengths:

The authors have used state of the art imaging, genetic manipulation and immunoprecipitation approaches.

Weaknesses:

Technical limitations of some of the methods used make it difficult to interpret some of the micrographs.

From studies in other organisms, a protein called KASH is a critical component the bridging complex (LINC). That is, KASH links SUN1 to the outer nuclear membrane. The authors undertook a gene sequence analysis that reveals that Plasmodium lacks a KASH homologue. Thus, further work is needed to identify the functional equivalent of KASH, to understand bridging machinery in Plasmodium.

Comments on revised version:

The authors have addressed the comments and suggestions that I provided as part of a Review Commons assessment.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper contains what could be described as a "classic" approach towards evaluating a novel taste stimuli in an animal model, including standard behavioral tests (some with nerve transections), taste nerve physiology, and immunocytochemistry of taste cells of the tongue. The stimulus being tested is ornithine, from a class of stimuli called "kokumi" (in terms of human taste); these kokumi stimuli appear to enhance other canonical tastes, increasing what are essentially hedonic attributes of other stimuli. The mechanism for ornithine detection is thought to be GPRC6A receptors expressed in taste cells. The authors showed evidence for this in an earlier paper with mice; this paper evaluates ornithine taste in a rat model, and comes to a similar conclusion, albeit with some small differences between the two rodent species.

Strengths:

The data show effects of ornithine on taste/intake in laboratory rats: In two-bottle and briefer intake tests, adding ornithine results in higher intake of most, but all not all stimuli tested. Bilateral chorda tympani (CT) nerve cuts or the addition of GPRC6A antagonists decreased or eliminated these effects. Ornithine also evoked responses by itself in the CT nerve, but mainly at higher concentrations; at lower concentrations it potentiated the response to monosodium glutamate. Finally, immunocytochemistry of taste cell expression indicated that GPRC6A was expressed predominantly in the anterior tongue, and co-localized (to a small extent) with only IP3R3, indicative of expression in a subset of type II taste receptor cells.

Weaknesses:

As the authors are aware, it is difficult to assess a complex human taste with complex attributes, such as kokumi, in an animal model. In these experiments they attempt to uncover mechanistic insights about how ornithine potentiates other stimuli by using a variety of established experimental approaches in rats. They partially succeed by finding evidence that GPRC6A may mediate effects of ornithine when it is used at lower concentrations. In the revisions they have scaled back their interpretations accordingly. A supplementary experiment measuring certain aspects of the effects of ornithine added to Miso soup in human subjects is included for the express purpose of establishing that the kokumi sensation of a complex solution is enhanced by ornithine. This (supplementary) experiment was conducted with a small sample size, and though perhaps useful, these preliminary results do not align particularly well with the animal experiments. It would be helpful to further explore human taste of ornithine in a larger and better-controlled study.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript explores the transcriptional landscape of high-grade serous ovarian cancer (HGSOC) using consensus-independent component analysis (c-ICA) to identify transcriptional components (TCs) associated with patient outcomes. The study analyzes 678 HGSOC transcriptomes, supplemented with 447 transcriptomes from other ovarian cancer types and noncancerous tissues. By identifying 374 TCs, the authors aim to uncover subtle transcriptional patterns that could serve as novel drug targets. Notably, a transcriptional component linked to synaptic signaling was associated with shorter overall survival (OS) in patients, suggesting a potential role for neuronal interactions in the tumor microenvironment. Given notable weaknesses like lack of validation cohort or validation using other platforms (other than the 11 samples with ST), the data is considered highly descriptive and preliminary.

The study reveals significant findings by identifying a transcriptional component (TC121) associated with synaptic signaling, which is linked to shorter survival in patients with high-grade serous ovarian cancer, highlighting the potential role of neurons in the tumor microenvironment. However, the evidence could be strengthened by experimental validation to confirm the functional roles of key genes within TC121 and further exploration of its spatial aspects, including deeper analysis of neuronal and synaptic and other neuronal gene expression.

Strengths:

Innovative Methodology:<br /> The use of c-ICA to dissect bulk transcriptomes into independent components is a novel approach that allows for the identification of subtle transcriptional patterns that may be overshadowed in traditional analyses.

Comprehensive Data Integration:<br /> The study integrates a large dataset from multiple public repositories, enhancing the robustness of the findings. The inclusion of spatially resolved transcriptomes adds a valuable dimension to the analysis.

Clinical Relevance:<br /> The identification of a synaptic signaling-related TC associated with poor prognosis highlights a potential new avenue for therapeutic intervention, emphasizing the role of the tumor microenvironment in cancer progression.

Weaknesses:

Mechanistic Insights:<br /> While the study identifies TCs associated with survival, it provides limited mechanistic insights into how these components influence cancer progression. Further experimental validation is necessary to elucidate the underlying biological processes.

Generalizability:<br /> The findings are primarily based on transcriptomic data from HGSOC. It remains unclear how these results apply to other subtypes of ovarian cancer or different cancer types.

Innovative Methodology:<br /> Requires more validation using different platforms (IHC) to validate the performance of this bulk derived data. Also, the lack of control on data quality is a concern.

Clinical Application:<br /> Although the study suggests potential drug targets, the translation of these findings into clinical practice is not addressed. Probably given lack of some QA/QC procedures it'll be hard to translate these results. Future studies should focus on validating these targets in clinical settings.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

The aim of this study was a better understanding of the reproductive life history of acoels. The acoel Hofstenia miamia, an emerging model organism, is investigated; the authors nevertheless acknowledge and address the high variability in reproductive morphology and strategies within Acoela.

The morphology of male and female reproductive organs in these hermaphroditic worms is characterised through stereo microscopy, immunohistochemistry, histology, and fluorescent in situ hybridization. The findings confirm and better detail historical descriptions. A novelty in the field is the in situ hybridization experiments, which link already published single-cell sequencing data to the worms' morphology. An interesting finding, though not further discussed by the authors, is that the known germline markers cgnl1-2 and Piwi-1 are only localized in the ovaries and not in the testes.

The work also clarifies the timing and order of appearance of reproductive organs during development and regeneration, as well as the changes upon de-growth. It shows an association of reproductive organ growth to whole body size, which will be surely taken into account and further explored in future acoel studies. This is also the first instance of non-anecdotal degrowth upon starvation in H. miamia (and to my knowledge in acoels, except recorded weight upon starvation in Convolutriloba retrogemma [1]).

Egg laying through the mouth is described in H. miamia for the first time as well as the worms' behavior in egg laying, i.e. choosing the tanks' walls rather than its floor, laying eggs in clutches, and delaying egg-laying during food deprivation. Self-fertilization is also reported for the first time.

The main strength of this study is that it expands previous knowledge on the reproductive life history traits in H. miamia and it lays the foundation for future studies on how these traits are affected by various factors, as well as for comparative studies within acoels. As highlighted above, many phenomena are addressed in a rigorous and/or quantitative way for the first time. This can be considered the start of a novel approach to reproductive studies in acoels, as the authors suggest in the conclusion. It can be also interpreted as a testimony of how an established model system can benefit the study of an understudied animal group.

The main weakness of the work is the lack of convincing explanations on the dynamics of self-fertilization, sperm storage, and movement of oocytes from the ovaries to the central cavity and subsequently to the pharynx. These questions are also raised by the authors themselves in the discussion. Another weakness (or rather missing potential strength) is the limited focus on genes. Given the presence of the single-cell sequencing atlas and established methods for in situ hybridization and even transgenesis in H. miamia, this model provides a unique opportunity to investigate germline genes in acoels and their role in development, regeneration, and degrowth. It should also be noted that employing Transmission Electron Microscopy would have enabled a more detailed comparison with other acoels, since ultrastructural studies of reproductive organs have been published for other species (cfr e.g. [2],[3],[4]). This is especially true for a better understanding of the relation between sperm axoneme and flagellum (mentioned in the Results section), as well as of sexual conflict (mentioned in the Discussion).

(1) Shannon, Thomas. 2007. 'Photosmoregulation: Evidence of Host Behavioral Photoregulation of an Algal Endosymbiont by the Acoel Convolutriloba Retrogemma as a Means of Non-Metabolic Osmoregulation'. Athens, Georgia: University of Georgia [Dissertation].<br /> (2) Zabotin, Ya. I., and A. I. Golubev. 2014. 'Ultrastructure of Oocytes and Female Copulatory Organs of Acoela'. Biology Bulletin 41 (9): 722-35.<br /> (3) Achatz, Johannes Georg, Matthew Hooge, Andreas Wallberg, Ulf Jondelius, and Seth Tyler. 2010. 'Systematic Revision of Acoels with 9+0 Sperm Ultrastructure (Convolutida) and the Influence of Sexual Conflict on Morphology'.<br /> (4) Petrov, Anatoly, Matthew Hooge, and Seth Tyler. 2006. 'Comparative Morphology of the Bursal Nozzles in Acoels (Acoela, Acoelomorpha)'. Journal of Morphology 267 (5): 634-48.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors report the role of a novel gene Aff3ir-ORF2 in flow induced atherosclerosis. They show that the gene is anti-inflammatory in nature. It inhibits the IRF5 mediated athero-progression by inhibiting the causal factor (IRF5). Furthermore, authors show a significant connection between shear stress and Aff3ir-ORF2 and its connection to IRF5 mediated athero-progression in different established mice models which further validates the ex vivo findings.

Strengths:

(1) Adequate number of replicates were used for this study.<br /> (2) Both in vitro and in vivo validation was done.<br /> (3) Figures are well presented<br /> (4) In vivo causality is checked with cleverly designed experiments

Weaknesses:

(1) Inflammatory proteins must be measured with standard methods e.g ELISA as mRNA level and protein level does not always correlate.<br /> (2) RNA seq analysis has to be done very carefully. How does the euclidean distance correlate with the differential expression of genes. Do they represent neighborhood? If they do how does this correlation affect the conclusion of the paper?<br /> (3) Volcano plot does not indicate q value of the shown genes. It is advisable to calculate q value for each of the genes which represents the FDR probability of the identified genes.<br /> (4) GO enrichment was done against Global gene set or local geneset? Authors should provide more detailed information about the analysis.<br /> (5) If the analysis was performed against global gene set. How does that connect with this specific atherosclerotic microenvironment?<br /> (6) what was the basal expression of genes and how does the DGE (differential gene expression) values differ?<br /> (7) How did IRF5 picked from GO analysis? was it within 20 most significant genes?<br /> (8) Microscopic studies should be done more carefully? There seems to be a global expression present on the vascular wall for Aff3ir-ORF2 and the expression seems to be similar like AFF3 in fig 1.

Comments on Revision:

The authors have adequately addressed my concerns.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The paper presents a three-layered hierarchical model for simulating Drosophila larva locomotion, navigation, and learning. The model consists of a basic locomotory layer that generates crawling and turning using a coupled oscillator framework, incorporating intermittency in movement through alternating runs and pauses. The intermediate layer enables navigation by allowing larvae to actively sense and respond to odor gradients, facilitating chemotaxis. The adaptive learning layer integrates a spiking neural network model of the Mushroom Body, simulating associative learning where larvae modify their behavior based on past experiences. The model is validated through simulations of free exploration, chemotaxis, and odor preference learning, demonstrating close agreement with empirical behavioral data. This modular framework provides a valuable advance for modeling larva behavior.

Strengths:

Every modeling paper requires certain assumptions and abstractions. The main strength of this paper lies in its modular and hierarchical approach to modeling behavior, making connections to influential theories of motor control in the brain. The authors also provide a convincing discussion of the experimental evidence supporting their layered behavioral architecture. This abstraction is valuable, offering researchers a useful conceptual framework and marking a significant step forward in the field. Connections to empirical larval movement are another major strength.

Weaknesses:

While the model represents a conceptual advance in the field, some of its assumptions and choices fall behind state-of-the-art approaches. One limitation is the paper's simplified representation of larval neuromechanics, in which the body is reduced to a two-segment structure with basic neural control. Another limitation is the absence of an explicit neuromuscular control system, which would better capture the role of segmental central pattern generators (CPGs) and neuronal circuits in regulating peristalsis and turning in Drosophila larvae. Many detailed neuromechanical models, as cited by the authors, have already been published. These abstractions overlook valuable experimental studies that detail segmental dynamics during crawling and the larval connectome.

The strength of the model could also be its weakness. The model follows a subsumption architecture, where low-level behaviors operate autonomously while higher layers modulate them. However, this approach may underestimate the complexity of real neural circuits, which likely exhibit more intricate feedback mechanisms between sensory input and motor execution.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Shihabeddin et al. used bioinformatic and molecular biology tools to study the unique regeneration of rod photoreceptors in a zebrafish model. The authors identified a few transcription factors that seem to play an important role in this process.

Strengths:

This manuscript is well prepared. The topic of this study is an interesting and important one. Bioinformatics clues are interesting.

Weaknesses:

Considering the importance of the mechanism, the knockdown experiments require further validation. The authors over-emphasized this study's relevance to RP disease (i.e. patients and mammals are not capable of regeneration like zebrafish). They under-explained this regeneration's relevance or difference to normal developmental process, which is pretty much conserved in evolution.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The objective of this research is to understand how the expression of key selector transcription factors, Tal1, Gata2, Gata3, involved in GABAergic vs glutamatergic neuron fate from a single anterior hindbrain progenitor domain is transcriptionally controlled. With suitable scRNAseq, scATAC-seq, CUT&TAG, and footprinting datasets, the authors use an extensive set of computational approaches to identify putative regulatory elements and upstream transcription factors that may control selector TF expression. This data-rich study will be a valuable resource for future hypothesis testing, through perturbation approaches, of the many putative regulators identified in the study. The data are displayed in some of the main and supplemental figures in a way that makes it difficult to appreciate and understand the authors' presentation and interpretation of the data in the Results narrative. Primary images used for studying the timing and coexpression of putative upstream regulators, Insm1, E2f1, Ebf1, and Tead2 with Tal1 are difficult to interpret and do not convincingly support the authors' conclusions. There appears to be little overlap in the fluorescent labeling, and it is not clear whether the signals are located in the cell soma nucleus.

Strengths:

The main strength is that it is a data-rich compilation of putative upstream regulators of selector TFs that control GABAergic vs glutamatergic neuron fates in the brainstem. This resource now enables future perturbation-based hypothesis testing of the gene regulatory networks that help to build brain circuitry.

Weaknesses:

Some of the findings could be better displayed and discussed.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors demonstrate impairments induced by a high cholesterol diet on GLP-1R dependent glucoregulation in vivo as well as an improvement after reduction in cholesterol synthesis with simvastatin in pancreatic islets. They also map sites of cholesterol high occupancy and residence time on active versus inactive GLP-1Rs using coarse-grained molecular dynamics (cgMD) simulations, and screened for key residues selected from these sites and performed detailed analyses of the effects of mutating one of these residues, Val229, to alanine on GLP-1R interactions with cholesterol, plasma membrane behaviour, clustering, trafficking and signalling in pancreatic beta cells and primary islets, and describe an improved insulin secretion profile for the V229A mutant receptor.

These are extensive and very impressive studies indeed. I am impressed with the tireless effort exerted to understand the details of molecular mechanisms involved in the effects of cholesterol for GLP-1 activation of its receptor. In general, the study is convincing, the manuscript well written and the data well presented. Some of the changes are small and insignificant which makes one wonder how important the observations are. For instance, in Figure 2E (which is difficult to interpret anyway because the data are presented in per cent, conveniently hiding the absolute results) does not show a significant result of the cyclodextrin except for insignificant increases in basal secretion. That is not identical to impairment of GLP-1 receptor signaling!

To me the most important experiment of them all is the simvastatin experiment, but the results rest on very few numbers and there is a large variation. Apparently, in a previous study using more extensive reduction in cholesterol the opposite response was detected casting doubt on the significance of the current observation. I agree with the authors that the use of cyclodextrin may have been associated with other changes in plasma membrane structure than cholesterol depletion at the GLP-1 receptor. The entire discussion regarding the importance of cholesterol would benefit tremendously from studies of GLP-1 induced insulin secretion in people with different cholesterol levels before and after treatment with cholesterol-lowering agents. I suspect that such a study would not reveal major differences.

Comments on revisions: The authors have responded well to my criticism.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors examine CD8 T cell selective pressure in early HCV infection using. They propose that after initial CD8-T mediated loss of virus fitness, in some participants around 3 months after infection, HCV acquires compensatory mutations and improved fitness leading to virus progression.

Strengths:

Throughout the paper, the authors apply well-established approaches in studies of acute to chronic HIV infection for studies of HCV infection. This lends rigor the to the authors' work.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

The manuscript "HNF4α-1 TET2-FBP1 axis contributes to gluconeogenesis and type 2 diabetes" from Zhang et al. presents significant and convincing findings that enhance our understanding of TET2's role in liver glucose metabolism. It highlights the epigenetic regulation of FBP1, a gluconeogenic gene, by TET2, linking this pathway to HNF4alpha which recruits TET2. The in vitro and in vivo experiments are now well-described and provide convincing evidence of TET2's impact on gluconeogenesis, particularly in fasting and HFD mice.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have thoroughly addressed all the concerns raised, and their responses adequately clarify the issues previously identified.

Minor changes:

(1) Could the authors provide some comments on why glucagon was not able to stimulate PEPCK and G6Pase mRNA levels in HepG2 cells (Fig. 3D)? Although it is not the focus of the research, it is well known that glucagon has this effect and could serve as a positive control for the quality of the preparation.

(2) Please include the sequences of the qPCR primers used for PEPCK and G6Pase in the Methods section (page 17).

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The crystal structure of the Sld3CBD-Cdc45 complex presented by Li et al. is a significant contribution that enhances our understanding of CMG formation during the rate-limiting step of DNA replication initiation. This structure provides crucial insights into the intermediate steps of CMG formation, and the particle analysis and model predictions compellingly describe the mechanism of Cdc45 loading. Building upon previously known Sld3 and Cdc45 structures, this study offers new perspectives on how Cdc45 is recruited to MCM DH through the Sld3-Sld7 complex. The most notable finding is the structural rearrangement of Sld3CBD upon Cdc45 binding, particularly the α8-helix conformation, which is essential for Cdc45 interaction and may also be relevant to its metazoan counterpart, Treslin. Additionally, the conformational shift in the DHHA1 domain of Cdc45 suggests a potential mechanism for its binding to Mcm2NTD. Furthermore, Sld3's ssDNA-binding experiments provide evidence of its novel functions in the DNA replication process in yeast, expanding our understanding of its role beyond Cdc45 recruitment.

Strengths:

The manuscript is generally well-written, with a precise structural analysis and a solid methodological section that will significantly advance future studies in the field. The predictions based on structural alignments are intriguing and provide a new direction for exploring CMG formation, potentially shaping the future of DNA replication research. This research also opens up several new opportunities to utilize structural biology to unravel the molecular details of the model presented in the paper.

Weaknesses:

The main weakness of the manuscript lies in the lack of detailed structural validation for the proposed Sld3-Sld7-Cdc45 model, and its CMG bound models, which could be done in the future using advanced structural biology techniques such as single particle cryo-electron microscopy. It would also be interesting to explore how Sld7 interacts with the MCM helicase, and this would help to build a detailed long-flexible model of Sld3-Sld7-Cdc45 binding to MCM DH and to show where Sld7 will lie on the structure. This will help us to understand how Sld7 functions in the complex. Also, future experiments would be needed to understand the molecular details of how Sld3 and Sld7 release from CMG is associated with ssARS1 binding.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

Sandkuhler et al. re-evaluated the biological functions of TANGO2 homologs in C. elegans, yeast, and zebrafish. Compared to the previously reported role of TANGO2 homologs in transporting heme, Sandkuhler et al. expressed a different opinion on the biological functions of TANGO2 homologs. With the support of some results from their tests, they conclude that 'there is insufficient evidence to support heme transport as the primary function of TANGO2', in addition to their claims on the role of TANGO2 in modulating metabolism. While the differences are reported in this study, more work is needed to elucidate the biological function of TANGO2.

Strengths:

(1) This work revisited a set of key experiments, including the toxic heme analog GaPP survival assay, the fluorescent ZnMP accumulation assay, and the multi-organismal investigations documented by Sun et al. in Nature 2022, which is critical for comparing the two works.

(2) This work reported additional phenotypes for the C. elegans mutant of the TANGO2 homologs, including lawn avoidance, reduced pharyngeal pumping, smaller brood size, faster exhaustion under swimming test, and a shorter lifespan. These phenotypes are important for understanding the biological function of TANGO2 homologs, while they were missing from the report by Sun et al.

(3) Investigating the 'reduced GaPP consumption' as a cause of increased resistance against the toxic GaPP for the TANGO2 homologs, hrg-9 hrg-10 double null mutant provides a valuable perspective for studying the biological function of TANGO2 homologs.

(4) This work thoroughly evaluated the role of TANGO2 homologs in supporting yeast growth using multiple yeast strains and also pointed out the mitochondrial genome instability feature of the yeast strain used by Sun et al.

Weaknesses:

(1) A detailed comparison between this work and the work of Sun et al. on experimental protocols and reagents in the main text will be beneficial for readers to assess critically.

(2) The GaPP used by Sun et al. (purchased from Frontier Scientific) is more effective in killing the worm than the one used in this study (purchased from Santa Cruz). Is the different outcome due to the differences in reagents? Moreover, Sun et al. examined the lethality after 3-4 days, while this work examined the lethality after 72 hours. Would the extra 24 hours make any difference in the result?

(3) This work reported the opposite result of Sun et al. for the fluorescent ZnMP accumulation assay. However, the experimental protocols used by the two studies are massively different. Sun et al. did the ZnMP staining by incubating the L4-stage worms in an axenic mCeHR2 medium containing 40 μM ZnMP (purchased from Frontier Scientific) and 4 μM heme at 20 ℃ for 16 h, while this work placed the L4-stage worms on the OP50 E. coli seeded NGM plates treated with 40 μM ZnMP (purchased from Santa Cruz) for 16 h. The liquid axenic mCeHR2 medium is bacteria-free, heme-free, and consistent for ZnMP uptake by worms. This work has mentioned that the hrg-9 hrg-10 double null mutant has bacterial lawn avoidance and reduced pharyngeal pumping phenotypes. Therefore, the ZnMP staining protocol used in this work faces challenges in the environmental control for the wild type vs. the mutant. The authors should adopt the ZnMP staining protocol used by Sun et al. for a proper evaluation of fluorescent ZnMP accumulation.

(4) A striking difference between the two studies is that Sun et al. emphasize the biochemical function of TANGO2 homologs in heme transporting with evidence from some biochemical tests. In contrast, this work emphasizes the physiological function of TANGO2 homologs with evidence from multiple phenotypical observations. In the discussion part, the authors should address whether these observed phenotypes in this study can be due to the loss of heme transporting activities upon eliminating TANGO2 homologs. This action can improve the merit of academic debate and collaboration.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors aim to formalize the mathematical underpinnings of a proposed general model and discuss the relationship of this model to the ABC Score, a widely adopted heuristic for enhancer-gene predictions. While the ABC model serves as a useful binary classifier, it struggles to predict quantitative enhancer effects on gene expression. Using a graph-theoretic linear framework, the authors derive a mathematical model (the "default model") that explains how the algebraic form of the ABC Score arises under specific assumptions. They further demonstrate that the default model's predictions of enhancer additivity are inconsistent with observed non-additive enhancer effects and propose alternative assumptions to account for these discrepancies.

Strengths:

The graph-theoretic approach enables systematic exploration of enhancer interactions beyond simple additivity and enables hypothesis generation when such expectations fail. This work makes clear where assumptions are made and the consequences of those assumptions.

Weaknesses:

While the theoretical framework is elegant, I think there is always more space to demonstrate the practicality of this approach. Further guidance for how to experimentally connect this framework with typical measurements could help bolster the immediate benefits. To be clear, I do not think this is something the authors "must" do, but rather something that might help drive home the usefulness in a more accessible way.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

This study investigates the role of site-specific DNA methylation changes during spermatogenesis and their contribution to paternal epigenetic inheritance. Using MethylCap-seq, the authors identify a transient, site-specific loss of DNA methylation at transcription start sites (TSSs) of late spermatogenesis genes during the transition from differentiating spermatogonia (KIT+) to pachytene spermatocytes (PS). This demethylation event correlates with the gain of H3K4me3, which presets nucleosome retention sites in mouse sperm. The study proposes that selective loss of DNA methylation at a subset of promoters is required for nucleosome retention and the establishment of epigenetic states that may influence embryonic gene regulation. These findings provide complementary insights to earlier work by the Peters lab, "DNA methylation modulates nucleosome retention in sperm and H3K4 methylation deposition in early mouse embryos."

Overall, the study presents a valuable dataset; however, additional analyses could strengthen the conclusions and provide further mechanistic insights.

Major Comments:

(1) Prior work should be acknowledged and used for comparative analysis. A key proposal in this study is that regions undergoing DNA methylation loss retain histones, influencing the zygote's epigenetic landscape. However, previous studies (e.g., Peters et al.) have shown that regions losing methylation in DNMT3a/b knockout (KO) mice do not necessarily retain histones, suggesting additional factors are involved. Moreover, Peters et al. demonstrated that regions of low DNA methylation in sperm render paternal alleles permissive for H3K4me3 establishment in early embryos, independent of the paternal inheritance of sperm-borne H3K4me3. Comparing these findings would refine the model presented in this study.

(2) Figure 2A: The data suggest an increase in methylation peaks in PS cells. How does this align with the hypomethylation observed in Figure 1D? Reconciling these observations would improve clarity.

(3) Figure 4A: The effect size of demethylation on nucleosome retention is unclear - do all demethylated promoters retain histones or only a subset? Quantifying this would clarify whether DNA methylation loss consistently predicts nucleosome retention.

(4) Prior studies have generated bisulfite sequencing data from Tet KO sperm. Do the regions that undergo demethylation during the KIT+ to PS transition overlap with those misregulated in TET KO sperm? Integrating this comparison could provide further insight into the regulation of site-specific demethylation.

(5) The role of SCML2 enrichment in germline stem cells and its connection to H3K27me3 deposition in later germ cells is unclear. Earlier figures show that regions undergoing DNA demethylation from KIT+ to PS include genes expressed in later-stage germ cells.

Why is SCML2 enrichment occurring in germline stem cells (GSCs)? Why is H3K27me3 only acquired at later stages if SCML2 is already present? Is SCML2 preventing premature expression independent of K27ME?

Showing the dynamics of H3K27me3 and SCML2 across these stages would clarify the proposed conclusions.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Turner et al. present an original approach to investigate the role of Type-1 nNOS interneurons in driving neuronal network activity and in controlling vascular network dynamics in awake head-fixed mice. Selective activation or suppression of Type-1 nNOS interneurons has previously been achieved using either chemogenetic, optogenetic, or local pharmacology. Here, the authors took advantage of the fact that Type-1 nNOS interneurons are the only cortical cells that express the tachykinin receptor 1 to ablate them with a local injection of saporin conjugated to substance P (SP-SAP). SP-SAP causes cell death in 90 % of type1 nNOS interneurons without affecting microglia, astrocytes, and neurons. The authors report that the ablation has no major effects on sleep or behavior. Refining the analysis by scoring neural and hemodynamic signals with electrode recordings, calcium signal imaging, and wide-field optical imaging, the authors observe that Type-1 nNOS interneuron ablation does not change the various phases of the sleep/wake cycle. However, it does reduce low-frequency neural activity, irrespective of the classification of arousal state. Analyzing neurovascular coupling using multiple approaches, they report small changes in resting-state neural-hemodynamic correlations across arousal states, primarily mediated by changes in neural activity. Finally, they show that nNOS type 1 interneurons play a role in controlling interhemispheric coherence and vasomotion.

In conclusion, these results are interesting, use state-of-the-art methods, and are well supported by the data and their analysis. I have only a few comments on the stimulus-evoked haemodynamic responses, and these can be easily addressed.